lkx_Shore wrote:

General

1. 添加773ms的前置时间。

Insane

1. 00:07:590 (3) - 叠起来或者拉远？现在感觉意义不明。
2. 00:11:454 (6) - 去掉，音效是2连但节奏是3连，不觉得奇怪么。
3. 00:18:727 (5) - 同样的问题...为什么要让节奏和音效分开呢...
4. 00:43:954 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - N底音，音量渐增处理。
5. 02:32:136 (1) - 不加Clap和头finish么。
6. 02:53:954 (1) - ^
7. 03:01:227 (1) - 头用soft-finish其他地方用clap比现在好吧。
8. 03:12:136 (2) - 加note然后N-finish？
9. 03:24:863 (1,2,3,4) - 这里也有鼓音呀，为什么不加clap。
10. 03:31:227 (3,4,5,6) - ^.
11. 03:32:136 (1) - 和之前一样的加法。
12. 04:08:045 (5) - 这里用一个1/2滑条+一个note突出音乐吧，5连打就是瞎糊。
    没有对到时间轴的绿线。
13. 00:01:227 -
14. 00:08:499 -
15. 00:30:318 -
    为了区分两种鼓，不如多加一个鼓音效。

Hard

1. 00:26:681 (1) - 头和折返加clap.
2. 01:13:954 (1) - 这部分用这种滑条效果又显得太弱了，要给滑条折返和尾巴加whistle的...
   没有对到时间轴的绿线。
3. 00:01:227 -
4. 00:08:499 -
5. 00:30:318 -
   想说的基本和insane差不多..

Normal

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  没有对到时间轴的绿线。

1. 00:01:227 -

Easy

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  没有对到时间轴的绿线。

1. 00:01:227 -

lkx_Shore wrote:

insane]

开头还是有... (00:47:590 (3,4,5) - )
其实我觉得还有很多问题可以说...但之前看了看我觉得太多就没说了.

1. 00:26:681 (1) - 跟的音轨是强音，但是用的是soft音效...打起来和空气一样
2. 00:40:090 (2) - 漏Finish.
3. 01:33:954 (1) - 同上上...
4. 01:25:999 (4) - 这个红线起滑条并不适合...而且这里人声效果很强应该是主跟人声，并且在人声出现的地方加soft-finish.
5. 01:53:272 (3) - 多余的note. 和之前那样下两个1/1滑条也比现在好。
6. 03:02:590 (4) - 漏clap.
7. 03:12:136 (2) - 别的曲子里直接消掉的原因是下一个大白线没有重鼓音，但这个曲子有，不跟显得奇怪。
8. 03:20:318 (3,3) - 钢琴轨太轻了，要下w突出钢琴轨。03:37:590 (1) - 同。后面的钢琴轨都要加.
9. 03:29:409 (3) - 为什么这里又多了一个w. 03:36:681 (4) - 也是。 bgm有一个怪怪的声音所以加上了
10. 03:31:227 (3,4,5,6) - 这几个其实和03:24:863 (1,2,3,4,5) - 一样... (01:33:045 (3,4,5,6) - 02:31:227 (3,4,5,6) - )
11. 03:32:136 (1) - 另外这种地方，到了后面音再加重一次的时候你可以直接用3个note分别放在3个版边，这样既有变化也突出了音的加重。（3个大间距的note比直接下滑条更有感觉。）
12. 03:41:227 (1) - 这部分的钢琴轨记得也加w。
13. 03:53:954 (1) - 直接改成折返更好，现在像是把重音拆开了。
14. 04:08:045 (5) - 滑条尾巴也有那个鼓音，加N-finish.
    现在听起来音效比较单一了，钢琴轨也加上w音效应该会好点。例如
15. 01:26:681 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - http://puu.sh/fmHWb/0ed4f984e2.jpg
    红色是+w，粉色是+clap. 其他长连打也可以根据音乐加不同类型的组合.
16. 02:17:590 (1,2,3) - 除了02:17:590 (1) - 的头不加w，其他地方都加。
17. 在02:25:090 - 和02:25:318 - 都有鼓音，让玩家点到这些强音才适合。
    (另外这个曲子很多地方都有钢琴音轨的，而且钢琴音轨多变很多，在鼓音重复无聊的地方跟他们才会有更有趣的梗) 关键是找不到能跟的钢琴轨啊，听力拙计

lkx_Shore wrote:

[Insane]
01:27:136 (3) - 为什么没加clap..
01:33:954 (1) - 踩在大白线的要加soft-finish...
02:32:136 (1) - 楼上说得对
03:12:136 - ...
03:20:318 (3) - 滑条身不要加whistle呀...会有噪音的...后面也是
03:32:136 (1) - 我很赞同第三条
03:53:954 (1,2) - ...
我想知道你没改那两个地方的理由...

lkx_Shore wrote:

Bubbled

Satellite wrote:

Qualified!　

