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[Vincent]

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

[Vincent] 2014-12-16T07:10:51+00:00

Kocari wrote:
I definitely love this song. Mind if I can hop on for a GD? I was assuming normal/hard but it's your choice I would like normal difficulty though.

Alright, talked with a few people and it would seem as if I'll be able to accept your gd! (Go for normal diff)
I'll be looking forward to it (take your time as there will be possibly a SB coming in)

BeatofIke

4,166 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2014-12-18T21:40:59+00:00

Timing looks fine here lol

[Vincent]

364 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

[Vincent] 2014-12-18T23:54:50+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
Timing looks fine here lol

Alright awesome! thanks for taking a look

[Vincent]

364 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

[Vincent] 2014-12-19T05:28:07+00:00

Kocari wrote:
The Source file I found to be Polyomino http://nbcuni-music.com/yanaginagi/ and http://musica-anime-mp3.blogspot.com/2014/12/nagi-yanagi-polyomino-2nd-album.html

Uh, from what I remember, we don't put album names as the source. Don't take my word for it, but if someone else points this out, then I'll change it

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2014-12-20T01:23:05+00:00

Finished GD and had some hitsounds involved in there. Feel free to change what you don't like.

GD

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 64284
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:landscape
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:yanaginagi
Creator:[Vincent]
Version:Kocari's Normal
Source:
Tags:
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[Difficulty]
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Hitsound folder - http://puu.sh/dBKVb/5b9a8f8548.rar

[Vincent]

364 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

[Vincent] 2014-12-20T01:41:22+00:00

Kocari wrote:

Finished GD and had some hitsounds involved in there. Feel free to change what you don't like.

GD

osu file format v13

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128,256,159731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,256,159918,2,0,P|112:212|136:128,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,48,160663,1,2,0:0:0:0:
84,40,161036,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,48,161408,6,0,P|264:60|328:48,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,108,162154,2,0,P|460:156|440:232,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,296,162899,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,336,163272,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,240,163644,2,0,P|128:224|48:236,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,112,164390,6,0,P|128:128|208:108,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,36,165135,2,0,B|260:56|260:56|304:116|268:164,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,200,165694,2,0,B|332:192|332:192|404:216,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,332,166439,2,0,B|316:340|316:340|244:316,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,292,166998,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,200,167371,6,0,L|136:132,2,60,6|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,224,167930,2,0,P|132:212|200:232,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,144,168675,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,228,169048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,156,169421,2,0,B|472:140|472:140|440:104|448:44,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,140,170166,6,0,P|392:212|488:236,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,328,171098,2,0,P|324:320|264:340,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,312,171843,2,0,B|200:260|152:204|184:128,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,135,172588,2,0,P|240:152|308:136,1,120
372,48,173334,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,92,179296,6,0,L|100:216,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,292,180042,2,0,L|199:172,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,68,180787,2,0,L|388:60,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,140,181533,2,0,L|348:148,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,268,182278,6,0,P|293:261|249:222,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,176,182837,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,228,183210,2,0,P|92:188|96:164,1,60
112,112,183582,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,48,183955,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,48,184141,2,0,P|272:68|348:56,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,116,184887,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,116,185259,6,0,P|452:180|432:248,1,120,0|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,288,186005,2,0,P|272:276|204:288,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,240,186750,2,0,P|96:208|104:160,1,60
128,128,187123,2,0,P|160:144|264:120,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,48,187868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,136,188241,6,0,B|252:176|252:176|236:264,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,316,188986,2,0,B|328:276|328:276|344:188,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,112,189731,2,0,P|372:88|300:88,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,92,190477,2,0,P|184:68|184:24,1,60,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,196,191222,5,2,0:0:0:0:
104,196,192713,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,196,194203,2,0,L|96:280,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,288,194576,2,0,P|104:280|188:300,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,328,195321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,328,195694,2,0,B|288:300|288:300|272:248|272:248|280:208,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,92,196439,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,156,196812,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,40,197185,6,0,P|300:8|236:32,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,56,197744,2,0,P|120:100|28:60,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,192,198675,2,0,P|116:180|192:200,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,220,199234,2,0,B|216:240|232:252|232:252|320:300,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,320,199793,1,2,0:0:0:0:
444,232,200166,6,0,B|452:196|420:188|344:192,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,232,200725,2,0,P|340:196|324:116,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,88,201284,2,0,P|204:116|108:72,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,40,202029,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,32,202402,2,0,L|200:172,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,192,203147,6,0,P|100:244|72:304,2,120,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,152,204265,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,208,204638,2,0,P|292:260|320:320,2,120,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,256,205756,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,140,206129,6,0,P|292:116|208:164,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,196,206874,2,0,P|116:212|44:200,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,324,207619,2,0,P|111:316|168:332,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,276,208365,2,0,P|332:292|400:272,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,316,209110,6,0,B|288:296|284:284|260:188,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,144,209669,2,0,P|184:156|120:132,1,120
100,88,210228,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,200,210601,2,0,P|72:244|48:320,1,120
53,312,211160,2,0,L|184:320,1,120
232,304,211719,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,284,212092,6,0,P|368:236|352:152,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,80,212837,2,0,P|266:138|283:195,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,304,213582,2,0,P|176:324|108:300,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,212,214328,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,104,214700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,104,215073,6,0,L|184:112,2,60,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,128,215632,2,0,P|48:164|28:252,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,244,216191,2,0,L|172:268,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,184,216936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,268,217309,2,0,L|442:248,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,128,218054,6,0,P|372:104|312:128,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,240,218800,2,0,L|200:248,1,60,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,300,219172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,300,219359,2,0,P|212:252|192:176,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,132,219918,2,0,P|286:142|343:126,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,36,220663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,152,221036,6,0,L|456:272,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,356,221781,2,0,L|360:228,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,208,222340,2,0,P|248:220|188:204,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,168,222899,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,48,223272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,88,223644,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,88,224017,6,0,B|288:92|312:72|312:72|344:92|392:88,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,108,224576,2,0,P|408:136|428:232,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,300,225321,2,0,P|268:280|148:304,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,356,226067,2,0,P|180:296|168:228,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,184,226626,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,88,226998,5,4,0:0:0:0:
316,152,227371,1,2,0:0:0:0:
404,68,227744,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,188,228116,2,0,L|408:272,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,172,229048,2,0,P|196:252|168:304,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,300,229607,2,0,P|184:296|248:328,1,120,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,230166,12,0,238551,0:0:0:0:

Hitsound folder - http://puu.sh/dBKVb/5b9a8f8548.rar

Alright awesome job! I won't change any of the actual object placements or anything of that sort - I've changed a few things such as tags, audio lead-in, the hitsound sample number to 5 (it conflicted with my 4th one i added orz) and taking off countdown - (Really minor stuff)

Thanks

guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2015-01-05T09:15:02+00:00

It's yanaginagi shut up and take my star damn it

[Vincent]

364 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

[Vincent] 2015-01-05T09:18:03+00:00

guineaQ wrote:
It's yanaginagi shut up and take my star damn it

<3

FaiVillager

268 posts

Joined October 2012

FaiVillager 2015-01-05T15:00:46+00:00

Hi~~from my queue
Nice song~
[Normal]
00:03:396 (1) -

00:06:377 (1) -

(starts at the end of 00:04:514 (2) - )
00:07:495 (2,1,2) - in a same curve with 00:06:377 (1) -
00:16:067 (2) -

00:33:023 (5) - remove it
00:36:191 (5) - y108
00:37:682 (6) - x268 y104
01:14:762 (3) - unexpectable cover.think about change a position
01:14:762 (3,4) - maybe lose a clap between these two
01:17:557 (3) - unflow, maybe you can move to left
01:23:520 (3) - same, up
01:41:781 (3) - y144
01:41:781 (3) - x388 y80
01:49:980 (2) -

02:20:539 (1,2,3) -

02:37:868 (3) - use a curved slider is not so visable. I sugget to make it straight up and down
03:32:092 (1,2) - use ctrl+ h j

