00:11:597 (3,4) - are you sure about the rythm that is currently being used? something like
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3377830 would alllow for the sound on the blue tick to be mapped to, which I think feels a lot nicer. Note that the pattern above is only one example as this would apply to multple patterns during the beginning
00:27:002 (1,2,3,4) - could try
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3377871 this rythm. It feels like this follows the piano more accurately, which is what feels dominant in the song
00:54:569 (3,4,5) - is stacking here really the best option? I mean there is a noticeable build-up in the song, and I feel like just stacking the notes is ignoring this :/
01:11:192 (4,5,6,7) - honestly this whole part feels rather fast, so I don't really think that reducing the note density here is the right thing to do. If anything, I think this calls for more 1/2 when compared to previous patterns. I mean..there are very noticeable piano sounds on the red ticks :/
01:27:408 (4) - Could move this up a little for a nice curvy movement to slightly improve the flow like
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/337790201:47:070 (6) - probably a very petty complaint, but I think that is is kinda weird that both the tail and the head use a finish here. I mean there is something on both the head and the tail in the song, but these sounds are so very very different, it makes using the same sound for both of them weird to me
02:04:300 (7) - missing hitsound on the tail here?
02:16:462 (1,2,3) - just for the looks: See if you can make these overlap in the same way? err I mean have 2 and 3 overlap as much as 1 and 2...you get the idea ><
02:18:692 (2,3) - I don't really like stacking these. 3 feels noticeable stronger than 2 to me, so stacking it below two doesn't do the song justice to me
02:52:543 (2) - are you sure about putting this downbeat on a tail? I'd honestly just put a circle on the head and the tail of the slider and then get rid of the sldier itself. Honestly, I don't really see what the slider is currently following :/ (might be following vocals I guess, but I even if this one is supposed to follow vocals, then I don't think it is doing a good job at it :c)
02:59:232 (8,1) - mentioned something similar above, but using the same hitsound for both the dull sound in the background and the high pitched piano just feels a bit odd to me :/ idk my ears are being retarded I guess
03:09:975 (7,8,9) - I don't think this rythm emphasizes the song properly, since both sounds dominant in the song 03:10:785 (7) - and 03:11:596 (8) - are put on slidertails
03:16:055 (1,2) - any special reason why this uses 1.0 spacing instead of 1.2?
03:40:786 (3) - slider honestly looks a bit jagged :/ I know you probably don't care about this as much as I do, but I just felt obligated to point this one out ><
03:50:819 (4) - missing a note here? there is noticeable 1/4 here :c
03:54:773 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - just saying that this would be very neat if is was symmetric ><
04:16:054 (7) - not sure if ignoring the peak at 04:16:256 (7) - is a good thing to do
04:19:297 (3) - ^
04:27:810 (1,2) - not sure if you can be bothered, but this blanket actually does look pretty sloppy
05:30:441 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why not to something like
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3378095? symmetry is VERY VERY off, but you get the idea
05:42:806 (5,6,7) - again, I don't think that stacking here does the song justice, as I feel like there is a noticeable build-up :c
05:54:563 (1) - could possible move this down a bit for a less wiggly movement within the pattern for a slightly smoother flow
06:25:779 (3) - these is a VERY noticeable piano sound on the red tick here, I'm not sure if ignoring this is a good idea. You didn't map it previously for 06:24:158 (6) - but I think that one is ok if you don't want the rythm to be to dense. Though..I'm honestly not too sure about this one either, it's just that the piano feels to strong to simply be ignored, especially when using 1/2 wouldnt hurt
06:26:590 (5) - could curve this a little more for a nicer blanket
My mods for you usually end up sucking balls :c
Good Luck anyways~