ruberusu wrote:

hi ~

from my queue

|1|2|3|4|

mod

[General]
title : 白金ディスコ ( ok )
romanised title : Platinum Disco
[HD]
00:19:516 (19516|0) - move to 00:19:644 - ( ok )
00:20:541 (20541|0) - ^00:20:670 - ^
00:21:567 (21567|2) - ^00:21:695 - ^

00:22:593 (22593|0) - delete hitsound ^

00:22:593 (22593|1) - move to 00:22:721 - (hit sound Finish) ^

00:23:234 (23234|3) - change LN (end to 00:23:746 - ) ^

00:23:490 (23490|1) - delete ^

00:27:721 (27721|0) - move to 00:27:849 - ^
00:28:746 (28746|1) - ^00:28:875 - ^
00:29:772 (29772|2) - ^00:29:900 - ^
00:30:798 (30798|1) - ^00:30:926 - ^

00:31:439 (31439|3) - change LN (end to 00:31:952 - ) ^

00:31:695 (31695|1) - delete ^

[MX]
00:19:516 (19516|3) - move to 00:19:644 - ( ok )
00:19:644 - add 1 ^

00:20:541 (20541|1,20541|0) - move to 00:20:670 - ^
00:21:567 (21567|3,21567|2) - ^00:21:695 - ^
00:22:593 (22593|0,22593|1) - ^00:22:721 - ^

00:23:105 (23105|3) - delete ^
00:26:439 (26439|3) - ^ ^

00:27:849 - add 1 and 4 ^

00:28:746 (28746|1,28746|0) - move to 00:28:875 - ^
00:29:772 (29772|3,29772|2) - ^00:29:900 - ^
00:30:798 (30798|2,30798|3) - ^00:30:926 - ^

00:31:311 (31311|3) - delete ^

00:33:234 (33234|0) - move to 2 ( no, thanks )
00:33:362 (33362|1) - ^ ( move to 2 ? my note was on 2 )

00:40:157 - ^2 or 3 ( Add to 2 )

00:40:285 (40285|0,40285|3,40349|1,40413|2,40477|3,40541|2,40605|1,40670|0,40734|1,40798|2,40862|3,40862|0) -
→　https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2384144 ( ok )

00:41:182 - add 1 or 2 ^

00:41:311 (41311|2,41311|1,41311|3,41439|0,41567|2,41695|1,41823|3,41952|0) -
→　https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2384158 ^

00:42:464 (42464|3,42464|0,42528|2,42593|1,42657|0,42721|1,42785|2,42849|3,42913|2,42977|1,43041|0,43041|3) -
→　https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2384161 ^

00:43:234 - add 1 or 3 ( Add to 3 )

01:10:285 (70285|1) - delete ( ok )

01:25:028 - add ^
01:26:054 - ^ ^
01:26:823 - ^4 ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2385225 )
01:27:336 - ^1 ^

01:27:593 (87593|3) - delete ^

good luck >w< /

- Veritica - wrote:

00:33:234 (33234|0) - move to 2 ( no, thanks )
00:33:362 (33362|1) - ^ ( move to 2 ? my note was on 2 )

ruberusu wrote:

- Veritica - wrote:

00:33:234 (33234|0) - move to 2 ( no, thanks )
00:33:362 (33362|1) - ^ ( move to 2 ? my note was on 2 )

Mistake
00:33:234 (33234|0) - move to 2
00:33:362 (33362|1) - ^

Right
00:33:234 (33234|0) - move to 2 ( Fix = ok )
00:33:362 (33362|1) - ^ 3 ( ok )

sorry,my bad

playin14 wrote:

Hi here is my mod

click

column 0|1|2|3

[NM]
00:07:849 (7849|1) - move to 2 ( ok )
00:08:105 (8105|0) - move to 1 ^
00:08:362 (8362|2) - move to 0 ^
00:08:618 (8618|3) - move to 2 ^

00:16:054 (16054|1) - move to 2 ^
00:16:311 (16311|0) - move to 1 ^
00:16:567 (16567|2) - move to 0 ^
00:16:823 (16823|3) - move to 1 I know this is your mapping style, but if you move this eight notes it would fit better to the music. ^

00:30:157 (30157|3,30157|0,30285|1,30413|2,30670|1,30798|3) - Ctrl + H ( no, thanks )

[HD]
00:31:439 (31439|2) - remove Finish sound ( ok )
00:31:952 (31952|0) - add Finish sound ^
00:32:464 (32464|2) - remove Finish sound ^
00:32:977 (32977|2) - add Finish sound ^

[MX]
00:40:413 (40413|3,40413|0,40477|1,40541|2,40605|3,40670|2,40734|1,40798|0,40862|1,40926|3,40926|2) - Well, I think this little part is a little bit overmapped? Instead you could make it like this: http://puu.sh/dIYNT/28a712b5a4.jpg
Same at 00:42:464 ( MX are still not hard, I want to improve its again. Star it's not enough )

Love this song <3 Good luck!

