TWO-FORMULA - Taiyou to Tsuki no CROSS (TV Size) · forum

-Yuzuriha

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

-Yuzuriha 2014-12-22T05:05:10+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年4月2日 at 16:16:07

Artist: TWO-FORMULA
Title: Taiyou to Tsuki no CROSS (TV Size)
Source: 俺の脳内選択肢が、学園ラブコメを全力で邪魔している
Tags: ore no nounai sentakushi ga gakuen lovecome o zenryoku de jama shiteiru noucome my mental choices are completely Gaia Aerous pkk ending DreaM117er
BPM: 202
Filesize: 11422kb
Play Time: 01:17
Difficulties Available:

117's Normal (2.21 stars, 151 notes)
Aerous' Easy (1.49 stars, 79 notes)
Gaia's Hard (3.66 stars, 258 notes)
Hard (3.46 stars, 242 notes)
Insane (5.07 stars, 364 notes)
pk's Insane (4.11 stars, 279 notes)

Download: TWO-FORMULA - Taiyou to Tsuki no CROSS (TV Size)
Download: TWO-FORMULA - Taiyou to Tsuki no CROSS (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Gest Easy by Aerous

Gest Normal by DreaM117er

Hard by me

Gest Hard by 　Gaia

Gest insane by pkk

Insane by me

Gest thanks!!
All done

BAT/mod req ~

Last edited by -Yuzuriha 2017-04-02T07:17:30+00:00, edited 236 times in total.

Aerous

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Joined September 2013

Aerous 2014-12-25T18:20:31+00:00

First

edit : I'll finish Easy diff. around Dec.30

Last edited by Aerous 2014-12-27T02:45:48+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

DreaM117er

1,594 posts

Joined September 2012

DreaM117er 2014-12-26T09:23:04+00:00

Normal Done

SPOILER

osu file format v13

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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 2
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Title:Taiyou to Tsuki no CROSS (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:太陽と月のCROSS (TV Size)
Artist:TWO-FORMULA
ArtistUnicode:TWO-FORMULA
Creator:-Yuzuriha-inori-
Version:117's Normal
Source:俺の脳内選択肢が、学園ラブコメを全力で邪魔している
Tags:ore no nounai sentakushi ga gakuen lovecome o zenryoku de jama shiteiru noucome my mental choices are completely gamu
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-Yuzuriha

574 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

-Yuzuriha 2014-12-26T11:19:55+00:00

thanks~♥

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Aerous 2014-12-30T22:48:09+00:00

Finished my Easy Diff.

http://puu.sh/dRQh5/e8749dfcb9.osu

my bad i forgot combo colors , please add that for me

-Yuzuriha

574 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

-Yuzuriha 2014-12-31T14:41:53+00:00

Star thank you~

byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-01-04T20:39:04+00:00

mod as requested

[Insane]
- the SV for the insane is abnormally slow i feel.. 1.6 > 1.65 maybe
- 00:00:165 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this entire beginning part is really cluttered.. consider using grid space effectively..
not a very pleasant playing experience here
- 00:05:363 (2) - get rid of circle
- 00:05:511 (3) - start slider @ 00:05:363 (2)
red tick is where the guitar starts playing and the white ticks have no real emphasized sound.. so making that part clickable is very very unpleasant
00:05:660 - add another slider here
00:06:105 - make this white tick clickable

SPOILER

sorry that the sliders are faded out but take a look at the highlighted sliders.
the picture above follows this slider 00:04:917 (1) -
additional images

SPOILER

If you're wondering how i did it, I created a slider by placing the first slider anchor point at x:102 y:155, second slider anchor point on x:116 y:118 and third slider anchor point at x:143 y:89. I then copied the slider and CTRL+H

00:18:135 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - make a better pattern please
00:27:194 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part is very difficult to read. i almost thought this note 00:27:788 (5) - was still 1/1
solution: 00:26:155 (1) - remove nc + make better pattern
00:27:491 (3) - add nc here (because start of drums)
00:37:442 (3,4,5) - 4 is overmapped. i dont hear the triplet pattern (just use 2 1/2's)
00:41:674 (5,1,2,3) - ?? ^
00:46:427 (6) - ??
00:53:259 (3) - nc
00:51:402 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - kinda bad looking

00:51:402 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - overrrrrrrmappppepdepepdepp
01:06:922 (2,3,4) - ^^^^
01:14:496 (4,5,6) - overmapped

ok i think u are overusing 1/4 sliders and notes in this map.. i don't know the rankability of this issue but keep in mind that these parts were not fun to play at all. overall aesthetics are lacking, a lot of the notes are cluttered and hard to read. a few patterns are nice, but please touch them up a little bit.

[Gaia's Hard]

00:04:323 (7,8) - flow this?
00:07:887 (2) - should increase DS tbh
00:07:293 (1) - delete NC
00:07:887 (2) - NC
00:25:709 (6,7,8) - watch out for aesthetics
00:28:085 (3,4,5,1) - use ds 1.4x? i want this section to be a bit farther spaced than the previous section of the map because of the 1/4s in the music
00:33:135 (7,1) - stacking this on the slider feels unnatural for me
00:44:719 (8) - nc
01:04:026 (7) - curve this slider a little maybe? minor aesthetic improvement. because you seem to not want to align the slider perfectly with the previous slider so.

img

pretty good hard. just some minor flow issues.

[Hard]

00:03:135 (6) - move to red tick here 00:03:283 - & add note on white tick here 00:03:135 -
00:05:957 (1) - move to white tick here 00:06:105 - and add note on red tick 00:05:957 - I suggest stacking two notes on that return slider

your hard flows really well

try to touch up on aesthetics some parts look really raw

byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-01-04T21:15:43+00:00

also u still have GD slots open? I wanna try and see if I can meet your expectations ^^

Momovely

Momovely 2015-01-05T05:04:54+00:00

[General]

オーディオリードイン　入れませんか？　

[callin's Easy]

00:00:165 (1) - reverse add whistle sc1

00:01:947 (2) - ^

00:02:541 (4) - slider head add finish and slider end addwhistle sc1

00:03:729 (5) - slider end add whistle

00:04:917 (1) - ^

00:05:957 (2) - slider head add whistle

00:06:699 (3) - ^

00:09:669 (1) - reverse add whistle

00:11:155 (2) - slider end add whistle

I thought that there was considerably much hitsound omission

I confirm the sound charge account of the latter half in reference to mod mentioned above and please look

[117's Normal]

good diff!

but　it was the same as normal and thought that there were many parts which whistle came out of

[gaia's Hard]

00:44:719 (8) - 　There is the sound of the piano, and do you want add whistle?

00:53:630 (5) - slider head add whistle

[Hard]

00:00:165 (1) - slider end add clap

00:00:610 (2) - slider end add whistle

00:01:204 (4) - slider head and end add whistle

00:01:650 (1) - slider add clap

00:01:947 (2) - slider end add whistle

00:02:244 (3) - slider head add clap

00:02:541 (4) - slider end add clap

00:03:135 (6) - slider head and end add whistle

00:03:580 (1) - ^

00:04:026 (2) - slider head add clap and end add whistle

00:04:471 (3) - add whislte

00:04:620 (4) - slider head add clap

00:04:917 (1) - slider end add clap

00:05:511 (3) - slider head and end add whistle

00:05:808 (4) - add clap

00:05:957 (1) - slider head and reverse add whistle

00:06:699 (2) - slider head and end add whistle

00:06:996 (3) - slider head add clap

00:07:590 (2) - ^

00:07:887 (3) - slider head add whistle

00:07:887 (3) - slider end add clap

00:08:481 (1) - slider head add whistle and finish

00:08:778 (2) - add clap

00:09:075 (4,5) - このreverse 全部add clapじゃない？

00:09:966 (2) - slider head add clap

00:10:264 (3) - slider head and end add whislte

00:10:561 (4) - slider head add clap and end add whistle

00:10:858 (1) - slider reverse add whistle and end add clap

00:11:452 (3) - slider head and end add whistle

00:11:749 (4) - slider head add clap

00:12:343 (2) - ^

00:12:640 (3) - slier head and end add whistle

00:12:937 (4) - add clap

00:13:085 (1) - slider end add whistle

00:13:531 (2) - slider head add clap

00:13:828 (3) - add whistle

00:13:976 (4) - slider head add whistle and reverse add clap

00:14:719 (2) - slider head add clap

00:15:016 (3) - slider head and end add whistle

00:15:313 (4) - slider head add clap and end add whistle

00:15:759 (2) - add whistle

00:15:907 (3) - add clap

00:16:056 (4) - slider head add whistle

00:16:501 (5) - slider head add clap and end add whistle

00:16:947 (2) - add whislte

00:17:095 (3) - slider head add clap and end add whislte

00:17:541 (5) - add whistle

ドラムの音がハッキリしてる曲なので音付け　難しくないと思うので　もうちょっとがんばって　whistleとclapをつけてみてください

一度ヒットサウンドをちゃんと付けた方がいいかなって思いました

後半も前半と同じ指摘なので省かせてもらいます。

[INSANE]

