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vytalibus wrote:

<Storyboard>
01:52:747 (1) - While this part might be covered entirely by a spinner in all difficulties, it's just conventional to continue the strobes through this. Besides, in CTB they'll see this fully. Fixed.

[Gumming]
01:08:881 (1,2,3,4) - This might be my slight alignment OCD twitching, but are these intentionally mis-aligned?Fixing this is a tad hard since the slider won't behave the way I want it to, besides, it's not that bad.

[Gnawing]
01:45:118 (1,2,3,4,5) - Separate (5) from the rest.Agreed
02:08:481 (5,6,7,8) - These don't look spaced-out nicely. Move (6) up a grid, if you may. All better
02:23:262 (7,8) - This is a precarious slider stack. You might want to move (8) away instead of stacking (7) on it.Yeah, I tend to use stacks in a bad way sometimes, should be better now.
03:20:954 (5,6,7,8) - Same with 02:08:481.Fixed

[Chewing]
02:02:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Random spacing. No-no.Just goes in a square now.
Starting from 02:15:633 to 02:28:983, the spacing seems to have changed noticeably. Specifically, it seems to have become smaller by this mark.This was kinda intentional, I didn't really want to make the spacing as large as it was for this section and to me it feels a tad more natural.
03:14:756 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same with 02:02:283.Same as above

[Eating]
Ugh, with the grid level at only two, the spacing seems to be wonky in random times. There's too many spacing issues here.
00:42:419 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Here's an example. Look at the spacing between (4) and (5) and compare it to the rest.I am gonna go through the whole song and check the spacing fixing it a level 3.
00:55:531 (1,1,1) - Why three spinners?I already got a comment on this before, but considering two people complained, that might mean two more people will complain, and then two more, and then. You get the point, fixed.
01:14:603 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Random spacing by the second half. Doesn't look that good. I really don't know how I, or anyone else noticed this, it's so obvious.

<General>
This is more of an advice rather than a suggestion: if you have different patterns, try to space them out nicely. You don't want them to look cluttered and messy.
Your mod is greatly appreciated.
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(sorry I'm just back from lunch.)

~all grids = grid lv3 unless specified~

[general]
I'm not sure about this: mp3 @ 256 kbps, compress the mp3?

[Eating]
00:31:930 (5,6) - Suggestion: up 1 grid so that the spacing is better and (2,3,4,5) forms a stright line <3
00:33:837 (5,6) - down 1 grid for the same reason^
00:38:843 (3,5) - up 1 grid (when (1,2,4) are flipped vertically they are 1 grid above (3,5)
00:43:373 (5,6) - up 2 grids to maintain even spacing (as long as they don't touch HP bar? o_o
00:45:518 (4) - down 2 grids
00:47:902 (1,2,3,4) - uneven spacing
00:48:856 (6) - suggestion: maybe clap at ending instead of beginning?
00:53:624 (1) - adjust the shape a bit so that the ending position is on last combo's (3)
01:14:603 (1,2) - (1) right 1 grid, (2) left 1 grid so that (1,2,4,6) forms a rectangle and (1,2) is in correct spacing
01:20:324 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - uneven spacing?
01:27:476 (1,2,3) - ^
01:54:892 (1,2,3,4,5) - uneven spacing
01:56:561 (1) - adjust the shape so that the ending position stacks on (5)
02:04:428 (2,3,4) - uneven spacing
02:13:726 (1,3,5,7) - clap at beginning?
02:41:141 (4) - right 2 grids
02:51:869 (1,2,3) - these spacing looks odd to me orz
02:53:061 (6) - up 1 grid?
03:02:359 (6) - suggestion: maybe clap at ending instead of beginning?
03:07:365 (2,3,4,5,6) - uneven spacing


better check the spacing issues again~

[Chewing]
00:44:803 (7,8) - delete them, a 1 beat slider may work?
00:53:624 (1) - make this slider more symmetrical...
01:20:324 (1) - left+down 1 grid
01:43:687 (2,3,4) - down 1 grid
02:09:911 (1) - make this slider more symmetrical
02:26:599 (3) - remove whistle at ending?

