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Iguchi Yuka - Platinum Disco [OsuMania]

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Topic Starter
- Veritica -
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Kruzon
Hello, from Astral Horizon

-Key Column Format: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4
-Seems like your mapping style is based on vocal, therefore my modding style will dependent on vocal

EZ

SPOILER
00:46:291 (46291|3) - does not fit along in current vocal pattern and not stable, delete it

00:53:726 (53726|0,53983|1) - you may want to delete them, and add a long note on 00:53:470 (53470|0) - column 1, which ends on 00:53:983

nice hit-sounds rhythm, most of the pattern is fitting, sounds catchy, good one
NM

SPOILER
00:04:239 (4239|0) - add a long note on column one, which extends till 00:04:496
00:06:291 (6291|0) - make this a long note, same length as above's long note
00:14:496 (14496|0) - this as well

00:24:752 (24752|3) - nice hearing, yes it ends on 00:25:137, but for the sake of balancing, especially in normal, you'll have to extend it till 00:25:265

00:39:880 (39880|1) - make this a long note, i'm sure you know how long the length is c:
HD

SPOILER
well, frankly speaking, this has quite nice flow, perhaps it maybe my limit, but i don't see any obvious flaw on this difficulty. Moving along,

MX
SPOILER
00:53:470 (53470|0) - i think note on column 1 should be a long note instead, which extends till 00:53:983 (However doing so cause conflicts on others notes, I'm leaving conflicting notes re-patterning in your hands)

00:54:496 (54496|3) - delete this, and add a note on 00:55:008 (55008|0) - to 1
00:55:008 (55008|1) - move to 4
- mod ends -

- nicely done vocal map, fit along the catchy rhythm ;)
- nicely key-sounded notes, especially during the climax
- in the ends it turn out to be small mod, sorry bout that, but hey your map is good lol
- good luck with your map :)
Topic Starter
- Veritica -

Kruzon wrote:

Hello, from Astral Horizon

-Key Column Format: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4

EZ

SPOILER
00:46:291 (46291|3) - does not fit along in current vocal pattern and not stable, delete it ( ok )

00:53:726 (53726|0,53983|1) - you may want to delete them, and add a long note on 00:53:470 (53470|0) - column 1, which ends on 00:53:983 ( ok )
NM

SPOILER
00:04:239 (4239|0) - add a long note on column one, which extends till 00:04:496 ( no,thanks )
00:06:291 (6291|0) - make this a long note, same length as above's long note ^
00:14:496 (14496|0) - this as well ^

00:24:752 (24752|3) - nice hearing, yes it ends on 00:25:137, but for the sake of balancing, especially in normal, you'll have to extend it till 00:25:265 ( ok )

00:39:880 (39880|1) - make this a long note, i'm sure you know how long the length is c: ( ok )


MX
SPOILER
00:53:470 (53470|0) - i think note on column 1 should be a long note instead, which extends till 00:53:983 (However doing so cause conflicts on others notes, I'm leaving conflicting notes re-patterning in your hands) ( Fixed )

00:54:496 (54496|3) - delete this, and add a note on 00:55:008 (55008|0) - to 1 ( ok )
00:55:008 (55008|1) - move to 4 ( ok )
- mod ends -
Thanks for mod~ :)
DanSparce
Mod from my Queue
Mod ready!

Follow this: |1|2|3|4|

MX
00:02:721 (2721|0) - Make this hold? Part of melody
00:04:644 (4644|2) - TO |4| and add note at |3| at start of slider at 00:04:772? --- Better Pattern
00:05:157 (5157|1) - TO |4|? Better Pattern
00:06:054 - Add note? Same volume as 00:06:311?
00:06:823 (6823|3) - Delete note? At others you started with 2 notes here its 3
00:07:336 - Add note? At 00:05:285 (5285|1) there is two notes but here there is only one and there is same melody
00:10:926 (10926|0) - Make this hold? Part of melody
00:33:234 (33234|1,33362|0) - Ctrl + H? Better Pattern,
00:35:541 - Add note? Loud noise
00:37:593 (37593|1) - Add note?
00:38:105 (38105|1) - Add note?
00:38:618 (38618|3) - Add note?
00:39:131 (39131|2) - Add note?
00:40:285 (40285|0,40285|3,40349|1,40413|2,40477|3,40541|2,40605|1,40670|0,40734|1,40798|2,40862|3,40862|0) - Basis of pattern?
00:41:311 (41311|2,41311|3,41311|1,41439|0,41567|2,41695|1,41823|3) - Late by 1/4 beat, adjust it one line above using 1/4 snapping & delete one note after at line 00:41:952
00:42:464 (42464|3,42464|0,42528|2,42593|1,42657|0,42721|1,42785|2,42849|3,42913|2,42977|1,43041|3,43041|0) - Basis of pattern?
00:42:785 (42785|2) - Why is a clap here? Should be on the note at 00:42:721 (42721|1) - ?
00:43:490 (43490|3,43490|1,43490|0) - Delete one note? Not that loud
00:43:746 (43746|0,43746|2,43746|3) - "
00:45:798 (45798|1) - Refer to advise at 00:37:593 (37593|1)
00:46:311 (46311|1) - "
00:46:823 (46823|3) - "
00:47:336 (47336|1) - "
00:48:362 (48362|0) - Add 2 notes here? Loud tone
00:49:387 (49387|3) - "
00:59:131 (59131|0) - End at white?
01:01:182 (61182|2,61182|3) - End at white?
01:02:208 (62208|0) - Delete? Like what you did at 00:33:490 (33490|0,33490|1) - ?
01:04:387 - Add note?
01:09:387 (69387|1) - End at red line?
01:12:208 (72208|1,72464|2) - One column to the left like what you did at 01:13:234 (73234|2,73490|3) - Same vocals anyway
01:16:311 (76311|1,76567|2) - "
01:20:413 (80413|1,80670|2) - "

