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Ichigaki wrote:

Mod Requested via QQ

Column setup

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

General

1. Song Setup :
   
   1. Metadata : Already fixed by Lanturn
   2. Other : Try this too
      

      BPM : 149,985
      Offset : 259

2. Music and background :
   
   1. Music : Clear
   2. Background : Clear
3. Kiai and audio preview point :
   
   1. Kiai : No kiai? woc
   2. Audio preview point : Unsnapped, check it

Warning

This mod mostly contain suggestion, so feel free to reject it with the reason

Insane

General

1. Diff name should be 'Marathon'
2. Volume should be above 10%, check AiMod

Pattern and etc.

my mod sohai, kill ichigaki

1. 00:01:672 (1672|1) - Remove
2. 00:03:072 (3072|1) - Move to 1
3. 00:03:372 - Add 2
4. 00:03:572 - Add 3
5. 00:06:772 - Add 1
6. 00:10:972 - Add 1
7. 00:16:972 (16972|1) - Remove
8. 00:18:372 - Add 3
9. 00:19:372 - Add 2
10. 00:20:272 - 00:23:472 - Add 1/4 like 00:23:472 - 00:25:072 -
11. 00:25:072 - 00:26:672 - Too hard, re-arrange please
12. 00:26:672 - use 1/6 ( http://puu.sh/dNC1P/70a131f077.jpg )
13. 00:27:672 - Try http://puu.sh/dNC3N/dd66468afc.png
14. 00:42:072 - Add 1
15. 00:42:472 - Add 4
16. 00:42:572 - Add 1
17. 00:48:772 (48772|2) - Remove
18. 01:06:672 - Try http://puu.sh/dNCcZ/5927755c7e.png
19. 01:39:872 - Add 3
20. 01:46:072 - Add 1
21. 01:52:572 - Add 3
22. 02:28:972 (148972|3) - Move 1
23. 02:50:072 - Add 1
24. 03:21:972 - Add 4
25. 03:25:738 (205738|1,205805|2) - Remove, 03:25:772 - Add 3
26. 03:29:972 - Add 2
27. 03:38:172 - Add 1
28. 03:41:272 (221272|1) - Move 1 / 3
29. 03:44:372 - Add 2
30. 04:17:972 - Add 2
31. 04:18:172 - Add 4
32. 04:23:472 (263472|0,263472|3,263672|3,263672|0,263872|1,263872|2) - Change to 3-notes
33. 04:24:272 (264272|3,264272|0,264372|1,264372|2,264572|1,264572|0,264672|2,264672|3) - ^ l like 2 notes
34. 04:30:872 - Add 4
35. 04:36:272 (276272|3,276272|0,276472|3,276472|0,276672|1,276672|2) - Change to 3-notes
36. 04:37:672 (277672|0,277672|1) - Remove one
37. 04:39:472 (279472|0,279472|3,279672|3,279672|0,279872|1,279872|2) - Change to 3-notes
38. 04:40:272 (280272|0,280272|3) - ^
39. 04:42:672 - Add 1
40. 04:44:772 - Add 2
41. 04:44:872 (284872|1) - Move 1
42. 04:44:972 - Add 4
43. 04:57:472 - Add 1
44. 04:57:672 (297672|2,297672|1) - Move to 04:57:772 -
45. 04:59:372 (299372|3) - Remove whats this
46. 04:59:372 (299372|3) - Add 2 and this
47. 05:02:272 - Add 4
48. 05:10:672 - Add 2 / 3
49. 05:12:883 - Add 1
50. 05:12:972 - Add 2
51. 05:14:272 - Add 4
52. 05:14:738 (314738|0,314738|3,314738|1) - Move 05:14:672 -
53. 05:14:738 (314738|3) - Stop 05:17:872 -

Will continue tomorrow, too tired now ><) Done

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woc2014. Please rank

ok fix

Hey latiao o/
from pm req
woc marathon （all right
here's the mod
由于不可抗拒力我要用英语
col=1,2,3,4
Good Luck XD

Marirose wrote:

Hey latiao o/
from pm req
woc marathon （all right
here's the mod
由于不可抗拒力我要用英语
col=1,2,3,4

mod

00:01:072 (1072|3,1172|1) - try this http://puu.sh/epagf/999de2b130.jpg, then move this one to 00:01:472 (1472|3) - col 3 for better play experience
00:05:572 (5572|3) - remove this,not clearly sound here
00:06:672 - you miss a sound here,add it
00:07:472 (7472|3,7572|1) - make it just like 00:01:072
00:10:672 (10672|3) - move it to col2,and make 00:10:772 (10772|2) - to col4,becauz i think if you make it as 00:10:972 (10972|0,11072|1) - is better to play
00:16:172 - a chord sound here,add it at col 3
00:16:972 - same reason,add at 2
00:18:172 - same,2
umm im not sure if you ignore this chord on purpose,up to you w/
00:25:072 - lets do this http://puu.sh/epbeN/96443fa960.jpg
00:26:422 - http://puu.sh/epbnT/fad638c82f.jpg
00:26:938 (26938|3) - make it at col 3,then it can connect to 00:27:605 (27605|1) - this note better
00:36:072 (36072|2) - change to col 1,and 00:36:172 (36172|0) - make this to col4 for hand balance
00:41:272 (41272|3,41472|2) - ctrl+j
00:48:872 (48872|3,48972|2) - ctrl+j
00:54:572 (54572|0,54572|2,54572|3) - and 00:54:672 (54672|0,54672|3,54672|2) - not the same sounds right? make them different (try to make 00:54:672 (54672|2) - on col 2
01:20:972 (80972|0) - col 4
01:26:672 (86672|0,86772|2) - although heavy hit here,i recommand you can use hitsound to inside,remove
01:57:772 (117772|3,117872|2) - ctrl+j
01:58:372 (118372|2) - col2
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~this part repeat until 02:50:672 -
lets mod from here w/


02:55:372 (175372|3,175472|2) - also heavy sound as 03:02:605 - red line below,double notes plz
03:14:672 (194672|1,194672|2) - 1 note here is enough
03:31:372 (211372|3) - move this to the white line above 03:31:472 - will feel more comfortable
03:43:872 (223872|3,223872|0,223972|2,223972|0,223972|3,224172|3,224172|0,224272|1,224272|3,224272|0) - umm, up to you ><

repeat again lol


05:15:673 - add a LN here,i prefer at col1,then it end at 05:17:872 - ,same as 05:14:672 (314672|3) -


悪霊退散悪霊退散
end

Good Luck XD

OK THANK YOU!

來晚了水摸一下
1234

[Marathon]
All timing sections have a volume below 5%.
音效呢?
00:07:472 - 移除一個音?
00:20:272 - ^
00:54:572 - 第2加個音吧
01:27:072 - 加音
01:58:572 - ^
02:43:672 - ^
03:29:872 (209872|3) - 這啥?
03:31:872 - 加音
03:36:272 (216272|0) - 不明
03:44:172 - 加
04:44:872 (284872|3) - 移到1吧 應該不太需要jack
04:44:972 - 這個音是和 04:45:372 - 一樣吧，建議 04:44:972 - 刪了一個
04:51:572 - 移除一個吧 和 04:51:972 - 同音
05:12:172 - 加音
05:13:772 - ^
00:58:472 - 一個音加一個LN應該就夠了吧 兩個都不錯 看你要對玩家怎樣
01:04:872 - ^
01:06:872 - 移除一個吧 和 01:07:272 - 一樣
01:59:072 - 第2加音試試
02:02:472 - 一樣的看你要不要換
02:08:872 - ^

