1. When I did download, you have 2 picture, remove that " space_out_anime_girl-1920x1080 "
2. The combo color look like is default, I mean is not sense with this bg, you don't wanna change color ? I'm fine that, just saying you forget or is intentional

1. 01:02:789 (1) - remove clap in end

1. 00:17:998 (1,2,3) - I'm sorry I can't really approve this, because the SV is 1.20, bpm 140 and this diff is easy, when I play this part I feel that level more like Normal, that kindy hard, this need more easier rhythm, this part just hard
2. 00:19:712 (1,2,3) - ^ same
3. 00:21:427 (1) - the begin and end, that border is very near, I don't like it, why don't make large i mean like this http://puu.sh/hjmH4/8bd6502550.jpg is better IMO
4. 00:29:998 (5) - (nazi) one grid up to align with 00:29:141 (3) or is intentional ?
5. 00:46:075 (1,2,3) - I'm sorry, this is inconsistency spacing make consistency spacing, this diff is Easy
6. 01:25:503 (3) - same happen in 00:21:427 (1)

1. OD and HP need -0.5, the play look really better IMO try test play

1. 00:22:927 (5) - remove clap, just keep it consistency by you style
2. 00:26:355 (6) - ^ same
3. 00:56:361 (1) - Missing add finish in begin and end other diff's have but this doesn't.

1. 00:02:570 (1,2) - fix spacing. you should keep 1.20x
2. 00:13:712 (1,2,3) - I'm sorry this kindy big jump and inconsistency spacing is really hard for this diff, this is Normal, you should know as Level, fix this spacing
3. 00:22:070 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - just saying this part is only notes, the play is really hard and the rhythm is very weird, I feel the level is more hard because the click is too much and rhythm is very weird. Can you make more easier as Normal. I just saying this part is really hard
4. 00:39:218 (1,2) - I'm sorry, 1.90 for this diff ? no, this is normal, fix this spacing
5. 00:52:932 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - too much click, i prefer remove notes only 1/2 or do something you own to change this part
6. 00:59:361 (4,1,2) - big spacing...
7. 01:04:932 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - really really hard...
8. 01:12:646 (3,1,2) - 2.20x ...
9. 01:18:217 (4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - same happen before

1. 00:53:789 (4) - missing add finish, Explain before
2. 00:54:646 (1) - ^ same
3. 00:55:503 (4) - ^ same
4. 00:56:361 (1) - ^ same
5. 00:57:218 (3) - ^ same in begin
6. 00:58:075 (1,2,3,4) - missing all add finish

1. 00:06:855 (3) - need put nc, because you style you put NC every 1/1 look like you missing put NC this

1. 00:14:570 (4) - missing NC

1. You should totally resize the your bg to 1366x768 since it's a bit too big ></, so you should totally fix it imo

1. 00:23:570 (1) - I would remove this nc if i were you, since i don't think the melody changed here so yeah =3=/ i don't think it fit imo

1. 00:20:355 (4,5,6) - I really dislike how you placed the (5,6) here looks a bit random to me, and i mean how you spaced them, maybe you want to make them a bit like this instead, so it'll look a bit cleaner imo o.o
   
   
2. 00:40:075 (5,6,7) - ^
   
   
3. 00:41:789 (5,6,7) - ^
   
   
4. 00:43:503 (5,6,7) - ^
   
   
5. 00:46:932 (5,6,7) - ^
   
   
6. 00:48:646 (5,6,7) - ^
   
   
7. 00:50:361 (5,6,7) - ^
   
   
8. 00:52:503 (4,5,1) - ^
   
   
9. 00:54:218 (6,7,1) - ^
   
   
10. 00:55:932 (6,7,1) - ^
    
    
11. 01:04:932 (6) - I think this would play much nice with nc, and i still think it'll fit imo =3=/

Sekai-nyan wrote:

before moving this to qualify, let's fix some stuff o3o/

General:

1. You should totally resize the your bg to 1366x768 since it's a bit too big ></, so you should totally fix it imo

Easy:

1. 00:23:570 (1) - I would remove this nc if i were you, since i don't think the melody changed here so yeah =3=/ i don't think it fit imo

Insane:

1. 00:20:355 (4,5,6) - I really dislike how you placed the (5,6) here looks a bit random to me, and i mean how you spaced them, maybe you want to make them a bit like this instead, so it'll look a bit cleaner imo o.o
   
