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Uchida Maaya - Soushou Innocence

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tutuhaha
[Easy]
00:07:436 (1) - 00:11:826 (3) -
try this rhythm
osu.ppy.sh/ss/2359580
dont deliberately to stress some rhythm also dont deliberately to skip some rhythm in easy and normal
it always cause rhythm been really weird _(:зゝ∠)_
00:15:338 (1,2,3,4) - space issue, regulate litter bit
00:23:533 (x) - well, I pretty sure there has stress _(:зゝ∠)_...add note please
00:29:533 (2) - In easy diff,the part like this, you need try really hard to find the white line rhythm to instead it ._. 00:28:509 (1) - begin here, try this rhythm
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2359599
00:30:851 (4) - NC?
00:31:875 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - weird /-\
00:59:533 (1,2,3) - weird
01:05:972 (4,5) - weird
01:18:558 (1,2,3,4,5) - weird..rhythm: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2359621
01:22:948 (1) - Move 1 to here
01:23:533 (X) - and then add note on here
01:24:704 (4) - rhythm: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2359633
actually you need pay more attention on easy lol
I made some simple explain on this file ↓
http://puu.sh/dtcMy/fdcd975cef.rar
hope it will help you
Oh and by the way, Bat and Qat mostly doesn't agree to use overlap on easy and normal diff, just remind you <3

[Normal]
00:08:314 (2,3) - actually I think rhythm should be this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2359651
00:13:582 (x) - well, I feel more comfortable if you add rhythm on here
00:18:851 (5,1) - dont overlap..just makes noob player feel confusing (like me _(:зゝ∠)_)
00:20:899 (3,1,2) - well, if you following vocal, you should end your slider on 00:21:631 (X) -
00:21:924 (3) - and this one should end on 00:22:216 (x) -
00:22:948 (4,5) - dont overlap..just makes noob player feel confusing (like me _(:зゝ∠)_) x2
00:30:704 (6) - move 6 to here
00:35:387 (x) - add note
00:36:119 (2) - if you really want to show this rhythm that clear, use this rhythm on 00:36:851 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2359680
01:02:314 (3) - rhythm_(:зゝ∠)_
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2359686
01:08:607 (2) - clap at the end
01:09:192 (3) - clap
01:12:704 (6) - whistle?
01:19:875 (5,1) - dont overlap..just makes noob player feel confusing (like me _(:зゝ∠)_) x3
01:26:607 (1) - well, maybe too short at normal diff :P
need more work _(:зゝ∠)_

[Hard]
00:14:899 (2,3,4,5,6) - same space please
00:18:265 (6,7,8) - same space please
00:20:314 (6,7,1) - space kind of weird, try to increase the space between 6 and 7
00:21:777 (2,3,4) - same space please
00:23:826 (1,2) - increase the space, at least use 1.5X please _(:зゝ∠)_
00:30:558 (6) - clap
00:46:070 (1,2,3) - weird.......make a jump will work more better actually
00:50:168 (3,1,2,3) - same space please
00:52:655 (3,4,1) - ^
00:54:851 (3,1,2) - ^
01:02:314 (3) - actually I think slider should begin at here

[Insane]
00:00:412 (1,2,3,4) - square?
00:02:753 (1,2,3,4) - square?
00:16:655 (6,1) - suggest use one 1/2 slider to instead it _(:зゝ∠)_
00:21:924 (3,4) - ^
00:22:509 (1,2) - ^
00:36:119 (3) - I suggest end at 00:36:338
00:37:290 (8) - I suggest use circle to instead this slider _(:зゝ∠)_
00:42:485 (x) - add note _(:зゝ∠)_?
00:59:972 (1,2) - increase space?
01:17:680 (1,2,3) - same space

[Extra]
00:04:802 (1) - well...try to make this slider more...funny?..
00:08:021 (2,3) - ctrl+g
00:08:460 (2,3) - ^
00:09:046 (3,1,2,1) - ...unreadable
00:15:338 (4) - ctrl+g
00:15:631 (1,2,3,4) - same space?
00:17:094 (2,3,4) - ^
00:37:290 (1,2,3,4,1) - ..unreadable..increase the space between 1 and 2 please
00:51:046 (3,4) - ctrl+g
01:12:704 (6) - whistle?
well...I pretty sure someone will hate this extra so...goodluck <3
Ozato Fumika

tutuhaha wrote:

[Insane]
00:00:412 (1,2,3,4) - square?I like the current shape better
00:02:753 (1,2,3,4) - square?^00:16:655 (6,1) - suggest use one 1/2 slider to instead it _(:зゝ∠)_ fixed
00:21:924 (3,4) - ^ I think it's fine
00:22:509 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:36:119 (3) - I suggest end at 00:36:338 I think current rhythm is more safe to play
00:37:290 (8) - I suggest use circle to instead this slider _(:зゝ∠)_ I think it's fine
00:42:485 (x) - add note _(:зゝ∠)_?can't think of a pattern :3
00:59:972 (1,2) - increase space?fixed
01:17:680 (1,2,3) - same space fixed
Thanks for mod

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Frostings

No Dap wrote:

No to OD8 cuz it's already hard due to high bpm. and what do you mean note-locked?
Note-locking occurs in high bpm maps with low OD. The interval when two consecutive notes can be pressed overlaps creating an abstract difficulty increase.
This makes jumps in high bpm much harder to play. If you change to OD8 there shouldn't be a problem with this.
Ozato Fumika
I honestly don't know. I can FC this with my mouse lol, maybe I will need more opinion.
Topic Starter
Frobe

tutuhaha wrote:

[Easy]
00:07:436 (1) - 00:11:826 (3) -
try this rhythm
osu.ppy.sh/ss/2359580 fixed 00:08:607 (2) -
dont deliberately to stress some rhythm also dont deliberately to skip some rhythm in easy and normal
it always cause rhythm been really weird _(:зゝ∠)_
00:15:338 (1,2,3,4) - space issue, regulate litter bit i think it's a good shape :3
00:23:533 (x) - well, I pretty sure there has stress _(:зゝ∠)_...add note please
00:29:533 (2) - In easy diff,the part like this, you need try really hard to find the white line rhythm to instead it ._. 00:28:509 (1) - begin here, try this rhythm
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2359599
00:30:851 (4) - NC?
00:31:875 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - weird /-\ sorry... i don't know what's weird T_T
00:59:533 (1,2,3) - weird ^
01:05:972 (4,5) - weird ^
01:18:558 (1,2,3,4,5) - weird..rhythm: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2359621
01:22:948 (1) - Move 1 to here
01:23:533 (X) - and then add note on here umm... i think it is better empty.
01:24:704 (4) - rhythm: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2359633
actually you need pay more attention on easy lol
I made some simple explain on this file ↓
http://puu.sh/dtcMy/fdcd975cef.rar
hope it will help you
Oh and by the way, Bat and Qat mostly doesn't agree to use overlap on easy and normal diff, just remind you <3

[Normal]
00:08:314 (2,3) - actually I think rhythm should be this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2359651
00:13:582 (x) - well, I feel more comfortable if you add rhythm on here
00:18:851 (5,1) - dont overlap..just makes noob player feel confusing (like me _(:зゝ∠)_)
00:20:899 (3,1,2) - well, if you following vocal, you should end your slider on 00:21:631 (X) -
00:21:924 (3) - and this one should end on 00:22:216 (x) -
00:22:948 (4,5) - dont overlap..just makes noob player feel confusing (like me _(:зゝ∠)_) x2
00:30:704 (6) - move 6 to here
00:35:387 (x) - add note
00:36:119 (2) - if you really want to show this rhythm that clear, use this rhythm on 00:36:851 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2359680 umm... i think it's a okay.
01:02:314 (3) - rhythm_(:зゝ∠)_ i think need put a clap to 01:02:460 (4) -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2359686
01:08:607 (2) - clap at the end
01:09:192 (3) - clap
01:12:704 (6) - whistle?purposely did not put. :D
01:19:875 (5,1) - dont overlap..just makes noob player feel confusing (like me _(:зゝ∠)_) x3
01:26:607 (1) - well, maybe too short at normal diff :P i already checked the normal of ranked map. it add a spins.
need more work _(:зゝ∠)_

[Hard]
00:14:899 (2,3,4,5,6) - same space please
00:18:265 (6,7,8) - same space please
00:20:314 (6,7,1) - space kind of weird, try to increase the space between 6 and 7 it will keep distance... maybe no problem :3
00:21:777 (2,3,4) - same space please
00:23:826 (1,2) - increase the space, at least use 1.5X please _(:зゝ∠)_
00:30:558 (6) - clap umm... why...
00:46:070 (1,2,3) - weird.......make a jump will work more better actually
00:50:168 (3,1,2,3) - same space please
00:52:655 (3,4,1) - ^
00:54:851 (3,1,2) - ^
01:02:314 (3) - actually I think slider should begin at here you are right. but i think not bad now :>