00:01:650 (2) - slier end remove whistle

00:02:392 (5,6) - remove clap add whistle

00:03:135 (4,5) - ^　　

00:04:026 (2) - slider end remove clap

00:04:471 (4) - remove clap

00:06:699 (3) - ^

00:07:887 (3) - slider head remove clap

00:10:858 (1) - ^

00:11:303 (3) - slider head remove clap

00:13:234 (1) - ^

whislteのとこにclapがついてたりとバラバラなので　見直した方がいいかなと思います

音付けはhard diff のmodを参考にして付けてみてください

-Yuzuriha

574 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

-Yuzuriha 2015-01-05T07:02:51+00:00

byfar wrote:
mod as requested

[Insane]
- the SV for the insane is abnormally slow i feel.. 1.6 > 1.65 maybe
- 00:00:165 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this entire beginning part is really cluttered.. consider using grid space effectively..
not a very pleasant playing experience here
- 00:05:363 (2) - get rid of circle
- 00:05:511 (3) - start slider @ 00:05:363 (2)
red tick is where the guitar starts playing and the white ticks have no real emphasized sound.. so making that part clickable is very very unpleasant
00:05:660 - add another slider here
00:06:105 - make this white tick clickable
SPOILER
sorry that the sliders are faded out but take a look at the highlighted sliders.
the picture above follows this slider 00:04:917 (1) -
additional images
SPOILER
If you're wondering how i did it, I created a slider by placing the first slider anchor point at x:102 y:155, second slider anchor point on x:116 y:118 and third slider anchor point at x:143 y:89. I then copied the slider and CTRL+H

00:18:135 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - make a better pattern please OK~
00:27:194 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part is very difficult to read. i almost thought this note 00:27:788 (5) - was still 1/1
solution: 00:26:155 (1) - remove nc + make better pattern
00:27:491 (3) - add nc here (because start of drums) OK~
00:37:442 (3,4,5) - 4 is overmapped. i dont hear the triplet pattern (just use 2 1/2's)
00:41:674 (5,1,2,3) - ?? ^ OK~
00:46:427 (6) - ??
00:53:259 (3) - nc
00:51:402 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - kinda bad looking
00:51:402 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - overrrrrrrmappppepdepepdepp
01:06:922 (2,3,4) - ^^^^
01:14:496 (4,5,6) - overmapped

ok i think u are overusing 1/4 sliders and notes in this map.. i don't know the rankability of this issue but keep in mind that these parts were not fun to play at all. overall aesthetics are lacking, a lot of the notes are cluttered and hard to read. a few patterns are nice, but please touch them up a little bit.

[Hard]

00:03:135 (6) - move to red tick here 00:03:283 - & add note on white tick here 00:03:135 -
00:05:957 (1) - move to white tick here 00:06:105 - and add note on red tick 00:05:957 - I suggest stacking two notes on that return slider

OK~ chenge

your hard flows really well

try to touch up on aesthetics some parts look really raw

mod thanks~

-Yuzuriha

574 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

-Yuzuriha 2015-01-05T07:16:55+00:00

Momovely wrote:
[General]

オーディオリードイン　入れませんか？　

1500入ってますね
少ないという指摘がさらにでれば2000にします

[Hard]

00:00:165 (1) - slider end add clap

00:00:610 (2) - slider end add whistle

00:01:204 (4) - slider head and end add whistle

00:01:650 (1) - slider add clap

00:01:947 (2) - slider end add whistle

00:02:244 (3) - slider head add clap

00:02:541 (4) - slider end add clap

00:03:135 (6) - slider head and end add whistle

00:03:580 (1) - ^

00:04:026 (2) - slider head add clap and end add whistle

00:04:471 (3) - add whislte

00:04:620 (4) - slider head add clap

00:04:917 (1) - slider end add clap

00:05:511 (3) - slider head and end add whistle

00:05:808 (4) - add clap

00:05:957 (1) - slider head and reverse add whistle

00:06:699 (2) - slider head and end add whistle

00:06:996 (3) - slider head add clap

00:07:590 (2) - ^

00:07:887 (3) - slider head add whistle

00:07:887 (3) - slider end add clap

00:08:481 (1) - slider head add whistle and finish

00:08:778 (2) - add clap

00:09:075 (4,5) - このreverse 全部add clapじゃない？

00:09:966 (2) - slider head add clap

00:10:264 (3) - slider head and end add whislte

00:10:561 (4) - slider head add clap and end add whistle

00:10:858 (1) - slider reverse add whistle and end add clap

00:11:452 (3) - slider head and end add whistle

00:11:749 (4) - slider head add clap

00:12:343 (2) - ^

00:12:640 (3) - slier head and end add whistle

00:12:937 (4) - add clap

00:13:085 (1) - slider end add whistle

00:13:531 (2) - slider head add clap

00:13:828 (3) - add whistle

00:13:976 (4) - slider head add whistle and reverse add clap

00:14:719 (2) - slider head add clap

00:15:016 (3) - slider head and end add whistle

00:15:313 (4) - slider head add clap and end add whistle

00:15:759 (2) - add whistle

00:15:907 (3) - add clap

00:16:056 (4) - slider head add whistle

00:16:501 (5) - slider head add clap and end add whistle

00:16:947 (2) - add whislte

00:17:095 (3) - slider head add clap and end add whislte

00:17:541 (5) - add whistle

ドラムの音がハッキリしてる曲なので音付け　難しくないと思うので　もうちょっとがんばって　whistleとclapをつけてみてください

一度ヒットサウンドをちゃんと付けた方がいいかなって思いました

後半も前半と同じ指摘なので省かせてもらいます。

すみません　音付けをやっていなかったです。
参考にして音付けをします

[INSANE]

00:01:650 (2) - slier end remove whistle OK

00:02:392 (5,6) - remove clap add whistle OK

00:03:135 (4,5) - ^　　

00:04:026 (2) - slider end remove clap OK

00:04:471 (4) - remove clapOK

00:06:699 (3) - ^

00:07:887 (3) - slider head remove clapOK

00:10:858 (1) - ^

00:11:303 (3) - slider head remove clap OK

00:13:234 (1) - ^ OK

whislteのとこにclapがついてたりとバラバラなので　見直した方がいいかなと思います

音付けはhard diff のmodを参考にして付けてみてください

modありがとうございましたー

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Zweib 2015-01-05T15:00:35+00:00

hi~最近忙しかったので、遅れてすみません; ;

[Insane]
00:04:917 (1) - slider end stack?
00:09:075 (3) - move to 376,52?
00:18:135 (2,3,4,5,6) - use soft sample for these circles?
00:13:679 (3) - 252,160
00:47:541 (1,2) - swap NC
00:57:491 (2) - add finish?
00:57:640 (3) - remove finish
01:07:293 (1,2,3,4,5) - this stream is overmap because there are no audible note here. But it's okay if you use triples to overmap. for example, remove 01:07:516 (4)

[Gaia's Hard]
This diff cool, but it might be weird that there is 2 hards of same difficulty in one set, while the gap between Insane and Hard is quite large. I'd suggest to lower the star of Insane or switch one hard into a light Insane.

00:34:323 (4) - move up by 1 grid? The arrow was placed too close to the bottom
00:43:976 (6,7) - make a blanket?
00:44:719 (8) - use 1/8?
01:07:590 (4,5) - this jump uhhh... maybe curve 01:07:739 (5) more and decrease the distance, because no NC here.
01:13:234 (6,1) - swap NC?

[Hard]
00:08:927 (3) - remove this?
00:44:719 (8) - use 1/8?

[117's Normal]
I would suggest AR5.5 and CS3.5, to make the approach circle easier to catch.
The patterns are cool and well arranged. But the rhythm may be too complicated for newbies lol. Try to use more 1/1 beatsnap.

[Callin's Easy]
It's fun tho, but really needs much work with this diff ;w;
00:00:165 (1) - don't use slider art like this in the easiest diff. Stretch it.
00:07:293 (1,1) - the slider is too close to the spinner, which is not permit in Easy. You shouldn't put any object until 00:10:264
00:19:768 (1) - ^
00:38:184 (1) - ^
00:47:689 (1) - this spinner is too short, use a slider to replace it
01:01:947 (1,2,1) - make better blanket
01:09:075 (4) - add NC for consistency

Last edited by Zweib 2015-01-06T01:19:14+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

-Yuzuriha

574 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

-Yuzuriha 2015-01-05T15:29:34+00:00

Zweib wrote:
hi~最近忙しかったので、遅れてすみません; ;

[Insane]
00:04:917 (1) - slider end stack?　　OK
00:09:075 (3) - move to 376,52? OK
00:18:135 (2,3,4,5,6) - use soft sample for these circles? OK
00:13:679 (3) - 252,160 OK
00:47:541 (1,2) - swap NC OK
00:57:491 (2) - add finish? う～ん
00:57:640 (3) - remove finish　　う～ん
01:07:293 (1,2,3,4,5) - this stream is overmap because there are no audible note here. But it's okay if you use triples to overmap. for example, remove 01:07:516 (4) 　　少し変えてみました

[Hard]
00:08:927 (3) - remove this? スライダーを２つ連続に変更しました
00:44:719 (8) - use 1/8?　　OKです
　

忙しい中modに来てくれてありがとうございますー

呼ばれたらmod行きますね～

Suimya

6,374 posts

Joined February 2011

Suimya 2015-01-05T16:10:31+00:00

Hey :3 just random mod here, because i really love this song <3

General:

where's the video, you can totally ask xChippy to use his video, since he already mapped the same song o3o/

Callin's Easy:

00:00:165 (1) - how about adding a whistle to slider's repeat, it'll follow the song perfectly imo :3
00:02:541 (4,5) - how about adding finish to (4)'s slider's head and whistle to (5)'s head, it'll follow the finish sounds in the song o.o
00:05:957 (2) - I think whistle kinda missing at slider's head, it'll follow the guitar sound in the music, so how about adding it :3
00:09:669 (1) - how about adding a whistle to slider's tail, it'll follow the music perfectly imo
00:12:046 (4,1) - ^ but at slider's repeat, will fit awesome :3
00:15:610 (4) - ^
00:31:056 (4) - this slider feels kinda empty without any hitsounds, how about adding finish to slider's head, it'll fit great
00:33:432 (2) - ^
00:46:501 (3) - ^
01:01:947 (1,2) - ^ and be sure to fix the blanket on 01:01:947 (1) - , atm it's looking kinda bad ></
01:05:511 (2) - finish on repeat, the beat was the same as this one 01:04:323 (1) - , i highly suggest you to do the same here

This diff kinda lacking of hitsounds, so i really suggest you to go over it again, and check it and it's lacking of whistles, and finishes

117's Normal:

00:02:541 (1) - finish on slider's head would fits awesome, and it'll follow the finish sound in the music imo :3
00:06:996 (1,2) - switch the nc, from the (1) to the (2), the music kinda changed at the (2) not at the (1). If you did that don't forget to add finish at 00:07:293 (1) - slider's head, it'll follow the finish sound in the music
00:15:610 (4) - how about making a bit of curve for this slider, to give it some better flow. Like this owo
00:17:392 (3) - I really don't think this middle slider's point is really needed, how about removing it, it'll make a totally better shape o3o/
00:23:927 (3) - I think if you removed the middle point at this slider it'll follow the your style on this diff much better, and it'll play much better as well.
00:43:382 (2) - how about giving this slider a bit curve, to give it some better flow to it, and it'll be more fun to play imo
[box=][/box]
00:44:719 (5) - how about adding a whistle to slider's start, to follow the piano sound in the music :3
00:45:907 (2) - finish at slider's tail would fit awesome, since i can clearly hear a finish on the tail
00:54:818 (4) - how about giving this slider a better flow by making some curve to it, it'll be much better like this o.o
00:58:679 (3) - I think you missed a clap here, i highly suggest you to add it :3
00:58:976 (4) - how about adding a finish or a whistle to slider's start, to follow the sound in the music o.o/
01:01:947 (5) - ^ but at slider's head this time
01:02:838 - here should be a clap, and you kinda missed it, by adding this 2/1 slider, how about doing something like this, to follow the music better o.o
01:14:570 (6) - how about removing the middle slider's point, i think it'll follow your patterns in this diff better o.o

Hard:

00:01:056 (3) - how about fixing the stick between this note and this slider 00:01:204 (4) - , it's looking kinda bad right now ><
00:01:947 (2) - I think the clap fits here, so how about removing the clap on slider's start, it don't really fit with music imo ;w;
00:03:135 (6) - ^ but on slider's tail, the clap should be here imo 00:03:432 - , so how about giving this slider 1 repeat to cover the clap here :3
00:07:887 (3) - how about adding a SC:2 whistle on slider's start, because i really can hear whistle there, so i think it's kinda bad to skip that o.o
00:08:481 (1) - ^
00:30:462 (3) - how about moving this slider a bit grids up, to avoid touch this slider's head 00:29:719 (1) - , because it's looking kinda bad right now. That's why, if you did that, don't forget to remove the clap on slider's head. It don't really fit with music imo ></
00:35:214 (6) - remove finish on slider's head, i don't see a reason to add, because it don't really follows anything in music
00:35:660 (1) - making this a linear slider kinda bad here, since you made a linear sliders here 00:34:323 (3,4,5,6) - , so how about giving this slider a bit more curve to it, to fix that :3
00:36:402 (4,1) - how about removing the clap on (4)'s slider's tail and (1) and then replacing them with finishes instead, it'll fit much better imo. Since i can hear a finish sound here not clap tbh ></
00:37:887 (5) - how about giving this slider a ctrl+g, since you kinda did this on all your rhythm, on this diff, so i suggest you to do the same here
00:38:630 (2) - I think slider's start kinda missing a finish there. So how about adding it :3
00:39:224 (4) - ^
00:42:194 (2) - I highly suggest you to move this slider few grids up, to avoid it from touching this slider 00:41:749 (1) - , it's looking kinda bad right now ><
00:44:719 (8) - how about adding a SC:2 whistle to slider's start and 00:44:867 - here and to the slider's end too, it'll fit with the piano sound in the music :3
00:45:907 (3,4) - I don't think these two kinda looking bad right, so how about doing it like this instead. It'll fit much better with your style here on this diff o.o
01:07:739 (1) - This slider kinda missing a finish on slider's start, so how about adding it there o.o

Gaia's baka Hard:

Gaia pls, so hentai =w=/

00:07:887 (2) - I think this note will fit better with SC:2 whistle instead of a finish here, since i can clearly hear a piano sound there o3o/
00:08:481 (5) - ^ but at slider's start
00:12:046 (1) - I think it's gonna flow much better if you do this slider like this, right now this slider kinda broke your slider flow here
00:15:610 (1) - how about adding a nc here, since there is a jump here, and i think it'll fit great here o.o
00:24:521 (3) - I kinda dislike how you did this slider with middle point, i totally don't think it fits, I think it'll fit much better if you remove it
00:36:105 (2) - I really think you should move this slider few grids to the left to avoid it being too close to this slider's tail 00:35:808 (1) - , if you did this don't forget to move this slider as well 00:36:402 (3) - few grids to the right, would do for this one. There too close right, and it don't really look too great, that's why i'm saying this ><
00:44:719 (8) - well, how about adding SC:2 whistle to slider's start and here 00:44:867 - and to slider's end as well, it'll fit with piano sound in the music that's why :3
00:58:085 (4) - I think this slider will flow much better if you did a ctrl+g to it, and it'll play much better too o3o/
01:14:422 (3) - this slider kinda giving the end a weird flow, and i honestly didn't like how you did it, so how about fixing it with ctrl+g for this one, i really think it'll flow much better then how it is right now ></

Insane:

00:07:887 (3) - how about adding a SC:2 whistle to slider's start, it'll follow the piano sound in the music :3
00:08:481 (1) - ^
00:12:640 (3) - how about spacing this slider a bit more, since it's too close with this slider right now 00:12:343 (2) - and it don't really look so well ;w;
00:20:957 (7) - I think this slider would look much better if you just remove the 3rd slider's point, i don't really think it's needed here..so yeah ></
00:28:234 (4) - it'll be more fun if you made this slider with ctrl+g, it'll give some fun flow to it, and people will enjoy it much more :3
00:30:759 (5) - this slider is way too close to this slider 00:30:462 (4) - , i really suggest you to move it a bit away from it, it'll give it a bit of bad play imo
00:37:887 (7,8,1) - what's with the spacing here? o.o looks kinda weird to me, i really don't suggest you doing something like. It'll confuse some players when playing this map. i really don't know how to fix this one, but i know you can do it, :3
00:49:991 (7) - I honestly don't hear anything here, and it's just overmapped to me, so how about removing this note

Good Job on your map Yuzuriha, and good song choice to map <3

Good luck getting this map ranked owo/

Suimya

6,374 posts

Joined February 2011

Suimya 2015-01-05T16:11:57+00:00

Hey :3 just random mod here, because i really love this song <3

General:

where's the video, you can totally ask xChippy to use his video, since he already mapped the same song o3o/

Callin's Easy:

00:00:165 (1) - how about adding a whistle to slider's repeat, it'll follow the song perfectly imo :3
00:02:541 (4,5) - how about adding finish to (4)'s slider's head and whistle to (5)'s head, it'll follow the finish sounds in the song o.o
00:05:957 (2) - I think whistle kinda missing at slider's head, it'll follow the guitar sound in the music, so how about adding it :3
00:09:669 (1) - how about adding a whistle to slider's tail, it'll follow the music perfectly imo
00:12:046 (4,1) - ^ but at slider's repeat, will fit awesome :3
00:15:610 (4) - ^
00:31:056 (4) - this slider feels kinda empty without any hitsounds, how about adding finish to slider's head, it'll fit great
00:33:432 (2) - ^
00:46:501 (3) - ^
01:01:947 (1,2) - ^ and be sure to fix the blanket on 01:01:947 (1) - , atm it's looking kinda bad ></
01:05:511 (2) - finish on repeat, the beat was the same as this one 01:04:323 (1) - , i highly suggest you to do the same here

This diff kinda lacking of hitsounds, so i really suggest you to go over it again, and check it and it's lacking of whistles, and finishes

117's Normal:

00:02:541 (1) - finish on slider's head would fits awesome, and it'll follow the finish sound in the music imo :3
00:06:996 (1,2) - switch the nc, from the (1) to the (2), the music kinda changed at the (2) not at the (1). If you did that don't forget to add finish at 00:07:293 (1) - slider's head, it'll follow the finish sound in the music
00:15:610 (4) - how about making a bit of curve for this slider, to give it some better flow. Like this owo
00:17:392 (3) - I really don't think this middle slider's point is really needed, how about removing it, it'll make a totally better shape o3o/
00:23:927 (3) - I think if you removed the middle point at this slider it'll follow the your style on this diff much better, and it'll play much better as well.
00:43:382 (2) - how about giving this slider a bit curve, to give it some better flow to it, and it'll be more fun to play imo
[box=][/box]
00:44:719 (5) - how about adding a whistle to slider's start, to follow the piano sound in the music :3
00:45:907 (2) - finish at slider's tail would fit awesome, since i can clearly hear a finish on the tail
00:54:818 (4) - how about giving this slider a better flow by making some curve to it, it'll be much better like this o.o
00:58:679 (3) - I think you missed a clap here, i highly suggest you to add it :3
00:58:976 (4) - how about adding a finish or a whistle to slider's start, to follow the sound in the music o.o/
01:01:947 (5) - ^ but at slider's head this time
01:02:838 - here should be a clap, and you kinda missed it, by adding this 2/1 slider, how about doing something like this, to follow the music better o.o
01:14:570 (6) - how about removing the middle slider's point, i think it'll follow your patterns in this diff better o.o

Hard:

00:01:056 (3) - how about fixing the stick between this note and this slider 00:01:204 (4) - , it's looking kinda bad right now ><
00:01:947 (2) - I think the clap fits here, so how about removing the clap on slider's start, it don't really fit with music imo ;w;
00:03:135 (6) - ^ but on slider's tail, the clap should be here imo 00:03:432 - , so how about giving this slider 1 repeat to cover the clap here :3
00:07:887 (3) - how about adding a SC:2 whistle on slider's start, because i really can hear whistle there, so i think it's kinda bad to skip that o.o
00:08:481 (1) - ^
00:30:462 (3) - how about moving this slider a bit grids up, to avoid touch this slider's head 00:29:719 (1) - , because it's looking kinda bad right now. That's why, if you did that, don't forget to remove the clap on slider's head. It don't really fit with music imo ></
00:35:214 (6) - remove finish on slider's head, i don't see a reason to add, because it don't really follows anything in music
00:35:660 (1) - making this a linear slider kinda bad here, since you made a linear sliders here 00:34:323 (3,4,5,6) - , so how about giving this slider a bit more curve to it, to fix that :3
00:36:402 (4,1) - how about removing the clap on (4)'s slider's tail and (1) and then replacing them with finishes instead, it'll fit much better imo. Since i can hear a finish sound here not clap tbh ></
00:37:887 (5) - how about giving this slider a ctrl+g, since you kinda did this on all your rhythm, on this diff, so i suggest you to do the same here
00:38:630 (2) - I think slider's start kinda missing a finish there. So how about adding it :3
00:39:224 (4) - ^
00:42:194 (2) - I highly suggest you to move this slider few grids up, to avoid it from touching this slider 00:41:749 (1) - , it's looking kinda bad right now ><
00:44:719 (8) - how about adding a SC:2 whistle to slider's start and 00:44:867 - here and to the slider's end too, it'll fit with the piano sound in the music :3
00:45:907 (3,4) - I don't think these two kinda looking bad right, so how about doing it like this instead. It'll fit much better with your style here on this diff o.o
01:07:739 (1) - This slider kinda missing a finish on slider's start, so how about adding it there o.o

Gaia's baka Hard:

Gaia pls, so hentai =w=/

00:07:887 (2) - I think this note will fit better with SC:2 whistle instead of a finish here, since i can clearly hear a piano sound there o3o/
00:08:481 (5) - ^ but at slider's start
00:12:046 (1) - I think it's gonna flow much better if you do this slider like this, right now this slider kinda broke your slider flow here
00:15:610 (1) - how about adding a nc here, since there is a jump here, and i think it'll fit great here o.o
00:24:521 (3) - I kinda dislike how you did this slider with middle point, i totally don't think it fits, I think it'll fit much better if you remove it
00:36:105 (2) - I really think you should move this slider few grids to the left to avoid it being too close to this slider's tail 00:35:808 (1) - , if you did this don't forget to move this slider as well 00:36:402 (3) - few grids to the right, would do for this one. There too close right, and it don't really look too great, that's why i'm saying this ><
00:44:719 (8) - well, how about adding SC:2 whistle to slider's start and here 00:44:867 - and to slider's end as well, it'll fit with piano sound in the music that's why :3
00:58:085 (4) - I think this slider will flow much better if you did a ctrl+g to it, and it'll play much better too o3o/
01:14:422 (3) - this slider kinda giving the end a weird flow, and i honestly didn't like how you did it, so how about fixing it with ctrl+g for this one, i really think it'll flow much better then how it is right now ></

Insane:

00:07:887 (3) - how about adding a SC:2 whistle to slider's start, it'll follow the piano sound in the music :3
00:08:481 (1) - ^
00:12:640 (3) - how about spacing this slider a bit more, since it's too close with this slider right now 00:12:343 (2) - and it don't really look so well ;w;
00:20:957 (7) - I think this slider would look much better if you just remove the 3rd slider's point, i don't really think it's needed here..so yeah ></
00:28:234 (4) - it'll be more fun if you made this slider with ctrl+g, it'll give some fun flow to it, and people will enjoy it much more :3
00:30:759 (5) - this slider is way too close to this slider 00:30:462 (4) - , i really suggest you to move it a bit away from it, it'll give it a bit of bad play imo
00:37:887 (7,8,1) - what's with the spacing here? o.o looks kinda weird to me, i really don't suggest you doing something like. It'll confuse some players when playing this map. i really don't know how to fix this one, but i know you can do it, :3
00:49:991 (7) - I honestly don't hear anything here, and it's just overmapped to me, so how about removing this note

Good Job on your map Yuzuriha, and good song choice to map <3

Good luck getting this map ranked owo/

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Aerous 2015-01-06T00:11:35+00:00

Rechecked all my hitsounds !
For the hitsound mods , I added them.

Momovely wrote:
[notice][General]

オーディオリードイン　入れませんか？　

[callin's Easy]

00:00:165 (1) - reverse add whistle sc1

00:01:947 (2) - ^

00:02:541 (4) - slider head add finish and slider end addwhistle sc1

00:03:729 (5) - slider end add whistle

00:04:917 (1) - ^

00:05:957 (2) - slider head add whistle

00:06:699 (3) - ^

00:09:669 (1) - reverse add whistle

00:11:155 (2) - slider end add whistle

I thought that there was considerably much hitsound omission

I confirm the sound charge account of the latter half in reference to mod mentioned above and please look
Done

Zweib wrote:
hi~最近忙しかったので、遅れてすみません; ;

[Callin's Easy]
really needs much work with this diff ;w;
00:00:165 (1) - don't use slider art like this in the easiest diff. Stretch it. Sure
00:07:293 (1,1) - the slider is too close to the spinner, which is not permit in Easy. You shouldn't put any object until 00:10:264 Should be okay , since I checked with other ranked Taiyou to Tsuki
00:19:768 (1) - ^ ^
00:38:184 (1) - ^^
00:47:689 (1) - this spinner is too short, use a slider to replace it Extended to white tick
01:01:947 (1,2,1) - make better blanket Ok, I'll do it
01:09:075 (4) - add NC for consistencyNc'ed

Sekai-nyan wrote:
Callin's Easy:
00:00:165 (1) - how about adding a whistle to slider's repeat, it'll follow the song perfectly imo :3
00:02:541 (4,5) - how about adding finish to (4)'s slider's head and whistle to (5)'s head, it'll follow the finish sounds in the song o.o
00:05:957 (2) - I think whistle kinda missing at slider's head, it'll follow the guitar sound in the music, so how about adding it :3
00:09:669 (1) - how about adding a whistle to slider's tail, it'll follow the music perfectly imo
00:12:046 (4,1) - ^ but at slider's repeat, will fit awesome :3
00:15:610 (4) - ^
00:31:056 (4) - this slider feels kinda empty without any hitsounds, how about adding finish to slider's head, it'll fit great
00:33:432 (2) - ^
00:46:501 (3) - ^
01:01:947 (1,2) - ^ and be sure to fix the blanket on 01:01:947 (1) - , atm it's looking kinda bad ></
01:05:511 (2) - finish on repeat, the beat was the same as this one 01:04:323 (1) - , i highly suggest you to do the same here
This diff kinda lacking of hitsounds, so i really suggest you to go over it again, and check it and it's lacking of whistles, and finishes
Added hitsounds + rechecks

Thanks for the mod!

@inori : check spread again , another easier insane? Also include callin to the tags if possible !
Here you go Yuzu : http://puu.sh/e7RZX/65f60d2427.osu

Last edited by Aerous 2015-01-06T01:13:53+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Gaia 2015-01-06T01:04:37+00:00

byfar wrote:
mod as requested
[Gaia's Hard]

00:04:323 (7,8) - flow this? flow break on purpose
00:07:887 (2) - should increase DS tbh not big enough of a note to jump
00:07:293 (1) - delete NC i'm ncing on the beginnings of every measure, its fine
00:07:887 (2) - NC ^
00:25:709 (6,7,8) - watch out for aesthetics looks fine to me
00:28:085 (3,4,5,1) - use ds 1.4x? i want this section to be a bit farther spaced than the previous section of the map because of the 1/4s in the music nah
00:33:135 (7,1) - stacking this on the slider feels unnatural for me anti jump o3o
00:44:719 (8) - nc same as earlier
01:04:026 (7) - curve this slider a little maybe? minor aesthetic improvement. because you seem to not want to align the slider perfectly with the previous slider so. sure
img

pretty good hard. just some minor flow issues.

Thanks 4 mod !

