Kamidachi wrote:

as requested, baeglwn

[Stefan's Easy]

• 
  00:34:404 (2,3,4) - The (4) looks lazy rather than artistic, no offense. It doesn't feel significant in comparison to most of the others. I suggest a reshape since the gap is so big with a spinner. o well, I made something better now. Shape-wise it looks more... clearer? But about the rhythm I kept the slider-cirlce-slider rhythm.
  ~I also feel 2 sliders like the below are a space-filling alternative and still leave time for spinner prep/recovery.
  
  00:32:404 (2) - Didn't know stuff like this and 01:06:404 (1) were rankable in easy. If they are, i think they look cool. Nice. Wouldn't know why they would be not rankable.
  01:16:804 (2) - Feels plain, but symmetry sound. No issue here, just opinion.

[ Faded ] wrote:

[Easy]
I've noticed that some notes are 1.5 of a beat apart on the timeline, such as 00:24:004 (1,2) - . I wouldn't do this, because a beginner won't have a steady beat after hearing the hitsound, they will probably hit it 1/2 too early and miss. I am still experimenting with these things, that issues probably become solved over time.

1. 00:19:004 (2) - You could improve this hook a little, try something like this instead: okay, made it a bit more different than yours but it's definitely smoother.
   
   Try This!

   
   This is better because the first descent isn't so steep, making it look symmetrical and nicer.

Tician wrote:

Easy

00:19:004 (2) - this is totally not fitting to the rhythm, it's viable to start with the half beat yeah, but this is 150 BPM, it should be easy and the stress is on the downbeat Like said, I am still experimenting with them.
00:25:404 (2) - same
00:57:404 (2) - same

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[ Faded ] wrote:

Hi, mod as requested~

[Light Insane]

1. 00:10:404 (4) - This slider goes right into the health-bar, which can cause issues with reading. I suggest moving the slider further down, so it doesn't happen. - I don't think veeery slight touching won't ever cause a problem. I'd rather not break the well-done blanket.

Tician wrote:

OK OK Kaguya forced me to mod this

00:06:404 (1,2,3) - this is irritating, try to place the circle in the middlt of the end and start of the sliders - Please, it is just simple jump pattern
00:12:804 (1,2,3) - same
00:26:804 (6,7,1) - same
+ some other parts
00:07:204 (4,5) - I don't like that it's not fitting to my ears, how about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2475127 (just look at the timing line I am not in the mood to move anything properly ) - No, it fits. Listen a bit more carefully :3
00:59:204 (1) - unneccessary, delete it and move the slider to start there - It was to follow background sample in the music, same as above, listen carefully

tuddster wrote:

General

Some tags would be nice. done
<3 bg. me too LOL

Normal

Cool diff.

00:01:604 (1) - The sharp corner in this slider looks really forced, compare to Easy where the corners follow the music. I prefer it this way, the gd isn't my mapping so he can interpret it different than I can
00:04:004 (3) - Same same
00:05:404 (2) - Maybe move this so it makes a big symmetrical thing with 1 and 3. done
00:15:804 (2) and copypastas - Too close to the previous slider, looks ugly. I'd just distance snap this to 1.1x. bleh I fixed this once already idk why it didn't work
00:23:004 (2) - Maybe make this flow a little better with the previous slider idk, I think this looks ugly. I think it's fine
00:29:604 (2) - Doesn't interact well with 00:31:004 (2). That's just my pet peeve though so it's probably nothing. think it's fine again
01:05:604 (4) - nc here, I don't see any reason to delay the new combo past the sexy triangle thing. Patterns can go across combos yaknow. was a mistake, fixed
01:06:404 (1) - remove nc
01:18:404 (4) - nc? sure

Insane

Rename to Extra? It seems difficult enough. Or don't, and just have 2 insane diffs, that's ok right? Just for sure no Light Insane pls. did

Nice jumps, I don't see any problem with the distance spacing (or lack thereof )

