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Icing_wind
Mod
[General]

D (Big don)
d (don)
K (Big kat)
k (kat)

[Kantan]

00:22:195 (21) - d

00:33:837 (37) - K

00:42:792 (50,51,52) - k

01:01:598 (75) - k

01:24:882 (108) - k

[Hanjamon's Futsuu]

00:12:345 (11) - d

00:15:031 (15) - d

00:16:822 (17) - k

01:14:583 (1,1) - kd

[Muzukashii]

00:23:763 (43) - d

00:24:434 (45,46,47,1,2,3) - kddkkd

00:47:494 (90) - k

[Oni]

00:29:360 (81,82,83,84,85) - dkddk

01:17:494 (313,314,315,316,317) - ddkdk

[Nardo's Oni]
nardo姐姐=w= gonbare

00:25:554 (101,109) - → https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2394352
棒棒棒。nardo姐求个mu
good luck :D
Hanjamon

rew0825 wrote:

Hi from my mod request

[ Hanjamon's Futsuu]
  1. 00:14:136 (13,14) - ctrl+g changed
  2. 01:09:210 (18) - k changed
  3. 01:10:554 (21) - d no change here, maybe a bit hard k d k d kd
  4. 01:11:225 (23) - k nah, is okay for me and fits well with kd too
  5. 01:16:822 (35) - D and 01:17:270 (36) - k sounds good with the actual pattern

Good luck :) :) :)

H i M E wrote:

Hi~mod req by forums pm :3

Hanjamon's Futsuu
00:23:763 - add d? no, i want more easier this
00:30:479 (50) - move 00:30:031 - ? is okay with the actual pattern
00:38:091 - add d? same as before, more easier
01:10:554 (21) - move 01:10:330 - ? breaks my consistency.. also, too many doublets
01:15:927 - add d? break

Good Luck :3 No changes here, sorry :c

Icing_wind wrote:

Mod
[General]

D (Big don)
d (don)
K (Big kat)
k (kat)

[Hanjamon's Futsuu]

00:12:345 (11) - d nop, rhythm change

00:15:031 (15) - d ^

00:16:822 (17) - k changed, fits good with the next pattern

01:14:583 (1,1) - kd is okay for me with kk, and more easier
good luck :D
Thanks to all for the mods ^^

Update ---> http://puu.sh/dLg8O/87deec59b5.rar
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Icing_wind wrote:

Mod
[General]

D (Big don)
d (don)
K (Big kat)
k (kat)

[Kantan]

00:22:195 (21) - d keep

00:33:837 (37) - K keep

00:42:792 (50,51,52) - k keep

01:01:598 (75) - k fixed

01:24:882 (108) - k keep

[Hanjamon's Futsuu]

00:12:345 (11) - d

00:15:031 (15) - d

00:16:822 (17) - k

01:14:583 (1,1) - kd

[Muzukashii]

00:23:763 (43) - d fixed

00:24:434 (45,46,47,1,2,3) - kddkkd changed kdkkdd

00:47:494 (90) - k fixed

[Oni]

00:29:360 (81,82,83,84,85) - dkddk changed dkkdd

01:17:494 (313,314,315,316,317) - ddkdk keep

[Nardo's Oni]
nardo姐姐=w= gonbare

00:25:554 (101,109) - → https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2394352
棒棒棒。nardo姐求个mu
good luck :D
Thank you mod :)
Nardoxyribonucleic

Icing_wind wrote:

Mod
[General]

D (Big don)
d (don)
K (Big kat)
k (kat)

[Nardo's Oni]
nardo姐姐=w= gonbare

00:25:554 (101,109) - → https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2394352 The current pattern could follow both the snare at 00:26:225 (106) - and the constant vocal pitch at 00:26:449 (107,108,109) - nicely imo.
棒棒棒。nardo姐求个mu 可以啊~
good luck :D
Thanks for your mod and comment~ :)
neonat
From PM, some feedback~

Kantan

00:26:673 (27,28) - 00:26:673 (27) is the lowest point in pitch here and 00:27:569 (28) the highest in the vocals, I think it should be d k instead of k d
01:14:583 (93) - you used some 1/2 or 1.5 beats before here, I think it will still be simple enough. I don't think this note fits well to the music, it feels out of place, this note would be better if shifted to 01:14:807 with the cymbals there in the music, this current note is just being too awkward right now
01:23:986 (107) - finish?

Hanjamon's Futsuu

00:50:628 - really empty, should have d here
00:56:001 - ^
01:02:046 (2) - I feel you should remove this one, with a longer break/pause, there is more anticipation for the big note at 01:02:494 (3) - allowing it to have a greater effect, and in turn allowing for a grander entrance into the chorus
01:06:076 (11,12,13,14,15) - instead of d k d kk, I think k d k dk would be nicely fitting
01:23:986 (50) - finish for being the first note in the last phrase in the song

Muzukashii

00:26:897 (54) - change to d
00:45:031 (128) - maybe change to k, goes along with the guitar

Oni

00:42:792 (153,154,155,156,157) - kdkkd instead of kddkk, then change 00:43:464 (158) to k
01:06:748 (265) - change to k
01:06:972 (266) - change to d, because the vocal pitch here slurs a bit, it goes up and then down again
01:10:106 (282) - change to k

Nardo's Oni

00:30:031 (128,129,130) - dkd instead of ddd, then 00:30:479 (131,132) - k d instead of d k, it's a more fitting rhythm imo


