albatross11 wrote:

很不错的图！感觉很好！梗放的也不违和，很流畅，节奏也不错╮(╯▽╰)╭

00:48:095的
http://puu.sh/dG3B7/28f95bdbda.jpg
这种滑条可以把两个中心点放在note中心，然后做弯一点 会比较好看。。。比如这样。。
http://puu.sh/dG3FV/140573bf82.jpg
反正也不考虑flow。。这样开HR也不会滑条走形。。╮(￣▽￣")╭ ok fixed

01:37:782 (1,2,3,4) - 挪到01:37:970 (1,2,3,4) 感觉没必要，这边一路跟着vocal过来的。。
01:39:095 (1) - 删

01:57:470 找个地方的节奏型要不要换成https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2377608（虽然我觉得原版的也不错。。。╮(￣▽￣")╭ ）

02:21:189 (6,8) - 删 02:21:470 (1) - 删，然后
02:21:282 把原来的8和1变成一个1/2的滑条 这边改动了，删了6但是留着三连，感觉应该好点了


02:57:470 (1) 的转盘尾挪到 02:58:595 。。然后
02:58:970 加个note fixed, 不错的建议

03:23:157 这一大块空白有种欲言又止的感觉╮(￣▽￣")╭ 。。。 这边曲子只剩vocal，干脆留出来感觉还是挺爽的w

水摸一记，不要kudo(*￣︶￣)y

Meconopsis wrote:

[Insane]
00:05:532 (3) - 白线...建议三连slider fixed
00:06:188 (7) - 没音建议slider fixed
00:10:876 (9) - 没音..貌似自创节奏?还是为了三连爽？ 这里的overmap我觉得没问题
00:10:970 (1) - 结尾没音 有啊，鼓点
00:13:220 (3) - 漏音 这段跟的轨在这里没音，以及这个停顿我觉得还可以
00:19:876 (7) - 果真为了三连 队，就是为了三连
00:33:470 (6) - 漏音 试着改了下。。。还是用了原来的orz 这样的停顿我还真有点不确定好不好，先观望
00:34:220 (4) - ^ 同上
00:37:313 (3,4) - ^三连多完美... 这里只跟vocal还是为了排列对称好看
00:37:595 (5) - slider到00:37:782 (6) - 哦豁我没看懂这句
00:42:845 (2) - 漏音 爷爷啊这整段节奏都下成这个样子，应该还行啊
01:18:470 (1,2,3,4,5) - DS坑人系列.而且不是什么好梗 一组梗的话这样渐变ds应该是可以的，不是好梗没办法orz 想不出这类梗了
01:31:782 (5) - 秘制消失?你要这里没有建议前面同样节奏的地方也别留,要么就在这里也弄一个slider.建议前者 这里是一整段vocal结束，下个停顿我觉得合理
02:02:532 (4,5) - slider fixed
02:01:970 (1,2,3) - 折返 虽然曲子放折返slider挺合适，但怎么说。。还是有点破坏flow的感觉
02:04:970 (1) - 建议弄到2上面. 头还是尾？不管头还是尾本来的123一组的排列都被破坏了吧。。。
02:05:532 (3) - 建议加一个note放到3上面。加完note后就是4 这里空着挺好啊。。。
02:06:470 (1,2) - slieder啊。前面都是slider。这里突然出现两个note 这段又是一整段vocal结束啊
03:07:220 (3) - 秘制折返233为何不参考你前面那个一个note接一个slider啊fixed
03:08:720 (5) - 虽然是节奏点。但是按你的节奏应该空。。 最后一段kiai都塞满了，争取让节奏变化多一些
03:14:720 (5,6,7) - 奇怪的三连 fixed 换成slider了
03:32:720 (6,7,8) - 建议重新处理 fixed
[Hard]
00:13:407 (3) - 节奏奇葩。
00:13:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 梗坑人
00:22:032 (2) - 白线人声
00:26:626 (3) - 建议加歌note三连
00:39:095 (3) - 奇怪00:39:376 (4,5) - 自己听吧。
00:41:345 (2) - 就算跟人声也建议加下note
00:53:720 (2) - 红线出节奏被覆盖。你hard真的有用心在做？ 被发现了orz
01:05:532 (4,5) - 45调换
hard建议remap.

z1085684963 wrote:

[Insane]
00:04:595 1/4 ？？？

00:28:782 (6,7,1) - 摆的好丑 哦豁，那怎么办
00:38:720 (3) - 和1叠起来 fixed
01:23:720 (3) - 包住，然后01:24:095 (4) - 也复制成这个 没看懂。。。
01:59:907 1/4 ？？？ 不过这段改了下
02:35:720 (5) - 滑条拉拉好 不会拉orz
02:46:970 建议 fixed
02:48:470 (1) - 拉到02:49:970，保持一致 fixed
03:01:595 (2,1) - 这里是1/4 可以摆四分之一，但前面有个跳梗所以貌似比较难摆四分之一
03:27:095 (2,1,2) - ^ ^
03:51:095 (6,7) - ^ 这里fixed

[Hard]
00:41:345 漏音，还有00:42:845 00:44:345 00:45:845

很多note的位置很接近，可以的话叠起来 猴，hard我慢慢改
blanket好的话图会好看许多

Fryz3 wrote:

Hi! modder came from: t/267877/start=0

General

1. the star rating on your normal diff is too high to be placed in normal difficulty.
   yo need to make that map easier or make a new one.

