Kazamastar11 wrote:

If this song is ready, call me

Kazamastar11 wrote:

"Cranky pico" ?
This song has nothing to do with them.. So, remove
I suggest you to remove Alive from the title and move it to the tags..

Kazamastar11 wrote:

Well,
Cranky is important for the tags..

BUT,
You can still put pico because..
VILA = Cranky+Pico

Deny my kds plz.. Ok, will ask a BAT to deny it, as your request

Todestrieb wrote:

Hello, use this mp3, better quality. http://puu.sh/hxrDY/0a72b68a7b.mp3 (Right clic>save link for download)
Remember to check offset again.

Raediaufar wrote:

Hi Sirade, came here for M4M from your queue

First of all, this mod will be general and timing only. I will mod your map again if you have done with the timing.

General

HP: 7 OD: 7

BG Size must be 1366 x 768

Since this is marathon map, your mp3 should be 128 kbps only. 192 kbps is only for short songs. Just compress your current mp3 to 128 kbps

Remove the breaktime. Mania maps shouldn't have any breaktime

You must map the first minute OR if you don't want you must cut your mp3

Timing

Here is the suggested timing for this




I have seen the mod above and see that this song has 111 - 145 bpm but I think the slow parts have lower bpm as well.

Don't forget to look at the "time signature" (highlighted by blue) it have some changes like 3/4 and 6/4

Resnap everything after you change the timing

And yeah, I have been played Cytus but never found this song. Is it secret song? hehe yeah, it is, lol, just click the hard or easy bubble (depends on the difficulty) on the chapter selection

Candiize wrote:

timing is wrong >
offset 516 bpm 110 done
offset 9243 bpm 115 hm... done
offset 19266 bpm 110 done
offset 39288 bpm 120 this bpm aren't need though
offset 66070 bpm 145 this bpm aren't need though
these are general bpm

ill try to help you more tomorrow

schwarzvgrune wrote:

Hi ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from Grune's modding queue
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~

Icon Bibliography

No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding given below~
o(≧v≦)o~~ = everything is good~
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified~
(⊙o⊙)？ = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments~

General : o(≧v≦)o~~
Mapset : o(≧v≦)o~~
Metadata : (⊙o⊙)？not sure about the metadata either.

Timing : Σ( ° △ °|||)︴many parts of the map seems offbeat. or at least not really accurate. please ask a timing expert for checking. Oh well, will try to fix that, perhaps with 1/16 beat snap divisor to get the nearest correct for now.

Audio : o(≧v≦)o~~
Background : o(≧v≦)o~~
Hitsounding : Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ if you don't use hitsound, please decrease sfx to 5% Hm... Ok

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In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( √ ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( √ )
Hand Balancing : ( √ )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( √ )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( √ )
Ghost Note : ( √ )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( √ )

bam

as i've written my reason above clearly. i won't rewrite it when i mod below.
note that i take PR very seriously, especially when you don't have any strong justification not follow PR.

00:03:243 (3243|1) - 3 Done
00:03:743 (3743|3,3788|2,3834|1) - ctrl g Done
00:04:334 (4334|0) - 3
00:04:879 (4879|1,5425|2) - 1 2 Done

00:05:970 (5970|2,6016|1,6061|0) - ctrl G Done

00:07:061 (7061|1) - 1 Done


00:10:286 (10286|1,10329|2,10373|3) - drag 1x to left Done

00:10:808 (10808|2) - 4 Done

00:11:297 - use 2 or 3 note. strong chord emphasis. Done, well... Didn't notice it here

00:13:768 (13768|1) - obviously should be 4 Done, well.. The reason that I put on column 2 instead is just to prevent it look like a single stairs, for somehow reason, I feel like it is... Uncomfortable (to see, not to play) but well, changed anyways.

00:30:241 - use 2 or 3 notes, different emphasis Done

00:19:261 - until 00:31:915 - revamp based on my suggestion above. do a self-mod and check for PR Hm... Done



00:39:831 - until 01:07:708 - please use SN, there are only a few notes there, it reflects the sustained instrument better Hm... Well, might change in the future since the SN doesn't fit to me (because the sound often ends at the next note)

01:17:742 (77742|2,77845|1,77949|3,78052|0) - if you'r following that woodwind sound, then this is wrong. there is only 3 different pitch Well, I think this is ok, because the left (column 1) was normally for the kick sound.

01:17:949 - delete the SN here and drag that LN down to this time, but put it at 1 Done


01:23:225 (83225|1) - 3 Moved, normally that was intended to be a mini jack pattern but nvm.


01:41:018 - should have 3 notes just like your usual pattern for this beat Done

01:55:708 (115708|3) - 3 Done

02:11:443 - add short note to 4, because there are 2 woodwind sound here, express the other one with SN Is there 2 sound here? o.o Well, will check more at the future, will leave unchanged for now

02:12:277 - add at 4 or 1 Unchanged for now
02:13:110 - add at 3 Unchanged for now
02:14:777 - add at 4 Unchanged for now

02:16:443 - add at 1 Unchanged for now

02:18:110 - and so on, you know what i mean Unchanged for now


02:23:643 (143643|1,143850|2,144057|1,144264|0,144678|2) - very strong emphasis here, use 2 notes instead to reflect it more accurately. resting time is done above already
until 02:29:643 - I don't think 2 note sounds nice here, it will make the column more clumped here, use 2 notes consistently. after this, you use 3 notes for parts which have beat, so it flows more naturally because not a lot of emphasis added and thus the transition (from 2 notes, to 3 notes, feels more natural, compared to if you just put 1 earlier and then suddenly a lot of 3) Well, I decided not to change that because I'm trying to strictly following the rhythm in the music, with some exceptions since I can't add many notes to 4K

