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HabiHolic
예나 내딸이야
Topic Starter
Euny

HabiHolic wrote:

예나 내딸이야
내딸인데;;...

버블 아직앙대

irc나 포스트 모딩 몇개 더 받고.. qat한테 박자승인좀 받고..!
Pink Agate
you ask me a diff mod

[Insane]

00:11:243 (2) - there is not good idea,and 00:11:458 (3) - it's too far to 00:11:243 (2) - ,do it like this




00:14:672 (1) - move to x 248,y 140

00:28:386 (1) - ctrl+g?

00:42:115 (2) - do it like this



00:42:510 (1) - do it like this



00:43:562 - do it like this



try to do my show picture ,it will be better
Topic Starter
Euny

Pink Agate wrote:

you ask me a diff mod

[Insane]

00:11:243 (2) - there is not good idea,and 00:11:458 (3) - it's too far to 00:11:243 (2) - ,do it like this - i want to keep this triangle patterns T.T but i less ds little bit ;) thanks!




00:14:672 (1) - move to x 248,y 140 - yeah

00:28:386 (1) - ctrl+g? - nah.. i think now is better.

00:42:115 (2) - do it like this - those three patterns i'll check later.



00:42:510 (1) - do it like this



00:43:562 - do it like this



try to do my show picture ,it will be better
thank you PA♥♥ i love you
TicClick
00:23:297 (3) on Alarido's Hard is still not snapped properly.

I don't understand what you meant by "I am unsure my beat is correct"; if that was about snap, you got it correctly.
Add 10ms to every uninherited offset to fix the timing.

Your Insane needs mods, because it's newer than the rest of the set.
I also liked Fang's Insane more than yours.
Topic Starter
Euny

TicClick wrote:

00:23:297 (3) on Alarido's Hard is still not snapped properly.

I don't understand what you meant by "I am unsure my beat is correct"; if that was about snap, you got it correctly.
Add 10ms to every uninherited offset to fix the timing.

Your Insane needs mods, because it's newer than the rest of the set.
I also liked Fang's Insane more than yours.
okay, i'll tell alarido again.

And i know fang's diff is more nice.
But he is busy. and he don't want to fix his diff by others
So we have agreed delete his diff.
I dont have no choice.

Btw thanks for recheck!
TicClick
you know you could just wait for him, right?
Topic Starter
Euny

TicClick wrote:

you know you could just wait for him, right?
he is busy. cause his school. and he already told me, he also want to delete it too. what should i do?
Taeyang
[Insane]
OD가 높아서 하락할때 힘들어요 bpm도 빠른게 아니니 6.5정도 추천

00:06:101 (2) - 앞에 ctrl+g 두번해서 조절점 정리해주시고 1,2랑 담요 잘맞춰주세요
00:09:529 (2) - 이쁘게 1/8 했을때 3째칸 에서 꺽어지게
00:12:101 (1) - 필요없는 조절점을 없애주세요
00:14:672 (1) - x240 y137 담요
00:15:958 (4,5,1,2) - 담요정리~
00:24:101 (1,2) - 담요?
00:27:529 (1,1) - 담요
00:30:529 (2,3) - 두개 담요씌우신거 같은데 슬라 조절점 이용해서 잘 다듬어주세요
00:30:958 (1) - 25도 정도 돌려서 저렇게놓고 ctrl+h했을때 변함없을정도로 다듬어주세요 00:30:529 (2) - 이거랑 담요도 잘맞춰주세요
00:37:815 (5) - 뉴콤
00:41:458 (1,2,3) - 이리듬이 더 좋은거같아요
00:39:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 다음 1에 동선 맞춰서 이게 더 좋은거 같아요 리버스 슬라 가는방향 동선에맞춰 잘 다듬어주세요
00:25:815 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 여기도 따라 맞춰서 바꾸실꺼면 바꾸서도 좋을것 같습니다
Topic Starter
Euny

Taeyang wrote:

[Insane]
OD가 높아서 하락할때 힘들어요 bpm도 빠른게 아니니 6.5정도 추천 - 엑스트라가 8이라서 하드플러스랑 사이에 조절하려고 7로 잡았어요!

