Shinzo- wrote:

Hi Kyou !
from queue
it looks like someone has mod it first lol sorry www i think you're late, so i req to others first xD
[Normal]
00:08:353 - empty ? i think should be like before, if u just follow the main piano, then delete 00:03:514 (3514|4,3707|3,3901|2,5062|4,5256|3,5449|1,6611|0,6804|1) - oh got it thanks for pointing
00:43:916 (43916|3) - delete cause u just make 1 note before it's different. this has a stronger sound
01:14:648 - 01:16:111 - u can add a note, not just 1 LN ._. okay~


[Hard]
00:40:989 (40989|1,40989|3,40989|0,41721|4,41721|3,41721|1) - why 3 note? cause after this, u just make 2 note yes it has a stronger sound
01:30:745 (90745|3,90745|2) - why just 2 note ? u make 3 note before this and after this it's same like this actually 01:24:892 (84892|2) -
01:31:660 (91660|1) - delete, the sound didnt strong enough to make it 3 not okay. removed at some part
01:38:063 (98063|0) - 1 note only? T_T yes, i don't want to make harder for that

HOST wrote:

hi mod from pm

u can ignore my mod if u think this is not pertinent.



column 1 / 2 / 3 / 4 / 5



[Normal]

00:25:441 - add 5 i don't want make it harder. and it's not loud sound
00:25:624 (25624|2) - move 4
00:25:806 (25806|3) - move 3
00:25:989 (25989|4) - move 2
^ hmm i prefer my pattern before, sorry no change~

00:34:770 (34770|1) - move 3 fixed
00:39:343 (39343|0) - this LN end 00:40:624 fixed owo
00:40:624 - add 2 added~

00:46:660 - add 1 added
00:47:209 (47209|0) - move 3 okay!

00:53:306 - add 4
00:53:428 (53428|4) - add 5
00:53:672 (53672|4) - add 5
00:53:916 (53916|4) - add 5
^apply some. nice suggesion~ but it's too hard for normal i think ;w; i'll use it for Hard diff!
01:18:489 (78489|0) - delete fixed

01:38:063 (98063|0) - delete fixed
01:38:245 (98245|1) - this LN start 01:38:063 and move 1, end 01:40:989 okay~


[Hard]

00:34:953 (34953|4) - move 1
00:34:861 (34861|0) - move 2
^good suggestion :3
01:02:209 - add 1 added

01:14:648 - add 4 added

01:37:971 - add 3
01:38:063 - add 2
01:38:063 (98063|0) - delete
01:38:245 (98245|1) - move to 1 and start 01:38:063 ~ end 01:40:989
^nice suggestion <3


[]


thx for your request kyousuke <3

Shinzo- wrote:

Hi Kyou !
from queue
it looks like someone has mod it first


[Hutunohito]
00:16:660 (16660|4,16660|1,16660|0) - same with 00:15:928 (15928|2,15928|0,15928|4,15928|1) - so add 1 more note ._.
instead delete 3
00:25:258 (25258|0,25258|1,25258|4,25258|2,25258|3) - are you sure ? delete 3
01:08:063 (68063|1,68063|3,68063|0,68245|1,68245|0,68245|3,68428|0,68428|1,68428|3) - i think the sound didnt strong enough to make it 3 not
bass+vocal+an instrument,the reason i follow vocal here is accent and pattern and i think 01:08:611 (68611|0,68611|4,68611|2) - should be 4 notes like before by intention,i know there's 3sounds i mention above and cymbal,i can put 4notes,but considering next sounds,i put 3notes
01:27:636 (87636|0) - move to 2 bass=1

Shinzo- wrote:

[Zan]
00:09:224 (9224|1,9514|2,9707|3) - same sound with 00:08:740 (8740|4,8740|3,8933|4,8933|3) - so make it 2 notes - only added note at 00:09:707 -
00:21:782 (21782|4,21782|0,22148|1,22148|3) - the vocal just using 1 LN like before but why this is 2 LN ? - middle coloumn is special key, so 1 LN is ok, thus i want to make neat-looking pattern
00:26:538 (26538|2) - i hear nothing - removed
00:34:404 - add note, it same with 00:33:855 (33855|1,33855|3,34038|2,34038|0,34221|3,34221|1) - - from 00:34:404 - i focus on piano sound so its only 1-noted, as i said i want to make neat-looking
00:40:624 (40624|4) - dele, i dont know why u make 3 notes here ._. - nope, it has loud clap-like sound
00:41:538 (41538|3) - delete it or add note 00:42:270 - my bad, added
00:52:971 (52971|3,53245|1) - u make LV for vocal but i hear nothing except vocal .... ._. - it has low ring sound so i make 2-noted | 1 for ring 1 for vocal
01:01:111 - add 1 more note for consistency - added
01:08:063 (68063|0,68063|2,68245|1,68245|3,68428|4,68428|2) - why 2 note again ? ._. i didnt hear her Screaming xD - it has some loud instrument (idk the name) plus vocal so i make 2-LN
01:25:258 (85258|1,85258|0,85258|3) - 3 note ? i see no diffrent with 01:26:538 (86538|2,86538|3)- my bad, deleted