[GraveChaos] wrote:

Hi MOD here as requested in my Queue~ (~*w*)~
[4K MOD]

BG image size must be 1366 x 768 ( ok )

|1|2|3|4|

EZ

00:10:926 Add note to |3| (Drumbeat - Cymbal | Impact) ( ok )
00:12:721 (12721|1,12977|0,13234|2,13490|1) - Ctrl + H (Better pattern for hand relax) ( ^ )
00:56:054 Add note to |1| (Drumbeat - Cymbal | Impact) ( ^ )
01:03:746 (63746|2,64259|3) - Ctrl + G (Better pattern for hand relax) ( ^ )
01:04:259 Add note to |1| (Drumbeat - Cymbal | Impact) ( ^ )
01:20:670 Add note to |4| ^ ( ^ )

NM

00:14:003 (14003|2) - End it here 00:14:644 (End of flute pitch) ( ok )
00:55:541 (55541|0,56054|0) - I suggest this to be long note instead then remove this 00:55:798 (55798|1) - Because there's no specific instrument it's better to long note instead for the guitar pitch ( actually i did a vocal mapping on those point )

HD

HP DR = 7 ( ok )
00:21:567 (21567|3,21695|2) - Ctrl + G (Pattern) ( ^ )
01:00:670 Add note to |2|(Drumbeat - Clap like sound | Impact | Pattern)( ^ )

MX

00:23:875 (23875|0) - Remove no particular instrument ( ok )
00:40:413 (40413|3,40413|0,40477|1,40541|2,40605|3,40670|2,40734|1,40798|0,40862|1,40926|3,40926|2) - Pls fix this part there's notes which don't have particular instrument and not necessary to be laddered ( Fix = 00:40:541 (40541|2) - Delete )
00:42:464 (42464|3,42464|0,42528|2,42593|1,42657|0,42721|1,42785|2,42849|3,42913|2,42977|0,42977|1) - ^ ( Fix = 00:42:593 (42593|1) - ^ )
00:54:003 (54003|3,54259|0) - Remove not necessary (Pattern) ( ok )
01:13:811 (73811|1,73875|2,73939|3,74003|2,74003|0) - ^ ( Fix = 01:14:003 (74003|2) - Add note + Clap )
01:16:887 (76887|1,76952|2,77016|3,77080|0,77080|2) - ^ ( Fix = 01:17:080 (77080|1) - ^ )
01:17:913 (77913|1,77977|2,78041|3,78105|0,78105|2) - ^ ( Fix = 01:18:105 (78105|2) - ^ )
01:20:990 (80990|1,81054|2,81118|3,81182|2,81182|0) - ^ ( Fix = 01:21:182 (81182|1) - ^ )
01:22:016 (82016|1,82080|2,82144|3,82208|0,82208|2) - ^ ( Fix = 01:22:208 (82208|2) - ^ )
Pls fix the parts which you put notes even though it doesn't have particular instrument/s

Nice map!~
Good luck!~ =w=)b

Starry- wrote:

Hi! From Starry's MANIA Modding Queue!~

[General]

Timing: ☑
Audio: ☑
BG: ☑

1. Everything looks fine about it it just seems a tiny bit upscaled and blurred for me. But this should be no problem.

Metadata: ☑
Preview Point: ☑
AiMod: ☑

All clear!

A bit of notice: the HPOD spread looks a bit unbalanced. I suggest:
EZ: HP7OD7. Doesn't deserve HP6 since it's a really easy chart anyways. ( ok )
NM: HP7OD7 is fine I suppose.
HD: HP7.5OD7.5 is quite nice. But because there isn't many LNs, maybe you could choose to put it as HP8OD8. ( ok )
MX: ... I guess this is okay, but again for such a low bpm chart OD9 may cause issues. Either keep what you have, or have HP8.5OD8.5. Optional. ( ^ )

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[EZ]

SPOILER

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00:02:721 (2721|0) - Either add a note here at like, 3, or something. Because at 00:10:926 (10926|0,10926|2) - you have 2 notes. ( ok )

00:10:926 (10926|2) - Definitely move to 3. Spreads it out. ( ^ )

00:05:541 (5541|3,8618|3,13746|3,16823|3) - I don't really see the need for these LNs. This is because the sound before them is pretty much the exact same - the noise doesn't hold. But random LNs here. Maybe just change to normal notes. ( ^ )

00:20:028 (20028|1,20157|2) - Shift left, spreads out. ( no thanks, will still keep it the same )

00:35:541 (35541|0) - Add maybe? (1) ( ^ )

No more real major issues here. I'm just afraid of the majority of the song being mapped as 1/4 doubles. They're not as emphasised to really map them, it'd be better imo just to map 1/1 or 1/2 notes instead. But I guess it's fine - it's just my opinion.