good luck

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

來晚了水摸一下
1234

[Marathon]
All timing sections have a volume below 5%.
音效呢? 我很懒啊= =
00:07:472 - 移除一個音?
00:20:272 - ^
00:54:572 - 第2加個音吧
01:27:072 - 加音
01:58:572 - ^
02:43:672 - ^
03:29:872 (209872|3) - 這啥?
03:31:872 - 加音
03:36:272 (216272|0) - 不明
03:44:172 - 加
04:44:872 (284872|3) - 移到1吧 應該不太需要jack
04:44:972 - 這個音是和 04:45:372 - 一樣吧，建議 04:44:972 - 刪了一個
04:51:572 - 移除一個吧 和 04:51:972 - 同音
05:12:172 - 加音
05:13:772 - ^
00:58:472 - 一個音加一個LN應該就夠了吧 兩個都不錯 看你要對玩家怎樣
01:04:872 - ^
01:06:872 - 移除一個吧 和 01:07:272 - 一樣
01:59:072 - 第2加音試試
02:02:472 - 一樣的看你要不要換
02:08:872 - ^

good luck

嗯 大部分都改了 感谢mod

hi ~

little mod
[General]
tag add : ' maimai GreeN PLUS '
source : http://maimai.sega.jp/song08.shtml

[悪霊退散]
04:40:772 - add ?

good luck >w</

RuberusuScarlet wrote:

hi ~

little mod
[General]
tag add : ' maimai GreeN PLUS '
source : http://maimai.sega.jp/song08.shtml

[悪霊退散]
04:40:772 - add ?

good luck >w</

thank you very much

我說你這五分鍾 真心要我摸

Taiwan-NAK wrote:

我說你這五分鍾 真心要我摸

摸摸摸 不摸还是人？

stalk this

Hey 辣条你要的摸 o/

BN CHECK
You Ready ?


Here's the mod


[歌曲信息]

Timing:offset ok 无kiai ok
Audio:192，过
BG:1024，过
Metadata:看起来ok
Preview Point:ok
AiMod:没问题

整体：
hs延迟ok，背景视频我觉得同步率还差一些
去掉song setup里面design里的widescreen support

[Pattern]

Cloumn=1,2,3,4


没了
Good Luck

Marirose wrote:

Hey 辣条你要的摸 o/

BN CHECK
You Ready ?


Here's the mod


[歌曲信息]

Timing:offset ok 无kiai ok
Audio:192，过
BG:1024，过
Metadata:看起来ok
Preview Point:ok
AiMod:没问题

整体：
hs延迟ok，背景视频我觉得同步率还差一些
去掉song setup里面design里的widescreen support

[Pattern]

Cloumn=1,2,3,4

恶灵退散恶灵退散

00:01:472 - 明显的重音，可以双键
00:03:072 - 这里也是
00:03:872 - ~

00:04:372 - ~
00:04:672 -
00:04:972 -
00:05:272 - 这几个是连续的双键

00:05:872 - 这连别加，声音很小

00:06:272 - 和00:06:572 - 要加一起加

00:07:072 - 和00:07:272 - 要加


00:09:972 - 00:10:272 - 00:11:072 - 00:11:372 - 00:12:672 - 00:13:472 - 加加加加加加

00:19:172 - 这里参考00:18:372 - ，所以加


00:26:922 (26922|3) - LN在00:27:605 - 结束

00:29:072 (29072|2) - 放到col2

00:28:272 (28272|3,28472|3,28872|2,29272|3,29672|3) - 加clap

00:36:272 - finish呢

00:47:872 - 到00:49:072 - 你抓了鼓点和主音，所以删掉00:48:072 - 这个bass，多抓了

00:48:872 (48872|2,48972|1) - 加whistle啊

01:07:272 - 可以考虑删了这个，中间空出来

01:14:172 - 这里也有LN,双键不太好，删一个col4，再在col2上面加whistle，再说你看这里01:26:972 - 你就省了

01:46:472 (106472|2) - col1

02:18:572 (138572|0) - 删，不够强的音

02:43:572 - 删col，理由同上 少年你串行了= =

03:16:272 - 加finish

03:27:172 - 有鼓点，加

04:23:472 (263472|2,263672|2,263872|1,264372|2) - 你hs放多啦，删了这些hs
04:39:472 (279472|2,279672|2,279872|1,280272|2) - ~
05:09:872 (309872|0,310072|0,310272|0,310372|0) - ~

