LucyS wrote:

Hello Hello!
M4M Returning

[Eazy]
Nice

[Normal]
Spacing inconsistent hue, If you want to rank this you Will need to fix.
00:20:801 (5,1) - This for example, too close. fixed
01:05:601 (2,1) - ^ fixed
01:16:801 - Heavy beat, add a note fixed

[Hard]
I think is no problem if you follow the piano and the "other instrument" (I dunno the name), but sometimes you are following nothing >.< If you listen carefully the song you'll notice that you're putting notes when there is no need and skipping important beats.
A thing you can notice in this "other instrument": it's always appears in the following beats > 00:03:601 - 00:03:801 - 00:04:201 - 00:04:401 - so you can use this pattern in all the song.
Well, you can improve this a lot, especially in the rhythm. I can't point everything so I'll suggest some, try to use what you learn from them in the whole map c: okay ._.
Don't forget to fix the placement after.
00:04:801 - This rhythm doesn't fits with the song, Try this http://puu.sh/eEskz/3eef45ac70.jpg There is no Piano here so you can follow this "other instrument" fixed i think
00:08:801 (5) - We can't hear a thing here, so delete this circle. fixed
00:17:201 (3) - replace this for a single circle at 00:17:201 - same reason ^ fixed
00:27:601 - Heavy beat here, add a note. fixed
01:38:001 - Same ^ fixed
00:42:401 (2,3) - Move these two sliders together to 00:42:201 - Like I said before We can't hear a thing here 00:43:001 - fixed
00:46:001 (2,3,4) - ^ This rhythm, doesn't make sense, here you should add notes at 00:45:801 - , 00:46:001 - and 00:46:401 - , if you want to add two slider like this you should add at 00:45:201 - If you listen the music you'll know why. fixed
00:49:201 (2,3,4) - Again, try move this three to 00:48:601 - and add a slider here 00:49:201 - fixed
00:56:801 (3,4) - Move these two to 00:56:601 - fixed
01:22:001 - Try this rhythm: http://puu.sh/eEJUh/3a4ebb390a.jpg fixed
01:23:801 - Add a note here? fixed
01:30:401 (5,6,7) - Move them to 01:30:201 - and add a note 01:31:201 - fixed
01:39:201 (1,3) - Fix this Stack fixed
01:56:601 (6) - Move this circle to 01:55:801 - fixed
02:03:201 (3,1) - Disable the grid snap and fix the stack on the tail. fixed
02:16:001 (4) - replace for a single circle at 02:16:001 - and add a note here 02:16:601 fixed

Good Luck!!

• Easy
  
  00:40:801 (1) - You could try to blanket that with - 00:42:401 (2)
  01:08:801 (3) - That slider looks squeezed.
  02:10:601 (3) - Move the middle node one to the right, it'll look curiver around the next note.
  
  Pretty neat difficulty!

• Normal
  
  00:11:201 (4) - That slider looks strange, but well, opinions are different.
  00:25:601 (5) - I think this note after that - 00:24:801 (4) - is out of flow.
  00:38:001 (6,8) - Since you can't see that overlap while playing it's not a problem. But you can see it in the editor and I just wanted to point that out.
  00:43:201 (4) - Move to X288 Y104 so it's in the exact middle of the slider. (On the white tick in the slider)
  00:48:801 (4,5) - You could move these two one down so they are on the same high. (Y332)
  01:19:201 (7) - Move that slider one down so it's more symmetrical with - 01:18:401 (6)
  01:35:601 (2,3) - You could try to improve that blanket.
  01:38:401 (2,3) - ^
  01:48:401 (2,3) - ^
  02:01:601 (2) - Move the third node to X124 Y172 so it's curvier.
  02:10:001 (4,6) - These are overlapping.

• Hard
  
  You should definitly use DS more often.
  
  00:42:401 (2,3,4,5) - What's up with the DS here?
  00:54:001 (2,3) - Why are these so close if they are exactly like that - 00:53:201 (1,2)
  01:36:001 (3) - That slider looks weird.
  01:40:801 (5) - Move to X206 Y29 so it's like - 01:38:001 (5)
  02:06:401 (4) - You could try to move that in the middle of these two - 02:05:201 (1,2)

G3m4sSt4ffLP wrote:

Hi! M4M from my queue :3 Hi!
And like every mod, these are just suggestions, so ignore them or correct me, if you think I'm wrong with something.