[NM]

SPOILER

~

00:02:721 (2721|0) - Add note at 3. ( ok ) & ( 00:10:926 (10926|2) - Add to 3 )

00:21:567 (21567|1) - Move to 0 or 2 for balance. ( Move to 0 ) & ( 00:22:593 (22593|3) - Move to 3 )

00:43:490 (43490|3,43746|2) - Hitsounds could maybe emphasise these weird noises heard in the music. (Whistle on both maybe?) ( ok )

01:01:695 (61695|1,61952|2,62208|3) - Shift left for balance. ( 01:00:670 (60670|1,60926|2,61182|3) - Shift left )

01:18:105 (78105|0,78362|0,78618|2,78875|1,79003|0,79131|2,79131|1) - Maybe to hard for a NM like this since newer players will easily get confused. Maybe spread it out a bit. Kinda like this:
( ok )

Nothing much else to say really, pretty basic but overall decently consistent.

[HD]

SPOILER

00:02:721 (2721|0) - Add at 2? Big noise. ( no thanks, will still keep it the same )

00:06:054 (6054|2) - Feeling better if this was at 3.( ok )

00:14:259 (14259|2) - ^ ( ^ )

For better hand balance:

00:15:285 (15285|1,15413|2,15541|3) - Shift all this left by 1. ( ok )
00:16:054 (16054|2) - Move this to 3. ( ^ )

00:22:464 (22464|2,22721|1) - All triples then it randomly stops here? Why? (
Because I think it is the final part of the pattern and not suitable if placed triples note )

00:28:875 (28875|1) - Add 2 for consistency. ( ok )
00:29:900 (29900|2) - Add 1 for consistency. ( ^ )

00:35:926 (35926|0) - These stream patterns... They could be mapped a bit more effectively. Do you hear that sort of high pitched noise every white tick? You could add a note with whistle hitsound in the stream like that. So maybe rearrange. ( 00:35:798 (35798|1,35926|2,36054|3,36182|1,36311|0) - Fix )

00:45:285 (45285|1) - ^( Fix )

01:04:516 (64516|2) - Feels better at 3. ( ok )

01:26:311 (86311|1) - A lot better at 3. ( ^ )

Running low on time so if you want a little bit of advice on the MX diff try and catch me ingame sometime soon.

Overall a solid mapset. Nothing is overly done and I'm sure it'll tend well for newer players. Goodluck! <3

Brian_Ex wrote:

Mod By Request

From Queue

|1|2|3|4|

EZ

00:36:952 - Add note at 3
00:37:464 (37464|2) - delete
00:37:336 - Add note at 3
00:38:362 - ^
( EZ is easy, I don't want to add note for improve its again. Star it's enough )

NM

00:09:387 - add note ( will still keep it the same, 00:10:157 (10157|0,10413|2,10670|3) - I did a vocal mapping on those point )
00:09:900 - add note ( ^ )
00:26:439 (26439|1,26567|3,26695|0,26823|1) - i think you must change the hit sound ( fix, hitsound - Delete ) >.>, its kinda weird to hear
LN start 00:44:772 (44772|3) - LN end 00:45:285 - ( ok )
01:05:285 (65285|3) - change it to note ( vocal mapping on those point )
00:59:131 (59131|0) - LN end 00:59:644 - ( ok )
01:02:208 (62208|3) - LN end 01:03:234 - ( ^ )

HD

00:08:875 (8875|2,9131|3,9259|1,9387|0,9644|3,9900|1,10157|3,10413|1,10413|0) - hmm i suggest https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2393582 ( will still keep it the same, because 00:09:772 - & 00:10:285 - no sound here )
i think you should re-map from 00:35:544 - to 00:40:926 - ( ok, fix )
from 00:43:746 - to 00:46:567 - same( No thanks, will still keep it the same )