[Extra]
00:04:802 (1) - well...try to make this slider more...funny?.. i think it fits the song
00:08:021 (2,3) - ctrl+g i think now is a better moving.
00:08:460 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:09:046 (3,1,2,1) - ...unreadable seems no problem about the extra difficulty.
00:15:338 (4) - ctrl+g umm... this is my favorite :3
00:15:631 (1,2,3,4) - same space?fixed 00:15:631 (1,2,3) -
00:17:094 (2,3,4) - ^ changed the pattern
00:37:290 (1,2,3,4,1) - ..unreadable..increase the space between 1 and 2 please umm... i think it it helps in reading.
00:51:046 (3,4) - ctrl+g above same reasons
01:12:704 (6) - whistle?i've mentioned this already in the normal :3
well...I pretty sure someone will hate this extra so...goodluck <3
not mention is all fixed. really thank you for mod and advice! :)
Suimya
Hey Frobe owo/ random mod here from #modreqs www

Let's see what i can find :3


General:
  1. How about removing the widescreen support, since you didn't really use it on your map :3
  2. How about adding "TV Size" and "TVsize" to your tags, since it is short ver of the song, and it'll be easier for people to find your map



Easy:
  1. 00:00:412 (1) - I really suggest you to add a finish here, since i really think it fit with the map here o3o/
  2. 00:05:094 (1) - I really think the clap don't fit on repeat, how about replacing it with a whistle instead
  3. 00:09:777 (1) - ^
  4. 00:16:216 (2) - This slider's body kinda looking ugly while this slider 00:15:338 (1) - touching its body, how moving the middle point few grids down, just to avoid that
  5. 00:16:802 (3) - I think a whistle would fit great imo
  6. 00:21:485 (3,4) - how about adding a whistle, to (3)'s start and to (4), it's kinda sounds empty right now
  7. 00:30:558 (3) - I think you kinda missed a clap here, i really suggest you to add it o.o
  8. 00:35:826 (1) - ^
  9. 00:41:387 (3) - how about making this slider symmetrical, just by moving the last slider's point to x:480 y:96
  10. 00:51:924 (3) - how about adding a whistle to slider's start, it'll fit with the music imo
  11. 00:57:192 (4) - ^
  12. 01:10:363 (3) - how about switch the clap with a finish on slider's tail, and whistle with clap on slider's start. It'll fit much better imo. And i highly suggest you fix the slider shape, it's kinda looking bad right now
  13. 01:20:314 (4) - I really think you missed a clap on slider's tail, it kinda fitting with music imo
  14. 01:21:192 (5) - how about replacing this whistle with a clap instead. with same reason above :3



Normal:
  1. 00:09:192 (3) - clap on the tail, it'll fit with music, I can clearly hear it in the music o.o
  2. 00:12:119 (1,2) - how about adding a whistle, to (1)'s slider's start and to (2) slider's tail, it'll, it'll have a nice effect with the music imo
  3. 00:14:460 (1) - how about adding a finish to slider's start, since i can clearly hear it in the music
  4. 00:16:655 (1) - whistle maybe on slider's start, it'll follow the guitar sound in the music
  5. 00:19:143 (1) - finish on slider's start, same reason as 00:14:460 (1) -
  6. 00:26:168 (1) - ^ you can keep the clap, it's fine here as well o.o
  7. 00:36:119 (2) - this slider kinda sounds off, how about making something like this instead (it's really sounds off, i really suggest you to change the rhythm here)

    or
  8. 01:04:802 (3) - this slider's end kinda looks bad, how about moving few grids to the right, so it'll stuck under 01:03:338 (6) - I really think it's ganna fix the flow here


Hard:
  1. 00:16:655 (1) - whistle on slider's start, it'll fit with the guitar sound in the music here imo
  2. 00:17:972 (5) - how about adding a nc here, just go with lyrics and jump o.o
  3. 00:21:338 (1) - whistle on slider's start here maybe, it'll fit with the music imo
  4. 00:21:924 (3,5) - ^
  5. 00:30:558 (6) - I think you missed a clap here, it'll fit with music
  6. 00:32:899 (6) - ^
  7. 00:31:436 (2) - I really think ctrl+g here will flow much better here, and it'll give nice jump to the next slider o3o/
  8. 00:45:192 (2) - ^
  9. 00:48:704 (1,2,3) - this kinda hard for this diff, how about removing the triples and adding 1/4 slider instead. I think it'll make the diff much easier and fitting with diff spread imo
  10. 00:55:729 (2) - I think ctrl+g here will have much better flow and will also reduce spacing problem here, so yeah it's better to make ctrl+g here
  11. 01:03:338 (6) - ^ it's ganna be fun here, since it'll follow the lyrics here
  12. 01:20:460 (2) - ^
  13. 01:22:802 (3,5,7) - I think whistle would fit great on all those slider's start, it'll follow the guitar sound really awesome here owo


Baka Dap's Insane:
  1. 00:04:802 (1) - I think you should add a finish on slider's start, it'll fit with music
  2. 00:24:411 (2) - how about making ctrl+g here, it's ganna be fun imo
  3. 00:40:509 (2,4) - ^
  4. 00:45:338 (1,1) - how about adding a nc here, to follow your jump patterns jumps here kinda feels weird, so a nc here might fix it
  5. 00:55:729 (2) - how about sticking this slider under 00:54:119 (5) - it's kinda looking bad right now
  6. 01:05:094 (2,4) - I think these can be better with ctrl+g, it's totally ganna be fun baka dap =3=
  7. 01:12:119 (2) - ^


Extra:
  1. 00:12:119 (1) - I think whistle would fit great on slider's start, how about adding it? o.o
  2. 00:14:460 (1) - ^ but finish instead this time
  3. 00:15:338 (4) - how about making ctrl+g here it'll fit with your patterns imo, and it'll make nice jump as well
  4. 00:16:655 (1) - maybe whistle on slider's start, it'll follow the guitar sound in the music
  5. 00:24:119 (2,4) - I think this ganna flow better with ctrl+g here, and it's ganna have better rhythm as well
  6. 00:30:119 (3) - ^
  7. 00:38:460 (3) - ^
  8. 00:41:680 (2,4) - ^
  9. 01:12:119 (4) - ^


That's all i can find here, really good job with the map, I totally liked it <3

Good luck with ranking it Frobe owo/
Ozato Fumika

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Baka Dap's Insane:
  1. 00:04:802 (1) - I think you should add a finish on slider's start, it'll fit with music added~
  2. 00:24:411 (2) - how about making ctrl+g here, it's ganna be fun imo I like the up and down flow orz
  3. 00:40:509 (2,4) - ^
  4. 00:45:338 (1,1) - how about adding a nc here, to follow your jump patterns jumps here kinda feels weird, so a nc here might fix it added
  5. 00:55:729 (2) - how about sticking this slider under 00:54:119 (5) - it's kinda looking bad right now lol sure
  6. 01:05:094 (2,4) - I think these can be better with ctrl+g, it's totally ganna be fun baka dap =3= similar as above :3 I like the back and forth flow here too
  7. 01:12:119 (2) - ^
lol thanks for mod baka

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Topic Starter
Frobe

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Hey Frobe owo/ random mod here from #modreqs www

Let's see what i can find :3


General:
  1. How about removing the widescreen support, since you didn't really use it on your map :3
  2. How about adding "TV Size" and "TVsize" to your tags, since it is short ver of the song, and it'll be easier for people to find your map



Easy:
  1. 00:00:412 (1) - I really suggest you to add a finish here, since i really think it fit with the map here o3o/ umm... i think it is better that do not add. :>
  2. 00:05:094 (1) - I really think the clap don't fit on repeat, how about replacing it with a whistle instead
  3. 00:09:777 (1) - ^
  4. 00:16:216 (2) - This slider's body kinda looking ugly while this slider 00:15:338 (1) - touching its body, how moving the middle point few grids down, just to avoid that
  5. 00:16:802 (3) - I think a whistle would fit great imo
  6. 00:21:485 (3,4) - how about adding a whistle, to (3)'s start and to (4), it's kinda sounds empty right now i think this should be added that whistle two to 00:21:924 - , 00:22:216 - however, the two rhythm's note is empty. i don't agree your suggesion, it seems to quite a bit forced hitsound. ;w;
  7. 00:30:558 (3) - I think you kinda missed a clap here, i really suggest you to add it o.o
  8. 00:35:826 (1) - ^
  9. 00:41:387 (3) - how about making this slider symmetrical, just by moving the last slider's point to x:480 y:96
  10. 00:51:924 (3) - how about adding a whistle to slider's start, it'll fit with the music imo
  11. 00:57:192 (4) - ^
  12. 01:10:363 (3) - how about switch the clap with a finish on slider's tail, and whistle with clap on slider's start. It'll fit much better imo. And i highly suggest you fix the slider shape, it's kinda looking bad right now oh, i forgot finish xD and was fixed else
  13. 01:20:314 (4) - I really think you missed a clap on slider's tail, it kinda fitting with music imo
  14. 01:21:192 (5) - how about replacing this whistle with a clap instead. with same reason above :3 i think a better fit is the whistle to clap of the above :D



