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[Vincent]

364 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

[Vincent] 2015-01-07T07:58:12+00:00

Gelbana wrote:
I'm gonna post so no-one forgets about me

Everyone's gonna know you when the sb arrives <3

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

koreapenguin 2015-01-07T21:24:02+00:00

<3 [Vincent] <3

General

Delete .osb file in song folder, it unnecessary cuz haven't any SB http://puu.sh/ecDxx/9f937ff80d.png
also http://puu.sh/ecDVZ/d355ebf70c.png disabled this
seem you didn't set combo color in Normal, Insane diff. you should set them. go to check them
this hitsound is unrankable 'soft-hitwhistle8.wav' http://puu.sh/ecEJ9/1fa9c28775.png has some 7ms delay. t/251629/start=15 , follow this rule EDIT : http://puu.sh/ecF7T/fa1c32deea.wav

Kocari's Normal

you must fix this about vol*
03:58:551 - this Inherited line is should be 03:58:178 - here, go to check that
00:07:495 (2) - how think about this? isn't weird? i think it is...., cuz 00:07:495 - hear, there some piano sound is so low than 00:07:309 - here so how about emphasis on here? 00:07:309 - make like this http://puu.sh/ecGWz/7bab4aa92a.jpg
00:11:036 (1) - add whistle ? i think sound is good
01:15:508 (5,6) - hard to explain this orz, i think it's better than previous rhythm http://puu.sh/ecJ9T/3238172342.jpg . we normally follow right timing. i meant white tick*
01:01:533 (1,1) - not enough recovery time behind this spinner, increase it by at least a half beat
01:22:029 (5) - it's not big problem, just how about make more smooth. like this http://puu.sh/ecLCx/c87d8e9ac6.jpg , it would be nice to play
01:25:383 (1,3) - http://puu.sh/ecLNn/4f101e5a31.jpg check stack
01:48:675 (5) - i don't want recommend follow vocal on this point, cuz 01:48:862 - have strong sound then better to emphasis on 01:48:862 - here also feel so weird. just 01:48:675 (5) - move to 01:48:862 - here
02:47:371 (1,2) - yea... i'm not sure about this, but seem sitll you might better change the pattern. also might be hard to read for beginners
03:32:837 (1) - delete newcombo here, i guess it's miss?

Unsfa's Hard

00:26:874 (2) - this 1/8 slider is doesn't fit this diff. so i don't want recommend use this... isn't insane pattern? or ask to BAT,QATs
01:50:166 (3,4) - why did you put jump on this point? if you give jump then 01:50:632 - here is right cuz change new bar also fit is very well than here 01:50:446 -
02:44:017 (4) - how about make this curve? http://puu.sh/ecYel/cd06d50a11.jpg this flow is better

eh.... i don't know really ; ^ ;

Insane

02:15:508 (2,3,4) - this jump isn't huge? hum... i'm not sure about this i think so you need some opinions, but seem updown is really good fit is very well... just worried about distance

nothing to say too much, Nice

that's all \o/

[Vincent]

364 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

[Vincent] 2015-01-07T23:30:35+00:00

koreapenguin wrote:
<3 [Vincent] <3

General
Delete .osb file in song folder, it unnecessary cuz haven't any SB http://puu.sh/ecDxx/9f937ff80d.png There will be a SB soon™ by Gelbana!
also http://puu.sh/ecDVZ/d355ebf70c.png disabled this ^
seem you didn't set combo color in Normal, Insane diff. you should set them. go to check them Waiting on the SB before I choose them
this hitsound is unrankable 'soft-hitwhistle8.wav' http://puu.sh/ecEJ9/1fa9c28775.png has some 7ms delay. http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/251629/start=15 , follow this rule EDIT : http://puu.sh/ecF7T/fa1c32deea.wav
~~I'll fix when I get back from work~~ replaced the .wav file!

Insane
02:15:508 (2,3,4) - this jump isn't huge? hum... i'm not sure about this i think so you need some opinions, but seem updown is really good fit is very well... just worried about distance Will wait on others and see what the think, cuz i'll remake the whole pattern if it is o3o

nothing to say too much, Nice

that's all \o/

Thanks kawaii penguin <3

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2015-01-08T09:05:01+00:00

Putting this here for a reply. Meanwhile I go do drugs to help increase my mentality. RIP

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2015-01-08T22:22:27+00:00

Owntrolf wrote:
Kocari's Normal
01:11:036 (2) - I think changing it into a repeat would be better I'll keep it my way. To me it flows better and I don't like the repeats to occur at this point since the vocals are being dragged out longer.
01:12:899 - I think you should change something with 6 and put something here I already made different changes to this
02:28:737 (5) - But the chime bells in the background make 1/1 circles sound fine Idk I think I changed this part to make it flow smoother too and following hitsound patterns here when I changed sounded nice
03:11:222 (1,2) - Its possible to just make 2 just a little bit off from 1 instead of stacking it :< Good idea, but I already made this change but never really gave Vincent to upload because I'm lazy great minds think alike
03:43:272 (5) - I think its a good idea to move it back and replace with a slider I'm not sure what you mean by this but I did change this part to a different sequence

I dont even know what im doing anymore for that mod que .-. It was helpful in bringing out ideas for me

[ Setsuna ] wrote:
ok vincent made me do this, i haven't mapped in ages or modded. incoming bad mod 101

yey
[Kocari's Normal]
00:05:259 (3,1) - not very good blanket I'm not sure what the problem with the blanket here is. Maybe I didn't give Vincent to upload
03:16:439 (7,1) - ^ Adjusted a little bit to make it a nicer blanket
03:38:551 why is there a timing point here Same as I mentioned above there was none when I looked at it

woooo

Thanks for the mod guys it's going to help out in the long run

I went back and thoroughly checked it again, for hitsounds to change, rhythm, and how the notes flow together. I believe this should be OK for now until someone tells me otherwise