Harbyter wrote:

hi~ here the mod req on ▣▣▣No.1 Team Modding Queue OPEN [Mania]▣▣▣


[MOD]

Column -1-2-3-4-5-

Zan's Anomaly

if you are following the piano at the start then ---->

00:03:320 (3320|1) - move here 00:03:353 -
00:03:707 (3707|1) - move here 00:03:772 -
00:03:901 (3901|2) - here 00:03:933 -
00:04:095 (4095|3) - here 00:04:127 -

00:04:288 (4288|4,4288|0) - 00:04:320 - suggest to turn the LN in a simple note

00:04:675 (4675|4,4675|1) - maybe just one note here? and move here 00:04:707 -

00:04:869 (4869|2,4869|3) - same here,only one note??and move here 00:04:933 -

00:05:062 (5062|1,5062|4) - here i suggest to add only one note,the sound isn't really strong ,maybe delete the LN?and move here 00:05:127 -

00:05:256 (5256|2) - this one here 00:05:320 -

00:05:449 (5449|3) - --> 00:05:514 -

00:05:643 (5643|0,5643|2) - 00:05:691 -

00:05:836 (5836|0,5836|2) - 00:05:885 -

00:06:030 (6030|1) - 00:06:095 -

00:06:224 (6224|2) - 00:06:256 -

00:06:417 (6417|4) - 00:06:449 -

00:06:611 (6611|0,6611|2) - 00:06:643 - and suggest tu turn this LN in a note too

00:06:804 (6804|3) - 00:06:836 -

00:06:998 (6998|4,6998|1) - 00:07:030 -

00:07:191 (7191|0,7191|3) - 00:07:224 -

00:08:546 (8546|2) - 00:08:578 -

00:08:353 (8353|1) - 00:08:385 -

00:09:707 (9707|3,9707|4) - 00:09:740 -

00:10:095 (10095|3,10095|4,10288|4,10288|3) - 00:10:127 -

00:12:288 - add 4?

00:12:353 - here is a full 1/12 ,why not complete the stair? like this??

--------

00:13:245 - add 2?

00:13:367 - add 4? complete the stair xD

00:28:977 (28977|1,29038|2,29099|3,29160|2,29221|1) - here is a 1/8 instead of the 1/6

01:24:434 - why this pattern is more easier from this 00:19:770 - ??

here i suggest to move this note 01:36:599 - in col 5 and add a note 4 then
01:36:645 - add 3
01:36:691 - add 1
01:36:736 - add 2
01:36:782 - add 4
01:36:874 (96874|4,96874|3) - move here 01:36:919 -

that's all hope i'll bbe helpfull

Brian_Ex wrote:

Ganbateee kyouuu!!

*shoot star

DrawdeX wrote:

Hello!
From Astral Horizon Modding Team!
Mod as requested

I only focus on pitch relevancy and hand balance

5K = |1|2|3|4|5|

Everything modded

[Timing]
>For the kiai time (Ctrl+Shift+A to find the error)
• 01:10:075 - Remove inherited point
• 01:10:258 - ^
i think it's fine :3
[Normal]
HD -1 are you mean HP -1? it's already good with hp 7 od 7
• 00:29:282 - Add a note that's not a strong sound. and i don't want to make double notes on that part
• 00:35:136 (35136|4) - Why 3 notes here? Remove this it's chord and more louder than double notes
• 00:38:063 (38063|4) - ^
• 00:40:989 - Add a note okay
• 00:41:721 - ^ no
• 00:46:843 - ^
• 00:48:672 (48672|4) - Move to 4 it seems not good to make stairs on it
• 00:49:221 (49221|4) - ^
• 00:52:697 - Add a note no. i don't want make it harder, and i'm afraid the star will reach almost 2
• 00:53:977 - ^
• 00:54:160 - ^
• 01:13:002 - ^ no
• 01:16:111 - ^
• 01:26:904 - ^ ok
• 01:27:819 - ^ no. too many double notes
• 01:30:745 - ^
• 01:32:758 - ^ ok
• 01:36:416 (96416|3) - Move to 2 patern break
• 01:38:063 - Add a note no
sorry that some are rejected, i don't want to make it harder
[Hard]
• 00:52:697 - Add a note added
• 01:00:014 - ^ hmm i don't sure about this...
• 01:08:428 (68428|4) - Move to 3 pattern break
• 01:08:611 - Add a note no
• 01:11:538 - ^

Good luck~!

will check later

DrawdeX wrote:

Hello!
From Astral Horizon Modding Team!
Mod as requested

I only focus on pitch relevancy and hand balance

5K = |1|2|3|4|5|
[Timing]
>For the kiai time (Ctrl+Shift+A to find the error)
for the next time your modding:ignore kiai 15sec thing,it's not unrankable
• 01:10:075 - Remove inherited point
• 01:10:258 - ^ no thanks,i need kiai starting effect



[hutu's Hard+]
• 00:03:296 (3296|1,3320|2,3345|3) - Uhh I don't think it has multiple piano sounds here. I suggest two or three notes on red line only.
delete one
• 00:27:819 - Add a note ok

Good luck~!

