[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

[EXTREME]
00:08:585 - 00:08:747 - 和00:08:666 (8666|3) - 一樣，加音吧 行，雖然我不是很想加
00:12:882 - 和00:12:720 - 比起來相對的明顯較弱，建議換成一個note。而且00:13:207 - 也有與00:12:882 - 同樣的音，但卻是一個note 行，去掉了
00:34:450 - 我覺得可以用用看double，比較重 手感問題，不了
01:20:504 - 為啥這裡沒3音而01:21:153 - 卻有，同樣都是clap聲 本來做圖的時候隨手擺的，但是到最後才發現很難統一，而且基於手感問題我就不動了
01:27:639 - 突然3個感覺也挺怪的，個人覺得這個沒有太強的音用兩個就夠了，畢竟01:27:963 - 也只有兩個 同上

感覺我摸圖一次比一次還水了;w;
Good luck

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

[ADVANCED]
00:02:990 (2990|1,3072|3,3153|2) - 有夠小聲的 后面也有啊 你也听见了不是
00:11:099 (11099|3,11099|1,11261|0,11261|2) - 這些音在1/4上也有，建議換成LN帶過 1/4只是鼓声啊
因為主要是抓00:15:315 (15315|0) - 這種音，所以00:15:477 (15477|2,15801|1) - 這種建議不抓
00:20:828 - 這裡也有像00:20:666 (20666|2,20990|1) - 的音，00:21:153 - 到00:21:639 - 都有。建議刪除00:20:666 (20666|2,20990|1) - 这里我一点都不想动 - -
01:53:585 (113585|1) - 移到1試試看，個人習慣 妥

Good luck

liaoxingyao wrote:

[BASIC]
00:21:801 (21801|0) - 移到2如何 好
00:44:504 (44504|1) - 移到3? 不了，本來就是跟那一段不是一起的我才會刻意放到2
01:10:126 (70126|0) - 移到3? 不了
01:22:450 (82450|0) - 移到3? 沒上升感
01:53:423 (113423|3) - 移到2? 不了
[EXTREME]
00:08:504 (8504|2,8585|0,8666|3,8747|1) - 这样如何 好像不錯
美丽

SanadaYukimura wrote:

黑闻力忙

记得看AIMOD 哪時候跑出來的我也不知道

[EXTREME]
00:22:774 - 00:22:936 - 不是还有，虽然超小声 刻意空出來的
00:28:450 - 不加？不是和00:29:099 - 一样 行
00:42:396 - 加鼓？加在1和后面那个LN一个col会爽 到時候就有一個波蘭籍的出來又說我unnecessary jack了hhh不過我還是放了

没了

MeowPaz wrote:

Yahalo.Spy
Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
来水摸~

Open

[BASIC]
Uncheck "Widescreen Support"
00:54:720 (54720|3) - 这里的音和下一个音音高不一样，所以建议移到3。 OK
00:56:828 (56828|1,57315|3,57801|0) - 可以用LN代替，虽然用点也没问题;w; 其實本來也是想擺LN，改了
00:59:909 - 01:01:855 - 有音 小聲，不過還是加上了
01:16:126 (76126|2) - 这里似乎没有spy想要抓的音。 這個音沒錯啊
01:43:531 - 我觉得这里可以根据音乐变化摆另一种梗（run 這裡太難搞了

[EXTREME]
00:45:477 (45477|2) - 音不一样，建议移到2 先保留好了

水摸完毕(run

pocket-Gao wrote:

BASIC

01:13:288 - 这里应该要调整下 感觉怪怪的 沒問題啊，具體什麼怪怪的 ?
哪有问题 怎么论文((((((((

EX

00:14:017 (14017|3) - 这里感觉音不会对应123432这种感觉的 听上去琴音中断了 试着改一下位置? 做了一點調整
00:17:099 - 加1note吧 毕竟前面都抓了 我的鍋，漏了
00:22:288 (22288|1) - 说实话太小声了.. playing的时候听不到的 我覺得還行，打的時候還是聽得到的
00:24:558 (24558|1) - 这里抓了很细微的声音 那这里 00:25:207 为啥不抓(后面也是) 感觉怪怪的 试着调整一下?
00:54:558 (54558|3,54558|1,54720|2,54720|0) - 这里摆成|1||4| |2||3|感觉不错好吧我在拼命凑字数 00:49:369 (49369|0,49369|3,49531|1,49531|2,49855|2,49855|1,50017|3,50017|0) - Here you are
01:20:017 到 01:20:180 音其实有点变化的 可以考虑改一下摆法 其實我都知道有變化，不過要更換排列不容易，尤其還是以2為單位的數量，保留
01:22:693 - 和辣条的GD一样 你们都不想抓吗> > 你說抓主音多麼爽
01:28:612 - 这开始后一段如果是前面的抓音 应该是1note 4分拍了 (提醒一下这里 這樣排列會變得略奇葩
01:30:558 - 是我可能要加1note结尾 没有那种打空的感觉(星级啥的管他呢 主要是那個音抓了，01:30:720 - 就得跟著抓，我這裡有擺SV，所以我不抓
01:44:828 - 这一段音变了 试着变一下摆法(? 不好搞，就這樣吧(攤

hs呢hs呢(((( 還在搞
。。这质量写不了论文了 点赞点赞 都做這麼良心了還要論文
woc喵拍也来mod了 这时间真巧

MeowPaz wrote:

Yahalo.Spy
Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
来水摸~

Open

[Mashiro's ADVANCED]
00:56:504 (56504|0,56504|1) - 这音比较轻，单键就可以了。有鼓
01:11:990 (71990|2) - 这个LN抓的音是从红线开始的。并不是
01:14:585 (74585|0) - 建议移到4既然是建议那我还是不动了（笑

水摸完毕(run

pocket-Gao wrote:

辣条的AdVanced

00:48:072 (48072|3) - |3| 00:48:720 (48720|2) - |4| 微调整 对应前面的轨道|4|的音 没看懂= =
01:01:369 - 这里还是抓了吧 前面类似的音都抓了 妥
01:22:693 - 不知你这里需不需要调整下 并没有全抓鼓 感觉不用动
01:40:936 - 这里开始摆的都是2 1 2 1的抓法的话 这样摆位对应音乐感觉不够爽(个人觉得) 试着像basic diff那样作一些连点啥的个人无爱连点啊（笑

hs呢hs呢((((
。。这质量写不了论文了 点赞点赞
woc喵拍也来mod了 这时间真巧

Maffalda wrote:

★STAR GIVEN ♥♥♥

Spy wrote:

Maffalda wrote:

★STAR GIVEN ♥♥♥

Thanks for star

Maffalda wrote:

You're welcome :3

biemote wrote:

玩了无数次还是想说虽然小高说过了

EXTREME

01:44:828 (104828|2,104828|1,104990|0,104990|3,105153|2,105153|1,105315|3,105315|0,105477|2,105477|1,105639|0,105639|3,105801|2,105801|1,105963|0,105963|3,106126|2,106126|1) -

这段音和前面不一样...换换排列?

啊.....玩起来好别扭.....

Sky_Demon wrote:

Mod by request

key: 1|2|3|4|

Color

Red - Serious mistake

Green - Reason

Blue - Proposal

BASIC

00:44:504 - ~00:45:153 - 建議改條子 簡單的難度太多Note不好 其實我覺得還好，改條子反而會匪夷所思
00:51:477 - 建議加上 明顯的聲音不遺漏 沒漏音，我抓的是琴
00:51:153 (51153|2,51315|3) - 各往左一格 手感會很好 可是音高不一樣。。
01:12:072 (72072|3) - 如果跟的是琴音就要移動到01:11:990 - 鼓的話就不用了 妥，改了
01:24:720 - http://puu.sh/j6jxr/c3cc44e244.jpg 跟第三點一樣，音高不一樣，你這樣擺的很像連續音高，其實實際上不是。。
01:13:207 (73207|0) - 覺得不用這個 可以刪 妥

