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[Gumming]
01:27:953 (3,1) - I hate this stack

[Gnawing]
I like it better with OD+1
00:40:274 (4) - more symmetrical? It looks better that way if the two ends of the slider line up more, right now it's a little sloppy.
00:51:717 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uh, ok. It's weird, though. Nevermind, you repeat it and it's better the second time.
00:53:147 (5,1) - spacing error? Nevermind, I like this.
01:24:139 (2,3,4) - Switch 2 and 3, because 2 gets overlapped out, and then move 4 down? Unless you increased the OD then it's actually fine as it is

There's parts that are exactly the same and might be better with a flip?

[Eating]
Maybe [Gnashing]? or something with a G

00:42:419 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - strange spacing
Grid level 2 makes weird spacing all over the place, which makes stuff weird looking. But I can tell where everything's supposed to go anyways.
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General:

wtf. Why is there a desktop.cfg in the Song Folder??? Delete it and Full Submit.

Gumming:

Normal Mod~
01:30:576 (4,5) - Make it like this?


Nazi Mod~
01:26:046 (2,4) - Move (4) up 1 Grid to align with (2)

Gnawing

Normal Mod~
01:29:384 (4,5) - Spacing
Adding on to that, AIMod detects lots of spacing "errors". I've found that some are errors, some aren't, you just take a look.

Eating:

Combo Mod~
01:41:304 (5) - New Combo.
02:15:633 (5) - ^
02:19:447 (11) - ^
02:23:262 (8) - ^

Normal Mod~
02:33:513 (4) - Flip vertically
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All the other modders took care of pretty much everything that I could see. Although I do agree with Dusty on how grid level 2 on [Eating] does produce some odd spacing, but also agree that I do know where everything goes.
Here you go, a star for you.
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Gummy~:
00:53:624 (1) - Eww slider. Probably make it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7367
01:10:550 (4) - Lopsided slider. I'm not going to say anything, because I'm not experienced on fine tuning, but it's obviously lopsided ;~;
01:56:561 (3) - Move end of slider down 1 level 3 grid

Gnawy!:
00:45:518 (9) - Add clap <3~
01:27:476 (1) - This slider is a tiny bit off. You'll need to turn off grid snap to fine-tune this.
02:53:777 (5) - Move (starting from the bottom (repeat) of the slider) the 2nd slider adjusty thing 3 grids left.
03:09:034 (9) - ^

Nomming~:
02:06:573 (2) - Move this slider's end northwest 1 grid
02:15:633 (5,6,7,8) - I don't like how this pattern is continuing without a new combo or anything when the focus has changed from the vocals to the guitar


I laid off on the hitsound modding upon request ;~;.
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[General]
The intro storyboard almost felt kind of wasted since you don't show anything for the first 8 seconds. I just saw the pie chart moving verrry slowly with a black screen and I just skipped past. Didn't even realized there was a storyboard to enjoy during that part until I came back to edit. Also, don't forget the seizure warnings.
I don't know if you're one of the people opposed to kiai usage, but the final chorus feels like it would be an appropriate place for a kiai, and it would go well with the storyboarding.

[Gumming]
00:43:611 (2) - This slider looks kind of weird with it almost ending lined up over the 1, but not quite.
01:16:749 (3) - This just doesn't look good at all. Maybe do a smooth curve downwards so you don't partially cover the next combo?
01:22:947 (2,1,2,3) - This feels a little hard for an easy diff since it would be hard to tell when the repeating slider is going to end.
Boo on half-done difficulty.

[Gnawing]
Holy difficulty jump.
In general, the sliders don't look very good (inconsistent curves and such).
00:53:624 (1) - Anti-jump intentional?
01:18:894 (2,3,4) - Since you're going at a 45 degree angle, turn off grid snap when you're lining these up. The editor auto-snaps 45 and 90 degree angles.
01:40:350 (2, 4) - Maybe lower the volume on these two to go with the vocals.
01:47:979 (1) - The volume changes you do here are very subtle. Maybe do a more drastic volume change so it'll be noticed better?
With the last chorus, at least do a horizontal or vertical flip to the copy/pasted stuff.