Normal:
  1. 00:09:192 (3) - clap on the tail, it'll fit with music, I can clearly hear it in the music o.o
  2. 00:12:119 (1,2) - how about adding a whistle, to (1)'s slider's start and to (2) slider's tail, it'll, it'll have a nice effect with the music imo
  3. 00:14:460 (1) - how about adding a finish to slider's start, since i can clearly hear it in the music
  4. 00:16:655 (1) - whistle maybe on slider's start, it'll follow the guitar sound in the music i need requires a little more thought about this. but i don't fix it now. fixed
  5. 00:19:143 (1) - finish on slider's start, same reason as 00:14:460 (1) -
  6. 00:26:168 (1) - ^ you can keep the clap, it's fine here as well o.o
  7. 00:36:119 (2) - this slider kinda sounds off, how about making something like this instead (it's really sounds off, i really suggest you to change the rhythm here)

    or
  8. 01:04:802 (3) - this slider's end kinda looks bad, how about moving few grids to the right, so it'll stuck under 01:03:338 (6) - I really think it's ganna fix the flow here



Hard:
  1. 00:16:655 (1) - whistle on slider's start, it'll fit with the guitar sound in the music here imo i mentioned this already in normal :3 fixed
  2. 00:17:972 (5) - how about adding a nc here, just go with lyrics and jump o.o
  3. 00:21:338 (1) - whistle on slider's start here maybe, it'll fit with the music imo instead, i added a whistle in the same place as normal
  4. 00:21:924 (3,5) - ^
  5. 00:30:558 (6) - I think you missed a clap here, it'll fit with music
  6. 00:32:899 (6) - ^ umm... i'm hard to understand your opinion.
  7. 00:31:436 (2) - I really think ctrl+g here will flow much better here, and it'll give nice jump to the next slider o3o/
  8. 00:45:192 (2) - ^
  9. 00:48:704 (1,2,3) - this kinda hard for this diff, how about removing the triples and adding 1/4 slider instead. I think it'll make the diff much easier and fitting with diff spread imo
  10. 00:55:729 (2) - I think ctrl+g here will have much better flow and will also reduce spacing problem here, so yeah it's better to make ctrl+g here i think that now is a better flow.
  11. 01:03:338 (6) - ^ it's ganna be fun here, since it'll follow the lyrics here
  12. 01:20:460 (2) - ^ ^^ i think the same as above.
  13. 01:22:802 (3,5,7) - I think whistle would fit great on all those slider's start, it'll follow the guitar sound really awesome here owo very good idea! but... i want to highlight the whistle of 01:24:704 (1,2,3,4,5) - ... sorry T_T



Extra:
  1. 00:12:119 (1) - I think whistle would fit great on slider's start, how about adding it? o.o
  2. 00:14:460 (1) - ^ but finish instead this time
  3. 00:15:338 (4) - how about making ctrl+g here it'll fit with your patterns imo, and it'll make nice jump as well sorry, i don't want to change patterns. it a same also below ;w;
  4. 00:16:655 (1) - maybe whistle on slider's start, it'll follow the guitar sound in the music same :3 fixed
  5. 00:24:119 (2,4) - I think this ganna flow better with ctrl+g here, and it's ganna have better rhythm as well above mentioned.
  6. 00:30:119 (3) - ^ ^
  7. 00:38:460 (3) - ^^
  8. 00:41:680 (2,4) - ^ ^
  9. 01:12:119 (4) - ^ ^


That's all i can find here, really good job with the map, I totally liked it <3

Good luck with ranking it Frobe owo/
not mention is all fixed. thank you for mod and your mind! :)
Gaia
Hey >:3
gawd it's my first mod in a month

[General]
tick 2 on extra sounds better

[Easy]
00:02:460 (3,1) - 00:04:802 (3,1) - 00:07:143 (3,1) - obligatory don't stack in easys, but since you have an nc it SHOULD be relatively okay lol
00:16:802 (3,4) - 00:22:070 (4,5) - (and more) these aren't though

00:12:119 (1,1) - needs at least one whole measure of break after the spinner try this rhythm? OR
00:21:485 (3) - doesn't look that great, either blanket it or just make it go off like so http://puu.sh/dDXPK/bfbfec5e95.jpg
00:24:411 (2) - not really the biggest fan of the same slider shape right after the other, see if this looks good for u? http://puu.sh/dDXXx/5d99871b29.jpg
00:29:094 (2) - tbh instead of using sliderticks you're better off actually mapping this part like 00:33:777 (1,2,3) - , it's the only part you use sliderticks too so to be consistent i guess
00:36:119 (2) - move it up a bit for better flow owo
00:36:851 - this gap sounds really odd to me, try this rhythm?
00:42:265 - and maybe a circle here ?
00:49:290 - ^
01:01:290 (3) - more rhythms
01:03:046 (4,1) - this stack is problematic because the spacing in the timeline is 2 beats, whereas all your other stacks were 1 beat apart
01:18:558 (1) - same as earlier, needs one whole measure of break

i personally think the rhythms in the kiai could be better, some really strong notes were ignored such as 00:55:290 - 00:56:021 - and more, you followed vocals mostly in the song but when u got to the kiai u switched to following instrumentals more so like, to be consistent i guess :>

[Normal]
00:00:412 (1) - 00:02:753 (1) - (and more) use 2 1/2 sliders instead, 1/2 sliders that repeat more than once is reeeeally hard to read for beginners
00:35:387 (5,1) - stack these o:
00:36:851 (4) - curve it in more to avoid that tiny overlap
00:53:680 (5) - use copy and paste? also fix blanket
00:55:143 (3) - i think it'd be cool if u blanketed this with 00:54:558 (2) - http://puu.sh/dDZNX/06a32ff039.jpg
00:58:363 (5,1) - the (1) overlaps so much with 00:57:777 (4) - and just doesnt look good tbh, the blanket is off too
01:00:265 - there is no drum sound here so remove clap
01:01:875 (2,3) - idk if its just me but this part sounds off to me; 01:11:241 (2,3) - sounds a lot better
01:05:972 (1,2,3,4) - these are all 1/2 repeats, but not they dont repeat the same number of times, that's confusing.
01:08:021 - um soft clap sound better to me imo
01:26:607 (1) - not sure if this would be too short uhhh

[Hard]
00:07:436 (1) - also stack this manually if you're into manual stacking :v
00:21:777 (2,3) - uh fix this blanket
00:36:411 - i know the vocals are on the blue tick but uhh the only 1/4 you used in the whole song is here so you should stay away from it
00:41:387 (3) - centre this so it goes with 00:40:216 (1,2) - and then maybe try so there wont be a random slider following after (3)
00:57:192 (3,4,5,6) - omg this is super hard in a hard diff :>
01:06:704 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - remove ncs
01:26:607 - try a circle here and then start the spinner 1/4 later

[mom's Insane]
00:00:412 (1,2,3,4) - gg no squares today
00:11:680 (3) - there's no need for a slider tick just map this :>
01:00:119 - missing clap
01:09:411 - u can make this a triple or something owo
01:15:631 (1,1,2) - missing hitsounds yooo

lol preettyyy coool stuffs

[Extra]
00:00:997 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - (and others) nc spam aaaa
00:46:070 (1,2,3) - well this is overmapped :> change to circles
00:56:607 (2) - i really think this is a better emphasis on the vocals
01:04:509 (4) - fix blanket
01:22:070 - aaaaahh this unmapped snare tho ):

Good luck and have fun!! C:
Ozato Fumika

Gaia wrote:

[mom's Insane]
00:00:412 (1,2,3,4) - gg no squares today gg never square
00:11:680 (3) - there's no need for a slider tick just map this :> I like the current rhythm better. I might be wrong, but this is what I think is right :3
01:00:119 - missing clap oops
01:09:411 - u can make this a triple or something owo good idea
01:15:631 (1,1,2) - missing hitsounds yooo oops xD

lol preettyyy coool stuffs reported for hurtful sarcasm :<

Frostings wrote:

No Dap wrote:

No to OD8 cuz it's already hard due to high bpm. and what do you mean note-locked?
Note-locking occurs in high bpm maps with low OD. The interval when two consecutive notes can be pressed overlaps creating an abstract difficulty increase.
This makes jumps in high bpm much harder to play. If you change to OD8 there shouldn't be a problem with this.
I also decided to take your idea. I finally understood what you're talking about when I played with tablet lol.
so remapped this part with sliders. should be a lot easier now.