Ringating wrote:

from my queue:

there wasn't really much I could do for your current bg, since it was fairly compression heavy. I smoothed it as much as I could without causing more issues, in order to remove as many of the artifacts as I could. Here is the original bg w/ the slight smoothing. I didn't upscale it, since osu does that internally on its own.

Since I wasn't really satisfied with how that turned out, I found you an alternate image. Here is that:

alternate bg

I hope it meets your moe expectations quality standards.

no kudosu

Ringating wrote:

from my queue:

there wasn't really much I could do for your current bg, since it was fairly compression heavy. I smoothed it as much as I could without causing more issues, in order to remove as many of the artifacts as I could. Here is the original bg w/ the slight smoothing. I didn't upscale it, since osu does that internally on its own.

Since I wasn't really satisfied with how that turned out, I found you an alternate image. Here is that:

alternate bg

I hope it meets your moe expectations quality standards. yup it's good, but...

no kudosu

Aii- wrote:

yo mod request via message ^_^

[Normal]

00:01:965 (1965|0) - move to col 5 ga jadi stairs dong wkwk

00:17:209 (17209|3,17392|1) - move to 1 left re-arranged

00:34:770 (34770|2,34861|3,34953|4) - move to 1 left sengaja gamau digabungin stairsnya

00:40:989 (40989|1) - move to col 1 pattern break

00:41:538 (41538|2) - move to col 4 and 00:41:355 (41355|1,41538|3) - Control + G nice

00:41:721 - add note col 5 okay~

00:45:014 - add note col 3 no, i won't add to the other part too

00:45:928 (45928|2) - move to col 2 okay

00:46:660 (46660|0) - delete there's have a sound

00:53:886 - add note col 5, nice 3 hammer xD tapi suaranya ga gitu gede :v jga ga mau add banyak note sih disana

00:54:160 - add note kalo di add disana nanti di part sebelumnya jga hrs di add

01:04:038 - add note

01:09:343 - add note col 5

01:16:843 - add note okay

[Hard]

00:02:353 (2353|2,2546|3) - Control + G pattern break

00:13:550 (13550|2) - move to col 4 ud bgs disana

00:17:026 (17026|1) - move to col 4 re-arranged

00:17:209 (17209|0) - move to col 4 jdi hammer dong o_o

00:17:392 (17392|2) - move to col 2 ok

00:42:087 (42087|3) - move to col 1 pattern break

00:49:404 (49404|2) - move to col 2 re-arranged

00:53:947 (53947|3) - move to col 2 it's different

00:57:819 (57819|2) - move to col 4 okay

01:05:502 (65502|1) - move to col 5 no, that same sound with part before

01:06:782 - add note col 2

01:09:343 (69343|4) - move to col 2 re-arranged

01:38:063 (98063|1) - move to col 4

Kawaii song :3 :3

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Hello from Shana's Modding Team, there are mods for your mania chart ^w^

Shi-Ra's Pattern Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 for 5K diffs)

Normal

Inside :3

00:18:672 - here I recommend you to use this pattern, it'll be more comfortable to catch all notes here in this way, also it's more suitable with your previous patterns nice <3

00:32:026 (32026|1) - move this note to 2nd column, to continue runningmen pattern here, it's really suitable pattern for this part, check it okay owo

00:34:770 (34770|2,34861|3,34953|4) - I suggest you to move these notes to 3rd>2nd>1st columns accordingly to perform comfortable stair transition here, now it plays uncomfortable a little with double noting in 4th column okay~

00:47:666 (47666|0) - centre column again please, now it looks like broken triplet, so I suggest you to fill it, don't leave 2nd column empty owo fixed~

01:24:434 (84434|3,84617|1) - hm...perform stair triplet or move both of this notes to 2nd column to perform more comfortable transition before next going chord okay changed to triplet

That's all here ^w^

Hard

Inside :3

00:22:880 - here I recommend you to re-arrange some notes and use this pattern, it'll be comfortable note transition for stream here nice suggest :3

00:25:441 (25441|0) - hum...you can move this note to 1st column to complete stair pattern here, it'll be awesome after previous jack here, check that okay~

00:40:898 (40898|4) - there's no sound for this note according to the song there are previous and next going beats only, so I think you need to remove it lol fixed

00:46:386 (46386|3) - hum, there's no sound too, I suggest you to remove this note coz the stream actually begins at 00:46:477 fixed

01:04:038 (64038|2,64130|3,64221|4) - what's about moving these notes left by one column? it'll be comfortable transition with next going chord here without jacking in 4th column okay, more better :3

01:18:947 - missed sound here, you can add one more note to 3rd column, check that added