Good Luck
Topic Starter
Charlotte

neonat wrote:

From PM, some feedback~

Kantan

00:26:673 (27,28) - 00:26:673 (27) is the lowest point in pitch here and 00:27:569 (28) the highest in the vocals, I think it should be d k instead of k d fixed
01:14:583 (93) - you used some 1/2 or 1.5 beats before here, I think it will still be simple enough. I don't think this note fits well to the music, it feels out of place, this note would be better if shifted to 01:14:807 with the cymbals there in the music, this current note is just being too awkward right nowfixed
01:23:986 (107) - finish? fixed

Hanjamon's Futsuu

00:50:628 - really empty, should have d here
00:56:001 - ^
01:02:046 (2) - I feel you should remove this one, with a longer break/pause, there is more anticipation for the big note at 01:02:494 (3) - allowing it to have a greater effect, and in turn allowing for a grander entrance into the chorus
01:06:076 (11,12,13,14,15) - instead of d k d kk, I think k d k dk would be nicely fitting
01:23:986 (50) - finish for being the first note in the last phrase in the song

Muzukashii

00:26:897 (54) - change to d fixed
00:45:031 (128) - maybe change to k, goes along with the guitar fixed

Oni

00:42:792 (153,154,155,156,157) - kdkkd instead of kddkk, then change 00:43:464 (158) to k fixed
01:06:748 (265) - change to k fixed
01:06:972 (266) - change to d, because the vocal pitch here slurs a bit, it goes up and then down again fixed
01:10:106 (282) - change to k fixed

Nardo's Oni

00:30:031 (128,129,130) - dkd instead of ddd, then 00:30:479 (131,132) - k d instead of d k, it's a more fitting rhythm imo


Good Luck
Thank you mod :)
peggaso
Hi, mod request via mp

[Kantan]
00:54:210 (66) - Move to 00:53:986 - to make it more playable
00:54:882 - Add k to map this part
01:23:986 (108) - Make it k

[Futsuu]
Lo veo bien

[Muzukashii]
00:19:509 (25) - Not necessary
00:23:203 (40) - ^
00:23:986 (43) - Change to k

[Oni]
00:07:979 (7) - k

[Nardo's oni]
Looks good
Nardoxyribonucleic

neonat wrote:

From PM, some feedback~

Nardo's Oni

00:30:031 (128,129,130) - dkd instead of ddd, then 00:30:479 (131,132) - k d instead of d k, it's a more fitting rhythm imo ddd would be better since the vocal pitch is constant. Also, d k at 00:30:479 (131,132) - could fit the snare there.

Good Luck
Thanks for your mod~ :)

peggaso wrote:

Hi, mod request via mp

[Nardo's oni]
Looks good Nice to hear that~
kouzuki_karen
Hi from mod queue

Kantan

00:21:300 (20) - d?
00:28:464 (29,30,31) - ctrl+g?
01:16:822 (97) - K? for pitch
01:18:613 (99) - k? same reason

Hanjamon's Futsuu

00:14:583 (14) - k? it matches guitar better.
00:32:942 (55) - why is a finisher here? I don't see any need for it.
01:23:763 (50) - add d?
01:23:986 (51) - k or K?

Muzukashi

00:55:330 (162) - why do you put finisher here? suggest remove.
01:05:404 (196) - d?
01:14:248 (232) - suggest move to 01:14:024 (231) - because it plays better there.

Oni

00:13:241 (6,7,8,9,10) - How about http://puu.sh/dMfAE/9b7a9bda51.jpg?
00:21:412 (41) - k? for vocal
00:35:964 (118) - delete?
00:36:300 (119) - k? for vocal
00:37:419 (123,124,125,126,127) - ddddk?

Nardo's Oni

nothing really to point out.

Good map and song :3

Good luck.
Topic Starter
Charlotte

peggaso wrote:

Hi, mod request via mp

[Kantan]
00:54:210 (66) - Move to 00:53:986 - to make it more playable keep
00:54:882 - Add k to map this part hmm...keep now
01:23:986 (108) - Make it k keep

[Futsuu]
Lo veo bien

[Muzukashii]
00:19:509 (25) - Not necessary keep
00:23:203 (40) - ^ ^
00:23:986 (43) - Change to k fixed

[Oni]
00:07:979 (7) - k keep

[Nardo's oni]
Looks good
Thank you mod :)
Topic Starter
Charlotte

mrdumpling64 wrote:

Hi from mod queue

Kantan

00:21:300 (20) - d? fixed
00:28:464 (29,30,31) - ctrl+g? changed ddk
01:16:822 (97) - K? for pitch keep
01:18:613 (99) - k? same reason fixed

Hanjamon's Futsuu

00:14:583 (14) - k? it matches guitar better.
00:32:942 (55) - why is a finisher here? I don't see any need for it.
01:23:763 (50) - add d?
01:23:986 (51) - k or K?

Muzukashi

00:55:330 (162) - why do you put finisher here? suggest remove. fixed
01:05:404 (196) - d? fixed
01:14:248 (232) - suggest move to 01:14:024 (231) - because it plays better there. keep

Oni

00:13:241 (6,7,8,9,10) - How about http://puu.sh/dMfAE/9b7a9bda51.jpg? keep
00:21:412 (41) - k? for vocal fixed
00:35:964 (118) - delete? fixed
00:36:300 (119) - k? for vocal keep
00:37:419 (123,124,125,126,127) - ddddk? keep

Nardo's Oni

nothing really to point out.