[Eating]
00:39:558 (6,7) - Lower these two and put them in the center of the square.
00:43:373 (5,6) - This spacing just looked weird since it's obvious you ran out of mapping room. It played fine, but just looks off.
01:30:218 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - This rhythm felt really weird due to the pseudo triplets with the vocals and the rather quiet hit sounds to reduce feedback to the player.
01:40:350 (2, 4) - Maybe lower the volume on these two to go with the vocals.
02:18:494 (6,7,8) - Even up the spacing between these. Grid level 2, bleh.
02:37:089 (3,4,5) - ^
02:38:996 (3,4,5) - ^
02:59:737 (2,3,4) - ^
03:15:948 (6,7) - Lower these two and put them in the center of the square.
03:16:901 (2,3,4) - More grid 2 spacing unevenness.
Even with the weird level 2 grid spacing, it still read fine... it just made the map look very unpolished.
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SB:

Starting from 00:30:738 to 00:38:366, it really feels that something is missing at the large white ticks. Consider using the using the "top" "bottom" etc etc too in these ticks.

(i know that these are not the difficulty names... but was too lazy to memorize them >_>)

Normal:

00:50:763 (2) - Consider stacking this under (1)
01:11:742 (1,2) - Consider deleting them
02:32:797 (1) - It really felt that it was missing a repeat. Consider adding enough repeats so it would end at 02:32:797 (1) -
03:04:266 (2) - Again... consider stacking this under (1)

Hard:

00:47:902 (1) - I see this slider, and i only think "lol fail symmetry". Make it more asymmetrical, or make it more symmetrical... Lol. This applies to the other copiers
00:53:624 (1) - Same as above, but this one is not that horrible like the one above. You may just do nothing to this one. This applies to the other copiers
02:37:327 (4) - I dont like this kind of sliders
03:22:384 (1) - Another fail symmetry x:
02:19:209 (1,2,3) - These 3 spacing =/= 02:23:738 (3,4,5) those three spacing... :x etc etc etc
Im feeling like im being a nazi...

Insane:

In this difficulty i didnt saw any sliders that made me thing "lol fail symmetry".
01:55:369 (3) - This circle is kind of too hidden... At least for me, consider changing its position?

Also delete desktop.ini
You may have to delete your own map, and download it from here to be able to see that file
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Naiz, Star ;)
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Revived!!
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Gumming

00:44:565 (3,4,5,1) - Move up 1 unit. (Fixes the square shape)

01:13:411 (3) - Move left 1 unit. (Straightens the combo)

02:58:068 (3,4,5,1) - Move down 1 unit. (Fixes the square shape)



Gnawing

These are technically all opinions.

00:45:995 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is awkward. The spacing is too high to constitute this kind of placement of the beats. It's to mechanical to feel the beat.

01:20:801 (3,4,5,6) - Very awkward.

01:22:708 (3,4,5,6) - ^

01:58:707 (1,2,3,4,5) - Awkward. (Too mechanical)

02:59:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Awkward.( Too mechanical)

03:11:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^



Eating

Again I don't like the flow of this beatmap.

00:45:995 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too mechanical!!!

01:20:801 (3,4,5,6) - Awkward.

01:22:709 (3,4,5,6) - ^

01:27:476 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I suggest you break this combo up into smaller ones, because you change the snap so much in it.

01:48:932 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Awkward. Too mechanical.

01:50:839 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Break this combo up to cover the multiple snaps.

02:04:189 (1,2,3,4) - Don't space things like this please.



I guess I'll give you a late star.
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[Gumming]
Looks fine.

[Gnawing]
00:46:361 (4) Move the Beat 1 unit to the right (fix diamond shape)
00:53:624 (1) Space it same as (1-5)?