Hm...what's all? Yus I think owo

Last diff no changes I think, nice song, here's your star ^w^
Good luck :3/

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Hello from Shana's Modding Team, there are mods for your mania chart ^w^

Shi-Ra's Pattern Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 for 5K diffs)



Hutu's Hard+

Inside :3

00:09:514 (9514|2,9707|3) - I suggest you to move these notes left by one column to make some difference in these chords, check that, it'll be really good owo ok

00:21:416 (21416|4) - I recommend you to move this note to 2nd column, it'll be more comfortable position for it according to the next going chord
sorry not change,4=bass

00:36:233 (36233|3) - move this one to 2nd column too, same reason as before, or you can move it to 4th column to make this pattern more challenging
ok

00:43:367 (43367|3) - centre or zero column for this note please, you need to accent clap sound in another way, don't perform jack here
ok
01:13:002 (73002|0,73093|1) - I recommend you to move these notes to 1st and 3rd columns accordingly, it'll be more comfortable hand balanced transition for this part
ok
01:27:636 (87636|0) - finally move this one to 1st column to connect previous and next going chords here with this note
sorry 0=bass
That's all for your diff ^w^

Last diff no changes I think, nice song, here's your star ^w^
Good luck :3/

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Hello from Shana's Modding Team, there are mods for your mania chart ^w^

Shi-Ra's Pattern Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 for 5K diffs)

Normal

Inside :3

00:18:672 - here I recommend you to use this pattern, it'll be more comfortable to catch all notes here in this way, also it's more suitable with your previous patterns

00:32:026 (32026|1) - move this note to 2nd column, to continue runningmen pattern here, it's really suitable pattern for this part, check it

00:34:770 (34770|2,34861|3,34953|4) - I suggest you to move these notes to 3rd>2nd>1st columns accordingly to perform comfortable stair transition here, now it plays uncomfortable a little with double noting in 4th column

00:47:666 (47666|0) - centre column again please, now it looks like broken triplet, so I suggest you to fill it, don't leave 2nd column empty owo

01:24:434 (84434|3,84617|1) - hm...perform stair triplet or move both of this notes to 2nd column to perform more comfortable transition before next going chord

That's all here ^w^

Hard

Inside :3

00:22:880 - here I recommend you to re-arrange some notes and use this pattern, it'll be comfortable note transition for stream here

00:25:441 (25441|0) - hum...you can move this note to 1st column to complete stair pattern here, it'll be awesome after previous jack here, check that

00:40:898 (40898|4) - there's no sound for this note according to the song there are previous and next going beats only, so I think you need to remove it

00:46:386 (46386|3) - hum, there's no sound too, I suggest you to remove this note coz the stream actually begins at 00:46:477

01:04:038 (64038|2,64130|3,64221|4) - what's about moving these notes left by one column? it'll be comfortable transition with next going chord here without jacking in 4th column

01:18:947 - missed sound here, you can add one more note to 3rd column, check that

Hm...what's all? Yus I think owo

Hutu's Hard+

Inside :3

00:09:514 (9514|2,9707|3) - I suggest you to move these notes left by one column to make some difference in these chords, check that, it'll be really good owo

00:21:416 (21416|4) - I recommend you to move this note to 2nd column, it'll be more comfortable position for it according to the next going chord

00:36:233 (36233|3) - move this one to 2nd column too, same reason as before, or you can move it to 4th column to make this pattern more challenging

00:43:367 (43367|3) - centre or zero column for this note please, you need to accent clap sound in another way, don't perform jack here

01:13:002 (73002|0,73093|1) - I recommend you to move these notes to 1st and 3rd columns accordingly, it'll be more comfortable hand balanced transition for this part

01:27:636 (87636|0) - finally move this one to 1st column to connect previous and next going chords here with this note

That's all for your diff ^w^

Last diff no changes I think, nice song, here's your star ^w^
Good luck :3/

Marirose wrote:

Hey kyousuke o/
from my queue
you chose 5K 4 diffs , according to my rules, i ll take 3 to mod
and here's the mod

col=1,2,3,4,5

Normal

00:02:740 (2740|0) - ignore this secondary piano sound will better w/
00:03:514 (3514|4,3707|3,3901|2) - same reason, its hard in normal diff i think,just secondary piano sound is enough
00:05:256 (5256|3,5449|1) - ~
00:05:836 (5836|3) - make it another col plz
00:06:611 (6611|0,6804|1) - ignore
00:08:159 (8159|0,8353|1,8546|2) - same
00:08:740 (8740|4,8933|4) - okay,same sound,same col
00:10:095 (10095|2,10288|3) - make them all at col 3
00:18:306 (18306|4,18489|3,18764|2) - no sound,or not clearly sound,i recommand to remove
00:19:130 (19130|3) - soft drum hit,better to ignore this
00:24:160 (24160|2) - remove ,no sound bell sound :3
00:28:733 (28733|2) - try to make this LN,end at 00:29:282 - [color=#00BF00]re-arranged :3[/color]
00:34:861 (34861|2,34953|3) - ignore these sound
00:43:184 (43184|2) - ignore this soft hit
00:54:892 (54892|4,55075|4,55258|4) - try stream here,left→right good idea owo
00:56:355 (56355|2) - remove
01:08:794 (68794|2) - remove
01:09:892 (69892|3) - try change to LN and end at 01:10:258 -
01:17:026 (77026|2) - remove
01:19:221 (79221|2) - remove if you didnt follow the vocal following vocal
01:21:050 (81050|4) - remove,you didnt follow this sound at all
01:22:880 - if vocal? add added :3
01:39:160 - add at LN at col4,end at 01:40:989 - ,same as 01:38:063 (98063|0) - nice owo


