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Unfortunately [Normal] got deleted coz i made an accident, although [Easy] is now [Normal] so i wont be able to apply the changes you said for [Normal].

I will be checking through the new [Normal] for your stuff now, i considered some patterns, since the song sounds like wavy like i decided to give that effect to most spinners which is why you will now see waves and Ls on spinners, also added more notes and spinners to keep the player on its toes longer.

Will hopefully get some modding in this new version, since it's almost completely revamped i dunno how helpful your modding will be now, but i will check it out, again thanks it was my first beatmap so i guess i wasn't thinking on certain patterns when making it the first time, and this is the result, but yeah i gotta start somewhere and i got tons to learn.

Once again, hope you guys check it out again, since it has been revamped and got some problems with the diffs, easy now really doesnt even exist so i dunno if you guys have to download the whole thing again.

Hikato wrote:

[Easy]
00:36:066 (x) - Add a beat here Done
00:48:758 (10) - Remove. Doesn't exist anymore anyways due to new pattern
00:49:047 (1) - Shorten to 00:50:200 Dont see how i can now ;_;
01:00:008 (3) - Align under the 1 properly. New Pattern
01:13:854 (4) - Shorten to 01:16:739 Done
01:29:720 (5) - move back to 01:29:720 New Pattern
01:36:354 (3) - Align on the 1 properly ^
01:48:758 (x) - Add a beat here ^
01:50:777 (x) - Add a beat hereShould it be done in the new pattern?
02:25:104 (6) - Move to 02:25:393 Done
02:25:970 (7) - Move to 02:26:564 Done... i think
02:33:326 (4) - move to 02:33:181Done
02:44:143 (6) - Extend to the red tick. Done
03:42:124 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Make the 3 aligned below 2 New Pattern "sort of an X Like"
03:46:162 (3) - Extend to the white tick. Done
04:00:009 (x) - Add a beat here. New Pattern
04:03:759 (x) - Add a beat here. Well on the new pattern there's a spinner there XD

Overall: The beats seem a little randomly place. Maybe think of some better patterns and apply a style throughout the map. It's more of a normal - normal+ I think.
Almost completely revamped due to some added patterns, also its now Normal Diff.

Don't forget to use distance snap and try and keep the map consistent with spacing and possibly hitsounds. Some spots distance snap would destroy the pattern, but i use it for almost everything

Continue to improve the map and try out new patterns and styles. The map should have improved by now

Good luck. :) Thanks ^^
Well that's about it for now, hope you guys like the new version
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General:

Source is Audtion Dance Battle
Tagless? eh? add some tags

Normal
Circle Size +1? Most of the kiai sections feels weird here :o

00:48:614 (9) - move this slider to 00:48:470 (make sure that you'll resnap the other beats)
01:04:912 (4,5) - hmm move 1 grid to the right
01:31:739 (1,2) - make these sliders parallel to each other please
01:34:047 (1,2) - ^
02:19:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing :(
02:27:701 (1,2,3) - spacing error
02:35:201 (6) - move one grid up
03:54:239 (2) - ^

Hard

00:38:373 (6,7) - 1 grid up
01:23:085 (1) - weird slider. how about snapping it to 1/4 time?

And too many spacing errors lurking out there that shouts 'fix me!'
Same as normal, some kiai sections feel weird. Some green lines aren't snapped on the time line too, and i'm not that sure about the timing.

here you go :)
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Normal:
01:10:970 - This slider is a bit difficult to catch. Try moving it.
02:19:912 (1-7) - I finding that the spacing is too wide. Try making it smaller.
03:42:701 (5,6) - Shorten the space between these 2.

Hard:
00:39:095 (8,1) Shorten the space between these 2.
02:19:912 (1-7) - Shorten the spacing.

General:
Try to apply some distance snapping.

I see potential in your map but it could use a bit of fixing.
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Chacha17 wrote:

General:

Source is Audtion Dance Battle Done
Tagless? eh? add some tags Not sure what tags to add ._.