EXTREME

00:05:909 (5909|0) - 移動到3 OK
00:15:477 (15477|1,15477|0) - 這裡雙Note 這裡怎麼沒有00:16:774 - 一樣的聲音呦>_O 其實這2個點都有雙琴音，只是第一個比較明顯，後面這個我聽漏了，Added
00:21:963 (21963|0,22288|1,22450|0) - 不明顯 不建議跟 我覺得還好，反倒我覺得沒抓怪怪的
^00:23:099 - 00:23:261 - 00:23:585 - 00:23:666 - 跟這4個比較實際 其實我這一段遵照的是jubeat的抓音方式，這裡是刻意空出來的
00:45:963 (45963|0,46044|1,46126|2) - 感覺比較適合散打排列 坦白說，打散不適合，你仔細聽，甚至用25%去聽，你會聽到前面2個音是一樣的音，所以正確來說應該是前面2個要jack才對，但是我擺過發現沒什麼感覺我就把排列放成階梯，其實也不錯
00:47:423 - 其實挺在意這個為什麼不3鍵 打起來會比較有感覺 你這樣的話後面也要調整了，其實為手感而做
01:04:612 - ~01:07:207 - 感覺雙鍵可以在取捨一下 有些位置的鼓+琴的聲音比較明顯有些則弱 但都是有聲音嘛，你要我怎麼調整。。總不可能一些3notes，一些2notes甚至還有1note之類的吧，所以我都統一弄成2notes
01:40:126 (100126|1,100288|1) - 肯定卡手 其實倒還好，改了反而更卡
01:40:936 - 這裡開始的雙鍵建議連點才能顯示特色 大部分音高是一樣的 其實我本來全部都放jack，不過後來改了，好吧，我作了調整

加油囉~ 祝你好運

星星

Sky_Demon wrote:

Mod by request

key: 1|2|3|4|

Color

Red - Serious mistake

Green - Reason

Blue - Proposal

Mashiro's ADVANCED

00:11:099 (11099|1,11099|3,11261|2,11261|0,11423|1) - 建議你改條子 這樣凸顯不出特色妥
00:20:666 (20666|2) - 都抓這個音了這裡不加上嗎?00:20:828 - 个人感觉那里并不是我想要的钢琴音（笑
00:28:450 - 知道要保持前面的一致性 但這好歹聲音重 空著反而打著怪妥
00:32:342 - ^妥
00:39:153 (39153|2) - 這個建議就免了主音可不能免了
00:42:234 (42234|2) - 移動到4 同時00:42:396 - 加上兩個Note妥
00:45:963 - 怎麼廳都覺得階梯適合00:46:126 (46126|3) - 移動到1?妥
01:11:990 (71990|2,72234|0) - 突然跟這兩個很怪 後面類似的也沒有加上改成跟后面的一样了
01:17:585 - ~01:18:882 - 不採用前面一樣的排列嗎 那樣更能顯出特色吧?折返楼梯吗？已改
01:38:342 - 這裡開始不是用條子才能更有feel嗎? 那這怎麼回事..01:38:504 (98504|1,98828|1,99153|2,99477|2) - 已改
01:48:396 (108396|2,108477|2,108558|1,108639|1,108720|0,108720|3) - 建議改散打 不然肯定吃新手紅票玩家是屎已改

加油囉~ 祝你好運

星星

chewySoul wrote:

Hello! I looked at your beatmap... here are some good and bad things!

