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hehe

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hehe 2015-01-24T17:45:37+00:00

hello muya~ from queue

General

fix the bg size.. 1024x768 or 1366x768~
normal > hard spread might be not good, because hard has many use of 1/4 while normal i still quite simple. you can cut down on 1/4 for hard or make normal a bit more harder.
mod is short, the map is already very well polished, i really like it.

Another

AIBAT says: http://i.imgur.com/A5QDiTE.png
1. 01:01:893 - duplicate green line
2. 01:17:643 - snap to 01:17:664
3. 01:28:057 - snap to 01:28:036
4. 1:28:614 - snap to 01:28:593
its my general opinion but.. i feel that the 1/6 in this map is too far and might not be easily readable and played as 1/4.
01:17:150 (2,6,7,8) - this is just break magnet ;_; anyway NC 8 since it repeat shorter than the rest, easier to read.
01:45:950 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - follow 00:03:608 (6,7,8,9,10) - ?

Insane

AIBAT says: 01:01:893 - duplicate green line
01:00:521 / 01:12:864 / useless greenline
00:08:664 - strongly suggest add note here
00:14:150 - maybe here too but sound is not as loud
00:17:321 (6,7) - 3/2 spacing is hard... maybe connect to slider~
00:38:750 (3) - sound is much louder here than 00:38:579 (1,2) - , i suggest try to create more emphasis. http://i.imgur.com/SkKebgh.png
00:41:836 - put note
01:45:093 (6,7) - same as previous

Hard

OD to 6.5, even if the map is somewhat hard in rhythm i think the OD is a little too high
AIBAT says: 01:02:408 - duplicate green line
00:12:350 / 00:40:464 / 00:41:236 / 00:43:979 / 00:46:721 / 01:02:408 / 01:04:464 / 01:07:207 / 01:09:950 / 01:27:093 / 01:40:121 / 01:49:721 / 01:49:893 / 01:50:064 - useless green lines
01:12:864 - for the kiai, the rhythm might be a little too difficult for hard, it is also repetitive. i suggest maybe alternating between your current rhythm and http://i.imgur.com/gnJQw4s.png (i swapped the existing triples for reverses, and vice versa)

Normal

00:34:464 (1) - lol this is so lazy imo, you can make this harder.

Beginner

too many NC, cut in half. NC every 2 measures instead.

Muya

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Muya 2015-01-24T19:50:57+00:00

handsome wrote:
Another

01:01:893 - duplicate green line

Insane
01:00:521 / 01:12:864 / useless greenline

Hard
fixed section

fixed these thanks

Ranger

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Ranger 2015-02-14T10:25:23+00:00

konnichiha

[Beginner]

01:14:236 (1) - spacing error a little
01:34:464 - add circle here? cause clap sound to hear in this part.

[Normal]

00:12:179 (4) - add finish or clap
00:28:464 (3) - how about change clap to finish?
00:39:264 (2) - add finish for good measure. it`s better to hear me :3
00:46:979 (1,2) - make same angle at 00:48:007 (4,1).
01:17:150 (2) - recommend add some hitsound at front.
01:28:121 (2) - ^
01:34:464 (3) - add finish for good measure. same reason

same make hitsound at other diff plz~

[Hard]

00:17:664 - add circle here?
01:17:664 (3) - touch the 01:17:150 (2) , unseat that.

[Hyper]

00:17:579 (7) - remove this?
00:42:521 (7) - spacing error, deliberately did that? i`m not recommend this
00:50:407 (8,9,10) - how about make like this?

sorry, can`t found something at Another

maybe i`m not much help...
anyway. Good Luck~

Muya

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Muya 2015-02-15T15:56:44+00:00

Ranger wrote:
[Beginner]

01:14:236 (1) - spacing error a little

fixed this, thank you!

Rirakusu

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Rirakusu 2015-02-20T08:19:04+00:00

My favourite Memme song. Might mod it tomorrow (or whatever time when i'm free). Just asking if you are accepting random mods?

ac8129464363

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ac8129464363 2015-02-28T01:29:21+00:00

jinhang_ang wrote:
My favourite Memme song. Might mod it tomorrow (or whatever time when i'm free). Just asking if you are accepting random mods?

I don't think there's a mapper who wouldn't accept a free mod. :p

Rirakusu

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Rirakusu 2015-03-01T13:16:46+00:00

Okay mod here. Maybe my opinions are quite different from yours but don't kill me pls ;;

First, no kiai. I suggest using 01:12:864 to 01:34:464 . And maybe a kiai fountain in 01:23:836

Secondly, the wallpaper looks a little bland to me. Maybe you should go for something red and warmer + more saturation

Slider tick rate should be 1 imo. But if you use 2 for the nice tick sounds (which sounds pretty nice for me) then keep it.

