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Hinoisuka - Delightness Brightness [OsuMania]

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SeonRae
102 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
SeonRae
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015년 5월 26일 화요일 at 오후 8:23:00

Artist: Hinoisuka
Title: Delightness Brightness
Source: G2R2014
Tags: SeonRae
BPM: 190
Filesize: 4543kb
Play Time: 01:56
Difficulties Available:
  1. EZ - 7Key (0.89 stars, 177 notes)
  2. HD - 7Key (3.02 stars, 1065 notes)
  3. MX - 7Key (4.55 stars, 1635 notes)
  4. NM - 7Key (1.66 stars, 497 notes)
  5. SC - 7Key (5.57 stars, 2188 notes)
Download: Hinoisuka - Delightness Brightness
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Please BN check... :cry:

[Note]
EZ : 100%　NM : 100%　HD : 100%　MX : 100%　SC : 100%

[Hitsound]
EZ : 100%　NM : 100%　HD : 100%　MX : 100%　SC : 100%





[Thanks modding]
Takane6　Fantastica　Rayz141　DrawdeX　Frim4503　rhalp10　schwarzvgrune　Pharos21

[Special Thanks]
Remillion Cross



[May 26, 2015]
─Modify creator ksr5445 → SeonRae
─Modify tags ksr5445 → SeonRae



[May 12, 2015]
┬Modify notes
└MX difficult



[May 8, 2015]
┬Modify notes
└NM difficult



[Apr 27, 2015]
─Change background image
─Turn off Widescreen support


[Apr 24, 2015]
┬Delete difficult
└4K SC difficult

┬Change difficulty name
├7K EZ → EZ
├7K NM → NM
├7K HD → HD
├7K MX → MX
└7K SC → SC


[Apr 20, 2015]
┬Modify notes
├7K EZ difficult
├7K NM difficult
├7K HD difficult
└7K MX difficult

┬Add hitsound
├7K EZ difficult
├7K NM difficult
├7K HD difficult
└7K MX difficult


[Apr 19, 2015]
┬Modify notes
└7K SC difficult

┬Add hitsound
└7K SC difficult



[Apr 1, 2015]
┬Modify notes
├7K NM difficult
└7K HD difficult

┬Add difficult
├4K EZ [0%]
├4K NM [0%]
├4K HD [0%]
├4K MX [0%]
└4K SC [1%]

┬Change difficulty name
├EZ → 7K EZ
├NM → 7K NM
├HD → 7K HD
├MX → 7K MX
└SC → 7K SC



[Mar 28, 2015]
┬Modify song setup
└Change the source G2R BOF2014 BMS → G2R2014



[Mar 27, 2015]
┬Modify notes
├HD difficult
└MX difficult



[Mar 23, 2015]
┬Add difficult
└EZ difficult

┬Modify notes
├NM difficult
└HD difficult

┬Notes resnap
└All difficult

┬Kiai resnap
└All difficult

┬Hp drain and Overall difficultly modify
└NM HD +2, OD +2
└HD HD +1.5, OD +1.5
└MX HD +1, OD +1
└SC HD +0.5, OD +1.5


[Jan 05, 2015]
┬Modify notes
├NM difficult
├HD difficult
├MX difficult
└SC difficult
─Change offset 0 → +61


[Dec 28, 2014(2)]
─Change mp3 qulity to 192kbps


[Dec 28, 2014(1)]
┬Change difficulty name
├7K EZ → NM
├7K NM → HD
├7K HD → MX
└7K MX → SC

┬Modify notes
├NM difficult
├HD difficult
└MX difficult
Last edited by SeonRae , edited 35 times in total.
Takane6
978 posts
Joined June 2014
Takane6
Hi from modding queue :D

column : 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

[General]
maybe the difficulty can be re-edit
7K EZ >> NM ( Because EZ map has never more than 2 star :3 )
7K NM >> HD ( Because NM map has never more than 3 star :3 )
7K HD >> MX ( Because HD map has never more than 4 star :3 )
7K MX >> SC ( Because MX map has never more than 5 star :3 )
Because this mapset is only 7K so dont need to add "7K"