HD
00:03:234 (3234|2,3746|3) - Ctrl + H? (Better Pattern) (Descending notes)
00:11:439 (11439|2,11952|3) - "

NM
00:03:746 (3746|3) - On |2| for better pattern? descending notes?
00:11:952 (11952|3) - "

Easy
00:03:746 (3746|3) - Refer to NM
00:11:952 (11952|3) - "
Sky_Demon
Hello mod by pm request~

key: 1|2|3|4|


General
EZ HP 6 OD7
NM HP 7 OD7
HD HP 8 OD8
MX HP 8.5 OD9
EZ
00:19:003 (19003|2,19131|1) - What is that sound? Perhaps there is a better voice to represent, to find it.
00:33:234 (33234|3) - move to 3
00:33:490 (33490|2) - ^ 4
00:47:593 - add to 3
00:53:746 (53746|0) - remove Simple difficulty, do not need this voice.
NM
00:21:311 (21311|2) - remove For the previous synchronization.
00:22:336 (22336|1) - ^
00:26:311 (26311|2) - remove Too difficult for the novice.
00:47:593 (47593|0) - ^
00:53:746 (53746|1) - ^
00:55:541 (55541|3) - move to 00:56:054 - 1
01:24:772 - http://puu.sh/dHAwH/93cd289878.jpg
HD
00:02:849 (2849|1,3105|1) - remove overmap
00:02:977 (2977|2) - move to 2
00:04:644 (4644|2) - remove overmap
00:06:952 (6952|1) - ^
00:11:054 (11054|1) - ^
00:13:105 (13105|2) - ^
00:15:157 (15157|2) - ^
00:16:054 - add note
00:35:157 (35157|0) - remove overmap
00:49:516 (49516|2) - ^
00:52:593 (52593|0,52849|2) - ^
00:53:618 (53618|1) - ^
01:04:387 (64387|1) - ^
01:25:670 (85670|1,86695|2,87208|1) - ^
01:27:721 - add note
MX
Problem with the same difficulty, please pay more attention. :?
For
HD

Mod end

Good luck :)
Topic Starter
- Veritica -

DanSparce wrote:

Mod from my Queue
Mod ready!

Follow this: |1|2|3|4|

MX
00:02:721 (2721|0) - Make this hold? Part of melody ( ok )
00:04:644 (4644|2) - TO |4| and add note at |3| at start of slider at 00:04:772? --- Better Pattern ^
00:05:157 (5157|1) - TO |4|? Better Pattern ^
00:06:054 - Add note? Same volume as 00:06:311? ^
00:06:823 (6823|3) - Delete note? At others you started with 2 notes here its 3 ( Fix = 00:06:823 (6823|2) - Delete )
00:07:336 - Add note? At 00:05:285 (5285|1) there is two notes but here there is only one and there is same melody ( ok )
00:10:926 (10926|0) - Make this hold? Part of melody ^
00:33:234 (33234|1,33362|0) - Ctrl + H? Better Pattern, Fix = ( Ctrl + J )
00:35:541 - Add note? Loud noise ( ok )
00:37:593 (37593|1) - Add note? ^
00:38:105 (38105|1) - Add note? ^
00:38:618 (38618|3) - Add note? ^
00:39:131 (39131|2) - Add note? ^
00:40:285 (40285|0,40285|3,40349|1,40413|2,40477|3,40541|2,40605|1,40670|0,40734|1,40798|2,40862|3,40862|0) - Basis of pattern? ( - )
00:41:311 (41311|2,41311|3,41311|1,41439|0,41567|2,41695|1,41823|3) - Late by 1/4 beat, adjust it one line above using 1/4 snapping & delete one note after at line 00:41:952 ( Fix = 00:41:952 (41952|1) - Delete )
00:42:464 (42464|3,42464|0,42528|2,42593|1,42657|0,42721|1,42785|2,42849|3,42913|2,42977|1,43041|3,43041|0) - Basis of pattern? ( - )
00:42:785 (42785|2) - Why is a clap here? Should be on the note at 00:42:721 (42721|1) - ?
00:43:490 (43490|3,43490|1,43490|0) - Delete one note? Not that loud ( Fix = 00:43:490 (43490|0) - Delete )
00:43:746 (43746|0,43746|2,43746|3) - " ( Fix = 00:43:746 (43746|3) - Delete )
00:45:798 (45798|1) - Refer to advise at 00:37:593 (37593|1) ( ok )
00:46:311 (46311|1) - " ^
00:46:823 (46823|3) - " ^
00:47:336 (47336|1) - " ^
00:48:362 (48362|0) - Add 2 notes here? Loud tone ( Fix = 00:48:362 (48362|2) - Add )
00:49:387 (49387|3) - " ( Fix = 00:49:387 (49387|1) - Add )
00:59:131 (59131|0) - End at white? ( ok )
01:01:182 (61182|2,61182|3) - End at white? ^
01:02:208 (62208|0) - Delete? Like what you did at 00:33:490 (33490|0,33490|1) - ? ^
01:04:387 - Add note? ( no, thanks )
01:09:387 (69387|1) - End at red line? ( ok )
01:12:208 (72208|1,72464|2) - One column to the left like what you did at 01:13:234 (73234|2,73490|3) - Same vocals anyway ( no, thanks )
01:16:311 (76311|1,76567|2) - " ^
01:20:413 (80413|1,80670|2) - " ^

