1. Hard (2.91 stars, 252 notes)
2. Laurier's Insane (3.79 stars, 317 notes)
3. Normal (1.91 stars, 140 notes)

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Laurier is back!!!

Fycho wrote:

Fycho x Laurier

LunarSakuya wrote:

Fycho wrote:

Fycho x Laurier

1. 这个video offset是不是有问题，一开始的圈很容易看出来慢了一点

1. Not sure, but in soft-hitclap, I think this part can be cut so the sound comes more immediately: http://puu.sh/eeBHr/a7d379b8de.png
2. About OD, the progression is 3 -> 6 -> 7 which is a bit of a jump between Normal and Hard. Maybe OD in Normal can be increased to 4 since the map itself is quite simple.

1. 00:04:437 (1) - I think the end does not need whistle. It doesn't follow the song there.
2. 00:04:960 - Remove unused green line, and also at 00:05:135
3. 00:12:112 (3,4,1) - Just a suggestion, maybe you can adjust to make this less straight, and more angled. I think it will make (1) feel stronger to play: http://puu.sh/eezDp/f61677919a.jpg
4. 00:10:019 (3,1) - Swap NC imo.
5. 00:18:042 (4) - I think it will sound better if you use drum additions, and not drum sampleset: http://puu.sh/eeCF7/4c704e30e4.jpg
6. 00:20:135 (2,3) - This is nice, but I think it will feel better if you move (3) a bit more to the left.
7. 00:22:228 (2) - Clap doesn't fit well here imo. I think you should remove it.
8. 00:23:623 (5) - drum-hitwhistle fits better here.
9. 00:26:763 (1) - Minor detail, the inside part of the curve looks uneven. It will look better if you move the second point to x:450|y:57 http://puu.sh/eeAb3/fdc947c1bf.jpg
10. 00:30:949 (2) - Slight curve might be nice here: http://puu.sh/eeAwb/1eee15015c.jpg
11. 00:47:867 (3,4) - These look very close together, and I think it will look better if you make them a bit farther apart, by moving (4) to the right: http://puu.sh/eeAFN/d77d3847bb.jpg
12. 00:55:716 (2,3) - I think this should be 1.2x distance spacing too.
13. 00:56:414 (3) - Add whistle?
14. 00:56:763 (4,5) - 1.2x distance spacing?
15. 01:10:367 - Remove unused green line.
16. 01:37:926 (1) - Use 30% volume here, like you did in Hard.

1. 00:06:530 (4) - This is not snapped according to the music. It should be 1/3 if you follow the piano: http://puu.sh/efcTr/b251d3e562.jpg
2. 00:10:716 (2) - Flow between (2,3) is a bit awkward imo. I personally think this is better, but it breaks ds, so I don't think you will change it... I'll just put it here anyway: http://puu.sh/eeGtn/796892cdfb.jpg
3. 00:21:879 (3) - I don't think the clap on the end fits well with the music. Song has a different sound here. Also, why is there clap on the slider body?
4. 00:23:623 (4) - I recommend changing to drum-hitwhistle.
5. 01:41:763 (4) - I think it will be better to move this a bit further from (3) because they are touching very slightly. Maybe you can make equal distance between (3,4,1) like this: http://puu.sh/efbO9/693f747015.jpg
6. 01:44:205 (3) - I think it would be nice if you split this into two 1/4 sliders. Just my opinion.

1. 00:35:135 (1,2) - Stack it exactly?
2. 00:53:798 (4) - I find that I often miss this note when playing; it's hard to catch with this spacing and flow. I don't really have any good suggestion though... maybe like this: http://puu.sh/efjwp/a6925c1c1b.jpg
3. 01:30:774 (4) - The placement feels a bit awkward because (1) is a strong beat, but (4,1) has smaller spacing than (3,4). I think it would be better if (4) was closer to (3) and further from (1). Example: http://puu.sh/efj9T/c85618456a.jpg

Kagamine Ren wrote:

[Gemeral]

1. 这个video offset是不是有问题，一开始的圈很容易看出来慢了一点没问题，原本这个圈就是慢的

[Normal]

1. 00:12:112 (3,4,1) - 这个再平滑一点
   123

   
   按照cloud的建议改成更不平滑点了
2. 00:53:972 (3,4) - 这里逆flow真的没问题吗，
   123

   
   没问题
3. 00:56:414 (3,4) - Ctrl+G?没必要，那样打着反而不好

[Hard]

1. 01:18:216 (5,1) - 这里overlap了.-.ok

[Laurier's Insane]

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  则不呢是ar9，能不能改成8.7啊8.5啊什么的造福一下dt狗不

1. 00:40:193 - 加个note？或者连着00:40:019 (3) - 变成滑条跟鼓点，跳后+空拍的思路
2. 00:17:693 (3,4) - 这里是不是摆跳合适一点。我觉得没必要
3. 01:10:019 (1,2) - 这里变成一个3/4滑条加个note好，前面那个也是3/4，这样舒服这里下不了3/4

1. 00:23:623 (5) - Whistle instead of finish? The way I suggested, and you did it correctly in Hard.
2. 00:50:484 (3) - Remove whistle from head? It seems to match your hitsound pattern better that way.
3. 01:33:914 (1) - Whistle and finish to match Hard?
4. 01:38:623 - and 01:39:321 - Useless green lines.
5. 00:41:763 - and 00:42:112 - Useless green lines (because there is no hitsound on head of (2)).
6. Kiai end time is different from other diffs. I suggest to make them the same.

1. 00:56:065 (1,2) - Are you sure about hitsound here? It seems from the drum in the song that whistle should be removed from end of (1) and added to (2) instead.
2. 00:07:577 - and 00:08:100 - 01:10:367 - Useless green lines.

1. Wrong source? from the official site (http://parasol-soft.com/product/haruno/) I found I see it as 晴のちきっと菜の花びより you have extra れ

1. 00:20:135 (2) - I would of liked it if you could stack these notes, it would of been better here.
2. 01:44:902 - I would add a green line here, the volume for this last note is extremely loud 50% works best.

1. 00:12:112 (4,3) - The overlap is really messy, I still prefer you stack them here.

Tari wrote:

Hey Fycho I will look at this!

[General]

1. Wrong source? from the official site (http://parasol-soft.com/product/haruno/) I found I see it as 晴のちきっと菜の花びより you have extra れ sorry my carelessness

[Normal]

1. 00:20:135 (2) - I would of liked it if you could stack these notes, it would of been better here. i try to look it in test mode, the timing snap are too long to see, so it's fine at this ar lol lazy to fix as if that I need to move many notes
2. 01:44:902 - I would add a green line here, the volume for this last note is extremely loud 50% works best.

[Hard]

1. 00:12:112 (4,3) - The overlap is really messy, I still prefer you stack them here. same as that in normal I guess:>

Not much to change, Wonderful map!

Poke me aha!