Update

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 64284
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:landscape
TitleUnicode:landscape
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:yanaginagi
Creator:[Vincent]
Version:Kocari's Normal
Source:
Tags:Polyomino Shinya Saito Gelbana Unsfamiliar Kocari
BeatmapID:566435
BeatmapSetID:244001

[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:3
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VINXIS 2015-01-11T07:02:44+00:00

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Kocari

00:04:514 (2,1) - stack
00:36:191 (5) - make curve wider from the bottom so it blankets better
00:49:607 (3) - move more left
01:25:383 (1,3) - imperfect stack
01:47:557 (3,1,2) - imo this isn't really a problem but if u cud move the 1 slider left a little or the 2 lond sliders right a little that'd b nice
01:59:669 (3,1) - imperfect stack
02:31:346 (4,2) - ^
02:34:700 (4,2) - stack
02:51:843 (3) - move it's 3rd point closer to the 4th point
03:07:123 (4,1) - imperfect stack
03:12:713 (2) - nc
03:14:203 (3) - ^
03:29:110 (1) - delete 3rd point
03:32:837 (1) - remove nc
03:48:116 (1,2) - remove nc and nc

Unsfamiliar

the hel is with that od son make it like od6.5 atleas t
00:00:415 (1,1) - imperfect stack
00:41:595 (4) - Ctrl+G
00:51:098 (1,2) - imperfect stack
01:56:315 (4,2) - stack
02:23:147 (2,2) - ^
02:33:023 (3,2) - imperfect stack
03:28:737 (2,1) - ^

insan

Od 8.8 or smth pls
00:01:905 (5) - Ctrl+G
00:26:315 (2,1) - can u pls put it right beside the slider's beginning or smth kthx
00:40:104 (3,2) - imperfect stack
00:56:315 (2,3,4) - ^
01:06:191 (2,5) - stack
01:06:564 (4,1) - imperfect stack
01:15:880 (2,4) - Ctrl+G each seperately
01:15:508 (4,1) - imperfect stack
01:22:961 (1) - Ctrl+G
01:22:961 (1,2) - imperfect stack
01:24:452 (1) - Ctrl+G
01:45:321 (2,1) - imperfect stack
02:03:769 (2) - Ctrl+G
02:10:849 (3,1) - imperfect stack
02:17:185 (4,6) - ^
02:21:470 (4,3) - ^
02:28:737 (1,3) - Ctrl+G each seperately
02:32:837 (3,7,2) - imperfect stacks
02:35:073 (4,5,1) - ^
02:36:005 (1,2) - imperfect stack
02:40:290 (1) - imo that slow slider will throw people off but yea/ I'd keep it though
03:05:073 (7,4) - imperfect stack
03:13:644 (1,4) - ^
03:26:501 (2,6) - ^
03:28:737 (5,2) - ^
03:29:110 (1,1) - ^
03:34:887 (2) - Ctrl+G
03:38:427 (2,3,4) - imperfect stack
03:47:371 (2,3,4) - ^
03:49:421 (3,1) - stack

lmao good luck!

[Vincent]

364 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

[Vincent] 2015-01-11T08:01:35+00:00

VINXIS wrote:
GELBANA STORYBOARD HYP E
from me moddin q
general
insan
Od 8.8 or smth pls od 7.5 fit's nicely for this sort of bpm imo
00:01:905 (5) - Ctrl+G That would break the intended effect
00:26:315 (2,1) - can u pls put it right beside the slider's beginning or smth kthx Unneccessary due to slider leniency.
00:40:104 (3,2) - imperfect stack Honestly, I have no idea what up with these stacking problems, but everytime i uploaded it, they glitch out and go all weird. So i'll be leaving all the stacks as they currently are since at the time of creating this map, they were essentially perfectly placed on top of each other.
00:56:315 (2,3,4) - ^
01:06:191 (2,5) - stack Plays better with it being stacked like 01:05:632 (6,5) -
01:06:564 (4,1) - imperfect stack
01:15:880 (2,4) - Ctrl+G each seperately already said this in a previous mod. This will cause unneccessary movement from the player.
01:15:508 (4,1) - imperfect stack
01:22:961 (1) - Ctrl+G These are specifically designed for a reason... Please consider that before pointing them all out with the same design. Same goes with the kicksliders.
01:22:961 (1,2) - imperfect stack
01:24:452 (1) - Ctrl+G
01:45:321 (2,1) - imperfect stack
02:03:769 (2) - Ctrl+G That would play out horribly...
02:10:849 (3,1) - imperfect stack
02:17:185 (4,6) - ^
02:21:470 (4,3) - ^
02:28:737 (1,3) - Ctrl+G each seperately
02:32:837 (3,7,2) - imperfect stacks
02:35:073 (4,5,1) - ^
02:36:005 (1,2) - imperfect stack
02:40:290 (1) - imo that slow slider will throw people off but yea/ I'd keep it though
03:05:073 (7,4) - imperfect stack
03:13:644 (1,4) - ^
03:26:501 (2,6) - ^
03:28:737 (5,2) - ^
03:29:110 (1,1) - ^
03:34:887 (2) - Ctrl+G plays out strangely if i did.
03:38:427 (2,3,4) - imperfect stack
03:47:371 (2,3,4) - ^
03:49:421 (3,1) - stack Don't really understand why i would?

lmao good luck!

Thanks for your time, but you really need to explain the reasons behind some of your mods (unless they're painfully obvious) and as with the repition of some of your suggestions, point out a few and just tell the mapper that there's more he/she should look for instead of writing them all out.

Unsfamiliar

540 posts

Joined May 2013

Unsfamiliar 2015-01-11T08:32:53+00:00

Setsuna

[ Setsuna ] wrote:
ok vincent made me do this, i haven't mapped in ages or modded. incoming bad mod 101

[Unsfa's Hard]
00:16:626 (4) - put the tail of this at 00:15:321 (1)'s starting position but it's already on 00:15:228 (3)?
00:20:352 (1) - lower rank players might have trouble reading this I'm not sure if you modded this before or after I changed it up a bit. I'll leave it for now.
02:47:930 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - hard to read Really? I thought the new combos spoke for themselves. If you're concerned about the overlapping, it's pretty difficult to handle repeating patterns in [Hard] due to the spacing restrictions. Even then, the very nature of repeating patterns makes them predictable. I was a bit sceptical about my usage of overlaps, but with reference to precedent I think they are inherent in such a difficulty. More so with my mapping 'style' and usage of a lot more sliders than circles to mitigate the difficulty level.

yey Thanks for checking!