00:02:804 (4,1) - I'd just make these 1/2 sliders, the extensions don't fit at all imo they're fine
00:04:804 (1,2,3,4,5) - idk about this, try something more like this pattern maybe? But not as sloppy ofc, and excuse the low AR. uh, pass, I definitely like my pattern more
00:12:004 (3) - How about making this a rapidly-reversing slider, or whatever you call those buzz slider thingamahoos. I hate the way these play
00:14:004 (4) - Remove the hitsound (leftover from copy and paste I think) intentional
00:38:404 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is pretty jumpy for a relatively subtle sound? relatively subtle? it's really damn loud LOL regardless I decided to have some fun with this part
00:44:804 (1,2,3,4) - Kind of an uninteresting rhythm, shake it up! I'm thinking this. did something similiarish
&
01:18:404 (1) - I'd move the spinner later a little bit and add one last circle before the spinner, for giggles. Personal preference here. agree, did

tuddster wrote:

Completely random mod, because why the hell not?



- 2hot m8

Rename to just 0920's Insane? I'd call it an Insane diff, doesn't feel light in any way whatsoever. - Done, rip Light Insane 5ever missed w0w so touching 1 like = 1 dorito
Anyway I think this is a really awesome difficulty, especially 00:20:204 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) holy shit that might just be my favorite pattern ever. - Thanks. <3 pink nohomo

00:07:704 (5) - I know you want to follow the sample, but this sorta breaks the rhythm of the map for a little bit and plays awkward. - Sorry but I want to keep it. It is that I want to follow the song perfectly. You know why, hope you understand
00:13:604 (1,2,3,4) - Kinda confusing to read, or maybe I just suck at reading lel - Actually 00:13:804 (2,3) - these notes may be a bit tough xD
00:14:404 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - For some reason, the map becomes really easy for a little bit here. I'd add some more notes, maybe even overmap a little. - Actually I wanted to follow the song becoming quiet
00:30:404 (1) - Set the sliderhead's sampleset to Drum and this sounds 100x cooler and more fitting. - I don't really hear the difference but fixed
00:51:204 (1) - I can tell the aim was to follow the "You're too slow!" but it feels off, I'd just ignore the voice here like in the rest of the map. - Same as 00:07:704 (5)
00:55:004 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) (around here) - Sudden spike in note density, for some reason. I'd cut out 00:56:004 (1,2,3,4) and just leave a slider there or something. - Changed the pattern a bit
00:59:204 (1,2) - Weird as hell to play. Again, "background sample" mapping, bla bla, but seriously this is super awkward. - Again, you know ;(

Nozhomi wrote:

Hi-hi~ here because baka Kaguya ask me and wtf why not yolo song. (Sry I mod it offline so I hope what I'll point wont be already fix :/ ).
SANIC !

- General :

1. Remove widescreen support for all diffs. ye

- Extra :

1. 00:55:604 (4,5,6,7,1) - Why increase DS on the end of stream ? You don't do it this similar streams like 01:02:004 (4,5,6,7,1) - .
2. 01:08:404 (4,5,6,7,1) - Same here. Stay consistent with DS.these were both so minor it's not even funny but I fixed both

- Normal :

1. SV is maybe too high. 1.40 should be better but do what you want. hard has basically 1.8, easy has 1.2, normal has 1.5. I think it's fine
2. 00:22:404 (1,2) - I don't get it why you don't blanket them. It looks really messy like that. because I'm not willing to break the DS on a normal map to have a blanket when I can just do this
3. 00:28:004 (3,4) - What is that spacing ? it's like literally .02 off, I'm not fixing this because it looks much better the way it is in comparison to the way itw as at 1.1. won't effect gameplay
4. 00:35:204 (1,2) - Same as 00:22:404 (1,2) - same
5. 01:00:604 (4,1) - To make flow a little nicer, why not move down a little 01:00:804 (1) - like 404:300 ? sure this seems good
6. 01:13:604 (1) - ^
7. Copypasta diff meh ;w;

Poor mod sry.
GL with it. Mukyu~

tuddster wrote:

General

Some tags would be nice. yeah uuuuuuumm, Maelsdgsad please add "thenutritiousguy" and "tng" to the tags. thanks
<3 bg.