end

thanks star nerf down! _(:3_/

Hard

00:08:159 (8159|4) - this LN end at 00:10:482 - and dont forget to fix 00:09:707 (9707|0) -
00:34:221 (34221|0) - move it to col2
00:34:587 (34587|0) - same
00:34:770 (34770|2,34861|1,34953|0) - uncomfortable,try another pattern or remove these soft hit re-arranged a bit .-.
00:48:306 (48306|0) - actually i think this LN is end at 00:48:855 - fixed
00:59:831 (59831|1,61294|3) - umm you followed main+secondary piano sound here,but i think its not friendly to use short LN hmm i make pattern like that anyway...
01:09:617 (69617|3) - col3 plz it's not fit i think and looks hard
01:09:709 (69709|0) - col2 ^
01:39:160 - LN www ok

end

ABOVE ALL
.ogg keysound map is unrankable
plz convert them to .wav format ><
ok will change later~
*too lazy _(:3_/



Good Luck XD

Marirose wrote:

Hey kyousuke o/
from my queue
you chose 5K 4 diffs , according to my rules, i ll take 3 to mod
and here's the mod

col=1,2,3,4,5

Hutu's Hard+

00:09:224 (9224|1) - you can move this to col1,for comfortable pattern connect 00:09:514 (9514|1,9514|3,9707|4,9707|2) - them
no thanks,piano for 2chords(2 piano sounds)
00:52:697 (52697|2) - col2 nice
01:03:124 (63124|1) - col3 then reverse all of them 01:02:941 (62941|4,62941|2,62941|0,63032|3,63124|1,63215|3,63306|2,63306|0,63398|1,63489|3) - better,right? http://puu.sh/epll1/7dc8b0003f.jpg repattern
01:16:111 (76111|0) - remove this one,5 notes are exaggerating..:O instead 3


okay

ABOVE ALL
.ogg keysound map is unrankable
plz convert them to .wav format ><


Good Luck XD

shionelove wrote:

Marirose wrote:

Hey kyousuke o/
from my queue
you chose 5K 4 diffs , according to my rules, i ll take 3 to mod
and here's the mod

col=1,2,3,4,5

Hutu's Hard+

00:09:224 (9224|1) - you can move this to col1,for comfortable pattern connect 00:09:514 (9514|1,9514|3,9707|4,9707|2) - them
no thanks,piano for 2chords(2 piano sounds)
00:52:697 (52697|2) - col2 nice
01:03:124 (63124|1) - col3 then reverse all of them 01:02:941 (62941|4,62941|2,62941|0,63032|3,63124|1,63215|3,63306|2,63306|0,63398|1,63489|3) - better,right? http://puu.sh/epll1/7dc8b0003f.jpg repattern
01:16:111 (76111|0) - remove this one,5 notes are exaggerating..:O instead 3


okay

ABOVE ALL
.ogg keysound map is unrankable
plz convert them to .wav format ><


Good Luck XD

thanks for mad

http://puu.sh/esd6r/fb94f140b7.zip

Lunatic Raccoon wrote:

HI Kyou here comes my mod
Modding Hard and Hard+

General

1. 5K Maps are quite rare in osu!mania. It's quite surprising to see a 5K map here osu!mania needs more 5K maps~!
2. The song is really good actually, i love it <3 <333
3. So the Hard+ diff is still "hutu's Hard+"? hutu has changed his name to "shionelove", so why not changing it?
4. Add "shionelove" to tags ok

Hard

1. 00:12:611 - Add a note for the end of piano slide, maybe? umm no sorry, feels weird ;w;
2. 00:12:030 - You can add a LN here to represent for the piano slide nice~
3. 00:34:953 (34953|1) - Move this to column 3 or 4 then make it a 1/2 beat length LN no ;w;
4. 00:57:819 - An additional LN for the piano slide is possible here it's quite hard
5. 01:03:672 (63672|4) - Turn this into a 1 beat length LN it's not need to make in LN btw
6. 01:14:648 (74648|3) - ^ ^
7. 01:15:380 (75380|4,75745|1) - ^ (This is optional tho) good suggestion owo
8. 01:16:843 - Kind of blank. Mind adding a LN/replacing a note with a LN? no :U
9. 01:38:063 (98063|1) - Move this to 4th col. It will be easier for players to press it more accurately ok
10. 01:40:258 - You can add another LN here no thx~

Good luck!