[Eating]
00:43:373 (5-6) Space it same as (1-4)?


This map feels awkward, especially with the Grid Level at 2.
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STAR!1
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Revived!!
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[SB]
01:48:694 - lolPink. No problems, just pointing it out :P

[Gum]
00:47:902 (3) - Er, yeah. This slider could be a lot better. If you don't need this to blanket (1), then try this (If it overlaps the next beats, then flip it horizontally, I guess:

03:01:405 (3) - ^
Other than that, the rest is good.

[Gnaw]
Nothing too bad.

[Chew]
Nothing Either

[Eat]
Nothing
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Gumming
00:40:274 (4) - New combo
01:22:947 (2) - I would suggest you not stack these. They're spaced too far away from the timeline.
01:25:808 (1,2,3,4) - Perhaps H-Flip this combo. The previous combo also pointed that way.
01:29:860 (3,4,5) - All are spaced the same in the timeline but (3) and (4) have larger spacing. It's readable though.
02:53:776 (4) - New combo

Gnawing
01:22:947 (7) - Same comment as on [Gumming]. Though it is a Normal this time.
01:29:145 (4) - ^
02:02:759 (3,4) - Spacing -- It's readable though
02:25:884 (2,3) - Spacing. IMO it would look better like this
03:15:232 (3,4) - Spacing -- Readable as is.

Chewing
00:53:624 (1) - I would suggest moving it away further. Unless it's an intentional anti-jump?
00:55:531 (1,1,1) - I don't recommend putting three spinners right after each other. Maybe you could remove the last one.
01:23:662 (x) - Add note here
02:02:283 (1,2,3,4,5) - People usually associate this with a box pattern. I suggest switching (4) and (5)'s position.

Eating
00:55:531 (1,1,1) - Same comment as in [Chewing]. Though it is an Insane...
01:30:218 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Why did you shift from the lyrics to the drums in the same combo. Confusing IMO.
02:03:236 (5,6) - Spacing. There's nothing to indicate an anti-jump here at all. (Like placing it in the center of two spaced notes.)

Overall
Sliders were not so well made...
I didn't quite like how [Eating] was mapped. Small notes + large spacing. It's just my opinion though.
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NoHItter wrote:

Gumming
00:40:274 (4) - New comboThis would make my combo's weird and I really like keeping them the same, not to mention the a later combo lasts just as long in terms of time, I don't see why this combo can't have four notes
01:22:947 (2) - I would suggest you not stack these. They're spaced too far away from the timeline. Fixed
01:25:808 (1,2,3,4) - Perhaps H-Flip this combo. The previous combo also pointed that way.Agreed
01:29:860 (3,4,5) - All are spaced the same in the timeline but (3) and (4) have larger spacing. It's readable thoughIntended to avoid ugly slider overlap..
02:53:776 (4) - New comboLook above

Gnawing
01:22:947 (7) - Same comment as on [Gumming]. Though it is a Normal this time.Look above
01:29:145 (4) - ^^
02:02:759 (3,4) - Spacing -- It's readable thoughYou said it yourself, it's readable
02:25:884 (2,3) - Spacing. IMO it would look better like thisFixed it to that, what I had was ugly anyway
03:15:232 (3,4) - Spacing -- Readable as is.Said it yourself

Chewing
00:53:624 (1) - I would suggest moving it away further. Unless it's an intentional anti-jump?Yes it is
00:55:531 (1,1,1) - I don't recommend putting three spinners right after each other. Maybe you could remove the last one.Merged the second two
01:23:662 (x) - Add note hereCouldn't really find a good place for it.
02:02:283 (1,2,3,4,5) - People usually associate this with a box pattern. I suggest switching (4) and (5)'s position.I think the combo line things make it readable enough IMO