Thanks for mod~

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Momochikun
hii ~ as requested :3

[General]
Your preview time is unsnapped by 2 ms, it should be on 00:49:533 - for the right 1/6 snap.. or you might want to snap it on blue tick instead

[Extra]
I'd go for stack leniency 4 instead here for neater stack pattern, since the bpm is pretty high that manual stack would make it a bit messy on gameplay
00:04:729 - How about adding note here to emphasize the drum hit ?
00:18:411 (3,4) - This pattern could flow better with the slider being reversed
00:22:509 (2) - Whistle at start would emphasize the instrument perfectly here
00:39:046 (1) - ehh.. why 1/3 snap ? i couldn't hear anything there honestly.. just a normal 1/4 kick would be great
00:59:533 (3) - clap at the start

[Insane]
00:27:046 (4) - finish at the start to emphasize the cymbal hit ?
00:49:582 (1,2) - could you make them a bit farther ? lol.. this just like a flow breaker imo
01:11:826 (1) - Add finish just like you did at 01:10:655 (1) - because it has similiar sound
01:16:802 (1) - add clap at start
01:17:094 (2) - ^ drum clap

[Hard]
Try reducing more the density of notes, as you know this song got pretty high bpm. Stuffs like 00:00:412 (1,2,3,4) - would be pretty hard compared to same pattern on different bpm or just sliders
00:20:314 (6) - This one is nearly offscreen, consider moving this a bit upside just to be on the safetide
00:21:338 (1,2) - Jump is pretty far when they're no special instrument that playing on the music, it rather plays odd imo ><


[Normal]
00:06:265 (3) - This can be arranged better with 1/2 slider that starting from 00:06:411 - to catch the guitar section. Since it's weird to click this when you nearly cant hear anything on the bgm
00:10:948 (3) - ^
00:21:924 (2,5) - I'm afraid the reverse that covered by the hitburst could cause an issue on easier diffs, i'd recommend this kind of pattern or similiar
01:12:997 (1) - missing finish
01:18:119 - i'd recommend adding note here to catch the guitar just like you did on the intro part
01:22:802 - ^

[Easy]
Personally i dislike 1/1 stacks on easy diff, it could make beginners confused. I've experienced it myself back then ._.
00:15:338 (1) - Should be start on 00:15:631 - instead since it's too close with previous spinner, the minimum recovery time for Easy diff is 1 full measure
01:18:558 (1) - ^ delete this note
01:00:558 (2) - ditch this to 3/2 slider instead to catch the snare drum ?

good luck o.o
Pappy

No Dap wrote:

Could you tell us how you are sure it has audio? since I don't hear it. at least with my bare ears.

Also the video is from a ranked mapset
Wtf
I'm pretty sure that I heared music when watching at this video. o.o Sorry to you, what a shame. ;-;
Topic Starter
Frobe
Gaia

Gaia wrote:

Hey >:3
gawd it's my first mod in a month

[General]
tick 2 on extra sounds better you're right :3

[Easy]
00:02:460 (3,1) - 00:04:802 (3,1) - 00:07:143 (3,1) - obligatory don't stack in easys, but since you have an nc it SHOULD be relatively okay lol
00:16:802 (3,4) - 00:22:070 (4,5) - (and more) these aren't though

00:12:119 (1,1) - needs at least one whole measure of break after the spinner try this rhythm? OR
00:21:485 (3) - doesn't look that great, either blanket it or just make it go off like so http://puu.sh/dDXPK/bfbfec5e95.jpg i think not so bad now.
00:24:411 (2) - not really the biggest fan of the same slider shape right after the other, see if this looks good for u? http://puu.sh/dDXXx/5d99871b29.jpg
00:29:094 (2) - tbh instead of using sliderticks you're better off actually mapping this part like 00:33:777 (1,2,3) - , it's the only part you use sliderticks too so to be consistent i guess
00:36:119 (2) - move it up a bit for better flow owo i think that now have a better looks.
00:36:851 - this gap sounds really odd to me, try this rhythm? your opinion is not bad, but i should try it some more thought ;w;
00:42:265 - and maybe a circle here ?
00:49:290 - ^
01:01:290 (3) - more rhythms
01:03:046 (4,1) - this stack is problematic because the spacing in the timeline is 2 beats, whereas all your other stacks were 1 beat apart
01:18:558 (1) - same as earlier, needs one whole measure of break

i personally think the rhythms in the kiai could be better, some really strong notes were ignored such as 00:55:290 - 00:56:021 - and more, you followed vocals mostly in the song but when u got to the kiai u switched to following instrumentals more so like, to be consistent i guess :>

[Normal]
00:00:412 (1) - 00:02:753 (1) - (and more) use 2 1/2 sliders instead, 1/2 sliders that repeat more than once is reeeeally hard to read for beginners i need some more opinions about this ;w;
00:35:387 (5,1) - stack these o:
00:36:851 (4) - curve it in more to avoid that tiny overlap
00:53:680 (5) - use copy and paste? also fix blanket
00:55:143 (3) - i think it'd be cool if u blanketed this with 00:54:558 (2) - http://puu.sh/dDZNX/06a32ff039.jpg good
00:58:363 (5,1) - the (1) overlaps so much with 00:57:777 (4) - and just doesnt look good tbh, the blanket is off too
01:00:265 - there is no drum sound here so remove clap
01:01:875 (2,3) - idk if its just me but this part sounds off to me; 01:11:241 (2,3) - sounds a lot better
01:05:972 (1,2,3,4) - these are all 1/2 repeats, but not they dont repeat the same number of times, that's confusing.
01:08:021 - um soft clap sound better to me imo
01:26:607 (1) - not sure if this would be too short uhhh i have reference to ranked mapset :3

[Hard]
00:07:436 (1) - also stack this manually if you're into manual stacking :v i can't solve orz
00:21:777 (2,3) - uh fix this blanket seems not a problem :v
00:36:411 - i know the vocals are on the blue tick but uhh the only 1/4 you used in the whole song is here so you should stay away from it
00:41:387 (3) - centre this so it goes with 00:40:216 (1,2) - and then maybe try so there wont be a random slider following after (3) good :>
00:57:192 (3,4,5,6) - omg this is super hard in a hard diff :>
01:06:704 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - remove ncs
01:26:607 - try a circle here and then start the spinner 1/4 later

[Extra]
00:00:997 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - (and others) nc spam aaaa
00:46:070 (1,2,3) - well this is overmapped :> change to circles i need more opinions about this. now do not fix this.
00:56:607 (2) - i really think this is a better emphasis on the vocals i think slider is not fit about songs.
01:04:509 (4) - fix blanket
01:22:070 - aaaaahh this unmapped snare tho ): i knew already this. but still now i think not bad :3

Good luck and have fun!! C:







Momochikun

Momochikun wrote:

hii ~ as requested :3

[General]
Your preview time is unsnapped by 2 ms, it should be on 00:49:533 - for the right 1/6 snap.. or you might want to snap it on blue tick instead

[Extra]
I'd go for stack leniency 4 instead here for neater stack pattern, since the bpm is pretty high that manual stack would make it a bit messy on gameplay
00:04:729 - How about adding note here to emphasize the drum hit ?
00:18:411 (3,4) - This pattern could flow better with the slider being reversed
00:22:509 (2) - Whistle at start would emphasize the instrument perfectly here instead, i added a whistle in the same place as normal and hard
00:39:046 (1) - ehh.. why 1/3 snap ? i couldn't hear anything there honestly.. just a normal 1/4 kick would be great yes, you're right ;3
00:59:533 (3) - clap at the start umm... no fix ;w;

[Insane]
00:27:046 (4) - finish at the start to emphasize the cymbal hit ?
00:49:582 (1,2) - could you make them a bit farther ? lol.. this just like a flow breaker imo
01:11:826 (1) - Add finish just like you did at 01:10:655 (1) - because it has similiar sound
01:16:802 (1) - add clap at start
01:17:094 (2) - ^ drum clap

[Hard]
Try reducing more the density of notes, as you know this song got pretty high bpm. Stuffs like 00:00:412 (1,2,3,4) - would be pretty hard compared to same pattern on different bpm or just sliders
00:20:314 (6) - This one is nearly offscreen, consider moving this a bit upside just to be on the safetide
00:21:338 (1,2) - Jump is pretty far when they're no special instrument that playing on the music, it rather plays odd imo >< well... i should try it some more thought :>

[Normal]
00:06:265 (3) - This can be arranged better with 1/2 slider that starting from 00:06:411 - to catch the guitar section. Since it's weird to click this when you nearly cant hear anything on the bgm
00:10:948 (3) - ^ i think so not bad now :3
00:21:924 (2,5) - I'm afraid the reverse that covered by the hitburst could cause an issue on easier diffs, i'd recommend this kind of pattern or similiar
01:12:997 (1) - missing finish
01:18:119 - i'd recommend adding note here to catch the guitar just like you did on the intro part
01:22:802 - ^

[Easy]
Personally i dislike 1/1 stacks on easy diff, it could make beginners confused. I've experienced it myself back then ._.
00:15:338 (1) - Should be start on 00:15:631 - instead since it's too close with previous spinner, the minimum recovery time for Easy diff is 1 full measure
01:18:558 (1) - ^ delete this note
01:00:558 (2) - ditch this to 3/2 slider instead to catch the snare drum ?

good luck o.o

not mention is all fixed. really thanks all! \:D/
Ozato Fumika

Pappy wrote:

Lol
People who could be BAT didn't said it yet
Remove audio from video, it's unrankable.

Here i'll post full mod, maybe tomorrow. :3

Do not kd it yet.
Could you tell us how you are sure it has audio? since I don't hear it. at least with my bare ears.

Also the video is from a ranked mapset

Momochikun wrote:

[Insane]
00:27:046 (4) - finish at the start to emphasize the cymbal hit ? added
00:49:582 (1,2) - could you make them a bit farther ? lol.. this just like a flow breaker imo it plays fine imo because of the really fast slider transition
01:11:826 (1) - Add finish just like you did at 01:10:655 (1) - because it has similiar sound I don't think they are similar. I also don't hear cymbal like the other one
01:16:802 (1) - add clap at start good
01:17:094 (2) - ^ drum clap I think drum finish fits better
Thanks for modding :3/


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Kaguya Hourain
Hello Frobe and No Dap~

General
  1. Everything oke!