[Gnawing]
01:47:979 (3,6,3,6) - clap?
01:08:481 (5,6,7,8) - arrange them in stright line?
02:28:506 (7,1) - spacing

[Gumming]
ok for me

star~

maps for mod4mod http://osu.ppy.sh/s/18783 thanks!
posted
Just so you know, the bit rate is fine due to when this map was submitted. As for the rest of the mod, I haven't looked at it yet, I will look at it after I mod your map.
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[Gumming]
Lower HP Drain, AR, OD by 1 (or even 2)
00:52:194 (4,1) - novices may expects, that slider (4) ends at up point. Turn (4) down?
02:01:329 (5) - move it to 02:01:091 + add clap?
03:13:802 (5) - ^

[Gnawing]
01:21:993 (6,7), 01:27:953 (3,4) - I don't really like these anti-jumps..
02:23:738 - add circle?

[Chewing]
00:36:936 (1) - this is sudden spinner for me. Start it at 00:36:221 maybe?
00:57:557 (1) - well, end this spinner at 00:59:345 and add another one from 00:59:465 to 01:00:776?
02:17:778 (2,3) - not in stack?
nice

[Eating]
00:57:557 (1) - like in [Chewing]
I'm noob with such triples, but cool diff (and cool jumps :D)

hope this will be ranked..
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I'll just suggest what could be done easily + not racking your intention

[Chewing]
01:45:118 (1,2,3,4) - this could have moved to the right a bit so it won't overlap with the slider and it also fixes the spacing problem for #4

[Gnawing]
00:40:274 (5) - could have done a better job on this. Might want to fix that if you have time

[Gumming]
Etna sliders aren't that recommended for an easiest difficulty. New players do find it pretty hard and go 'wha?'

Great pause effect
posted
[General]

BG,White,Black: resize : 800x600 or 1024x768

Kiai Mod

Kiai needed on this map ~

I'm not going to tell you the time, you know better x]


Add sound Finish - in places where it is needed
This will add the power of song

eg:

00:38:366
00:45:995
00:49:810
00:53:624
01:58:468
02:06:097
02:09:911
02:51:869
02:55:684
03:03:312
03:07:127
03:10:941
03:14:756
03:18:570
03:22:384

the song ends badly :(

gradual disappearance would look better

Mostly good...
Skillet - my favorite band

star~
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White and black are fine as 640X480 covers the BG. The BG is fine the way it looks and the SB was made with the way the SB is, so I don't want to change the SB.

Kiai is not needed in this map as to me, the chorus does not stand out as epic enough to constitute kiai and there are no sections that stand out, so no.

I don't really listen to hitsound mods after I find I don't agree with the first few suggestions.

The song ends badly as it's supposed to go into the next song on the album, making a fade out would work, but possibly change the offset of the song making it one hell of a time to fix the SB.

Sorry, I appreciate the effort and star, but I didn't agree with anything. Still cool that Skillet is your favorite band.
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[General]
Can't you map the start (00:07:613 or so), It's kinda a pity to see the probably most interesting part of the SB being skippible for no reason when that part is quite mappable.

I suggest you crop the BG to 500x375 as you don't need more than that as a 1:1 BG is pretty stupid in osu!. 4:3 is what's best if you wanna use everything

Can't say I'm that found of difficulty names like that but I guess you like it that way.

01:08:881 - 01:23:424 Why not use some hitsounds here.

[Gumming]
Make the circle size bigger?

00:43:611 (2,3) - Align?
02:57:114 (2,3) - ^
01:11:742 (1,2) - I think it would be better if you remove these circles and add a circle at 01:11:981. Sounds much better to me that way.
01:13:173 (2,4) - Align?
02:23:500 (4,5) - Move down a grid?

[Gnawing]
01:11:742 (6,7) - Same thing as Gumming
01:15:557 (6,7) - I think it sounds a lot better if you move it back 1/2 on the timeline.