Stefan's Easy

Nice diff.
00:19:004 (2) - This slider plays super weird, I honestly don't feel anything in the music here at all. oki
00:25:404 (2) - Same ^ doki
00:29:604 (3) - maybe curve this slider a little? Just personal preference. uh.. nah, I perfer the straight slider here.
00:36:804 (4) - Move the clap hitsound to the end of this slider, where it fits better (possibly a simple error with c+p) I wanna follow the hitsounding from the other difficulties.

The rest looks perfect, nice job.

Nozhomi wrote:

- Stefan's Easy :

I see what you did there.

1. CS and SV are too high for Easy diff imo. Something like 2.5 and 1.00 are more adapted but meh (GOTTA GO FAST RIGHT ?) I always hated any CS below 3 and I won't change witout exception. the SV is fine, might a bit over the average but still fine.
2. 01:12:004 (1) - Move anchor point to 435:79 to done a better blanket. dayum son where did you find this
3. 01:15:204 (1) - This one is really close to previous slider. Move it to 324:200. done

Poor mod sry.
GL with it. Mukyu~

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232,160,47604,2,0,B|290:134|290:134|343:105|348:41|296:12|256:35,2,240,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,256,49604,5,2,0:0:0:0:
396,332,50404,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,51204,12,4,52804,1:0:0:0:
24,80,53604,6,0,B|72:128|136:128|184:80|184:80|272:112|272:52|360:84,1,360,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,144,55204,2,0,P|464:204|444:272,1,120,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
388,324,56004,6,0,B|332:352|272:324|272:324|220:352|220:352|164:324,1,240,2|8,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,260,57404,2,0,B|-12:224|-12:224|84:144|84:144|80:88|80:88|164:40|252:88,1,420,0|8,0:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
332,140,59204,5,4,1:0:0:0:
400,320,60004,2,0,B|472:224|472:224|512:172|484:112,2,240,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,352,62004,1,0,3:0:0:0:
216,324,62404,5,2,3:2:0:0:
108,164,63204,6,0,P|140:88|288:72,2,240,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,240,65204,1,8,3:2:0:0:
216,324,65604,1,4,1:0:0:0:
396,256,66404,6,0,B|395:193|395:193|461:94|461:94|455:43|424:29|359:9|330:83,1,360,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,152,68004,2,0,P|224:172|164:152,1,120,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
100,84,68804,5,2,3:2:0:0:
24,260,69604,2,0,B|116:336|116:336|240:320,1,240,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,304,70804,2,0,B|392:292|392:292|308:220|356:132,1,240,0|8,0:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
432,192,72004,6,0,P|435:79|328:40,2,240,4|8|2,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,268,74004,2,0,B|306:333|306:333|278:362|224:351|216:293|256:268,1,240,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
324,200,75204,6,0,B|390:135|390:135|419:108|409:53|351:44|326:84,1,240,2|8,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,240,76804,2,0,P|172:280|108:100,1,360,2|8,0:0|3:2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78404,12,0,80004,0:0:0:0:

Nozhomi wrote:

- Kaguya's Hard :

1. 00:02:404 (3,4,1) - I know you want to stack these circles, but music is not really enough strong to feel a jump here. Also there is no other jumps like this one in similar rhytmics section. I suggest you to find an other way to deal with this pattern. barely a jump, I think it's probably fine
2. The rest of diff looks good

tuddster wrote:

Kaguya's Hard

I think overall the map is quite monotonous, and needs some longer sliders and rests between notes to break up the rhythm a bit. Pretty nice diff though besides that.