Easy
  1. Since I believe AR should always match the OD try doing so /o\
  2. 00:09:777 (1) - 346|245 flows way better than your current position I think.
  3. 00:11:241 (2) - Rotate clockwise 45 degrees and place around 187|222 for even better flow!
  4. 00:16:802 (3,4) - I wouldn't break the cursor movement by stacking here, just continue with the path normally \o\
  5. 00:22:070 (4,5) - Same here /o/
  6. 00:29:094 (2) - I'm not really a fan of hitsounds on sliderticks, they mess with players' heads and they result in breaks. I would quote the wiki saying that hitsounds on ticks aren't really advised but I cannot find it >.>
  7. 00:42:265 - I would so add a circle here at 471|351!
  8. 00:53:094 (7,2) - Likewise with the ticksounds.
  9. 01:03:631 (1,3) - If you really want the hitsounds here you should just map 1/1 sliders instead.
  10. I am actually really impressed you found some nice rhythms for mapping an Easy for this song, looked pretty hard for me :P

Normal
  1. AR=OD thingy. If you don't understand why and wanna know just poke me ~o~
  2. 00:10:948 (3,4,5) - Try this rhythm maybe? Sounds much better I think~
  3. 00:23:241 (5,1) - How about this here? Flows better imo
  4. 00:30:851 (1,2,3,4) - I believe this would flow better
  5. 01:18:119 (2,3) - I believe you should make these two objects just one slider since I feel the guitar is really strong here and the dragging feel of the guitar would fit really nicely.
  6. 01:22:802 (2,3) - Same here I feel.
  7. 01:17:680 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try this rhythm here. I feel the one you have is really inaccurate with the guitar >.<
  8. 01:22:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same for here!

Hard
  1. OD to 7 please. You should NEVER have OD difference higher than 1.
  2. 00:09:046 (3) - I feel like you're skipping the sound on the white tick. Map a 1/2 slider there instead and a circle on the red tick before.
  3. 00:17:826 - I do feel like something is missing here. You should add a circle and resnap some things if you want o/
  4. 00:57:192 (3,4,5,6) - I feel the square might be a little too hard here. Try two sliders! /o/
  5. Pretty diff~

No Dap's Insane
  1. Like I said, NEVER have OD and AR difference higher than 1. OD to 8!
  2. 00:09:046 (3) - Same as the hard I feel you're missing the beat at the white tick. Start the slider on the white tick and maybe end it on the blue tick before the next circle I feel it fits (?)
  3. 00:53:094 (1) - The vocal actually starts on the blue tick before this. I dunno how you're going to fix this, either a circle on the blue tick or starting the slider there works fine.
  4. This is a really good diff o/

Extra
  1. OD to 9? Pretty suitable for Extra :D
  2. 00:07:143 (3) - I feel you should start the jumps on the white tick, it is pretty bad for players to not hitting a jump where you are supposed to start a jump section, it feels a little awkward to start aiming after a relatively low velocity slider. Solution: Make the slider 1/2 short, and add a circle on the downbeat.
  3. 00:09:046 (3) - Same as Hard and Insane.
  4. 00:22:948 (3) - Same as above, hitting jumps after a 1/1 slider where the jump section is supposed to start feels awkward. 1/2 slider and circle fixes :D
  5. I feel the kiai has excessive use of extended slider like 01:01:290 (1,2) - these. Some of them fit, some don't. I will just mention the ones that don't fit so you can maybe shorten them to 1/2 if you want:
    00:50:607 (1) -
    00:55:290 (1) -
    01:01:290 (1,2) -
    01:03:631 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
  6. 01:06:119 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - I feel the sliders should start on the red ticks here, like you did with hard, which was great. What you could do here is triangle jumps though!
  7. 01:27:411 (2,3) - Not sure if these exist in the music o.o

This is pretty nice, reminder that these are all suggestions and you can deny everything, though that would make me really sad :(

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Frobe
now the editor has too much lag... i will check to if solve this. sorry ;w;
Ozato Fumika

Kaguya Hourain wrote:

Hello Frobe and No Dap~ Hi o/

No Dap's Insane
  1. Like I said, NEVER have OD and AR difference higher than 1. OD to 8! OD8 would be too harsh imo. considering this is a 205 bpm, I think 7 is enough. but if more people say, I will consider .3~.5 ish :3
  2. 00:09:046 (3) - Same as the hard I feel you're missing the beat at the white tick. Start the slider on the white tick and maybe end it on the blue tick before the next circle I feel it fits (?) I think the white beat here is barely noticeable. I'm trying to map the strong guitars here.
  3. 00:53:094 (1) - The vocal actually starts on the blue tick before this. I dunno how you're going to fix this, either a circle on the blue tick or starting the slider there works fine. true, but I'd like to keep it this way because it's more ok to play. and I'm also sure it's a vocal error lol idk
  4. This is a really good diff o/ Thanks~
fixed some jumps

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Topic Starter
Frobe

Kaguya Hourain wrote:

Hello Frobe and No Dap~

General
  1. Everything oke!

Easy
  1. Since I believe AR should always match the OD try doing so /o\ my think now do not have a fix for the od.
  2. 00:09:777 (1) - 346|245 flows way better than your current position I think. umm... i think this is now the better :>
  3. 00:11:241 (2) - Rotate clockwise 45 degrees and place around 187|222 for even better flow!
  4. 00:16:802 (3,4) - I wouldn't break the cursor movement by stacking here, just continue with the path normally \o\ i'll think about this need some more.
  5. 00:22:070 (4,5) - Same here /o/ ^
  6. 00:29:094 (2) - I'm not really a fan of hitsounds on sliderticks, they mess with players' heads and they result in breaks. I would quote the wiki saying that hitsounds on ticks aren't really advised but I cannot find it >.> umm... i need more opinions about this. but now don't fix it :3
  7. 00:42:265 - I would so add a circle here at 471|351!
  8. 00:53:094 (7,2) - Likewise with the ticksounds. well... seems this not bad.
  9. 01:03:631 (1,3) - If you really want the hitsounds here you should just map 1/1 sliders instead. umm... i think it is hard for the easy diff.
  10. I am actually really impressed you found some nice rhythms for mapping an Easy for this song, looked pretty hard for me :P

Normal
  1. AR=OD thingy. If you don't understand why and wanna know just poke me ~o~ same as easy :3
  2. 00:10:948 (3,4,5) - Try this rhythm maybe? Sounds much better I think~ good
  3. 00:23:241 (5,1) - How about this here? Flows better imo sorry, it's seems a not be content for me :v
  4. 00:30:851 (1,2,3,4) - I believe this would flow better ^
  5. 01:18:119 (2,3) - I believe you should make these two objects just one slider since I feel the guitar is really strong here and the dragging feel of the guitar would fit really nicely. see below ><
  6. 01:22:802 (2,3) - Same here I feel. same. see below
  7. 01:17:680 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try this rhythm here. I feel the one you have is really inaccurate with the guitar >.< 01:17:680 (1,2,3) - changed this
  8. 01:22:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same for here! 01:22:363 (1,2,3) - changed this

Hard
  1. OD to 7 please. You should NEVER have OD difference higher than 1. now changed to 6.
  2. 00:09:046 (3) - I feel like you're skipping the sound on the white tick. Map a 1/2 slider there instead and a circle on the red tick before. sorry, i don't agree your opinion.
  3. 00:17:826 - I do feel like something is missing here. You should add a circle and resnap some things if you want o/ ^
  4. 00:57:192 (3,4,5,6) - I feel the square might be a little too hard here. Try two sliders! /o/ umm... i want a circle about this :D
  5. Pretty diff~

Extra
  1. OD to 9? Pretty suitable for Extra :D well... ;w;
  2. 00:07:143 (3) - I feel you should start the jumps on the white tick, it is pretty bad for players to not hitting a jump where you are supposed to start a jump section, it feels a little awkward to start aiming after a relatively low velocity slider. Solution: Make the slider 1/2 short, and add a circle on the downbeat. well... i don't have to think about change this pattern.
  3. 00:09:046 (3) - Same as Hard and Insane. same as hard.
  4. 00:22:948 (3) - Same as above, hitting jumps after a 1/1 slider where the jump section is supposed to start feels awkward. 1/2 slider and circle fixes :D placed it for vocal :>
  5. I feel the kiai has excessive use of extended slider like 01:01:290 (1,2) - these. Some of them fit, some don't. I will just mention the ones that don't fit so you can maybe shorten them to 1/2 if you want: i had mapped using x this diff, i could not find a weird rhythm through normal hitsound.
    00:50:607 (1) -
    00:55:290 (1) -
    01:01:290 (1,2) -
    01:03:631 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
  6. 01:06:119 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - I feel the sliders should start on the red ticks here, like you did with hard, which was great. What you could do here is triangle jumps though! i think it's very fits the song.
  7. 01:27:411 (2,3) - Not sure if these exist in the music o.o umm... no fixed :D

This is pretty nice, reminder that these are all suggestions and you can deny everything, though that would make me really sad :(

Good luck!
not mention is all fixed. thanks for mod :D
scanter
내가 이런 굇퀄을 모딩해야한다니!