HD
00:03:234 (3234|2,3746|3) - Ctrl + H? (Better Pattern) (Descending notes) ( Fix = https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2382221 )
00:11:439 (11439|2,11952|3) - " ( Fix = ^ )

NM
00:03:746 (3746|3) - On |2| for better pattern? descending notes? ( ok )
00:11:952 (11952|3) - " ^

Easy
00:03:746 (3746|3) - Refer to NM ( ok )
00:11:952 (11952|3) - " ^
Thanks for mod~ ;)
Topic Starter
- Veritica -

Sky_Demon wrote:

Hello mod by pm request~

key: 1|2|3|4|


General
EZ HP 6 OD7 ( ok )
NM HP 7 OD7 ( - )
HD HP 8 OD8 ( ok )
MX HP 8.5 OD9 ^

EZ
00:19:003 (19003|2,19131|1) - What is that sound? Perhaps there is a better voice to represent, to find it. ( - )
00:33:234 (33234|3) - move to 3 ( ok )
00:33:490 (33490|2) - ^ 4 ^
00:47:593 - add to 3 ^
00:53:746 (53746|0) - remove ( Change to LN ) Simple difficulty, do not need this voice.

NM
00:21:311 (21311|2) - remove For the previous synchronization. ( ok )
00:22:336 (22336|1) - ^ ^
00:26:311 (26311|2) - remove Too difficult for the novice. ^
00:47:593 (47593|0) - ^ ^
00:53:746 (53746|1) - ^ ^
00:55:541 (55541|3) - move to 00:56:054 - 1 ^
01:24:772 - http://puu.sh/dHAwH/93cd289878.jpg ^

HD
00:02:849 (2849|1,3105|1) - remove overmap ( ok )
00:02:977 (2977|2) - move to 2 ^
00:04:644 (4644|2) - remove overmap ^
00:06:952 (6952|1) - ^ ^
00:11:054 (11054|1) - ^ ^
00:13:105 (13105|2) - ^ ^
00:15:157 (15157|2) - ^ ^
00:16:054 - add note ( Fix = 00:16:054 (16054|0) - Add )
00:35:157 (35157|0) - remove overmap ( ok )
00:49:516 (49516|2) - ^ ^
00:52:593 (52593|0,52849|2) - ^ ^
00:53:618 (53618|1) - ^ ^
01:04:387 (64387|1) - ^ ^
01:25:670 (85670|1,86695|2,87208|1) - ^ ^
01:27:721 - add note ( Fix = 01:27:721 (87721|1) - Add )

MX
Problem with the same difficulty, please pay more attention. :?
For
HD ( MX are still not hard, I want to improve its again. Star it's not enough )

Mod end

Good luck :)
Thanks for mod~ ;)
RuberusuScarlet
hi ~

from my queue

|1|2|3|4|

mod
[General]
title : 白金ディスコ
romanised title : Platinum Disco
[HD]
00:19:516 (19516|0) - move to 00:19:644 -
00:20:541 (20541|0) - ^00:20:670 -
00:21:567 (21567|2) - ^00:21:695 -

00:22:593 (22593|0) - delete hitsound

00:22:593 (22593|1) - move to 00:22:721 - (hit sound Finish)

00:23:234 (23234|3) - change LN (end to 00:23:746 - )

00:23:490 (23490|1) - delete

00:27:721 (27721|0) - move to 00:27:849 -
00:28:746 (28746|1) - ^00:28:875 -
00:29:772 (29772|2) - ^00:29:900 -
00:30:798 (30798|1) - ^00:30:926 -

00:31:439 (31439|3) - change LN (end to 00:31:952 - )

00:31:695 (31695|1) - delete
[MX]
00:19:516 (19516|3) - move to 00:19:644 -
00:19:644 - add 1

00:20:541 (20541|1,20541|0) - move to 00:20:670 -
00:21:567 (21567|3,21567|2) - ^00:21:695 -
00:22:593 (22593|0,22593|1) - ^00:22:721 -

00:23:105 (23105|3) - delete
00:26:439 (26439|3) - ^

00:27:849 - add 1 and 4

00:28:746 (28746|1,28746|0) - move to 00:28:875 -
00:29:772 (29772|3,29772|2) - ^00:29:900 -
00:30:798 (30798|2,30798|3) - ^00:30:926 -

00:31:311 (31311|3) - delete

00:33:234 (33234|0) - move to 2
00:33:362 (33362|1) - ^

00:40:157 - ^2 or 3

00:40:285 (40285|0,40285|3,40349|1,40413|2,40477|3,40541|2,40605|1,40670|0,40734|1,40798|2,40862|3,40862|0) -
→ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2384144

00:41:182 - add 1 or 2

00:41:311 (41311|2,41311|1,41311|3,41439|0,41567|2,41695|1,41823|3,41952|0) -
→ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2384158

00:42:464 (42464|3,42464|0,42528|2,42593|1,42657|0,42721|1,42785|2,42849|3,42913|2,42977|1,43041|0,43041|3) -
→ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2384161

00:43:234 - add 1 or 3

01:10:285 (70285|1) - delete

01:25:028 - add
01:26:054 - ^
01:26:823 - ^4
01:27:336 - ^1

01:27:593 (87593|3) - delete

good luck >w< /
Topic Starter
- Veritica -

ruberusu wrote:

hi ~

from my queue

|1|2|3|4|

mod
[General]
title : 白金ディスコ ( ok )
romanised title : Platinum Disco
[HD]
00:19:516 (19516|0) - move to 00:19:644 - ( ok )
00:20:541 (20541|0) - ^00:20:670 - ^
00:21:567 (21567|2) - ^00:21:695 - ^

