Jepetski wrote:

NM is fun to play and doesn't require any change in my opinion and I'm not going to bother with MX just yet so I'll mod HD for now.
[HD]01:20:349 (80349|1,80349|3,80454|2,80454|0,80611|1,80611|3,80716|2,80716|0) - i'd replace these with: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/FCxj9R4.png owo looks nice
02:13:321 (133321|0) - i'd remove this removed
02:13:531 (133531|1) - and this, it's hard enough without them. sure

Noobish wrote:

Puxtu's NM

difficulty drops off especially at chorus which is very dull to play. in term of NM difficulty it starts off hard and drops into 1/2 chord in chorus. Maybe freshen it up abit with more notes? agree, wait I'm remapping it

00:14:685 (14685|2,14685|3) - into 00:14:580 (14580|2,14685|3) -

00:15:000 (15000|1,15000|0) - into 00:14:895 (14895|1,15000|0) -

00:15:734 add 3 and maybe remove 00:15:839 (15839|1) -

00:16:259 (16259|2,16468|1,16678|0,16678|2,16888|3) - into 00:16:259 (16259|1,16468|1,16678|2,16888|2) - (optional, flows better imo)

00:17:098 (17098|0,17098|2) - into 00:17:098 (17098|0,17098|1) -

00:20:245 (20245|3) - to 00:20:245 (20245|2) -

00:20:454 (20454|1,20454|2) - into 00:20:454 (20454|3,20454|2) -

00:24:440 (24440|0) - move to 00:24:440 (24440|1) -

01:01:573 from here LN + note combi might be a bit hard to read for NM

01:08:286 chorus started but there even lesser note than starting part.
maybe add a 1/4? Example. 01:08:915 (68915|1,68915|3) - into 01:08:810 (68810|2,68915|1,68915|3) -

there are some similar part later in the song which is about the same pattern to be adjusted. sir, yes sir


Puxtu's HD

Constant notes, Good pattern, Well-mapped overall. I can't give much opinion about this diff since it felt natural to play.

Guitar's hitsound at the start maybe too loud can't hear the guitar sound over the hi-hat sound. woah you're right.. sorry my bad
00:33:042 (33042|2) - remove ? very hard to hit in my opinion. ok
02:09:964 (129964|3,129964|0,130384|1,130384|2) - into 02:09:964 (129964|1,129964|2,130384|0,130384|3) - keep, sorry

bakabakemono wrote:

- 00:01:888 (1888|3) - move here? 00:01:835 - // ok
- 00:05:140 (5140|3) - change to normal note and then 00:05:245 (5245|1) - this should start here 00:05:192 - // ==a nah the LN kept, but the placement is fixed
- 00:08:496 (8496|1,8601|3) - same mod as above
- 00:13:662 (13662|1,13715|2) - replace these notes with one note at 00:13:689 - // lol supposed to be 1/12
- 00:37:972 (37972|2,38024|3) - these should be 1/6 notes. you know what to do next /me slapped // 1/4 is correct already, keep
- 00:50:349 (50349|2) - move here for bass drum 00:50:454 - // ok my bad, fixed
- 01:19:352 (79352|1) - remove, there is no snare sound // deyum ok
- 01:32:464 (92464|0) - remove and 01:32:517 (92517|2,92569|3) - these should be 1/6 notes tho // removed, 1/4 is correct
- 01:49:615 (109615|2) - remove and 01:49:693 (109693|1,109746|0) - these should be 1/6 notes tho [2] // ;w; check again, it's 1/4
- 02:17:018 (137018|1,137045|2,137071|3) - lol wth is dis, it's just 1/8 not 1/16 // :U ok
- 02:25:646 (145646|1) - remove? // ;; it has nice beat, but ok then
- 02:27:692 (147692|1) - move to 3 for jack like as you did before // ok
- 02:28:111 (148111|2) - ^ // ok
- 02:34:693 (154693|1) - y u put at this place -_- move to blue line before then 02:34:510 (154510|1) - move to 3 to avoid jackhammer // ok
- 02:35:008 (155008|0,155323|2,155532|2,155847|1,156162|3) - you placed at the wrong place again lel, use 1/8 snap and move to yellow line before // ok.. ==a
- 02:50:559 - add one note at 2 or 3, for snare // eeeh, keep
- 02:55:489 (175489|3,175594|2) - you know what to do next :^)
- 02:58:845 (178845|1,178950|3) - ^ :^)
- 03:06:817 (186817|3) - should end at this? 03:10:803 - // blame old mp3.. ok

bakabakemono wrote:

to Usagi: I'm really sure it's 1/6, please check again -.-

bakabakemono wrote:

HD
- 00:01:888 (1888|2) - use 1/8 snap and move to yellow line before keeping that on 1/4 for simplicity
- 00:05:245 (5245|2) - ^
- 00:08:601 (8601|2) - ^
- 00:16:259 (16259|1) - remove? hithat
- 00:37:919 (37919|3) - remove this, and 00:37:972 (37972|2,38024|1) - these should be 1/6 notes. you know what to do next [2]
- 00:39:335 (39335|3,39388|2,39440|1,39493|0,39545|3,39598|2,39650|1,39703|0) - I think these are too hard for HD, change to LN maybe? ini rumput pp knp di potong? D: nah, that burst is super easy XD
- 01:08:706 (68706|3) - move here (blue line before) 01:08:601 -
- 01:10:384 (70384|3) - ^
- 01:10:908 - add one for bass? no sound
- 01:12:587 - ^
- 01:15:419 (75419|3) - move to blue line before
- 01:17:097 (77097|3) - ^
- 01:32:464 (92464|3,92517|2,92569|1,92622|3,92622|0) - haha same problem with this 00:37:919 (37919|3,37972|2,38024|1,38077|0,38077|3) - you know what to do next :^)
- 01:47:936 (107936|2,108041|1,108251|1) - change to clap?
- 01:49:615 (109615|3,109667|2) - remove these and 01:49:720 (109720|1,109772|0) - these should be 1/6 notes. you know what to do next [3]
- 01:50:664 (110664|3) - move to blue line before
- 01:52:342 (112342|3) - ^
- 01:54:545 - add one for bass drum nah kalo yg ini ada
- 01:57:377 (117377|0) - move to blue line before
- 01:59:055 (119055|3) - ^
- 02:05:034 - add one and then 02:05:139 (125139|2) - move to 4 no sound
- 02:12:377 (132377|1) - remove?
- 02:13:321 (133321|3,133373|2,133426|1,133478|0,133531|3,133583|2,133636|1,133688|0) - I suggest to just follow the drum, not the organ keyboard
- 02:38:181 - add one no sound
- 02:55:594 (175594|2) - move to yellow line before (use 1/8 snap) ^same reason
- 02:58:950 (178950|2) - ^
- 03:02:307 (182307|2) - ^
- 03:07:447 (187447|1) - remove whistle sample
- 03:07:517 (187517|2,187587|3) - remove clap sample

Okoratu wrote:

considering "Wa" is a particle it should probably be written like "Jinsei wa Hoeru"

lol.

JamesHappy15 wrote:

[NM]
01:03:251 - add note I believe one note is enough for cymbal sound
01:03:461 (63461|3) - or 01:03:461 (63461|1) - delete nope, snare = 2 notes
01:05:768 - add note
01:05:978 - 01:08:286 - :U this is ART :U
01:48:566 - try this one :U lol looks hard :U re-arranged
01:56:328 - add note?
01:58:845 - ^ only 1 note in kiai part if I make it into double it will be overmapped
02:01:573 - ^
02:07:027 - ^
02:07:447 - ^ nope at this
02:08:286 - ^
02:09:125 - ^
02:10:803 - ^
02:11:643 - ^
added all and at the same part
02:53:601 (173601|2) - try to change this into LN and end it at 02:54:020 good idea

[HD]