04:48:172 (288172|3) - 这点排列改改，卡手，后面LN
04:53:372 - 也是


在自己查查hs，特别是whistle，差的你慢慢补上吧，改好找我

没了
Good Luck

OK 全都改了 小x mod太神 给跪（

bubbled

good luck

pattern mod
column 1234
OD 8.5?(suggestion)

[悪霊退散悪霊退散]
00:48:072 - add 1
00:48:772 - add 4 for melody
01:01:672 (61672|3) - add 1 for bass
01:08:272 (68272|1) - move to 1 to avoid triple hammer,double is enough
01:14:172 (74172|1) - add 4 for bass but suggestion
01:20:872 (80872|2) - add 1
03:09:672 (189672|2,189738|1,189805|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2908796 ?
03:25:272 (205272|2,205472|3,205472|0,205538|2,205605|1,205672|0,205772|2) - add 1/6 drums plz plz 233
04:06:672 (246672|2) - move to 4
04:37:422 (277422|3) - unsnaped
04:44:072 (284072|3) - move to 1
04:59:072 (299072|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2908807
04:59:472 (299472|0) - change some LN,same as 04:58:672 (298672|3,298972|2,299272|1) -
05:02:672 (302672|2) - ^
05:10:572 (310572|2) - change 124 pattern

ok

shionelove wrote:

pattern mod
column 1234
OD 8.5?(suggestion)

[悪霊退散悪霊退散]
00:48:072 - add 1
00:48:772 - add 4 for melody
01:01:672 (61672|3) - add 1 for bass
01:08:272 (68272|1) - move to 1 to avoid triple hammer,double is enough
01:14:172 (74172|1) - add 4 for bass but suggestion
01:20:872 (80872|2) - add 1
03:09:672 (189672|2,189738|1,189805|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2908796 ?
03:25:272 (205272|2,205472|3,205472|0,205538|2,205605|1,205672|0,205772|2) - add 1/6 drums plz plz 233
04:06:672 (246672|2) - move to 4
04:37:422 (277422|3) - unsnaped
04:44:072 (284072|3) - move to 1
04:59:072 (299072|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2908807
04:59:472 (299472|0) - change some LN,same as 04:58:672 (298672|3,298972|2,299272|1) -
05:02:672 (302672|2) - ^
05:10:572 (310572|2) - change 124 pattern

ok

all fix

hitsound mod
N=Normal,W=Whistle,F=Finish,C=Clap
mp3 ok
hitsound delay ok
video ok

[どーまん！せーまん！]
00:15:472 (15472|3) - C
00:36:072 (36072|0) - ^
01:01:672 (61672|0) - ^
01:11:272 (71272|3) - ^
01:24:072 (84072|0) - ^
01:24:672 (84672|1) - ^
01:31:672 (91672|0) - ^
02:24:872 (144872|1,144972|0) - C?
02:43:872 (163872|0) - C
03:31:372 (211372|2) - C
03:38:172 (218172|0,218472|3) - ^
03:59:472 (239472|0) - ^
04:05:472 (245472|3) - ^
04:06:672 (246672|0) - ^
04:08:672 (248672|2) - ^
04:09:072 - to 04:10:572 - add one C for each time
04:13:872 (253872|3) - C
04:18:172 (258172|1,258472|2) - ^
04:28:072 (268072|0) - ^
04:30:972 (270972|0,271272|0) - ^
04:37:072 (277072|3) - ^
04:37:072 (277072|0) - W
04:45:572 (285572|2,285672|3,285772|2) - C
04:58:272 (298272|2) - ^
05:03:472 (303472|2) - ^
05:04:572 (304572|1,304672|3,304872|3) - ^
05:12:672 (312672|1,312872|3,312972|2) - ^
05:14:272 (314272|3,314372|2,314472|3,314572|2) - ^

ok

shionelove wrote:

hitsound mod
N=Normal,W=Whistle,F=Finish,C=Clap
mp3 ok
hitsound delay ok
video ok