KP

koreapenguin wrote:
<3 [Vincent] <3

General
this hitsound is unrankable 'soft-hitwhistle8.wav' http://puu.sh/ecEJ9/1fa9c28775.png has some 7ms delay. http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/251629/start=15 , follow this rule EDIT : http://puu.sh/ecF7T/fa1c32deea.wav
Ahh sorry about this ;w;

Unsfa's Hard
00:26:874 (2) - this 1/8 slider is doesn't fit this diff. so i don't want recommend use this... isn't insane pattern? or ask to BAT,QATs This is honestly pretty easy to play, but yeah I'll wait for more opinions.
01:50:166 (3,4) - why did you put jump on this point? if you give jump then 01:50:632 - here is right cuz change new bar also fit is very well than here 01:50:446 - I wanted to emphasise the sound ending on the 01:50:166 (3) slider, while maintaining a 'steady' feel from 01:50:539 (4,1) before the second part of the verse kicks off at 01:52:216.
02:44:017 (4) - how about make this curve? http://puu.sh/ecYel/cd06d50a11.jpg this flow is better Well they both work in my opinion to the long slider, but the exit from the (3) reverse then into (4) is not so nice in your suggestion.

eh.... i don't know really ; ^ ; I'll take this as a compliment??
that's all \o/ Thanks KP

VINXIS

VINXIS wrote:
GELBANA STORYBOARD HYP E
from me moddin q

the hel is with that od son make it like od6.5 atleas t Why? This setting needs to be balanced with the other diffs, so I'll wait and see what vincent decides.
00:00:415 (1,1) - imperfect stack Fixed. For some odd reason, stacking notes on slider ends even with grid snap disabled is quite troublesome. The notes tend to snap awkwardly to the slider end. I'm not sure if this is intended behaviour, but I managed to fix it by moving the previous slider end instead.
00:41:595 (4) - Ctrl+G Umm well no thanks. This would absolutely ruin the flow in my opinion. Try Ctrl+G that slider and play it for yourself...
00:51:098 (1,2) - imperfect stack Fixed, more or less.
01:56:315 (4,2) - stack By this time I was incredibly wary of the amount of stacks that I had already used. Avoiding the stack was intentional, and was the best decision even with spacing and readability in mind. May change, but I'll have to wait.
02:23:147 (2,2) - ^ Same deal as above. Here I didn't want the spacing of the sliders to be too excessive, and no other way flowed the way I wanted it to.
02:33:023 (3,2) - imperfect stack Fixed, even though I thought this was one of those rare copy paste situations...
03:28:737 (2,1) - ^

lmao good luck! haha...

Thanks

http://puu.sh/emrRh/d60c818f20.osu

Winek

887 posts

Joined September 2013

Winek 2015-01-11T17:15:03+00:00

I'm sorry i'm late, took much time doing this mod, so stuff might not be up to date in this mod.
Unsfa requested a mod hue

Small Legend Box

Grade from Best to Worst

- The best ever, nothing wrong.

- Slight modifications needed, nothing more.

- Just okay.
No Icon - A normal difficulty, nothing wrong but could be improved.

- Diff has errors, should be reviewed.

- Need huge improvement (does not means this deserve nuke.)

- This is not a grade; It means there's unrankable issue in the diff.

Kocari's Normal

00:01:346 (2) - Why is this note the only 1/2 in this all part? You didn't ignore the sound here; but in all other parts: 00:04:328 ; 00:07:309;
00:19:048 (2) - I think it's a waste here how the 1/2 sound at the middle of the slider was like left alone, unlike 00:20:166 (4) . I do not find any possibilty exept changing this to 3 1/2 circles, so you might want to ignore and take as a comment,
00:52:588 (3,4) - Why not try to make the overlap slighty better to look? The current one has all the end of (3) onto all of (4)'s body. I do not know if this will be more appreciated but you can at least have a look at it: Image As I do not find any other way to make the overlap nicer to my eyes.
01:00:042 (1,2) - I think there are better place that are suited for a 1/2 (00:58:365 to follow the vocal). The slider only cover a held sound that could simply be a slider. Also, it would make some good symmetry with 01:01:160 (3) . (Something like that(sorry, I didn't give it my max orz but i think you get the point..
01:12:526 (5,6) - Here the gap, for the easiest difficulty might be a bit hard for beginner (if this mapset had easy, I wouldn't comment this.) The solution might to add a note at 01:12:899 , wouldn't fit bad for the song; Alternatively, it can be added to 01:12:713 as well, but would fit less better than 01:12:899 as there is there is the landing of the voice right there.
01:27:619 (2,3) - I do not know if the 1/2 is needed here, The voice is held all along so i'd rather see a simple 2/1. Of course, that's totally your decision, i'm just pointing it out.
01:40:290 (1,2,3,4) - I do not understand why does these are the only note of this part that have backbeats custom whistle, just after 01:44:017 (2) they start being on Downbeats? Please fix this to make the hitsounds constant. I found this again in the other kiais, you might want to recheck in case it is a mistake,.
01:49:048 - An 1/2 note clearly could be added here exept of some place I find random 1/2 notes (notice that it's absolutely rankable, so It's no more than a comment.) I must say, like 01:46:998 (2,3) doesn't feels bad at all, but some place would be more appropriote IMO for 1/2s. Thus here at 01:49:048 a circle could be a good companion to 01:48:675 (5) because of the silenceful gap between these two notes.
02:01:719 (2,3,4,5) - Even if this follows distance snap, beginner players highly might get confused and hit directly (5) after (3) or consider (5) is a 1/2.
03:29:110 (1) - The shape is strange here, along with 03:28:365 (4) 's overlap. So i'd suggest a simple straight slider which the sliderslide cross directly with (4)'s starting; To do, remove the 2 curving anchor, and move the last anchor to x272 y192, you can see if it pleases you or not.
03:43:272 (5) - I swear that circle is odd here, I don't know why but i feel there is no music supporting it, so you could move it 1/2 before, or idk. Just do what your heart tells you to do :<
03:50:166 (1) - Sound of this spinner could gradually decrease like the music because now we hear the soft-sample, it doesn't fits good.