00:06:101 (2) - 앞에 ctrl+g 두번해서 조절점 정리해주시고 1,2랑 담요 잘맞춰주세요
00:09:529 (2) - 이쁘게 1/8 했을때 3째칸 에서 꺽어지게
00:12:101 (1) - 필요없는 조절점을 없애주세요
00:14:672 (1) - x240 y137 담요
00:15:958 (4,5,1,2) - 담요정리~
00:24:101 (1,2) - 담요?
00:27:529 (1,1) - 담요
00:30:529 (2,3) - 두개 담요씌우신거 같은데 슬라 조절점 이용해서 잘 다듬어주세요
00:30:958 (1) - 25도 정도 돌려서 저렇게놓고 ctrl+h했을때 변함없을정도로 다듬어주세요 00:30:529 (2) - 이거랑 담요도 잘맞춰주세요 - 이거는 제가 나름 규칙성있게 놓은배치라 우선은두고, 말씀하신 슬라는 정리좀 했어요!

00:37:815 (5) - 뉴콤
00:41:458 (1,2,3) - 이리듬이 더 좋은거같아요

00:39:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 다음 1에 동선 맞춰서 이게 더 좋은거 같아요 리버스 슬라 가는방향 동선에맞춰 잘 다듬어주세요
00:25:815 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 여기도 따라 맞춰서 바꾸실꺼면 바꾸서도 좋을것 같습니다

하고 나머지는 다 고쳤어요~ 태양님 너무 고마워요 ㅎㅎ 진짜
Alarido

TicClick wrote:

00:23:297 (3) on Alarido's Hard is still not snapped properly.

► Now it is.

@Euny > http://puu.sh/h6GFj/2efb8ee98a.osu

Att.

P. S.: For the school I lost AnreFM too ;'( </3
Topic Starter
Euny

Alarido wrote:

TicClick wrote:

00:23:297 (3) on Alarido's Hard is still not snapped properly.

► Now it is.

@Euny > http://puu.sh/h6GFj/2efb8ee98a.osu

Att.

P. S.: For the school I lost AnreFM too ;'( </3
yeah, we should be understand.
cause they have to focus on the academic.
i'll update your diff and fix offset after my working done.
thanks ala
Topic Starter
Euny
changed offset. ( +10ms )

and update Alarido's diff.

mod continue for insane
Dark Fang
@ TicClick : i'm so sorry for that. but i'm really busy until 2015/11/12, and enough busy now. sure.
Topic Starter
Euny

Dark Fang wrote:

@ TicClick : i'm so sorry for that. but i'm really busy until 2015/11/12, and enough busy now. sure.
ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

check 'Fucking Calendar' on his user page

xD... and cheer up fang
Nozhomi
HeyHey~ M4M request in-game, so here I am.

- Easy :
  1. 00:13:396 (2) - You should change his direction like this http://puu.sh/h7stq/13077a5b0f.jpg to get a movement more intuitive with 00:14:253 (3) -
  2. 00:23:253 (2,3) - You could blanket this one too.
  3. 00:29:682 (2) - I think you could curve this one to get the flow more intuitive like this http://puu.sh/h7tzi/b384d99b12.jpg.
  4. 00:36:111 - NC here right ?

- Normal :
  1. 00:32:682 (1) - What happend with this slider ? You killed your blanket by using 2 anchor points. Use only one pls.
  2. 00:33:539 (2) - Same as above.
  3. 00:39:539 (1,2) - Make both shape the same. This will improve aesthetic for your map.

- Hard :
  1. 00:13:396 (1) - CTRL+G it. You shouldn't force this kind of transition with 00:13:825 (1) - but just let the end of slider continue with the next one. It play better.
  2. 00:14:682 (2,3) - The movement you start with 00:14:682 (2) - makes the flow unnatural. Move them like this to have a flow more coherent and still keep a good pattern with 00:15:968 (2) - http://puu.sh/h7Io4/65308340ef.jpg.
  3. 00:22:825 (2,3) - If you really want to blanket these, use a simple curve for 00:23:468 (3) - .
  4. 00:25:611 (4,1) - Failed blanket.
  5. 00:29:896 (1) - Move the end by 45° to the right, to get a better flow with 00:30:325 (2) - .
  6. 00:32:682 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:22:825 (2,3) -.
  7. 00:45:151 (1,2) - ^
  8. 00:47:520 (2,3) - ^

- Alarido's Hard+ :
  1. Why not call it Alarido's Hyper ?
  2. 00:24:968 (3) - NC for SV change.
  3. 00:28:396 (2) - ^

- Insane :
  1. 00:18:539 (2) - I know you want to blanket but this make flow with newt slider really bad. I suggest you blanket with 00:18:111 (1) - instead like this http://puu.sh/h7JjI/4354628f6e.jpg.
  2. 00:47:520 - You should start decrease volume here, before the music is still loud. Or just decrease by 5% and then 10 but not 20% this is too much.