00:22:593 (22593|0) - delete hitsound ^

00:22:593 (22593|1) - move to 00:22:721 - (hit sound Finish) ^

00:23:234 (23234|3) - change LN (end to 00:23:746 - ) ^

00:23:490 (23490|1) - delete ^

00:27:721 (27721|0) - move to 00:27:849 - ^
00:28:746 (28746|1) - ^00:28:875 - ^
00:29:772 (29772|2) - ^00:29:900 - ^
00:30:798 (30798|1) - ^00:30:926 - ^

00:31:439 (31439|3) - change LN (end to 00:31:952 - ) ^

00:31:695 (31695|1) - delete ^

[MX]
00:19:516 (19516|3) - move to 00:19:644 - ( ok )
00:19:644 - add 1 ^

00:20:541 (20541|1,20541|0) - move to 00:20:670 - ^
00:21:567 (21567|3,21567|2) - ^00:21:695 - ^
00:22:593 (22593|0,22593|1) - ^00:22:721 - ^

00:23:105 (23105|3) - delete ^
00:26:439 (26439|3) - ^ ^

00:27:849 - add 1 and 4 ^

00:28:746 (28746|1,28746|0) - move to 00:28:875 - ^
00:29:772 (29772|3,29772|2) - ^00:29:900 - ^
00:30:798 (30798|2,30798|3) - ^00:30:926 - ^

00:31:311 (31311|3) - delete ^

00:33:234 (33234|0) - move to 2 ( no, thanks )
00:33:362 (33362|1) - ^ ( move to 2 ? my note was on 2 )

00:40:157 - ^2 or 3 ( Add to 2 )

00:40:285 (40285|0,40285|3,40349|1,40413|2,40477|3,40541|2,40605|1,40670|0,40734|1,40798|2,40862|3,40862|0) -
→ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2384144 ( ok )

00:41:182 - add 1 or 2 ^

00:41:311 (41311|2,41311|1,41311|3,41439|0,41567|2,41695|1,41823|3,41952|0) -
→ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2384158 ^

00:42:464 (42464|3,42464|0,42528|2,42593|1,42657|0,42721|1,42785|2,42849|3,42913|2,42977|1,43041|0,43041|3) -
→ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2384161 ^

00:43:234 - add 1 or 3 ( Add to 3 )

01:10:285 (70285|1) - delete ( ok )

01:25:028 - add ^
01:26:054 - ^ ^
01:26:823 - ^4 ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2385225 )
01:27:336 - ^1 ^

01:27:593 (87593|3) - delete ^

good luck >w< /
Thanks for mod~ ;)
RuberusuScarlet

- Veritica - wrote:

00:33:234 (33234|0) - move to 2 ( no, thanks )
00:33:362 (33362|1) - ^ ( move to 2 ? my note was on 2 )

Mistake
00:33:234 (33234|0) - move to 2
00:33:362 (33362|1) - ^

Right
00:33:234 (33234|0) - move to 2
00:33:362 (33362|1) - ^ 3

sorry,my bad
Topic Starter
- Veritica -

ruberusu wrote:

- Veritica - wrote:

00:33:234 (33234|0) - move to 2 ( no, thanks )
00:33:362 (33362|1) - ^ ( move to 2 ? my note was on 2 )

Mistake
00:33:234 (33234|0) - move to 2
00:33:362 (33362|1) - ^

Right
00:33:234 (33234|0) - move to 2 ( Fix = ok )
00:33:362 (33362|1) - ^ 3 ( ok )

sorry,my bad
OK, no problem :D
playin14
Hi here is my mod :)

click
column 0|1|2|3

[NM]
00:07:849 (7849|1) - move to 2
00:08:105 (8105|0) - move to 1
00:08:362 (8362|2) - move to 0
00:08:618 (8618|3) - move to 2

00:16:054 (16054|1) - move to 2
00:16:311 (16311|0) - move to 1
00:16:567 (16567|2) - move to 0
00:16:823 (16823|3) - move to 1 I know this is your mapping style, but if you move this eight notes it would fit better to the music.

00:30:157 (30157|3,30157|0,30285|1,30413|2,30670|1,30798|3) - Ctrl + H

[HD]
00:31:439 (31439|2) - remove Finish sound
00:31:952 (31952|0) - add Finish sound
00:32:464 (32464|2) - remove Finish sound
00:32:977 (32977|2) - add Finish sound

[MX]
00:40:413 (40413|3,40413|0,40477|1,40541|2,40605|3,40670|2,40734|1,40798|0,40862|1,40926|3,40926|2) - Well, I think this little part is a little bit overmapped? Instead you could make it like this: http://puu.sh/dIYNT/28a712b5a4.jpg
Same at 00:42:464

Love this song <3 Good luck! :)
Topic Starter
- Veritica -

playin14 wrote:

Hi here is my mod :)

click
column 0|1|2|3

[NM]
00:07:849 (7849|1) - move to 2 ( ok )
00:08:105 (8105|0) - move to 1 ^
00:08:362 (8362|2) - move to 0 ^
00:08:618 (8618|3) - move to 2 ^

00:16:054 (16054|1) - move to 2 ^
00:16:311 (16311|0) - move to 1 ^
00:16:567 (16567|2) - move to 0 ^
00:16:823 (16823|3) - move to 1 I know this is your mapping style, but if you move this eight notes it would fit better to the music. ^

00:30:157 (30157|3,30157|0,30285|1,30413|2,30670|1,30798|3) - Ctrl + H ( no, thanks )

[HD]
00:31:439 (31439|2) - remove Finish sound ( ok )
00:31:952 (31952|0) - add Finish sound ^
00:32:464 (32464|2) - remove Finish sound ^
00:32:977 (32977|2) - add Finish sound ^