General
  1. 리드인 제대로 1.5초에 맞추시려면 에딧창에서 AudioLeadIn을 1088로 해놓으시면 됩니당. 첫 시작포인트 412 + 에딧 설정상 1088 = 1500
  2. 노말에 콤보색상이 왜 4개죠!?
Easy
  1. 00:15:338 - 서클 1개? 엄청 비어보이는데.
  2. 00:20:607 (2) - 거리좀
  3. 00:42:265 (4) - 흐름이 좀 안좋음. 차라리 감싸는 형식으로 하는게 좋을듯.
  4. 00:42:558 (1) - 스핀이 쓸데없이 길고 안어울림. 뭔가 억지로 쑤셔넣었다는 느낌이 강하네요. 박자를 이런식으로 채워 넣은다음에 스핀을 00:44:899 이쪽에서 시작하면 꽤 괜찮아보입니다.
  5. 00:48:704 - 00:48:997 - 노말이랑 똑같이 노트 추가하는게 어때여. 이쪽에 소리도 쎄고 키아이 진입 전이라 강조하면 좋은 부분같은데, 너무 비어보이네요.
  6. 00:50:168 (3) - 2번쪽 머리에도 끝에 디스턴스 일치시키는건 어떨까여? 01:26:607 (1) 이쪽처럼.
  7. 00:57:777 (6) - 이거는 1/1로 박자를 채우는게 어울린다고 생각합니다. 노래는 강조하고있는데 박자가 재미를 반감시키는 패턴같아요.
Normal
  1. 개인적인 의견인데 왕복 2번하는 1/2 슬라가 많이 보이는데, 상당히 많이 틀릴것 같은 패턴입니다.고려해보시는게 좋을듯.
  2. 00:13:582 - 클랩 빠짐
  3. 00:53:680 (5) - 담요 개선
  4. 01:11:241 (2) - 진행경로 일치?
Hard
  1. 그렇게 쉬운 하드는 아니므로 AR8, OD7을 추천합니다.
  2. 00:00:412 (1,2) - 모조리 클랩으로 처리하는게 뉴콤 치신것도 그렇고 좀 더 어울려보입니다.
  3. 00:02:753 (1,2) - 이쪽도.
  4. 00:20:168 (5,6) - 서로 리듬 바꾸는걸 추천. 뭐를 따라가는지 모르겠어요.
  5. 00:34:216 (4) - 거리좀
제가 지금 가지고있는게 구버전이라 다시 다운 받으려니까 속도가 엄청 느리네요. 노답님 난이도는 빠른 시일내에 모딩하도록 하겠습니당.

Extra
  1. 00:04:802 (1) - 변속인데 거리가 좀 밋밋하네요. 대충 이런식으로하면 꽤 괜찮아보여요.
  2. 00:52:216 (4) - 나치모딩 죄송. 담요 개선좀
  3. 00:52:802 (7) - 거리가 기존에 두셨던 패턴들과 안 맞아영.
  4. 01:05:387 (3,4) - 3번에서 4번으로 가는 과정중에서 OD가 높아서 100점이 엄청 잘뜸. 함 고려해보시는게 좋겠음
쿠도스 내나!
scanter
No kds

포스트 수나 늘려야지

No Dap's Insane
  1. 00:32:753 (6) - 흐름이 안 좋은데 그냥 위로 올리는건 어때요?
  2. 00:55:290 (1) - 담요 개선
  3. 01:16:802 (1) - 기존에 쓰셨던 디스턴스랑 안 맞는거같아요. 약간 늘리시는게 좋을듯
  4. 01:26:607 (4) - 뉴콤을 넣으면 끝에 이 부분이 일관성있게 보입니당.
트롤모딩 ㅈㅅ
Topic Starter
Frobe

scanter wrote:

내가 이런 굇퀄을 모딩해야한다니!

General
  1. 리드인 제대로 1.5초에 맞추시려면 에딧창에서 AudioLeadIn을 1088로 해놓으시면 됩니당. 첫 시작포인트 412 + 에딧 설정상 1088 = 1500
  2. 노말에 콤보색상이 왜 4개죠!? 어 노말 키고 색상 하나 추가한 뒤 다른 난이도도 추가해야 한다는걸 잊어버린듯
Easy
  1. 00:15:338 - 서클 1개? 엄청 비어보이는데. 원래 있었는데 다른 사람이 스핀과 다음노트 간격이 좁다고 해서... 지웟어여
  2. 00:20:607 (2) - 거리좀
  3. 00:42:265 (4) - 흐름이 좀 안좋음. 차라리 감싸는 형식으로 하는게 좋을듯. 저러면 다음 노트 연계가 곤란해서 3,4번을 뒤집음
  4. 00:42:558 (1) - 스핀이 쓸데없이 길고 안어울림. 뭔가 억지로 쑤셔넣었다는 느낌이 강하네요. 박자를 이런식으로 채워 넣은다음에 스핀을 00:44:899 이쪽에서 시작하면 꽤 괜찮아보입니다. 만들때 귀찮아서 대충 놓고 모딩오면 고쳐야지 한 부분인데 아무도 지적 안 하길레 괜찮은줄 ㅋㅋ.... 고쳤슴다
  5. 00:48:704 - 00:48:997 - 노말이랑 똑같이 노트 추가하는게 어때여. 이쪽에 소리도 쎄고 키아이 진입 전이라 강조하면 좋은 부분같은데, 너무 비어보이네요.
  6. 00:50:168 (3) - 2번쪽 머리에도 끝에 디스턴스 일치시키는건 어떨까여? 01:26:607 (1) 이쪽처럼. 위에 고치면서 이거 패턴도 바꾼지라 자동으로 패스됐네여 ㄷ
  7. 00:57:777 (6) - 이거는 1/1로 박자를 채우는게 어울린다고 생각합니다. 노래는 강조하고있는데 박자가 재미를 반감시키는 패턴같아요. 음 ㅇㅋ
Normal
  1. 개인적인 의견인데 왕복 2번하는 1/2 슬라가 많이 보이는데, 상당히 많이 틀릴것 같은 패턴입니다.고려해보시는게 좋을듯.
  2. 00:13:582 - 클랩 빠짐
  3. 00:53:680 (5) - 담요 개선 음 뭐가 이상한지 전 잘 모르겟는뎀... 일단 왼쪽으로 1그리드
  4. 01:11:241 (2) - 진행경로 일치? 글쎄염
Hard
  1. 그렇게 쉬운 하드는 아니므로 AR8, OD7을 추천합니다. 에알을 올리면 노말~하드 3 하드~인센 1로 격차가 커져서... 난감하네여
  2. 00:00:412 (1,2) - 모조리 클랩으로 처리하는게 뉴콤 치신것도 그렇고 좀 더 어울려보입니다. 아 실수
  3. 00:02:753 (1,2) - 이쪽도. ^
  4. 00:20:168 (5,6) - 서로 리듬 바꾸는걸 추천. 뭐를 따라가는지 모르겠어요.
  5. 00:34:216 (4) - 거리좀
제가 지금 가지고있는게 구버전이라 다시 다운 받으려니까 속도가 엄청 느리네요. 노답님 난이도는 빠른 시일내에 모딩하도록 하겠습니당.

Extra
  1. 00:04:802 (1) - 변속인데 거리가 좀 밋밋하네요. 대충 이런식으로하면 꽤 괜찮아보여요. 음 전 지금도 괜찮은거 같은데 이 모딩 보니 이전 2번 슬라+3번 노트 거리가 좀 눈에 띄어서 고침
  2. 00:52:216 (4) - 나치모딩 죄송. 담요 개선좀
  3. 00:52:802 (7) - 거리가 기존에 두셨던 패턴들과 안 맞아영. 설명을 어케 해야 할지 모르겠는데 플레이 할땐 슬라이더란거 자체가 7번 슬라이더 시작지점 -> 1번 슬라이더 시작지점으로 가는 느낌이라 거리는 이래도 괜찮은거 같아여
  4. 01:05:387 (3,4) - 3번에서 4번으로 가는 과정중에서 OD가 높아서 100점이 엄청 잘뜸. 함 고려해보시는게 좋겠음 고려는 하는데 일단 보류염... 당장은 패턴이 생각 안 나네여
쿠도스 내나! 드... 드리겠습니다
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땡큐염 ㅎㅎ
Ozato Fumika

scanter wrote:

No kds

포스트 수나 늘려야지

No Dap's Insane
  1. 00:32:753 (6) - 흐름이 안 좋은데 그냥 위로 올리는건 어때요?
  2. 00:55:290 (1) - 담요 개선
  3. 01:16:802 (1) - 기존에 쓰셨던 디스턴스랑 안 맞는거같아요. 약간 늘리시는게 좋을듯
  4. 01:26:607 (4) - 뉴콤을 넣으면 끝에 이 부분이 일관성있게 보입니당.
트롤모딩 ㅈㅅ
다고침 씹굇
SPOILER
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: AUDIO.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1088
PreviewTime: 49533
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Soushou Innocence
TitleUnicode:創傷イノセンス
Artist:Uchida Maaya
ArtistUnicode:内田真礼
Creator:Frobe
Version:No Dap's Insane
Source:悪魔のリドル
Tags:akuma no riddle opening dap no_dap tv size tvsize
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neonat
Forum PM.

