1. Easy - 4Key (1.39 stars, 358 notes)
2. Hard - 4Key (3.98 stars, 1244 notes)
3. Normal - 4Key (2.11 stars, 668 notes)

DanSparce wrote:

Mod from queue...
Column |1|2|3|4|

Normal

00:00:130 - ~~ 00:10:012 - Why is your pattern the same??? Try to change your pattern every 1/2 measures or else your map will look boring
00:11:424 ~~ 00:16:188 - Same here
00:11:424 - Add note here at |4| like in 00:17:071 (17071|3) - ?
00:17:071 (17071|0) - ~~ Why is your pattern same as 00:11:424 ~~ 00:16:188
00:21:306 - Add note at |2|?
00:22:012 - Add note at |2|?
00:22:718 (22718|0) - ~~ 00:27:306 (27306|1) - Why is this pattern still the same at 00:00:130 - ~~ 00:10:012
00:22:718 (22718|0) - Add note at |4| here?
00:28:365 (28365|0) - Add note at |4|?
00:28:365 (28365|0) ~~ 00:32:600 (32600|0) - Still same note pattern?
00:33:659 - Add note at |1|?
00:34:012 - Add note at |4|?
00:44:247 (44247|2,44424|2,44600|2,44777|2,44953|2,45129|2) - Dat jackhammer tho... I recommend it changing to a |2|-|3|-|2|-|3| pattern instead of the column |3| jackhammer
01:24:835 - Add note at either |1| or |4|?
01:29:424 (89424|3,89600|3,89777|3,89953|3,90129|3,90306|3) - I know you think it is monotonous but you also have to consider this is normal level so better rearrange it into notes where beginners won't find any difficulties
01:36:129 - Add note at |1|?
01:41:424 - Add note at |2| or |3|?
01:41:777 - Add note at |4|?
01:55:894 (115894|3) - Add note at |3| perhaps?
02:00:129 (120129|3) - Add note at |1|?
02:04:365 - Your Kiai time too, move it here instead of 02:05:077 no sound there anymore

I know you think almost everything there sounds almost the same but you also have to be creative of your patterns too... And don't just repeat the patterns continuously or it will be very boring. If you're mapping notes, try to put them in the order where the vocals/melody are, but since you are mapping the beat, you could put it anywhere AS LONG AS the pattern looks good. Please your patterns...

Easy

00:00:130 (130|0,482|0,835|0,1188|0,1541|0,1894|0,2247|0) - ??? Why? I know you think of them as the same pitch but consider the perspective of the player.
00:00:130 ~~ 00:10:012 - Same patterns again?
00:11:424 - Add note at |4| as in 00:17:071 (17071|3) -
00:11:424 (11424|0) - ~~ 00:21:306 (21306|0) - Patterns, please? As I said, try to change your patterns every 1/2 measures
00:22:718 - Add note at |1|?
00:22:718 ~~ 00:27:306 - T_T Your patterns
00:28:365 - Add note at |4|?
00:28:365 ~~ 00:32:600 - Patterns please...
I think you know already where are your repeating patterns
00:34:012 - Add note at |4|?
01:19:188 - Add note at |1|?
01:24:835 - Add note at |2|?
01:30:482 - Add note at |2|?
01:36:129 - Add note at |1|?
01:38:953 - Add note at |4|?
01:41:777 - """
02:01:541 - """
Set your kiai same too as normal

Same comment as normal

For the comments where I asked to add, those are primarily where the long rattling sounds start...
And only Easy & Normal? No Hard? Your difficulty spread is very limited and I suggest adding 2 more diffs, Hard & Insane

Marirose wrote:

Hi,from my queue
you chose Easy/Normal (4key)
here's the mod :3/

General:
TAG=u.k. hardcore bof2013 let the bass kick bms of fighters 2013 bbkkbkk (from https://osu.ppy.sh/s/153920
copy and paste plz