• Easy
  
  00:40:801 (1) - You could try to blanket that with - 00:42:401 (2) fixed
  01:08:801 (3) - That slider looks squeezed. fixed
  02:10:601 (3) - Move the middle node one to the right, it'll look curiver around the next note. fixed
  
  Pretty neat difficulty!

• Normal
  
  00:11:201 (4) - That slider looks strange, but well, opinions are different. fixed
  00:25:601 (5) - I think this note after that - 00:24:801 (4) - is out of flow. fixed, with other way, i think
  00:38:001 (6,8) - Since you can't see that overlap while playing it's not a problem. But you can see it in the editor and I just wanted to point that out. fixed
  00:43:201 (4) - Move to X288 Y104 so it's in the exact middle of the slider. (On the white tick in the slider) fixed
  00:48:801 (4,5) - You could move these two one down so they are on the same high. (Y332) fixed
  01:19:201 (7) - Move that slider one down so it's more symmetrical with - 01:18:401 (6) fixed
  01:35:601 (2,3) - You could try to improve that blanket. fixed
  01:38:401 (2,3) - ^ fixed
  01:48:401 (2,3) - ^ fixed
  02:01:601 (2) - Move the third node to X124 Y172 so it's curvier. fixed
  02:10:001 (4,6) - These are overlapping. fixed

• Hard
  
  You should definitly use DS more often.
  
  00:42:401 (2,3,4,5) - What's up with the DS here? fixed
  00:54:001 (2,3) - Why are these so close if they are exactly like that - 00:53:201 (1,2) fixed
  01:36:001 (3) - That slider looks weird. fixed
  01:40:801 (5) - Move to X206 Y29 so it's like - 01:38:001 (5) fixed
  02:06:401 (4) - You could try to move that in the middle of these two - 02:05:201 (1,2) fixed

That's it with my mod! Good luck! ^^

• 00:16:001 (1,2) - Why not just copy and paste then Cntrl+H?
  01:13:601 - Insert break?
  01:58:001 (1) - Remove NC and add NC on 01:58:801 (2) It fits the music more
  02:11:201 (6) - NC

• 00:07:201 (1) - This is really awkward after the silence that comes before it. I'd really prefer to hear a note on 00:06:801 and 00:07:001. For example
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:46:001 (3,4) - The space increass here seems to happen for no reason. The increase at 00:46:401 (4,5) is at least reasonable but here it seems like a bit too much.
  01:00:801 (1) - Spacing here, uncalled for increase in space, but I see what your trying to do here. Moving to X:332 , Y:112 would be nice.
  01:02:001 (2) - In addition to above, you can also move this to X:148 , Y:148 which will create nice flow here.
  01:30:601 (6,7) - Unstack? You never stacked them whenever you did this pattern before so it feels odd.
  01:50:401 (6) - Shouldn't there be NC here instead of 01:50:801 (1)?

Gleipnir wrote:

M4M
Normal
---------------------------

• 00:16:001 (1,2) - Why not just copy and paste then Cntrl+H? fixed
  01:13:601 - Insert break? fixed
  01:58:001 (1) - Remove NC and add NC on 01:58:801 (2) It fits the music more fixed
  02:11:201 (6) - NC fixed

Hard
---------------------------

• 00:07:201 (1) - This is really awkward after the silence that comes before it. I'd really prefer to hear a note on 00:06:801 and 00:07:001. For example
  
  SPOILER

  
  fixed
  00:46:001 (3,4) - The space increass here seems to happen for no reason. The increase at 00:46:401 (4,5) is at least reasonable but here it seems like a bit too much. fixed
  01:00:801 (1) - Spacing here, uncalled for increase in space, but I see what your trying to do here. Moving to X:332 , Y:112 would be nice. fixed
  01:02:001 (2) - In addition to above, you can also move this to X:148 , Y:148 which will create nice flow here. fixed
  01:30:601 (6,7) - Unstack? You never stacked them whenever you did this pattern before so it feels odd. fixed
  01:50:401 (6) - Shouldn't there be NC here instead of 01:50:801 (1)? fixed

Nice song and mapping style. Good luck! thx :3
You don't have to waste time responding if your don't want to.