[Hard]
00:10:104 (1,3) - better with same curvature
00:16:067 (2,3) - in a line
00:34:700 (1,2,3) - begining of 1,3 and 2 could be a equilateral triangle and change 1's vurvature
00:37:682 (1) - not so beautiful
00:42:713 (3,4) - same curvature
01:11:408 (4,1) - parallel
01:43:272 (1,2,3) - equilateral triangle
02:18:862 (5) - same ds
02:38:427 (1) - and some sliders like this, use the approach circle or slider ball to check if it is suitable
02:39:545 (4,1) - use a same mod
03:04:141 (2,3) - use a same mod
03:42:340 (1) - not so beautiful

[Insane]
00:07:868 (5,6) - use ctrl+h j
00:11:967 (1,2,3) - whistle is too loud
00:26:315 (2,1) - too far away
00:27:247 (1) - and I don't prefer use a slider's end at a voice's accent
00:33:769 (2) -

00:44:390 (4) - curved one is better
01:01:533 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - could be more like a star
01:20:911 (1,2,3,4) - turn at the middle or a same place
01:57:806 (4) -

02:15:135 (4,1,2,3,4) - compare to the other part, it is too hard. BUT it is acceptable.(I would use some notes like these in a map more than 5 star)
03:46:067 (1) -

good luck~~

[Vincent]

364 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

[Vincent] 2015-01-06T01:23:01+00:00

FaiVillager wrote:
Hi~~from my queue
Nice song~
[Insane]
00:07:868 (5,6) - use ctrl+h j Current spacing and flow reflect the chord change better.
00:11:967 (1,2,3) - whistle is too loud I think it's fine? I'll see later on
00:26:315 (2,1) - too far away Hmm it probably is considering it's 1/8, however, i think the slider leniency takes care of it. Will change if i do get more complaints (I dont really ever have problems playing that slider)
00:27:247 (1) - and I don't prefer use a slider's end at a voice's accent Neither do I, but i really want to emphasise on the pace of the song.
00:33:769 (2) - Honestly, I prefer how it currently. I think it flows better as you should be using the slider leniency as a drop off. Also you get to keep a curve throughout moving to the next slider rather than having to go straight up then left.
00:44:390 (4) - curved one is better Made it straight instead. I wanted to change something to indicate that style of rhythm.
01:01:533 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - could be more like a star Already is and it plays fine.
01:20:911 (1,2,3,4) - turn at the middle or a same place that'd be boring.
01:57:806 (4) - Once again, I map using relying a lot on slider leniency, so I wont be changing that. (Also that emphasises the new chord once again.
02:15:135 (4,1,2,3,4) - compare to the other part, it is too hard. BUT it is acceptable.(I would use some notes like these in a map more than 5 star) I have considered changing them ever since I started it... (bloody 1.4-1.45x ds triangle illuminati stuff there. Could be changed to 1.3-1.35x)
03:46:067 (1) - Fixed the blanket!

good luck~~

Thanks!

P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

P A N 2015-01-06T11:29:55+00:00

from LAZY queue :X

[insane]

00:37:682 (1) - no need NC
00:50:911 (8,9,1) - the spacing is too short imo, it have the same spacing as 00:50:539 (7) which 1/4 gap but that part is 1/2 so ppl will easily get 100s imo. so.... yea maybe move it further or someway.
01:14:576 (6) - you can shorter the spacing from 01:14:390 (5) because 01:14:762 (1) is the single strong note so it would fit, maybe you can place it like this
01:16:253 (4) - the body of it is touching 3 so better move it a bit left to void it.
01:22:961 (1) - I know what you did but I still think that this NC not that necessary because it is still the same stanza and it will also make the people playing easier. if you agreed, fix the rest too.
01:24:452 (1) - ^
02:16:439 (2) - the finish which is strong sound is on red tick that doesn't clickable and it doesn't fit with song when "click/play" the slider so hmm I suggest to spread this to two kick sliders? idk I think the finish sound should be clickable to emphasis itself and give more feeling. also on 01:03:396 (2) or you can do something else like add more reverse on 01:03:023 (1) and add kick slider on that finish red tick.
03:37:495 (1) - no need NC imo if it just 1/4 gap/jump, if you add NC some ppl will think that it have a little break (1/2)
03:43:831 (3) - a bit/almost touch, move a bit right to avoid it.
03:46:067 (1) - you can make this slider faster to fit with music.

[Unsfamiliar]

00:20:352 (1) - A R E Y O U S E R I O U S ? it's hard diff this is almost stack perfectly
00:30:974 (3,5) - meh please move a bit up, almost touch.
00:35:073 (2) - just want to tell you that it can be blanket or you can make the spacing balance.
01:01:346 (1) - what about make this finish sound clickable. like change it to head of slider or single note.
01:28:365 (1) - move a bit further would be nice.
01:44:017 (3) - need to move further imo because it is stronger since the vocal is more stretch.
01:51:470 (3,4) - tbh, I don't like this and I think BAT will too, the end of slider is opposite way of the beginning of slider's head.
02:03:210 (2,3,4,5) - balance spacing looks better here.

[Normal]

00:01:346 (2,3) - care for BAT, they will say newbie can't read this or something.
00:08:613 (2,3) - should be slider and single note imo, better fit and you can add NC on that single note too (big white tick)
hmm tbh I think this diff is a bit too hard, how fast of slider, changing SV, spacing. decrease all of them would be very nice since you did nice pattern there.
imo try 1.10-1.15 SV? and SV changing is also danger for newbie, 00:15:321 (1) when this note begin, it's like different map from first part. slider suddenly fast. also decrease spacing JUST A BIT like now you use 1.0 try 0.9
the last spinner sounds a bit loud, decrease it as well.

it's up to you, you can keep it. it may find. just my imo though.

GL

Last edited by P A N 2015-01-06T18:07:05+00:00, edited 5 times in total.

[Vincent]

364 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

[Vincent] 2015-01-06T15:21:01+00:00

P A N wrote:
from LAZY queue :X

[insane]
00:37:682 (1) - no need NC Was to indicate the sv change, but i guess it isnt neccessary
00:50:911 (8,9,1) - the spacing is too short imo, it have the same spacing as 00:50:539 (7) which 1/4 gap but that part is 1/2 so ppl will easily get 100s imo. so.... yea maybe move it further or someway. I treat that kickslider like a 1/2 circle however it requires a bit more of a hold to it to get that 300 - it essentially is the same spacing as the next 2, also that spacing helps ease the player into the transition of the slower pace of the song
01:14:576 (6) - you can shorter the spacing from 01:14:390 (5) because 01:14:762 (1) is the single strong note so it would fit, maybe you can place it like Hmm I intentionally angled it that way so it can have a -dip- kind of feel which also prepares for the jump right after it to emphasise that strong note. Also, these three notes: 01:14:390 (5,6,1) - have a strong drive feel to it with the change in the guitar from 5, so i'll leave the jumps there this
01:16:253 (4) - the body of it is touching 3 so better move it a bit left to void it. fixed
01:22:961 (1) - I know what you did but I still think that this NC not that necessary because it is still the same stanza and it will also make the people playing easier. if you agreed, fix the rest too. I had it as a combo for the whole measure previously, but after revising the map, I decided to nc those! For example, originally, I had 00:19:607 (1,2,1) - 00:21:843 (1,2,1) - etc... so that made my decicision to change it into that. (Also helps me survive dt hehe)
01:24:452 (1) - ^
02:16:439 (2) - the finish which is strong sound is on red tick that doesn't clickable and it doesn't fit with song when "click/play" the slider so hmm I suggest to spread this to two kick sliders? idk I think the finish sound should be clickable to emphasis itself and give more feeling. also on 01:03:396 (2) or you can do something else like add more reverse on 01:03:023 (1) and add kick slider on that finish red tick. I personally found the strings much more important there, so i decided to place emphasise on them - You can hear the groupings of the build up of the strings. (The hitsounding there was just for the sake of it since i try not to miss anything, but i definitely valued the strings more there than the drumming - Also lets the players relax after the massive jumps o3o).
03:37:495 (1) - no need NC imo if it just 1/4 gap/jump, if you add NC some ppl will think that it have a little break (1/2) I agree! Originally it was that, but as i did some ncing for the kicksliders, i was thinking maybe that was needed. However now i look at it, yeah it's better off without it
03:43:831 (3) - a bit/almost touch, move a bit right to avoid it. Moved 03:43:644 (2) - to the left instead so I can keep the blanket on 3, while also making the blanket look better since the spacing between sliders look similar
03:46:067 (1) - you can make this slider faster to fit with music. True, however, the way I interpreted was a little different orz ;_; which i'm too lazy to explain o3o. Anyway if i was to change it into your suggestion, i'd have to make it the same with every other part that's similar (eg 03:42:340 (1,1) - and the ones at the start)
soon