column=1,2,3,4

Easy

you all drop note at column1 for the main beat,it is correct but not friendly pattern lol,make them diffferent and friendly plz
00:02:953 - try this XD http://puu.sh/dSORD/5b1b6a7bc7.jpg
00:06:129 (6129|0,6129|2) - make them at the "same hand",move to col3 and 4
00:05:777 - if i were you,i ll drop notes as http://puu.sh/dSP6R/f8a2730c93.jpg
00:08:247 - and here http://puu.sh/dSPaD/b3c6b668b5.jpg XD
00:16:718 (16718|1) - move to col 3
00:28:012 (28012|1) - col3 plz
00:32:953 (32953|1) - this LN start at 00:32:865 - ,check it
00:34:012 - according to ur idea,it will be 3 notes here like 00:17:071 - becauz of the finish sound o/
00:43:894 (43894|3) - to column 2,it is not the same sound as 00:44:247 (44247|3,44600|3,44953|3) -
00:34:365 (34365|1,34365|2,35071|2,35071|0,35777|2,35777|3,37188|0,37188|2,37894|0,37894|2,38600|1,38600|3,40012|0,40012|2,40718|0,40718|2,41424|3,41424|1,42835|2,42835|0,43541|0,43541|2) -
all of them,reduce a note each line,1 note plz,but if you use 2 note like 00:45:659 - ,its ok ,follow the clap beat
00:47:424 (47424|1) - to col3
00:50:953 - 3 notes
00:55:188 (55188|0) - you can ignore this sound,its really hard to hear it lol (its truly a softbeat here,but i suggest delete will better
01:13:541 (73541|1,74247|0,74247|2,74953|1,75659|2,75659|0,76365|1) - these notes,umm,i think you did counter lol,try this http://puu.sh/dSQjF/4be82ea8cf.jpg
01:17:071 (77071|2,77424|1) - ctrl+g
same problem,01:19:541 (79541|3,79541|1,80247|3,80247|1,80953|3,80953|1,81306|0,81306|2) - the 2 notes like these,reduce,and 01:22:365 (82365|0,82365|2,83071|0,83071|2,83777|2,83777|0) -
01:25:188 (85188|2,85188|3,85894|2,85894|3,86600|3,86600|2) - they are okay ! XD
01:29:777 (89777|3) - why only 1 note here? it should be like 00:44:247 (44247|3,44600|3,44953|3) -
01:30:835 (90835|2,90835|3,91541|2,91541|3,92247|2,92247|3) - reduce
01:33:659 (93659|0,93659|1,94365|0,94365|1,95071|1,95071|0) - ~
01:36:482 (96482|3,96482|2,97188|2,97188|3,97894|3,97894|2) - okay!
01:38:953 - 3 notes,finish sound
01:41:424 - i think you can add here 2 notes,haevy beat
01:41:777 - 3 notes

Normal

00:01:541 - same beat like 00:01:188 - ,so 2 notes plz
00:02:247 - ~,add at 4
00:02:424 (2424|2,2777|2) - try ignore these sound,i think it will be better
00:02:953 - ~at 4
00:05:777 - add ww
00:07:894 - add then ignore 00:08:071 (8071|2) -
00:08:424 (8424|2) - its okay here w
00:11:424 - try 2 notes or 3 notes here, a clearly finish sound
00:17:071 - great job
00:27:482 (27482|2,27659|2) - the sound here doesnt really fit jackhummer,so you can try another pattern
00:32:071 (32071|3,32247|1,32247|2) - try this http://puu.sh/dSRu1/c5fdf13bd0.jpg
00:32:953 (32953|1) - LN start at 00:32:865 -
00:33:306 (33306|2) - start at 00:33:218 -
00:36:659 (36659|0,36835|0) - change this
00:37:188 (37188|1,37365|3) - you can make them as jackhammer,but not these 00:37:365 (37365|3,37541|3) -
00:47:953 (47953|0) - move to col 3
00:50:953 (50953|0) - to col3
00:51:482 (51482|2,52188|1) - delete,if you follow the drum hit,you also should add at 00:51:571 - and 00:52:277 - ,so ,make a choice
00:52:629 - miss a sound here,catch it
00:55:188 (55188|1) - same as ez diff,ignore can be better
01:07:894 (67894|0,68247|0,68600|0,68953|0,69306|1,69659|1,70012|1) - okay nice !!!
01:15:306 (75306|3) - ignore this and delete,you didnt follow this drum here,just follow the main sound as 01:14:600 (74600|1,74777|2,74953|3) - is enough
01:16:718 (76718|3) - same reason,delete
01:30:306 (90306|0) - move to col2,cancel the jackhammer
01:36:129 (96129|0) - move to col3
01:38:953 (98953|0) - the meaning of this LN? delete,and make this part as ez diff you did
01:43:718 (103718|1) - not the same sound as 01:43:365 (103365|1) - ,move to col3
01:53:071 (113071|0) - col2
01:58:718 (118718|0) - col3
02:04:365 - add one

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i love this song /
Good Luck XD