Pros
1: Osu!mania focus for those people who play that! Yes, I'm not map for harder just for people who wants pp or what, just follow the rhythm, make the map which people like it
2: The song is perfect for this type of thing! Yes, it is a simple song

However, there are a lot of cons.
Cons
1: No osu! maps Well, since I'm a mania mapper, I don't make osu!(standard) mode diffs if you want, you can play this or this
2: Basic doesn't seem that basic to newbies Yes, I agree a bit But I think it may not too hard !
3: Extreme seems off beat No, I testplayed it much times and fixed much things, so it is not off beat
4: 4k only? I'm 4K mapper

I hope this helped
But seriously, I appreciate beatmaps of all kinds!

Rush_FTK wrote:

No help.No kd(s).

Mod

[notice]|0|1|2|3|


[Mashiro's ADVANCED]
- 01:01:693 (61693|2) move to column 0 to show that this clap sound is obvious different with 01:01:531 (61531|3,61855|1).那是钢琴= = 三个都是
- 01:32:828 ~ 01:33:153 A simple idea(screenshot)还是不动了 保持手感

地图很刺激，歌曲很欢快呢，Excellent job.
Hope you rank soon~

Rush_FTK wrote:

No help.No kd(s).

Mod

|0|1|2|3|
[BASIC]
- 00:03:639 (3639|1) In order to keep balance with 00:06:234 (6234|2,6234|0).I suggest to add a extra note. Actually, they are different, 00:01:045 (1045|3,1045|2) - and 00:06:234 (6234|2,6234|0) - are same, they have a crash sound, but 00:03:639 (3639|1) - is not
2 - 00:09:963 (9963|2,10126|1) Using Ctrl + H to reverse them. 00:09:963 (9963|2)'s pitch is lowest. Alright
- 00:10:936 (10936|2,11099|1) Same as above.using Ctrl + H to let the note more adapt pitch relevancy. Yes
- 00:29:099 (29099|3) move to column 0 to emphasize this note's pitch is obvious different with other note in this part. OK
- 00:33:477 (33477|2,33639|1,33801|0) move to column 3,0,1. Alright
- 00:38:828 (38828|2,38990|1) Same to 2. Yes
- 01:04:774 (64774|0) Move to 1 since this note's pitch is lower than 01:05:423 (65423|0). Yes
- 01:07:855 (67855|3,68017|3) You can move to 2 so that it can play more comfortable. ignore this opinion if you want keep it was. OK
- 01:09:963 (69963|2) Delete this note. Keep balance with 01:10:288. Nope, I choose to add a note in 01:10:288 - since I missed a note there
- 01:22:126 (82126|2,82288|1,82450|0,82612|1,82774|3) rearrangement like this to more suit for pitch. I choose to remain since my direction of pitches are just different from others

[EXTREME]
- 00:02:099 , 00:02:423 Forget to pick these note?or ignore it on purpose? Yes
- 00:24:558 (24558|1) remove it to keep balance with 00:25:207. Nope, it has a light piano in 00:24:558 (24558|1)
- 01:19:531 ~ 01:20:180 I don't know if it's acceptable in EXTREME(Another)diff. But i think the old one can't profermance the pitch correctly. Well, yea, I know it. But in this part, it has kicks in 1/4, if I just follow the pitch, maybe it had better use 1 note for it, but use 1 note it too simple, 2 notes are hard to put patterns, so that is why I use such pattern
- 01:48:396 ~ 01:48:720 a ideahere.I think just use one note to profermance the same kind of sound is ok. It is a nice idea, but it is a little hard In general it is a simple map, such patterns may be complained I think xD

地图很刺激，歌曲很欢快呢，Excellent job.
Hope you rank soon~

Marirose wrote:

bubbled

Zan - wrote:

(´・ω・)

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

small check

[BASIC]
00:42:234 (42234|1) - extend to end on 00:42:558 - , it's sound different than other OK
00:44:666 (44666|0) - you missed C, there is a C on 00:44:990 (44990|2) - with same sound Added
00:51:315 (51315|3) - i think remove C must better Nope, it actually exist a kick
01:02:017 (62017|3) - missed C? Yes
rest sound fine but the minijack sound pain lel I have no better idea..