Thanks for the mod!
soon™

Xelasto

728 posts

Joined May 2014

Xelasto 2015-01-06T20:35:53+00:00

From my modding queue

Kocari's Normal

00:06:377 (1) - 00:06:377 (1) - Put end point up by 2 on the grid. blankets better.
00:16:067 (2) - Make this blanket 1 better. Use 1's approach circle for a guide. Adjust 3 to be more in front of 2
00:21:284 (1) - Blanket 5 better
00:24:265 (1) - Move this one grid up for perfect symmetry with 4
00:30:228 (1) - Blanket better.
00:34:700 (3) - Move middle grid up by 1 for perfect blanket
00:36:191 (5) - Make this blanket 4 better
00:51:843 (2) - Blanket 1 better
01:01:160 (3) - This isn't perfectly straight
01:43:272 (1) - Move end point up by 1
01:46:998 (2) - Move end point to the right by 1
01:49:980 (2) - Move middle and endpoint down by 1 for a more consistent blanket
02:20:539 (1,2,3) - These 2 blankets are uneven.
02:32:464 (1) - This is a weird shape, try making the bend more noticeable
02:35:446 (1) - Could blanket 4 much better
02:36:936 (2) - Could blanket 3 much better
03:17:185 (1) - The endpoint is closer to 7 than the beginning point
03:26:129 (1) - Blanket better
03:32:092 (1,2) - Why not make it more like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2466881
HP drain up by 1
01:12:526 - Why not add an extra slider over here? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2466905 Fits better IMO
01:18:489 (5) - This is not straight
03:55:942 - Why not end spinner here?

Hard

00:01:346 (1) - No NC (New combo)
00:03:955 (2,1) - Perfectly stack?
00:04:887 (3,1) - ^
00:19:607 (1,1) - Make these the exact same
00:19:048 (4) - Make this blanket the next slider
00:22:588 (2) - Could blanket better
00:24:265 (1) - Make this blanket 3
00:34:328 (4) - Put more in the middle of 2 so it can blanket
00:35:259 (3) - End point 1 grid to the right
00:42:713 (3) - Middle point up by 2 and end point down by 1
00:48:675 (3) - Blanket better
00:55:570 (1) - No NC
02:52:588 (1) - ^
03:02:278 (1) - Blanket 2
03:31:160 (1) - Improve blanket
03:50:073 (1) - End spinner here 03:55:942 -
Why is the AR so high? Turn AR down by 1 and HP drain up by 1. OD should by 6
AImod says you stop kiai time for a second at a few points. Fix those.

Overall your map is pretty good but watch those blankets. Also, make sure to not make too short combos in hard mode. Remember to fix the kiai time problems and good luck on your map

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2015-01-06T22:13:18+00:00

Putting this here while I reply to them

Unsfamiliar

540 posts

Joined May 2013

Unsfamiliar 2015-01-07T00:30:14+00:00

FaiVillager

FaiVillager wrote:
[Hard]
00:10:104 (1,3) - better with same curvature I don't really see what the issue is. My intention was to stretch the sliders out more with the increasing slider velocity.
00:16:067 (2,3) - in a line Flow works in my favour here!
00:34:700 (1,2,3) - begining of 1,3 and 2 could be a equilateral triangle and change 1's vurvature I actually applied P A N's mod first. Look at my comment there also
00:37:682 (1) - not so beautiful lol
00:42:713 (3,4) - same curvature I broke this up into sections: 00:42:154 (1,2,3) follows the vocal/violin, and 00:43:085 (4) blankets the previous with a curve that feels steady and additionally flows quite nicely into 00:43:644 (1) which requires that circular flow.
01:11:408 (4,1) - parallel Whyyy?
01:43:272 (1,2,3) - equilateral triangle Aesthetics will only get you so far.
02:18:862 (5) - same ds ^
02:38:427 (1) - and some sliders like this, use the approach circle or slider ball to check if it is suitable Actually, this is blanketed on 02:38:054 (2) slider reverse.
02:39:545 (4,1) - use a same mod Using a straight slider for the 2nd one would not have the same effect, and vice versa.
03:04:141 (2,3) - use a same mod why?
03:42:340 (1) - not so beautiful w

Hmm, I see you're pretty new to the modding arena. I really appreciate you giving up your time to take a look at my diff, however you should try and give reasons and try to justify changes. Having a personal opinion is absolutely fine (that's what modding is all about!), but if you carefully explain to the mapper why a change is warranted, then they would be more inclined to accept that change! I hope you continue to mod and improve your skills, I will be too. Thanks

P A N

P A N wrote:
[Unsfamiliar]
00:20:352 (1) - A R E Y O U S E R I O U S ? it's hard diff this is almost stack perfectly oh hahah, I wondering how long it would take for someone to bring this up! Fixed! (It doesn't look as pretty anymore ;w;)
00:30:974 (3,5) - meh please move a bit up, almost touch. I don't understand... almost touch what? Looks fine to me.
00:35:073 (2) - just want to tell you that it can be blanket or you can make the spacing balance. Blanket is unnecessary and spacing from (2) to (3) is intentionally greater for emphasis.
01:01:346 (1) - what about make this finish sound clickable. like change it to head of slider or single note. I thought about doing this, and I actually did it here 02:14:576 (1). But for this particular sequence I wanted to follow the wavering vocals with note->slider, without mapping more than two 1/2 notes in a row.
01:28:365 (1) - move a bit further would be nice. done.
01:44:017 (3) - need to move further imo because it is stronger since the vocal is more stretch. Hmm, I honestly think it's fine the way it is since I would rather emphasise 01:44:762 (1). I interpreted this bit as 'steady' and then which builds up gradually until 01:52:216.
01:51:470 (3,4) - tbh, I don't like this and I think BAT will too, the end of slider is opposite way of the beginning of slider's head. Awww. I was actually talking to someone about this yesterday and I knew I had to change it eventually. Easily fixed though :3
02:03:210 (2,3,4,5) - balance spacing looks better here. I wasn't really going for looks! Emphasis on 02:04:141 (1) with greater spacing.
GL Thanks, my pan <333