^^GOOD LUCK^^

1. 00:30:798 (30798|1,30926|0,31182|0) - I think that's still confusing to new player. move 00:30:798 (30798|1) - to 4 and 00:30:926 (30926|0) - to 3
2. 00:53:746 (53746|0) - I Think long not isn't fit here. Change it to single note.
3. 00:55:028 (55028|0,55028|3) - I'm disagree with this 2 notes using finish in the same time. I suggest to change one of it to whistle.
4. 01:02:208 (62208|3) - I don't know why this note ended at blue tick. Did you follow the vocal ? Maybe that acceptable at HD but not EZ. I prefer you make it end with a single note at red tick
5. 01:02:208 (62208|2,62593|2,62977|1,63362|0,63490|1,63746|3,64259|2) - ow... a bunch of finish :v you must change it
6. 01:10:413 (70413|1) - this long not is better if ended at 01:11:439 IMO
7. 01:10:798 (70798|0,71182|0,71439|2,71695|3,71952|2) - again ==" I Think :
   01:10:798 (70798|0) - move to 4 at 01:10:926
   01:11:695 (71695|3) - Remove
   01:11:952 (71952|2) - Change finish to clap

1. 00:26:439 (26439|1) - It's useless. Remove it.
2. 00:35:285 add a single note here
3. 00:55:028 (55028|1,55028|2) - Same as EZ
4. 01:26:311 (86311|1) - you forget Finish here

1. 00:04:644 (4644|2) - I think it's better put it at 00:05:157
2. 00:20:028 (20028|1) - remove it
3. 00:21:054 (21054|2) - ^^
4. 00:22:080 (22080|1) - ^^
5. 00:36:182 (36182|1) - ^^
6. 00:37:208 (37208|0) - ^^
7. 00:37:977 (37977|3) - ^^

1. 00:40:413 (40413|3,40413|0,40477|1,40605|3,40670|2,40734|1,40798|0,40862|1,40926|3,40926|2) - Oh nooo.... Just Use a normal combo here!! don't use 1/8 remember that's not fit in the music
2. 00:42:464 (42464|3,42464|0,42528|2,42657|0,42721|1,42785|2,42849|3,42913|2,42977|0,42977|1) - ^^
3. 01:12:721 (72721|0,73746|1,76823|0,77849|1,80926|0,81952|1) - must be move back to white tick
4. 01:12:721 (72721|0,73746|1,76823|0,77849|1,80926|0,81952|1) - oh no again.... Use a normal combo here. don't use 1/8 remember that's not fit in the music

Fantastica wrote:

Hi~~~
from Modding queue :3
Key : 1|2|3|4

[EZ]

1. 00:30:798 (30798|1,30926|0,31182|0) - I think that's still confusing to new player. move 00:30:798 (30798|1) - to 4 and 00:30:926 (30926|0) - to 3 ( ok )
2. 00:53:746 (53746|0) - I Think long not isn't fit here. Change it to single note. ( will still keep it the same,
   There is the sound of the instrument at those point )
3. 00:55:028 (55028|0,55028|3) - I'm disagree with this 2 notes using finish in the same time. I suggest to change one of it to whistle.( Fix = 00:55:028 (55028|0) - remove HS )
4. 01:02:208 (62208|3) - I don't know why this note ended at blue tick. Did you follow the vocal ? Maybe that acceptable at HD but not EZ. I prefer you make it end with a single note at red tick ( ok )
5. 01:02:208 (62208|2,62593|2,62977|1,63362|0,63490|1,63746|3,64259|2) - ow... a bunch of finish :v you must change it ( ^ )
6. 01:10:413 (70413|1) - this long not is better if ended at 01:11:439 IMO ( ^ )
7. 01:10:798 (70798|0,71182|0,71439|2,71695|3,71952|2) - again ==" I Think : ( ^ )
   01:10:798 (70798|0) - move to 4 at 01:10:926 ( No thanks, will still keep it the same, add some HS )
   01:11:695 (71695|3) - Remove ( ^ )
   01:11:952 (71952|2) - Change finish to clap ( ok )

[NM]

1. 00:26:439 (26439|1) - It's useless. Remove it. ( ok, fixed ghost note )
2. 00:35:285 add a single note here ( ok, 00:35:285 (35285|2) - Add note )
3. 00:55:028 (55028|1,55028|2) - Same as EZ ( will still keep it the same, I think it was fit )
4. 01:26:311 (86311|1) - you forget Finish here ( ok )

[HD]

1. 00:04:644 (4644|2) - I think it's better put it at 00:05:157 ( will still keep it the same, because 00:05:157 - no sound here )
2. 00:20:028 (20028|1) - remove it ( ok, nice very helpful )
3. 00:21:054 (21054|2) - ^^ ( ^ )
4. 00:22:080 (22080|1) - ^^ ( ^ )
5. 00:36:182 (36182|1) - ^^ ( ^ )
6. 00:37:208 (37208|0) - ^^ ( ^ )
7. 00:37:977 (37977|3) - ^^ ( ^ )

[MX]