Normal
Circle Size +1? Most of the kiai sections feels weird here :o

00:48:614 (9) - move this slider to 00:48:470 (make sure that you'll resnap the other beats) Done... i think
01:04:912 (4,5) - hmm move 1 grid to the rightDone
01:31:739 (1,2) - make these sliders parallel to each other please Done aditionally tried to make the thing more symetrically
01:34:047 (1,2) - ^ ^
02:19:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing :(Fixed... i think
02:27:701 (1,2,3) - spacing error I noticed it was 1 grid to the right, so i corrected it moving it 1 grid to the left
02:35:201 (6) - move one grid upHow didnt i notice that? fixed ^^
03:54:239 (2) - ^ It was already a pain to draw this simple square X_X thanks for noticing what i failed to notice ^^

Hard

00:38:373 (6,7) - 1 grid up Fixed
01:23:085 (1) - weird slider. how about snapping it to 1/4 time? Done

And too many spacing errors lurking out there that shouts 'fix me!' Will be fixed later
Same as normal, some kiai sections feel weird. Some green lines aren't snapped on the time line too, and i'm not that sure about the timing.

here you go :)

K-S-O wrote:

Normal:
01:10:970 - This slider is a bit difficult to catch. Try moving it.I dont see how it's difficult, but if more people adress it i will change it
02:19:912 (1-7) - I finding that the spacing is too wide. Try making it smaller. Fixed
03:42:701 (5,6) - Shorten the space between these 2. Instead i increased the distance in the timeline, basically copying what the 1st X shape did

Hard:
00:39:095 (8,1) Shorten the space between these 2. Done
02:19:912 (1-7) - Shorten the spacing. Done

General:
Try to apply some distance snapping. Like i told to the person above you, will be done later, right now im trying to improve my own play skills

I see potential in your map but it could use a bit of fixing.
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don't forget to set preview points

[Normal]
The spacing isn't that bad, it's more the overlapping patterns that bug me here. :<

00:23:043 - Not snapped to the timeline, drag it back onto the red line

01:06:354 (1,2) - Farther to the right? Also, extend the slider to 01:07:797, right now it ends off-beat
01:08:662 (1,2,3,4,5) - The overlapping is weird here
01:13:854 (2) - Farther left?

I don't like the volume increases during Kiai Time very much

I also see lots of beat patterns that overlap themselves, usually I think they're ugly, so maybe fan out the patterns over the whole beatmap canvas?
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Dusty wrote:

don't forget to set preview points If you mean bookmarks arent there a lot already X_X

[Normal]
The spacing isn't that bad, it's more the overlapping patterns that bug me here. :< Will look for that tomorrow (or more like today when i wake up

00:23:043 - Not snapped to the timeline, drag it back onto the red line Yay for me failing to notice this thanks ^^ (although it was more like to the white line)

01:06:354 (1,2) - Farther to the right? Also, extend the slider to 01:07:797, right now it ends off-beat Fixed
01:08:662 (1,2,3,4,5) - The overlapping is weird here was doubting it, but as i said earlier since more people addressed it it is now fixed
01:13:854 (2) - Farther left?Done

I don't like the volume increases during Kiai Time very much Will reduce the volume on kiai time later, i was actually thinking the same thing but wanted to give kiai time more enphasis

I also see lots of beat patterns that overlap themselves, usually I think they're ugly, so maybe fan out the patterns over the whole beatmap canvas?Like explained above will be done later, im tired right now
Thanks a lot for ur help ^^ ur feedback makes me feel at least [Normal] is getting closer to completion +kudos
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To set a preview point, go to a nice point in the song and then click on the upper Timing tab (on the window bar, not the in-game bar) and go down to the bottom and click "set current position as preview point"
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Dusty wrote:

To set a preview point, go to a nice point in the song and then click on the upper Timing tab (on the window bar, not the in-game bar) and go down to the bottom and click "set current position as preview point"
Okay thanks, also sorry that i haven't updated anything today although i said i would, i had a blackout the whole day, since it's already late i'll work on this tomorrow

Edit: *sigh* I dont get it, i dont see what's so wrong with the overlapping and the spacing ;_;
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Whoops, nevermind this post. :S
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IRC mod and such...


Just don't forget to check those sliders that have a problem in Hard. ^^
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It might be that I just suck at spinners, but I failed like, all of them

00:58:56 (6) - Maybe put this a bit closer to (5)?
01:02:31 (6, 7, 8) and 01:04:04 (1 - 7) - The rhythm spacing on these notes are the same but the latter are spaced further apart. Confused me at first. I think this happens again later on too
01:51:64 (1) - Maybe add a few beats before this one? It feels like it starts kind of randomly in the middle of the phrase
01:55:68 (1, 2, 3) - Not too sure about this one, but I feel like I want to hit it in time with the words ("Imagine")
02:19:91 (1 - 6) and 02:22:22 - Spacing again
02:32:02 (2, 3) - Move (2) one snap back, (3) two so it coincides with the words
02:41:25 (2, 3) - Same as above here
02:50:48 (2, 3) - Same thing
02:51:93 (4) - Move back two snaps
02:53:66 (6) - Same as above
03:36:93 (1) - Extend this slider two snaps so it ends on the beat
03:42:98 (6 - 10) - Maybe instead of crossing make it go back down alongside (1 - 5)? The jump from beat (5) to (6) is just a bit too far I think

That's it for now (if you're still around, haha). Oh, and this is for Normal. I might do Hard later but I'm too lazy right now. Good luck with your map!
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To future modders, i have plans on remapping this completely and making it better it's pointless to mod what i currently have right now, i know it kind of sux based on experience from my 2 now ranked beatmaps, so i will redo this and all the stuff i've learned from my ranked ones. Thanks for modding and sorry that imma end up remapping

Edit: Finished remapping it, now modding can continue
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Hey Sakura~
Here comes my mod!