Good map and song :3

Good luck.
Thank you mod :)
Hanjamon

neonat wrote:

From PM, some feedback~


Hanjamon's Futsuu

00:50:628 - really empty, should have d here the diff need breaks :c
00:56:001 - ^ ^
01:02:046 (2) - I feel you should remove this one, with a longer break/pause, there is more anticipation for the big note at 01:02:494 (3) - allowing it to have a greater effect, and in turn allowing for a grander entrance into the chorus i'll think about this, is not a bad idea
01:06:076 (11,12,13,14,15) - instead of d k d kk, I think k d k dk would be nicely fitting i don't want to break the consistency >.<
01:23:986 (50) - finish for being the first note in the last phrase in the song done, sounds good :3


Good Luck

mrdumpling64 wrote:

Hi from mod queue

Hanjamon's Futsuu

00:14:583 (14) - k? it matches guitar better. is okay with the actual pattern, no change for now
00:32:942 (55) - why is a finisher here? I don't see any need for it. listen carefully
01:23:763 (50) - add d? sounds weird...
01:23:986 (51) - k or K? is D now

Good map and song :3

Good luck.

Thanks for the mods :3


Update ---> http://puu.sh/dNFGe/dd15a597e7.rar
K-2
Hi~
From PM

Kantan
01:14:807 (93) - k?
01:15:479 (94,95,96) - d k k


Muzukashii
00:47:270 (136,137,138) - k d k
01:05:852 (198) - k?
01:15:479 (235,236,237) - d k k
01:16:822 (238) - K?
01:26:225 (275,276,277,278) - d d k k

Oni
00:33:501にkを追加すると、いかがでしょうか
01:08:763と01:10:554にdkdがあればいいと思います.けどプレイヤーに休む時間がないですね.....
01:15:479 (308,309,310) - d k k
01:26:225 (359,360,361,362) - d d k k

Nardo's Oni
01:06:076 (307) - how about moving to 01:06:300?
01:20:404 (387) - ^


ランクさせることができるように頑張ってね!
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Lunaris Filia wrote:

Hi~
From PM

Kantan
01:14:807 (93) - k? change to K
01:15:479 (94,95,96) - d k k keep


Muzukashii
00:47:270 (136,137,138) - k d k change to k d d
01:05:852 (198) - k? fixed
01:15:479 (235,236,237) - d k k keep
01:16:822 (238) - K? fixed
01:26:225 (275,276,277,278) - d d k k keep

Oni
00:33:501にkを追加すると、いかがでしょうか keep
01:08:763と01:10:554にdkdがあればいいと思います.けどプレイヤーに休む時間がないですね..... keep
01:15:479 (308,309,310) - d k k keep
01:26:225 (359,360,361,362) - d d k k keep

Nardo's Oni
01:06:076 (307) - how about moving to 01:06:300?
01:20:404 (387) - ^


ランクさせることができるように頑張ってね! ありがとう=3=/
Thank you mod :)
Nardoxyribonucleic

mrdumpling64 wrote:

Hi from mod queue

Nardo's Oni

nothing really to point out.

Good map and song :3

Good luck.
Thanks for your opinion~ :)

Lunaris Filia wrote:

Hi~
From PM

Nardo's Oni
01:06:076 (307) - how about moving to 01:06:300? I followed the drum kick there.
01:20:404 (387) - ^ ^


ランクさせることができるように頑張ってね!
Thanks for your mod~ :)
ts8zs
[Nardo's Oni]
00:19:061 (66,67,68) - kkk
00:51:524 (245,246,247) - dkd
01:05:516 (304) - move to 01:05:069 -
01:23:427 - del
01:23:539 (406,407,408) - k k D
[Oni]
00:05:852 (5) - del or del 6
00:09:434 (5) - del or del 6
00:13:576 (9) - move to 00:13:128 -
00:28:128 - d
00:42:904 (153) - del
00:45:815 (171) - del
[Muzu]
01:25:106 (271) - del
[Hanjamon's Futsuu]
01:07:419 (14,15,16,17) - kd kk
[Kantan]
00:33:837 - copy 00:19:509 -
01:27:345 (1) - start at 01:27:121 -
Nardoxyribonucleic

ts8zs wrote:

[Nardo's Oni]
00:19:061 (66,67,68) - kkk 00:19:285 (68) - does not have the snare sound that 00:19:061 (66,67) - possess.
00:51:524 (245,246,247) - dkd fixed
01:05:516 (304) - move to 01:05:069 - I prefer keeping the current pattern since it does not sound bad.
01:23:427 - del I think a 7-plet could result in a better impact in the 2nd part of the kiai.
01:23:539 (406,407,408) - k k D k d K would be better since the vocal at 01:23:986 (408) - is really high-pitched.
Thanks for your mod~ :)

Update: http://puu.sh/dQPmF.rar
eeezzzeee
Hi, from pm mod request!