after you have re-edit it... just take look at here :3
NM
00:08:210 (8210|1,8447|2) - ctrl + h
00:43:657 (43657|5,43815|3,43973|3,44131|3) - delete
00:44:210 - add note
00:45:710 (45710|0,45868|2,46026|5,46184|2,46263|3) - delete
00:45:473 - add note
00:46:105 (46105|3) - change into LN , end at 00:46:421
00:47:447 (47447|4,47605|4) - delete
00:48:710 (48710|5,48789|4,48868|5) - delete
00:48:631 (48631|6) - change into LN, end at 00:48:947
00:48:947 (48947|3) - change into LN, end at 00:49:263
00:49:026 (49026|2,49105|0,49184|1) - delete
01:05:842 (65842|1) - delete
01:05:684 (65684|3) - the sound tells that the LN should end at 01:06:000
01:08:210 (68210|1) - the sound tells that the LN should end at 01:08:842
01:13:263 (73263|3) - end at 01:14:526 maybe?
01:28:421 (88421|6) - move to 3 for pitch
01:41:052 (101052|2) - LN end at 01:41:210
01:41:447 (101447|4) - move to 01:41:368 but maintain the LN end at 01:41:684
This is NM difficulty... the SV may not good at this rate ><

HD
00:42:631 - add note for consistency (2 note for beat sound? )
00:42:947 - ^
00:44:210 - ^
00:45:473 - ^
00:46:736 - ^
00:48:000 - ^
00:51:157 (51157|2) - move to 4
00:51:157 (51157|6,51236|4,51315|6,51394|4,51473|6,51552|4,51631|6,51710|4,51789|6) - move to [3,5]
01:05:052 (65052|0,65131|1,65210|0,65289|1,65368|0) - make it stair note (from left to right ? )
01:06:947 - there's a sound here, add note
from 01:46:105 until 01:56:210 - unlike the other part, that part is a very hard part >< try to make it easier :3

MX
00:18:947 - add note for beat sound
00:19:263 - ^
00:19:578 - ^
00:19:894 - ^

SC
er... sounds good to me...
only the SV is en-read-able ><
Blizs
898 posts
Joined November 2013
Blizs
Hi~~~~
From my queue....
Key : 1|2|3|4|5|6|7


[General]
  1. I'm agree with last modder :3 this is 7K mapset... don't use 7K as diffs name
  2. Uh oh... no Kiai...I think Kiai better add from 01:36:000 to 01:51:157
  3. Change your mp3 quality to 192 Kbps...
[7K EZ]
  1. Oh no..... I realy against the SV change in EZ diff!! just use a netral SV
  2. 00:41:921 (41921|2,42000|3,42473|4,42552|3) - nono... don't do this this is 190 BPM mapset. for EZ i1/4 notes are hard to read by newbie
  3. 00:43:578 (43578|6,43657|5,43736|4,43815|3,43894|2,43973|3,44052|4,44131|3) - not again...
  4. 00:45:631 (45631|1,45710|0,45789|1,45868|2,45947|4,46026|5,46105|3,46184|2,46263|3) - ^^
  5. 00:47:368 (47368|5,47447|4,47526|3,47605|4,47684|0) - ^^
  6. 00:48:631 (48631|6,48710|5,48789|4,48868|5,48947|3,49026|2,49105|0,49184|1,49263|5) - ^^
  7. 00:51:157 (51157|3) - This long note should end at 00:51:789
  8. 00:49:894 (49894|1) - move to 3
  9. 00:49:894 (49894|1,51947|2,52026|1,52105|5,52578|2,52657|1,52736|5,53210|2,53289|1,53367|5) - Oh no.... 1/4 again
  10. 00:54:473 (54473|4,54552|5,54631|1,55105|2,55184|3,55263|4,55342|5,55421|4,55500|3) - ^^
  11. 00:57:000 (57000|2,57078|1,57157|5,57631|2,57710|1,57789|5,58263|2,58342|1,58421|5,58578|2,58657|4) - ^^
  12. 01:00:631 (60631|3) - move to 3
  13. 01:03:315 (63315|1,63394|2,63473|3) - again... 1/4
  14. 01:07:736 (67736|5,67815|4,67894|3) - ^^
  15. 01:09:000 (69000|5) - move to 5
  16. 01:16:894 (76894|3,76973|4,77052|5,79421|3,79500|2,79578|1) - again....
  17. 01:25:500 (85500|4) - remove
  18. 01:34:736 (94736|3,94894|6,95052|5,95210|4,95368|3,95526|2,95684|1,95842|0) - don't do this.... this is EZ right ?
  19. 01:51:394 (111394|4) - remove
[7K NM]
  1. Oh no..... I realy against the SV change in NM diff too!! just use a netral SV
  2. 00:17:605 (17605|1) - It's useless... remove
  3. 00:30:947 (30947|3) - Same as EZ
  4. 00:45:947 (45947|4,46026|4) - Oh no.... Jackhammer at NM.... Move 00:45:947 (45947|4) to 6
  5. 00:51:946 (51946|1,52025|1,52578|1,52657|1,53209|1,53288|1) - Jackhammer again T.T....
  6. 00:54:473 (54473|5,54552|5) - ^^
  7. 00:56:999 (56999|1,57078|1,57631|1,57710|1,58262|1,58341|1) - ^^
[7K HD]
  1. 01:03:315 (63315|5,63394|5,63473|5) - nono... don't 3 notes Jackhammer notes... do you want to make it EXHAUST ?
  2. 01:05:052 (65052|1,65131|1,65210|1,65289|1) - 4 notes Jackhammer ? =="
  3. 01:07:736 (67736|0,67815|0,67894|0) - again...
  4. 01:33:157 (93157|3,93236|3,93315|3,93394|3) - oh no... 4 notes jackhammer in middle T.T
[7K MX]
  1. 01:03:473 (63473|1) - Remove please....
  2. 01:05:052 (65052|6,65131|6,65210|6,65289|6) - No more please T.T
  3. 01:07:894 (67894|0) - remove please
  4. 01:33:157 (93157|3,93236|3,93315|3,93394|3) - Oh no...
Ok....
After I check the mapset, I'm agree with last modder
EZ -> NM
NM -> HD
HD -> MX
MX -> SC