Normal this normal will be deleted soon, GD wip

1. this might sound a bit weird, but after the spinner, it feels like im making a circle over and over again.
   just let autoplay it and you see that you go round and round again after the spinner. I won't say it is bad,
   but the flow is kind of boring if you keep repeating that.
   this might clear up what i mean:( look at oval) ps://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/86329.
2. Also, try to place more circles and sliders in the middle of your screen.
   you kind of make circles over again, it feels weird to play.
3. it is probably useless what im going to say, but you need to place the combos.
4. Also, you might want to change to color of the cirlces and sliders after a new combo.
5. 00:15:657 (31,32,33) - space is not equal here.

hard

1. in this diff and in insane you need to work on your placement of NC. you place New Combos,
   when the music suddenly changes, there is a pauze, someone else is singing, you follow a different instrument/vocal in the map...
   there are too many to point them all out, so i will give you a few examples:
   00:02:345 (1) - you can remove this NC. fixed
   00:03:282 (2) - add NC, 00:03:470 (1) - remove NC fixed
   00:09:845 (1) - remove NC, 00:10:220 (2) - add NC not really...
   00:16:970 (1) - remove NC, 00:17:532 (2) - add NC I wanna make NCs on those big while lines, so...

Insane

1. 00:34:407 (4,5,6,7,1) - weird triangle kind of ... it is mainly aimed to make a change in the flow. if it is a normal one, the change in flow is kind of too flat...
2. 00:43:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i think this is a weird placement of circles, but that isnt neccesarely bad. it's a pattern I am trying to use here... kind of weird to play, but mostly fine I think

hope you got something useful from my mod. sry i couldn't do more

1. 00:13:970 (1) - for your reference
2. 02:07:970 (3,4) - ctrl+g

1. 00:05:532 (10,11,12,13) - 整理一下更精彩
2. 00:31:595 - 有点漏，鼓点也很重要;w;
3. 有点不像normal;w;趁还没定型可以减下ds和sv

1. 00:13:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 拉开一些更美观:3
2. 00:59:720 (5,6) - ctrl+g可以配vocal
3. 01:05:720 (5,6) - same
4. 01:10:782 (4,1) - 我个人不太推荐这种挡1/2尾，要挡就挡长的

1. 00:56:720 (5,6,7) - 三连挪尾部
2. 01:55:220 (3) - 这后面跳的真赞
3. 03:17:720 (5,6,7,8) - ctrl+g

AIR wrote:

[Veyron's Easy]

1. 00:13:970 (1) - for your reference I think it looks fine when following the guitar on the song track, as long as it's 1/4 slider and clear, players can notice.
2. 02:07:970 (3,4) - ctrl+g Okay

AIR wrote:

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 181970
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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Title:Hikaru nara
TitleUnicode:光るなら
Artist:Goose house
ArtistUnicode:Goose house
Creator:GGFFQQ55
Version:Normal'
Source:四月は君の嘘
Tags:Shigatsu wa Kimi no Uso
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OverallDifficulty:3
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:3

ctpsky wrote:

我来吐槽摸图了
本MOD含有大量的个人想法
取用前请先斟酌一下是否合适
我他喵的就是一个屎麻婆

[Insane]
00:05:532 (3) - Blanket? 总之看着不对劲 这里改过了
00:07:032 (4,5) - 感觉节奏和前面一样比较靠谱 现在应该可以了
00:07:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 我的想法是这样

THE 一灭寂

这个。。。似乎没必要吧
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2383807

00:09:470 (1,2,3) - 跳的很莫名其妙 要就合着后面的一起放五角跳嘛 这难道不是五角星么Orz

让我整理一下

首先把
00:09:470 (1) 放在00:10:407 (6) 上
00:09:657 (2) 放在00:10:595 (7) 上
调整个合适的角度
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2383865
或者
00:09:657 (2) 放在00:10:595 (7) 上
调整角度或者调整00:09:095 (6) 让其对准00:09:470 (1)
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2383856

这段有点晕 给点意见而已

哦豁好长。。。大概看了看，如果出问题的话再来改，先观望w
00:11:720 (4,5,6,1) - 位置 可不可以使得和00:10:970 (1,2,3,4) 一样 虽然说玩起来flow没啥问题 没想好怎么改，还是先这样
00:13:032 (2,3) - 叠起来 把2扔3上面吧 另外我觉得1和2的间距可以拉大点 这里是出于flow的考虑，叠起来还是比较破坏flow的
00:13:970 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 挺喜欢这梗的 猴啊猴啊
00:16:032 (2) - 放在1尾上 然后和后面的DS 不知道为何个人不喜欢叠orz
00:16:970 (1,2,3) - 三角形没摆好 其实可以不用GS或者用tiny 哦豁，我怎么觉得是正三角形Orz (调半天没搞定
00:18:095 (4,1) - Blanket? 这里的blanket感觉不是很必要
00:19:407 (4,5,6) - 可以用ctrl+shift+R轻微的调一下 不要重叠 调了下，现在应该好点了
00:21:282 (5,6,1) - 这位置不是很妙 这个遮挡是有点2333 但换了几个位置都觉得不整洁
00:25:970 (1,2,3) - 略卡手 换了下角度，nice
00:28:220 (3) - 卡手 五角星跳好像没什么办法。。。就是有点卡手

THE 一灭寂

咦这样确实好点，fixed 谢了
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2383916

00:29:532 (3,5) - 212,238 使其重叠
00:31:970 (1,2) - Blanket fixed
00:32:907 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 直接看图吧

THE 一灭寂

挺好，主要是那个停顿的处理你的改法蛮好
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2383953
不知道你看懂没

00:37:220 (2,3) - 1,2间距可以拉大点 然后2,3重叠在一起 还是摆开来好看点吧
00:38:157 (2,3,4) - 遮挡坑 这里改了
00:40:970 (1) - 就问你敢不敢这样放 这跳太大了啦><
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2383963
00:42:470 (1) - ^
00:43:595 (3,1) - 原理^ 即3放1头上
00:43:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 我猜你是想这么放

THE 一灭寂

fixed
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2383975

00:46:595 (3) - 和4重叠
00:49:970 (1,2,3) - 其实间距大了也没啥用=、= 不如小间距休息一下

THE 一灭寂

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2383993

00:52:407 (3) - 这个slider不是一般的违和
00:57:282 (8,1,2,3) - 感觉卡手
00:59:532 (4,5) - 我就喜欢这样
01:00:470 (1,2,3,4) - 我的想法