[Kantan]
00:38:315 (43,44,45,46,47,48) - change (43) and (46) to k
- i think this sounds more interesting

[Hanjamon's Futsuu]
00:50:628 - add a d here
00:56:001 - add a d here
- did you leave these out on purpose?
01:16:822 (35) - change to big D
- every other line in the kiai stars with a d
- maybe also change the next note to k to take same pattern as 01:02:494 (3,4,5) -

[Muzukashii]
00:12:569 (2,3) - ctrl + g
- i feel like there needs to be a k on 00:12:792
00:31:822 (75) - delete
00:32:718 (78,79,80) - change to kkk
- i think this needs a k sound at 00:32:942
01:05:404 (195) - delete
01:19:733 (249) - delete

[Oni]
Good! Nothing

[Nardo's Oni]
00:32:830 - 00:47:942 - i think there should be some breaks here see below
SPOILER
- you can try to fix the rest of it to be like 00:22:643 (87,88) -
00:26:449 (107,108) - delete
00:37:195 (168,169) - delete
00:40:778 (189,190) - delete

That's all! Sorry for being a little late, and good luck! :)
Topic Starter
Charlotte

ts8zs wrote:

[Nardo's Oni]
00:19:061 (66,67,68) - kkk
00:51:524 (245,246,247) - dkd
01:05:516 (304) - move to 01:05:069 -
01:23:427 - del
01:23:539 (406,407,408) - k k D
[Oni]
00:05:852 (5) - del or del 6 keep
00:09:434 (5) - del or del 6 ^
00:13:576 (9) - move to 00:13:128 - fixed
00:28:128 - d fixed
00:42:904 (153) - del fixed
00:45:815 (171) - del keep
[Muzu]
01:25:106 (271) - del hmmm...keep now
[Hanjamon's Futsuu]
01:07:419 (14,15,16,17) - kd kk
[Kantan]
00:33:837 - copy 00:19:509 - fixed
01:27:345 (1) - start at 01:27:121 - hmmm...keep now
Thank you mod :)
Topic Starter
Charlotte

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi, from pm mod request!

[Kantan]
00:38:315 (43,44,45,46,47,48) - change (43) and (46) to k fixed
- i think this sounds more interesting

[Hanjamon's Futsuu]
00:50:628 - add a d here
00:56:001 - add a d here
- did you leave these out on purpose?
01:16:822 (35) - change to big D
- every other line in the kiai stars with a d
- maybe also change the next note to k to take same pattern as 01:02:494 (3,4,5) -

[Muzukashii]
00:12:569 (2,3) - ctrl + g fixed
- i feel like there needs to be a k on 00:12:792
00:31:822 (75) - delete 76 delete
00:32:718 (78,79,80) - change to kkk fixed
- i think this needs a k sound at 00:32:942
01:05:404 (195) - delete fixed
01:19:733 (249) - delete fixed

[Oni]
Good! Nothing

[Nardo's Oni]
00:32:830 - 00:47:942 - i think there should be some breaks here see below
SPOILER
- you can try to fix the rest of it to be like 00:22:643 (87,88) -
00:26:449 (107,108) - delete
00:37:195 (168,169) - delete
00:40:778 (189,190) - delete

That's all! Sorry for being a little late, and good luck! :)
Thank you mod :)
Ilikecheese
All this is personal taste and suggestions, pick what you like and tell me otherwise. good mapset :)

Muzukashii
I was thinking around here 00:28:016 - you can do
00:48:501 (138) - k

Not much else to say. I was kinda surprised that you used more ddd than kkk but it's all good~
Oni
00:46:598 (175) - K finisher?
00:47:718 (181,182,183) - kkk
00:48:501 (185) - k
00:49:285 (187,188) - ctrl+g
00:49:957 (189,190) - ^
01:08:875 - add k
01:08:986 - add d
01:09:210 - chanage to k
01:10:666 - add k
01:10:778 - add d
01:15:255 - could've done so much more here like >
now I think i'll leave since most of this will probably not be to your liking D:

Nardo's Oni
00:46:598 (224) - finisher?

umm..... yea good map, lol
Nardoxyribonucleic

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi, from pm mod request!

[Nardo's Oni]
00:32:830 - 00:47:942 - i think there should be some breaks here see below
SPOILER
- you can try to fix the rest of it to be like 00:22:643 (87,88) -
00:26:449 (107,108) - delete I followed the vocal there.
00:37:195 (168,169) - delete ^
00:40:778 (189,190) - delete ^

That's all! Sorry for being a little late, and good luck! :)
Thanks for your mod~ :)

Ilikecheese wrote:

All this is personal taste and suggestions, pick what you like and tell me otherwise. good mapset :)

Nardo's Oni
00:46:598 (224) - finisher? Remain unchanged since the cymbal here is weaker than 00:48:166 -

umm..... yea good map, lol
Thanks for the mod and comment~ :)
Hanjamon

ts8zs wrote:

[Hanjamon's Futsuu]
01:07:419 (14,15,16,17) - kd kk changed :3

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi, from pm mod request!

[Hanjamon's Futsuu]
00:50:628 - add a d here break..
00:56:001 - add a d here ^
- did you leave these out on purpose?
01:16:822 (35) - change to big D fits good with K
- every other line in the kiai stars with a d
- maybe also change the next note to k to take same pattern as 01:02:494 (3,4,5) - is actually fine..

That's all! Sorry for being a little late, and good luck! :)
Thanks for the mods :3

Update ---> http://puu.sh/dTaUR/714fb7671b.rar
Aldwych
nyan!
From sandwych's moddin queue, M4M as requested :

[General]

A bit same thing as my previous mod, difference between kantan -> futsuu and futsuu -> Muzukashii is a bit far.
K -> F : 60 objects , 0,5 stars
F -> M : 140 objets, 0,6 stars.

At least the star rating is quite close, so adding objects is not necessary, but just consider this could be good.