Xelasto

Xelasto wrote:
00:01:346 (1) - No NC (New combo) Yessss, new combo. 1/1 stack should be NC's for readability (I might have to NC the (3) slider though. Oops. I wonder if someone will say something.
00:03:955 (2,1) - Perfectly stack? This is cool though!
00:04:887 (3,1) - ^ ^
00:19:607 (1,1) - Make these the exact same hahah making them exactly the same would be worse! I would be shot by the BAT. Btw, I had the move them around so that didn't perfectly stack on top of each other.
00:19:048 (4) - Make this blanket the next slider Why? The curve on this slider is almost zero.
00:22:588 (2) - Could blanket better Looks pretty good to me already, and I honestly dislike really bunched up sliders unless they serve a purpose in the song.
00:24:265 (1) - Make this blanket 3 Should be okay... I don't want my map to be another blanket fest ;w;
00:34:328 (4) - Put more in the middle of 2 so it can blanket I want that really nice diagonal drop.
00:35:259 (3) - End point 1 grid to the right Oh yeah, nice catch.
00:42:713 (3) - Middle point up by 2 and end point down by 1 I don't want them to be the same
00:48:675 (3) - Blanket better Fixed T^T
00:55:570 (1) - No NC It's for the new measure (the big white tick) and the anti-jump.
02:52:588 (1) - ^ I actually wanted to separate the violin sounds here, and it also gives structure to the pattern i'm using with the reverse sliders.
03:02:278 (1) - Blanket 2 ...
03:31:160 (1) - Improve blanket I didn't improve the blanket itself, rather I just adjusted the reverse of 03:30:601 (5).
03:50:073 (1) - End spinner here 03:55:942 - Well honestly, it could work either way; ending the spinner on the piano or violin. I wanted this to be consistent with Vincent's diff, so I ended it on the violin (the last audible note/ambience)
Why is the AR so high? Turn AR down by 1 and HP drain up by 1. OD should by 6 What are your reasons? Throwing numbers in my face isn't going to make me want to change things ;w; I am open to changing the difficulty settings but I'll see what others think first.
AImod says you stop kiai time for a second at a few points. Fix those. Kiai flashes <3

Thanks!

Edit:
for Gelbana's sake...
and:

Owntrolf

Owntrolf wrote:
Umi's Hard I wish I were Umi...
00:26:874 (2) - Im not sure if this should really be a repeat, I think you could put a circle where it is and then shorten the repeats and fit it on the red tick and have it chain into the next slider I don't think I entirely understand what you're trying to get at... repeat or not? I'm trying to follow the 1/8 you can hear.

http://puu.sh/eaFYx/94e1ea39e8.osu !

Last edited by Unsfamiliar 2015-01-07T01:41:31+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Owntrolf 2015-01-07T00:43:43+00:00

Kocari's Normal
01:11:036 (2) - I think changing it into a repeat would be better
01:12:899 - I think you should change something with 6 and put something here
02:28:737 (5) - But the chime bells in the background make 1/1 circles sound fine
03:11:222 (1,2) - Its possible to just make 2 just a little bit off from 1 instead of stacking it :<
03:43:272 (5) - I think its a good idea to move it back and replace with a slider

Umi's Hard
00:26:874 (2) - Im not sure if this should really be a repeat, I think you could put a circle where it is and then shorten the repeats and fit it on the red tick and have it chain into the next slider

Insane
01:08:054 (3,4) - Maybe make them parallel
01:16:812 (2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe change to this

SPOILER

02:35:446 (1,2) - Maybe remove 1 and put 2 where it was and make it into a repeat

I dont even know what im doing anymore for that mod que .-.

[Vincent]

364 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

[Vincent] 2015-01-07T01:55:41+00:00

Owntrolf wrote:
Insane
01:08:054 (3,4) - Maybe make them parallel Intentionally used ctrl + h and g so i could provide an easier drop off
01:16:812 (2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe change to this It does well to follow the vocals which usually is my main priority, however, you seem to have missed the triple snares that go off at 01:16:998 (3,4,5) - , so i'll be leaving as it currently is
SPOILER
02:35:446 (1,2) - Maybe remove 1 and put 2 where it was and make it into a repeat That was designed to emphasise the vocals

I dont even know what im doing anymore for that mod que .-.

Thanks

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2015-01-07T02:10:16+00:00

FaiVillager

FaiVillager wrote:
Hi~~from my queue
Nice song~
[Normal]
00:03:396 (1) - Fixed
00:06:377 (1) - TBH it looks fine as a blanket but did start it under 2
(starts at the end of 00:04:514 (2) - )
00:07:495 (2,1,2) - in a same curve with 00:06:377 (1) - Fixed
00:16:067 (2) - Changed
00:33:023 (5) - remove it Removed
00:36:191 (5) - y108 nothing
00:37:682 (6) - x268 y104 nothing
01:14:762 (3) - unexpectable cover.think about change a position Changed it
01:14:762 (3,4) - maybe lose a clap between these two changed
01:17:557 (3) - unflow, maybe you can move to left new pattern
01:23:520 (3) - same, up new pattern
01:41:781 (3) - y144
01:41:781 (3) - x388 y80
01:49:980 (2) -
02:20:539 (1,2,3) -
02:37:868 (3) - use a curved slider is not so visable. I sugget to make it straight up and down new pattern
03:32:092 (1,2) - use ctrl+ h j I did so no change

Pan

P A N wrote:
from LAZY queue :X

[Normal]
00:01:346 (2,3) - care for BAT, they will say newbie can't read this or something. Fixed
00:08:613 (2,3) - should be slider and single note imo, better fit and you can add NC on that single note too (big white tick) New sequence but as you suggessted
hmm tbh I think this diff is a bit too hard, how fast of slider, changing SV, spacing. decrease all of them would be very nice since you did nice pattern there.
imo try 1.10-1.15 SV? and SV changing is also danger for newbie, 00:15:321 (1) when this note begin, it's like different map from first part. slider suddenly fast. also decrease spacing JUST A BIT like now you use 1.0 try 0.9 I'll stick with it for now unless someone else brings in the same idea. I know that part sounds like it's fast but changing it would be a little awkward based on beginning players. I'll see later though
the last spinner sounds a bit loud, decrease it as well.
it's up to you, you can keep it. it may find. just my imo though. Changed

GL

Xelasto wrote:
From my modding queue

Kocari's Normal
00:06:377 (1) - 00:06:377 (1) - Put end point up by 2 on the grid. blankets better.
00:16:067 (2) - Make this blanket 1 better. Use 1's approach circle for a guide. Adjust 3 to be more in front of 2
00:21:284 (1) - Blanket 5 better
00:24:265 (1) - Move this one grid up for perfect symmetry with 4
00:30:228 (1) - Blanket better.
00:34:700 (3) - Move middle grid up by 1 for perfect blanket
00:36:191 (5) - Make this blanket 4 better
00:51:843 (2) - Blanket 1 better
01:01:160 (3) - This isn't perfectly straight
01:43:272 (1) - Move end point up by 1
01:46:998 (2) - Move end point to the right by 1
01:49:980 (2) - Move middle and endpoint down by 1 for a more consistent blanket
02:20:539 (1,2,3) - These 2 blankets are uneven.
02:32:464 (1) - This is a weird shape, try making the bend more noticeable
02:35:446 (1) - Could blanket 4 much better
02:36:936 (2) - Could blanket 3 much better
03:17:185 (1) - The endpoint is closer to 7 than the beginning point
03:26:129 (1) - Blanket better
03:32:092 (1,2) - Why not make it more like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2466881
HP drain up by 1
01:12:526 - Why not add an extra slider over here? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2466905 Fits better IMO
01:18:489 (5) - This is not straight
03:55:942 - Why not end spinner here? Fixed everything that was mentioned

Overall your map is pretty good but watch those blankets. Also, make sure to not make too short combos in hard mode. Remember to fix the kiai time problems and good luck on your map

Thanks for the mod from you three, I changed a lot of things in the meantime

Update

osu file format v13

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[ Setsuna ]

422 posts

Joined October 2013

[ Setsuna ] 2015-01-07T03:12:35+00:00

ok vincent made me do this, i haven't mapped in ages or modded. incoming bad mod 101

[Insane]
00:01:905 (5) - Rather not use this type of round slider, imo just feels weird to play
Maybe put the end of this 00:24:265 (1), on 00:23:147 (2) here?
00:26:315 (2) - Would advise changing this part to two different sliders
01:00:042 (1) - Starting from here make sv 1.15?
01:28:178 (4) - I rather make this just two beats, so either one slider or two tapping beats.
01:57:247 (2) - just make this a straight slider?
02:28:924 (2) - CTRL+G
02:29:296 (4) - CTRL+G
02:51:843 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - not a mod but such art

02:53:334 (1) - CTRL+> x2
03:11:781 (2) - imo you should remove the hitsound on the end of this
03:22:216 (3) - Make this a triple instead?