Unsfa's Hard

00:06:936 (2) - As you are following exactly the piano ( i think) of the music, you should convert this slider into a basic circle as there aren't any sound at 00:07:123 , but you can easily ignore this as it is only for being constant.
00:26:688 (1) - I feel this New combo is weird as the part isn't even done. For an hard difficulty, it would give alot of HP as well, for nothing, so I think the New combo can be removed.
00:51:657 - I don't see why leave this place empty. It is the same as 00:53:147 - but there you didn't leave it empty. Also it might be hard for players to realize there's 1/1 distance between these notes, so you might consider adding something there? A circle around x416 y228 would be something great(or replace it so it be better.)
01:10:477 (1) - You should make the curve point at the opposite direction, so that it'll be symmetrycal with 01:11:036 (3) and make a good shape with the ensemble 01:10:477 (1,3,4) .
Additionatlly for the previous matter, 01:11:408 (4) could be positioned at x164 and y164 and idk how to explain but: http://puu.sh/egY49/59a8303e82.jpg yeah, move the last anchor. It'll make an even greater figure for the ensemble 01:10:477 (1,2,4) . I suggest you to only apply this if you applied the previous.
02:16:067 (1,2,3,4) - You could make a full 1/4 kickslider instead of those; Your actual leave empty spaces, which doesn't fit the SE good.
02:23:147 (2) - I was thinking it would be a curve at least, a bit like sister 01:10:477 (1,3,1,3) ; The shape were the same. So maybe curving this note.

Insane

I don't know about much triplets, they feel overmapped, (not bad) but i would at least made them constant. You do what you want though.
00:17:464 (3) - I don't really find this triplet here very fitting the song. I'd remove the note.
00:17:185 (2,3) - Along with the previous matter: https://puu.sh/emVnz/983802de21.jpg. This fits more the music, and also is more constant with the beat 00:16:626 (1) . About placement on the grid, I suck at this, I can't find anything good, but you can see my shit if you want.
00:26:315 (2) - This kickslider somehow is overmapped; You also increase the sample soft to give it more feel, but once you remove the note there's nothing of what the slider is showing off. I suggest you to do like in the Hard difficulty (00:25:570 (2,3,1,2) Unsfa's Hard). By the way, the only ime deserving a kickslider is at 00:26:874 until the next note 00:27:247 (1) ;
00:30:974 (3,4) - This is unconsistend with the rest of this part; Here, I was not expecting any beat on white ticks, like most: 00:27:806 (2) and 00:29:296 (4,5,6) ; So in order to make it constant, the best option on my viewside would be a 1/1 slider starting from 00:31:160 to 00:31:533 : Image
00:32:837 (7) - Along with the previous matter: This note could be removed to make the entire part consistent.
01:17:185 (5) - You could slighty make a curve here like this so it gets some relation with 01:17:557 (6).

Last Judgement

How much would I Give you icons:

- 0%

- Your Position; You deserve star icon.

- A tadpole more effort to reach it.

This map is good; It's pretty, And most of thing I spottedd are unimportant matters;
For me, I think reviewing the diff 2 or 3 times to spot out by your all self some beauty matters, and sometime distance or whatever.
But then, if you think really that your map is good and you do not want to change anything, then call out the BATs, your map is good enough.

VINXIS

Featured Artist

3,161 posts

Joined April 2014

VINXIS 2015-01-11T23:49:58+00:00

[Vincent] wrote:
Thanks for your time, but you really need to explain the reasons behind some of your mods (unless they're painfully obvious) and as with the repition of some of your suggestions, point out a few and just tell the mapper that there's more he/she should look for instead of writing them all out.

oh woops sorry lmao. I'll explain everything from now on, thanks m8

also i only repeat out repetitive stuff because lots of ppl only fix that one instance even after i say it happens over and over again mm but yea i feel

also shi t i meant ar 8.8 not od 8.8 rip (because ~160 bpm fits with ar 8.5-8.8 imo)

[Vincent]

364 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

[Vincent] 2015-01-12T01:19:22+00:00

VINXIS wrote:
[Vincent] wrote:
Thanks for your time, but you really need to explain the reasons behind some of your mods (unless they're painfully obvious) and as with the repition of some of your suggestions, point out a few and just tell the mapper that there's more he/she should look for instead of writing them all out.
oh woops sorry lmao. I'll explain everything from now on, thanks m8

also i only repeat out repetitive stuff because lots of ppl only fix that one instance even after i say it happens over and over again mm but yea i feel

also shi t i meant ar 8.8 not od 8.8 rip (because ~160 bpm fits with ar 8.5-8.8 imo)

Haha that'd be great!
Also I think ar9 fits it fine considering that there are large jumps here and there. I may consider dropping it down though

[Vincent]

364 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

[Vincent] 2015-01-12T01:49:09+00:00

Winek wrote:
I'm sorry i'm late, took much time doing this mod, so stuff might not be up to date in this mod.
Unsfa requested a mod hue

Small Legend Box
Grade from Best to Worst
- The best ever, nothing wrong.
- Slight modifications needed, nothing more.
- Just okay.
No Icon - A normal difficulty, nothing wrong but could be improved.
- Diff has errors, should be reviewed.
- Need huge improvement (does not means this deserve nuke.)

- This is not a grade; It means there's unrankable issue in the diff.