01:10:384 - add note? i'm not following vocal
01:37:027 - ^
01:47:307 - ^ ^
01:51:503 - ^ ^
01:54:020 - ^ ^
01:54:859 - ^ ^
01:59:894 - ^ ^
03:06:817 (186817|1,186817|3,186817|2,187447|1,187517|2,187587|3) - 2hard4me ayy lmao blame the song

that's all

Noobish wrote:

This looks a lot better now.

offset has been fixed I supposed? NM pattern seems organized and much more fun to play compared to the last one.

pporse wrote:

[Usagi's MX]

00:01:154 (1154|3,1363|2,1468|3,1573|2,1678|3,1783|2,1853|3) - Ctrl+H
i heard that this part's sound is on the left
so it is better to set on the left :3
00:02:832 (2832|0,2937|2,3042|1,3147|0,3252|1) - ^ opposite

// erm, i checked this already with setting the 'balance' volume, and it's right left in order.. so keep.. ==a

00:20:979 (20979|2) - change to 1/4 LN // ok

01:48:146 - add note on 3rd column (here need to note) // ok
01:48:251 (108251|2) - delete // ok ==a

01:50:034 - add note on 2nd column // keep, for rhythm sake
01:50:139 (110139|3) - delete (i don't think chord is necessary) // keep

02:17:622 (137622|1,137831|0,138146|2) - change to 1/4 LN
actually sound is 1/4 LN right. but if it's ur intention(ex.pattern balance), ignore this // ==a yep, keep

03:03:671 (183671|2) - change endpoint until 03:04:090 // ok
03:03:880 (183880|0) - change to normal note..i don't know why u used it..;w;
03:04:090 (184090|2) - move to 1st column // rearranged everything

03:06:188 (186188|2) - move to 4th column
03:06:398 (186398|1) - move to 3rd column
03:06:503 (186503|3) - move to 3nd column

03:06:817 (186817|3) - too long ww change endpoint until 03:07:657 // keep, it's accurate there..

pporse wrote:

Hi pukstu xD heyo pepors
[NM]
00:03:671 (3671|0) - move to 3rd column
00:03:986 (3986|2) - move to 1st column
00:04:301 (4301|0) - move to 3rd column
00:05:349 (5349|2) - move to 1st column
00:05:664 (5664|0) - move to 3rd column
00:05:979 (5979|2) - move to 1st column
this part is same pattern with before.
i think.. need to change :3

01:58:845 (118845|3,118845|0) - delete one of notes
umm.. single note is better

02:42:901 - add note on 3rd column


[HD]
00:23:706 - add note 00:23:916 - add note before this part, you used double notes at all snare sound. but here didn't. to become like this http://puu.sh/fyvbp/78d1a58c5a.png ? isn't it a lil bit overmapped XD

02:09:964 (129964|3,129964|0) - move to 2nd, 3rd column
02:10:384 (130384|1,130384|2) - move to 1st, 4th column
this pattern is same at 02:06:608
but sound is different :3
i think it need to change pattern (little bit)

this map is already cool.. so my mod may not be helpful ;w; it's really helpful <3
good luck :3

Ryu Sei wrote:

Mod as requested maybe you can M4M with me lol
1234
*NB: I'm focusing on rhythm following and patterns, mostly suggestion.
[NM]
00:49:720 - Missing drum added
00:54:650 - Intended? Missing drum there's nothing there
01:36:608 - ^ ^
02:00:524 (120524|0,120734|3) - Er... NG for this pattern, move to 21? moved
[HD]
01:32:482 (92482|2,92552|1) - Reverse for variation? Drums doesn't affects pitch ;D oh okay ;D
01:43:531 (103531|3,103741|2,103845|1,103950|0,103950|2,104055|1,104160|2,104265|1,104370|3,104370|2,104475|1,104580|2,104685|1,104789|2,104789|0,104894|1,104999|2,105104|1) - idk what should I say lmao son, I just following the song *re-arranged them
02:09:964 - 02:10:384 - maybe add some glitch SV? 2lazy2dothat lmao

Rest is OK for me or I can't mod atm lol yo wtf how did you... nvm

No kudosu if this doesn't helps fuck no, eat my kudosu

Eternalie wrote:

[NM]
00:09:965 (9965|2) - Move to 2 , moved
00:11:853 (11853|1) - move to 3 moved
00:42:482 (42482|3) - add note double notes is enough ;A;
01:13:950 (73950|2) - should end here :01:14:370 (74370|1) - imo re-arranged
02:23:391 (143391|3) - add noteto 4 not strong enough

[HD]
03:05:349 (185349|3) - add note added

Can't really see anything else ;A;

[GraveChaos] wrote:

[Usagi's MX]
00:01:678 (1678|3) - Move to |2| then 00:01:783 (1783|2) - move to |1| then 00:01:853 (1853|3) - move this to |2| It's better to be like this for hand balance/relaxation // no change, i want to keep MX factor in this is MX diff.. ==a

00:46:887 I prefer this to be 2 noted while this 00:46:992 (46992|0,46992|2,47097|3,47097|1) - only SNs it's because this 00:46:887 it's beats is louder and appropriate to be 2 noted rather that this 00:46:992 (46992|0,46992|2,47097|3,47097|1) - // ==a as you see i applied this on lots of part, to emphasize the guitar bass.. keep

03:06:817 (186817|3) - End it here 03:09:964 end of cymbal pitch // o.o many people asked me to reduce this ln.. hmm... ==a keep

Cool song nice map nyaa! ~(=^‥^)_旦~

[ C r a c k ] wrote:

Usagi's MX

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00:10:699 (10699|1) - Move to 1 (before this, you have always follow this module, for example here 00:07:342 (7342|3,7342|1,7657|1,7657|3) - ) // ok
00:15:524 (15524|0,15577|1) - Replace these LNs with simple notes ? // ==a keep
00:36:713 - Missing note // better to keep, it sounds more like echoes
01:21:713 (81713|0) - LN end at 01:22:132 - (like here 00:27:168 - )
01:25:069 (85069|0) - LN end at 01:25:489 -
02:01:992 (121992|3) - LN end at 02:02:622 -
02:18:880 (138880|1,138933|2) - Replace these LNs with simple notes ? // keep
02:25:646 - Missing note ? (This part is similar to 00:22:290 - ) // ok
02:27:796 (147796|3,148216|0,148531|3) - Remove these notes ? // last part, i emphasize the ending with more harsh pattern.. keep

-LASU- wrote:

Hi

|1|2|3|4|
[HD mod]HD
01:03:461 - add note 1 or 4 no snare
01:47:936 - ^
02:17:412 - add note
02:20:454 - add note 3
02:22:237 - add note 1
02:33:671 (153671|1,153775|2) - ctrl+ h and 02:33:880 (153880|1) - move to 3
good luck

Sky_Demon wrote:

[NM]00:58:111 - add to 1
01:05:768 - add to 3,and 01:05:978 (65978|2) - move to 4
01:11:643 - add to 3
01:13:950 (73950|2) - end 01:14:370 - ,and 01:14:265 (74265|3) - start 01:14:370 -
01:40:489 (100489|2) - move to 2
01:40:803 (100803|1) - move to 4
01:47:727 - add note ,and 01:48:146 (108146|0) - remove hmm re-arranged this part
02:34:720 (154720|2) - move to 2
[HD]00:24:021 (24021|1) - remove triplet is fine
00:35:349 (35349|0) - move to 3 ,and 00:35:559 (35559|2) - move to 2
00:38:287 (38287|3,38287|0) - end 00:38:496 -
01:28:426 - add note
01:29:894 (89894|0) - move to 3 ,and 01:30:104 (90104|2) - move to 2
01:35:139 - add note
02:46:468 (166468|1) - move to 1

Pikobaka wrote:

[NM]00:12:063 add LN? and end at 00:12:902 that's not instrument sound, i'll keep it empty
00:14:475 add note
00:14:790 ^
00:15:210 ^ i don't hear any drum sound
00:21:503 ^
[HD]00:04:510 (4510|1,4615|0,4720|2,4825|1,4930|2,5035|1,5140|3,5245|2) - Ctrl + H
00:12:063 add LN? and end at 00:12:902 same like NM