Eating
00:55:531 (1,1,1) - Same comment as in [Chewing]. Though it is an Insane...It is indeed an insane, and I think it fits rather well
01:30:218 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Why did you shift from the lyrics to the drums in the same combo. Confusing IMO.Fixed added a new combo, but had to add another so my OCD wouldn't bother me
02:03:236 (5,6) - Spacing. There's nothing to indicate an anti-jump here at all. (Like placing it in the center of two spaced notes.I don't know how I missed that, fixed
Thank you
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Gummin diff:

00:45:042 (4,5,1) - im sure this was intentional but no this bothers me.(spacing)

01:25:808 (1,2,3) - spacing error

Gnawin:

01:09:358 (2,3,4,5) - 4 and 5 have slightly more space between then compared to 2 and 3

01:12:934 (1,2,3) - un-even

02:27:553 (4,5,6,7) - different spacing

I saw nothing wrong with Chewing.

I have not yet looked at Biting though. Will do that tommorow when i have a bit more time.

Star.
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Oh god, this SB.

General:
I feel kind of bad about this map only having two combo colors. Maybe you could toss in another green, still dark but a different tinge than the first?

Gumming:
This feels like it's trying to be an easy, but some of the hitcircle patterns feel like they're a normal difficulty.

Gnawing:
Nothing to see here.

Chewing:
You can move AR a notch to the right, I'd say.
01:54:892 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'd move these all down a bit so that the curve to 7 isn't as sharp, but this is just nitpicking.
01:56:561 (8) - Move the center-middle node down 4 notches to make the slider symmetrical. If that was your intention.
02:00:375 (7) - Oh hey, it's a catmull slider. I'd suggest making this a linear with a similar pattern, while the rest of the map uses curves, a sudden switch to linear here wouldn't be a mood-breaker since it's a crucial part of the song.
02:09:911 (1) - Move final node down 1 grid.
02:53:777 (5) - Same as 1:56. Maybe this was intentional.
03:09:034 (9) - ^
03:12:848 (7) - same as 2:00's.

Eating:
No real problems here, the square patterns started to get boring, but you had enough unpredictable patterns to keep it interesting otherwise.
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<Storyboard>
01:52:747 (1) - While this part might be covered entirely by a spinner in all difficulties, it's just conventional to continue the strobes through this. Besides, in CTB they'll see this fully.

[Gumming]
01:08:881 (1,2,3,4) - This might be my slight alignment OCD twitching, but are these intentionally mis-aligned?

[Gnawing]
01:45:118 (1,2,3,4,5) - Separate (5) from the rest.
02:08:481 (5,6,7,8) - These don't look spaced-out nicely. Move (6) up a grid, if you may.
02:23:262 (7,8) - This is a precarious slider stack. You might want to move (8) away instead of stacking (7) on it.
03:20:954 (5,6,7,8) - Same with 02:08:481.

[Chewing]
02:02:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Random spacing. No-no.
Starting from 02:15:633 to 02:28:983, the spacing seems to have changed noticeably. Specifically, it seems to have become smaller by this mark.
03:14:756 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same with 02:02:283.

[Eating]
Ugh, with the grid level at only two, the spacing seems to be wonky in random times. There's too many spacing issues here.
00:42:419 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Here's an example. Look at the spacing between (4) and (5) and compare it to the rest.
00:55:531 (1,1,1) - Why three spinners?
01:14:603 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Random spacing by the second half. Doesn't look that good.

<General>
This is more of an advice rather than a suggestion: if you have different patterns, try to space them out nicely. You don't want them to look cluttered and messy.
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vytalibus wrote:

<Storyboard>
01:52:747 (1) - While this part might be covered entirely by a spinner in all difficulties, it's just conventional to continue the strobes through this. Besides, in CTB they'll see this fully. Fixed.

[Gumming]
01:08:881 (1,2,3,4) - This might be my slight alignment OCD twitching, but are these intentionally mis-aligned?Fixing this is a tad hard since the slider won't behave the way I want it to, besides, it's not that bad.