For diffs..

Beginner

Actually you should not use any overlaps. For the easiest diff, overlapping is a very rare case and mostly not accepted. Taking this quote from a modder in #modhelp..

When beginners see two notes overlapping no matter stacking or not, they will start mashing.

Don't tell me that you are trying to training them to play hard. Do that in normal but not in easy. In my opinion, you need to remap this diff, with no overlaps. For a high BPM like this, only use 2/1 if possible to avoid overlaps. Feel free to use 1.0 ds too.

Hitobject modding below.

00:01:550 (1) - You seem to reverse this slider for too many times. This makes the overall feeling a little boring. Try to separate it into different sliders, and in this way you can make it more intuitive to play + maybe more visually appealing. Same for 00:34:464 (1)

00:08:407 (1) - Cancel NC. Same for 00:13:893 (1) , 00:41:150 (1) , 01:08:750 (1)

Extend 01:46:464 (2) to a slider that ends on 01:47:664 , remove the first spinner and keep the second one.

Although you used overlaps that aren't accepted in this diff, but I love your choice when it comes to circle or slider. It feels nice to hit (and nicer without overlaps

) and play. Feel free to ask for recheck (if you want to).

Normal

The SV is a little too fast. Somewhat reminds me of DJPop maps lol. Low AR and high SV. Feel free to keep it though, it is theoretically acceptable (but I don't like it). It makes me hit the next note too early for most of the times as the SV guides.

00:06:693 (3) - NC and remove NC for the next note.

00:31:721 (1,2,3) - I think this is a small difficulty spike. Maybe a reversed slider?

00:34:464 (1) - I think this should be changed..see what I said in Beginner.

01:46:464 (2,1) - Same as Beginner? Double spinners isn't a good idea for Normal or below.

Again, I love your placements and choice for sliders and circles. The whole map isn't circle-oriented or slider-oriented. You achieved the balance which is really hard to get in easy diffs like these. Congratz.

Hard

This diff is nice :3 Love it. But for some parts it isn't visually appealing enough (maybe i'm picky but i'll just point out)

00:02:921 (1) - Cancel NC

00:18:693 (3) - I wish you can blanket with 00:19:207 (1) and the same for 00:19:721 (2) and 00:20:064 (3)

01:17:664 (3) - This doesn't fit well with 01:17:150 (2) - change?

01:28:121 (2,3) - Same.

Again, I love this diff <3 but just I noticed many patterns repeat. Not very if intentional? Anyway If you can avoid same patterns (which look like copy and paste plus some rotation tweaks..) then it will be perfect!!

Hyper

This diff looks like Another in some ways. I hope that you can call it an Insane instead of Hyper. No one calls a map full of ~~short~~ streams 'Hyper' lol.

Quite the same issue with Hard. It has some repeated patterns too (and a part which looked like Hard..) but feel free to keep it.

So..I don't notice any big issues here, besides the wrong diff name + some occasional repeating patterns (which is quite rare to be found when playing, unlike hard), nothing else needs changing.

Another

Well..give it a custom diff name, or just call it Extra. Another is a little 'low-class' for this difficulty ;;

00:13:207 (4,5) - Not very sure about this. The slider path of 00:13:207 (5) is hiding behind the circle and hiding slider paths is a grey area of the ranking criteria.

Same for 01:40:979 (4,5)

Quick question. What are you streaming from 00:50:921 onward? Sorry I really can't hear that.

-end of mod-

Reply pls :3

Muya

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Muya 2015-03-03T09:32:40+00:00

> jinhang_ang
sorry no changed

but thanks

Kotori-Chan

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Kotori-Chan 2015-03-15T16:10:45+00:00

i think you should use a better audio version :3
this one is a little bit silent :/

i think this version is better ^-^

http://www.mediafire.com/listen/k3maca2 ... aurant.mp3

tried to mod this map, but can´t really find something D:

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Muya

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Muya 2015-03-15T20:13:56+00:00

I fixed to better volume
and revive!

P A N

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P A N 2015-03-18T10:13:28+00:00

imo the last spinner doesn't fit well.
I mean if it end on that note is feeling better?

ouch nvm, maybe my earphone is broken

Muya

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Muya 2015-03-18T11:52:05+00:00

P A N wrote:
imo the last spinner doesn't fit well.
I mean if it end on that note is feeling better?

ouch nvm, maybe my earphone is broken

thank you!
maybe better now

Korey

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Korey 2015-05-08T14:46:14+00:00

from #modreqs

General

kiai sections?