   
2. 00:40:075 (5,6,7) - ^
   
   
3. 00:41:789 (5,6,7) - ^
   
   
4. 00:43:503 (5,6,7) - ^
   
   
5. 00:46:932 (5,6,7) - ^
   
   
6. 00:48:646 (5,6,7) - ^
   
   
7. 00:50:361 (5,6,7) - ^
   
   
8. 00:52:503 (4,5,1) - ^
   
   
9. 00:54:218 (6,7,1) - ^
   
   
10. 00:55:932 (6,7,1) - ^
    
    
11. 01:04:932 (6) - I think this would play much nice with nc, and i still think it'll fit imo =3=/

everything i said here, just a suggestion, so just keep it in mind =w=/


good map as always ztrot <3 let me know when you're done with this o3o/

BeatofIke wrote:

Congrats ztrot

1. 00:45:646 (2) - This object is slightly offscreen as you can see here.
2. We understand that you didn't fully stick to the DS and based your overall patterns rather on symmetry than on distance snap. However some of those are not properly executed making them appear rather confusing and unpolished.
   Examples
   1. 00:19:284 (2,1) -
   2. 00:21:427 (1) -
   3. 01:13:075 (4,1) -

1. You have got some really big jumps in this difficulty without any significant emphasis within the music which makes them feel quite unpolished. Therefore we recommend you to nerf them.
   Examples
   1. 00:47:361 (6,1) -
   2. 01:01:075 (6,1) -

Mao wrote:

Yo,

unfortunately we had to disqualify this beatmap after some internal discussion for the following reason:

[Easy]

1. 00:45:646 (2) - This object is slightly offscreen as you can see here.
2. We understand that you didn't fully stick to the DS and based your overall patterns rather on symmetry than on distance snap. However some of those are not properly executed making them appear rather confusing and unpolished.
   Examples
   1. 00:19:284 (2,1) -
   2. 00:21:427 (1) -
   3. 01:13:075 (4,1) -

[Hard]

1. You have got some really big jumps in this difficulty without any significant emphasis within the music which makes them feel quite unpolished. Therefore we recommend you to nerf them.
   Examples
   1. 00:47:361 (6,1) -
   2. 01:01:075 (6,1) -

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Please keep in mind that the above listed examples are just examples for the mentioned issues so that this generally applies to more than just these mentioned ones.

We are sorry for the very late disqualification here and apologize for the inconveniences this causes to you.

IamKwaN wrote:

Greetings, your map has to be taken away from the Qualified section.

Click to expand

Mao wrote:

[Easy]

1. We understand that you didn't fully stick to the DS and based your overall patterns rather on symmetry than on distance snap. However some of those are not properly executed making them appear rather confusing and unpolished.
   Examples
   1. 00:19:284 (2,1) -
   2. 00:21:427 (1) -
   3. 01:13:075 (4,1) -

[Hard]

1. You have got some really big jumps in this difficulty without any significant emphasis within the music which makes them feel quite unpolished. Therefore we recommend you to nerf them.
   Examples
   1. 00:47:361 (6,1) -
   2. 01:01:075 (6,1) -

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Please keep in mind that the above listed examples are just examples for the mentioned issues so that this generally applies to more than just these mentioned ones.

We are sorry for the very late disqualification here and apologize for the inconveniences this causes to you.

These aren't fixed, please be reminded that these are the reasons for disqualification. To get passed qualification, fixing these are compulsory.
More elaboration below,
[General]

1. Inconsistent Preview Time.

[Hard]

1. These jumps are too harsh for the current spread:
   
   1. 00:37:289 (4,1) -
   2. 01:01:075 (6,1) -
   3. 01:02:789 (6,1) -
   4. 01:06:218 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - 01:06:646 (1,2,3) - are more suitable for jumps as the music shows.
   5. 01:12:218 (1,2,3) - These are too exaggerating as a Hard.
   6. The issue repeats in the latter part of the kiai.

[Normal]

1. 00:15:855 (3,1) - DS is way too high in a Normal.

[Easy]

1. 00:19:284 (2,1) - Doubled the regular spacing is not acceptable here, it looks very similar to a 2/1-gap.
2. 00:20:998 (2,1) - Less extreme, but same as above. Generally it's very untidy to have something like 00:19:712 (1,2,1) - two different spacing before and after a circle.
3. 01:12:646 (3,4,1) - Spacing is way too high.