The changes "Changed nsfw BG" "Changed some unrankable issue" "Some missing hitsound."

log

02:13 *Satellite is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/574110 senya - Handle Nigitte [Easy]]
02:14 Satellite: 01:28:045 - I want to put a circle here. because too strong back music. so. add note better.
02:15 Satellite: same as suggestion 
02:15 Satellite: 02:26:227 - 
02:15 Alex Li: sure
02:15 Alex Li: both added
02:15 Satellite: thank you :3
02:16 Alex Li: np
02:17 Satellite: 01:55:772 (3) - You forgot whistle here.
02:17 Satellite: Other diff (about Hard) whistle here
02:17 Satellite: and 01:56:681 - this.
02:17 Alex Li: hmm
02:18 Alex Li: ill change them all
02:18 Satellite: both suggestion 00:57:590 - and 00:58:499 - 
02:18 Satellite: thank you
02:18 Satellite: please check same part Dx
02:20 Satellite: 03:32:136 (4) - add finish on slider head and end. please check other diff :3 (about insane 
02:20 Satellite: sorry. same as suggestion 02:32:136 (3) - and 01:33:954 (4) - 
02:21 Alex Li: will change them all
02:22 Satellite: Easy diff that's all :3
02:24 Satellite: and General issue
02:24 Satellite: preview point please changed "73272"
02:24 Satellite: "73278" is unsnapped
02:24 Alex Li: fine
02:28 Satellite: Normal diff
02:29 Alex Li: yes
02:29 Satellite: 01:53:499 - I want to put a circle :3
02:29 Alex Li: fine
02:30 Satellite: and placement suggestion
02:30 Satellite: if you are like :3 [http://puu.sh/fnwWn/468525cdc7.jpg try this]
02:31 Satellite: all hitsound suggestion same as Easy diff. please changed some point ~~
02:31 Alex Li: alredychanged
02:32 Alex Li: fine i can use this
02:32 Satellite: pro
02:32 Alex Li: not pro
02:32 Satellite: 02:20:318 (2,3) - It's unrankable issue ? missing Distance snap here
02:32 Satellite: please check distance :3
02:32 Alex Li: didnt
02:32 Satellite: 1.4 -> 1.0 -> 1.4
02:32 Alex Li: notice
02:33 Alex Li: changed
02:35 Satellite: Normal that's all :3
02:36 Alex Li: :D
02:38 Satellite: Hard and Insane I'm go testplaying.... please wait ;w;
02:41 Alex Li: okay
02:42 Satellite: okay
02:42 Satellite: 00:55:318 (3,4) - 
02:42 Satellite: It's Insane pattern imo
02:42 Satellite: please changed more easy rhythm here
02:43 Alex Li: lol someone alredy talked about
02:43 Alex Li: well let me think
02:43 Satellite: humm
02:43 Alex Li: i think reverse slider li fine
02:43 Satellite: some kick slider pattern I think it's too hard on hard diff o.o
02:43 Satellite: yeah
02:43 Alex Li: so ill use that
02:43 Satellite: I think so too
02:44 Satellite: thank you
02:44 Satellite: 00:59:409 (1) - Remove slider end "finish" is it missing ?
02:44 Alex Li: didnt noticed that
02:44 Alex Li: fiixed
02:45 Satellite: 01:27:590 (4,5) - Same as here
02:45 Satellite: please easy rhythm :3
02:45 Alex Li: changed
02:46 Alex Li: ill search for that pattern and change them all
02:46 Satellite: http://puu.sh/fnz73/154696a5bc.jpg
02:46 Satellite: rhythm suggestion
02:46 Satellite: ah
02:46 Satellite: okay :3
02:46 Satellite: thank you :3
02:46 Satellite: you are so pro o.o
02:46 Alex Li: im not pro :l
02:47 Satellite: make sure 01:53:499 (3,4) - 
02:47 Alex Li: i wont use that rhythm it sounds not fine to me