Overall:
To me, it seems like the offset is off, but I'm bad with offsets so I'm not going to try and fix it. Sorry =(
You spammed Kiai mode in random places... Such as 01:00:008, way too short for a Kiai time I think.
Also at 01:09:239, seems like Kiai time shouldn't be there. Just a suggestion to remove it, it doesn't feel like it belongs.
There are some parts in [Hot Stepper] where 1/4 beat snap (blue ticks) should be added, just to match the lyrical beat, since it seems like that's what you were going for. I'm not going to point this out in my mod however.

[Bopper]
00:34:335 (3) - Here's one of two things, you can either move this two grids to the left, or move it directly under the end of slider (2). If you fixed, Remember to move (4) accordingly.
00:43:382 (3) - Same thing as above but either you can move this two grids to the right, or move it directly under the end of slider (2). Remember to move (4) accordingly if done.
01:00:585 (1) - Move one grid up, then fix the spacing on the following hit circles.
01:57:989 (4) - New combo
02:09:816 (4) - New combo
03:48:182 (4) - New combo
03:56:547 (3) - New combo
04:10:970 (4) - New combo


[Hot Stepper]
Overall: I feel like you should remove the jumps as this is a normal not a hard. Don't have to listen to me though =P
00:34:912 (1) - Jump confused me since I was expecting a normal.
00:44:720 (6) - Maybe fix this, (I mean the slight jump) I personally had no problem with it, but some people might.
00:51:931 (1) - Put this back with the previous combo to make it (4)
00:52:508 (2) - New combo
00:53:085 (3) - New combo
00:53:374 (1) - ^ Should be with this combo
02:02:316 (7) - New combo
02:38:662 (7) - New combo
03:30:008 (5) - Move one tick to the right on the timeline, and adjust spacing
03:48:470 (5) - ^ Same thing as above

Not bad, I'll come back and star this later. PM me in game when you want me to look over it again.

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I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

Hey Sakura~
Here comes my mod!

Overall:
To me, it seems like the offset is off, but I'm bad with offsets so I'm not going to try and fix it. Sorry =( Maybe i havent tried it i only remapped it, not retimed it.
You spammed Kiai mode in random places... Such as 01:00:008, way too short for a Kiai time I think. That's because i only wanted the star fountain, maybe i should have made it shorter? Ok i made it 1 ms long
Also at 01:09:239, seems like Kiai time shouldn't be there. Just a suggestion to remove it, it doesn't feel like it belongs. I like it there tho, starting on long white tick and everything
There are some parts in [Hot Stepper] where 1/4 beat snap (blue ticks) should be added, just to match the lyrical beat, since it seems like that's what you were going for. I'm not going to point this out in my mod however. I will think about it

[Bopper]
00:34:335 (3) - Here's one of two things, you can either move this two grids to the left, or move it directly under the end of slider (2). If you fixed, Remember to move (4) accordingly. Agreed, done
00:43:382 (3) - Same thing as above but either you can move this two grids to the right, or move it directly under the end of slider (2). Remember to move (4) accordingly if done. Same as above
01:00:585 (1) - Move one grid up, then fix the spacing on the following hit circles. Wow even tho i tried to align everything perfectly looks like i missed this, thanks
01:57:989 (4) - New combo I think it's odd of a 1 note (slider in this case) combo but ok
02:09:816 (4) - New combo Disagree
03:48:182 (4) - New combo Disagree
03:56:547 (3) - New combo Disagree
04:10:970 (4) - New combo Agree


[Hot Stepper]
Overall: I feel like you should remove the jumps as this is a normal not a hard. Don't have to listen to me though =P I said it was something between a Normal and a Hard lol
00:34:912 (1) - Jump confused me since I was expecting a normal. I messed up too much on this one, i was debating it myself
00:44:720 (6) - Maybe fix this, (I mean the slight jump) I personally had no problem with it, but some people might. I think it's ok, need further feedback tho, i mean, it looks nicer like that
00:51:931 (1) - Put this back with the previous combo to make it (4) Sure
00:52:508 (2) - New combo Agree
00:53:085 (3) - New combo Ok
00:53:374 (1) - ^ Should be with this combo Ok, (although i think it looks weird now)
02:02:316 (7) - New combo Done
02:38:662 (7) - New combo Uhh.. it IS a new combo already
03:30:008 (5) - Move one tick to the right on the timeline, and adjust spacing Done
03:48:470 (5) - ^ Same thing as above Done

Not bad, I'll come back and star this later. PM me in game when you want me to look over it again.