most mods here are just me being an idiot
"good map - but i was drunk on coffee"
"-was drunk- good map- facerolled keyboard orz"

[Unsfa's Hard]
00:16:626 (4) - put the tail of this at 00:15:321 (1)'s starting position
00:20:352 (1) - lower rank players might have trouble reading this
02:47:930 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - hard to read

yey
[Kocari's Normal]
00:05:259 (3,1) - not very good blanket
03:16:439 (7,1) - ^
03:38:551 why is there a timing point here

woooo

[Vincent]

364 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

[Vincent] 2015-01-07T03:29:31+00:00

[ Setsuna ] wrote:
ok vincent made me do this, i haven't mapped in ages or modded. incoming bad mod 101

[Insane]
00:01:905 (5) - Rather not use this type of round slider, imo just feels weird to play Provides a stretched feeling through the jump (since the pitches rises up) then returns to the group of notes as the pitch falls
Maybe put the end of this 00:24:265 (1), on 00:23:147 (2) here? sure, moved some other stuff to make it work.
00:26:315 (2) - Would advise changing this part to two different sliders Don't really see any reason to
01:00:042 (1) - Starting from here make sv 1.15? I was actually planning to do that, but I forgot. (it's going to be 1.1x like at 02:13:085 (1) - )
01:28:178 (4) - I rather make this just two beats, so either one slider or two tapping beats. I actually probably would use 1/8 if i was to remap this. But i'll leave it as it currently is - It follows the sparkles o3o while prioritising the vocals
01:57:247 (2) - just make this a straight slider? From the playtests i've done myself, the current one feels more fun to play lol
02:28:924 (2) - CTRL+G would cause unneccessary movement (applies to the one below too)
02:29:296 (4) - CTRL+G
02:51:843 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - not a mod but such art Hah that was a simple one to make! 02:14:576 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this was harder o3o (illuminati stuff right there if u look at it closely.
02:53:334 (1) - CTRL+> x2 That would break symmetry?
03:11:781 (2) - imo you should remove the hitsound on the end of this vocals.
03:22:216 (3) - Make this a triple instead? sure, it'll also help make it different from uns' diff hehe (i made mine first ;_;)

most mods here are just me being an idiot
"good map - but i was drunk on coffee"
"-was drunk- good map- facerolled keyboard orz"

woooo

Thanks for your wonderful coffee mod.

Gelbana

182 posts

Joined August 2008

Gelbana 2015-01-07T07:47:25+00:00

I'm gonna post so no-one forgets about me

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2015-01-07T07:48:13+00:00

Ill post this here so I'll forget about Gelbana
(Someone's mod goes here)

[Vincent]

364 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

[Vincent] 2015-01-07T07:58:12+00:00

Gelbana wrote:
I'm gonna post so no-one forgets about me

Everyone's gonna know you when the sb arrives <3

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

koreapenguin 2015-01-07T21:24:02+00:00

<3 [Vincent] <3

General

Delete .osb file in song folder, it unnecessary cuz haven't any SB http://puu.sh/ecDxx/9f937ff80d.png
also http://puu.sh/ecDVZ/d355ebf70c.png disabled this
seem you didn't set combo color in Normal, Insane diff. you should set them. go to check them
this hitsound is unrankable 'soft-hitwhistle8.wav' http://puu.sh/ecEJ9/1fa9c28775.png has some 7ms delay. t/251629/start=15 , follow this rule EDIT : http://puu.sh/ecF7T/fa1c32deea.wav

Kocari's Normal

you must fix this about vol*
03:58:551 - this Inherited line is should be 03:58:178 - here, go to check that
00:07:495 (2) - how think about this? isn't weird? i think it is...., cuz 00:07:495 - hear, there some piano sound is so low than 00:07:309 - here so how about emphasis on here? 00:07:309 - make like this http://puu.sh/ecGWz/7bab4aa92a.jpg
00:11:036 (1) - add whistle ? i think sound is good
01:15:508 (5,6) - hard to explain this orz, i think it's better than previous rhythm http://puu.sh/ecJ9T/3238172342.jpg . we normally follow right timing. i meant white tick*
01:01:533 (1,1) - not enough recovery time behind this spinner, increase it by at least a half beat
01:22:029 (5) - it's not big problem, just how about make more smooth. like this http://puu.sh/ecLCx/c87d8e9ac6.jpg , it would be nice to play
01:25:383 (1,3) - http://puu.sh/ecLNn/4f101e5a31.jpg check stack
01:48:675 (5) - i don't want recommend follow vocal on this point, cuz 01:48:862 - have strong sound then better to emphasis on 01:48:862 - here also feel so weird. just 01:48:675 (5) - move to 01:48:862 - here
02:47:371 (1,2) - yea... i'm not sure about this, but seem sitll you might better change the pattern. also might be hard to read for beginners
03:32:837 (1) - delete newcombo here, i guess it's miss?

Unsfa's Hard

00:26:874 (2) - this 1/8 slider is doesn't fit this diff. so i don't want recommend use this... isn't insane pattern? or ask to BAT,QATs
01:50:166 (3,4) - why did you put jump on this point? if you give jump then 01:50:632 - here is right cuz change new bar also fit is very well than here 01:50:446 -
02:44:017 (4) - how about make this curve? http://puu.sh/ecYel/cd06d50a11.jpg this flow is better

eh.... i don't know really ; ^ ;

Insane

02:15:508 (2,3,4) - this jump isn't huge? hum... i'm not sure about this i think so you need some opinions, but seem updown is really good fit is very well... just worried about distance

nothing to say too much, Nice

that's all \o/

[Vincent]

364 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

[Vincent] 2015-01-07T23:30:35+00:00

koreapenguin wrote:
<3 [Vincent] <3

General
Delete .osb file in song folder, it unnecessary cuz haven't any SB http://puu.sh/ecDxx/9f937ff80d.png There will be a SB soon™ by Gelbana!
also http://puu.sh/ecDVZ/d355ebf70c.png disabled this ^
seem you didn't set combo color in Normal, Insane diff. you should set them. go to check them Waiting on the SB before I choose them
this hitsound is unrankable 'soft-hitwhistle8.wav' http://puu.sh/ecEJ9/1fa9c28775.png has some 7ms delay. http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/251629/start=15 , follow this rule EDIT : http://puu.sh/ecF7T/fa1c32deea.wav
~~I'll fix when I get back from work~~ replaced the .wav file!

Insane
02:15:508 (2,3,4) - this jump isn't huge? hum... i'm not sure about this i think so you need some opinions, but seem updown is really good fit is very well... just worried about distance Will wait on others and see what the think, cuz i'll remake the whole pattern if it is o3o

nothing to say too much, Nice

that's all \o/

Thanks kawaii penguin <3

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2015-01-08T09:05:01+00:00

Putting this here for a reply. Meanwhile I go do drugs to help increase my mentality. RIP

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2015-01-08T22:22:27+00:00

Owntrolf wrote:
Kocari's Normal
01:11:036 (2) - I think changing it into a repeat would be better I'll keep it my way. To me it flows better and I don't like the repeats to occur at this point since the vocals are being dragged out longer.
01:12:899 - I think you should change something with 6 and put something here I already made different changes to this
02:28:737 (5) - But the chime bells in the background make 1/1 circles sound fine Idk I think I changed this part to make it flow smoother too and following hitsound patterns here when I changed sounded nice
03:11:222 (1,2) - Its possible to just make 2 just a little bit off from 1 instead of stacking it :< Good idea, but I already made this change but never really gave Vincent to upload because I'm lazy great minds think alike
03:43:272 (5) - I think its a good idea to move it back and replace with a slider I'm not sure what you mean by this but I did change this part to a different sequence

I dont even know what im doing anymore for that mod que .-. It was helpful in bringing out ideas for me

