00:01:072 (1072|3,1172|1) - try this
http://puu.sh/epagf/999de2b130.jpg, then move this one to 00:01:472 (1472|3) - col 3 for better play experience
00:05:572 (5572|3) - remove this,not clearly sound here
00:06:672 - you miss a sound here,add it
00:07:472 (7472|3,7572|1) - make it just like 00:01:072
00:10:672 (10672|3) - move it to col2,and make 00:10:772 (10772|2) - to col4,becauz i think if you make it as 00:10:972 (10972|0,11072|1) - is better to play
00:16:172 - a chord sound here,add it at col 3
00:16:972 - same reason,add at 2
00:18:172 - same,2
umm im not sure if you ignore this chord on purpose,up to you w/
00:25:072 - lets do this
http://puu.sh/epbeN/96443fa960.jpg00:26:422 -
http://puu.sh/epbnT/fad638c82f.jpg00:26:938 (26938|3) - make it at col 3,then it can connect to 00:27:605 (27605|1) - this note better
00:36:072 (36072|2) - change to col 1,and 00:36:172 (36172|0) - make this to col4 for hand balance
00:41:272 (41272|3,41472|2) - ctrl+j
00:48:872 (48872|3,48972|2) - ctrl+j
00:54:572 (54572|0,54572|2,54572|3) - and 00:54:672 (54672|0,54672|3,54672|2) - not the same sounds right? make them different (try to make 00:54:672 (54672|2) - on col 2
01:20:972 (80972|0) - col 4
01:26:672 (86672|0,86772|2) - although heavy hit here,i recommand you can use hitsound to inside,remove
01:57:772 (117772|3,117872|2) - ctrl+j
01:58:372 (118372|2) - col2
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lets mod from here w/
02:55:372 (175372|3,175472|2) - also heavy sound as 03:02:605 - red line below,double notes plz
03:14:672 (194672|1,194672|2) - 1 note here is enough
03:31:372 (211372|3) - move this to the white line above 03:31:472 - will feel more comfortable
03:43:872 (223872|3,223872|0,223972|2,223972|0,223972|3,224172|3,224172|0,224272|1,224272|3,224272|0) - umm, up to you ><
repeat again lol
05:15:673 - add a LN here,i prefer at col1,then it end at 05:17:872 - ,same as 05:14:672 (314672|3) -
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