-Mo- wrote:

You've made some pretty neat progress here.

☆

1. Add soft-sliderslide? you know it's a bit odd when you hear the slider body sound e.g. on Easy 02:11:201 (3) - Hear closer on that slider especialy on 02:12:801 -
2. Add this file http://puu.sh/f7KCr/7a2355669e.wav as your custom normal-hitclap? and re-name normal-hitwhistle into normal-hitfinish? because I think it's lack of finish sound and default normal-hitwhistle probably fine with this kind of calm song

1. AR+1?
2. 00:20:801 (1) - I think you miss strong piano sound at 00:21:601 - how about make the rhythm like this? http://puu.sh/f7MbD/e9822bcb7b.jpg so it can have same rhythm as 00:15:201 (4,1) -
3. 00:27:601 (1) - Actually same reason as above, how about change into 1/2 slider with repeat? http://puu.sh/f7MAV/397d966214.jpg to fill the strong piano sound on 00:28:001 - http://puu.sh/f7MKR/3f40d34639.jpg
4. 00:49:601 (3) - Make that a curve instead? to make a paralel with 00:51:201 (1) -
5. 00:51:201 (1) - Remove NC
6. 01:08:801 (3,4) - How about change the rhythm, you can delete those and replace with 1/1 slider http://puu.sh/f7NgZ/ae1cbaabbb.jpg because I think the note on 01:09:201 - not necesarry there's no piano sound on that one
7. 01:28:401 (6) - Make that a straight one? I know you want make a blanket between (5) and (6) but the slider border below on (6) is not seen, it's hard to tell where the slider goes
8. 01:31:601 (2) - How about change the rhythm into something like this one 00:27:601 (8,1) -
9. 01:50:401 (3,4,5) - For some reason I don't like that pattern
10. 02:14:401 (1,1) - About that one, some modders might say it's to sudden between that slider and spinner maybe at least you need a proper time befor that last spinner, how about to end the slider here 02:16:001 - based on musicality so it'll have time before the last spinner

1. 00:28:801 (1,2) - How about make the (2) a curve? to make a paralel with (1)?
2. 00:52:001 (2) - How about you rotate that 40 degree and rotate this 00:52:801 (3) - 10 degree, the image after you do the change http://puu.sh/f7QcB/c07fc0e5f2.jpg or maybe you can make something similiar
3. 01:44:401 (4,5) - You can blanket them
4. 02:13:601 (4) - Ctrl+H and palce on x:348 y:112, and adjust the next note spacing
5. 02:14:401 (1,1) - Same sugestion as Easy about that slider spinner

1. 00:05:601 - Add note there? It feel not comfy with that circles that stop and start on blue tick
2. 00:08:801 - Same
3. 00:22:801 (4,5) - The rhythm a bit odd, maybe this one better http://puu.sh/f7RJH/81cd1a9a31.jpg
4. 00:32:401 (2,3) - Same
5. 01:36:001 (3) - That slider kinda out of place, so suddenly pop up, why don't you use simple curve slider
6. 01:49:801 - Add note there? the curent rhythm a bit odd
7. 01:59:801 (6) - I'm sure there's no 1/8 sound there, just a bit overmapped imo
8. 02:11:601 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Why don't you make a rectangle jump instead, why you put this same place as 02:12:401 (3) -

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hellooo M4M from your queue~ Hi!