- EiNess's Extra :
  1. 00:12:111 (1,1) - Blanket a little off.
  2. 00:12:968 (1) - Better CTRL+J to make the movement with 00:13:396 (1) - better.
  3. 00:24:111 (1) - CTRL+G maybe. When I play it, this looks more logic for me.

Good luck on rerank o/
Mukyu~
Alarido

Nozhomi wrote:

HeyHey~ M4M request in-game, so here I am.

- Alarido's Hard+ :
  1. Why not call it Alarido's Hyper ? ► Because of p/3997750
  2. 00:24:968 (3) - NC for SV change. ► For this, a NC should be made on 00:25:376 (4) too, so don't.
  3. 00:28:396 (2) - ^
► There's no SV change here.

Good luck on rerank o/
Mukyu~

@Euny No changes.

@Nozhomi Thx
[ Zzz ]

Nozhomi wrote:

- Hard :
  1. 00:13:396 (1) - CTRL+G it. You shouldn't force this kind of transition with 00:13:825 (1) - but just let the end of slider continue with the next one. It play better.
  2. 00:14:682 (2,3) - The movement you start with 00:14:682 (2) - makes the flow unnatural. Move them like this to have a flow more coherent and still keep a good pattern with 00:15:968 (2) - http://puu.sh/h7Io4/65308340ef.jpg.
  3. 00:22:825 (2,3) - If you really want to blanket these, use a simple curve for 00:23:468 (3) - .
  4. 00:25:611 (4,1) - Failed blanket.
  5. 00:29:896 (1) - Move the end by 45° to the right, to get a better flow with 00:30:325 (2) - .
  6. 00:32:682 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:22:825 (2,3) -.
  7. 00:45:151 (1,2) - ^
  8. 00:47:520 (2,3) - ^
Thank you~ Nozhomi

All Fix~ !!



Done!
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TitleUnicode:지딸도 아닌 예나 (Dubstep Remix)
Artist:HeHeJSM
ArtistUnicode:HeHeJSM
Creator:Euny
Version:Zzz's Hard
Source:
Tags:[_Zzz_] alarido eINess 사랑했나봐 Kim Jo Han 김조한 You Are My Girl
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Topic Starter
Euny

Nozhomi wrote:

HeyHey~ M4M request in-game, so here I am.

- Easy :
  1. 00:13:396 (2) - You should change his direction like this http://puu.sh/h7stq/13077a5b0f.jpg to get a movement more intuitive with 00:14:253 (3) - -little bit changed thanks
  2. 00:23:253 (2,3) - You could blanket this one too.
  3. 00:29:682 (2) - I think you could curve this one to get the flow more intuitive like this http://puu.sh/h7tzi/b384d99b12.jpg.
  4. 00:36:111 - NC here right ?

- Normal :
  1. 00:32:682 (1) - What happend with this slider ? You killed your blanket by using 2 anchor points. Use only one pls. - yeah, i dont using 4point xD.. but its for blanket.
  2. 00:33:539 (2) - Same as above.
  3. 00:39:539 (1,2) - Make both shape the same. This will improve aesthetic for your map.

- Insane :
  1. 00:18:539 (2) - I know you want to blanket but this make flow with newt slider really bad. I suggest you blanket with 00:18:111 (1) - instead like this http://puu.sh/h7JjI/4354628f6e.jpg.
  2. 00:47:520 - You should start decrease volume here, before the music is still loud. Or just decrease by 5% and then 10 but not 20% this is too much.

Good luck on rerank o/
Mukyu~
fix them all with out red one. thanks > < Nozhomi.....
Ujimatsu Chiya

Nozhomi wrote:

HeyHey~ M4M request in-game, so here I am.

