1. Lv.39 - 7Key (5.72 stars, 2675 notes)

_S u w a k o_ wrote:

[Insane]

00:48:207 - starting x1.2 here please, because 1.2 is quite slow to emphasize.
hmm seems fine

00:48:560 - ^ ^

00:49:089 - 00:49:222 - there's only 3 sounds. fix please
i know but it seems feel better when 4 than 3

00:49:455 (49455|6,49455|4) - turn to 1/8 beats, because you used a lot of 1/8 short LNs before.

( actually, i prefer this kinds of LNs than 1/8 beats LOL. whatever, you need to give identity on pattern. )
hmm i was thinking to use longer for emphasizing but now maybe accordance more important

00:51:043 (51043|5) - delete
actually many single notes here are used to fill the empty,even the sound can be ignored
at 100%,but if more people feel uncomfortable at it i will consider reduce them

00:59:866 - i prefer to use x1.5
seems better

01:00:219 - ^
^

01:00:749 (60749|0,60749|1) - LN stop 01:01:102 - here please. 01:01:278 - is a bit awkward to play
done,i hate jack,too but it seems fits the rhythm

01:02:425 - add note if you follow jackhammer
done

01:02:866 - add note

01:02:954 - ^

01:03:307 - ^

01:03:484 - ^

or rearrange from 01:02~01:03 part
I think the jack frontwards already hard,so i put a 1/8 ladder instead frustrating people
again with continious jacks .


01:04:278 - delete a LN for sound
actually here 01:04:454 was 2 LN too,i delete it for the same reason but didnt notice this one,thanks

01:06:925 - add for sound
nice catch,:)

01:11:337 (71337|1) - move to 4
01:11:337 (71337|4) - move to 7 to represent identity with 01:11:690 (71690|2,71690|5,71866|5,71866|2) - here
done

01:11:337 - 01:12:043 - ? rearrange sv please. quite strange
I will consider if more people feels strange

01:13:013 - add
done

01:14:513 (74513|0,74513|2) - it's better to be long LN
okay

01:15:396 (75396|0) - move to 2
i think 1 better

01:16:454 - add on 4
done

01:18:660 - add
02:01:631 (121631|1) - LN start from 02:01:631 (121631|1) - here
02:08:513 - ok need some short notes from here xd
from here is WIP so leave them behind 01:17:690

_S u w a k o_ wrote:

I suggest to change BG size to 1024x768 or 1366x768
Well,it's already the most clear revolution I can searched.I think current already fine.

check aimod
done

02:21:925 (141925|0,142102|2) - Ctrl + G
done

02:26:072 - http://puu.sh/ehKPb/952d90397f.jpg
02:28:278 - http://puu.sh/ehKVl/b6c6acfc45.jpg
dafuq.. lol... there is a lot of things to suggest..
my point is, using 1/2 beatsnap for your LNs form. it will be better than current pattern. neatness, and fit to songs.
02:24:043 - 03:09:219 - these LNs. i hope you got my point
Well,map like that is kind of boring to play I think so I put it randomly.Will keep it.
Thanks~

03:16:278 (196278|1,196984|3) - re snap these LN finish point by 1/4 snap
You mean shorten it?If so then okay ,seems good.

03:29:602 - add
03:30:307 - add
Not make much difference in hearing,I made it a pattern on purpose.(although these may not be regarded as patterns by you o_O)

03:31:807 - 04:00:043 - resnap these a lot of short notes to 1/8 beatsnap
will be done

03:31:807 - 03:38:866 - i suggest to change these LNs to like 03:43:102 - 03:51:219 - here
Dont get it...what you mean?

03:53:690 - 03:57:925 - hmm. i checked that you used 1/8 for catching piano sound. so i will not say anything about here.
at least the short notes are not overmapping.
but consider about 03:54:660 (234660|6,235366|4,236778|6,237307|4) - these shield notes. if you move them, it will be better
Well,it's my style to make hard patterns at about ending part,but I'll simplify them

DustMoon wrote:

埋葬大法好（新人能力不足，见谅）

00:24:736 (24736|1) - 建议你移到：00:24:736 (24736|2) -
差别不大，维持原样

01:32:513 (92513|1) - 建议滑条移动到第四轨01:32:866 (92866|3) - 这个note移到第二轨
那两个滑条和之前同一个音的地方故意用的相邻滑条来突出那个音的特征

01:33:219 (93219|1,93219|0,93396|1,93396|0,93572|1,93572|0,93749|0,93749|1,93925|0,93925|1,94102|1,94102|0,94278|0,94278|1) - 这一部分我建议你用短滑条
鼓点音我一般不用滑条。。

01:34:807 (94807|6) - 我认为需要更多note来体现重音
01:35:028 (95028|3) - 漏音（节拍细分划到八分之一，速度调到50%，仔细听）
01:35:028 (95028|3) - 我认为需要更多note来体现重音
01:35:337 (95337|5) - 我认为需要更多note来体现重音
01:35:513 (95513|6,95572|4,95631|2,95690|0,96043|5,96043|3,96043|1) - 我希望你能够删除一个note
这部分音变奏实在难抓，之前为了省事直接等距处理，目前更新的结果是我能做到皆顾美观和对音的最好结果了。

01:36:307 (96307|2) - 没有这个音
之前没注意但是pattern已经摆好了少了开头最右边这个实在别扭

01:51:307 (111307|4) - 漏音
动大动大 鼓点音本来我就只打算抓最响的那个大的音

01:53:160 (113160|3) - 前两个音都用了短滑条，我建议你这个note也改成短滑条
滑条对的是主旋律钢琴音，这个音是鼓点音

01:54:396 (114396|4,114572|5,114749|6) - 中间的音有点弱，干脆在旁边加个滑条把三个音连起来
附近时间段基本钢琴音都没用长滑条了，单独弄一个出来的话有损连贯性

01:54:396 (114396|4,114572|5,114749|6) - 怎么突然不抓了？02:44:524 (164524) - 02:44:789 (164789) - 02:45:054 (165054) - 02:45:406 (165406) - 02:45:583 (165583) - 02:45:936 (165936) - 02:46:465 (166465) -
啥意思？。。。

03:42:583 (222583|2) -03:42:936 (222936|4) - 你听一下，可以搞个变速。（你最后副歌弄得真带感，赞）
没觉得有什么变速元素啊