Also i didn't checked all the diff, but for the first part, you should increase the volume to 90% dons and kats are really shy. :<

[Kantan]

00:18:613 : Where's the finish? :'(
00:31:151 : The doublet before is kinda weird, maybe add d here in order to delete the void and the doublet created?
00:52:195 : You should delete this one, since the previous and next pattern are dk.
01:00:255 : I agree for this doublets, but with the previouses patterns, you sue 3/2 Distance, and here 1/1 which is confusing for beginers, so i advise you to delete this note.

[Hankamon's Futsuu]

00:48:501 : Here i've some trouble, because your next d, is really weir alone, adding a k here will make this next d more reason to exist, but i'm also aware that it's 3/4 distance which is unappropriate on a futsuu diff, or maybe delete this d because after it's really void in terms of objects (meaning 00:50:181).
00:49:285 : But here i found it nice to add a d, it makes more sense for the next k to be here + further you did the same (meaning dk combo).
00:56:001 : Add a d in order to follow the guittar and the previous patterns?
00:56:449 : Also add a d like previous pattern? Plus battery and vocals are here.
00:58:912 : Interesting you're the only one to use a slider here.
01:15:927 : The void here is really ugly, there's missing a k here.
01:17:718 : I would move it to 01:17:494, you will follow your main pattern (meaning dd, kd, kk etc...) on the kiai part, also you create the same distane between the 3 similar patterns after, and you follow lyrics.
01:21:300 : Same, 1/2 before.

Imo a really dislike the part at 00:48:166 because the 3/2 distance is strange to follow moreover when there's battery, vocals and guitar which are both expressive, so imo i consider this part as hard to map for a futsuu, maybe more mods here could be interesting, but i really like your doublets on the kiai.

[Muzukashii]

00:18:501 : Triplet or finish hitsound on 00:18:613 ? Choose but both are good, but you didnt use twice triplets on a pattern from 00:05:180 to 00:19:509 . :D
00:28:016 : Imo, this combo is a bit long, maybe delete a note in order to create a break?
00:35:964 : How about adding a d here? Let's try this.
00:48:501 : This one diserves a k.
01:18:613 : Even if there's battry here, it's ugly to hear, i advise you to move it 1/2 before since you created your pattern with the vocals.

[Oniiii-chan]

00:16:934 : I found the whole combo a bit complex for the beginning part, how about deleting this one, more over when it's not the end of the first part.
Nothing more found here.

[Nardo's Oni]

Interesting the fact you didn't have the same style of map for this map. :D

00:23:091 : After this you didn't use any breaks (so ye we have 3/4 yeye...), maybe delet some in order to have short breaks?

Also i didn't find something wrong, i really enjoyed the 3/4 spacing on the first part.

Gl hf for rank! :D
Nardoxyribonucleic

Aldwych wrote:

nyan!
From sandwych's moddin queue, M4M as requested :

[Nardo's Oni]

Interesting the fact you didn't have the same style of map for this map. :D In fact I still followed the vocal mostly, but this time I maintained a stricter snare consistency here.

00:23:091 : After this you didn't use any breaks (so ye we have 3/4 yeye...), maybe delet some in order to have short breaks? I have considered this before. I didn't place breaks at places like 00:37:195 - because of the presence of vocal.

Also i didn't find something wrong, i really enjoyed the 3/4 spacing on the first part.

Gl hf for rank! :D
Thanks for your mod~ :)
Gemu-
Hi :) From Game's Queue

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)


[Kantan]

00:32:942 - Change to k, To make a kd k dk
01:17:718 - Change to d, I thing it's more convenient.


[Hanjamon's Futsuu]

00:50:628 - Agregar una d, es más conveniente.
00:56:001 - Al igual que antes, agregar una d.
01:15:255 - Agrega una d, para hacer un kk dk


[Muzukashii]

00:47:718 - I think it would be better a k.


[Oni]

00:30:703 - Change to k? rhythm ago


[Nardo's Oni]

00:31:934 - Change to k? I think it's better, rhythm ago


I hope what my mod has helped you :oops: , good luck :)
Nardoxyribonucleic

game rock wrote:

Hi :) From Game's Queue

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[Nardo's Oni]

00:31:934 - Change to k? I think it's better, rhythm ago As the guitar there has a constant pitch, it'd be better to use ddd.


I hope what my mod has helped you :oops: , good luck :)
Thanks for your mod~ :)
KUURAhoshi
Special request via PM ^^
[General]
  1. MP3 Title “Nanairo Biyori (TV Size)”, beatmap title “Nanairo Biyori (TV Ver.)”. After searching on Goog*e, and checking the Ranked beatmap.. “TV Ver.” Is correct
  2. I don’t know but.. I think you should remove “Biyori” from the tags, because it’s already on the title imo
[Kantan]
HP -1
00:12:345 (9) – k
Seems fine.
[Hanjamon’s Futsuu]
00:13:240 (12) – d
00:14:136 (13) - ^
00:14:583 (14) – k
00:15:031 (15) – d
00:15:927 (16) – k
00:15:927 (16) – d
00:33:389 (56) - ^
01:07:643 (15) - ^
01:18:389 (39) - ^
[Muzukashii]
00:36:300 (93) – k
00:55:218 – Add d
Good diff..
[Oni]
00:13:352 (8) – Remove
00:16:039 (11) – Better remove this
00:23:427 (51) - ^
00:37:755 (127) - ^
01:08:203 (273) - ^
[Nardo’s Oni]
Nothing ^^

Sorry for this short mod..
GL then~
Arcubin
From my mod Q :D

[General]
  • look good
[Kantan]
00:32:942 (36) - try K the cymbal sound clearer than 00:33:837 (37) -
00:37:419 (42,43) - ctrl+g fit vocal better i think
00:52:195 (63) - delete.. there's nothing you follow here.. if you want keep this, move to 00:52:419 -
01:19:509 (101) - d fit drum better

[Hanja's Futsuu]
00:22:643 - add k
00:26:225 - ^
00:31:598 - ^
2nd part mod is the same as above
00:57:792 (1,1) - i don't mind it owo)/
01:08:315 (16,17) - ctrl+g
01:14:807 (32) - K
01:27:121 (1) - i don't mind it okay...