02:50:126 (170126|3,170229|2) - no reason to use LN here, revamp Changed to normal notes

04:23:509 (263509|1) - should be at 4, exchange them Done


04:31:784 (271784|1,272612|0) - drag 2 x to right and adjust your SN Done
it should be 4 3 2 1 because the pitch consistently declines

04:40:060 (280060|0,281302|1,281715|2) - should be 4 3 2 Done

04:43:371 (283371|1,284612|0,285026|1) - put on 323 Done

04:46:681 (286681|2,287922|1,288336|0) - 4 2 1Done

04:49:991 -04:56:612 - readjust, your PR is very random Done

04:54:957 (294957|0) - sustain it until 04:57:026 - Done
04:57:026 - add LN, still following that soprano Done

05:09:750 - again, only 1 note, i see no justification not to follow PR, revamp this whole section until 05:36:253 - Well, I think this section can ignore the PR, I think.

I'll take up on your offer to do M4M on the map that you chose.
please take note that I follow PR as well as hand balancing. (on that map as well) because i also utilise pitched hitsound when mapping.

good luck!! o(≧v≦)o~~

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Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O

pwhk wrote:

for M4M

| 0 - 3 |

[Marathon]
AiMod: object at 00:12:913 isn't snapped! Done

There are timing issues (as pointed out by other modders). You'd better find someone good at timing to check (I suck at timing ) Ok, will temporary fix using 1/16 (or 1/12) beat snap divisor for now.

00:05:425 - 00:06:516 - three continuous note at 2 is no good. Move 00:06:516 (6516|2) - to 3 I guess Already done by previous mod, sry
00:08:243 - I think there is a note here (use 25% playback to check) I don't think there is.
00:26:351 - 00:27:429 - as in 00:05:425 - . Move 00:27:429 - to 3 Already done by previous mod, sry
00:30:781 - 00:31:997 - use 1,2,3 instead Already done by previous mod, sry
00:39:816 (39816|0,40299|2) - 3,0 instead for pitch Already done by previous mod, sry
00:42:782 (42782|2,42782|1) - Remove one note. No sound suggests double Already done by previous mod, sry
00:44:282 (44282|1,44782|3) - Ctrl-G Already done by previous mod, sry
00:46:782 - 00:47:782 - Ctrl-G Already done by previous mod, sry
00:51:782 - 00:52:782 - 3,2,0 Already done by previous mod, sry
01:02:782 (62782|0,62844|1,62907|2) - This seems wrong. You'd better recheck this with 25% playback. Done
01:06:594 - Add an LN around here for the SE. You may need to move around once better timing is found Hm... Will do it later
01:17:742 (77742|2,77845|1) - Ctrl-G Done
01:45:880 (105880|1) - Guitar isn't present here. Remove. Will recheck this section once I got a better timing.
01:46:708 (106708|0) - ^ Same as above
01:53:225 (113225|1) - You was using double around. Remove this so no triples. Rearranged to my style instead
01:57:776 - Missing layer guitar here I guess. Add note? Done
02:03:363 (123363|3) - Remove I guess. No guitar to layer here Will recheck after I got a better timing
02:16:443 - Add note at 0 for extra-strong sound Done
02:54:471 - Missing note Done
04:10:190 (250190|0) - Remove? There isn't like a sound here. LN-end here is enough There is a sound here but idk the name of the sound...
04:10:815 - Add note at 2 for soft violin. It'll be kinda strange to add more notes in such a calm section... '~'
04:18:453 (258453|2) - Move to 0? This section can ignore the PR, I think
04:20:120 (260120|0) - this to 1 Same as above
04:31:371 (271371|0) - Move to 2? Done
04:51:646 (291646|0,292474|3) - Ctrl-G, move 04:53:302 (293302|0) - to 3 Changed based on previous mod
05:09:771 (309771|0,310081|0,310391|0) - Different sound should have different pitch. I would use 0,1,2 here. I am not repeating myself but many places in 05:09:771 - 05:17:839 - also have this issue Hm... Will do it later... Going to fix some problem first.
05:35:064 - Add LN for SE. Again, may not be exact timing. Will add it after fix some timing problems first.
05:57:977 (357977|1,357977|3) - No jacks here. I doubt if there is any sounds here... Will recheck with the new timing
06:01:908 - Add note? It'll be harder to deal with 1/4 jacks while doing 1/8 burst
06:14:426 (374426|2) - Guitar absent. Remove. Done
06:15:253 (375253|2) - ^ Done
06:21:357 - 06:21:564 - Missing percussion Well, idk if I did it right or not.
06:24:253 - Add note Done
06:28:184 - Missing guitar layer Done
06:45:150 (405150|0,405357|0) - Remove? No doubles here? Done

Good luck!

baraatje123 wrote:

Complex timing
How I look at it now, it seems fine
It's really hard to hear it at the beginning, as piano is rather hard to understand (timing-wise)
Sorry for not being able to help you >.<

schwarzvgrune wrote:

ask Eter-chan~ s/he knows someone who's an expert in offset.
try Harby / crack as well

Rayz141 wrote:

correct title is Vanessa, without 'Alive:'. that's just how the wiki wrote it

Alive is the album name released by rayark in 2012, far before the cytus update
https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/cytus ... d554811915
http://www.amazon.com/Cytus-Alive-Vario ... B0090LX444
http://vgmdb.net/album/41131