[MX]
00:40:413 (40413|3,40413|0,40477|1,40541|2,40605|3,40670|2,40734|1,40798|0,40862|1,40926|3,40926|2) - Well, I think this little part is a little bit overmapped? Instead you could make it like this: http://puu.sh/dIYNT/28a712b5a4.jpg
Same at 00:42:464 ( MX are still not hard, I want to improve its again. Star it's not enough )

Love this song <3 Good luck! :)

Thanks for star + mod ;)
Gravey-
Hi MOD here as requested in my Queue~ (~*w*)~
[4K MOD]

BG image size must be 1366 x 768
|1|2|3|4|
EZ
00:10:926 Add note to |3| (Drumbeat - Cymbal | Impact)
00:12:721 (12721|1,12977|0,13234|2,13490|1) - Ctrl + H (Better pattern for hand relax)
00:56:054 Add note to |1| (Drumbeat - Cymbal | Impact)
01:03:746 (63746|2,64259|3) - Ctrl + G (Better pattern for hand relax)
01:04:259 Add note to |1| (Drumbeat - Cymbal | Impact)
01:20:670 Add note to |4| ^
NM
00:14:003 (14003|2) - End it here 00:14:644 (End of flute pitch)
00:55:541 (55541|0,56054|0) - I suggest this to be long note instead then remove this 00:55:798 (55798|1) - Because there's no specific instrument it's better to long note instead for the guitar pitch
HD
HP DR = 7
00:21:567 (21567|3,21695|2) - Ctrl + G (Pattern)
01:00:670 Add note to |2|(Drumbeat - Clap like sound | Impact | Pattern)
MX
00:23:875 (23875|0) - Remove no particular instrument
00:40:413 (40413|3,40413|0,40477|1,40541|2,40605|3,40670|2,40734|1,40798|0,40862|1,40926|3,40926|2) - Pls fix this part there's notes which don't have particular instrument and not necessary to be laddered
00:42:464 (42464|3,42464|0,42528|2,42593|1,42657|0,42721|1,42785|2,42849|3,42913|2,42977|0,42977|1) - ^
00:54:003 (54003|3,54259|0) - Remove not necessary (Pattern)
01:13:811 (73811|1,73875|2,73939|3,74003|2,74003|0) - ^
01:16:887 (76887|1,76952|2,77016|3,77080|0,77080|2) - ^
01:17:913 (77913|1,77977|2,78041|3,78105|0,78105|2) - ^
01:20:990 (80990|1,81054|2,81118|3,81182|2,81182|0) - ^
01:22:016 (82016|1,82080|2,82144|3,82208|0,82208|2) - ^
Pls fix the parts which you put notes even though it doesn't have particular instrument/s

Nice map!~
Good luck!~ =w=)b
Topic Starter
- Veritica -

[GraveChaos] wrote:

Hi MOD here as requested in my Queue~ (~*w*)~
[4K MOD]

BG image size must be 1366 x 768 ( ok )
|1|2|3|4|
EZ
00:10:926 Add note to |3| (Drumbeat - Cymbal | Impact) ( ok )
00:12:721 (12721|1,12977|0,13234|2,13490|1) - Ctrl + H (Better pattern for hand relax) ( ^ )
00:56:054 Add note to |1| (Drumbeat - Cymbal | Impact) ( ^ )
01:03:746 (63746|2,64259|3) - Ctrl + G (Better pattern for hand relax) ( ^ )
01:04:259 Add note to |1| (Drumbeat - Cymbal | Impact) ( ^ )
01:20:670 Add note to |4| ^ ( ^ )

NM
00:14:003 (14003|2) - End it here 00:14:644 (End of flute pitch) ( ok )
00:55:541 (55541|0,56054|0) - I suggest this to be long note instead then remove this 00:55:798 (55798|1) - Because there's no specific instrument it's better to long note instead for the guitar pitch ( actually i did a vocal mapping on those point )

HD
HP DR = 7 ( ok )
00:21:567 (21567|3,21695|2) - Ctrl + G (Pattern) ( ^ )
01:00:670 Add note to |2|(Drumbeat - Clap like sound | Impact | Pattern)( ^ )

MX
00:23:875 (23875|0) - Remove no particular instrument ( ok )
00:40:413 (40413|3,40413|0,40477|1,40541|2,40605|3,40670|2,40734|1,40798|0,40862|1,40926|3,40926|2) - Pls fix this part there's notes which don't have particular instrument and not necessary to be laddered ( Fix = 00:40:541 (40541|2) - Delete )
00:42:464 (42464|3,42464|0,42528|2,42593|1,42657|0,42721|1,42785|2,42849|3,42913|2,42977|0,42977|1) - ^ ( Fix = 00:42:593 (42593|1) - ^ )
00:54:003 (54003|3,54259|0) - Remove not necessary (Pattern) ( ok )
01:13:811 (73811|1,73875|2,73939|3,74003|2,74003|0) - ^ ( Fix = 01:14:003 (74003|2) - Add note + Clap )
01:16:887 (76887|1,76952|2,77016|3,77080|0,77080|2) - ^ ( Fix = 01:17:080 (77080|1) - ^ )
01:17:913 (77913|1,77977|2,78041|3,78105|0,78105|2) - ^ ( Fix = 01:18:105 (78105|2) - ^ )
01:20:990 (80990|1,81054|2,81118|3,81182|2,81182|0) - ^ ( Fix = 01:21:182 (81182|1) - ^ )
01:22:016 (82016|1,82080|2,82144|3,82208|0,82208|2) - ^ ( Fix = 01:22:208 (82208|2) - ^ )
Pls fix the parts which you put notes even though it doesn't have particular instrument/s

Nice map!~
Good luck!~ =w=)b
Thanks for mod~ ;)
Starry-
Hi! From Starry's MANIA Modding Queue!~

[General]

Timing:
Audio:
BG:
  1. Everything looks fine about it it just seems a tiny bit upscaled and blurred for me. But this should be no problem.
Metadata:
Preview Point:
AiMod:

All clear!