[Muzukashii]
00:06:972 (1,1,1,1,1) - i don't mind it ;w;
00:28:016 (58) - move to 00:27:792 - and change to d
00:36:076 (92,93) - either one change to k is good, if you change (92) it will follow snare, if (93) will follow vocal
00:55:330 (161) - D
01:24:434 (264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272) - maybe this pattern is too hard for SR 2.60 :3 consider re-map this

i can't mod Oni tho.. ._. sorry
Hanjamon

Aldwych wrote:

nyan!
From sandwych's moddin queue, M4M as requested :

[Hankamon's Futsuu]

00:48:501 : Here i've some trouble, because your next d, is really weir alone, adding a k here will make this next d more reason to exist, but i'm also aware that it's 3/4 distance which is unappropriate on a futsuu diff, or maybe delete this d because after it's really void in terms of objects (meaning 00:50:181). no change here, i never add notes in 1/4 beat in a Futsuu
00:49:285 : But here i found it nice to add a d, it makes more sense for the next k to be here + further you did the same (meaning dk combo). consistency with 00:49:509 -
00:56:001 : Add a d in order to follow the guittar and the previous patterns? break :c
00:56:449 : Also add a d like previous pattern? Plus battery and vocals are here. ^
00:58:912 : Interesting you're the only one to use a slider here. Yeah, i think fits good with the vocals (and remember me to the TnT authentic charts)
01:15:927 : The void here is really ugly, there's missing a k here. this will make the Futsuu more harder due to long pattern
01:17:718 : I would move it to 01:17:494, you will follow your main pattern (meaning dd, kd, kk etc...) on the kiai part, also you create the same distane between the 3 similar patterns after, and you follow lyrics. consistency
01:21:300 : Same, 1/2 before. ^

Imo a really dislike the part at 00:48:166 because the 3/2 distance is strange to follow moreover when there's battery, vocals and guitar which are both expressive, so imo i consider this part as hard to map for a futsuu, maybe more mods here could be interesting, but i really like your doublets on the kiai. I don't see this part bad, is a calm part so i tried to have less notes here and more breaks

Gl hf for rank! :D

game rock wrote:

Hi :) From Game's Queue

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[Hanjamon's Futsuu]

00:50:628 - Agregar una d, es más conveniente. No, hay un break..
00:56:001 - Al igual que antes, agregar una d. ^
01:15:255 - Agrega una d, para hacer un kk dk por el momento lo dejare asi, no quiero aumentar la dificultad


I hope what my mod has helped you :oops: , good luck :)

Kazamastar11 wrote:

Special request via PM ^^

[Hanjamon’s Futsuu]
00:13:240 (12) – d
00:14:136 (13) - ^
00:14:583 (14) – k
00:15:031 (15) – d
00:15:927 (16) – k
00:15:927 (16) – d
00:33:389 (56) - ^
01:07:643 (15) - ^
01:18:389 (39) - ^

I was checking all suggestions, i don't see any reason for accept one of these

Sorry for this short mod..
GL then~

azintairin710 wrote:

From my mod Q :D

[Hanja's Futsuu]
00:22:643 - add k break
00:26:225 - ^ ^
00:31:598 - ^ ^ xD
2nd part mod is the same as above
00:57:792 (1,1) - i don't mind it owo)/
01:08:315 (16,17) - ctrl+g i'm following vocals and at the same time the instrumental
01:14:807 (32) - K no, can be hard for a Futsuu
01:27:121 (1) - i don't mind it okay... wut

i can't mod Oni tho.. ._. sorry
No changes.. sorry
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Ilikecheese wrote:

All this is personal taste and suggestions, pick what you like and tell me otherwise. good mapset :)

Muzukashii
I was thinking around here 00:28:016 - you can do keep
00:48:501 (138) - k fixed

Not much else to say. I was kinda surprised that you used more ddd than kkk but it's all good~
Oni
00:46:598 (175) - K finisher?
00:47:718 (181,182,183) - kkk
00:48:501 (185) - k
00:49:285 (187,188) - ctrl+g
00:49:957 (189,190) - ^
01:08:875 - add k
01:08:986 - add d
01:09:210 - chanage to k
01:10:666 - add k
01:10:778 - add d
01:15:255 - could've done so much more here like >

Almost fixed
now I think i'll leave since most of this will probably not be to your liking D:



Nardo's Oni
00:46:598 (224) - finisher?

umm..... yea good map, lol
Thank you mod :)
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Aldwych wrote:

nyan!
From sandwych's moddin queue, M4M as requested :

[General]

A bit same thing as my previous mod, difference between kantan -> futsuu and futsuu -> Muzukashii is a bit far.
K -> F : 60 objects , 0,5 stars
F -> M : 140 objets, 0,6 stars.