Insane

I don't know about much triplets, they feel overmapped, (not bad) but i would at least made them constant. You do what you want though. For the actual placements of the triples, I feel as if i did it pretty consistently within each phrasing. /me shrugs
00:17:464 (3) - I don't really find this triplet here very fitting the song. I'd remove the note. There's definitely an audible sound there though. By deleting that, it would be consistent with the whole phrasing
00:17:185 (2,3) - Along with the previous matter: https://puu.sh/emVnz/983802de21.jpg. This fits more the music, and also is more constant with the beat 00:16:626 (1) . About placement on the grid, I suck at this, I can't find anything good, but you can see my shit if you want. After reviewing the melody, I have decided to change it up a bit while also keeping the triple
00:26:315 (2) - This kickslider somehow is overmapped; You also increase the sample soft to give it more feel, but once you remove the note there's nothing of what the slider is showing off. I suggest you to do like in the Hard difficulty (00:25:570 (2,3,1,2) Unsfa's Hard). By the way, the only ime deserving a kickslider is at 00:26:874 until the next note 00:27:247 (1) ; I feel as if i can hear the build up of the harp from 00:26:501 and for the sake of making it somewhat easy to play, I just left it as an object that starts from 00:26:315 (2) -
00:30:974 (3,4) - This is unconsistend with the rest of this part; Here, I was not expecting any beat on white ticks, like most: 00:27:806 (2) and 00:29:296 (4,5,6) ; So in order to make it constant, the best option on my viewside would be a 1/1 slider starting from 00:31:160 to 00:31:533 : Image Changed though that slider is 1/2 repeat instead to follow the piano.
00:32:837 (7) - Along with the previous matter: This note could be removed to make the entire part consistent. Changed the previous part. I will leave like this as it servers as a build up/transitional part to the next phrase (especially since she finished singing that phrase and something should be followed rather than just being consistent.
01:17:185 (5) - You could slighty make a curve here like this so it gets some relation with 01:17:557 (6). Sure, copy pasted the slider 6, did a few flips here and there and changed the hitsounding of it. Now has relation with slider 6, Magic!

Last Judgement
How much would I Give you icons:
- 0%
- Your Position; You deserve star icon.
- A tadpole more effort to reach it.

This map is good; It's pretty, And most of thing I spottedd are unimportant matters;
For me, I think reviewing the diff 2 or 3 times to spot out by your all self some beauty matters, and sometime distance or whatever.
But then, if you think really that your map is good and you do not want to change anything, then call out the BATs, your map is good enough.

Thanks for the mod (thanks to uns too for finding you)

)))))))))

Winek

887 posts

Joined September 2013

Winek 2015-01-12T14:38:46+00:00

really sorry but

i forgot to give you a star for your map :3

[ Setsuna ]

422 posts

Joined October 2013

[ Setsuna ] 2015-01-13T00:14:23+00:00

might as well star

[Vincent]

364 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

[Vincent] 2015-01-13T01:58:26+00:00

Winek wrote:
really sorry but
i forgot to give you a star for your map :3

No need to be sorry! Thanks for the star Winek

[ Setsuna ] wrote:
might as well star

Thanks Setsuna!

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2015-01-17T07:57:31+00:00

Thanks Windex for the mod!!!!

Update

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VINXIS

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VINXIS 2015-01-26T17:55:03+00:00

Gelbana pls wheres hte storyboard

[Vincent]

364 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

[Vincent] 2015-01-27T00:32:00+00:00

VINXIS wrote:
Gelbana pls wheres hte storyboard

soon™

Gelbana

182 posts

Joined August 2008

Gelbana 2015-01-27T01:19:32+00:00

soon™

Unsfamiliar

540 posts

Joined May 2013

Unsfamiliar 2015-02-01T06:28:13+00:00

Winek

Winek wrote:
I'm sorry i'm late, took much time doing this mod, so stuff might not be up to date in this mod.
Unsfa requested a mod hue You're the best.

Unsfa's Hard
00:06:936 (2) - As you are following exactly the piano ( i think) of the music, you should convert this slider into a basic circle as there aren't any sound at 00:07:123 , but you can easily ignore this as it is only for being constant. You're right. I'm not usually one to map something that I can't hear in the song. However, it kinda just fits here - emulating both the violin and stretched out piano sounds.
00:26:688 (1) - I feel this New combo is weird as the part isn't even done. For an hard difficulty, it would give alot of HP as well, for nothing, so I think the New combo can be removed. I think the new combo is necessary to distinguish 1/1 (00:26:315 (3,1)) from 1/2 (00:26:688 (1,2)) gaps.
00:51:657 - I don't see why leave this place empty. It is the same as 00:53:147 - but there you didn't leave it empty. Also it might be hard for players to realize there's 1/1 distance between these notes, so you might consider adding something there? A circle around x416 y228 would be something great(or replace it so it be better.) Hmm, I don't hear anything worth mapping to... If there is something there, it is incredibly subtle. Whereas the guitar here (00:53:147) is very obvious and I utilised the sliders to represent the changes in guitar pitch.
01:10:477 (1) - You should make the curve point at the opposite direction, so that it'll be symmetrycal with 01:11:036 (3) and make a good shape with the ensemble 01:10:477 (1,3,4) .
Additionatlly for the previous matter, 01:11:408 (4) could be positioned at x164 and y164 and idk how to explain but: http://puu.sh/egY49/59a8303e82.jpg yeah, move the last anchor. It'll make an even greater figure for the ensemble 01:10:477 (1,2,4) . I suggest you to only apply this if you applied the previous. For the two previous suggestions, I think I ought to keep the bend of 01:10:477 (1) in it's current state. I sometimes use the pattern you suggested - comprised of two or more sliders opposite each other with the same upwards bend - to represent and upbeat or back-and-forth rhythm in the song. Since the sliders would be directed upwards and therefore played by position your cursor underneath each consecutive slider, something in the song like an upward change in pitch should suggest this.