Change name to MEDIUM on this normal diff? Why ? MEDIUM is about Hard/HD/ADVANCED diff name.

[EXTREME]
00:11:423 (11423|1) - move to 3, i guess It seems nothing different after moved to 3
00:42:234 (42234|3) - need to extend it to 00:42:558 - Done
00:47:423 - feel like there is some of sound like clap, different and louder than other: 00:46:774(46774|1,46774|3,46936|2,46936|0,47261|2,47261|0) - so i suggest you to add a note on here Nope, I just double piano here
00:48:720 - 00:50:017 - 00:52:612 - 00:53:909 - same ^
00:51:477 - add one more note on here, for the bass with 00:51:153 (51153|3,51315|2) - (add on 2) Nope, 00:51:153 (51153|0,51315|0,51477|0,51639|0) - are kicks, 00:51:153 (51153|3,51315|2,51639|1) - are piano, 00:51:639 (51639|2) - is finish, so I don't want to make any change here
The kiai part, some part is weird! Same sound clap like as 01:12:720 - 01:15:315 - but some part is three notes, some part is only two notes: i recomended you to remove the 3-note-chord and change to only 2-notes chord Fixed

[Timings]
On EXTREME's diff, i suggest you to change 0.75x to 0.5x and 1.5x to 1.25x for the sv changes more comfortable The effect is not I want, after changing it, it is not I want anyway. Keep.

[Kiai]
The last kiai time end on 01:46:126 - ?


Overall: Why you not using some finish-sound for the hitsound Added 2 hitsounds, please recheck it.

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

hitsound check

[BASIC]
00:25:369 (25369|2) - 00:26:017 (26017|0) - 00:27:315 (27315|1,27963|3) - 00:28:612 (28612|2) - 00:29:909 (29909|1) - 00:32:504 (32504|2,33153|1) - 00:38:990 (38990|2) - 00:39:639 (39639|2) - 01:10:126 (70126|0) - 01:12:720 (72720|2) - 01:15:315 (75315|2) - 01:16:612 (76612|1) - 01:31:531 (91531|3) - 01:33:477 (93477|3) - 01:37:369 (97369|3) - 01:41:909 (101909|1) - 01:43:207 (103207|0) - 01:44:504 (104504|2) - whistle
00:29:585 (29585|1) - 00:33:801 (33801|1,34126|1,34774|3) - 00:39:963 (39963|1) - 00:39:963 (39963|1) - 01:30:882 (90882|0) - finish
01:24:396 (84396|2) - 01:26:342 (86342|1,86990|2) - 01:28:936 (88936|3) - i guess just change to C, more better on a normal diff with less notes
01:52:288 (112288|0,112936|0) - whistle more better Added

01:20:180 - add a note on here for cymbal? OK
01:39:639 - change to long note and end on 01:40:288 - more better OK

[Mashiro's Fang]
no errors found

[EXTREME]
00:57:153 (57153|1) - remove W on here Nope, it is obvious whistle sound

only left these, call me back soon

Starry- wrote:

Congratulations!
nice (D)Q layout

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Qualification Notice

Hello!

Congratulations to Spy and Mashiro-Fang! The Beatmap Nomination Group has decided to qualify this beatmap. The following is a list of reasons and examples for the qualification. If you have any comments, please reply to this post and we will do our best to clarify any misunderstandings.

1. BPM: Good
2. Offset: Good
3. Snapping Conflicts: Good
4. AiMod: Good
5. Preview Time: Good
6. Hitsound: Good
7. Folder's Problems: Fine
8. Timing: Great
9. Tags: Sound Good
10. Metadata: Fine
11. Kiai: Great
12. BG: Good

If you happen to approve of this qualification and would like to see more maps like this qualified, please fill out this form. Before using this form, please read the instructions carefully.

The Quality Assurance Team members may handle this mapset now that it has been qualified.

###QUALIFIED

Starry- wrote:

Congratulations!
nice (D)Q layout