[General]

1. Add soft-sliderslide? you know it's a bit odd when you hear the slider body sound e.g. on Easy 02:11:201 (3) - Hear closer on that slider especialy on 02:12:801 - fixed
2. Add this file http://puu.sh/f7KCr/7a2355669e.wav as your custom normal-hitclap? and re-name normal-hitwhistle into normal-hitfinish? because I think it's lack of finish sound and default normal-hitwhistle probably fine with this kind of calm song It's fine how it is now. sorry :/

[Easy]

1. AR+1? Changed to 1.5
2. 00:20:801 (1) - I think you miss strong piano sound at 00:21:601 - how about make the rhythm like this? http://puu.sh/f7MbD/e9822bcb7b.jpg so it can have same rhythm as 00:15:201 (4,1) - fixed
3. 00:27:601 (1) - Actually same reason as above, how about change into 1/2 slider with repeat? http://puu.sh/f7MAV/397d966214.jpg to fill the strong piano sound on 00:28:001 - http://puu.sh/f7MKR/3f40d34639.jpg fixed
4. 00:49:601 (3) - Make that a curve instead? to make a paralel with 00:51:201 (1) - fixed
5. 00:51:201 (1) - Remove NC fixed
6. 01:08:801 (3,4) - How about change the rhythm, you can delete those and replace with 1/1 slider http://puu.sh/f7NgZ/ae1cbaabbb.jpg because I think the note on 01:09:201 - not necesarry there's no piano sound on that one fixed
7. 01:28:401 (6) - Make that a straight one? I know you want make a blanket between (5) and (6) but the slider border below on (6) is not seen, it's hard to tell where the slider goes fixed, I think
8. 01:31:601 (2) - How about change the rhythm into something like this one 00:27:601 (8,1) - fixed
9. 01:50:401 (3,4,5) - For some reason I don't like that pattern so nothing to fix
10. 02:14:401 (1,1) - About that one, some modders might say it's to sudden between that slider and spinner maybe at least you need a proper time befor that last spinner, how about to end the slider here 02:16:001 - based on musicality so it'll have time before the last spinner we'll see what future holds

[Normal]

1. 00:28:801 (1,2) - How about make the (2) a curve? to make a paralel with (1)? fixed, I think
2. 00:52:001 (2) - How about you rotate that 40 degree and rotate this 00:52:801 (3) - 10 degree, the image after you do the change http://puu.sh/f7QcB/c07fc0e5f2.jpg or maybe you can make something similiar fixed
3. 01:44:401 (4,5) - You can blanket them fixed
4. 02:13:601 (4) - Ctrl+H and palce on x:348 y:112, and adjust the next note spacing Changed other way
5. 02:14:401 (1,1) - Same sugestion as Easy about that slider spinner same ^

[Hard]

1. 00:05:601 - Add note there? It feel not comfy with that circles that stop and start on blue tick no, it follows rhythm, that why
2. 00:08:801 - Same same ^
3. 00:22:801 (4,5) - The rhythm a bit odd, maybe this one better http://puu.sh/f7RJH/81cd1a9a31.jpg I like more the way how it is now
4. 00:32:401 (2,3) - Same same^
5. 01:36:001 (3) - That slider kinda out of place, so suddenly pop up, why don't you use simple curve slider you don't like it? D: , maybe better to change it ;_;
6. 01:49:801 - Add note there? the curent rhythm a bit odd I consider this
7. 01:59:801 (6) - I'm sure there's no 1/8 sound there, just a bit overmapped imo I'll wait for future mods
8. 02:11:601 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Why don't you make a rectangle jump instead, why you put this same place as 02:12:401 (3) - sorry, I like it how it is

[]
What I concern is the hitsound kinda mess up, and the flow could be improved somehow
That's all, good luck

Faan wrote:

From Faan's Best modding Q(insert sparkle)
fking dorothy3242 is the man

Easy:
00:10:801 - insert meme note fixed
00:39:201 (6,1) - this can be confusing as for Easy fixed
00:56:001 (2) - 56,303 for perfect distance fixed
01:58:401 (4,1) - slightly overlap in editor fixed
02:11:201 (3) - shorten to previous white tick fixed

idk maybe furthur reduce hitsound? lol
Pretty good overall

Normal:
01:08:001 (3,4,5,6) - stacking is somewhat pointless but you can keep it if you want keeping it
01:57:201 (3,4) - can blanket better if you want to fixed