_S u w a k o_ wrote:

just random 'general' modding since this is my favorite song =w= ( favorite illustrator too =w= ) i am totally lolicon
lolicon o.o
i suddenly wanted to know about this song further myself hhehe

* Metadata : OK!
* BG Size : plz change BG Size to 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9 according to ranking rule will change later~
* MP3 : very moe and fine =w=
( but i might suggest to change 'Hwakaka' mp3 file name to just normally Graceful Anomaly or something related to song ) ok
* TAG / Source : about まじかる ちゃ～みんぐ！...
if read it as roma alphabet.. it becomes to 'majikaru cha~mingu!'
maybe u can think such 'what is that??' ..but this is 'Magical Charming!' in japanese.. so, i don't think it's offical name..
( at least japanese are using katagana to represent other language into their language. but it's hiragana tho )
also, you can check this offical site http://www.lumpofsugar.co.jp/product/magicha/
( d..don't travel this site much!! h..hent /me hides ) can't open lol. It's blocked in Indonesia? :U
so, about source, i suggest to change to ' Ｍａｇｉｃａｌ　Ｃｈａｒｍｉｎｇ！ ' ( wow such pont.. rip copy from offical site )
and you can add 'shionelove' since hutunohito changed name to shionelove ok
* Timing : http://puu.sh/eWL7z/f3939f8f6c.png fine~ ( but.. i didn't check bpm 155.. )
* Offset : OK!
* AiMod : OK!
* Difficulty Spread : seems fine.

you can ask pattern modding if you want~ but remember that i have less experience on 5k modding T.T

R☆Yumi's 4K Chart Check (Column:1,2,3,4,5)
---> Type:GM, Language:

1. Source : "まじかる ちゃ～みんぐ！" ---> OK
2. Tags : "magical charming!" ---> OK
   
   *Tags/Source is acceptable to describe by both the wordings which are usually stated by official website or whatever.
   References : (e.g.1) & (e.g.2) by Magical Charming! Official Web

1. wav & ogg files : ☑ & mp3 file : ☑

1. 00:24:160 (24160|2,24343|4) - & 00:24:526 (24526|2,24709|4) -
   These stairs are shown a character of upper's pitch. Regarding the point of (*1),
   I highly recommend you exchange a pitch direction to not focus on them as the same stuff.

Good Luck

REDYUMiKA wrote:

R☆Yumi's 4K Chart Check (Column:1,2,3,4,5)
---> Type:GM, Language:

[General]
1. Timing Check : ☑

2. Metadata Check : ☑

1. Source : "まじかる ちゃ～みんぐ！" ---> OK
2. Tags : "magical charming!" ---> OK
   
   *Tags/Source is acceptable to describe by both the wordings which are usually stated by official website or whatever.
   References : (e.g.1) & (e.g.2) by Magical Charming! Official Web

3. BG's data Check : *☑

4. HP/OD FIX Check : ☑

5. Audio FIX Check : ☑

1. wav & ogg files : ☑ & mp3 file : ☑

[Normal]
00:05:062 (5062|0) - Here's the start point which have a piano accompaniment for the next part.
I think you wouldn't need to add a note to the above point, if thinking so like the point of 00:06:611 - lol okay~

00:10:869 (10869|2,11062|3) - Ctrl+J, there is a sound which take a lower pitch. applied owo

00:25:624 (25624|2,25806|3,25989|4,26172|0) - Ctrl+J ･･･(*1)

• 00:24:160 (24160|2,24343|4) - & 00:24:526 (24526|2,24709|4) -
  These stairs are shown a character of upper's pitch. Regarding the point of (*1),
  I highly recommend you exchange a pitch direction to not focus on them as the same stuff.

^ applied and re-arranged :3
00:54:892 (54892|1,55075|2,55258|3,55441|4) - Ctrl+J for taking a relevance to the next. ok!

00:59:831 - & 01:01:294 - add a note to 3. To emphasize this upbeat will be a comfortable. added~

01:13:002 - add a note to 4 to emphasize the upbeat. added~

[Hard]
00:53:947 (53947|3) - a little obscure but if you intend to follow the vocal, I think 00:53:977 - is appropriate to put it. okay~ following bell + vocal

01:09:526 (69526|0,69709|0,69892|0) - move them to 2 for taking a balance against the former placement. fixed

(01:11:172 - add a note to 4) already

Good Luck

*Mods Quality Feedback*

Overview

Since the start of the activity I have mostly received a comment to own mod though, I feel sometimes feedback is a little insufficient between the mapper and modder when I think one's comment over again. mod should be the stuff that is always recognized as a simple reference, or a just suggestion toward the mapper, no matter what it hurt you with kinda aggressive phrase. however we have to know one's honest thoughts about the processed mods for example what did you get, or how did you receive.