A bit of notice: the HPOD spread looks a bit unbalanced. I suggest:
EZ: HP7OD7. Doesn't deserve HP6 since it's a really easy chart anyways.
NM: HP7OD7 is fine I suppose.
HD: HP7.5OD7.5 is quite nice. But because there isn't many LNs, maybe you could choose to put it as HP8OD8.
MX: ... I guess this is okay, but again for such a low bpm chart OD9 may cause issues. Either keep what you have, or have HP8.5OD8.5. Optional.

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| 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 | (4K)

[EZ]
SPOILER
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00:02:721 (2721|0) - Either add a note here at like, 3, or something. Because at 00:10:926 (10926|0,10926|2) - you have 2 notes.

00:10:926 (10926|2) - Definitely move to 3. Spreads it out.

00:05:541 (5541|3,8618|3,13746|3,16823|3) - I don't really see the need for these LNs. This is because the sound before them is pretty much the exact same - the noise doesn't hold. But random LNs here. Maybe just change to normal notes.

00:20:028 (20028|1,20157|2) - Shift left, spreads out.

00:35:541 (35541|0) - Add maybe? (1)

No more real major issues here. I'm just afraid of the majority of the song being mapped as 1/4 doubles. They're not as emphasised to really map them, it'd be better imo just to map 1/1 or 1/2 notes instead. But I guess it's fine - it's just my opinion.

[NM]
SPOILER
~

00:02:721 (2721|0) - Add note at 3.

00:21:567 (21567|1) - Move to 0 or 2 for balance.

00:43:490 (43490|3,43746|2) - Hitsounds could maybe emphasise these weird noises heard in the music. (Whistle on both maybe?)

01:01:695 (61695|1,61952|2,62208|3) - Shift left for balance.

01:18:105 (78105|0,78362|0,78618|2,78875|1,79003|0,79131|2,79131|1) - Maybe to hard for a NM like this since newer players will easily get confused. Maybe spread it out a bit. Kinda like this:


Nothing much else to say really, pretty basic but overall decently consistent.

[HD]
SPOILER
00:02:721 (2721|0) - Add at 2? Big noise.

00:06:054 (6054|2) - Feeling better if this was at 3.

00:14:259 (14259|2) - ^

For better hand balance:

00:15:285 (15285|1,15413|2,15541|3) - Shift all this left by 1.
00:16:054 (16054|2) - Move this to 3.

00:22:464 (22464|2,22721|1) - All triples then it randomly stops here? Why?

00:28:875 (28875|1) - Add 2 for consistency.
00:29:900 (29900|2) - Add 1 for consistency.

00:35:926 (35926|0) - These stream patterns... They could be mapped a bit more effectively. Do you hear that sort of high pitched noise every white tick? You could add a note with whistle hitsound in the stream like that. So maybe rearrange.

00:45:285 (45285|1) - ^

01:04:516 (64516|2) - Feels better at 3.

01:26:311 (86311|1) - A lot better at 3.

Running low on time so if you want a little bit of advice on the MX diff try and catch me ingame sometime soon.

Overall a solid mapset. Nothing is overly done and I'm sure it'll tend well for newer players. Goodluck! <3
Topic Starter
- Veritica -

Starry- wrote:

Hi! From Starry's MANIA Modding Queue!~

[General]

Timing:
Audio:
BG:
  1. Everything looks fine about it it just seems a tiny bit upscaled and blurred for me. But this should be no problem.
Metadata:
Preview Point:
AiMod:

All clear!

A bit of notice: the HPOD spread looks a bit unbalanced. I suggest:
EZ: HP7OD7. Doesn't deserve HP6 since it's a really easy chart anyways. ( ok )
NM: HP7OD7 is fine I suppose.
HD: HP7.5OD7.5 is quite nice. But because there isn't many LNs, maybe you could choose to put it as HP8OD8. ( ok )
MX: ... I guess this is okay, but again for such a low bpm chart OD9 may cause issues. Either keep what you have, or have HP8.5OD8.5. Optional. ( ^ )

 ___ ___ ___ ___
| 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 | (4K)

[EZ]
SPOILER
~

00:02:721 (2721|0) - Either add a note here at like, 3, or something. Because at 00:10:926 (10926|0,10926|2) - you have 2 notes. ( ok )

00:10:926 (10926|2) - Definitely move to 3. Spreads it out. ( ^ )

00:05:541 (5541|3,8618|3,13746|3,16823|3) - I don't really see the need for these LNs. This is because the sound before them is pretty much the exact same - the noise doesn't hold. But random LNs here. Maybe just change to normal notes. ( ^ )

00:20:028 (20028|1,20157|2) - Shift left, spreads out. ( no thanks, will still keep it the same )

00:35:541 (35541|0) - Add maybe? (1) ( ^ )

No more real major issues here. I'm just afraid of the majority of the song being mapped as 1/4 doubles. They're not as emphasised to really map them, it'd be better imo just to map 1/1 or 1/2 notes instead. But I guess it's fine - it's just my opinion.