00:21:604 (4,5,6,1,2,3) and similar patterns - Here's what I'm talking about by "monotonous", because this pattern is repeated pretty often in the map. Some long sliders, rests, doubles... would go a long way. meh, maybe. since I can't physically like.. remap this section, I think this is probably a pass
01:08:404 (5) - Make this guy parallel with the slider above. tried to
01:16:804 (1) - This slider looks odd with 01:15:804 (3) before it, maybe make it go in a different direction, or just copy 01:15:804 (3) into this position and reverse it. Again this is just my pet peeve so probably leave it. probably fine

Nozhomi wrote:

Hi-hi~ here because baka Kaguya ask me and wtf why not yolo song. (Sry I mod it offline so I hope what I'll point wont be already fix :/ ).
SANIC !

- 0920's Insane :

1. 00:28:404 (5,1) - You can improve this blanket by moving slider's start to 215:227. - Became worse, 0/10 - IGN
2. 01:08:804 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't really see a reason to increase DS for this stream. Pls just use same DS than other previous streams. - Changed the pattern, hope it works

Stefan wrote:

sckrub, add thenutritiousguy and tng into the Tags

and get it qualified 0o0o0o0o0omg

Ringating wrote:

here's a 16:9 version of the bg so widescreen users don't have unnecessary upscaling

no kds

1. It would be nice to add some Kiai Time on Kaguya's Hard, if you do so use the same sections you've used on the other difficulties.
2. Disable Widescreen Support on every difficulty since you don't have a Storyboard.

1. I feel like HP and OD are kinda high, I'd reduce them by 1 tick.

1. OD5 is way too high for a Normal imo, I'd make it 4 instead.

1. 00:48:004 (1) - I don't think this new combo here is necessary, I'd remove it.
2. 00:53:604 (1,2,1) - Spacing is kinda inconsistent here, make sure to fix it.

1. OD -1 would fit better for this difficulty, also AR 7.5 would be better, right now it feels too fast.

1. AR 8.5 would fit better for this difficulty rather than 8.7.

1. 00:10:404 (4) - This slider is completely touching the hp bar, move it down please.
2. 00:20:204 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - I really don't think this is a good idea, people who still uses hitbursts might not see the slider and miss.

1. 00:39:604 (7) - Adding a new combo here would be great because you're checking from a kind of slider rhythm to another one.
2. 00:45:202 (2) - Whole slider is unsnapped, make sure to resnap it proplerly in the timeline.
3. 01:05:604 (1) - Something seriously went wrong here, I'm pretty sure this slider is supposed to end on the next white tick.

Andrea wrote:

~General~

~0920's Insane~

1. AR 8.5 would fit better for this difficulty rather than 8.7.

- I see no problem with this.

1. 00:10:404 (4) - This slider is completely touching the hp bar, move it down please. - Done.
2. 00:20:204 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - I really don't think this is a good idea, people who still uses hitbursts might not see the slider and miss.

- This looks really cool

Andrea wrote:

~General~

1. It would be nice to add some Kiai Time on Kaguya's Hard, if you do so use the same sections you've used on the other difficulties. whoops
2. Disable Widescreen Support on every difficulty since you don't have a Storyboard.

~Normal~

1. OD5 is way too high for a Normal imo, I'd make it 4 instead.

sure

1. 00:48:004 (1) - I don't think this new combo here is necessary, I'd remove it. sure
2. 00:53:604 (1,2,1) - Spacing is kinda inconsistent here, make sure to fix it.

fixed

~Kaguya's Hard~

1. OD -1 would fit better for this difficulty, also AR 7.5 would be better, right now it feels too fast. agreed, fixed

~Extra~

1. 00:39:604 (7) - Adding a new combo here would be great because you're checking from a kind of slider rhythm to another one. yeap
2. 00:45:202 (2) - Whole slider is unsnapped, make sure to resnap it proplerly in the timeline. that was really weird
3. 01:05:604 (1) - Something seriously went wrong here, I'm pretty sure this slider is supposed to end on the next white tick. yea, that's really weird, fixed

A lot of copy-paste between the difficulties but the song is pretty repetitive so it's fine, actually it's a fun map, good job.