Don't hold me back. I'm not gonna get a false evaluation. Strict opinion will make me more strong.
Note : ★☆☆☆☆ < (Low) < (High) < ★★★★★

1. how many useful tips did you get from my mod?
[list:1337]★★★★★2. were you able to understand the mod's meaning or intention easily?
★★★★☆3. was I able to satisfy you with the existing contents?
★★★★★4. what do you have a concern about your chart now?
I must focus on hitsounding now...5. do you have a point which need the check further?
Maybe about note placement and pitch・Information
I will change these questions depending on the situation, and surely feedback them for you guys.~ Since 2014,12,14 ~

Lunatic Raccoon wrote:

Hi Kyou here comes my mod
Modding Hard and Hard+

General

1. 5K Maps are quite rare in osu!mania. It's quite surprising to see a 5K map here
2. The song is really good actually, i love it <3
3. So the Hard+ diff is still "hutu's Hard+"? hutu has changed his name to "shionelove", so why not changing it?
4. Add "shionelove" to tags

hutu's Hard

1. Looks like it hasn't been hitsounded yet done
2. Almost perfect, just need to point out some stuffs
3. 00:43:367 - More like double clap, how about doubling this? next two notes are snare and clap
4. 00:49:221 - ^ same
5. 00:46:111 and 00:46:294 - It feels like these should be doubled as well sorry i don't like double notes in one sound
6. 01:16:843 and 01:18:306 should be triple, while 01:17:392 should be double
   that triple notes=that double note's sounds+bass
7. 01:19:404 and 01:20:136 - Leave them double, as 01:20:319 is like a blast so it should has more notes than others
   first triple=bass+snare+instrument same pitch and rhythm as vocal,second triple=bass+inst+cymbal

Good luck!

REDYUMiKA wrote:

R☆Yumi's 4K Chart Check (Column:1,2,3,4,5)
---> Type:GM, Language:

[General]
1. Timing Check : ☑

2. Metadata Check : ☑

1. Source : "まじかる ちゃ～みんぐ！" ---> OK
2. Tags : "magical charming!" ---> OK
   
   *Tags/Source is acceptable to describe by both the wordings which are usually stated by official website or whatever.
   References : (e.g.1) & (e.g.2) by Magical Charming! Official Web

3. BG's data Check : *☑

4. HP/OD FIX Check : ☑

5. Audio FIX Check : ☑

1. wav & ogg files : ☑ & mp3 file : ☑

[hutu's Hard+]
00:05:062 (5062|1,5256|2,5449|3) - & 00:06:030 (6030|2,6224|3,6417|4) -
伴奏とメインメロディの階段、これはそのまま位置を入れ替えてはどうですか？
00:05:643 (5643|0,5836|0) - との接続がしっくり来るような感じがします。 ---> (e.g.1)
1に置いてあった8分の縦を2にずらす形に

00:06:804 (6804|1,6998|2) - Ctrl+J ダブルノートの強調部分、幅があと少し欲しいかもしれないです。
これは強調しているのではなく、低音ピアノ3連に高音ピアノが混ざって2ノーツになってる、いわゆる混フレってやつです
前のパターンで低音は3連隣接階段で置いていて、パターンを変化させたくないのでno changeで

00:11:062 - ~ 00:11:304 - 閾値を意識したのか或いは、単に打ちやすさを考えたのか微妙なところですが..
00:11:111 - は微かに鳴ってる感じがしますね。3にノートを入れても問題ないように感じます。
ここになっていると言うより、低音が4連で00:11:062から始まっているのに気がついたので、2連にして5鍵全てを生かすパターンに変更

00:56:264 (56264|1,56355|2,56447|3) - Ctrl+J ヴォーカルのエンドアクセントと、ベルのような音は切り離したほうがマッチしそうです。
ここはボーカルを取っていないというより、ボーカルと同じリズムでベルが鳴っていてそっちにあわせてるので問題なし

01:09:526 (69526|4,69617|3,69709|4,69800|3,69892|4) - そのまま移動させて34のトリルにしてみてはどうでしょうか。
01:08:794 - & 01:09:160 - の24配列（前者は若干違いますが..）に対して勢いが付けれると思います。
4始動の24トリルにすることで偏りを防ぐことにしました



Good Luck

REDYUMiKA wrote:

[Zan's Anomaly]
00:02:933 (2933|3) - move to 2, pitch is kinda weak around here. ok

00:28:672 - ~ 00:28:916 - There are misplacement of notes by different divisor. ---> (e.g.2) fixed!