- EiNess's Extra :
  1. 00:12:111 (1,1) - Blanket a little off. // ok
  2. 00:12:968 (1) - Better CTRL+J to make the movement with 00:13:396 (1) - better. // not bad now I think.
  3. 00:24:111 (1) - CTRL+G maybe. When I play it, this looks more logic for me. // not for me. sorry Q^Q

Good luck on rerank o/
Mukyu~
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280,312,49756,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,312,49888,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,168,50151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,344,50414,2,0,L|424:224,1,102.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,72,50941,5,2,0:0:0:0:

thanks mod~
Sonico Makaron
Hello~

[Insane]
00:13:396 (2,3) - How about add soft whistle at the beginner sliders?
00:15:539 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Remove NC and 00:15:968 (1) - add NC here, also 00:16:396 (1) - Remove NC here. Thats NC fits more well imo
00:20:039 (2) - Citrl+g and 00:20:467 (4) - this too for better flow
00:29:253 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - same thing as 00:15:539 (1,2,3)

thats all~
good luck ^^
Topic Starter
Euny

Sonico Makaron wrote:

Hello~ heyyyyyyy soni

[Insane]
00:13:396 (2,3) - How about add soft whistle at the beginner sliders? - sure
00:15:539 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Remove NC and 00:15:968 (1) - add NC here, also 00:16:396 (1) - Remove NC here. Thats NC fits more well imo - okay, i accept and changed that nc
00:20:039 (2) - Citrl+g and 00:20:467 (4) - this too for better flow - i love this more xD..
00:29:253 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - same thing as 00:15:539 (1,2,3) - kay

thats all~
good luck ^^
was nice mod really thanks friend
HabiHolic
nice Insane diff! GL~
Topic Starter
Euny

HabiHolic wrote:

nice Insane diff! GL~


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Sonnyc
[Easy]
  1. 00:09:539 (1,2) - 쿵짝 박자를 표현하시는 상황에서 뉴콤보를 "짝"에 넣으시는 것은 어색한 처리입니다. 콤보를 00:10:396 부터 시작하셔서 단일 콤보 만드시는 게 더 음악에 맞는 설정입니다.
  2. 00:29:253 (1,2) - 이거도 콤보를 음이 급격히 강해지는 (2) 부터 시작하시는게 더 어울립니다.
  3. 00:43:572 - 여기에 박자가 존재하는 것은 어색합니다. 악기 소리, 가사 어디와도 어울리지 않네요. (1,2,3)에 ctrl+H,J 패턴을 넣기 위해 억지로 만들어진 느낌이 듭니다. 00:44:098 여기 부터 시작하는 1/1 슬라이더 하나로 대체하셔서 여백을 넣으시는 게 적합한 박자가 될 것입니다.
[Normal]
  1. 00:25:825 (3) - 원래 뉴콤 스팟 아닌가요?
[Zzz's Hard]
  • 그냥 코멘트입니다만 00:13:825 (2) 이런 류의 Bezier 슬라이더 작도하실 때 처음과 두 번째 점이 너무 가까워서 슬라이더 모양이 시작점과 끝점으로 너무 눌린듯한 느낌이 들어서 아쉬움이 남습니다.
[Alarido's Hard+]
  1. 00:36:968 (3) - Please add a New combo! The distance is inconsistent with 00:36:111 (1,2), and it can lead to a confusion since an 3/8 rhythm is not something used often here. Also the zigzag pattern of 00:37:182 (4,5) gives more demand for a better readability which can be enhanced with your NC usage.
[Insane]
  1. Slider tick은 1로 맞춰주세요. 슬라이더 이후 1/4 연타가 되는 경우가 많이 사용되었는데 이 슬라이더가 끝나기 전에 들어있는 틱 소리가 많이 어색합니다. 틱 없애는 게 더 깔끔한 맵입니다.
  2. 00:04:396 (2,2) - 1/4 더 늘리셔서 가사 "왜"에 딱 맞게 슬라이더가 끝나도록 설정해 주세요.
  3. 00:25:182 (2,3) - 음악과 맞지 않은 무리수 점프입니다. 플레이하기 매우 부자연스러워서 지적합니다. 음악의 변동이 심하지 않은 부분이어서 굳이 이렇게 큰 점프가 필요하지 않으며 점프를 넣는다면 가볍게 넣을만한 부분입니다.
  4. 00:41:994 - 00:42:125 - 드럼 소리에 맞춰서 넣으신 연타로 보이는데 이에 호응할 수 있는 드럼 힛사를 추가해 주시기 바랍니다. 안그러면 그냥 오버매핑으로만 느껴질 뿐입니다.
  5. 00:47:520 - 음량 감소가 너무 빨리 이루어졌습니다. 음악에 비해 힛사가 잘 들리지 않습니다. 00:48:572 여기서 부터 음량 감소 처리해 주시면 충분합니다.
Topic Starter
Euny