1. 00:40:413 (40413|3,40413|0,40477|1,40605|3,40670|2,40734|1,40798|0,40862|1,40926|3,40926|2) - Oh nooo.... Just Use a normal combo here!! don't use 1/8 remember that's not fit in the music ( MX are still not hard,if I change to normal combo here, Star it's not enough. I want to improve its again )
2. 00:42:464 (42464|3,42464|0,42528|2,42657|0,42721|1,42785|2,42849|3,42913|2,42977|0,42977|1) - ^^ ( ^ )
3. 01:12:721 (72721|0,73746|1,76823|0,77849|1,80926|0,81952|1) - must be move back to white tick ( will still keep it the same )
4. 01:12:721 (72721|0,73746|1,76823|0,77849|1,80926|0,81952|1) - oh no again.... Use a normal combo here. don't use 1/8 remember that's not fit in the music ( same as first,,,,hm, your Ctrl + c is wrong same as ^ )

OK That's all :3
We are "tica" :v ( And we are Family )

Fantastica wrote:

OK....
I love the song :3 Shoooot XD

Marirose wrote:

Hello,from my queue o/
you chose EZ,HD
and here's the mod

column=1,2,3,4

EZ

00:05:541 (5541|3,5798|2) - just advice,i think they are the same sound,you can try to make them at the same column ,becauz it is a low BPM song, why not have a try ? ( will still keep it the same, I think it was fit )
00:19:003 (19003|2) - ignore the sound like,better to play 00:20:028 (20028|1,21054|2) - ..etc... w,i think only follow the drum beat is ok, ez diff
00:23:234 (23234|2,23746|1,24259|2,24772|3) - you must follow the vocal here,but,00:23:234 (23234|2) - like this ln,it is end at 00:23:490 - ,so check these carefully
00:23:746 (23746|1) - end at 00:24:131 -
00:24:259 (24259|2) - end at 00:24:644 -
00:24:772 (24772|3) - end at 00:25:157 -
00:25:670 (25670|2) - delete
00:26:311 (26311|3,26695|1,26823|2) - try this,follow the beat,not the vocal http://puu.sh/dQyH5/82c699b057.jpg /
00:27:721 (27721|2,28746|1) - ~okay this problem i wont mention,delete them plz w
00:31:182 (31182|0,31439|2) - same vocal right? make them same column and let 00:31:182 (31182|0) - change to note
00:31:439 (31439|2,31952|1,32464|3) - check the vocal here
00:32:721 (32721|0,32977|1,33234|2,33490|3) - okay,nice vocal pattern
00:43:490 (43490|1,43746|2) - umm i suggest not place ln here,if you really want to follow it, this 00:43:746 (43746|2) - will be end at 00:45:285 - ;w;,so change to note
00:47:849 (47849|0,48875|3) - every ln change to 2 note(start&end),follow the beat
00:49:900 (49900|2,50413|3,50926|1,51439|2) - best vocal pattern for ez diff,tell the truth,short ln is not friendly for ez diff players,becauz they need easier judgement
00:56:054 - okay start here, pay more attention,lets go
00:56:439 (56439|1) - okay here,kiai time you can follow this sound
00:57:464 (57464|2) - but this one,if you really want to do this,i think you should add at 00:57:336 - ,for better play experience,but it will make ez diff star diff ↑,so i suggest delete this
00:58:490 (58490|1) - okay
00:59:516 (59516|2) - nop
01:00:541 (60541|1) - okay
01:01:567 (61567|2) - nop
01:02:208 (62208|3) - you follow the vocal here,try add a note at 01:01:823 - (not short ln
01:02:593 (62593|2,62977|1,63362|0) - just ln this part,so delete will better
01:04:259 - start here,same
01:04:644 (64644|1) - okay
01:05:670 (65670|2) - nop
01:07:721 (67721|2) - nop
01:09:772 (69772|2,70798|3,71182|0,71567|2) - you know how to do it XD,and dont forget 01:10:157 -
01:12:849 (72849|2,73875|1) - all delete
01:14:772 (74772|1,75028|2,75285|3,75541|1) - nice vocal pattern
01:16:952 (76952|1,77977|2) - delete
01:19:003 - try to add here ,a vocal
01:21:054 (81054|2,82080|1) - delete
01:24:772 - make it like http://puu.sh/dQA5b/d6337e0b59.jpg