Momovely wrote:
[gaia's Hard]

00:44:719 (8) - 　There is the sound of the piano, and do you want add whistle? oops fixed

00:53:630 (5) - slider head add whistle haihai

arigatou Momovely >w<

Zweib wrote:
[Gaia's Hard]
This diff cool, but it might be weird that there is 2 hards of same difficulty in one set, while the gap between Insane and Hard is quite large. I'd suggest to lower the star of Insane or switch one hard into a light Insane. i agree tbh this spread is ugh >.>

00:34:323 (4) - move up by 1 grid? The arrow was placed too close to the bottom ok
00:43:976 (6,7) - make a blanket? i guess i will
00:44:719 (8) - use 1/8? nah too hard for hard imo
01:07:590 (4,5) - this jump uhhh... maybe curve 01:07:739 (5) more and decrease the distance, because no NC here. change my entire NC pattern o3o
01:13:234 (6,1) - swap NC? i dont even know why there's an NC there, removed o3o

Thanks Zweib~

Sekai-nyan wrote:
Hey :3 just random mod here, because i really love this song <3

Gaia's baka Hard:
Gaia pls, so hentai =w=/ n-nani?? =3=/
00:07:887 (2) - I think this note will fit better with SC:2 whistle instead of a finish here, since i can clearly hear a piano sound there o3o/ same as below
00:08:481 (5) - ^ but at slider's start gg i would but then i'd be ignoring the drums which i dont wanna do orz
00:12:046 (1) - I think it's gonna flow much better if you do this slider like this, right now this slider kinda broke your slider flow here okie owo
00:15:610 (1) - how about adding a nc here, since there is a jump here, and i think it'll fit great here o.o changed my entire nc pattern lol
00:24:521 (3) - I kinda dislike how you did this slider with middle point, i totally don't think it fits, I think it'll fit much better if you remove it and make it a straight slider? hmm its like a double blanket i wanna keep ><
00:36:105 (2) - I really think you should move this slider few grids to the left to avoid it being too close to this slider's tail 00:35:808 (1) - , if you did this don't forget to move this slider as well 00:36:402 (3) - few grids to the right, would do for this one. There too close right, and it don't really look too great, that's why i'm saying this >< i think as long as its not touching it looks great lol
00:44:719 (8) - well, how about adding SC:2 whistle to slider's start and here 00:44:867 - and to slider's end as well, it'll fit with piano sound in the music that's why :3 I WOULD BUT DRUMS orz
00:58:085 (4) - I think this slider will flow much better if you did a ctrl+g to it, and it'll play much better too o3o/ i think i've abused this pattern too much LOL, might consider orz
01:14:422 (3) - this slider kinda giving the end a weird flow, and i honestly didn't like how you did it, so how about fixing it with ctrl+g for this one, i really think it'll flow much better then how it is right now ></ MAYBE? ill get more opinions o3o/
Good Job on your map Yuzuriha, and good song choice to map <3

Good luck getting this map ranked owo/

Thanks Baka-nyan =w=/

@inori, Zweib is right, the spread is broken.. I thought there would be another easier Insane so i didnt say it before but it looks like its not coming o.o
3.7 -> 5.1 is way too big especially when the 2nd highest diff is a hard and ur insane is like extra orz
You're gunna need another Insane imo

code

osu file format v13

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PreviewTime: 48803
Countdown: 0
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TitleUnicode:太陽と月のCROSS (TV Size)
Artist:TWO-FORMULA
ArtistUnicode:TWO-FORMULA
Creator:-Yuzuriha-inori-
Version:Gaia's Hard
Source:俺の脳内選択肢が、学園ラブコメを全力で邪魔している
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DreaM117er

1,594 posts

Joined September 2012

DreaM117er 2015-01-06T09:37:48+00:00

Zweib wrote:
[117's Normal]
I would suggest AR5.5 and CS3.5, to make the approach circle easier to catch. >all no fix, I change Snap Space now. AR No fix because Normal's AR difficulty no over 5
The patterns are cool and well arranged. But the rhythm may be too complicated for newbies lol. Try to use more 1/1 beatsnap.

Sekai-nyan wrote:
...Why I miss the Quote button??

Fine...Your mod all fix

Thanks all your mod

Sorry I'm late

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Title:Taiyou to Tsuki no CROSS (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:太陽と月のCROSS (TV Size)
Artist:TWO-FORMULA
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Creator:-Yuzuriha-inori-
Version:117's Normal
Source:俺の脳内選択肢が、学園ラブコメを全力で邪魔している
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364,184,11155,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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180,152,12937,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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48,280,16204,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,300,16501,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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116,56,19174,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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48,304,20065,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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-Yuzuriha

574 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

-Yuzuriha 2015-01-06T13:07:51+00:00

Sekai-nyan wrote

Hard:
◾00:01:056 (3) - how about fixing the stick between this note and this slider 00:01:204 (4) - , it's looking kinda bad right now ><
◾00:01:947 (2) - I think the clap fits here, so how about removing the clap on slider's start, it don't really fit with music imo ;w; OK
◾00:03:135 (6) - ^ but on slider's tail, the clap should be here imo 00:03:432 - , so how about giving this slider 1 repeat to cover the clap here :3
◾00:07:887 (3) - how about adding a SC:2 whistle on slider's start, because i really can hear whistle there, so i think it's kinda bad to skip that o.o OK
◾00:08:481 (1) - ^
◾00:30:462 (3) - how about moving this slider a bit grids up, to avoid touch this slider's head 00:29:719 (1) - , because it's looking kinda bad right now. That's why, if you did that, don't forget to remove the clap on slider's head. It don't really fit with music imo ></
OK
◾00:35:214 (6) - remove finish on slider's head, i don't see a reason to add, because it don't really follows anything in music OK
◾00:35:660 (1) - making this a linear slider kinda bad here, since you made a linear sliders here 00:34:323 (3,4,5,6) - , so how about giving this slider a bit more curve to it, to fix that :3 OK

Image

◾00:36:402 (4,1) - how about removing the clap on (4)'s slider's tail and (1) and then replacing them with finishes instead, it'll fit much better imo. Since i can hear a finish sound here not clap tbh ></ OK
◾00:37:887 (5) - how about giving this slider a ctrl+g, since you kinda did this on all your rhythm, on this diff, so i suggest you to do the same here OK
◾00:38:630 (2) - I think slider's start kinda missing a finish there. So how about adding it :3
◾00:39:224 (4) - ^
◾00:42:194 (2) - I highly suggest you to move this slider few grids up, to avoid it from touching this slider 00:41:749 (1) - , it's looking kinda bad right now >< OK
◾00:44:719 (8) - how about adding a SC:2 whistle to slider's start and 00:44:867 - here and to the slider's end too, it'll fit with the piano sound in the music :3 OK
◾00:45:907 (3,4) - I don't think these two kinda looking bad right, so how about doing it like this instead. It'll fit much better with your style here on this diff o.o

Image

◾01:07:739 (1) - This slider kinda missing a finish on slider's start, so how about adding it there o.o OK

Insane:
◾00:07:887 (3) - how about adding a SC:2 whistle to slider's start, it'll follow the piano sound in the music :3 OK~
◾00:08:481 (1) - ^
◾00:12:640 (3) - how about spacing this slider a bit more, since it's too close with this slider right now 00:12:343 (2) - and it don't really look so well ;w;
◾00:20:957 (7) - I think this slider would look much better if you just remove the 3rd slider's point, i don't really think it's needed here..so yeah ></ OK~
◾00:28:234 (4) - it'll be more fun if you made this slider with ctrl+g, it'll give some fun flow to it, and people will enjoy it much more :3
◾00:30:759 (5) - this slider is way too close to this slider 00:30:462 (4) - , i really suggest you to move it a bit away from it, it'll give it a bit of bad play imo
OK~
◾00:37:887 (7,8,1) - what's with the spacing here? o.o looks kinda weird to me, i really don't suggest you doing something like. It'll confuse some players when playing this map. i really don't know how to fix this one, but i know you can do it, :3
◾00:49:991 (7) - I honestly don't hear anything here, and it's just overmapped to me, so how about removing this note

mod thanks ~

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2015-01-08T01:37:11+00:00

From Astral Horizon modding queue~ Hope this is of help

. The patterns on the Insane were really fun to play!

[Insane]

00:09:075 (3) - Reduce repeat by 1 and add another circle.
00:11:303 (3,4) - Try making swapping these two in time line so 3 is a circle and 4 is a slider starting at 00:11:452 - . Rhythm is better like this imo.

I noticed on this difficulty you would sometimes have triplets unevenly spaced. I think for 00:37:887 (7,8,1) - this is good, because there is a musical shift that warrants the jump, but consider making them evenly spaced on these parts of the song because there isn't a shift. I think it will make the flow better too, but of course, this problem is miniscule to begin with

. I'm just going to list the other 2 instances where i feel the spacing could be fixed right here. Sorry if this is out of order (you can skip and come back to this later if you want).