[ Setsuna ] wrote:
ok vincent made me do this, i haven't mapped in ages or modded. incoming bad mod 101

yey
[Kocari's Normal]
00:05:259 (3,1) - not very good blanket I'm not sure what the problem with the blanket here is. Maybe I didn't give Vincent to upload
03:16:439 (7,1) - ^ Adjusted a little bit to make it a nicer blanket
03:38:551 why is there a timing point here Same as I mentioned above there was none when I looked at it

woooo

Thanks for the mod guys it's going to help out in the long run

I went back and thoroughly checked it again, for hitsounds to change, rhythm, and how the notes flow together. I believe this should be OK for now until someone tells me otherwise

Update

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 64284
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:landscape
TitleUnicode:landscape
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:yanaginagi
Creator:[Vincent]
Version:Kocari's Normal
Source:
Tags:Polyomino Shinya Saito Gelbana Unsfamiliar Kocari
BeatmapID:566435
BeatmapSetID:244001

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
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104,228,183210,2,0,P|92:188|96:164,1,60
112,112,183582,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,48,183955,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,48,184141,2,0,P|272:68|348:56,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,116,184887,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,116,185259,6,0,P|452:180|432:248,1,120,0|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,288,186005,2,0,P|272:276|204:288,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,240,186750,2,0,P|96:208|104:160,1,60
128,128,187123,2,0,P|160:144|264:120,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,48,187868,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,136,188241,6,0,B|252:176|252:176|236:264,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,316,188986,2,0,B|328:276|328:276|344:188,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,112,189731,2,0,P|372:88|300:88,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,92,190477,2,0,P|184:68|184:24,1,60,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,196,191222,5,2,0:0:0:0:
104,196,192713,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,196,194203,2,0,L|96:280,1,60,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,312,194576,2,0,P|184:324|260:324,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,328,195321,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,328,195694,2,0,B|368:300|368:300|352:248|352:248|360:208,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,100,196439,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,160,196812,1,2,0:0:0:0:
404,40,197185,6,0,P|344:8|280:24,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,52,197744,2,0,P|156:96|64:56,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,192,198675,2,0,P|116:180|192:200,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,216,199234,2,0,P|288:236|360:232,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,204,199793,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,108,200166,5,4,0:0:0:0:
392,16,200539,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,88,200911,2,0,P|204:116|108:72,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,240,202029,2,0,L|32:112,1,120,8|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,200,202775,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,200,203147,6,0,L|116:328,1,120,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,352,203893,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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468,328,205383,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,208,205756,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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220,152,206874,2,0,P|164:168|92:156,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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336,324,208365,2,0,P|396:340|464:320,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,224,209110,6,0,B|408:204|404:192|380:96,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,68,209669,2,0,P|284:56|208:56,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,72,210228,1,2,0:0:0:0:
84,164,210601,2,0,P|100:208|76:284,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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224,316,211719,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,316,213582,2,0,P|172:336|104:312,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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100,100,214700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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208,224,216936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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276,240,218800,2,0,L|200:248,1,60,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,280,219172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,230166,12,0,238178,0:0:0:0:

VINXIS

Featured Artist

3,161 posts

Joined April 2014

VINXIS 2015-01-11T07:02:44+00:00

GELBANA STORYBOARD HYP E
from me moddin q

general

Kocari

00:04:514 (2,1) - stack
00:36:191 (5) - make curve wider from the bottom so it blankets better
00:49:607 (3) - move more left
01:25:383 (1,3) - imperfect stack
01:47:557 (3,1,2) - imo this isn't really a problem but if u cud move the 1 slider left a little or the 2 lond sliders right a little that'd b nice
01:59:669 (3,1) - imperfect stack
02:31:346 (4,2) - ^
02:34:700 (4,2) - stack
02:51:843 (3) - move it's 3rd point closer to the 4th point
03:07:123 (4,1) - imperfect stack
03:12:713 (2) - nc
03:14:203 (3) - ^
03:29:110 (1) - delete 3rd point
03:32:837 (1) - remove nc
03:48:116 (1,2) - remove nc and nc

Unsfamiliar

the hel is with that od son make it like od6.5 atleas t
00:00:415 (1,1) - imperfect stack
00:41:595 (4) - Ctrl+G
00:51:098 (1,2) - imperfect stack
01:56:315 (4,2) - stack
02:23:147 (2,2) - ^
02:33:023 (3,2) - imperfect stack
03:28:737 (2,1) - ^

insan

Od 8.8 or smth pls
00:01:905 (5) - Ctrl+G
00:26:315 (2,1) - can u pls put it right beside the slider's beginning or smth kthx
00:40:104 (3,2) - imperfect stack
00:56:315 (2,3,4) - ^
01:06:191 (2,5) - stack
01:06:564 (4,1) - imperfect stack
01:15:880 (2,4) - Ctrl+G each seperately
01:15:508 (4,1) - imperfect stack
01:22:961 (1) - Ctrl+G
01:22:961 (1,2) - imperfect stack
01:24:452 (1) - Ctrl+G
01:45:321 (2,1) - imperfect stack
02:03:769 (2) - Ctrl+G
02:10:849 (3,1) - imperfect stack
02:17:185 (4,6) - ^
02:21:470 (4,3) - ^
02:28:737 (1,3) - Ctrl+G each seperately
02:32:837 (3,7,2) - imperfect stacks
02:35:073 (4,5,1) - ^
02:36:005 (1,2) - imperfect stack
02:40:290 (1) - imo that slow slider will throw people off but yea/ I'd keep it though
03:05:073 (7,4) - imperfect stack
03:13:644 (1,4) - ^
03:26:501 (2,6) - ^
03:28:737 (5,2) - ^
03:29:110 (1,1) - ^
03:34:887 (2) - Ctrl+G
03:38:427 (2,3,4) - imperfect stack
03:47:371 (2,3,4) - ^
03:49:421 (3,1) - stack

lmao good luck!

[Vincent]

364 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

[Vincent] 2015-01-11T08:01:35+00:00

VINXIS wrote:
GELBANA STORYBOARD HYP E
from me moddin q
general
insan
Od 8.8 or smth pls od 7.5 fit's nicely for this sort of bpm imo
00:01:905 (5) - Ctrl+G That would break the intended effect
00:26:315 (2,1) - can u pls put it right beside the slider's beginning or smth kthx Unneccessary due to slider leniency.
00:40:104 (3,2) - imperfect stack Honestly, I have no idea what up with these stacking problems, but everytime i uploaded it, they glitch out and go all weird. So i'll be leaving all the stacks as they currently are since at the time of creating this map, they were essentially perfectly placed on top of each other.
00:56:315 (2,3,4) - ^
01:06:191 (2,5) - stack Plays better with it being stacked like 01:05:632 (6,5) -
01:06:564 (4,1) - imperfect stack
01:15:880 (2,4) - Ctrl+G each seperately already said this in a previous mod. This will cause unneccessary movement from the player.
01:15:508 (4,1) - imperfect stack
01:22:961 (1) - Ctrl+G These are specifically designed for a reason... Please consider that before pointing them all out with the same design. Same goes with the kicksliders.
01:22:961 (1,2) - imperfect stack
01:24:452 (1) - Ctrl+G
01:45:321 (2,1) - imperfect stack
02:03:769 (2) - Ctrl+G That would play out horribly...
02:10:849 (3,1) - imperfect stack
02:17:185 (4,6) - ^
02:21:470 (4,3) - ^
02:28:737 (1,3) - Ctrl+G each seperately
02:32:837 (3,7,2) - imperfect stacks
02:35:073 (4,5,1) - ^
02:36:005 (1,2) - imperfect stack
02:40:290 (1) - imo that slow slider will throw people off but yea/ I'd keep it though
03:05:073 (7,4) - imperfect stack
03:13:644 (1,4) - ^
03:26:501 (2,6) - ^
03:28:737 (5,2) - ^
03:29:110 (1,1) - ^
03:34:887 (2) - Ctrl+G plays out strangely if i did.
03:38:427 (2,3,4) - imperfect stack
03:47:371 (2,3,4) - ^
03:49:421 (3,1) - stack Don't really understand why i would?

lmao good luck!