great
All accepted except the first

HD

00:02:464 (2464|1,2464|0) - reduce one for the soft sound
00:10:670 (10670|3,10670|2) - reduce one~
00:12:721 (12721|3,12977|3) - different sound,different column
00:14:772 - you forget a note here man XD
00:18:105 (18105|0,18362|1,18618|1,18618|0) - try this http://puu.sh/dQAnH/baecd3d58f.jpg
00:23:234 - follow the vocal? okay,do it as ez diff w
00:31:823 - miss a sound here,add
00:34:772 (34772|3) - delete this one,i think 00:35:028 - is the real heavy sound,but not here
00:41:439 (41439|2,41952|2) - make them different
00:42:849 (42849|1) - no sound,delete
00:44:387 (44387|2) - no sound,but 00:44:131 - a clearly sound lol
okay,check your overmap note by using 50% speed plz
00:46:823 (46823|2,46823|3,47080|1,47080|2) - follow the vocal?okay delete 00:47:080 (47080|2) -
00:47:593 (47593|3) - and delete this,and 00:48:618 (48618|0) -
00:49:900 (49900|0,50413|2,50926|1,51439|2,51952|3) - same problem as ez diff
00:52:464 - from here,i suggest dont ignore the sound on purpose,come on, follow it
00:55:285 (55285|3) - delete and add 00:55:413 - at col 3 for the bass sound
00:55:670 (55670|1,55798|2) - overmap
01:00:798 (60798|2,61311|2) - overmap

...........

check it overmap problem plz,its a big question if you want to make this map ranked lol
01:04:644 - dont miss
01:06:182 - miss
01:08:618 - 01:08:746 - same

01:26:311 (86311|3,86311|0,86567|1,86823|1,86823|3,87080|2,87336|2,87336|0,87593|2,87593|3,87721|1,87849|0,87849|2) - great at the end >w<)b

and dont miss sound lol,50%,catch them XD

All Accepted

i dont think this song can be mapped to mx,just ez&nm&hd,thats enough,very relaxing song,relaxing mapset (i think lol
Above all,you made some mistake,but you mapped in ur style,great job
may be some of my mod is radical,i still hope that you can take a look in a relaxed mood XD
you can make it better,take away my star o/ i love this song

Good Luck

R☆Yumi's 4K Chart Check (Column:1,2,3,4)
---> Type:GM, Language:

1. The handling of Source is just in discussion. ---> Source should be romanized

oops, remove such a funny object.

Good Luck

REDYUMiKA wrote:

R☆Yumi's 4K Chart Check (Column:1,2,3,4)
---> Type:GM, Language:

[General]
1. General Check : ✓

2. Metadeta Check : (?)

1. The handling of Source is just in discussion. ---> Source should be romanized

3. BG's data Check : ✓

4. HP/OD FIX Check : ✓

[EZ]
As other modder said, a part of sections are based on vocal. So, 00:22:080 (22080|1) - ( ok )
I don't know why you did set this note to non-voiced point, in spite of none of the note for 00:21:952 -
I'm able to hear the lyrics of "~の世界（[せ]かい）に" but just this point hasn't any assigned notes for the intro-accent as "せ"

I recommend you rearrange this pattern, and for other patterns having coloser to this one, for example..
---> (e.g.1) ( x ) or (e.g.2) ( O )･･･(*1)
but if didn't intend that matter (the other case is drumbass + weak strings maybe), recommended to keep your style.

00:23:234 - ~ 00:25:285 - Shift the existing placement for several LNs to take a pitch balance. ---> (e.g.3) ( ok )

00:29:387 - ~ 00:30:926 - the same issue for some vocal accents in the case you got them. ---> (e.g.4) ( ok )

00:35:926 (35926|2,36054|3) - If thinking to take a similar way of (*1), this point is no need to change.
00:35:926 (35926|2) - is just assigned to the nasal sounds.( fixed )

00:38:362 - add a note to 3, it's an uncomfortable because this point lacked a continuous accent of "み" for the lyrics of "[み]つけた~" ( ok )
00:36:567 (36567|1,37080|3) - and about that, no problem for just assigned to the first and last accent of "背中（[せ]な[か]）~" ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2493831 )

..I got some points which is needed to improve for the accent issue, but it's just laborious work listing up all the points on this forum.
Please call me back on IRC whenever you're not able to solve this problem.

[NM]
00:23:234 - ~ 00:25:285 - the same as EZ ---> (e.g.5) ( ok )

00:26:311 - add a note to 3, why not to follow the vocal accent of "て" for the lyrics of "踏み出し[て]~"? ( ^ )

00:38:618 (38618|2,38875|3) - Ctrl+J for the vocal pitch. ･･･(*2) ( ^ )

00:39:387 (39387|2) - move to 4, and 00:39:644 (39644|3) - move to 1 for the same as (*2) ( ^ )

00:46:823 (46823|0) - move to 4, and 00:47:080 (47080|1) - move to 1 for the same as (*2) ( ^ )

00:48:875 (48875|1) - move to 4 to take a pitch relevance for each emphasized part. ---> (e.g.6) ( ^ )