00:41:452 (4,5,1) - ^
00:57:640 (3,4,1) - ^

00:30:759 (5,6,1) - Make 6 evenly spaced between 5, and 1?
00:43:531 (4,6) - Not perfectly stacked.
00:47:689 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Considering the rest of the map has some big jumps, I was surprised that you stacked these notes rather than making them jumps like in the Hard.
01:04:323 (1,2) - ^

(Sorry again for getting out of order)

[Gaia's Hard]

00:18:135 (5) - NC
00:25:115 (5,6,7,8) - 7 is not in the middle of 5, 6. Also, consider moving 8 more to the left for a neater triangle pattern.
00:47:689 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Comparing this with the Insane, this seems more difficult because the jumps are on 1/2's rather than 1/1's. This is purely a mapset issue between Hard/Insane difficulties though, I have no problems with the jumps themselves.
00:48:877 - You should map this part

.
01:14:273 (2,3,1) - This rhythm doesn't really work because there is a longer beat at 01:14:273 - . Swap 2 and 3 on the timeline so you end the song with two circles + spinner.

[Hard]

00:10:264 (3,4) - The flow here isn't great because of the sharp angle the cursor has to move coming out of 3.
00:27:788 (1,2,3,1) - Make these evenly spaced.
00:58:382 (1,2) - This blanket could be improved.
01:13:828 (1,2) - ^

[117's Normal]

00:51:848 (5) - I don't see why this needs to be a slider. The music doesn't suggest it. Make this a circle?
01:13:531 (3,4) - Try remapping this part. You want to have a slider beginning on 01:13:828 - not a slider-end because that is a stronger beat.

[Callin's Easy]

00:00:165 (1) - The repeat of this slider doesn't capture anything. The repeat should be on 00:00:759 -
00:05:957 (2) - Switching polarity isn't recommended on lower difficulties. Move to 00:06:105 - please.
00:12:046 (4) - The repeat also doesn't capture anything because it's on a red-tick not white. Either make slider shorter so repeat is at 00:12:343 - or increase length and take out the repeat.
00:13:234 (1) - ^ You could try a pattern like this.
00:42:937 (1,2) - Blanket better.
00:52:442 (1) - Same issue. Repeat is on a red-tick.
01:01:947 (1) - ^
01:04:323 (1,2) - Now these and all the later ones work!!

Good luck~

-Yuzuriha

574 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

-Yuzuriha 2015-01-08T16:28:24+00:00

monstrata wrote:

From Astral Horizon modding queue~ Hope this is of help . The patterns on the Insane were really fun to play!

[Insane]

00:09:075 (3) - Reduce repeat by 1 and add another circle.
00:11:303 (3,4) - Try making swapping these two in time line so 3 is a circle and 4 is a slider starting at 00:11:452 - . Rhythm is better like this imo.

I noticed on this difficulty you would sometimes have triplets unevenly spaced. I think for 00:37:887 (7,8,1) - this is good, because there is a musical shift that warrants the jump, but consider making them evenly spaced on these parts of the song because there isn't a shift. I think it will make the flow better too, but of course, this problem is miniscule to begin with . I'm just going to list the other 2 instances where i feel the spacing could be fixed right here. Sorry if this is out of order (you can skip and come back to this later if you want).

00:41:452 (4,5,1) - ^
00:57:640 (3,4,1) - ^

00:30:759 (5,6,1) - Make 6 evenly spaced between 5, and 1?
00:43:531 (4,6) - Not perfectly stacked.
00:47:689 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Considering the rest of the map has some big jumps, I was surprised that you stacked these notes rather than making them jumps like in the Hard. OK~
01:04:323 (1,2) - ^

(Sorry again for getting out of order)

[Hard]

00:10:264 (3,4) - The flow here isn't great because of the sharp angle the cursor has to move coming out of 3.
00:27:788 (1,2,3,1) - Make these evenly spaced.
00:58:382 (1,2) - This blanket could be improved.
01:13:828 (1,2) - ^

All OK ~

Good luck~

mod thanks~

Chirony

390 posts

Joined June 2012

Chirony 2015-01-09T10:02:25+00:00

from M4M

[Insane]

00:01:947 - 00:02:392 (5,6) -00:03:135 (4,5) - 00:04:768 (6) - 音楽に特に強調するような音もないので、clapを削除したほうがいいかと
00:03:432 (6) - add clap
00:07:887 - whistleを使わずにfinishを少し音量を下げて使ってみるのはどうですか？
00:31:056 - 00:32:244 - 00:33:432 - 00:34:620 - あまり盛り上がるパートではないのであんまりfinish使わないほうがいいかも。音楽にも合った音はありませんでした
00:36:848 (7) - add finish
00:38:481 - 00:38:778 - remove clap
00:38:630 - 00:39:075 - add finish 音楽に明確なリズムがあるのでそれに合わせるべきだと思います。00:39:075 - 00:38:184 - にもclapを付けてみるのもいいかもしれないです
00:40:264 - 1/4スライダーを追加してみるのはどうですか？clapの音も拾えるしvocalもフォロー出来ていると思います
00:42:937 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:38:184 (1,2,3,4) - と同じ
00:44:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 連打を作るならピアノに合わせて作るべきかと思います。このパターンを試してみて :3
SPOILER
00:59:273 (3) - add clap

[Gaia's Hard]

00:12:046 (1,2,3,4) - how about same shapes? It is more better pattern if you follow the guitar sound. try this
SPOILER
00:13:234 (5,6,7,8,9) - please try this if you have accepted above.
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/eh67r/88008e78c5.jpg
00:16:947 - remove clap?

[Hard]

00:05:363 (2,3) - スタックしないほうがいいと思います
00:07:887 (3,4) - ここもスタック外したほうがいいかも。流れを止めているような気がします
00:38:184 (1,2,3,4) - 00:42:937 (1,2,3,4,5) - Insaneと同じ
01:06:551 - remove finish
01:09:075 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 音楽と合ってないように感じました。こっちのほうがあってるかな
SPOILER
01:10:412 - add clap
01:09:669 - ^
01:11:155 - ^

[117's Normal]

00:42:937 (1,2,3) - i think not fit to music. please try this
SPOILER

good luck!

Laurier

1,785 posts

Joined February 2011

Laurier 2015-01-09T15:05:19+00:00

modとか8か月ぶりぐらいなんだけど

General
問題なさそう

Insane
前半にCS:1のホイッスル混ぜてないのはわざと？使わない理由もないと思うんだけど入れてみては？

00:03:283 (5) - ここsliderにしよ。00:00:165 (1,1,1) - ここらの伸びる音の時全部sliderにしてあるし、ここが単発ってのは不自然
00:03:580 (1) - clapじゃなくてホイッスルにしよ
00:04:397 (3) - これ消そう。何の音も拾ってないし。3連打配置するなら00:04:694 - こっちにnote追加したほうがbetter
00:05:363 (2,3) - 直感だけど、sliderと単発の音の取り方逆にしたほうがしっくりくる
00:06:402 (2,3) - この2つでジャンプ作るのは音に合わないし、sliderのほうCtrl+Gしてあげよう
00:06:996 (5,1) - stackさせないで、微妙にずらしてあげたほうが読みやすいし最近のmapっぽくなるからどうかな？ http://puu.sh/ehpd9/6aa48881b1.jpg
00:07:887 (3) - 急に登場するホイッスルがなんか違和感あるんだけど、こういうのは同じようなパターン数か所でやったほうがいいと思う。たとえば00:06:699 (3) - ここも同じようにしてあげるとか
00:09:372 (1) - NCいらないと思う
00:10:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - この辺が直前のパートと音の取り方変わってて変な感じになってる。http://puu.sh/ehpwj/b780a36823.jpg こんな風に統一させて
配置はこう http://puu.sh/ehpAt/77d46bfb68.jpg
00:13:679 (3,4) - ここも同じ。曲にあんま合ってない
00:15:610 (1) - clapとfinish一緒に着けるとすごくうるさいしホイッスルにしよう。BGMが実際にそんな感じならアリだけどここはそうじゃない。
00:16:427 (1) - NCいらないと思う。
00:17:838 (1) - ここにアンチジャンプは合わないと思うのでその前のとこの音取りを http://puu.sh/ehpZL/efc0ee66c1.jpgこんな風に変えてあげるのはどう？
00:18:135 (2,3,4,5,6) - ホイッスルの音全く曲に合ってないので消そう。どうしてもつけたいなら音量は下げましょう
00:28:679 (1) - blanket汚いので x169y368ぐらいになるように調整しよう
00:38:110 (8) - こういう分かりにくいジャンプ作るパートじゃないと思う。
00:43:234 (2) - stackさせるとほんと読みにくいからx0.8ぐらいずらそう
00:53:259 (3) - \なんだこれは/
01:00:090 (5) - clapいらないとおもう
00:58:902 (7) - こういうKIAIの見せ場に使うのはアリだと思う
01:02:244 (2) - 何回か同じ内容で書いたけどずらそう
01:11:897 (3) - ここはclapの音に合わせてジャンプさせるべき
01:14:496 (4,5,6) - BGMもっとよく聞いて音に合わせて音取りやってこ

全体的に画面の中心でぐるぐるしてる感が強かったから、以降譜面作るときはもう少しいろんな場所使うの意識して1回やってみてほしい。

Hard
00:00:610 (2) - なんでいきなりここでジャンプ作ったんだろう。00:00:165 (1) - これを反転させた状態でもいいぐらいの音だと思うんだけど。
00:15:313 (4) - もう少し下にずらして1~4のsliderの間隔統一しよう。
00:41:749 (1) - http://puu.sh/ehtgJ/1321470c76.jpg こんな感じにずらしてしたのsliderの形に沿って配置するのはどうでしょ
00:45:313 (1,2,3) - こういう場所の形すごく気になる。もっときれいに配置できるはず　http://puu.sh/ehvrF/f368de3cc8.jpg
00:49:917 (3) - これは(2)とstackさせたほうがいい