THE 一灭寂

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2384016

01:03:470 (1) - 这位置不好
01:04:220 (4) - 遮挡坑
01:06:470 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - MY IMG

THE 一灭寂

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2384033

01:08:345 (2,3) - 3放2尾
01:10:970 (1,2,3,4) - 平行四边形好看
http://puu.sh/dI1DQ/3507538356.jpg
01:11:907 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - 这梗有点意思
01:19:032 (3,5,2) - NC
01:19:782 (1) - Remove NC
http://puu.sh/dI1Kg/4b625655b2.jpg
01:27:470 (1,2) - 2放1尾
01:32:907 (5) - 不知道为啥 虽然你是对的但是我觉得只做半拍
01:36:470 (1,2) - 2放1尾
01:44:157 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 其实这梗并不好 但是没更好的梗之前就这么放吧
01:51:470 (1,2,3,4) - 做正方形更好 歪了反而不好看
01:56:345 (3) - 200,168
01:58:032 (3,5) - 我感觉这里要NC 后面那串不用
02:02:532 (3,4,5) - 不舒服
02:04:407 (4,5,6) - ^
02:05:720 (3,4) - 放一条线上
02:12:095 (4) - move to 256,352
02:13:032 (4) - move to 448,24
02:16:407 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - 坑
02:19:407 (1,2,3) - ctrl+G
02:20:157 (1,2,3) - ^ 后面再适当改下吧
02:34:220 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - 坑
02:36:845 (1,2,3,1) - 分别Blanket
02:43:970 (1,5) - 要么重叠 要么5往上拉
02:44:157 (2,3,6,7) - 坑
02:44:532 (4) - del
02:46:970 (1,2) - Blanket
02:57:470 (1,1) - spinner后面紧接note是不适合的
02:59:157 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 前面的NC后面的remove NC



一个难度摸了两个小时 醉了醉了

这句话有点伤人

这他妈的是个音乐游戏不是猜谜游戏！！！

tutuhaha wrote:

1. mp3怎么是320kbps 压一下啊
2. 宽屏支持和letterbox那个统统去了

1. 00:00:470 (1,3) - set soft sample set on their tail because there have no drum sound
2. 00:10:595 - add a circle to follow the music?
3. 00:58:595 - ^
4. 01:06:470 (3) - move right a little to avoid overlap?

1. 00:07:782 (1) - 不如用红描点好看点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2514535
2. 00:17:345 (1) - 2/3滑条反而把00:17:720 - 这里的鼓漏了 建议用1/2
3. 00:28:407 (5) - 考虑拆成一个圈加一个1/1滑条来跟这里的鼓00:28:595 -
4. 01:18:657 (4,5) - 这里一大坨notes看起来好挤啊 试试让中间空一点像这样http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2514547
5. 01:45:470 (1,2) - 这里感觉也可以拆开 像这样去跟鼓感觉会好点https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2514555
6. 02:20:532 (6) - 这种双描点的滑条在低难度感觉后面不复制粘贴弄对称的话还是不美观 不如用之前建议的那种红描点滑条.-.
7. 03:11:532 (3) - 这种到不如用一个描点弄圆弧型的滑条好看惹=.=

1. 感觉难度跟normal差的有点大啊不知道行不行
2. 00:07:407 (6,1) - 移开点 遮挡丑
3. 00:13:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 不如移开 挤一起丑
4. 00:22:782 (4,5,1) - overmap了吧 没必要
5. 00:53:157 - 不建议把这里的音漏了 建议把那个长滑条拆开成两个notes去做
6. 01:10:782 (4,1) - 不如让4和滑条的尾重合啊看起来好看点
7. 01:12:657 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - hard别自己加三连overmap了 听起来也违和 放1/2就好
8. 01:39:376 (4) - ^ 后面的三连我就不说了你自己斟酌一下有没有必要加
9. 01:43:220 (3,4) - 这里也有点奇怪 不建议这里anti jump
10. 03:37:407 (3) - 要anti jump的话也应该把滑条头放靠近上一个滑条尾那里 遮一起看着很丑的
    反正我觉得本来和normal差的难度就比较大还放三连overmap有点不好

1. 00:34:970 (1,2,1) - 把白线的鼓声全丢了 不建议用3/2
2. 00:37:407 - 漏了个鼓音
3. 00:42:845 - 这也有个音漏了
4. 00:44:532 (3,4) - 连续单点建议做整齐点别乱放 这两个间距忽然变小感觉不太好
5. 01:04:782 (6,7,1) - 看到这里只有这里的三连能接受 你大概体会一下
6. 01:15:095 - 建议把滑条拆开把这里的音跟上
7. 01:28:032 (2,3,4,5,6) - 唉 这种乱摆的单点感觉打起来很奇怪 不如摆成星型
8. 02:21:282 (6,7,1) - 不如摆小间距或直线 这里看着有点奇怪
9. 02:36:657 - 漏音了
10. 03:32:720 (6) - 3/4滑条也不建议在这里用 实在要跟那个篮线上的vocal的话建议把3/4滑条换成1/2滑条加一个四分拍的圈

Shad0w1and wrote:

[Normal]
00:13:782 (4,1,2,3,4) - 滑條盡量白綫起，這裏反人類我掉了3次。Normal最好不要這麽追變奏为了彰显品味换红线1/2
00:26:345 (1) - 這個滑條明顯始于00:26:720 - 更好我看还行
音效貌似有些單調，還有感覺用不着弄這麽多音量級別
note整體感覺和我的感覺有些不同，可能需要大改？我會這麽下：00:55:970 - 開始（沒有排列，衹看我的節奏就好）

tutuhaha wrote:

[Normal]
节奏塞太满了，有些地方我不大懂你是在跟人声还是音乐
00:17:345 (1) - 在0017720处结尾对
00:17:907 (2) - 然后再在这里加note因为后面的节奏和这块是相同的所以要保持一致如果你真的想在这里拖拍那么后面也得拖，，，。
00:26:345 (1,2) - ^一样改了
^然后改了上面这个后你会发现跟红线音会非常奇怪所以把红线音移回白线
最后这边的节奏就会变成这样
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2512585
00:43:220 (6) - delete改，空了一拍起红线
00:43:407 (x) -
00:43:595 (x) - 然后在这两个地方rhythm
00:45:845 (4) - 4移到这里
我这样的改法是把你主要的节奏效果放在人声上，你这样一半跟人声一半跟背景音真的很奇怪 改了，没太看懂，总之4换1/2白线
00:55:970 (1) - kiai这里开始的这个节奏我觉得改成这样比较合适
osu.ppy.sh/ss/2512601
00:58:970 (1) - 然后这里的节奏改成这样挺好，改
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2512605
就是主要跟人声啦其实，后面的节奏基本上都是一模一样的改法了就不一个个说了

ZZHBOY wrote:

[Normal]

1. 00:07:782 (1) - 不如用红描点好看点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2514535对
2. 00:17:345 (1) - 2/3滑条反而把00:17:720 - 这里的鼓漏了 建议用1/2已改
3. 00:28:407 (5) - 考虑拆成一个圈加一个1/1滑条来跟这里的鼓00:28:595 - 想跟红线
4. 01:18:657 (4,5) - 这里一大坨notes看起来好挤啊 试试让中间空一点像这样http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2514547已改
5. 01:45:470 (1,2) - 这里感觉也可以拆开 像这样去跟鼓感觉会好点https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2514555已改
6. 02:20:532 (6) - 这种双描点的滑条在低难度感觉后面不复制粘贴弄对称的话还是不美观 不如用之前建议的那种红描点滑条.-.已改
7. 03:11:532 (3) - 这种到不如用一个描点弄圆弧型的滑条好看惹=.=

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260,164,148220,2,0,L|256:232,1,55
236,268,148595,2,0,P|180:280|104:268,1,110,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,284,149157,5,0,0:0:0:0:
12,192,149532,2,0,P|5:106|12:24,1,165
88,108,150470,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,148,150657,2,0,L|304:144,1,165
336,176,151407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,200,151595,2,0,P|480:192|512:192,2,110,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,304,152720,6,0,P|324:304|236:296,1,110
184,208,153470,2,0,P|136:204|64:208,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,112,154220,2,0,P|8:48|12:0,1,110
108,52,154970,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,84,155157,2,0,B|200:80|200:80|220:84|220:84|264:80,1,110
312,96,155720,2,0,P|404:76|500:76,1,165
492,128,156470,6,0,L|488:188,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,236,156845,2,0,P|416:236|292:224,1,165,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,216,157595,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,216,157970,2,0,P|144:300|160:384,2,165,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,112,159470,2,0,P|112:96|8:80,2,165,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,152,160970,6,0,P|328:116|384:12,2,165,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,260,162470,2,0,P|292:316|368:376,2,165,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,152,163970,2,0,L|120:160,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,108,164720,2,0,P|20:188|28:232,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,284,165470,6,0,L|232:272,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,228,166220,2,0,P|332:160|324:104,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,20,166970,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,60,167157,2,0,L|128:52,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,76,167720,2,0,P|80:144|84:208,1,110
104,236,168282,2,0,B|160:280|208:204|368:176|484:224,1,385,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,312,169970,1,4,0:0:0:0:
124,152,178407,6,0,L|120:220,1,55,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,300,178970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,268,179157,2,0,L|340:268,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,288,179720,2,0,B|464:280|464:280|496:248,1,110
508,204,180282,2,0,P|508:144|500:80,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,68,180845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,36,181220,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,92,181595,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,200,181970,5,4,0:0:0:0:
280,252,182157,2,0,P|276:320|264:376,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,344,182907,1,2,0:0:0:0:
52,360,183282,1,2,0:0:0:0:
28,312,183470,2,0,P|24:260|24:192,1,110
40,152,184032,2,0,P|44:96|60:24,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,16,184595,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,104,184970,6,0,L|284:88,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,112,185532,2,0,P|396:88|500:64,1,165,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,120,186282,2,0,P|488:232|484:296,1,165,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,364,187220,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,312,187407,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,260,187595,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,200,187970,5,4,0:0:0:0:
240,236,188157,2,0,P|224:336|228:368,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,304,188907,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,204,189282,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,148,189470,2,0,P|364:108|320:48,1,110
272,64,190032,2,0,P|228:48|152:28,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,48,190595,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,116,190970,6,0,L|8:188,1,55,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,224,191345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,280,191532,2,0,B|44:356|48:360|156:340,1,165,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,296,192282,2,0,B|240:284|240:284|248:288|248:288|356:268,1,165,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,224,193220,2,0,L|428:356,2,110,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,196,194157,6,0,P|488:140|472:72,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,24,194907,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,88,195282,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,100,195470,2,0,P|196:104|132:104,1,110
28,100,196220,2,0,L|8:48,2,55,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,208,196970,5,4,0:0:0:0:
8,264,197157,2,0,P|64:272|128:268,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,204,197907,2,0,P|280:200|336:208,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,256,198470,2,0,P|384:252|464:240,1,110
504,148,199220,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,96,199407,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,44,199595,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,76,199970,6,0,L|296:80,1,55,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,64,200345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,88,200532,2,0,P|192:144|196:216,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,288,201282,2,0,P|284:240|288:116,1,165,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,88,202032,2,0,P|232:68|108:48,1,165,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,202970,12,0,205970,0:0:0:0:
208,120,207470,6,0,L|80:116,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,188,208220,2,0,P|12:256|28:320,1,110
128,312,208970,2,0,L|256:304,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,312,209720,2,0,P|352:248|340:188,1,110
332,92,210470,6,0,L|208:100,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,88,211032,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,124,211407,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,152,211595,2,0,P|16:212|20:268,1,110
60,300,212157,2,0,L|188:292,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,308,212720,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,276,213095,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,320,213470,6,0,P|432:252|448:204,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,116,214220,2,0,P|496:64|468:0,1,110
376,60,214970,2,0,L|240:64,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,20,215720,2,0,P|156:80|168:132,1,110
212,228,216470,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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488,292,218720,2,0,L|488:232,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,184,219095,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,76,219470,6,0,P|396:84|348:80,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,28,220220,2,0,P|264:68|280:152,1,110
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68,204,221720,2,0,P|60:272|60:320,1,110
152,372,222470,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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140,64,223595,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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468,48,224720,1,2,0:0:0:0:
500,152,225095,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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112,120,228657,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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396,32,231095,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,140,231470,1,4,0:0:0:0:

tutuhaha wrote:

[Easy]
00:13:970 (1) - weird rhythm Following those guitar background music.
00:52:970 (1) - ^ ^
well same problem wouldnt repeat again I got them, but kept some of it.
..actually I think you should use whistle to instead clap, like what other diffs did. Not intended to add claps, but at least some are on kiai times and some tracks.

ZZHBOY wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:00:470 (1,3) - set soft sample set on their tail because there have no drum sound Tried my best here, but going to use a whistle for now.
2. 00:10:595 - add a circle to follow the music? Yeah, but i'll keep this rhythm to avoid replete of clicking in Easy diff.
3. 00:58:595 - ^ ^
4. 01:06:470 (3) - move right a little to avoid overlap? Sure

Shad0w1and wrote:

MV包：http://pan.baidu.com/s/1lOvhW
Offset對於你現在的MP3：-3109ms
矯正后的MV：http://pan.baidu.com/s/1dDAKLtZ
offset：-6

Easy 略。。慢死了

[Normal]
00:13:782 (4,1,2,3,4) - 滑條盡量白綫起，這裏反人類我掉了3次。Normal最好不要這麽追變奏
00:26:345 (1) - 這個滑條明顯始于00:26:720 - 更好
音效貌似有些單調，還有感覺用不着弄這麽多音量級別
note整體感覺和我的感覺有些不同，可能需要大改？我會這麽下：00:55:970 - 開始（沒有排列，衹看我的節奏就好）

SPOILER

[Hard]
排列很單調，需要更大膽
01:10:970 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 很亂
01:10:782 (4,1) - 分開，DS不需要釘死，Hard以上講究視覺DS（滑條距離note的距離而不是首位距離），盡量不要像這種重叠
節奏基本對了，音效有點單調，主要就是排列有問題，基本要全部重調，和我的圖一樣Orz

[Insane]
01:17:532 (4) - 可以改滑條 这边是两个三角跳梗
01:17:907 (5,6,7) - 不要弄成大跳 思考。。。我觉得还可以吧。。。
01:18:470 (1,2,3,4,5) - 考慮更大膽 我觉得这里差不多够了其实。。。再大会比较难打
01:19:782 (1) - 轉個方向
01:20:720 (2,3,4,5) - 不太贊同變DS 还是想给一种加速的感觉，毕竟曲子是在渐增嘛w
總體DS太亂。。不是特殊段落的話，建議遵循 分小節按ds固定值擺，滑條按固定相隔距離擺（非DS）嗯，我回去看看

Crystal wrote:

mod insane and hard as you requested

[Info]

1. Red: Unrankable Issues
2. Bold: Highly Recommended
3. Black: Personal Suggestions

[General]

1. AIR's Normal' ---> AIR's Normal 这也太不仔细了吧;w;

[Insane]

1. 总的来说，有一些间距放的很难读。比如01:08:345 (2,3) - ，这种1/1停顿要么stack起来要么把3放在352|288之类的地方显示节奏。还有一些一样的问题就不详细说了 fixed。
2. 一些nazi的stack,blanket等等就不提了，建议先好好检查一下。 猴w
3. 00:03:845 (2,3,4) - 都加finish太吵了 下面那个改了，这个暂时保留一下。。。
4. 00:04:970 (1) - 应该加finish的没加
5. 00:13:782 (4,5,1) - ctrl+G? 不太影响flow但是感觉明显好多了 这里是打算给一种反向flow的感觉。。。
6. 00:28:782 (6,7,1) - 间距不对吧 这种比较丑 stack起来了
7. 01:00:657 (2) - 这个换成2个大间距circle可以会比较好 可以强调这里重音 (后面的也一样) 感觉没啥必要。。。观望一下
8. 01:11:907 (5) - NC fixed
9. 01:18:282 (7,1,2,3,4) - 这里间距看不清，先前的712会让人以为后面的都是1/2，所以建议4不要stack 可以放在别的地方，3也放远点 (相似的，01:57:095 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ) orz 这个梗的想法就是stack住4，所以似乎是没什么办法。。。我再看看好了，谢谢！
10. 01:32:345 (2,3) - 分别放在176|128 128|40可能会更好点 后面的pattern一般是甩尾flow的感觉 这里还是和前面一节的梗对应了一下。。。
11. 01:42:470 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ;w;间距好难读 4可以stack在3，或者放在176|72之类然后把6对称一下 把4stack了，谢谢！
12. 01:45:470 (1) - 改成两个circle以突出重音 间距有点难搞。。。
13. 02:58:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 123456的时候是1/2有间隔的，后面是均匀1/2... 可是为什么要用一样的排列呢? 修改方案见 01:18:282 这里的梗想给一种延续的感觉orz 可能搞得不太好，我再看看好了
14. 排列问题还需要多下工夫。