Sonnyc wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 00:09:539 (1,2) - 쿵짝 박자를 표현하시는 상황에서 뉴콤보를 "짝"에 넣으시는 것은 어색한 처리입니다. 콤보를 00:10:396 부터 시작하셔서 단일 콤보 만드시는 게 더 음악에 맞는 설정입니다.
  2. 00:29:253 (1,2) - 이거도 콤보를 음이 급격히 강해지는 (2) 부터 시작하시는게 더 어울립니다.
  3. 00:43:572 - 여기에 박자가 존재하는 것은 어색합니다. 악기 소리, 가사 어디와도 어울리지 않네요. (1,2,3)에 ctrl+H,J 패턴을 넣기 위해 억지로 만들어진 느낌이 듭니다. 00:44:098 여기 부터 시작하는 1/1 슬라이더 하나로 대체하셔서 여백을 넣으시는 게 적합한 박자가 될 것입니다.
[Normal]
  1. 00:25:825 (3) - 원래 뉴콤 스팟 아닌가요?
[Insane]
  1. Slider tick은 1로 맞춰주세요. 슬라이더 이후 1/4 연타가 되는 경우가 많이 사용되었는데 이 슬라이더가 끝나기 전에 들어있는 틱 소리가 많이 어색합니다. 틱 없애는 게 더 깔끔한 맵입니다.
  2. 00:04:396 (2,2) - 1/4 더 늘리셔서 가사 "왜"에 딱 맞게 슬라이더가 끝나도록 설정해 주세요.
  3. 00:25:182 (2,3) - 음악과 맞지 않은 무리수 점프입니다. 플레이하기 매우 부자연스러워서 지적합니다. 음악의 변동이 심하지 않은 부분이어서 굳이 이렇게 큰 점프가 필요하지 않으며 점프를 넣는다면 가볍게 넣을만한 부분입니다.
  4. 00:41:994 - 00:42:125 - 드럼 소리에 맞춰서 넣으신 연타로 보이는데 이에 호응할 수 있는 드럼 힛사를 추가해 주시기 바랍니다. 안그러면 그냥 오버매핑으로만 느껴질 뿐입니다.
  5. 00:47:520 - 음량 감소가 너무 빨리 이루어졌습니다. 음악에 비해 힛사가 잘 들리지 않습니다. 00:48:572 여기서 부터 음량 감소 처리해 주시면 충분합니다.
다 고쳤어용~ 업로드하면 한번만 더 확인해주세요 너무너무감사합니다 손닉님
[ Zzz ]

Sonnyc wrote:

[Zzz's Hard]
  • 그냥 코멘트입니다만 00:13:825 (2) 이런 류의 Bezier 슬라이더 작도하실 때 처음과 두 번째 점이 너무 가까워서 슬라이더 모양이 시작점과 끝점으로 너무 눌린듯한 느낌이 들어서 아쉬움이 남습니다.
ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ
Tenseki
it has a wrong on diff's name of eINess
plz change to eINess's Extra
Topic Starter
Euny

Tenseki wrote:

it has a wrong on diff's name of eINess
plz change to eINess's Extra
no its correct xD....
check his other gd name.
Alarido

Sonnyc wrote:

[Alarido's Hard+]
  1. 00:36:968 (3) - Please add a New combo! The distance is inconsistent with 00:36:111 (1,2), and it can lead to a confusion since an 3/8 rhythm is not something used often here. Also the zigzag pattern of 00:37:182 (4,5) gives more demand for a better readability which can be enhanced with your NC usage.

@Sonnyc all done > Thx

@Euny > http://puu.sh/he90k/d19b44cf36.osu

@Lally > Read my pm pls
Topic Starter
Euny
everything is done! :D
Kodora
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Topic Starter
Euny





@Q@ ...

"why bring yena? She is not her daughter."

"....yena...is her daughter."

"(shock)" and vomit juice
Sonnyc
Q
Topic Starter
Euny

Sonnyc wrote:

Q



. 사랑해요손닉님
Tari
Gratz Eeuny!!!!

You really create drug maps LOL. (well more of songs but anyway...)
BeatofIke
Congrats Euny <3
Topic Starter
Euny

Tari wrote:

Gratz Eeuny!!!!

You really create drug maps LOL. (well more of songs but anyway...)
yeah i love weird ;) it gives me inspiration for mapping.

and thanks for celebration :)
Topic Starter
Euny

BeatofIke wrote:

Congrats Euny <3
fike thank you > <...///
HabiHolic
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