Hyper

00:24:521 (6,1) - improve blanket
00:43:893 (3) - slider?

Hard

00:08:750 - 1/2 beat slider the music doesn't feel like it should have a break there
00:14:236 - ^
00:16:807 - note here?
00:41:150 - 1/1 beat slider?
00:41:493 - note here?
01:44:579 - note here?

Beginner

00:13:893 (1) - i think this should start half a beat later at 00:14:064 -
01:18:521 - ^

sorry i couldn't find much hope my mod helps

Muya

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Muya 2015-05-10T06:28:53+00:00

ikorza wrote:
from #modreqs

General

kiai sections?

Hyper

00:24:521 (6,1) - improve blanket
00:43:893 (3) - slider?

Hard

00:08:750 - 1/2 beat slider the music doesn't feel like it should have a break there
00:14:236 - ^
00:16:807 - note here?
00:41:150 - 1/1 beat slider?
00:41:493 - note here?
01:44:579 - note here?

Beginner

00:13:893 (1) - i think this should start half a beat later at 00:14:064 -
01:18:521 - ^

sorry i couldn't find much hope my mod helps

sorry no changed

but thanks

Avena

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Avena 2015-05-15T17:11:04+00:00

Marked~

Avena

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Avena 2015-05-16T12:58:08+00:00

Changed MP3
Fixed offset according to new MP3
Raised hitsound volumes to fit new MP3
Lowered the AR on Another
Fixed BG Resolution
Resnapped preview point
Fixed unrankable spinner gap in Hyper.

Bubbled~

meii18

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meii18 2015-05-16T15:32:14+00:00

=w=

2015-05-16 15:38 ByBy_ChAn: hi
2015-05-16 15:43 Muya: hi
2015-05-16 15:44 ByBy_ChAn: can I say something about your map ?
2015-05-16 15:46 Muya: which map
2015-05-16 15:46 ByBy_ChAn: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/567824 Memme - Chinese Restaurant]
2015-05-16 15:46 Muya: ok
2015-05-16 15:53 ByBy_ChAn: you changed the mp3 right ?
2015-05-16 15:56 Muya: yes
2015-05-16 15:56 ByBy_ChAn: well the objects sounds very weird now
2015-05-16 15:58 ByBy_ChAn: set the offset on 00:00:822 - on all diffs
2015-05-16 15:59 ByBy_ChAn: then select all the objects and move them to right to white tick
2015-05-16 15:59 Muya: mp3 and offset are same as this version
2015-05-16 15:59 Muya: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/627829 Memme - Chinese Restaurant]
2015-05-16 15:59 ByBy_ChAn: yes
2015-05-16 16:00 Muya: fine now?
2015-05-16 16:01 ByBy_ChAn: wait I'll be afk sorry you can wait me ?
2015-05-16 16:01 Muya: sure
2015-05-16 17:05 ByBy_ChAn: I'm back
2015-05-16 17:05 Muya: ^_^
2015-05-16 17:05 ByBy_ChAn: and now about source
2015-05-16 17:08 ByBy_ChAn: remove ''2015'' from source because it should Pump It Up Prime withput 2015
2015-05-16 17:08 ByBy_ChAn: *without
2015-05-16 17:14 ByBy_ChAn: you heard me ? owo
2015-05-16 17:14 Muya: yes
2015-05-16 17:14 ByBy_ChAn: okay
2015-05-16 17:14 ByBy_ChAn: you fixed the source ?
2015-05-16 17:15 Muya: yes
2015-05-16 17:15 ByBy_ChAn: okay
2015-05-16 17:23 ByBy_ChAn: 01:23:067 (2)- remove the clap from tail because this clap was put accidentally =w=
2015-05-16 17:24 ByBy_ChAn: in beginner
2015-05-16 17:27 Muya: yo
2015-05-16 17:27 Muya: fixed begginer
2015-05-16 17:44 ByBy_ChAn: 01:17:067 (2,3)- this overlap is not intentional and looks untidy and unaesthetic so I suggest to separate those sliders I mean to move (3)- to 387|60 for example
2015-05-16 17:45 Muya: which diff?
2015-05-16 17:45 ByBy_ChAn: hard diff
2015-05-16 17:48 ByBy_ChAn: you fixed ?
2015-05-16 17:49 ByBy_ChAn: ooh oops move (3)- to 394|69 and then move next note to 345|15 to avoid another overlap in hard diff
2015-05-16 17:50 Muya: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3135310 is ok?
2015-05-16 17:50 ByBy_ChAn: yes
2015-05-16 17:56 ByBy_ChAn: 01:23:410 (9)- maybe you put accidentally clap on slider's head so delete it and if you placed clap on the same point on other diffs I suggest to remove it from other diff
2015-05-16 17:58 Muya: which diff
2015-05-16 17:59 ByBy_ChAn: hyper
2015-05-16 18:00 ByBy_ChAn: oo:14:924 (9,10)- in another diff , you can use same spacing I mean 0.7 ds because there's no reason to increase the spacing here since there's no emphasis or cymbal
2015-05-16 18:02 ByBy_ChAn: 01:23:
2015-05-16 18:03 ByBy_ChAn: oops 01:23:410 (12)- again clap placed accidentally I guess =w= remove it
2015-05-16 18:03 ByBy_ChAn: in another diff
2015-05-16 18:03 ByBy_ChAn: ooh never mind keep the clap
2015-05-16 18:03 ByBy_ChAn: =w=
2015-05-16 18:05 ByBy_ChAn: also you can revert the clap on beginner diff on 01:23:067 (2)- on tail =w=
2015-05-16 18:05 ByBy_ChAn: that's all from me you fixed everything ?
2015-05-16 18:08 Muya: wanna keep 00:14:496 (6,7,8,9,10) - in another
2015-05-16 18:08 Muya: other fixed
2015-05-16 18:08 ByBy_ChAn: okay