[NM]
SPOILER
~

00:02:721 (2721|0) - Add note at 3. ( ok ) & ( 00:10:926 (10926|2) - Add to 3 )

00:21:567 (21567|1) - Move to 0 or 2 for balance. ( Move to 0 ) & ( 00:22:593 (22593|3) - Move to 3 )

00:43:490 (43490|3,43746|2) - Hitsounds could maybe emphasise these weird noises heard in the music. (Whistle on both maybe?) ( ok )

01:01:695 (61695|1,61952|2,62208|3) - Shift left for balance. ( 01:00:670 (60670|1,60926|2,61182|3) - Shift left )

01:18:105 (78105|0,78362|0,78618|2,78875|1,79003|0,79131|2,79131|1) - Maybe to hard for a NM like this since newer players will easily get confused. Maybe spread it out a bit. Kinda like this:
( ok )

Nothing much else to say really, pretty basic but overall decently consistent.

[HD]
SPOILER
00:02:721 (2721|0) - Add at 2? Big noise. ( no thanks, will still keep it the same )

00:06:054 (6054|2) - Feeling better if this was at 3.( ok )

00:14:259 (14259|2) - ^ ( ^ )

For better hand balance:

00:15:285 (15285|1,15413|2,15541|3) - Shift all this left by 1. ( ok )
00:16:054 (16054|2) - Move this to 3. ( ^ )

00:22:464 (22464|2,22721|1) - All triples then it randomly stops here? Why? (
Because I think it is the final part of the pattern and not suitable if placed triples note )


00:28:875 (28875|1) - Add 2 for consistency. ( ok )
00:29:900 (29900|2) - Add 1 for consistency. ( ^ )

00:35:926 (35926|0) - These stream patterns... They could be mapped a bit more effectively. Do you hear that sort of high pitched noise every white tick? You could add a note with whistle hitsound in the stream like that. So maybe rearrange. ( 00:35:798 (35798|1,35926|2,36054|3,36182|1,36311|0) - Fix )

00:45:285 (45285|1) - ^( Fix )

01:04:516 (64516|2) - Feels better at 3. ( ok )

01:26:311 (86311|1) - A lot better at 3. ( ^ )

Running low on time so if you want a little bit of advice on the MX diff try and catch me ingame sometime soon.

Overall a solid mapset. Nothing is overly done and I'm sure it'll tend well for newer players. Goodluck! <3

Thanks for mod~ ;)
Bray-

Mod By Request



From Queue


|1|2|3|4|

EZ
00:36:952 - Add note at 3
00:37:464 (37464|2) - delete
00:37:336 - Add note at 3
00:38:362 - ^

NM
00:09:387 - add note
00:09:900 - add note
00:26:439 (26439|1,26567|3,26695|0,26823|1) - i think you must change the hit sound >.>, its kinda weird to hear
LN start 00:44:772 (44772|3) - LN end 00:45:285 -
01:05:285 (65285|3) - change it to note
00:59:131 (59131|0) - LN end 00:59:644 -
01:02:208 (62208|3) - LN end 01:03:234 -

HD
00:08:875 (8875|2,9131|3,9259|1,9387|0,9644|3,9900|1,10157|3,10413|1,10413|0) - hmm i suggest https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2393582
i think you should re-map from 00:35:544 - to 00:40:926 -
from 00:43:746 - to 00:46:567 - same

^^GOOD LUCK^^
Topic Starter
- Veritica -

Brian_Ex wrote:

Mod By Request



From Queue


|1|2|3|4|

EZ
00:36:952 - Add note at 3
00:37:464 (37464|2) - delete
00:37:336 - Add note at 3
00:38:362 - ^
( EZ is easy, I don't want to add note for improve its again. Star it's enough )

NM
00:09:387 - add note ( will still keep it the same, 00:10:157 (10157|0,10413|2,10670|3) - I did a vocal mapping on those point )
00:09:900 - add note ( ^ )
00:26:439 (26439|1,26567|3,26695|0,26823|1) - i think you must change the hit sound ( fix, hitsound - Delete ) >.>, its kinda weird to hear
LN start 00:44:772 (44772|3) - LN end 00:45:285 - ( ok )
01:05:285 (65285|3) - change it to note ( vocal mapping on those point )
00:59:131 (59131|0) - LN end 00:59:644 - ( ok )
01:02:208 (62208|3) - LN end 01:03:234 - ( ^ )

HD
00:08:875 (8875|2,9131|3,9259|1,9387|0,9644|3,9900|1,10157|3,10413|1,10413|0) - hmm i suggest https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2393582 ( will still keep it the same, because 00:09:772 - & 00:10:285 - no sound here )
i think you should re-map from 00:35:544 - to 00:40:926 - ( ok, fix )
from 00:43:746 - to 00:46:567 - same( No thanks, will still keep it the same )