1. Kiai Time on Kaguya's Hard is still missing.

1. 00:20:204 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - This is cool like you've said, but I'm still not confident with it, I don't think it's okay to go.

Andrea wrote:

Here's a recheck.

~General~

1. Kiai Time on Kaguya's Hard is still missing.added

Call me back :>

Andrea wrote:

Looks amazing now, I approve of this map.

Bubbled~

DakeDekaane wrote:

idk why I am doing this.

[ Normal]
no copy pasterino pls
Your comboing is messed up in this diff, use NC each 2 downbeats pls. done
00:09:604 (1,2) - These sliders would look really cooler with the red point in the exact middle of them. done
00:16:804 - 00:19:204 - Rhythm here is really wonky, it's like the only place you decided to follow stuff that isn't the main melody. Try this.
I really dislike this rhythm, it suits an easy much more than a normal and I really can't seem to get it to work, I agree with the first 2 sliders being off but it's hard to make that different
00:30:404 - 00:32:004 - ^ same
00:22:404 (1,2) - me sad no blanket ds doesn't let me, besides, I like it this way
00:35:204 (1,2) - ^ same
00:41:204 (2,3,1) - A smoother curve would look better. done

[ Extra]
no copy pasterino pls
Most of the 3/4 sliders are awful and misplaced, and we also have some weird spacing here (though it may be your intention, given the song). But at least let's fix the weird rhythm. was intentional
00:01:604 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - This part is really inconsistent with the rest of the map, you're mapping here the percusion things? but then you go for the main melody, and the switch is really bad. Stick to the main melody. this is the only time where I use single taps to emphasize it, but I'm basically always mapping to the percussion throughout the song with the sliders as variance for the other noises
00:04:404 (5,1,2) - The spacing is pretty similar, while they're on different time. what? I don't know what you mean
00:08:804 (3) - Make it a 1/2 slider, the 1/2 pause would give more emphasis to the next note, adding that this isn't really a held note to justify the extended slider. yea, you're right, fixed
00:08:804 (3,4,1) - spacing pls. this is also intentional, I'm not sure what the issue is here (then again I already fixed the above
00:27:604 (2,3) - Shouldn't the spacing be lower? The large jump isn't really fitting for the intensity there. fixed

poop

DakeDekaane wrote:

[ Insane]
I'm going to be a bit picky here.
00:04:004 (3) - Although this plays fine, the held note is until the red tick, it doesn't extend more than that. - Made it STR2. Now it should do the trick.
00:05:604 (5) - ^Something similar. - Something similar.
00:20:704 (9) - There's actually no sound here to support this note. Some kind of antijump would play nicely on the resulting 1/2 beat. - This pattern is good imo so let me keep it
00:40:404 (2) - This would fit better as a 1/2 slider due that skipped beat, it's really strong and part of the main melody so if feels weird to be ignored.
00:42:004 (3) - ^
00:43:604 (4) - ^
00:46:804 (3) - ^
00:48:404 (3) - ^
00:50:004 (4) - ^ - STR2 solved problem
01:07:204 (1) - I'm not really sure about this, for me it sounds much better as a 1/2 slider, as the pause would make the next note feel stronger, imo. - Not really imo

poop - pretty sure you're talking about my diffu lolk jk

1. 00:12:004 (1,1) - Didn't we deem the distance of this gap unrankable for Easy diffs? They should be about 1500ms or 1 measure apart @ 160bpm. Your current is what we have for Normal. Did this rule ever get finalized though? Anyways. Might wanna double check this before ranking quickly.
   00:38:404 (1,1) - 00:51:204 (1,1) - are the same.
2. 00:57:404 (2) - This really should start 1/2 later at 00:57:595 - or you already fixed it thanks to Dake.
3. 01:00:004 (2,1) - You didn't NC the (2) but you NC'd the (1). These should be fixed up please.