I feel there is no need to change it in terms of playability, and in the aesthetic sense I also feel there is no real reason to do so.
02:16:067 (1,2,3,4) - You could make a full 1/4 kickslider instead of those; Your actual leave empty spaces, which doesn't fit the SE good. Sorry, but I'm keeping this in it's current state. Firstly, for consistency reasons; I did this for the first pre-chorus as well. Secondly, for difficulty control; lots of kick sliders in a row separated by a mere 1/4 gap will create issues with slider breaking. Yes, I tried both ways, with and without mods. If you're worried about the hitsounds, they're all still caught within the kick sliders.
02:23:147 (2) - I was thinking it would be a curve at least, a bit like sister 01:10:477 (1,3,1,3) ; The shape were the same. So maybe curving this note.Why??

Thanks Winek! Sorry for being so stubborn though ;w;

Just putting this here before the upcoming update with the sb

Gelbana

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Joined August 2008

Gelbana 2015-02-02T09:18:09+00:00

done™

Well... drafted I guess. \o/

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2015-02-02T09:19:21+00:00

Gelbana wrote:
done™

Well... drafted I guess. \o/

HELL YESSSSSS

VINXIS

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VINXIS 2015-02-02T19:22:30+00:00

OSHIEEET ITS DONE YIS

Winnie

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Winnie 2015-02-02T19:24:36+00:00

GELBANA IS GOOODODODODODODODOODODODOD !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Once I understand more kanji and read them properly I can finally start mastering SB welp. Did you use the program to code them or manually and what is the reasoning behind all those cut rectangles?
GELBANA FOR ELITE STORYBOARDER PLX
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Kibbleru

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Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2015-02-06T03:22:33+00:00

BUT THE.. SAUHFSAUJFSA
BUTTERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

SPOILER

SPREAAD

[Vincent]

364 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

[Vincent] 2015-02-06T03:23:19+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
BUT THE.. SAUHFSAUJFSA
BUTTERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

SPOILER
SPREAAD

FOCK THE BUTTER ;_;

MORE BUTTER ON 1 SIDE OF THE TOAST PLEZ

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2015-02-06T09:42:33+00:00

Just my personal opinion and suggestions, feel free to do whatever.

[General]

The normal diff is too hard to be the easiest diff in the set, it has a lot of 1/2 rhythms and hard pattern like: 00:01:346 (2,3) -00:03:396 (1,2,3) –etc, the sv is also not proper. I suggest you add a easy diff

[Insane]

AR9 feels a little fast, try AR8.7, it works better.
00:31:160 (3) –move to (384,252) for better flow?
01:25:197 (4,5) –This pattern is hard to play as it doesn’t flow well, I suggest: http://puu.sh/fxFsr/17ec67e68a.jpg
01:25:383 (1) –I suggest you try two 1/2 sliders here, it’s not a good choice that you make cymbal strong beat on slidertail: 01:25:756 –, like: http://puu.sh/fxFBR/9fab7dea5d.jpg
01:27:619 (3) –I suggest you make it a long speed-down(like 0.75x) slider to follow the vocal better, http://puu.sh/fxFML/af1abfa8b8.jpg
Second kiai the same suggestions
02:47:371 (1,2,3) –stack feels weird here, I suggest you not stack them, make jumps instead
02:47:930 (4) –make it 3/4 slider
03:08:241 (1,1,1,1) –You can make the jump bigger to match the music better

[Hard]

00:14:762 (1) –too soon after a spinner
00:16:626 (4) -1/1 slider works better, there is no beat at 00:16:812 –
00:28:737 (1,2,3) –Use regular? The spacing seems too big for a calm part
00:43:644 (1,2) –meaningless jump imo
00:47:185 (2) –too close to00:46:626 (1) - , fix the spacing of them
00:59:669 (1) –useless new combo
01:01:346 (1,2) –parallel please. To be honese the whole pattern looks not good: 01:01:346 (1,2,3,4) – I suggest you rework it
01:04:887 (2,3,4,5) –These jumps don’t fit the music well, use more tranditional flow please
01:11:408 (4,1) –parallel?
01:15:880 (3,4,1) –equal the spacing?
01:57:060 (2,3) –volume too low
03:45:321 (2) –too close to 03:44:949 (1) –

Hard diff needs more work imo, good luck:3

Unsfamiliar

540 posts

Joined May 2013

Unsfamiliar 2015-02-06T10:52:34+00:00

Fychooooo

Fycho wrote:
Just my personal opinion and suggestions, feel free to do whatever. Okay!

[General]
The normal diff is too hard to be the easiest diff in the set, it has a lot of 1/2 rhythms and hard pattern like: 00:01:346 (2,3) -00:03:396 (1,2,3) –etc, the sv is also not proper. I suggest you add a easy diff ...
[Hard]
00:14:762 (1) –too soon after a spinner Removed the spinner entirely and added a note instead.
00:16:626 (4) -1/1 slider works better, there is no beat at 00:16:812 – Actually there is something audible at that time, else I would have made it a 1/1 slider. I don't know what you call it. The hi-hat? Having a reverse here still gives it a hold effect to suit the melody. Gives it a nice swing when you play it too.
00:28:737 (1,2,3) –Use regular? The spacing seems too big for a calm part I don't feel the spacing is at all excessive here. The spacing and the slow sliders are easy to catch, and this particular part is to follow the vocal. 'Looks' neater too, or whatever.
00:43:644 (1,2) –meaningless jump imo Why so? It's building up circular flow from here (00:43:085 (4,1)) and gives that 3/4 slider a really nice hold emphasis. The subtle changes in sv work in my favour here.
00:47:185 (2) –too close to00:46:626 (1) - , fix the spacing of them This is distance snapped. Same as this (00:45:135 (1,2)).
00:59:669 (1) –useless new combo Increased the sv.
01:01:346 (1,2) –parallel please. To be honese the whole pattern looks not good: 01:01:346 (1,2,3,4) – I suggest you rework it I don't understand why I need to make them parallel. Do I need to rework this pattern for the sake of aesthetics? Blanket here (01:02:278 (3,4)).
01:04:887 (2,3,4,5) –These jumps don’t fit the music well, use more tranditional flow please What is traditional flow? I actually test a lot, and I fail to see how this does not fit the music or flows awkwardly. Could you give me an example on how to fix this?
01:11:408 (4,1) –parallel? Will that make my map better? Playability or aesthetics?
01:15:880 (3,4,1) –equal the spacing? Hmm, I actually think this flows quite well. I isolated the vocal and I feel it gives it a nice curve into the second part of the kiai. Might change.
01:57:060 (2,3) –volume too low I didn't want the dings to be too prominent, but okay. Raised by 10%. Also fixed some other volume issues in this section.
03:45:321 (2) –too close to 03:44:949 (1) – Fixed.
Hard diff needs more work imo, good luck:3 Thanks fycho ;w;

http://puu.sh/fxMxt/bb5f7de802.osu

[Vincent]