^^GOOD LUCK^^

Thanks for mod~ :)
Blizs
Hi~~~
from Modding queue :3
Key : 1|2|3|4


[EZ]
  1. 00:30:798 (30798|1,30926|0,31182|0) - I think that's still confusing to new player. move 00:30:798 (30798|1) - to 4 and 00:30:926 (30926|0) - to 3
  2. 00:53:746 (53746|0) - I Think long not isn't fit here. Change it to single note.
  3. 00:55:028 (55028|0,55028|3) - I'm disagree with this 2 notes using finish in the same time. I suggest to change one of it to whistle.
  4. 01:02:208 (62208|3) - I don't know why this note ended at blue tick. Did you follow the vocal ? Maybe that acceptable at HD but not EZ. I prefer you make it end with a single note at red tick
  5. 01:02:208 (62208|2,62593|2,62977|1,63362|0,63490|1,63746|3,64259|2) - ow... a bunch of finish :v you must change it
  6. 01:10:413 (70413|1) - this long not is better if ended at 01:11:439 IMO
  7. 01:10:798 (70798|0,71182|0,71439|2,71695|3,71952|2) - again ==" I Think :
    01:10:798 (70798|0) - move to 4 at 01:10:926
    01:11:695 (71695|3) - Remove
    01:11:952 (71952|2) - Change finish to clap
[NM]
  1. 00:26:439 (26439|1) - It's useless. Remove it.
  2. 00:35:285 add a single note here
  3. 00:55:028 (55028|1,55028|2) - Same as EZ
  4. 01:26:311 (86311|1) - you forget Finish here
[HD]
  1. 00:04:644 (4644|2) - I think it's better put it at 00:05:157
  2. 00:20:028 (20028|1) - remove it
  3. 00:21:054 (21054|2) - ^^
  4. 00:22:080 (22080|1) - ^^
  5. 00:36:182 (36182|1) - ^^
  6. 00:37:208 (37208|0) - ^^
  7. 00:37:977 (37977|3) - ^^
[MX]
  1. 00:40:413 (40413|3,40413|0,40477|1,40605|3,40670|2,40734|1,40798|0,40862|1,40926|3,40926|2) - Oh nooo.... Just Use a normal combo here!! don't use 1/8 remember that's not fit in the music
  2. 00:42:464 (42464|3,42464|0,42528|2,42657|0,42721|1,42785|2,42849|3,42913|2,42977|0,42977|1) - ^^
  3. 01:12:721 (72721|0,73746|1,76823|0,77849|1,80926|0,81952|1) - must be move back to white tick
  4. 01:12:721 (72721|0,73746|1,76823|0,77849|1,80926|0,81952|1) - oh no again.... Use a normal combo here. don't use 1/8 remember that's not fit in the music
OK That's all :3
We are "tica" :v
Topic Starter
- Veritica -

Fantastica wrote:

Hi~~~
from Modding queue :3
Key : 1|2|3|4


[EZ]
  1. 00:30:798 (30798|1,30926|0,31182|0) - I think that's still confusing to new player. move 00:30:798 (30798|1) - to 4 and 00:30:926 (30926|0) - to 3 ( ok )
  2. 00:53:746 (53746|0) - I Think long not isn't fit here. Change it to single note. ( will still keep it the same,
    There is the sound of the instrument at those point )
  3. 00:55:028 (55028|0,55028|3) - I'm disagree with this 2 notes using finish in the same time. I suggest to change one of it to whistle.( Fix = 00:55:028 (55028|0) - remove HS )
  4. 01:02:208 (62208|3) - I don't know why this note ended at blue tick. Did you follow the vocal ? Maybe that acceptable at HD but not EZ. I prefer you make it end with a single note at red tick ( ok )
  5. 01:02:208 (62208|2,62593|2,62977|1,63362|0,63490|1,63746|3,64259|2) - ow... a bunch of finish :v you must change it ( ^ )
  6. 01:10:413 (70413|1) - this long not is better if ended at 01:11:439 IMO ( ^ )
  7. 01:10:798 (70798|0,71182|0,71439|2,71695|3,71952|2) - again ==" I Think : ( ^ )
    01:10:798 (70798|0) - move to 4 at 01:10:926 ( No thanks, will still keep it the same, add some HS )
    01:11:695 (71695|3) - Remove ( ^ )
    01:11:952 (71952|2) - Change finish to clap ( ok )
[NM]
  1. 00:26:439 (26439|1) - It's useless. Remove it. ( ok, fixed ghost note )
  2. 00:35:285 add a single note here ( ok, 00:35:285 (35285|2) - Add note )
  3. 00:55:028 (55028|1,55028|2) - Same as EZ ( will still keep it the same, I think it was fit )
  4. 01:26:311 (86311|1) - you forget Finish here ( ok )
[HD]
  1. 00:04:644 (4644|2) - I think it's better put it at 00:05:157 ( will still keep it the same, because 00:05:157 - no sound here )
  2. 00:20:028 (20028|1) - remove it ( ok, nice :idea: very helpful )
  3. 00:21:054 (21054|2) - ^^ ( ^ )
  4. 00:22:080 (22080|1) - ^^ ( ^ )
  5. 00:36:182 (36182|1) - ^^ ( ^ )
  6. 00:37:208 (37208|0) - ^^ ( ^ )
  7. 00:37:977 (37977|3) - ^^ ( ^ )
[MX]
  1. 00:40:413 (40413|3,40413|0,40477|1,40605|3,40670|2,40734|1,40798|0,40862|1,40926|3,40926|2) - Oh nooo.... Just Use a normal combo here!! don't use 1/8 remember that's not fit in the music ( MX are still not hard,if I change to normal combo here, Star it's not enough. I want to improve its again )
  2. 00:42:464 (42464|3,42464|0,42528|2,42657|0,42721|1,42785|2,42849|3,42913|2,42977|0,42977|1) - ^^ ( ^ )
  3. 01:12:721 (72721|0,73746|1,76823|0,77849|1,80926|0,81952|1) - must be move back to white tick ( will still keep it the same )
  4. 01:12:721 (72721|0,73746|1,76823|0,77849|1,80926|0,81952|1) - oh no again.... Use a normal combo here. don't use 1/8 remember that's not fit in the music ( same as first,,,,hm, your Ctrl + c is wrong same as ^ )
OK That's all :3
We are "tica" :v ( And we are Family :lol: )

Thanks for mod~ ;)
Blizs
OK....
I love the song :3 Shoooot XD
Topic Starter
- Veritica -

Fantastica wrote:

OK....
I love the song :3 Shoooot XD
Me too and love this anime, just waiting for tsukimonogatari :) Thanks for star ;)
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