117's Normal
00:01:056 (3,4) - please don't stack these notes. hard to read for beginners like me.
00:05:957 (4,5) - same as adove
00:20:065 (3,4) - ^
00:22:442 (7,8) - ^
00:52:739 (7,8) - ^
01:04:620 (4,5) - ^
01:09:075 (1,2) - ^
00:04:323 (5,6,1) - this flow is not good to play. try to change for like this. http://puu.sh/ehwEt/b104873e06.jpg
00:12:046 (1) - make a curve ? http://puu.sh/ehwKN/ab5e2aa16d.jpg

Callin's Easy
00:00:165 (1) - dont fit the song. please try this http://puu.sh/ehx9L/67a233968b.jpg
00:03:729 (5) - try Ctrl+J it will maks more good flow.
00:04:917 (1) - if you changed above try same thing.
00:12:046 (4) - remove whistle on reverse
00:14:422 (2) - move to more right. now this flow is not well.
00:21:551 (3,4) - try blanket like this http://puu.sh/ehy6H/601614aadb.jpg
00:42:937 (1,2) - same as above http://puu.sh/ehyiL/f4b570c81c.jpg

That's it

-Yuzuriha

574 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

-Yuzuriha 2015-01-09T19:46:16+00:00

Chirony wrote:
from M4M

[Insane]
00:01:947 - 00:02:392 (5,6) -00:03:135 (4,5) - 00:04:768 (6) - 音楽に特に強調するような音もないので、clapを削除したほうがいいかと fix
00:03:432 (6) - add clap fix
00:07:887 - whistleを使わずにfinishを少し音量を下げて使ってみるのはどうですか？ sorry
00:31:056 - 00:32:244 - 00:33:432 - 00:34:620 - あまり盛り上がるパートではないのであんまりfinish使わないほうがいいかも。音楽にも合った音はありませんでした考えてみます
00:36:848 (7) - add finish　　fix
00:38:481 - 00:38:778 - remove clap fix
00:38:630 - 00:39:075 - add finish 音楽に明確なリズムがあるのでそれに合わせるべきだと思います。00:39:075 - 00:38:184 - にもclapを付けてみるのもいいかもしれないです
00:40:264 - 1/4スライダーを追加してみるのはどうですか？clapの音も拾えるしvocalもフォロー出来ていると思います
00:42:937 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:38:184 (1,2,3,4) - と同じ
00:44:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 連打を作るならピアノに合わせて作るべきかと思います。このパターンを試してみて :3
SPOILER
00:59:273 (3) - add clap fix~
[Hard]
　
00:05:363 (2,3) - スタックしないほうがいいと思います　　fix
00:07:887 (3,4) - ここもスタック外したほうがいいかも。流れを止めているような気がします fix
00:38:184 (1,2,3,4) - 00:42:937 (1,2,3,4,5) - Insaneと同じ配置を変えてみます
01:06:551 - remove finish　　fix
01:09:075 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 音楽と合ってないように感じました。こっちのほうがあってるかな
SPOILER
う～ん　今のとこはそのままでいきます
01:10:412 - add clap　no
01:09:669 - ^ no
01:11:155 - ^ no
good luck!

mod ありがとうございました～

DreaM117er

1,594 posts

Joined September 2012

DreaM117er 2015-01-09T20:28:01+00:00

monstrata wrote:
[117's Normal]

00:51:848 (5) - I don't see why this needs to be a slider. The music doesn't suggest it. Make this a circle? >No fix
01:13:531 (3,4) - Try remapping this part. You want to have a slider beginning on 01:13:828 - not a slider-end because that is a stronger beat. >OK, change

Chirony wrote:
[117's Normal]
00:42:937 (1,2,3) - i think not fit to music. please try this >I change other look, more better now
SPOILER

Thanks your mod

SPOILER

osu file format v13

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Version:117's Normal
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-Yuzuriha

574 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

-Yuzuriha 2015-01-09T23:11:12+00:00

Laurier wrote:
modとか8か月ぶりぐらいなんだけど おかえり～

General
問題なさそう

Insane
前半にCS:1のホイッスル混ぜてないのはわざと？使わない理由もないと思うんだけど入れてみては？

00:03:283 (5) - ここsliderにしよ。00:00:165 (1,1,1) - ここらの伸びる音の時全部sliderにしてあるし、ここが単発ってのは不自然 ok~00:03:580 (1) - clapじゃなくてホイッスルにしよ音を消しました
00:04:397 (3) - これ消そう。何の音も拾ってないし。3連打配置するなら00:04:694 - こっちにnote追加したほうがbetter　 ok~
00:05:363 (2,3) - 直感だけど、sliderと単発の音の取り方逆にしたほうがしっくりくる　 ok~
00:06:402 (2,3) - この2つでジャンプ作るのは音に合わないし、sliderのほうCtrl+Gしてあげよう　 ok~
00:06:996 (5,1) - stackさせないで、微妙にずらしてあげたほうが読みやすいし最近のmapっぽくなるからどうかな？ http://puu.sh/ehpd9/6aa48881b1.jpg
ok~
00:07:887 (3) - 急に登場するホイッスルがなんか違和感あるんだけど、こういうのは同じようなパターン数か所でやったほうがいいと思う。たとえば00:06:699 (3) - ここも同じようにしてあげるとか　 ok~
00:09:372 (1) - NCいらないと思う　 ok~
00:10:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - この辺が直前のパートと音の取り方変わってて変な感じになってる。http://puu.sh/ehpwj/b780a36823.jpg こんな風に統一させて
配置はこう http://puu.sh/ehpAt/77d46bfb68.jpg
00:13:679 (3,4) - ここも同じ。曲にあんま合ってない　 ok~
00:15:610 (1) - clapとfinish一緒に着けるとすごくうるさいしホイッスルにしよう。BGMが実際にそんな感じならアリだけどここはそうじゃない。　 ok~
00:16:427 (1) - NCいらないと思う。　 ok~
00:17:838 (1) - ここにアンチジャンプは合わないと思うのでその前のとこの音取りを http://puu.sh/ehpZL/efc0ee66c1.jpgこんな風に変えてあげるのはどう？ ok~　　
00:18:135 (2,3,4,5,6) - ホイッスルの音全く曲に合ってないので消そう。どうしてもつけたいなら音量は下げましょう　 ok~
00:28:679 (1) - blanket汚いので x169y368ぐらいになるように調整しよう　 ok~
00:38:110 (8) - こういう分かりにくいジャンプ作るパートじゃないと思う。　けっこう気にってる形なので、そのままで
00:43:234 (2) - stackさせるとほんと読みにくいからx0.8ぐらいずらそう　 ok~
00:53:259 (3) - \なんだこれは/　 ok~
01:00:090 (5) - clapいらないとおもう　 ok~
00:58:902 (7) - こういうKIAIの見せ場に使うのはアリだと思う
01:02:244 (2) - 何回か同じ内容で書いたけどずらそう　 ok~
01:11:897 (3) - ここはclapの音に合わせてジャンプさせるべき　 ok~
01:14:496 (4,5,6) - BGMもっとよく聞いて音に合わせて音取りやってこ　 ok~　

全体的に画面の中心でぐるぐるしてる感が強かったから、以降譜面作るときはもう少しいろんな場所使うの意識して1回やってみてほしい。

Hard
00:00:610 (2) - なんでいきなりここでジャンプ作ったんだろう。00:00:165 (1) - これを反転させた状態でもいいぐらいの音だと思うんだけど。
00:15:313 (4) - もう少し下にずらして1~4のsliderの間隔統一しよう。
00:41:749 (1) - http://puu.sh/ehtgJ/1321470c76.jpg こんな感じにずらしてしたのsliderの形に沿って配置するのはどうでしょ
00:45:313 (1,2,3) - こういう場所の形すごく気になる。もっときれいに配置できるはず　http://puu.sh/ehvrF/f368de3cc8.jpg
00:49:917 (3) - これは(2)とstackさせたほうがいい

All oK~

That's it

modありがとうございました～　

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Aerous 2015-01-10T00:46:32+00:00

monstrata wrote:

From Astral Horizon modding queue~ Hope this is of help . The patterns on the Insane were really fun to play!