Good luck.
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1. 00:24:427 (3,1) - 1.50x, in my view ingame, is too big
2. 00:26:141 (3,1,2) - 1.30x, ^ same
3. 00:46:075 (1,2,3) - the spacing is very weird, is 1.50x but the (1) isn't same place as (3) I feel you need improve this part gameplay
4. 00:57:218 (2,1) - 1.80x, no pleasse
5. 01:11:789 (1,2,3,4,1) - inconsistency spacing, there random spacing, 1.30x then 1.40x then 1.50x

1. 00:15:855 (3,1) - never make jump 1.90 on this level
2. 00:24:212 (3,1) - ^ same
3. 00:25:927 (3,1) - ^ same
4. 00:38:789 (4,1) - 2.00x pls no
5. 00:59:361 (4,1) - ^ same
6. 01:07:718 (3,1) - ^ same
7. 01:12:646 (3,1) - ^ same
8. 01:21:432 (3,1) - ^ same

Pereira006 wrote:

[Easy]

Gameplay:

1. 00:24:427 (3,1) - 1.50x, in my view ingame, is too big
2. 00:26:141 (3,1,2) - 1.30x, ^ same
3. 00:46:075 (1,2,3) - the spacing is very weird, is 1.50x but the (1) isn't same place as (3) I feel you need improve this part gameplay
4. 00:57:218 (2,1) - 1.80x, no pleasse
5. 01:11:789 (1,2,3,4,1) - inconsistency spacing, there random spacing, 1.30x then 1.40x then 1.50x

look fine, the spacing 1.30 is okay expect 1.40, 1.50x and over, this is only I find inconsistency spacing

[Norma]

Gameplay:

1. 00:15:855 (3,1) - never make jump 1.90 on this level
2. 00:24:212 (3,1) - ^ same
3. 00:25:927 (3,1) - ^ same
4. 00:38:789 (4,1) - 2.00x pls no
5. 00:59:361 (4,1) - ^ same
6. 01:07:718 (3,1) - ^ same
7. 01:12:646 (3,1) - ^ same
8. 01:21:432 (3,1) - ^ same

same explain in easy, in view and play is too big, the jump never work in Normal as level
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need question or something ask me
Call me after you done this also no need kd

ztrot wrote:

I went ahead with the changes to the easy well most of them but I don't agree with looking at spacing values as reasoning for calling something unintuitive I feel like the patterns are playable and fun, please don't just look at the maps spacing values and point out changes play the map and look if those changes feel good or bad thanks for looking it over again tho.

1. 00:02:570 (1,2,3) - I find this very very lazy. The (3) could be blanketed better and it shows in gameplay. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3339415 | The low point of (3) could also be adjusted since it gets close to the (1) | http://puu.sh/iMmkv.jpg for example. It keeps DS, and imo, combos should be using a consistent DS, or it just gets too confusing for newer players.
2. 00:07:712 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - First off. It'd be great if you could balance this more. and keep it more centralized. Try moving the 00:07:284 (2,3) - to the right a bit more so it lets 00:10:284 (1) - along with (2,3) selected with 1.20 DS be somewhere roughly around x456 to 464 and y120. After that just take 00:11:998 (1,2,3) - and do a horizontal flip from the previous. It pretty much puts you in the proper DS range, and looks a lot cleaner.
3. 00:13:712 (1,2,3) - Why 1.0? (actually why 1.2 on everything else but.. whatever) There's no change in the songs rhythm to warrant a DS change. I mean it really doesn't matter too much in the end, but I'd love to see more consistency in the map because as a whole, the little bits and pieces make it feel very unpolished.
4. 00:19:284 (2,3) - (2) at x184 y48 and (3) a horizontal flip of the new (2).
5. 00:28:712 (2,3,4,5) - Select all of these and move the (2) to x256 y208 so the DS on these notes are all even.
6. 00:32:361 (1) - Copy and paste (2) over (1) and rotate it twice. Try placing it at about x384 y44. | http://puu.sh/iMnbB.jpg
7. 00:45:218 (1,2,1,2,3) - you could nudge all of these down a few more y so 00:43:503 (1,1) - doesn't feel as overlapped.
8. 01:01:503 (1) - Try moving this to x52 y200, and then 01:01:932 (2) - to x112 y72. Flip 01:03:646 (2,3) - respectively, and adjust 01:04:503 (1,2) - as needed. This should somewhat help balance the notes out. If you want to. Move 01:00:646 (2) - to x220 y340 as well.
9. 01:13:075 (4) - I wouldn't allow this at all. The gap is way too big here. The map would definitely get DQ'd again from this as it creates a random increase in DS where there shouldn't be one. One thing you could try to do. Try flipping 01:11:789 (1,3) - (readjusting afterwards) and place (4) around the left side of the map | Maybe something like this can work? http://puu.sh/iMnXh.jpg
10. 01:15:218 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - same thing as 1:01.
11. 01:23:789 (1) - http://puu.sh/iMog1.jpg | Having the reverse go into the center is just making it more crowded than it needs to be.