Very Very good difficulty

Hard:
00:09:201 (8,1) - kinda bad flow fixed
00:09:601 (1,2,3) - distance between 1-2, and 2-3 is different. making this neater can look better.... a bit, but not changing wouldn't hurt much anyway so your choice fixed
00:23:801 - maybe insert note nope, it follows the rhythm

this is very welldone but however, the flow can be improved a bit Okay :d

good song nice map

1. please consider adding some hitsounds
2. i suggest you raise the volume in kiai
3. watch your nc's to make sure they're consistent, heres some you should fixed
   00:47:201 (1) - remove nc, and add nc to 00:48:001 (3) - , then remove nc at 00:48:801 (1) -
   --
   00:53:201 (1) - remove nc, add nc to 00:54:801 (3) - and remove nc from 00:55:201 (1) -
   --
   01:06:401 (1) - remove nc, add nc to 01:07:201 (3) - , remove from 01:08:801 (1) - and add to 01:10:401 (3) -
   -- my point for nc's being, you should have 1 new nc every measure (long white tick) not just randomly, please check your map over again
4. 00:56:001 (2,3,4) - this rhythm seems awkward, since 4 starts on a blue tick, why not something like this? http://puu.sh/fipHv/56ad71fb63.jpg
5. 01:10:401 (3) - 01:36:001 (3) - why this random long slider? why not map the music instead?
6. 01:21:601 (5,6) - it would be easier if these were a slider like 01:20:001 (2) - so its not as awkward to hit
7. 01:23:601 (2,3,4,5) - keep spacing consistent since they are all 1/4 apart
8. sliders like these 01:44:001 (6) - 01:45:601 (2) - have music playing on that spot, i think it would be better to map the music instead of a random slider
9. 01:59:801 (6) - this 1/8 slider definitely is not needed, just a circle at 02:00:001 - would work, this is overmapping lol
10. 02:14:201 (4) - same thing ^ except this slider isnt even snapped correctly, it would be safer to just have a circle

kakifly wrote:

mod on hard as discussed
(this is one of my favourite touhou songs, i really like senya's iro wa nioedo ^^)

1. please consider adding some hitsounds Okay
2. i suggest you raise the volume in kiai Fixed
3. watch your nc's to make sure they're consistent, heres some you should fixed Trying to
   00:47:201 (1) - remove nc, and add nc to 00:48:001 (3) - , then remove nc at 00:48:801 (1) - Fixed
   --
   00:53:201 (1) - remove nc, add nc to 00:54:801 (3) - and remove nc from 00:55:201 (1) - Fixed
   --
   01:06:401 (1) - remove nc, add nc to 01:07:201 (3) - , remove from 01:08:801 (1) - and add to 01:10:401 (3) - Fixed
   -- my point for nc's being, you should have 1 new nc every measure (long white tick) not just randomly, please check your map over again
4. 00:56:001 (2,3,4) - this rhythm seems awkward, since 4 starts on a blue tick, why not something like this? http://puu.sh/fipHv/56ad71fb63.jpg Fixed
5. 01:10:401 (3) - 01:36:001 (3) - why this random long slider? why not map the music instead? Fixed
6. 01:21:601 (5,6) - it would be easier if these were a slider like 01:20:001 (2) - so its not as awkward to hit Fixed
7. 01:23:601 (2,3,4,5) - keep spacing consistent since they are all 1/4 apart Fixed
8. sliders like these 01:44:001 (6) - 01:45:601 (2) - have music playing on that spot, i think it would be better to map the music instead of a random slider Fixed
9. 01:59:801 (6) - this 1/8 slider definitely is not needed, just a circle at 02:00:001 - would work, this is overmapping lol Fixed
10. 02:14:201 (4) - same thing ^ except this slider isnt even snapped correctly, it would be safer to just have a circle Fixed

cool diff but could still use some polishment, hope this helped

Thank you. It helped a lot!

lkx_Shore wrote:

Hello. Hi!

General

1. Fine.

Hard

1. Soft-clap is too clear for music imo... Okay, changed new file for it, I think it's better
2. 01:21:201 (3) - Normal-finish is not fit this quiet music... fixed
   Fine, Next time try more blanket (slider to slider) it can let ur compose more good looking. k

Normal

1. Fine.

Easy

1. Fine.

Others

Call me back.

Thanks!

smsh150 wrote:

downloaded this song.