At least the star rating is quite close, so adding objects is not necessary, but just consider this could be good.

Also i didn't checked all the diff, but for the first part, you should increase the volume to 90% dons and kats are really shy. :<

[Kantan]

00:18:613 : Where's the finish? :'(
00:31:151 : The doublet before is kinda weird, maybe add d here in order to delete the void and the doublet created?
00:52:195 : You should delete this one, since the previous and next pattern are dk.
01:00:255 : I agree for this doublets, but with the previouses patterns, you sue 3/2 Distance, and here 1/1 which is confusing for beginers, so i advise you to delete this note.

All fixed

[Hankamon's Futsuu]

00:48:501 : Here i've some trouble, because your next d, is really weir alone, adding a k here will make this next d more reason to exist, but i'm also aware that it's 3/4 distance which is unappropriate on a futsuu diff, or maybe delete this d because after it's really void in terms of objects (meaning 00:50:181).
00:49:285 : But here i found it nice to add a d, it makes more sense for the next k to be here + further you did the same (meaning dk combo).
00:56:001 : Add a d in order to follow the guittar and the previous patterns?
00:56:449 : Also add a d like previous pattern? Plus battery and vocals are here.
00:58:912 : Interesting you're the only one to use a slider here.
01:15:927 : The void here is really ugly, there's missing a k here.
01:17:718 : I would move it to 01:17:494, you will follow your main pattern (meaning dd, kd, kk etc...) on the kiai part, also you create the same distane between the 3 similar patterns after, and you follow lyrics.
01:21:300 : Same, 1/2 before.

Imo a really dislike the part at 00:48:166 because the 3/2 distance is strange to follow moreover when there's battery, vocals and guitar which are both expressive, so imo i consider this part as hard to map for a futsuu, maybe more mods here could be interesting, but i really like your doublets on the kiai.

[Muzukashii]

00:18:501 : Triplet or finish hitsound on 00:18:613 ? Choose but both are good, but you didnt use twice triplets on a pattern from 00:05:180 to 00:19:509 . :D
00:28:016 : Imo, this combo is a bit long, maybe delete a note in order to create a break?
00:35:964 : How about adding a d here? Let's try this.
00:48:501 : This one diserves a k.
01:18:613 : Even if there's battry here, it's ugly to hear, i advise you to move it 1/2 before since you created your pattern with the vocals.

Almost fixed

[Oniiii-chan]

00:16:934 : I found the whole combo a bit complex for the beginning part, how about deleting this one, more over when it's not the end of the first part.
Nothing more found here. fixed

[Nardo's Oni]

Interesting the fact you didn't have the same style of map for this map. :D

00:23:091 : After this you didn't use any breaks (so ye we have 3/4 yeye...), maybe delet some in order to have short breaks?

Also i didn't find something wrong, i really enjoyed the 3/4 spacing on the first part.

Gl hf for rank! :D
Thank you mod :)
Topic Starter
Charlotte

game rock wrote:

Hi :) From Game's Queue

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)


[Kantan]

00:32:942 - Change to k, To make a kd k dk fixed
01:17:718 - Change to d, I thing it's more convenient. keep


[Hanjamon's Futsuu]

00:50:628 - Agregar una d, es más conveniente.
00:56:001 - Al igual que antes, agregar una d.
01:15:255 - Agrega una d, para hacer un kk dk


[Muzukashii]

00:47:718 - I think it would be better a k. keep


[Oni]

00:30:703 - Change to k? rhythm ago keep


[Nardo's Oni]

00:31:934 - Change to k? I think it's better, rhythm ago


I hope what my mod has helped you :oops: , good luck :)
Thank you mod :)
Topic Starter
Charlotte

Kazamastar11 wrote:

Special request via PM ^^
[General]
  1. MP3 Title “Nanairo Biyori (TV Size)”, beatmap title “Nanairo Biyori (TV Ver.)”. After searching on Goog*e, and checking the Ranked beatmap.. “TV Ver.” Is correct
  2. I don’t know but.. I think you should remove “Biyori” from the tags, because it’s already on the title imo keep
[Kantan]
HP -1
00:12:345 (9) – k
Seems fine.
[Hanjamon’s Futsuu]
00:13:240 (12) – d
00:14:136 (13) - ^
00:14:583 (14) – k
00:15:031 (15) – d
00:15:927 (16) – k
00:15:927 (16) – d
00:33:389 (56) - ^
01:07:643 (15) - ^
01:18:389 (39) - ^
[Muzukashii]
00:36:300 (93) – k
00:55:218 – Add d
Good diff..
[Oni]
00:13:352 (8) – Remove
00:16:039 (11) – Better remove this
00:23:427 (51) - ^
00:37:755 (127) - ^
01:08:203 (273) - ^
[Nardo’s Oni]
Nothing ^^

Sorry for this short mod..
GL then~
sorry.no change but,Thnak you mod :)
Topic Starter
Charlotte

azintairin710 wrote:

From my mod Q :D

[General]
  • look good
[Kantan]
00:32:942 (36) - try K the cymbal sound clearer than 00:33:837 (37) -
00:37:419 (42,43) - ctrl+g fit vocal better i think
00:52:195 (63) - delete.. there's nothing you follow here.. if you want keep this, move to 00:52:419 -
01:19:509 (101) - d fit drum better

All fixed

[Hanja's Futsuu]
00:22:643 - add k
00:26:225 - ^
00:31:598 - ^
2nd part mod is the same as above
00:57:792 (1,1) - i don't mind it owo)/
01:08:315 (16,17) - ctrl+g
01:14:807 (32) - K
01:27:121 (1) - i don't mind it okay...