1. 01:05:404 (6) - I recommend deleting this for a couple reasons. The first is that your map for a whole minute has nothing but 1/2 gaps as the biggest. Another is that it gives off that feel since you have the kiai restarting after this, having a tiny of time where you don't move your mouse or click anything works wonders.

1. 00:59:104 (8) - I highly recommend you delete this note. There is Nothing in the music playing here, and it seperates the two different combos here which play to different things.
2. 01:09:404 (4,5,6,7) - A lot of whistles here. You should just have one at (7)? At the very least I recommend removing (6)
3. 01:20:004 - add 5% volume to the end of this spinner for the fade out effect.

Lanturn wrote:

[Stefan]

1. 00:12:004 (1,1) - Didn't we deem the distance of this gap unrankable for Easy diffs? They should be about 1500ms or 1 measure apart @ 160bpm. Your current is what we have for Normal. Did this rule ever get finalized though? Anyways. Might wanna double check this before ranking quickly. I honestly don't know. it doesn't feels like the Hitobjects are coming too sudden or appearing too fast, even for newer players. it is indeed not 1500ms (it's 800ms) but playwise it feels totally fine to me. Maybe make a Thread in the BM Forum for this?
   00:38:404 (1,1) - 00:51:204 (1,1) - are the same.
2. 00:57:404 (2) - This really should start 1/2 later at 00:57:595 - or you already fixed it thanks to Dake. Got fixed by...
3. 01:00:004 (2,1) - You didn't NC the (2) but you NC'd the (1). These should be fixed up please. Some NCs where inconsistent and I fixed them through the Difficulty, this one is fine. Should be clearer now.

Nice diff

Lanturn wrote:

Sonic please ;_;

[General]
BPM should actually be halved according to the drums lol. I'm not gonna screw up the SV just to change the bpm makes a lot more sense to have it be 150 anyways with the way that the insane/extra plays

Title: "Green Trill Zone" (Trap Remix)
https://soundcloud.com/majorleaguewobs/ ... trap-remix it has quotes around it for purposes relating to how the first video on youtube also has quotes around it, it doesn't actually have quotes around it for the real metadata. there's no song on osu that has quotes in the title. LOL

[Kaguya]

1. 01:05:404 (6) - I recommend deleting this for a couple reasons. The first is that your map for a whole minute has nothing but 1/2 gaps as the biggest. Another is that it gives off that feel since you have the kiai restarting after this, having a tiny of time where you don't move your mouse or click anything works wonders. honestly I think this is fine, I understand the logic with it and all but the map IS only 1:20

Stefan wrote:

You could double the current SV to half the BPM.

Maeglwn wrote:

Stefan wrote:

You could double the current SV to half the BPM.

how important is it?

Lanturn wrote:

Sonic please ;_;

[General]
BPM should actually be halved according to the drums lol.

Title: "Green Trill Zone" (Trap Remix)
https://soundcloud.com/majorleaguewobs/ ... trap-remix

Please change the title before rank and see the first thing in Stefan's diff I mentioned.

[bbkj0920] - Who the fuck is bbkj0920? Pretty sure that's just fat korean otaku that masturbates to hentai stuff. #beingnotfamous ;_;
I'm pretty sure I have your old version.... so you can skip this unless something here actually does help.

1. 00:59:104 (8) - I highly recommend you delete this note. There is Nothing in the music playing here, and it seperates the two different combos here which play to different things. - There's bouncing sound that follows 1/4. I'm pretty sure it fits
2. 01:09:404 (4,5,6,7) - A lot of whistles here. You should just have one at (7)? At the very least I recommend removing (6) - Accepted. Rhythm is much cooler. Sadly I can't move (7) because of star pattern lol
3. 01:20:004 - add 5% volume to the end of this spinner for the fade out effect. - Is that even rankable? I didn't know. Well I'll believe you