[Chewing]
I suggest you lower the AD so it's the same as the OD

00:53:624 (1) - Can't you space it a bit further away from (5), The spacing is a bit weird as you make the spacing in a special way for an combo and then do a instant anti-jump. Also can't you make it symmeric and more pretty
02:09:911 (1) - ^
03:22:384 (1) - ^

[Eating]

00:49:333 - Add circle (Considering the way the rhythms are in this difficulty this stood out.)
02:05:620 - ^
01:23:900 - 01:29:860 - Probably a good idea to add some more beats here. It feels wrong that the more intense part is less intensive on beats than the slow one.
02:21:950 (4,5) - Should be in 1/3

Zzzzzz.
*star*
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-It would be nice if you could fade out the end of the mp3, it ends pretty suddenly right now
-Odd background...but the storyboard is nicely done

Gumming:
00:47:902 (3), 00:52:194 (4,1) - in my opinion stuff like this looks better when they don't overlap
01:10:550 (4) - sliders like this could be nazi'ed more if you wanted them to look slightly more symmetrical
03:01:405 (3,1), 03:05:697 (4,1) - same overlapping comment as earlier
03:16:663 (2,1) - ^

Gnawing:
00:07:852 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - you might as well mirror all of these patterns at the start? (They are near enough mirrored anyway)
01:39:396 (1,2,3,4) - all of the other difficulties have claps on this entire section, sounds empty right here at the moment
01:43:211 (1,4) - move so they don't overlap?
02:23:262 (7,8) - ^

Chewing:
00:23:109 (1,5) - stack these seeing as the rest of the notes in the pattern already are
00:53:147 (5,1) - spacing (anti jumps like this don't play too well)
01:23:662 (8) - kind of odd there is no note here when all of the ones before had one
01:26:761 (4,1) - try to space out more
01:44:641 (4,1) - keep spacing equal
02:09:434 (5,1) - spacing
03:21:907 (5,1) - spacing

Eating:
00:37:889 (6,1) - space out more
01:21:755 (8,1) - ^
01:23:662 - add a note here?
01:30:218 (1,2,3,4) - these confused me while playing as everything before this followed the lyrics and these go off of it
01:47:979 (5) - you might want to put new combos on all the spacing changes like this so they they are easier to read?
02:25:169 (1,2,3) - this whole pattern could look alot neater

The maps are pretty solid in general, I would just go through and try and make sure all of your spacing stays consistent and clean up a few patterns
posted
revived this
posted
May I mod this?forgive my poor English.

[overall]
have a standard size of background image is better(like 800x600 or 1024x768)
some slider's shape looks like so strange,make them more beautiful :roll:

[Gumming]
01:13:649 (4) - Don't overlap
01:20:801 (2,3,4) - ^

[Gnawing]
01:39:396 (1,2) - stacked incorrectly
02:08:719 (6) - 1grid down

[Chewing]
all fine

[Eating]
01:55:845 (5,1) - Blocking out the reverse
02:53:300 (7,1) - ^
03:08:557 (7,1) - ^

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/28919 <-can you mod this ?
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[general]
your sliders could be made much better.
Not sure how I feel about the background not being 4:3. Would this work better?
http://up.ppy.sh/files/album-alien-youth2.jpg
Having the text half showing in the gameplay screen looks kinda bad
You're using some catmull sliders. They have been removed from the editor since they are considered ugly. You don't have to get rid of them, but it's a good idea.
A lot of times you have claps on every white tick. I think it would sound better to be on just the 2nd and 4th.

