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Kibbleru
no dap got confirmation from garven about the triplets. we also got 2 other qats or 3? saying they were fine. so yeh i guess we can keep.

ill qualify tomorrow

shit did not mean to post heart icon yet
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[Vincent]

Kibbleru wrote:

no dap got confirmation from garven about the triplets. we also got 2 other qats or 3? saying they were fine. so yeh i guess we can keep.

ill qualify tomorrow

shit did not mean to post heart icon yet
Broke my heart </3
Winnie
Kibbleru is so mean toying with other people's hearts :(
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[Vincent]

Kocari wrote:

Hypuh!
Hypuh gone. I'm done
Kibbleru
Now ranked
Kinshara
Yes gratz Vince!
Mint
grats!

really nice song <3
Zero__wind
oh
nice
another DT pp pool
Gelbana
Gratz! \o/
PuttyoU
Good SB! but wrong lyrics :(
Aka
awesome storyboard ;w;
awesome diffs ;w;
awesome ;w;
Gelbana

PuttyoU wrote:

Good SB! but wrong lyrics :(
Damn.
Kinshara

Gelbana wrote:

PuttyoU wrote:

Good SB! but wrong lyrics :(
Damn.
Damn.
Gelbana


Wrong "te" (手)... It still reads the same, right? ;_;
But that's all I could find.
Unsfamiliar
yay!
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[Vincent]

Gelbana wrote:



Wrong "te" (手)... It still reads the same, right? ;_;
But that's all I could find.
rip
Anmol
noob
grtz
VINXIS
R A N K B O Y S
Ozato Fumika
if you wanna fix the lyrics feel free to request dq

but if you do, do it fast before more people lose their score.

Also make sure your lyrics are actually wrong before you do it cuz I don't speak Japanese I don't know
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[Vincent]

No Dap wrote:

if you wanna fix the lyrics feel free to request dq

but if you do, do it fast before more people lose their score.

Also make sure your lyrics are actually wrong before you do it cuz I don't speak Japanese I don't know
I don't think it's worth fixing, so we'll leave it as it currently is unless shitloads of complaints come in
Gelbana
Lust
Disqualification for the wrong lyrics in the storyboard.

Here is just some additional modding you can take under consideration, these are opinions of my own and not that of the QAT
[Insane]
  1. 00:31:160 (3,4) - This flow change is a bit extreme and leads to sort of an awkward play. 3 flows left and up with the repeat while 4 comes back down the same way. I recommend orienting 00:31:719 (4) - in a way that leads to a more easier angle of approach
  2. 00:48:769 (3,4) - The stacked pattern underneath of 00:48:489 (2) - really kills the momentum coming back down, maybe orient this in a way so that the flow continues to 00:49:048 (5) - . I am aware you have a pattern based off of this, but its something to keep in mind
  3. 01:24:824 (2,3,4,5) - The angle 4 and 5 take moving downward is a bit awkward and jerky to play. Perhaps try something like this so the flow continues from the previous pattern
  4. 02:02:651 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I really enjoyed how this pattern plays and looks, nice work here!
  5. 02:37:868 (2,3,4,5) - Same issue as 01:24:824 (2,3,4,5) -
  6. 02:48:303 (1,2,1,2,1) - Pretty creative usage of stop and gos in the music, I enjoyed this!
Rest of the diffs look good.

The BNG will handle this mapset from now on. Good luck with requalification!
VINXIS
GELBANA PLS
Topic Starter
[Vincent]

Lust wrote:

Disqualification for the wrong lyrics in the storyboard (by request).

Here is just some additional modding you can take under consideration, these are opinions of my own and not that of the QAT
[Insane]
  1. 00:31:160 (3,4) - This flow change is a bit extreme and leads to sort of an awkward play. 3 flows left and up with the repeat while 4 comes back down the same way. I recommend orienting 00:31:719 (4) - in a way that leads to a more easier angle of approach Moved 3 closer. I wanted to provide a snap in flow to show the change in chord, but yeah it was a little far(was originally much closer lol but the mods came gg)
  2. 00:48:769 (3,4) - The stacked pattern underneath of 00:48:489 (2) - really kills the momentum coming back down, maybe orient this in a way so that the flow continues to 00:49:048 (5) - . I am aware you have a pattern based off of this, but its something to keep in mind Was actually looking for someone to pick up on this lol. I will try changing it a little to keep the momentum going a little bit more
  3. 01:24:824 (2,3,4,5) - The angle 4 and 5 take moving downward is a bit awkward and jerky to play. Perhaps try something like this so the flow continues from the previous pattern That section was purposely desinged to be zigzagy/jerky :D~ just felt right to do with the song
  4. 02:02:651 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I really enjoyed how this pattern plays and looks, nice work here! Thanks! Was definitely fun mapping that part
  5. 02:37:868 (2,3,4,5) - Same issue as 01:24:824 (2,3,4,5) -
  6. 02:48:303 (1,2,1,2,1) - Pretty creative usage of stop and gos in the music, I enjoyed this! I love stacking the same pitch percussion melodies in the same spot in my maps :D
Rest of the diffs look good.

The BNG will handle this mapset from now on. Good luck with requalification!
Thanks Lust for the suggestions + the dq to fix the sb :D
Kibbleru
hopefully lyrics are good now
Spectator
awesome
Xinely

Spectator wrote:

awesome
Winnie

Spectator wrote:

awesome
Indeed very awesome :) and what's with this change of profile pictures by everyone?!
pkk

Kocari wrote:

what's with this change of profile pictures by everyone?!
everyone changes pics when spring arrives (´・ω・)
Ozato Fumika
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Topic Starter
[Vincent]

No Dap wrote:

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Thanks once again :D
pkk
congrats!
Oyatsu
OMG SB is so great!!!! Gratz! ^^
flac_old
Greate storyboard, but um...you applied Chinese font on Japanese script.
You can try real Japanese font next time. Such as Morisawa series.
Kibbleru

flac wrote:

Greate storyboard, but um...you applied Chinese font on Japanese script.
You can try real Japanese font next time. Such as Morisawa series.
gg pls no dq again
Winnie
No unqualirino pls. I don't like that :o
Gelbana
Screw you Photoshop default font...
I might handwrite it instead, less hassle and legibility. Perfect. ;_;

But thanks flac for that info :D
Kinshara
huhuhu
Setz

Gelbana wrote:

Screw you Photoshop default font...
I might handwrite it instead, less hassle and legibility. Perfect. ;_;

But thanks flac for that info :D
I feel your pain.

Dealing with lyrics can be such a hassle >.>
Kibbleru
why does this have a broken heart icon lol
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