00:29:282 - ~ 00:29:648 - I think here's overchorded tho... that's anomaly. changed to singles

00:59:099 - add a note to 3 for making it have a consistence of voice accent. nope~

Good Luck

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

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Kuo Kyoka wrote:

ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - Graceful Anomaly [Osu!Mania Modding]

===

From Kuo Kyoka's osu!mania Modding Queue

Mod Requested by Kyousuke-

[Generals]
- BPM: okay
- Offset: The first offset timing for the bpm (155.000) should have the offset is 1979, its snapper than the old one ok changed!
- AiMod: No Problem
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: does the .ogg is unrankable for now? suggest to ask bat for this and replace ogg to wav

Column
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 |

“Here come of some suggest for your map, I always check fullmap, if I’m too tried I will come back soon, or only check that keys by the request! And remember to reply the mod when you’re accepcted it or not! And dont forget my kud if my suggest is useful ~ Thanks for requested me ~

[Normal]

SPOILER

• 
  00:05:062 (5062|0) - remove this, I think its not necessary if you following mania's sound here, if have the sound in here, its only hithat or a very small piano's sound, sound weird when add a note in here (or not suggest for hearing on normal <(") yourchoice)
  00:16:660 - add a note in here for the bass, for like as 00:15:928 - if you following two notes like it
  00:17:575 - add a note for the bass
  00:22:514 - in here is also
  00:28:550 (28550|4) - remove this, seems hard for players and move 00:28:367 (28367|3) - to 5
  ^ ok, all applied
  00:32:941 (32941|1) - move this note to 00:33:124 - , the sound is weird when have this note in this place it's for snare in col 2
  00:33:672 (33672|4) - also remove this for ^ for snare in col 5
  00:34:770 (34770|1) - almsot doesnt have sound in here, only the small "ting" sound but not fit with the sound like of 00:34:587 - for drum continuation
  00:42:087 - suggest to remove, not add more (if you following to add a note when have the same sound with 00:45:014 - ) it's without bell and more louder, so keep <(")
  00:53:672 (53672|4) - this note support to be on: 00:53:703 - (1/4) i'm folowing drum there, if at 1/4 it's bell sound
  00:53:977 - add a note in here if you like, have a bass in here only bell :U
  00:54:160 - add a note in here for the cymbol *cymbal :v okok
  00:57:087 - remove the note, seems in here only have one drum, only the long note is enough ok
  01:21:782 (81782|3) - suggest to move to 4, fit more with the patterns already in 4, moved to 3 <(")
  01:24:434 (84434|3,84526|2,84617|1) - move those up to 1 line: like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2608769, on 01:24:434 - is the bass, not the piano's sound, it will fit with the next note ok. added note on the bass
  01:27:819 - add a note in 4 for the bass added at 5
  01:29:099 - add a note in 5 for the strong beat of the voice ok
  01:29:374 (89374|0) - remove this one, no sound in here, and move 01:29:465 (89465|2) - to 4 for the patterns ok. re-arranged
  01:29:465 (89465|2) - add a note for the cymbal no cymbal there :U
  01:39:160 (99160|2) - move this to 01:39:709 - (another long sound is in here, not in 01:39:160 - ) but also move the hold to 3 too for patterns i'm following when the sound start. moved to 3
  This diff not yet rankable because not added hitsound, add hitsound for it

[Hard]

SPOILER

• 
  00:01:965 (1965|1) - remove this one, two note is enough for the single piano's sound here ok
  00:14:191 - how about change the pattern like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2608803 re-arranged. more comfortable now :3
  00:34:861 (34861|0,34953|1) - remove this, have hithat sound but, sound weird when add note in here, the hithat seems is too little for hear feels empty when remove it :/
  00:38:611 (38611|2) - remove this note and move the hitsound to longnote: you can see on here doesnt have the cymbol like of 00:38:063 - but on 00:38:063 - you added three notes so 00:38:611 - should be 2 ok
  00:39:343 - but .. on here is have it <(") loll i don't get it <(")
  00:46:477 - improve the patterns for easier: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2608845 okay~ re-arranged
  00:49:770 (49770|4) - move this to 3 for pattern ok
  00:53:002 (53002|3) - support to be on: 00:52:971 - (1/4) ok
  00:53:306 (53306|3) - the bass to small, suggest to remove, hard to hear and pressing it on hard diff keep <(")
  00:58:916 (58916|0,59282|2,59648|4) - remove this, if you see, the next part, you doesnt added two notes when get bass like on this ok ;w;
  01:02:209 (62209|0) - remove? maybe, beat no so strong for two notes fixed
  01:02:209 (62209|0) - remove 1 of 2 notes, there next part have the same strong with this but only added two notes on it ^ same with before? O_o
  01:09:526 - change like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2608965 / you can hear that in 01:09:892 - only have single ring bell, so only a long note is enough wow okay~
  01:13:002 - add a note in 1, the preview part: 01:11:538 - you added two notes when have same sound like this ok. re-arranged
  01:15:745 - remove a note, two notes is eough for this strong beat
  01:16:660 - remove a note, I only hear the bass
  01:29:374 (89374|0) - these is no sound in here
  01:29:008 (89008|4) - these is no ^
  01:39:160 (99160|3) - same as normal's diff, but the first parts you added hitsound, but the last part you not yet add hitsound or no add anymore? if not add anymore, add some for fit the full of htisound! hitsound added :v
  ok, alll apllied and re-arranged.
  Nice

so... the mod still ... WIPW IPWIP IPWIP IPWIP IPIW IPWIP IP ... blah blah blah ... like the wrote of Kyousuke- :3 back soon then
the normal and hard diffs mods still wip?
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