[Muzukashii]
00:06:972 (1,1,1,1,1) - i don't mind it ;w;
00:28:016 (58) - move to 00:27:792 - and change to d
00:36:076 (92,93) - either one change to k is good, if you change (92) it will follow snare, if (93) will follow vocal
00:55:330 (161) - D
01:24:434 (264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272) - maybe this pattern is too hard for SR 2.60 :3 consider re-map this

Almost fixed

i can't mod Oni tho.. ._. sorry
Thank you mod :)
Kayano
From your PM request

  1. Red - Unrankable issue, you must fixed
  2. Purple - Highly recommended, consider to use it
  3. Black - Suggestion, feel free to fixed or not
  4. Gray - Personal preference
[General]
  1. Fine
[ Kantan]
  1. 00:47:718 (58) - can be changed to k for consistency
  2. 00:51:300 (62,63) - swap if you fixed above
  3. 01:01:598 (74) - d?
  4. 01:07:867 (83) - k
  5. 01:16:375 (95) - maybe remove this, i will be a lot easier for beginners
  6. 01:26:225 (108) - move to 01:25:330 -
[ Hanjamon's Futsuu]
  1. 00:34:733 (60) - you can try d here, i know you want to use k to follow vocal, but i think continous 2-4kat fits enough
  2. 00:41:897 (77) - same as above
  3. 00:50:628 - add d here, i guess you want to put a break, but this part is slow enough, I feel quite empty here. Break in 00:56:001 - is a wise choice, no need to add one
  4. 00:56:449 - but maybe add d here, it may keep consistency with 00:58:240 (2,3) - and make a lead
  5. 01:15:927 - d here, also maybe 01:16:151 - too.
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:24:434 (45) - d here plays better
  2. 00:40:330 (110,111,112,113,114,115) - try dkdkkd
  3. 01:25:778 (273) - d for pitch goes down
[ Oni]
  1. 00:30:031 (86,87) - k these?
  2. 01:08:315 (273) - here has the same tune with 01:08:539 (274) - so change to k would be better
  3. 01:20:852 (344) - k for consistency
[ Nardo's Oni]
  1. Nice
Call me back :D
Hanjamon

OniJAM wrote:

From your PM request

  1. Red - Unrankable issue, you must fixed
  2. Purple - Highly recommended, consider to use it
  3. Black - Suggestion, feel free to fixed or not
  4. Gray - Personal preference

[ Hanjamon's Futsuu]
  1. 00:34:733 (60) - you can try d here, i know you want to use k to follow vocal, but i think continous 2-4kat fits enough okay :3
  2. 00:41:897 (77) - same as above okay
  3. 00:50:628 - add d here, i guess you want to put a break, but this part is slow enough, I feel quite empty here. Break in 00:56:001 - is a wise choice, no need to add one okay
  4. 00:56:449 - but maybe add d here, it may keep consistency with 00:58:240 (2,3) - and make a lead okay
  5. 01:15:927 - d here, also maybe 01:16:151 - too. hmm i think is fine without note, yeah, adding two d sounds better, but tried to have break xD
Call me back :D
Thanks for the mod ^^

Update ---> http://puu.sh/ehvFJ/c7e3cff026.rar
Topic Starter
Charlotte

OniJAM wrote:

From your PM request

  1. Red - Unrankable issue, you must fixed
  2. Purple - Highly recommended, consider to use it
  3. Black - Suggestion, feel free to fixed or not
  4. Gray - Personal preference
[General]
  1. Fine
[ Kantan]
  1. 00:47:718 (58) - can be changed to k for consistency fixed
  2. 00:51:300 (62,63) - swap if you fixed above fixed
  3. 01:01:598 (74) - d? keep.
  4. 01:07:867 (83) - k fixed
  5. 01:16:375 (95) - maybe remove this, i will be a lot easier for beginners umm...I think k d k K is good.so keep
  6. 01:26:225 (108) - move to 01:25:330 - fixed
[ Hanjamon's Futsuu]
  1. 00:34:733 (60) - you can try d here, i know you want to use k to follow vocal, but i think continous 2-4kat fits enough
  2. 00:41:897 (77) - same as above
  3. 00:50:628 - add d here, i guess you want to put a break, but this part is slow enough, I feel quite empty here. Break in 00:56:001 - is a wise choice, no need to add one
  4. 00:56:449 - but maybe add d here, it may keep consistency with 00:58:240 (2,3) - and make a lead
  5. 01:15:927 - d here, also maybe 01:16:151 - too.
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:24:434 (45) - d here plays better fixed
  2. 00:40:330 (110,111,112,113,114,115) - try dkdkkd Nice pattern.fixed
  3. 01:25:778 (273) - d for pitch goes down fixed
[ Oni]
  1. 00:30:031 (86,87) - k these? fixed
  2. 01:08:315 (273) - here has the same tune with 01:08:539 (274) - so change to k would be better fixed
  3. 01:20:852 (344) - k for consistency fixed
[ Nardo's Oni]
  1. Nice
Call me back :D
Thank you mod :)
Kayano
It looks nice to me

Bubbled!
Topic Starter
Charlotte

OniJAM wrote:

It looks nice to me

Bubbled!
Thank you bubbled =w=/ :)
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