General

Add 1600 AudioLEadIn instead, 2000ms is more ideal than 1500

Easy

Eh,not really fond of the 1/1 beat stacks, maybe get more feedback and opinions on that.
Especially for stacks in the middle of rhythm patterns, like 00:16:802 (3,4)

00:08:607 (2) - this slider doesn't really fit into the rhythm of the song, using the rhythm of 00:06:558 (2,3) again could work better:
00:33:777 (1,2,3) - these offbeat rhythms are quite tricky in Easy
00:41:387 (3) - you should shift it lower, so it's head is more within the range of the flow after the end of the previous slider 00:40:802 (2) - around this height:

I do find those patterns that land a lot on the offbeat not really too suited in Easy

Normal

00:35:387 (5,1) - don't stack this, this could confuse the players with the 1/1 stacks, while this one is 1/2
01:09:192 (3,4) - ^
01:26:607 (1) - quite a short spinner, doesn't really have ample time for spinning at the end of Normal

Hard

00:12:997 (1) - soft finish on start of slider
00:20:899 (7,1,2) - reduce this jump, it's too extreme

No Dap's Insane

00:12:997 (5) - finish

Extra

00:12:997 (1) - soft finish
00:22:363 (1,2) - why is this stacked and different from the rest of the similar sounding parts of 00:21:192 (5,1,2,3)
Topic Starter
Frobe

neonat wrote:

Forum PM.

General

Add 1600 AudioLEadIn instead, 2000ms is more ideal than 1500

Easy

Eh,not really fond of the 1/1 beat stacks, maybe get more feedback and opinions on that.
Especially for stacks in the middle of rhythm patterns, like 00:16:802 (3,4)

00:08:607 (2) - this slider doesn't really fit into the rhythm of the song, using the rhythm of 00:06:558 (2,3) again could work better: i need more opinions about this ;w;
00:33:777 (1,2,3) - these offbeat rhythms are quite tricky in Easy umm... i'll think about this some more.
00:41:387 (3) - you should shift it lower, so it's head is more within the range of the flow after the end of the previous slider 00:40:802 (2) - around this height: i want to have in the same distance :D

I do find those patterns that land a lot on the offbeat not really too suited in Easy ;w;

Normal

00:35:387 (5,1) - don't stack this, this could confuse the players with the 1/1 stacks, while this one is 1/2
01:09:192 (3,4) - ^
01:26:607 (1) - quite a short spinner, doesn't really have ample time for spinning at the end of Normal i had reference a this in ranked mapset.

Hard

00:12:997 (1) - soft finish on start of slider
00:20:899 (7,1,2) - reduce this jump, it's too extreme

No Dap's Insane

00:12:997 (5) - finish

Extra

00:12:997 (1) - soft finish
00:22:363 (1,2) - why is this stacked and different from the rest of the similar sounding parts of 00:21:192 (5,1,2,3) umm... i think this pattern is not big problem.
not mention is fixed. really thank you! :)
Ozato Fumika
fixed all

add finish for me 쁘로쁘
Mei
hihihi

[extra]
  1. 00:00:412 (1,2) - i personally think ctrl+g this 2 will be better
  2. 00:04:509 (5,1) - stack it like this will get better performance imo
  3. 00:07:436 slider end at such a strong beat here is not recommended for a extra diff, lets try this?
  4. 00:41:680 (2,4) - do ctrl+g to each slider?
  5. 01:03:631 (1,2) - is that too far? i cant catch this 10/10, i think this is too far even this is a diff for pros, maybe try this
  6. 01:04:802 (1,2,3,4) - same with these but i am not sure this time ;w;w;w;w;


[no dap's insane]
  1. 00:14:168 (1) - remove NC?
  2. 00:16:655 (1,2) - maybe combine to a 1/1 slider?


[hard]
  1. 00:14:899 (2) - remove this note and try this?
  2. 00:19:582 (2) - remove this note and and move 3 to x316 y240?
  3. 00:44:607 (4) - move to x456 y268? now is too close




[normal]
  1. 01:05:972 (1,2) -
  2. 01:05:972 (1,2) - because ar is so low for this dtff, overlap seems to be more considered, try this to avoid overlap?
really nice mapset as your 1st map for rank(and with over 40 graveyarded maps lol) , give you a star~~~good luck!
Topic Starter
Frobe

Mei wrote:

hihihi

[extra]
  1. 00:00:412 (1,2) - i personally think ctrl+g this 2 will be better i like the now pattern. :D
  2. 00:04:509 (5,1) - stack it like this will get better performance imo i had already thought about it. but, i think this is good the see :>
  3. 00:07:436 slider end at such a strong beat here is not recommended for a extra diff, lets try this? good :)
  4. 00:41:680 (2,4) - do ctrl+g to each slider? i don't want to change this symmetry :(
  5. 01:03:631 (1,2) - is that too far? i cant catch this 10/10, i think this is too far even this is a diff for pros, maybe try this i need more opinions about this.
  6. 01:04:802 (1,2,3,4) - same with these but i am not sure this time ;w;w;w;w; ;w;


[hard]
  1. 00:14:899 (2) - remove this note and try this?
  2. 00:19:582 (2) - remove this note and and move 3 to x316 y240?
  3. 00:44:607 (4) - move to x456 y268? now is too close well... sorry, i think now is better.




[normal]
  1. 01:05:972 (1,2) - because ar is so low for this dtff, overlap seems to be more considered, try this to avoid overlap? umm... i'll try it a little more thought :>
really nice mapset as your 1st map for rank(and with over 40 graveyarded maps lol) , give you a star~~~good luck!
not mentioned is fixed. thanks for take the my request and star~ :)
Ozato Fumika
아니 언제 랭크하나요 ㅁㅊ
Topic Starter
Frobe

No Dap wrote:

아니 언제 랭크하나요 ㅁㅊ
ㅜㅜ
Len
ㅎㅇㅎㅇ



Extra:

00:00:558 (2,3) - 컨G?

00:08:460 (2,3) - 이것도 ㅋㅋ

00:08:899 (2) - 이건 좀 멀리 떨어뜨려도 상관없을거같은데 376 264정도

00:44:021 (2) - 이것도 떨어뜨리는것도?? 204 368정도

00:46:070 (1,2,3) - 왜 이렇게안함


01:04:509 (4) - 컨G가 흐름 더 좋아보임..


Hard:

00:06:704 (2) - 하고 00:07:143 (3,1) - 일부러 스택안함?


Normal:

01:05:972 (1,2) - 이거 위험해보임 차라리 01:05:972 (1) - 를 1/1슬라로 바꾸는것도..



nofix
Topic Starter
Frobe

Fast wrote:

ㅎㅇㅎㅇ



Extra:

00:00:558 (2,3) - 컨G? 일부러 둿슴 ㅋ

00:08:460 (2,3) - 이것도 ㅋㅋ 그건 갑자기 방향 꺾는거라 냅두는게 나을듯

00:08:899 (2) - 이건 좀 멀리 떨어뜨려도 상관없을거같은데 376 264정도 음 그것도 괜찮긴 한데 이전 노트랑 스택땜시 냅둠

00:44:021 (2) - 이것도 떨어뜨리는것도?? 204 368정도 이건 걍 내 취향ㅋ

00:46:070 (1,2,3) - 왜 이렇게안함 1,2번 노트만 1/2 슬라 둠


01:04:509 (4) - 컨G가 흐름 더 좋아보임.. 그르네


Hard:

00:06:704 (2) - 하고 00:07:143 (3,1) - 일부러 스택안함? ㅇㅇ 그냥 스택하면 플레이 할때 모습이 좀 이상한듯


Normal:

01:05:972 (1,2) - 이거 위험해보임 차라리 01:05:972 (1) - 를 1/1슬라로 바꾸는것도.. 오 좋네



nofix ??
굿
Ozato Fumika
삭제함

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General
  1. 비디오 오프셋 120으로 바꿔주세영. 안맞음
Easy
  1. 00:01:875 (2) - 거리 1.0으로 맞춰주세요.
  2. 00:29:094 (2) - 박자가 어떤 음에 맞춰서 따라간건지 파악이 안되네요. 이런식으로 두시는건 어떤가요? 보컬에 최대한 맞춰서 박자 짜봤습니다.
  3. 00:48:704 (1) - 잘 못 된 박자입니다. 실제로 헤이~ 하는 부분은 00:49:216 이쪽부터 시작됨.
  4. 00:51:338 (1) - 대부분 보컬 따라가신거 같은데, 빨간틱까지 줄이는게 좀 더 보컬과 맞습니다.
  5. 01:26:607 (1) - 기타의 실제 끝 지점은 01:27:704 이쪽입니다.
Normal
  1. 1/2 리핏이 2번 이상 들어간 슬라이더들이 상당히 많은데요. 뉴비 플레이어들에겐 친숙하지 않은 패턴이므로 왕복을 없애고 끊어서 두시는게 좋을것 같습니다.
  2. 00:11:094 (4) - 거리 1.0으로 맞춰주세요.
  3. 00:38:168 (2) - 스택이 어울리는 부분도 아니고 굳이 스택 할 필요도 없다고 생각합니다. 마찬가지의 이유로 뉴비플레이어에겐 독약인 패턴.
  4. 00:48:997 (2) - 이지랑 같은 이유입니다.
  5. 01:02:753 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 거리 맞춰주세요.
  6. 01:12:997 (1,2) - 디스턴스의 차이가 좀 큽니다만 플레이에는 이상이 없어보이네요. 하지만 저는 거리 1.0을 추천드립니다.
  7. 01:16:802 (2) - 노말치고는 변속의 폭이 크므로 가속의 시작을 여기서부터 하시는게 플레이 하기에는 더 많이 자연스러울 것 같습니다. 노래랑도 훨씬 어울리구요.
  8. 01:19:290 (4,5) - 지속적으로 누르는 구간이 길어서 별로 좋은 패턴은 아니네요. 이런 박자는 어떠신가요?
  9. 01:26:607 (1) - 이지랑 같은 이유입니다.
Hard
  1. 00:17:826 - 서클 하나 넣으시죠? 다운비트 아니고 보컬이 없는거도 아닌데 빼는거 좀 많이 어색함.
  2. 00:37:436 (7) - 보통 이런거 박자를 착각하기 쉬우니까 앞에 3타넣고 1/4 2번 리핏 때리는 전형적인 패턴을 추천함.
  3. 00:44:899 - 볼륨이 줄어들만한 부분은 아닌거같아요.
  4. 00:49:290 (3) - 이지랑 같은 이유입니다.
  5. 01:02:314 (3,4) - 서로 리듬 바꾸는걸 강력추천. 무슨 박자를 따라가는지 모르겠어요. 보컬을 따라가는게 현명한 선택일꺼라 믿습니다.
  6. 01:26:753 (1) - 이지랑 같은 이유입니다.
No Dap's Insane
  1. 00:26:168 - 피니시 빠진거가타
  2. 00:45:777 (1,2,1) - 플레이하기에 정말 불편함. 이런건 어떰? 훨씬 낫거든? 니가 직접 플레이해바 ㅁㅊ
  3. 01:16:802 - S:C6 박수소리 진짜 어색함. S:C1 클랩이 훨씬 더 어울림.
Extra
  1. 00:09:558 - 샘플셋 소프트같은거로 바꾸셔야할듯. 드럼같은거 안들려요.
  2. 00:37:509 - 마찬가지의 이유. 드럼같은거 안들림.
  3. 00:49:290 (5) - 이지랑 같은 이유입니다.
  4. 01:05:972 - 무쓸모 타이밍. 00:58:948 - 이쪽에서 볼륨 똑같음
  5. 01:26:607 (1) - 이지랑 같은 이유입니다.
준비 다 되면 다시 불러요.
Ozato Fumika
2번쨰꺼 나ㅣㄴ 괜찮은거 같아

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160,236,77972,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,152,78119,2,0,B|120:108|120:184|16:136,1,162,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,68,78558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,72,78704,6,0,B|312:80|312:80|364:68|364:68|424:76,1,162,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,172,79143,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,264,79290,2,0,B|352:256|352:256|300:268|300:268|240:260,1,162,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,152,79729,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,280,79875,6,0,P|123:243|118:203,1,81,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
182,75,80168,2,0,P|198:111|204:152,1,81,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,104,80460,2,0,P|52:96|11:95,1,81,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,200,80753,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,104,80899,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,200,81046,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,176,81192,6,0,P|203:168|243:174,1,81,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,312,81485,2,0,P|47:306|8:284,1,81,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,252,81777,2,0,B|252:240|284:256|284:256|316:232|372:228,1,162,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,308,82216,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,308,82290,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,308,82363,6,0,P|459:268|463:227,1,81,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,124,82655,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,44,82802,2,0,P|284:120|188:112,1,162,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,80,83241,1,8,0:0:0:0:
79,220,83387,6,0,P|160:214|241:218,1,162,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,296,83826,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,144,83972,2,0,P|380:184|374:224,1,81,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,96,84265,2,0,P|284:71|320:52,1,81,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,84558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,172,84704,5,2,0:0:0:0:
175,123,84851,2,0,P|136:116|95:118,1,81,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,256,85143,5,2,0:0:0:0:
252,96,85290,2,0,P|224:52|184:24,1,81,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,216,85582,5,10,0:0:0:0:
331,96,85729,2,0,P|371:89|412:90,1,81,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,200,86021,5,2,0:0:0:0:
352,296,86168,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86314,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86607,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86680,12,0,87704,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Frobe

scanter wrote:

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General
  1. 비디오 오프셋 120으로 바꿔주세영. 안맞음
Easy
  1. 00:01:875 (2) - 거리 1.0으로 맞춰주세요.
  2. 00:29:094 (2) - 박자가 어떤 음에 맞춰서 따라간건지 파악이 안되네요. 이런식으로 두시는건 어떤가요? 보컬에 최대한 맞춰서 박자 짜봤습니다. 지적 들어오면 고치려 했는데 이제 받았네여... ㅎ 제안 하신 박자 대신 뒷부분 노트들의 박자와 일치시켰어여
  3. 00:48:704 (1) - 잘 못 된 박자입니다. 실제로 헤이~ 하는 부분은 00:49:216 이쪽부터 시작됨.
  4. 00:51:338 (1) - 대부분 보컬 따라가신거 같은데, 빨간틱까지 줄이는게 좀 더 보컬과 맞습니다. 음... 빨간선에서 끝내면 박자가 먼가 허전한 느낌이 드네여 이 부분은 패스
  5. 01:26:607 (1) - 기타의 실제 끝 지점은 01:27:704 이쪽입니다.
Normal
  1. 1/2 리핏이 2번 이상 들어간 슬라이더들이 상당히 많은데요. 뉴비 플레이어들에겐 친숙하지 않은 패턴이므로 왕복을 없애고 끊어서 두시는게 좋을것 같습니다.
  2. 00:11:094 (4) - 거리 1.0으로 맞춰주세요.
  3. 00:38:168 (2) - 스택이 어울리는 부분도 아니고 굳이 스택 할 필요도 없다고 생각합니다. 마찬가지의 이유로 뉴비플레이어에겐 독약인 패턴.
  4. 00:48:997 (2) - 이지랑 같은 이유입니다.
  5. 01:02:753 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 거리 맞춰주세요. ㅠㅠ 고치느라 힘들어씀 고치고나서 지금 0.98인데 더 줄이고 싶진 안아여
  6. 01:12:997 (1,2) - 디스턴스의 차이가 좀 큽니다만 플레이에는 이상이 없어보이네요. 하지만 저는 거리 1.0을 추천드립니다. 이 부분은 일부러 둔거고... 플레이에 무리 없으니 냅둬도 갠찬을거 가틈
  7. 01:16:802 (2) - 노말치고는 변속의 폭이 크므로 가속의 시작을 여기서부터 하시는게 플레이 하기에는 더 많이 자연스러울 것 같습니다. 노래랑도 훨씬 어울리구요.
  8. 01:19:290 (4,5) - 지속적으로 누르는 구간이 길어서 별로 좋은 패턴은 아니네요. 이런 박자는 어떠신가요?
  9. 01:26:607 (1) - 이지랑 같은 이유입니다.
Hard
  1. 00:17:826 - 서클 하나 넣으시죠? 다운비트 아니고 보컬이 없는거도 아닌데 빼는거 좀 많이 어색함.
  2. 00:37:436 (7) - 보통 이런거 박자를 착각하기 쉬우니까 앞에 3타넣고 1/4 2번 리핏 때리는 전형적인 패턴을 추천함.
  3. 00:44:899 - 볼륨이 줄어들만한 부분은 아닌거같아요. 30퍼에서 40퍼로 올리긴 했는데 다른 부분과 똑같이 50퍼 하기엔 갠적으로 노말 힛사가 노래에 어울리지 않고 지나치게 돋보인다고 느껴지네여
  4. 00:49:290 (3) - 이지랑 같은 이유입니다.
  5. 01:02:314 (3,4) - 서로 리듬 바꾸는걸 강력추천. 무슨 박자를 따라가는지 모르겠어요. 보컬을 따라가는게 현명한 선택일꺼라 믿습니다.
  6. 01:26:753 (1) - 이지랑 같은 이유입니다.
Extra
  1. 00:09:558 - 샘플셋 소프트같은거로 바꾸셔야할듯. 드럼같은거 안들려요.]
  2. 00:37:509 - 마찬가지의 이유. 드럼같은거 안들림.
  3. 00:49:290 (5) - 이지랑 같은 이유입니다.
  4. 01:05:972 - 무쓸모 타이밍. 00:58:948 - 이쪽에서 볼륨 똑같음
  5. 01:26:607 (1) - 이지랑 같은 이유입니다.
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scanter
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바카리빙의!
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