[storyboard]
reduce the transparency of the flashes please
IMO, top/bottom/left/right flashes would be better with a tweening of 1, and perhaps be a little bit shorter.
Circle.png has weird values for tweening:
 C,24063,24063,25016,255,0,0,255,255,255
change the first number to 0,1, or 2
the background pulse IMO looks better when subtle. I thought it looked good with a scale from 1.3 to 1.31 and a fade tweening of 1.
This loop is more accurate for really long loops (those 40 loops get off time quick)
 L,,
F,0,0,477,1,0
F,0,477,945,1,0
F,0,954,1430,1,0
F,0,1430,1907,1,0
F,0,1907,2384,1,0
You've got the flashes doubled at 107979 (it's in foreground, passing, and failing)


[gum]
00:07:852 (1,1,1,1) - symmetry about the axes would be nice
00:47:902 (3) - Either rotate the slider some or make the ends match up vertically. It looks bad 1 grid off, like you were trying for symmetry but failed.
01:16:749 (3) - an idea for some of these sliders that do not have perfectly ellipical shapes: make the 2nd node a red node to give it a sharp edge.

[gnaw]
00:09:759 (5,6) - weird spacing
AImod lists 3 spacing errors too.

[chew]
02:21:831 (3,4) - this is cruel and unusual. Make it a repeating slider.
02:23:858 (4) - remove this and put circles here: 02:23:619 and 02:24:096
02:25:050 - add
02:37:327 (4) - spirals never work well. I think they are better when you go inwards rather than out (I also made you a delicious spiral):
296,120,157327,2,0,B|320:136|336:160|328:200|320:224|296:240|256:264|224:248|192:232|
02:39:234 (4) - you might have the first slider going in, and the second slider going out, idk. Press ctrl-R to reverse the slider.

[eat]
Should have a "devouring" difficulty
Theres a ton of places you can add 1/4 notes to map the drums. The under 10 million limit got changed to under 16, so you'll be fine.
00:20:248 (4) - end on the white tick
00:44:565 (1,2,3,4) - this is sorta boring add notes:
00:44:922, 00:45:638, 00:45:757, 00:45:876
02:06:097 (1,2) - not symmetrical
02:21:831 (3,4,5) - anti-jump triplet? that's just evil. Also, the guitarist holds the (5) note, so you should probably merge 5 and 6.
02:32:559 - I was thinking a full screen 1/2 jump would be good here, like 3.45x
03:03:074 (7) - I don't have a problem with silencing the end of a slider/spinner, but you can't silence notes.
03:18:570 (1,2) - not symmetrical
posted
I just want to make it clear that my computer is being bi-polar with working or not, but I'll try to get to your mods and maps asap.
posted
Ah one more thing I remembered.

Black.png is 640x480, but if you don't bring it in at 320,240 with a center origin, you'll get lines on the edge of the screen.
posted
Just keeping this alive until I can solve my whole computer issue.
posted
Mod4mod here :D

Mostly are suggestion only!You don't need to follow them if you disagree!

[General]
  1. You better to unify the Stack Leniency in all diff but this is not a big problem I guess.
  2. I think the offset is a bit later,I prefer 7848 (-4 from current),please resnap all note if you change it,also please check the mod first.
  3. The SB is <333


[Gumming]
  1. 00:26:447 (3,4) - oh,I guess finish hitsound doesn't fit there that much.I assume finish are only put on the accent point but it's totally a suggestion,feel free to ignore it.
  2. 00:38:366 (1) - ^Base on that,here is a accent point,so a finish is appropriate here imo.
  3. 00:52:194 (4) - I guess this is a easy diff,right?A short slider more them 3 reverse may make confused to newbie.
  4. 01:19:132 (4) - ^Same (I won't mention this again)
  5. 02:32:321(x) - I am really sorry,however 0% volume is not allowed now.You should turn it to 5% at least.I suggest you turn it to soft-5%.

Nice!

[Gnawing]
  1. 01:29:145 (4,5) - I'm totally not suggest stack here,1.5 beat is a bit to catch actually.
  2. 01:40:350 (2) - Probably move this right a bit?The end of the slider is not totallt stack on the end of (1)-
  3. 02:32:321 - Same as Easy.