[どーまん！せーまん！]
00:15:472 (15472|3) - C
00:36:072 (36072|0) - ^
01:01:672 (61672|0) - ^
01:11:272 (71272|3) - ^
01:24:072 (84072|0) - ^
01:24:672 (84672|1) - ^
01:31:672 (91672|0) - ^
02:24:872 (144872|1,144972|0) - C?
02:43:872 (163872|0) - C
03:31:372 (211372|2) - C
03:38:172 (218172|0,218472|3) - ^
03:59:472 (239472|0) - ^
04:05:472 (245472|3) - ^
04:06:672 (246672|0) - ^
04:08:672 (248672|2) - ^
04:09:072 - to 04:10:572 - add one C for each time
04:13:872 (253872|3) - C
04:18:172 (258172|1,258472|2) - ^
04:28:072 (268072|0) - ^
04:30:972 (270972|0,271272|0) - ^
04:37:072 (277072|3) - ^
04:37:072 (277072|0) - W
04:45:572 (285572|2,285672|3,285772|2) - C
04:58:272 (298272|2) - ^
05:03:472 (303472|2) - ^
05:04:572 (304572|1,304672|3,304872|3) - ^
05:12:672 (312672|1,312872|3,312972|2) - ^
05:14:272 (314272|3,314372|2,314472|3,314572|2) - ^

ok

OK fix

recheck
01:24:672 (84672|1) -C plz,you missed
04:08:672 (248672|2) -^

shionelove wrote:

recheck
01:24:672 (84672|1) -C plz,you missed
04:08:672 (248672|2) -^

fix

ok 2nd bubble
1st:Marirose

shionelove wrote:

ok 2nd bubble
1st:Marirose

thank you

gratz

dio dio dio

Grz!

wwwwwwwww Hype hype GZ MASHIRO XD

Wow hype marathon map!
Grats mashiro

YES

gratz mashiro

Grats ~

[akuryo taisan]

This beatmap has some problems that should be fixed before it is approved.

The stream at 0:25:072 - 0:26:672 is clearly 1/6 when you listen to the music, but it's mapped as 1/8. It feels overmapped compared to the rest of the map and provides an annoying difficulty spike. This was pointed out here but apparently never fixed.

03:25:072 (205072|3,205072|1,205072|0,205138|2,205205|1,205272|0,205338|1,205405|2) - There is nothing in the music here that warrants a 1/6 stream. Something like this would probably be more fitting. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2942407

There seem to be a lot of ghost notes in the intro, one glaring example probably being this section 00:09:072 - 00:10:672 Make sure there is an actual sound that where you are mapping notes, or it won't make much sense.

The soft-hitnormal and soft-hitwhistle hitsounds are barely audible over the music even with SFX volume turned up, and this is why. At least turn the sample volume up to 100, but it would probably be better to fix the audio files.

00:54:272 (54272|3,54272|0,54372|3,54372|0) - There is no reason for there to be jacks here, the music sounds more like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2943049
01:58:272 (118272|0,118272|2,118372|2,118372|0) - ^
03:43:872 (223872|3,223872|0,223972|3,223972|0) - ^

You have a lot of sections that you end with bursts consisting of chordstreams and jacks. It seems weird to me to map sections that are generally very easy, for example: 00:29:872 - 00:42:672 but then add much more difficult bursts with jacks like at 00:35:672
I think you should consider making the bursts a bit easier, for example by removing the jacks. Otherwise, beginners will always miss in the same places that are too hard, and good players who can play them well won't find the rest of the map very challenging.
Alternatively, you could also make the easy sections more difficult to balance it out, except for the quiet part of the song of course.

01:32:272 - 1:33:872 Especially this is a section that is much harder than the rest of the map. I think it would fit the map better and be more fun to play if you remove the jacks on every blue tick before the next white tick: 01:32:572 (92572|0,92972|1,93372|0,93772|3) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2943055
2:36:272 - 2:37:872 ^

Redon wrote:

[akuryo taisan]

This beatmap has some problems that should be fixed before it is approved.