364 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

[Vincent] 2015-02-06T13:27:01+00:00

Fycho wrote:
Just my personal opinion and suggestions, feel free to do whatever.

[General]
The normal diff is too hard to be the easiest diff in the set, it has a lot of 1/2 rhythms and hard pattern like: 00:01:346 (2,3) -00:03:396 (1,2,3) –etc, the sv is also not proper. I suggest you add a easy diff Don't really want an easy diff in this mapset (long song + not really an ideal song for an easy where normal can already cover it)

[Insane]
AR9 feels a little fast, try AR8.7, it works better. ahhhhhhhhhhhhh, really want to keep ar9... but i get the feeling it wont slide this time like with my other map. Will change to 8.7
00:31:160 (3) –move to (384,252) for better flow? Changed it differently.
01:25:197 (4,5) –This pattern is hard to play as it doesn’t flow well, I suggest: http://puu.sh/fxFsr/17ec67e68a.jpg I personally find this part fine. I break off from my circular flow into a choppy zig zag style of mapping for the phrase beginning at 01:22:402 (1) - . You'll notice that I repeat it for every chorus as I intentionally decided to map it that way - the spacing of the 1/4 is used to emphasise the tomtoms too which lead on from the zig zag
01:25:383 (1) –I suggest you try two 1/2 sliders here, it’s not a good choice that you make cymbal strong beat on slidertail: 01:25:756 –, like: http://puu.sh/fxFBR/9fab7dea5d.jpg Okay that works well (originally wanted to give the player a longer break from the previous section but this is good)
01:27:619 (3) –I suggest you make it a long speed-down(like 0.75x) slider to follow the vocal better, http://puu.sh/fxFML/af1abfa8b8.jpg just realised i missed the 'e' vocal so i'll be making a 1/1 slider instead at 0.75x speed (somewhat similar in the second chorus though mapped a little differently)
Second kiai the same suggestions
02:47:371 (1,2,3) –stack feels weird here, I suggest you not stack them, make jumps instead Stacked due to the melody being the same pitch - just like 02:48:303 (1,1,1) - I will increase spacing on 1/4 instead.
02:47:930 (4) –make it 3/4 slider Follows the pattern of the next notes. eg -02:48:675 (2) - 02:49:421 (2) - which i find emphasise the melody well.
03:08:241 (1,1,1,1) –You can make the jump bigger to match the music better Okay

Thank you fycho!

Xgor

Elite Mapper

2,534 posts

Joined April 2009

Xgor 2015-02-07T18:06:31+00:00

You asked for a SB mod so here I go!

Amazingly done SB so mainly suggestions and pointers here.

[Images]
blob.png and star.png has some unused transparency. Might wanna crop them.

[Technical stuff]
(I would have loved to get the sgl. Would making modding technical stuff muuch easier....)

I noticed that the parts when the blobs moves around that they isn't removed until after every blob is moving and is stuck offscreen, I dunno if that affects performance but it would been better if it's removed when the current blob finishes moving.

[Storyboard Design]
Just suggestions here.

I absolutely adore the effect at 01:28:365.. When I look closely it looks like the starting point feels slightly off and they should start more to the right and slightly lower down... Still I dunno. The way it is right now might look better.

I noticed that you split of the BG into smaller parts for higher res. Why not use it for other effects like it folds in piece for piece so you use the fact that they are separate more.

Anyways great work here. I might mod the rest of the mapset someday but for now I'll star it so the team knows that the SB is ready to go!

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2015-02-14T07:11:17+00:00

if normal diff got nerfed according to fycho's mod the spread would be better too owo or something

oh nvm his suggestion was to add an easy lol.
atm there isn't really much of a defined idea for "easiest diff" though.

[Vincent]

364 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

[Vincent] 2015-02-14T10:30:44+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
if normal diff got nerfed according to fycho's mod the spread would be better too owo or something

oh nvm his suggestion was to add an easy lol.
atm there isn't really much of a defined idea for "easiest diff" though.

QQ i'll see if i can get kocari to maybe try tone down his diff

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2015-02-15T07:13:30+00:00

i still havent asked around yet lol >< im so lazy

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2015-02-16T05:22:01+00:00

My normal is going to get nerfed harder than Evelyn boys just you wait and see
-Edit: remaking it to ~1.6 if that is ok of a difficulty gap but time will tell when it's finished

Last edited by Winnie 2015-02-16T06:25:04+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2015-02-16T06:06:03+00:00

Kocari wrote:
My normal is going to get nerfed harder than Evelyn boys just you wait and see

if this was a disqus comment i'd upvote it

Gelbana

182 posts

Joined August 2008

Gelbana 2015-02-19T02:07:52+00:00

Sorry for the late reply. Thanks for the mod

Xgor

Xgor wrote:
You asked for a SB mod so here I go!

Amazingly done SB so mainly suggestions and pointers here. Thanks

[Images]
blob.png and star.png has some unused transparency. Might wanna crop them. Cropped the blob image but the star has a faint glow around it the would look weird as a square if cropped

[Technical stuff]
(I would have loved to get the sgl. Would making modding technical stuff muuch easier....)
Apologies, you can have it if you want, but I don't think it is legible xD
I noticed that the parts when the blobs moves around that they isn't removed until after every blob is moving and is stuck offscreen, I dunno if that affects performance but it would been better if it's removed when the current blob finishes moving.
Yeah, my stupid coding working its magic, I can probably fix the front orbs but the refresh rate of the back is like 7 seconds or something ;_;
[Storyboard Design]
Just suggestions here.