[Hard]

1. 00:03:845 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 音效问题同Insane
2. 00:13:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 排列问题类似于Insane
3. 00:53:720 (2) - 建议滑条缩短到上一个白线，在原来的结尾处+个circle
4. 03:05:532 (2,3,4) - 有点难看,建议试试这个http://puu.sh/e0gef/ada23a0a0c.jpg
5. 03:24:470 (1) - 从03:24:095开始吧

good luck.

tutuhaha wrote:

[Insane]
00:02:157 (1,2,3) - 间距搞一样咯 fixed
00:05:345 (2,3) - 00:05:720 (5,6) - 间距统一 fixed
00:06:095 (6) - clap fixed
00:11:720 (4) - ctrl+g fixed
00:22:595 (5,6) - ..这俩不能覆盖好么强迫症伤不起啊fixed
00:24:470 (1,2,3,4) - 这里都用同一间距比较好 fixed 后面被迫动了两小节。。。
00:26:345 (3) - 00:27:095 (6) - clap fixed
00:31:595 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - ..clap呢fixed
00:42:470 (1) - 这个可以换成circle比较好 fixed
00:46:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ..间距稍微统一一下咯 fixed
00:48:845 (2) - 00:49:595 (4) - 这俩都可以ctrl+g一下 fixed
00:56:720 (5,6) - - delete fixed
00:59:720 (5) - delete fixed
01:02:720 (3) - delete fixed
01:05:720 (4) - delete fixed
01:17:907 (5,6,7) - 间距要不统一要不和01:16:970 (1,2,3,4) - 一样间距差拉开一点 fixed
01:21:470 (1,2,3,4) - 间距统一咯 这里我倒觉得还可以啊。。
....然后你的固定间距是啥？就是不跳的时候的间距，因为你用的间距太杂所以搞得整个谱面很混乱 orz 我去复查
01:48:470 (1,2) - 前面都是跳这边统一一下 猴。。。fixed
02:01:220 (3,4) - delete fixed
02:04:220 (3) - delete fixed
02:07:220 (5) - deletefixed
02:16:220 (5) - delete fixed
02:28:970 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ...蛮有趣的节奏处理成这样有点可惜，找点好玩点的方法咯 思考。。。暂时没想好怎么玩，先放着好了w
02:46:970 (5,1,2) - 间距统一 这样摆似乎flow比较顺。。。先观望
03:02:720 (4,5) - delete fixed
03:05:720 (5) - delete fixed
03:07:595 (4) - clap fixed
03:08:720 (5) - delete fixed
03:14:720 (5) - 保留红线上节奏 fixed
03:14:720 (5) - delete fixed
[Hard]
总而言之最大的问题就是间距啦........很混乱所以搞得整个铺面有点...乱
00:16:970 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 统一间距 fixed
00:47:720 (3,4,1,2,3) - ...丑..间距搞一样 fixed
00:50:720 (2,3) - 拉开一点比较好看 fixed
01:12:282 (5) - 这个三连我觉得没啥必要.. 这个节奏还是跟ins一样的。。。
01:28:407 (x) - +note fixed
02:12:470 (1) - 为啥从这里要用比前面更大的间距呢？...完全没必要啊.. 这个三角跳变小一点好了。。。
02:26:720 (2,3,4) - 统一间距 fixed
02:38:532 (2,3,4,1) - ^ fixed
02:39:470 (1,2,3,4) - ^ fixed
02:40:970 (1,2) - 真想搞对称间距也得和前面至少看起来差不多_(:зゝ∠)_ fixed
03:19:876 (8) - 这个我觉得可以delete掉 前面都是三连节奏，我还是继续三连吧orz
细节决定成败啊
就像sjoy说的没必要的梗不需要搞太多，首先这个音乐属于平缓类型的，这就注定了它肯定不会用到过多的梗
[Easy]
00:13:970 (1) - weird rhythm
00:52:970 (1) - ^
well same problem wouldnt repeat again
..actually I think you should use whistle to instead clap, like what other diffs did.
[Normal]
节奏塞太满了，有些地方我不大懂你是在跟人声还是音乐
00:17:345 (1) - 在0017720处结尾
00:17:907 (2) - 然后再在这里加note因为后面的节奏和这块是相同的所以要保持一致如果你真的想在这里拖拍那么后面也得拖
00:26:345 (1,2) - ^一样
^然后改了上面这个后你会发现跟红线音会非常奇怪所以把红线音移回白线
最后这边的节奏就会变成这样
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2512585
00:43:220 (6) - delete
00:43:407 (x) -
00:43:595 (x) - 然后在这两个地方rhythm
00:45:845 (4) - 4移到这里
我这样的改法是把你主要的节奏效果放在人声上，你这样一半跟人声一半跟背景音真的很奇怪
00:55:970 (1) - kiai这里开始的这个节奏我觉得改成这样比较合适
osu.ppy.sh/ss/2512601
00:58:970 (1) - 然后这里的节奏改成这样
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2512605
就是主要跟人声啦其实，后面的节奏基本上都是一模一样的改法了就不一个个说了

tutuhaha wrote:

[Insane]
00:02:157 (1,2,3) - 间距搞一样咯
00:05:345 (2,3) - 00:05:720 (5,6) - 间距统一
00:06:095 (6) - clap
00:11:720 (4) - ctrl+g
00:22:595 (5,6) - ..这俩不能覆盖好么强迫症伤不起啊
00:24:470 (1,2,3,4) - 这里都用同一间距比较好
00:26:345 (3) - 00:27:095 (6) - clap
00:31:595 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - ..clap呢
00:42:470 (1) - 这个可以换成circle比较好
00:46:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ..间距稍微统一一下咯
00:48:845 (2) - 00:49:595 (4) - 这俩都可以ctrl+g一下
00:56:720 (5,6) - - delete
00:59:720 (5) - delete
01:02:720 (3) - delete
01:05:720 (4) - delete
01:17:907 (5,6,7) - 间距要不统一要不和01:16:970 (1,2,3,4) - 一样间距差拉开一点
01:21:470 (1,2,3,4) - 间距统一咯
....然后你的固定间距是啥？就是不跳的时候的间距，因为你用的间距太杂所以搞得整个谱面很混乱
01:48:470 (1,2) - 前面都是跳这边统一一下
02:01:220 (3,4) - delete
02:04:220 (3) - delete
02:07:220 (5) - delete
02:16:220 (5) - delete
02:28:970 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ...蛮有趣的节奏处理成这样有点可惜，找点好玩点的方法咯
02:46:970 (5,1,2) - 间距统一
03:02:720 (4,5) - delete
03:05:720 (5) - delete
03:07:595 (4) - clap
03:08:720 (5) - delete
03:14:720 (5) - 保留红线上节奏
03:14:720 (5) - delete
[Hard]
总而言之最大的问题就是间距啦........很混乱所以搞得整个铺面有点...乱
00:16:970 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 统一间距
00:47:720 (3,4,1,2,3) - ...丑..间距搞一样
00:50:720 (2,3) - 拉开一点比较好看
01:12:282 (5) - 这个三连我觉得没啥必要..
01:28:407 (x) - +note
02:12:470 (1) - 为啥从这里要用比前面更大的间距呢？...完全没必要啊..
02:26:720 (2,3,4) - 统一间距
02:38:532 (2,3,4,1) - ^
02:39:470 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:40:970 (1,2) - 真想搞对称间距也得和前面至少看起来差不多_(:зゝ∠)_
03:19:876 (8) - 这个我觉得可以delete掉
细节决定成败啊
就像sjoy说的没必要的梗不需要搞太多，首先这个音乐属于平缓类型的，这就注定了它肯定不会用到过多的梗
[Easy]
00:13:970 (1) - weird rhythm
00:52:970 (1) - ^
well same problem wouldnt repeat again
..actually I think you should use whistle to instead clap, like what other diffs did.
[Normal]
节奏塞太满了，有些地方我不大懂你是在跟人声还是音乐
00:17:345 (1) - 在0017720处结尾
00:17:907 (2) - 然后再在这里加note因为后面的节奏和这块是相同的所以要保持一致如果你真的想在这里拖拍那么后面也得拖
00:26:345 (1,2) - ^一样
^然后改了上面这个后你会发现跟红线音会非常奇怪所以把红线音移回白线
最后这边的节奏就会变成这样
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2512585
00:43:220 (6) - delete
00:43:407 (x) -
00:43:595 (x) - 然后在这两个地方rhythm
00:45:845 (4) - 4移到这里
我这样的改法是把你主要的节奏效果放在人声上，你这样一半跟人声一半跟背景音真的很奇怪
00:55:970 (1) - kiai这里开始的这个节奏我觉得改成这样比较合适
osu.ppy.sh/ss/2512601
00:58:970 (1) - 然后这里的节奏改成这样
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2512605
就是主要跟人声啦其实，后面的节奏基本上都是一模一样的改法了就不一个个说了

sjoy wrote:

摸摸摸 我懒就看看最高难度好了
[Insane]
00:13:032 (2) - 这个放在00:13:407 (3) - 擦边感觉更好 这里还是想着跟前面的间距的。。。
00:37:970 (1,2,3,4) - 你这里跟电子琴 后面8个单点又跟鼓给人 感觉很突兀 诶多。。。这里的鼓特别想跟，前面也跟鼓好像又不合适。。。所以就这样了orz不过后面也是这样跟的，应该问题不大吧
00:41:345这里怎么空了 有点难受 这里跟的是人声和那个不知道是什么乐器（乐痴的我）
00:56:720 (5,6,7) - 白线的3连感觉有点难受 建议 删 6 45连成滑条 这里已经改掉惹，不过变成了空拍;w;
01:08:907 (3) - 这个放那么近 又空拍 感觉很奇怪 fixed
01:22:782这节的CLAP 怎么美丽 fixed
01:37:220 (2) - 太近了 fixed
01:44:157 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这个梗的DS有点太夸张了又 不是什么KIAI段落 比KIAI还大感觉不合曲 orz这梗跟前面00:37:970 (1,2,3,4)这里后面的梗是对应的，节奏下的也一样。。。
02:01:220 (3,4,5) - 同前面那个3连 fixed
02:47:720 (2) - 这里我觉得应该放大距离 而不是那么近 fixed 增大了一点间距。。。不过因为后面是break还是用的统一间距
03:14:720 (5,6) - 分别CTRL+G 啊这里改掉了
说实话 我感觉有些 梗是为了梗而梗的
00:55:970 (1,2,3,4) - 这种 稍微改了
01:02:720 (3,4,5,6) - 这种 这里改掉啦
02:13:876 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 这种 orz
给我的感觉大概是恩这段部分 让我想个梗塞进去吧
然后就赛进去了，我觉得作图不用特意是想梗赛 凭感觉有时候真的不错 可能还是火候没到吧orz
希望对你有所帮助~

imoutosan wrote:

[Easy]
00:01:595 (2,3) - I prefer remove 2 and let 3 begin at redline. It might be confusing to beginners, as so an off-beat. So i'll keep this to keep it 'easy' for them.
00:13:970 (1) - shorten the slider. reverse at redline will be better. This can also improve the blanket. Well, few modders said this, so i'll change it.
01:18:470 (1) - begin at 01:18:282 - ? It'd sound off the rhythm, i can hear the vocals starts there, but i don't mainly following vocals as always.
02:22:970 (1) - ^ ^

02:12:470 (1) - looks not good. try this? and don't forget move the latter pattern Okay, will give a try.

rotated anticlockwise 15°

http://puu.sh/fpfDD/778b237a58.jpg

03:00:470 (1) - shorten the slider. let it begin at 03:00:657 - Okay, but not on your suggested rhythm place.