[Gnawing]
01:45:118 (1,2,3,4,5) - Separate (5) from the rest.Agreed
02:08:481 (5,6,7,8) - These don't look spaced-out nicely. Move (6) up a grid, if you may. All better
02:23:262 (7,8) - This is a precarious slider stack. You might want to move (8) away instead of stacking (7) on it.Yeah, I tend to use stacks in a bad way sometimes, should be better now.
03:20:954 (5,6,7,8) - Same with 02:08:481.Fixed

[Chewing]
02:02:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Random spacing. No-no.Just goes in a square now.
Starting from 02:15:633 to 02:28:983, the spacing seems to have changed noticeably. Specifically, it seems to have become smaller by this mark.This was kinda intentional, I didn't really want to make the spacing as large as it was for this section and to me it feels a tad more natural.
03:14:756 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same with 02:02:283.Same as above

[Eating]
Ugh, with the grid level at only two, the spacing seems to be wonky in random times. There's too many spacing issues here.
00:42:419 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Here's an example. Look at the spacing between (4) and (5) and compare it to the rest.I am gonna go through the whole song and check the spacing fixing it a level 3.
00:55:531 (1,1,1) - Why three spinners?I already got a comment on this before, but considering two people complained, that might mean two more people will complain, and then two more, and then. You get the point, fixed.
01:14:603 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Random spacing by the second half. Doesn't look that good. I really don't know how I, or anyone else noticed this, it's so obvious.

<General>
This is more of an advice rather than a suggestion: if you have different patterns, try to space them out nicely. You don't want them to look cluttered and messy.
Your mod is greatly appreciated.
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(sorry I'm just back from lunch.)

~all grids = grid lv3 unless specified~

[general]
I'm not sure about this: mp3 @ 256 kbps, compress the mp3?

[Eating]
00:31:930 (5,6) - Suggestion: up 1 grid so that the spacing is better and (2,3,4,5) forms a stright line <3
00:33:837 (5,6) - down 1 grid for the same reason^
00:38:843 (3,5) - up 1 grid (when (1,2,4) are flipped vertically they are 1 grid above (3,5)
00:43:373 (5,6) - up 2 grids to maintain even spacing (as long as they don't touch HP bar? o_o
00:45:518 (4) - down 2 grids
00:47:902 (1,2,3,4) - uneven spacing
00:48:856 (6) - suggestion: maybe clap at ending instead of beginning?
00:53:624 (1) - adjust the shape a bit so that the ending position is on last combo's (3)
01:14:603 (1,2) - (1) right 1 grid, (2) left 1 grid so that (1,2,4,6) forms a rectangle and (1,2) is in correct spacing
01:20:324 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - uneven spacing?
01:27:476 (1,2,3) - ^
01:54:892 (1,2,3,4,5) - uneven spacing
01:56:561 (1) - adjust the shape so that the ending position stacks on (5)
02:04:428 (2,3,4) - uneven spacing
02:13:726 (1,3,5,7) - clap at beginning?
02:41:141 (4) - right 2 grids
02:51:869 (1,2,3) - these spacing looks odd to me orz
02:53:061 (6) - up 1 grid?
03:02:359 (6) - suggestion: maybe clap at ending instead of beginning?
03:07:365 (2,3,4,5,6) - uneven spacing


better check the spacing issues again~

[Chewing]
00:44:803 (7,8) - delete them, a 1 beat slider may work?
00:53:624 (1) - make this slider more symmetrical...
01:20:324 (1) - left+down 1 grid
01:43:687 (2,3,4) - down 1 grid
02:09:911 (1) - make this slider more symmetrical
02:26:599 (3) - remove whistle at ending?

[Gnawing]
01:47:979 (3,6,3,6) - clap?
01:08:481 (5,6,7,8) - arrange them in stright line?
02:28:506 (7,1) - spacing

[Gumming]
ok for me

star~

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