02:47 Satellite: 01:57:590 (1) - Ctrl + G better. I think same pattern better.
02:48 Satellite: ah missing suggestion lol
02:48 Satellite: Please forget T^T
02:48 Alex Li: ok
02:49 Satellite: 02:24:863 (1,2,3) - not make jump please
02:49 Satellite: please check first kiai section 01:26:681 (1,2,3) - 
02:50 Alex Li: ?
02:50 Satellite: please check distance =w=
02:50 Alex Li: first isnt jump
02:50 Satellite: yes
02:50 Satellite: second kiai section is jump... :d
02:50 Alex Li: changed
02:52 Satellite: Hard diff that's all :3
02:52 Alex Li: kk
02:55 Satellite: insane
02:55 Satellite: 01:41:909 (1) - Do Nc is really necessary?
02:55 Alex Li: its in someones mod
02:55 Satellite: I think not need :3
02:55 Alex Li: fine
02:55 Alex Li: ill change back
02:58 Satellite: 02:32:818 (1,2) - 
02:58 Satellite: 01:34:636 (1,1) - 
02:59 Satellite: Please be the same pattern...
02:59 Alex Li: oh didnt noticed that
02:59 Satellite: about distance :3
02:59 Alex Li: fine changed
03:01 Satellite: you must be 03:42:363 (3) - Ctrl+G this pattern too danger imo
03:02 Alex Li: lol
03:02 Alex Li: i want to learn from hw
03:02 Alex Li: fine
03:03 Satellite: hw map too hard lol maybe Extra mapping lol
03:03 Alex Li: lol
03:03 Satellite: this map relax and please diffspread ...
03:04 Alex Li: is 1 star okay?
03:04 Satellite: star is okay
03:04 Alex Li: oh
03:05 Satellite: Here only fairly difficult...
03:05 Alex Li: where
03:05 Satellite: 03:42:363 (3,4) - this pattern...
03:06 Satellite: http://puu.sh/fnBYv/1e4ecc62aa.jpg
03:06 Satellite: Ctrl+G pattern are fine
03:06 Alex Li: alredy changed imo
03:06 Satellite: thank you
03:06 Satellite: I ask QAT
03:06 Satellite: BG is "NSFW"
03:07 Satellite: please changed [http://puu.sh/fnBNV/fe32dfa9f7.jpg this bg]
03:07 Alex Li: k
03:07 Satellite: thank you
03:07 Satellite: That's all ! please update :23
03:07 Satellite: :3
03:08 Alex Li: wait 4 bg
03:09 Alex Li: done
03:09 Alex Li: its updated
03:09 Satellite: I'll recheck !
03:09 Alex Li: ok
03:10 Satellite: ehh
03:10 Satellite: ah okay
03:10 Alex Li: uh?
03:10 Alex Li: ok
03:12 Satellite: sorry Easy 01:28:045 (3) - 
03:12 Satellite: add Sampleset : N and finish ?
03:12 Satellite: or whistle + clap ?
03:13 Satellite: 02:26:227 (3) - ^
03:15 Alex Li: sry got dc
03:16 Satellite: back~
03:16 Satellite: 02:26:227 (3) - too *easy diff
03:16 Satellite: 01:28:045 (3) - 
03:16 Satellite: add whistle + clap or finish ?
03:16 Alex Li: will add clap
03:17 Satellite: k
03:20 Satellite: that's all ~ update please ~
03:21 Alex Li: up to date

Oyatsu wrote:

Gratz, but i really can't understand why BA can miss this. In Insane diff, at 01:28:499 (1,2,3) - a distance blame? If was me, i will consider this as an unrankble issue

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Narcissu wrote:

去搞那個我射了很多星的app啊

Alex Li wrote:

Oyatsu wrote:

Gratz, but i really can't understand why BA can miss this. In Insane diff, at 01:28:499 (1,2,3) - a distance blame? If was me, i will consider this as an unrankble issue

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I think its ok because everyone can play that，but if its really a unrankable thing，ill wait for qat then