1. 00:13:970 (1) - ... wtf
2. no drum hit sound for the drums, why?
3. 00:52:970 (1) - ... the rhythm is weird
4. 01:07:970 (1) - ds
5. 01:15:095 (2) - ^
6. 01:57:470 (1) - this rhythm isnt fitting the music, however 2/1 will be great to use
7. 02:46:970 (1) - same,the rhythm is not fitting, because the second vocal sound is at 02:47:720 but your rhythm is 02:47:626

1. nc有点乱，建议两小节一nc
2. 00:34:970 (1,2,3) - 你在nm overmap 真的大丈夫？
3. 00:50:345 (2,3) - 不直
4. 01:39:470 (5,1) - overlap
5. 02:19:782 (4,5,6) - 什么鬼节奏
6. 02:21:470 (1,2,3,4
7. ,5) - ^要跟vocal就跟到底啊你这样是shenmegui
8. 02:29:532 (2) - 加note，滑条 02:29:720 开始
9. 02:30:470 (3,4) - ^ 同理，自己推
10. 02:43:970 (3) - 不nc吗
11. 02:49:970 (7) - 我觉得这里上finish反而不好，这里比较适合whistle

1. 你这diff除了kiai音效全部美丽
2. 真的不适合ar8，ar7.6很好
3. 00:13:970 (4) - nc
4. 00:13:970 (4,5,6) - 就这样重复放梗？我觉得第三个的ds怎么书都要比前面的大
5. 00:52:970 (1,2) - 你这样两个长滑条弄在音乐这么激列的地方真的好吗
6. 00:54:657 (1,2,3) - ^，这里应该搞一点跳，前面都比这里跳
7. 01:12:282 (5,3) - 这里吉他没有1/4吧，你在hard就不要这样overmap
8. 01:33:470 (1,2) - blanket
9. 02:16:220 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - 对于hard来说很难啊
10. 02:24:470 (1,3) - overlap
11. 02:43:970 (5) - 放绿线都不nc？
12. 02:43:970 (5) - 这之后音乐比前面激烈很多，你跳一点
13. 03:06:845 (1,2) - hard这样有点难读，毕竟你前面都是1/2spam这里突然停一下，玩家：shenmegui
14. 03:20:907 (4,1) - ^，还有遮挡，玛雅
15. 03:22:782 (4,5,6) - 这里没有四分吧
16. 03:30:095 (3,1) - 这种梗最好不要放

1. ar8.5
2. 很多flow不舒服，建议亲自test
3. 节奏问题一堆，不要突然就来一个1/1或者2/1
4. 在kiai跳的时候突然来个antijump简直不能玩
5. 只能用这些东西概括了，我觉得质量还真不行，慢慢改

1. 00:00:470 (1,2) - 这种四个音差不多强度的，避免用两个滑条，你可以用四个单点或者三个单点加一个滑条。滑条尾部的表现力是很弱的，和滑条头完全不能比，你用滑条来表现这里的音乐就显然不合曲子了。类似的地方比如01:01:970 (1,2) - 02:00:470 (1,2) - 02:03:470 (1,2) - 03:01:970 (2,3) - 等等
2. 00:44:345 (2) - 去掉算了，你既然要跟特定的音轨就少串轨，像00:41:345 - 一样留空拍。00:44:345 (2) - 这些类似的都一样。
3. 00:48:470 (1,2,3,4) - 这个梗本身flow不是很好，略绕手。将2和4分别ctrl+g换首尾
4. 00:56:532 - 这里是kiai需要强调的一个音，我建议KIAI里不要设置比如00:56:720 - 00:59:720 - 这些空拍，这些打破了本应具备的连贯性
   。我建议：http://puu.sh/fUsS1/3dad67bbfa.jpg
5. 01:05:532 (3,4) - 如果想突出这里的停顿感的话建议增加01:05:345 (2,3) - 两者的间距，因为01:05:532 - 这个点音强，需要一个大间距的支持。
6. 01:06:470 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里适合用四个一组交错来回跳的梗，顺flow绕的跳梗不是很好...类似这样（相对位置，非绝对位置）: http://puu.sh/fUty7/ed648ca672.jpg
7. 01:25:032 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 外圈正三角形摆摆正
8. 01:28:970 (1,2,3,4) - 这组梗，从1到3都是角度越来越逆时针，为何3到4不是逆时针而是顺时针偏了很多呢？这就破坏了这个梗。摆个跟我建议在00:48:470 (1,2,3,4) - 类似的梗
9. 01:45:282 (7) - 虽然知道你要摆这样一个梗，但是7摆这么远从表现音乐上和可玩性上来说不足。这这就导致梗不合曲。设计梗的时候首要考虑其合曲性，再来考虑梗本身的造型
10. 01:48:470 (4) - 加nc nazi
11. 02:44:532 (4) - 滑条起了别扭，因为这重音都是在白线，你起了红线滑条的话白线就到表现力十分虚弱、又没打击感的滑条尾了
12. 02:46:970 (5,1,2,3) - 这几个可以避免用滑条，像之前那样两个两个circle的跳，比如01:57:470 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

Alex Li wrote:

from my q

[Veyron's Easy]

1. 00:13:970 (1) - ... wtf wot
2. no drum hit sound for the drums, why? Because to emphasize with song track.
3. 00:52:970 (1) - ... the rhythm is weird Tried to follow the simple vocals, so that is the results
4. 01:07:970 (1) - ds Okay
5. 01:15:095 (2) - ^ Okay
6. 01:57:470 (1) - this rhythm isnt fitting the music, however 2/1 will be great to use Will give a try
7. 02:46:970 (1) - same,the rhythm is not fitting, because the second vocal sound is at 02:47:720 but your rhythm is 02:47:626 Okay

gl