The stream at 0:25:072 - 0:26:672 is clearly 1/6 when you listen to the music, but it's mapped as 1/8. It feels overmapped compared to the rest of the map and provides an annoying difficulty spike. This was pointed out here but apparently never fixed.
sorry it's our mistake,but recently in other ranked map a mapper said it's by intention and BNs agreed with this when there're 1/6 even sounds are 1/16 that mapper shouldn't put 1/3,1/6,and1/12.depend on QAT
sometimes even some players point out this type problems BN and QAT ignore these and go rank

03:25:072 (205072|3,205072|1,205072|0,205138|2,205205|1,205272|0,205338|1,205405|2) - There is nothing in the music here that warrants a 1/6 stream. Something like this would probably be more fitting. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2942407 drums sounds

There seem to be a lot of ghost notes in the intro, one glaring example probably being this section 00:09:072 - 00:10:672 Make sure there is an actual sound that where you are mapping notes, or it won't make much sense.

The soft-hitnormal and soft-hitwhistle hitsounds are barely audible over the music even with SFX volume turned up, and this is why. At least turn the sample volume up to 100, but it would probably be better to fix the audio files.
hmm it's new problem in mania,depend on https://osu.ppy.sh/s/200552
this map has same problem,so if that map gets DQ,this map too,if not,too

00:54:272 (54272|3,54272|0,54372|3,54372|0) - There is no reason for there to be jacks here, the music sounds more like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2943049
01:58:272 (118272|0,118272|2,118372|2,118372|0) - ^
03:43:872 (223872|3,223872|0,223972|3,223972|0) - ^
it seems mapper thinks 1chord is not enough,so we,BN,think we should keep these
BN can't force mapper to change pattern even they don't want to change,from BN rules

You have a lot of sections that you end with bursts consisting of chordstreams and jacks. It seems weird to me to map sections that are generally very easy, for example: 00:29:872 - 00:42:672 but then add much more difficult bursts with jacks like at 00:35:672
I think you should consider making the bursts a bit easier, for example by removing the jacks. Otherwise, beginners will always miss in the same places that are too hard, and good players who can play them well won't find the rest of the map very challenging.
Alternatively, you could also make the easy sections more difficult to balance it out, except for the quiet part of the song of course.
hmm then you can complain almost all maps.because in mappers generally we put 2notes on 1 snare sound
you can see this type bursts everywhere.but we can't force,same as above reason

01:32:272 - 1:33:872 Especially this is a section that is much harder than the rest of the map. I think it would fit the map better and be more fun to play if you remove the jacks on every blue tick before the next white tick: 01:32:572 (92572|0,92972|1,93372|0,93772|3) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2943055
2:36:272 - 2:37:872 ^
same and why mapper has to make difficulty constantly
it's fit for song climax.

thanks for your feedback.we will consider hitsound problems and mapper can make better map next time.

Reason for Disqualification

-found incorrect snap btw thanks Redon point these lol
-darn it's hard to find weird stuff in J-song (without my headphone)

the artist title need to spacing with '&' = Hikomaro & Kotohime

00:01:772 (1772|0) - this note should be move on this timeline 00:01:672 - ?

00:25:072 to 00:26:605 - inccorect snap on drum snare, it should be 1/6 snapped. ( this part suddenly appeared 1/8 beat snap and the rest part on next is 1/6)

02:18:572 (138572|1) - add whistle? previous repeat chorus you added the whislte 01:14:172 (74172|1) -
02:30:972 (150972|0) - ^

03:25:072 (205072|3,205138|2,205205|1,205272|0) - something weird on this note, you can hear the BGM doesnt feels like 1/6 sound*. try put on 1/4 beatsnap?i can feel the sounds sync-ed very well.
03:25:738 (205738|1) - there's no sound in the BGM(except vocal but i dont recommend you add this), remove this.

03:44:372 - add 1 more note here?

04:01:072 - what short LNs are present to? can explain to me ?

it seems like you should change original artist metadata too. according to Lanturn's posting.

since he found artist metadata as 'Artist: 矢部野彦麿&琴姫With坊主ダンサーズ'

and exclamation point font of original title seems different with general things.

i think it's japanese ver font. anyway try to use '！' too.


if you didnt intend, change difficulty name to Akuryo Taisan. but it's still ok.