~~I'll qualify later~~

sorry but the map is not ready enough for rank because I'm worried about hitsounding the chorus seems is not hitsounded so you should hitsound the chorus

also change the slider tick to 1 to fit much better the song

call me ~~for rebubble~~ when you back online :3

Avena

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Avena 2015-05-17T14:30:15+00:00

Rebub~

meii18

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meii18 2015-05-17T14:32:30+00:00

~~reserve for qualify =w=~~

Checked everything and looks awesome =w=b

Qualified

Muya

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Muya 2015-05-17T16:49:03+00:00

thanks Priti and ByBy_Chan ^_^

xGx

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xGx 2015-05-17T16:54:48+00:00

Wow, grats!

Bara-

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Bara- 2015-05-17T16:59:45+00:00

Congratz
Chinese Restaurant #3 has officially opened

Natteke

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Natteke 2015-05-17T17:12:24+00:00

gratz mayonezu

alacat

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alacat 2015-05-17T17:14:57+00:00

omedesu

Secretpipe

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Secretpipe 2015-05-17T17:54:18+00:00

Another Muya ranked map ? sweet <3

Myxo

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Myxo 2015-05-23T17:50:41+00:00

###M

After internal discussion, we decided to disqualify this mapset for the following issues:

[Beginner]

The Slider Velocity in this difficulty is way too low, causing several problems.

The SV gap to the Normal diff is too huge. It's not a natural step in spread.
Due to the low SV, the spacing is also visually very low. It makes many of the objects touch each other, which makes the difficulty feel very cramped. It's basically a long chain of objects rather than a reasonable map.
1/1-gaps and 3/2-gaps both make the objects touch each other (see 00:04:896 (2,1,2) -) which is both cramped and can also be confusing for newbies. Due to the low SV and spacing, the different gap lengths are difficult to distinguish from each other.

We recommend you to increase the SV to 0.9x and avoid consecutive objects overlapping.

Moreover, the multiple repeat sliders like 00:01:467 (1) are not suitable for this level of difficulty. The multiple repeats appear way too late to be readable for newbie players - Please avoid having more than one repeat on a slider in your easiest difficulty.

[Hyper]

01:46:467 (1) - This spinner is missing a New Combo. Deleting and replacing it will fix this issue.

Nice higher diffs! Good luck.

meii18

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meii18 2015-05-23T19:09:16+00:00

my 2nd dq for this month

Xilver15

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Xilver15 2015-05-23T20:16:55+00:00

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Muya

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Muya 2015-05-24T00:45:58+00:00

thanks Desperate-kun

all fixed

Satellite

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Satellite 2015-05-26T14:36:01+00:00

I check'd unrankable issue and diff gap.
fine to me. So Repair Bubbled ~ Good luck requalified!

meii18

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meii18 2015-05-26T15:35:15+00:00

~~reserve =w=~~~ nvm

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Avena

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Avena 2015-05-26T20:11:11+00:00

The spacing on Beginner is still problematic, considering the circles still touch eachother in a way that isn't really appealing.
Maybe use x1 spacing on that diff and try to quickly adjust everything? Considering the low density it shouldn't be hard to do.

Muya

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Muya 2015-05-26T21:14:28+00:00

done

Satellite

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Satellite 2015-05-26T23:00:30+00:00

www

Avena