[Chewing]
  1. 00:45:995 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern is a little bit hard to read,probably add a new combo on (5)-?
  2. 02:21:831 (3) - oh,this 1/3 is really awkard and it doesn't fit the music at all.I think simple 1/2 is good enough here.
  3. 02:31:605 (4) - Same as easy


[Eating]
  1. 01:05:186 (x) - Probably add a spinner here and let it stop at 01:07:928 - ?It's a little bit weird that you stuff a break here.
  2. 01:52:747 (x) - To follow you pattern,I'm highly don't suggest a spinner here maybe make it like 01:50:839 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this pattern?
  3. 02:32:321 (x) - Same as easy.

That's it ;)
Star!
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hi there! from #modreqs

[General]
unsnapped timing points! fix them? :3
make 1024x768 (or 800x600) BG
make same offset for every diff
add kiai?
0% hitsounds volume aren't allowed

let modders/players know where's Easy/Normal/Hard/Insane diffs
write it in "Creator's Word"

Slider Velocity too fast for each diff, IMO :/

:idea: - mostly rules or something. just keep in mind. i won't write down the same places anymore in this mod

[Gumming]
easy diff , right?
AR - 1 :/

:idea: 00:07:848 (1,1,1,1) - beginners aren't really good at reverse sliders. i think you shouldn't use more than one reverse for every slider :/
:idea: 00:26:443 (3,4) - use slider instead or something. 1/2 notes too hard
00:38:362 (1,4) - a bit overlapped with (1)'s hitburst
00:45:991 (1,3) - ^
:idea: 01:09:593 (2,4) - unacceptable pattern for Easy diff D:
01:20:320 (1,2,4,1,2) - ^ too many overlaps/hard to read


looks like we have some copy-paste patterns here D:

[Gnawing]
focus on placing notes at white lines. sometimes note placed on red tick between teo empty white line (when white lines are following rythm much better!)
OD and HP Drain -1 or -2
:idea: 00:10:227 (6) -no jumps/sudden spacing changes in normal?
01:12:211 (7,3) - overlap?
01:27:945 (3,4) - unreadable for normal D:
01:45:110 (1,2,3,4,5) - too hard
01:47:017 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - overusing 1/2 notes. imo no more than 3 1/2 notes in row is the best
02:08:473 (5,6,7,8) - unreadable for normal D:

[Chewing]
AiBAt 2.0 wrote
AR +1 or + 2
:idea: spacing feels random in some parts of map
:idea: some beats feels wrong. (example 00:11:185 (7) - reduce volume for notes like this) or skip them
00:20:721 (5) - 1/2 longer + add reverse
00:20:721 (5) - circle here?
00:38:362 - not spinner end but circle should be placed here, imo
01:46:544 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - har to read :<
03:16:659 (1,1) - stack properly :idea: check map! i think there's a lot of places where you can stack notes :3
03:20:950 (2,3,4,5) - somehow slider for vocals fells better
03:22:380 (1) - 1/1 longer or circle at 03:23:811 -

[Eating]
most of problems are the same.
just check this diff out! :3

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
that's all. gl~
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I didn't follow everything you said but I agreed with somethings. I will say this again though (I believe I have mentioned it before), silent spinners and silent sliderends are perfectly okay, and those are the only things being affected by the 0% timing sections. So please quit saying that it's unrankable because it isn't.
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Don't give up!
posted
Hi. :)

[General]
- Background should be in 1024*768 or 800*600, are you forget to resize it?

[Gumming]
00:07:848 (1,1,1,1) - too much repeating on these slider. I think it should be separate better then now.
00:43:607 (2) - make it like this? >> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/362687
112,192,43607,2,0,B|112:120|184:80|184:80,1,140,0|8
00:53:620 (1) - move this slider's middle point to grid x:288 y:80
01:10:546 (4) - make it more beautiful. >> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/362690
416,192,70546,2,0,B|432:112|336:48|224:112|252:197,1,280,0|2
01:13:645 (4) - why not stack it at grid x:80 y:120 ?
01:14:361 (5) - add a repeating on this slider?
01:16:745 (3) - separate it to two slider? >> http://puu.sh/GdmI
01:20:797 (2,3,4) - stack them like these? >> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/362693
01:22:943 (2) - remove one repeating and add a circle at 01:23:658 ?
01:27:711 (2) - move it out to other grid?
01:39:392 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - these circle are not fit the music or vocal.
02:04:186 (2) - make it like this? >> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/362696
256,336,124186,2,0,B|320:256|176:152|256:64,2,280,0|8|0
02:09:192 (5) - move it out to other grid?
02:57:110 (2) - make it same as 00:43:607 (2) ?
03:16:659 (2) - ^ 02:04:186 (2) ?
03:21:665 (5) - move it out to other grid?
----
I dont feel it is EASY diff, feel NORMAL diff more... @@