01:00:670 - ~ 01:02:208 - Please consider it improving a pitch balance. ---> (e.g.7) ( ^ )

01:23:490 (83490|1) - move to 1 ( ^ )

[HD]
00:04:900 (4900|2,5028|1) - It's misplaced. I suggest you move them upon the next line by 1/4 divisor. ( ok )

00:37:721 (37721|1,37849|2) - & 00:39:259 (39259|1,39387|2) - the same view as the above. ( ^ )

00:44:387 (44387|2) - & 00:46:439 (46439|0) - remove them, it's recommended to focus on the vocal. ( ^ )

01:07:977 (67977|2) - remove, or if you wanna keep the notes density on this part, move this one to 01:08:234 - ( Removed, and 01:07:849 (67849|3) - move to 3 )

[MX]
00:08:105 (8105|1) - remove, this triple-note is just beyond the bounds of chording. ( ok )

00:08:618 (8618|2,8618|3) - The part will be worse for the reason of the unbalanced placement. ---> (e.g.8) ( ^ )
00:16:311 (16311|1,16439|1) - & 00:16:695 (16695|3,16823|3) - Jackhammer would be mismatch objects in this part. ---> (e.g.9) ( ^ )

00:40:637 (40637|3) - & 00:42:657 (42657|0) - oops, remove such a funny object. ( ^ )

00:52:080 (52080|2) - change the point to 00:51:952 - for improving this part. ( ^ )

Good Luck

*Mods Quality Feedback*
・Overview
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Note : ★☆☆☆☆ < (Low) < (High) < ★★★★★

1. how many useful tips did you get from my mod?
[list:1337]★★★★☆2. were you able to understand the mod's meaning or intention easily?
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-LASU- wrote:

Hi
|1|2|3|4|

mod

EZ
01:02:208 (62208|3) - LN end 01:03:234 -
01:10:413 (70413|1) - LN end 01:11:695 -

NM
00:14:003 (14003|2) - LN end 00:14:772 -
01:02:208 - add note 4 (EZ follow sound)
01:02:593 - add note
01:02:977 - ^
01:03:362 - ^
01:03:490 - ^
01:10:413 - add note 1 or 2
01:10:798 - add note
01:11:182 - ^
01:11:567 - ^
01:11:695 - ^

HD
00:02:721 - add note 4
00:10:926 - ^
00:35:028 - add note

MX
00:14:259 - add note 4
00:17:080 - add note 2
00:32:977 - ^
00:41:695 - add note 4
00:41:952 (41952|3) - move to 1 and add LN 4 end 00:42:208 -
00:45:285 - add note 1

good luck

KawaEE wrote:

Hii- from my queue

col 1/2/3/4

First

I consider your mapping style,
If i believe that a problem, it's suggestion.

EZ

00:10:926 (10926|2) - move to 4? i think prevent key collisions( this 00:11:439 (11439|2) - )
^If agree can be more easier pattern. but it's okay. just suggestion.

01:10:413 - just, sounding Clap one remove. i think 2clap sound is something wrong.

NM

00:02:721 (2721|2) - move to 4? just suggestion. like ez modding.
00:48:362 (48362|1,48618|0) - col reverse.
^ for note relevance like this 00:49:131 (49131|2,49387|3) -

01:15:798 - add at 4
^ cuz 01:16:054 - same crash line.

and 01:16:311 (76311|0,77336|3) - remove. i think overchord.

01:19:900 - add at 4 ^same.
and 01:20:413 (80413|0,81439|3) - delete

HD

00:10:670 (10670|3) - move to 3 and 00:10:926 - add at 4. <crash line.

00:11:311 (11311|1) - delete. for better flow
^ and 00:11:182 (11182|2) - move to 2

01:27:849 (87849|2) - move to 4

MX

00:33:490 - add at 2 and 00:33:618 (33618|1) - move to 3
00:40:477 (40477|1,40734|1,40798|0,40862|1) - ghost note. u must delete it. and i suggestion this. ▽

^ 40:413 ~ 40:926

00:41:439 (41439|3) - delete. over chord and for note relevance like 00:41:439 (41439|2,41567|0,41695|3,41823|1) -

00:42:528 (42528|2,42785|2,42849|3,42913|2) - remove. ^^ mod consider

00:55:028 - add at 1. u can add. choice.