Thanks for your time, but you really need to explain the reasons behind some of your mods (unless they're painfully obvious) and as with the repition of some of your suggestions, point out a few and just tell the mapper that there's more he/she should look for instead of writing them all out.

Unsfamiliar

540 posts

Joined May 2013

Unsfamiliar 2015-01-11T08:32:53+00:00

Setsuna

[ Setsuna ] wrote:
ok vincent made me do this, i haven't mapped in ages or modded. incoming bad mod 101

[Unsfa's Hard]
00:16:626 (4) - put the tail of this at 00:15:321 (1)'s starting position but it's already on 00:15:228 (3)?
00:20:352 (1) - lower rank players might have trouble reading this I'm not sure if you modded this before or after I changed it up a bit. I'll leave it for now.
02:47:930 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - hard to read Really? I thought the new combos spoke for themselves. If you're concerned about the overlapping, it's pretty difficult to handle repeating patterns in [Hard] due to the spacing restrictions. Even then, the very nature of repeating patterns makes them predictable. I was a bit sceptical about my usage of overlaps, but with reference to precedent I think they are inherent in such a difficulty. More so with my mapping 'style' and usage of a lot more sliders than circles to mitigate the difficulty level.

yey Thanks for checking!

KP

koreapenguin wrote:
<3 [Vincent] <3

General
this hitsound is unrankable 'soft-hitwhistle8.wav' http://puu.sh/ecEJ9/1fa9c28775.png has some 7ms delay. http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/251629/start=15 , follow this rule EDIT : http://puu.sh/ecF7T/fa1c32deea.wav
Ahh sorry about this ;w;

Unsfa's Hard
00:26:874 (2) - this 1/8 slider is doesn't fit this diff. so i don't want recommend use this... isn't insane pattern? or ask to BAT,QATs This is honestly pretty easy to play, but yeah I'll wait for more opinions.
01:50:166 (3,4) - why did you put jump on this point? if you give jump then 01:50:632 - here is right cuz change new bar also fit is very well than here 01:50:446 - I wanted to emphasise the sound ending on the 01:50:166 (3) slider, while maintaining a 'steady' feel from 01:50:539 (4,1) before the second part of the verse kicks off at 01:52:216.
02:44:017 (4) - how about make this curve? http://puu.sh/ecYel/cd06d50a11.jpg this flow is better Well they both work in my opinion to the long slider, but the exit from the (3) reverse then into (4) is not so nice in your suggestion.

eh.... i don't know really ; ^ ; I'll take this as a compliment??
that's all \o/ Thanks KP

VINXIS

VINXIS wrote:
GELBANA STORYBOARD HYP E
from me moddin q

the hel is with that od son make it like od6.5 atleas t Why? This setting needs to be balanced with the other diffs, so I'll wait and see what vincent decides.
00:00:415 (1,1) - imperfect stack Fixed. For some odd reason, stacking notes on slider ends even with grid snap disabled is quite troublesome. The notes tend to snap awkwardly to the slider end. I'm not sure if this is intended behaviour, but I managed to fix it by moving the previous slider end instead.
00:41:595 (4) - Ctrl+G Umm well no thanks. This would absolutely ruin the flow in my opinion. Try Ctrl+G that slider and play it for yourself...
00:51:098 (1,2) - imperfect stack Fixed, more or less.
01:56:315 (4,2) - stack By this time I was incredibly wary of the amount of stacks that I had already used. Avoiding the stack was intentional, and was the best decision even with spacing and readability in mind. May change, but I'll have to wait.
02:23:147 (2,2) - ^ Same deal as above. Here I didn't want the spacing of the sliders to be too excessive, and no other way flowed the way I wanted it to.
02:33:023 (3,2) - imperfect stack Fixed, even though I thought this was one of those rare copy paste situations...
03:28:737 (2,1) - ^

lmao good luck! haha...

Thanks

http://puu.sh/emrRh/d60c818f20.osu

Winek

887 posts

Joined September 2013

Winek 2015-01-11T17:15:03+00:00

I'm sorry i'm late, took much time doing this mod, so stuff might not be up to date in this mod.
Unsfa requested a mod hue

Small Legend Box

Grade from Best to Worst

- The best ever, nothing wrong.

- Slight modifications needed, nothing more.

- Just okay.
No Icon - A normal difficulty, nothing wrong but could be improved.

- Diff has errors, should be reviewed.

- Need huge improvement (does not means this deserve nuke.)

- This is not a grade; It means there's unrankable issue in the diff.

Kocari's Normal

00:01:346 (2) - Why is this note the only 1/2 in this all part? You didn't ignore the sound here; but in all other parts: 00:04:328 ; 00:07:309;
00:19:048 (2) - I think it's a waste here how the 1/2 sound at the middle of the slider was like left alone, unlike 00:20:166 (4) . I do not find any possibilty exept changing this to 3 1/2 circles, so you might want to ignore and take as a comment,
00:52:588 (3,4) - Why not try to make the overlap slighty better to look? The current one has all the end of (3) onto all of (4)'s body. I do not know if this will be more appreciated but you can at least have a look at it: Image As I do not find any other way to make the overlap nicer to my eyes.
01:00:042 (1,2) - I think there are better place that are suited for a 1/2 (00:58:365 to follow the vocal). The slider only cover a held sound that could simply be a slider. Also, it would make some good symmetry with 01:01:160 (3) . (Something like that(sorry, I didn't give it my max orz but i think you get the point..
01:12:526 (5,6) - Here the gap, for the easiest difficulty might be a bit hard for beginner (if this mapset had easy, I wouldn't comment this.) The solution might to add a note at 01:12:899 , wouldn't fit bad for the song; Alternatively, it can be added to 01:12:713 as well, but would fit less better than 01:12:899 as there is there is the landing of the voice right there.
01:27:619 (2,3) - I do not know if the 1/2 is needed here, The voice is held all along so i'd rather see a simple 2/1. Of course, that's totally your decision, i'm just pointing it out.
01:40:290 (1,2,3,4) - I do not understand why does these are the only note of this part that have backbeats custom whistle, just after 01:44:017 (2) they start being on Downbeats? Please fix this to make the hitsounds constant. I found this again in the other kiais, you might want to recheck in case it is a mistake,.
01:49:048 - An 1/2 note clearly could be added here exept of some place I find random 1/2 notes (notice that it's absolutely rankable, so It's no more than a comment.) I must say, like 01:46:998 (2,3) doesn't feels bad at all, but some place would be more appropriote IMO for 1/2s. Thus here at 01:49:048 a circle could be a good companion to 01:48:675 (5) because of the silenceful gap between these two notes.
02:01:719 (2,3,4,5) - Even if this follows distance snap, beginner players highly might get confused and hit directly (5) after (3) or consider (5) is a 1/2.
03:29:110 (1) - The shape is strange here, along with 03:28:365 (4) 's overlap. So i'd suggest a simple straight slider which the sliderslide cross directly with (4)'s starting; To do, remove the 2 curving anchor, and move the last anchor to x272 y192, you can see if it pleases you or not.
03:43:272 (5) - I swear that circle is odd here, I don't know why but i feel there is no music supporting it, so you could move it 1/2 before, or idk. Just do what your heart tells you to do :<
03:50:166 (1) - Sound of this spinner could gradually decrease like the music because now we hear the soft-sample, it doesn't fits good.