[Callin's Easy]

00:00:165 (1) - The repeat of this slider doesn't capture anything. The repeat should be on 00:00:759 - Changed it a bit , not like yours. repeated on 00:01:056
00:05:957 (2) - Switching polarity isn't recommended on lower difficulties. Move to 00:06:105 - please. Its fine
00:12:046 (4) - The repeat also doesn't capture anything because it's on a red-tick not white. Either make slider shorter so repeat is at 00:12:343 - or increase length and take out the repeat. Its fine
00:13:234 (1) - ^ You could try a pattern like this. Its fine
00:42:937 (1,2) - Blanket better. Yup , nice catch
00:52:442 (1) - Same issue. Repeat is on a red-tick. Its fine
01:01:947 (1) - ^ Its fine
01:04:323 (1,2) - Now these and all the later ones work!! :)

Good luck~

Laurier wrote:
modとか8か月ぶりぐらいなんだけど

Callin's Easy
00:00:165 (1) - dont fit the song. please try this http://puu.sh/ehx9L/67a233968b.jpg Changed
00:03:729 (5) - try Ctrl+J it will maks more good flow. Changed, but not like yours
00:04:917 (1) - if you changed above try same thing. Changed, but not like yours
00:12:046 (4) - remove whistle on reverse Ok , removed
00:14:422 (2) - move to more right. now this flow is not well. moved for better flooow
00:21:551 (3,4) - try blanket like this http://puu.sh/ehy6H/601614aadb.jpg Changed
00:42:937 (1,2) - same as above http://puu.sh/ehyiL/f4b570c81c.jpg ^

That's it

Thanks for the mods <3

Here you go , http://puu.sh/eiYqj/c1a0e35bda.osu

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Gaia 2015-01-10T07:19:02+00:00

@Chirony, I think my patterns are better >.< gomen

@inori: please add a clap at 00:17:244 -

arigatou!~

Edit:

VINXIS wrote:
kk finally got to be able 2 mod
pm m4m lma o

Gaia
ayy lmao yo
OD7 this is a hard.....
00:07:739 - add note there's nothing in the music here...
00:09:075 (2,3) - vol 50% eh
00:14:422 (1) - x:232 y:228 breaks my spacing
00:16:650 (5) - x:48 y:144 ^
00:36:848 (4,1) - stack under slider tbh not what im going for
00:47:392 (4) - Ctrl+G ^
00:58:976 (4) - ^ ^
01:03:580 (2) - curve less n
01:14:422 (3) - Ctrl+G lma o t
01:13:828 (1,3) - actually imo it'd be better if it was perfectly vertical but ye a y

happy mappign

sorry for no changes there was just no need to change imo

Last edited by Gaia 2015-01-11T06:53:59+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

VINXIS

Featured Artist

3,161 posts

Joined April 2014

VINXIS 2015-01-11T03:51:38+00:00

kk finally got to be able 2 mod
pm m4m lma o

general

lol y no combo colours tho

Aerous

did u not bow down to jmmxp today im dissapointed in u son
00:06:699 (3) - make it completely horizontal or x:268 y:264 (for the second point)
00:09:669 (1) - curve this less
00:12:046 (4,1) - make them congruent if they aren't already
00:12:046 (4) - nc
00:13:234 (1) - remove nc
00:14:422 (2) - nc
00:16:798 (1,1) - inb4 2soon4circle
00:22:739 (5,1) - blanket this m8
00:26:303 (1) - remove nc
00:27:491 (2) - nc
00:31:056 (4) - nc
00:32:838 (1) - remove nc
00:33:432 (2) - nc
00:40:264 (1) - remove nc
00:40:561 (2) - nc
00:42:937 (1,2) - y u do dis (make them same slider pls)
00:56:006 (2) - make it str8
00:57:194 (1) - remove nc
00:58:382 (2) - nc
01:03:135 (2) - >3 points >2015
01:05:511 (2,1) - blanketo

m1223961117

bak in may 2014 if i played this i'd die and call those slider spams. boy was i a dumas C:
00:23:333 (1) - remove nc
00:23:927 (3) - nc
01:02:689 (7,8) - stuff like this comes alot in the map. I'd leave this if i were u but to make it easier I'd change it to a repeat slider instead of a slider-note
ye a

Hard

00:05:511 (3,2) - yuzu pls
00:22:590 (4,5) - imperfect stack
00:31:056 (1,2) - ^
00:46:501 (5,1) - not too fond about this buti can't think of anything better so ye a (I'd just make this one new combo slider instead though)
00:54:224 (4,5,2) - slider doesn't stack perfectly with hte 2 circles lmao
00:56:600 (7,1) - same slider if they aren't already
01:06:551 (5) - nc for combo consistency
01:11:155 (3,3) - imperfect stack

Gaia

ayy lmao
OD7
00:07:739 - add note
00:09:075 (2,3) - vol 50%
00:14:422 (1) - x:232 y:228
00:16:650 (5) - x:48 y:144
00:36:848 (4,1) - stack under slider tbh
00:47:392 (4) - Ctrl+G
00:58:976 (4) - ^
01:03:580 (2) - curve less
01:14:422 (3) - Ctrl+G lma o
01:13:828 (1,3) - actually imo it'd be better if it was perfectly vertical but ye a

insane

00:00:165 (1,5) - imperfect stack
00:04:026 (2) - Ctrl+G tbh
00:05:511 (3,1) - imperfect stack
00:05:957 (1,4) - ^ lmao
00:20:957 (7,1,2,3) - ^
00:26:155 (1,2) - ^
00:29:867 (1,3) - ^
00:34:471 (5,3) - ^
00:35:660 (1,2,3) - ^
00:38:110 (8,1) - stack
00:38:184 (1,2) - imperfect stack
00:45:016 (7,2) - stack/no overlap
00:48:877 (1,2,3,4) - i can't tell if this is a bent square or not, but if u didn't use create polygon circles instead pls
00:52:887 (2) - doesn't perfectly stack with the bunch of circles before this
01:04:323 (1,4) - impefect stack
01:12:343 (1,2,3) - ^
01:14:570 (4,5) - I'd make the distance of this 2x longer than 01:13:976 (1,2) - but yea
01:14:719 (5) - nc

happy mappign

-Yuzuriha

574 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

-Yuzuriha 2015-01-11T05:18:58+00:00

VINXIS wrote:
kk finally got to be able 2 mod
pm m4m lma o

general
lol y no combo colours tho
Aerous
did u not bow down to jmmxp today im dissapointed in u son
00:06:699 (3) - make it completely horizontal or x:268 y:264 (for the second point)
00:09:669 (1) - curve this less
00:12:046 (4,1) - make them congruent if they aren't already
00:12:046 (4) - nc
00:13:234 (1) - remove nc
00:14:422 (2) - nc
00:16:798 (1,1) - inb4 2soon4circle
00:22:739 (5,1) - blanket this m8
00:26:303 (1) - remove nc
00:27:491 (2) - nc
00:31:056 (4) - nc
00:32:838 (1) - remove nc
00:33:432 (2) - nc
00:40:264 (1) - remove nc
00:40:561 (2) - nc
00:42:937 (1,2) - y u do dis (make them same slider pls)
00:56:006 (2) - make it str8
00:57:194 (1) - remove nc
00:58:382 (2) - nc
01:03:135 (2) - >3 points >2015
01:05:511 (2,1) - blanketo
m1223961117
bak in may 2014 if i played this i'd die and call those slider spams. boy was i a dumas C:
00:23:333 (1) - remove nc
00:23:927 (3) - nc
01:02:689 (7,8) - stuff like this comes alot in the map. I'd leave this if i were u but to make it easier I'd change it to a repeat slider instead of a slider-note
ye a
Hard
00:05:511 (3,2) - yuzu pls
00:22:590 (4,5) - imperfect stack OK~
00:31:056 (1,2) - ^ OK~
00:46:501 (5,1) - not too fond about this buti can't think of anything better so ye a (I'd just make this one new combo slider instead though) OK~
00:54:224 (4,5,2) - slider doesn't stack perfectly with hte 2 circles lmao OK~
00:56:600 (7,1) - same slider if they aren't already OK~
01:06:551 (5) - nc for combo consistency OK~
01:11:155 (3,3) - imperfect stack
Gaia
ayy lmao
OD7
00:07:739 - add note
00:09:075 (2,3) - vol 50%
00:14:422 (1) - x:232 y:228
00:16:650 (5) - x:48 y:144
00:36:848 (4,1) - stack under slider tbh
00:47:392 (4) - Ctrl+G
00:58:976 (4) - ^
01:03:580 (2) - curve less
01:14:422 (3) - Ctrl+G lma o
01:13:828 (1,3) - actually imo it'd be better if it was perfectly vertical but ye a
insane
00:00:165 (1,5) - imperfect stack OK~
00:04:026 (2) - Ctrl+G tbh
00:05:511 (3,1) - imperfect stack OK~
00:05:957 (1,4) - ^ lmao OK~
00:20:957 (7,1,2,3) - ^ OK~
00:26:155 (1,2) - ^ OK~
00:29:867 (1,3) - ^ OK~
00:34:471 (5,3) - ^ OK~
00:35:660 (1,2,3) - ^ OK~
00:38:110 (8,1) - stack OK~
00:38:184 (1,2) - imperfect stack OK~
00:45:016 (7,2) - stack/no overlap OK~
00:48:877 (1,2,3,4) - i can't tell if this is a bent square or not, but if u didn't use create polygon circles instead pls
00:52:887 (2) - doesn't perfectly stack with the bunch of circles before this
01:04:323 (1,4) - impefect stack
01:12:343 (1,2,3) - ^
01:14:570 (4,5) - I'd make the distance of this 2x longer than 01:13:976 (1,2) - but yea
01:14:719 (5) - nc

happy mappign

DreaM117er

1,594 posts

Joined September 2012

DreaM117er 2015-01-11T20:23:34+00:00

VINXIS wrote:
kk finally got to be able 2 mod
pm m4m lma o

m1223961117
bak in may 2014 if i played this i'd die and call those slider spams. boy was i a dumas C: >Maybe you don't like my style, I don't care about this Because it is not my feeling, it's yours
00:23:333 (1) - remove nc
00:23:927 (3) - nc >Fix all
01:02:689 (7,8) - stuff like this comes alot in the map. I'd leave this if i were u but to make it easier I'd change it to a repeat slider instead of a slider-note
ye a >Sure, fix now

happy mappign

Thanks your mod

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