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Bopper
01:02:316 (4,1) - huh?
03:19:624 (2) - align?

Hot Stepper
00:32:897 (2,3) - what?
00:34:627 (2,1) - spacing
00:36:358 (1) - ^
00:44:435 (5,6) - ^
00:48:474 (6,1) - ?
03:19:339 (2) - align


Great map, star.
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Blue Dragon wrote:

Bopper
01:02:316 (4,1) - huh? Fuuko had the idea of using repeat sliders instead of 3 stacked notes...
03:19:624 (2) - align? Done (had to disable grid snap to do so btw)

Hot Stepper
00:32:897 (2,3) - what? Umm woops? that misaligned somehow... gah next time i need to lock notes when hitsounding >_<
00:34:627 (2,1) - spacing Technically its a jump Ok fixed it
00:36:358 (1) - ^ That one is ok
00:44:435 (5,6) - ^ That's called a jump, an easy one at that
00:48:474 (6,1) - ? Goes with the rythm
03:19:339 (2) - align Done


Great map, star.
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<Timing Sections>
Remove the sections on 69,229 ms and 133,854 ms. These are rather short kiai sections, and they don't really punctuate those particular parts of the song very well. If you remove these sections, you'll also have to remove the sections afterwards that are used to stop the kiai so we wouldn't have that too much sections.
Remove the sections on 124,624 ms and 124,625 ms. It's severely frowned-upon to use a kiai section only because of the explosion. Do not abuse this feature.
If you're going to follow my suggestion in IRC and make a storyboarded explosion instead, remove the sections on 160,681 ms and 234,528 ms.

[Hot Stepper]
00:43:858 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - (5) and (6) are placed too far apart. You might have to adjust the whole pattern for this.
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Ok i cut off some kiai hopefully is better now, considering like 60% of the song is chorus to begin with :<
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Ok, I might have missed some stuff here. But nonetheless...

Overall: Just like what I told you in IRC, it's best to either skin the map or SB the kiai sections since they look inappropriate and the placements doesn't give emphasis on the song's strong parts like what vyt said.

Bopper:

Nazi thingo's wrote:

Of course these are all just suggestions. No need to follow them.

00:25:393 (2) - 1 grid down and left (if you wanna align the sliders in a linear manner)
00:27:700 (3) - ^
00:55:393 (1) - Slider point at its end: move 1 grid to the left to align the head and tail. It should be symmetrical.
02:57:124 (3) - 1 grid up so it doesn't overlap with (2).
00:41:547 (1,2) - I kinda fear this part overlapping with the previous slider. It's no biggie though.
00:57:124 (2,3) - Try copy-pasting (1) so that it looks better. I noticed that (2)'s 2nd and 3rd slider points are crooked.
01:01:739 (3,4) - spacing~ Oops...didn't notice the symmetry part. My bad.
01:32:316 (1,2,3,4) - Well, this is a bit of a nazi, but to re-align them more properly, copy-paste (1) then flip it 180 degrees and place them like this.
02:00:008 (1,2,3) - Try spacing them a bit like in 00:55:393 (1,2,3) -
02:36:355 (1,2) - Pretty much, this is a bit ok for newbies since they don't usually follow the spacing-timing convenience in playing yet. But strictly speaking, it's only the spacing that I'm kinda afraid of.
03:23:085 (1,2) - ^



Hot Stepper:
General: Did CDFA hitsound mod this? Some of the claps were offbeat for me like in section 02:13:282 - 02:21:647.

00:23:089 (1,3,5) - Not the same slider point placements. Intended?
00:43:858 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Like what you said to me, this is intended to be jumps. Try spacing them a bit more since I don't feel the jump. XD
00:47:320 (4,5) - Kinda looks ugly. Don't try to overlap even for a tiny part of the sliders. ^^
02:30:012 (9) - Suggestion: Silence the end of the slider or lengthen it up to 1 more tick.



Wew...it sure is hard to mod a remapped version of a map. You had a change in mapping style so I can't do much suggestions. XD
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