I absolutely adore the effect at 01:28:365.. When I look closely it looks like the starting point feels slightly off and they should start more to the right and slightly lower down... Still I dunno. The way it is right now might look better. Yeah I tried both but i settled with the current one

I noticed that you split of the BG into smaller parts for higher res. Why not use it for other effects like it folds in piece for piece so you use the fact that they are separate more.
I actually used the split images for the swiping at 03:08:241 - but you have a good point. I might try implementing part by part transitions

Anyways great work here. I might mod the rest of the mapset someday but for now I'll star it so the team knows that the SB is ready to go! Yay \o/

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2015-02-23T21:49:57+00:00

Remake is officially done, not the greatest of a remake but I got it finished. I'll wait for mods and in the meantime patch it up for another update soon

Nerfs

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Kibbleru

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5,844 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2015-02-28T20:12:54+00:00

general

can u do me a favor? go dl tick click's unused hitsound checker and check if there are any unused hitsounds. and screenshot it for me. cuz mine isn't working atm :X
try using the normal 44byte silence hitsound. (thats usually how we can tell it's not bugged or something)

insane

00:09:359 (1,2) - maybe swapping nc will follow the pattern more.
00:26:315 (2) - u could remove 1 repeat, it will help the players hit it more easily
01:01:160 (5,2) - bah give this a bit more distance lol just for asthetics
02:13:085 (1,4) - ^
01:22:961 (1,2) - i feel this should have more spacing.
02:09:359 (5,6) - meh this set up isn't the most pleasant to play, i would just use 1 more repeat but thats u to u
02:40:290 (1) - ;_;
03:03:582 (1) - this is up to u, i just personally don't like these kinds of sliders lol idk why
SPOILER
03:08:427 - i dont think this needs a clap.
03:28:272 (3) - this isn't overmapped but it's not exactly consistent either because you didnt map it out in the previous kiais.

hard

00:11:595 (3) - curve this just a bit more? to fit the previous sliders, and maybe u could rotate it by like 30 ish clockwise
00:15:321 (1,2) - nazi but why not make it parallel?
01:01:346 (1,2) - ^
01:11:408 (4,1) - ^
00:26:874 (2) - can u reduce this to 1/4 for a hard diff
00:30:228 (1,3) - space these out a bit more for asthetics
01:00:601 (2,1) - ^
01:40:290 (1,3) - ^
02:11:967 (2,1) - ^
03:02:278 (1,3) - ^
03:36:564 (1,2) - ^
03:44:576 (2,1,2) - ^
00:59:669 (1) - i don't really see the point of this sv change. and the nc just looks unecessary
01:09:731 (1,1) - try not to overlap
01:51:470 (3,1) - ^
pretty good diff, i dislike the cluttered feeling that it gives so i told u to space out a bunch of things :X, i mean i see what you're doing with these overlaps but try not to make them look so cluttered.

normal

00:06:377 (1) - maybe use 3/2 repeat instead?
00:24:265 (5) - maybe start the slider 00:24:638 - and add circle at original spot
00:40:290 (2) - can u expose this circle a bit more
00:40:663 (3,4) - just my taste
SPOILER
01:42:526 (4,1) - ^
02:38:427 (1,2) - ^
03:23:147 (1,2) - ^
01:04:514 - for some reason it gets easier at the kiai? u should fix that :X use more 1/2 or something
01:16:439 (1,3) - why brezier curve D:
02:27:806 (3,4,5,1) - if u'd like
SPOILER
03:00:787 (3,4) - nazi blanket
03:11:222 (1,1,1) - i think would be better to space it out, the current ar is not enough to make it readable for newbies
lol i feel like the map got easier after the start of the first kiai :X try to do something about that

idk about the skin so ill just copy what aibat said

AIBat v3.1 wrote:
[Skin/SB]
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sb\effect\back.png

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[Vincent]

364 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

[Vincent] 2015-03-01T00:07:25+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
general
can u do me a favor? go dl tick click's unused hitsound checker and check if there are any unused hitsounds. and screenshot it for me. cuz mine isn't working atm :X
try using the normal 44byte silence hitsound. (thats usually how we can tell it's not bugged or something)
insane
00:09:359 (1,2) - maybe swapping nc will follow the pattern more. Following every 2 mesaures consistenly seems better~
00:26:315 (2) - u could remove 1 repeat, it will help the players hit it more easily Really don't see how this is hard at all, but I guess i'll change it since there's always a distance change suggestion
01:01:160 (5,2) - bah give this a bit more distance lol just for asthetics dropped 5 slightly
02:13:085 (1,4) - ^ I actually think this one is fine
01:22:961 (1,2) - i feel this should have more spacing. Moved 2 more to the right
02:09:359 (5,6) - meh this set up isn't the most pleasant to play, i would just use 1 more repeat but thats u to u Agreed after looking at it a few times~ did it originally to emphasise the drums lol
02:40:290 (1) - ;_; ? (moved it just incase lol.)
03:03:582 (1) - this is up to u, i just personally don't like these kinds of sliders lol idk why Did it to emphasise the finishes~ so imma leave it as it is
SPOILER
03:08:427 - i dont think this needs a clap. Woops~ 03:08:613 (1) - this one does
03:28:272 (3) - this isn't overmapped but it's not exactly consistent either because you didnt map it out in the previous kiais. It's really only a minor difference and not to mention that rhythm placement is pretty damn common throughout the whole map lol. It's 3rd chorus so why not ;_;
Hitsound checker -
The following hitsounds are unused:
soft-hitwhistle5.wav
soft-sliderslide5.wav
Deleted the above

Winnie

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Winnie 2015-03-01T00:08:22+00:00

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