01:02:336 (62336|2) - move to 2 and 01:02:208 - add at 1 or 3

01:05:541 - add at 2?
01:07:593 - ^same

01:25:285 - ~ 01:25:541 - 01:25:349 (85349|2,85413|1,85477|2) - delete after, I think more is better to use a long note here.
01:26:311 - ^same

01:27:849 (87849|2) - move to 1.

good luk

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

EZ

00:37:336 - add one ( ok )
00:37:464 (37464|2) - remove ( ^ )
00:38:875 - add one ( ^ )
00:39:003 (39003|1) - remove ( ^ )
00:53:746 (53746|0) - change to nm ( ^ )
01:11:567 (71567|0) - move to 3 ( ^ )

NM

00:59:131 (59131|0) - finish 00:59:387 - ( will still keep it the same )
01:03:234 - add one ( ^ )
01:25:541 - add one ( ok )

HD

00:16:439 - add one ( ghost note )
00:31:823 (31823|2) - i think. it's don't need ( ok, removed )

MX

00:21:182 - add one ( will still keep it the same )
01:09:387 (69387|1) - finish it 01:10:028 - ( ok )

Nice quality!
You hope that helps.

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hi Veri-san >.<)/
Mod from ☆ Moe Hunter Mania Queue ☆

General : ( √ )
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Metadata : ( √ )
Timing : ( √ )
Audio : ( √ )
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4K = |1|2|3|4|

(Focus : Note Presence , Hand/Row Balance, Aesthetics/Consistency Pattern)

EZ

00:04:516 (4516|1,4772|0) Ctrl + H for consistency like 00:12:721
00:05:028 (5028|2,5285|1) Ctrl + G ^
00:19:131 add note for cymbal sound
00:35:541 ^
00:43:746 ^
00:49:900 ^
00:50:926 ^
00:54:003 (54003|2) remove, still like 00:54:259
01:12:464 add note, cymbal
01:25:285 ^
01:26:311 ^
lol it will make your diff hard :v, i think you should remove some note ( still easy )

NM

00:19:131 add note, cymbal sound
00:27:336 ^
00:34:516 add note, another sound here
01:04:259 add note, cymbal sound
01:16:054 (76054|2,76054|1) move to 1 & 4, sound like 01:15:798
01:16:311 (76311|3,76567|2) Ctrl + G
01:19:900 add note, consistency

HD

00:06:054 (6054|0) move to 3, sound like 00:06:311
00:06:823 (6823|0) move to 4, hand balance
00:14:259 (14259|0) move to 3
00:22:593 add note?
00:30:926 ^
01:20:157 (80157|1) move to 4

Kawaii song (~>.<)~
Good Luck -nya~ (づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ

CrabCow wrote:

Right then, I was asked to mod via my queue so let's have a go.

Quite a delay since you applied but things have gotten so busy it's hard to keep up.

Columns mentioned as 0|1|2|3 to follow editor C-P style.

MX

SPOILER

00:55:798 (55798|1) - This feels like it doesn't belong. I see why it's mapped this way but I feel that it should be two LNs with a single note rather than one LN and a note.
Maybe try this arrangement and see how it fits? -> 00:55:541 (55541|0,55541|1,55541|3,55798|0,55798|2,56054|1,56054|3)
It fits a bit better in my opinion.

Don't really have any other comments, seems good.

HD

SPOILER

00:32:464 (32464|2) - Remove? Or are you accentuating the syllable from the lyrics with the drum hit at the same time?
If you are then don't remove it.

00:41:439 (41439|1) - Should be a single hit in my opinion, it's shorter than the two syllables after it.
You can hear the lyrics go da-daaa-daaa in a sense so it should be a single hit.

00:49:900 (49900|0) - should extend to here imo 00:50:285 or maybe even go as far as to end on 00:50:413
She doesn't stop singing until that note. It seems to end on the 2nd blue line of the measure.
Also applies to: 00:50:413 (50413|2) + 00:50:926 (50926|1) + 00:51:439 (51439|2)

NM

SPOILER

00:15:798 (15798|3,16054|2) Ctrl+G these because it feels a little more correct with pitch?
If you do that:
00:16:311 (16311|1) - move over to column 2 (16311|2)
00:16:567 (16567|0) - move over to column 1 (16567|1)
00:16:823 (16823|1) - move over to column 0 (16823|0)
00:17:080 (17080|1) - Move to either column 1 (17080|1) or 3 (17080|1) , you pick.

00:41:439 (41439|1) - same complaint as HD difficulty.
The lyric here feels very noticeably shorter and does not need a LN in my opinion.

Looks good to me otherwise.

EZ

SPOILER

01:03:362 (63362|2) - What is this mapped to? I don't know if this should be here or not.

01:16:952 (76952|1) - Add a note. You do doubles a lot (ta-ta with those sounds) but don't here for some reason.
01:21:054 (81054|2) - ^

I'm not one for anime openings but I like this one for some reason. Take a star!

Tried to get really up and close with some of the patterns, hopefully this helps!