Hi.
[General]
- Background should be in 1024*768 or 800*600, are you forget to resize it?
[Gumming]
00:07:848 (1,1,1,1) - too much repeating on these slider. I think it should be separate better then now.
00:43:607 (2) - make it like this? >>
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/362687112,192,43607,2,0,B|112:120|184:80|184:80,1,140,0|8
00:53:620 (1) - move this slider's middle point to grid x:288 y:80
01:10:546 (4) - make it more beautiful. >>
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/362690416,192,70546,2,0,B|432:112|336:48|224:112|252:197,1,280,0|2
01:13:645 (4) - why not stack it at grid x:80 y:120 ?
01:14:361 (5) - add a repeating on this slider?
01:16:745 (3) - separate it to two slider? >>
http://puu.sh/GdmI01:20:797 (2,3,4) - stack them like these? >>
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/36269301:22:943 (2) - remove one repeating and add a circle at 01:23:658 ?
01:27:711 (2) - move it out to other grid?
01:39:392 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - these circle are not fit the music or vocal.
02:04:186 (2) - make it like this? >>
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/362696256,336,124186,2,0,B|320:256|176:152|256:64,2,280,0|8|0
02:09:192 (5) - move it out to other grid?
02:57:110 (2) - make it same as 00:43:607 (2) ?
03:16:659 (2) - ^ 02:04:186 (2) ?
03:21:665 (5) - move it out to other grid?
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I dont feel it is EASY diff, feel NORMAL diff more... @@
[Gnawing]
- wait... this diff is normal or hard? If it is normal, please change the Size of Circle to the large?
01:21:274 (3,4,5) - change them in to a slider?
01:29:141 (4) - move out to other grid?
01:46:306 (5) - ^
01:55:127 (1) - too far from the previous spinner..
02:06:808 (1,2,3,5,6,7,8) - dont make this style on normal diff, it will make the normal players confuse.
02:41:137 (4) - lol. make it more beautiful. >>
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/362703392,120,161137,2,0,B|328:96|248:136|256:240|336:272,1,255,0|8
03:19:281 (1,2,3,5,6,7,8) - dont make this style on normal diff, it will make the normal players confuse.
[Chewing]
00:11:662 (x) - add a circle at here?
00:19:291 (x) - ^
00:20:721 (5) - suggest end this slider at 00:21:198
00:25:012 (5) - add a New Combo.
00:26:919 (1) - move to grid x:256 y:40?
00:34:548 (x) - add a circle?
00:36:217 (5) - change to a slider and end at 00:36:694 ?
00:40:270 (4) - make it more beautiful. It is ugly @@
00:44:084 (6) - ^
00:49:806 (1) - remove this New Combo and start it at 00:50:759 (3) ?
00:51:713 (1) - remove this New Combo
00:55:527 (1) - end this spinner at 00:56:957 ? and start the next spinner at 00:57:196 ?
01:01:249 (1) - too far from the previous spinner...
01:48:928 (1,2,3,4) - move them out to other grid.
01:56:557 (8) - ugly slider again. make it more beautiful...
02:00:371 (7) - ^
02:02:994 (4) - add a New Combo
02:37:323 (4) - make it nicely...
02:39:230 (4) - ^
02:53:772 (5) - make it more beautiful
03:00:209 (4) - add a New Combo
03:09:030 (9) - make it more beautiful
03:12:844 (7) - ^
03:15:705 (5) - add a New Combo?
[Eating]
00:19:283 - add a circle?
00:31:449 (2,3,4) - make them close a bit.
00:33:356 (2,3,4) - ^
00:35:263 (2,3,4) - ^
00:37:170 (2,3,4) - ^
00:48:852 (6) - move it to the back red line. and here add a circle?
00:55:050 - add a circle?
00:55:527 (1,1) - same as [Chewing] suggest
01:11:500 (4,5,6) - make them close a bit.
01:13:407 (4,5,6) - ^
01:15:314 (4,5,6) - ^
01:17:221 (4,5,6) - ^
01:19:128 (4,5,6) - ^
01:21:036 (4,5,6) - ^
01:22:943 (4,5,6) - ^
01:52:027 (2,3) - ^
01:56:557 (1) - the repeating are be blocked on 01:55:842 (5,6), try to move it out.
02:05:139 (6) - move it to the back red line. and here add a circle?
02:17:417 (1,2) - make them close a bit.
02:19:205 (1,2,3) - ^
02:21:827 (3,4,5) - ^
02:23:734 (3,4,5) - ^
02:25:165 (1,2,3) - make it more beautiful...
02:53:772 (1) - the repeating are be blocked on 02:53:296 (7) , try to move it out.
02:58:302 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - make them close a bit...
03:09:030 (1) - the repeating are be blocked on 03:08:315 (6,7) , try to move it out.
03:17:612 (6) - move it to the back red line. and here add a circle?
03:23:811 - add a circle?
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Good Luck to you.