[Gnawing]
- wait... this diff is normal or hard? If it is normal, please change the Size of Circle to the large?
01:21:274 (3,4,5) - change them in to a slider?
01:29:141 (4) - move out to other grid?
01:46:306 (5) - ^
01:55:127 (1) - too far from the previous spinner..
02:06:808 (1,2,3,5,6,7,8) - dont make this style on normal diff, it will make the normal players confuse.
02:41:137 (4) - lol. make it more beautiful. >> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/362703
392,120,161137,2,0,B|328:96|248:136|256:240|336:272,1,255,0|8
03:19:281 (1,2,3,5,6,7,8) - dont make this style on normal diff, it will make the normal players confuse.

[Chewing]
00:11:662 (x) - add a circle at here?
00:19:291 (x) - ^
00:20:721 (5) - suggest end this slider at 00:21:198
00:25:012 (5) - add a New Combo.
00:26:919 (1) - move to grid x:256 y:40?
00:34:548 (x) - add a circle?
00:36:217 (5) - change to a slider and end at 00:36:694 ?
00:40:270 (4) - make it more beautiful. It is ugly @@
00:44:084 (6) - ^
00:49:806 (1) - remove this New Combo and start it at 00:50:759 (3) ?
00:51:713 (1) - remove this New Combo
00:55:527 (1) - end this spinner at 00:56:957 ? and start the next spinner at 00:57:196 ?
01:01:249 (1) - too far from the previous spinner...
01:48:928 (1,2,3,4) - move them out to other grid.
01:56:557 (8) - ugly slider again. make it more beautiful...
02:00:371 (7) - ^
02:02:994 (4) - add a New Combo
02:37:323 (4) - make it nicely...
02:39:230 (4) - ^
02:53:772 (5) - make it more beautiful
03:00:209 (4) - add a New Combo
03:09:030 (9) - make it more beautiful
03:12:844 (7) - ^
03:15:705 (5) - add a New Combo?

[Eating]
00:19:283 - add a circle?
00:31:449 (2,3,4) - make them close a bit.
00:33:356 (2,3,4) - ^
00:35:263 (2,3,4) - ^
00:37:170 (2,3,4) - ^
00:48:852 (6) - move it to the back red line. and here add a circle?
00:55:050 - add a circle?
00:55:527 (1,1) - same as [Chewing] suggest
01:11:500 (4,5,6) - make them close a bit.
01:13:407 (4,5,6) - ^
01:15:314 (4,5,6) - ^
01:17:221 (4,5,6) - ^
01:19:128 (4,5,6) - ^
01:21:036 (4,5,6) - ^
01:22:943 (4,5,6) - ^
01:52:027 (2,3) - ^
01:56:557 (1) - the repeating are be blocked on 01:55:842 (5,6), try to move it out.
02:05:139 (6) - move it to the back red line. and here add a circle?
02:17:417 (1,2) - make them close a bit.
02:19:205 (1,2,3) - ^
02:21:827 (3,4,5) - ^
02:23:734 (3,4,5) - ^
02:25:165 (1,2,3) - make it more beautiful...
02:53:772 (1) - the repeating are be blocked on 02:53:296 (7) , try to move it out.
02:58:302 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - make them close a bit...
03:09:030 (1) - the repeating are be blocked on 03:08:315 (6,7) , try to move it out.
03:17:612 (6) - move it to the back red line. and here add a circle?
03:23:811 - add a circle?

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