Unsfa's Hard

00:06:936 (2) - As you are following exactly the piano ( i think) of the music, you should convert this slider into a basic circle as there aren't any sound at 00:07:123 , but you can easily ignore this as it is only for being constant.
00:26:688 (1) - I feel this New combo is weird as the part isn't even done. For an hard difficulty, it would give alot of HP as well, for nothing, so I think the New combo can be removed.
00:51:657 - I don't see why leave this place empty. It is the same as 00:53:147 - but there you didn't leave it empty. Also it might be hard for players to realize there's 1/1 distance between these notes, so you might consider adding something there? A circle around x416 y228 would be something great(or replace it so it be better.)
01:10:477 (1) - You should make the curve point at the opposite direction, so that it'll be symmetrycal with 01:11:036 (3) and make a good shape with the ensemble 01:10:477 (1,3,4) .
Additionatlly for the previous matter, 01:11:408 (4) could be positioned at x164 and y164 and idk how to explain but: http://puu.sh/egY49/59a8303e82.jpg yeah, move the last anchor. It'll make an even greater figure for the ensemble 01:10:477 (1,2,4) . I suggest you to only apply this if you applied the previous.
02:16:067 (1,2,3,4) - You could make a full 1/4 kickslider instead of those; Your actual leave empty spaces, which doesn't fit the SE good.
02:23:147 (2) - I was thinking it would be a curve at least, a bit like sister 01:10:477 (1,3,1,3) ; The shape were the same. So maybe curving this note.

Insane

I don't know about much triplets, they feel overmapped, (not bad) but i would at least made them constant. You do what you want though.
00:17:464 (3) - I don't really find this triplet here very fitting the song. I'd remove the note.
00:17:185 (2,3) - Along with the previous matter: https://puu.sh/emVnz/983802de21.jpg. This fits more the music, and also is more constant with the beat 00:16:626 (1) . About placement on the grid, I suck at this, I can't find anything good, but you can see my shit if you want.
00:26:315 (2) - This kickslider somehow is overmapped; You also increase the sample soft to give it more feel, but once you remove the note there's nothing of what the slider is showing off. I suggest you to do like in the Hard difficulty (00:25:570 (2,3,1,2) Unsfa's Hard). By the way, the only ime deserving a kickslider is at 00:26:874 until the next note 00:27:247 (1) ;
00:30:974 (3,4) - This is unconsistend with the rest of this part; Here, I was not expecting any beat on white ticks, like most: 00:27:806 (2) and 00:29:296 (4,5,6) ; So in order to make it constant, the best option on my viewside would be a 1/1 slider starting from 00:31:160 to 00:31:533 : Image
00:32:837 (7) - Along with the previous matter: This note could be removed to make the entire part consistent.
01:17:185 (5) - You could slighty make a curve here like this so it gets some relation with 01:17:557 (6).

Last Judgement

How much would I Give you icons:

- 0%

- Your Position; You deserve star icon.

- A tadpole more effort to reach it.

This map is good; It's pretty, And most of thing I spottedd are unimportant matters;
For me, I think reviewing the diff 2 or 3 times to spot out by your all self some beauty matters, and sometime distance or whatever.
But then, if you think really that your map is good and you do not want to change anything, then call out the BATs, your map is good enough.

VINXIS

Featured Artist

3,161 posts

Joined April 2014

VINXIS 2015-01-11T23:49:58+00:00

[Vincent] wrote:
Thanks for your time, but you really need to explain the reasons behind some of your mods (unless they're painfully obvious) and as with the repition of some of your suggestions, point out a few and just tell the mapper that there's more he/she should look for instead of writing them all out.

oh woops sorry lmao. I'll explain everything from now on, thanks m8

also i only repeat out repetitive stuff because lots of ppl only fix that one instance even after i say it happens over and over again mm but yea i feel

also shi t i meant ar 8.8 not od 8.8 rip (because ~160 bpm fits with ar 8.5-8.8 imo)

[Vincent]

364 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

[Vincent] 2015-01-12T01:19:22+00:00

VINXIS wrote:
[Vincent] wrote:
Thanks for your time, but you really need to explain the reasons behind some of your mods (unless they're painfully obvious) and as with the repition of some of your suggestions, point out a few and just tell the mapper that there's more he/she should look for instead of writing them all out.
oh woops sorry lmao. I'll explain everything from now on, thanks m8

also i only repeat out repetitive stuff because lots of ppl only fix that one instance even after i say it happens over and over again mm but yea i feel

also shi t i meant ar 8.8 not od 8.8 rip (because ~160 bpm fits with ar 8.5-8.8 imo)

Haha that'd be great!
Also I think ar9 fits it fine considering that there are large jumps here and there. I may consider dropping it down though

[Vincent]

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Topic Starter

[Vincent] 2015-01-12T01:49:09+00:00

Winek wrote:
I'm sorry i'm late, took much time doing this mod, so stuff might not be up to date in this mod.
Unsfa requested a mod hue

Small Legend Box
Grade from Best to Worst
- The best ever, nothing wrong.
- Slight modifications needed, nothing more.
- Just okay.
No Icon - A normal difficulty, nothing wrong but could be improved.
- Diff has errors, should be reviewed.
- Need huge improvement (does not means this deserve nuke.)

- This is not a grade; It means there's unrankable issue in the diff.

Insane

I don't know about much triplets, they feel overmapped, (not bad) but i would at least made them constant. You do what you want though. For the actual placements of the triples, I feel as if i did it pretty consistently within each phrasing. /me shrugs
00:17:464 (3) - I don't really find this triplet here very fitting the song. I'd remove the note. There's definitely an audible sound there though. By deleting that, it would be consistent with the whole phrasing
00:17:185 (2,3) - Along with the previous matter: https://puu.sh/emVnz/983802de21.jpg. This fits more the music, and also is more constant with the beat 00:16:626 (1) . About placement on the grid, I suck at this, I can't find anything good, but you can see my shit if you want. After reviewing the melody, I have decided to change it up a bit while also keeping the triple
00:26:315 (2) - This kickslider somehow is overmapped; You also increase the sample soft to give it more feel, but once you remove the note there's nothing of what the slider is showing off. I suggest you to do like in the Hard difficulty (00:25:570 (2,3,1,2) Unsfa's Hard). By the way, the only ime deserving a kickslider is at 00:26:874 until the next note 00:27:247 (1) ; I feel as if i can hear the build up of the harp from 00:26:501 and for the sake of making it somewhat easy to play, I just left it as an object that starts from 00:26:315 (2) -
00:30:974 (3,4) - This is unconsistend with the rest of this part; Here, I was not expecting any beat on white ticks, like most: 00:27:806 (2) and 00:29:296 (4,5,6) ; So in order to make it constant, the best option on my viewside would be a 1/1 slider starting from 00:31:160 to 00:31:533 : Image Changed though that slider is 1/2 repeat instead to follow the piano.
00:32:837 (7) - Along with the previous matter: This note could be removed to make the entire part consistent. Changed the previous part. I will leave like this as it servers as a build up/transitional part to the next phrase (especially since she finished singing that phrase and something should be followed rather than just being consistent.
01:17:185 (5) - You could slighty make a curve here like this so it gets some relation with 01:17:557 (6). Sure, copy pasted the slider 6, did a few flips here and there and changed the hitsounding of it. Now has relation with slider 6, Magic!

Last Judgement
How much would I Give you icons:
- 0%
- Your Position; You deserve star icon.
- A tadpole more effort to reach it.

This map is good; It's pretty, And most of thing I spottedd are unimportant matters;
For me, I think reviewing the diff 2 or 3 times to spot out by your all self some beauty matters, and sometime distance or whatever.
But then, if you think really that your map is good and you do not want to change anything, then call out the BATs, your map is good enough.

Thanks for the mod (thanks to uns too for finding you)

)))))))))

Winek

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Winek 2015-01-12T14:38:46+00:00

really sorry but

i forgot to give you a star for your map :3

[ Setsuna ]

422 posts

Joined October 2013

[ Setsuna ] 2015-01-13T00:14:23+00:00

might as well star

[Vincent]

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Topic Starter

[Vincent] 2015-01-13T01:58:26+00:00

Winek wrote:
really sorry but
i forgot to give you a star for your map :3

No need to be sorry! Thanks for the star Winek

[ Setsuna ] wrote:
might as well star

Thanks Setsuna!

Winnie

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Joined November 2013

Winnie 2015-01-17T07:57:31+00:00

Thanks Windex for the mod!!!!

Update

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