Good luck :3
Rayz141
433 posts
Joined February 2013
Rayz141

from Astral Horizon Modding Team™


Keys: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

mod inside
[NM]
00:02:368 (2368|5) - move to 5
00:02:842 (2842|4,3000|2) - move 2 columns to the right
00:03:157 (3157|6) - ^if applied, move to 3
00:03:789 (3789|0,4105|0) - move to 5
00:04:421 (4421|6) - ^if applied, move to 3
00:04:578 (4578|4) - ^if applied, move to 7
00:04:894 (4894|1) - move to 1
00:07:894 (7894|1,8052|0) - move 5 columns to the right
00:08:210 (8210|5,8447|4,8684|3) - ^if applied, move 1 column to the left
00:26:526 (26526|5) - move to 3
00:27:789 (27789|0) - move to 7
00:33:473 (33473|1,33631|2,33789|3,33947|4) - Ctrl+H
00:38:210 - add note at 5
00:38:368 (38368|6) - move to 6

[HD]
00:02:684 (2684|4) - move to 3
00:02:842 (2842|6) - move to 4
00:38:368 (38368|6) - move to 5

[MX]
00:03:710 (3710|5) - move to 5
00:06:000 (6000|3) - move to 5
00:21:947 (21947|4) - move to 4
00:24:552 (24552|3) - move to 7

[SC]
00:03:710 (3710|5) - move to 2
00:06:000 (6000|3) - ^

oh right, i forgot
[General]
offset feels off, try changing it to 61 and do this:


should be fine for now, but i suggest to contact someone good at timing


sorry for short mod, can't really understand the style
GL4map~
arviejhay
1,413 posts
Joined August 2009
arviejhay
Hello sorry for the delay
School days
Mod req from "Mania New Modding Team" Queue

Column
1,2,3,4,5,6,7

[General]
Check AIMOD ALL DIFFS
You need EZ Diff
ask someone to GD


[NM]
00:04:639 (4639|6,4955|0) - move to all to 5 because same sound
00:16:166 - add a note on 6

[HD]
00:02:903 (2903|3) - move to 3
00:04:482 (4482|6) - move to 6 or its up to you if you want
00:19:008 - suggestion pattern https://www.dropbox.com/s/zp8ru3zizqmei ... d.PNG?dl=0
00:26:587 (26587|3) - move to 5

[MX]
00:27:692 (27692|6) - move to 6
00:36:218 (36218|4) - move to 4
00:36:376 (36376|6) - move to 5

[SC]
seems fine to me

But the SV seems so rough not smooth
Replace 0.10x SVs to 0.55x or 0.45x SVs for smooth gameplay
Apply for MX and SC

Good Luck! :)
-Kousei-_old
9 posts
Joined January 2015
-Kousei-_old
Hi! From My Queue.

Layout
7k |0|1|2|3|4|5|6|

Mapset
  1. You need some volume, 0% isn't acceptable.
  2. Remove letterboxing and countdown from the Song Setup Menu

NM
  1. HP 7; OP 7 Song Setup -> Difficulty
  2. Time Kiai
  3. 00:45:534 - Add a note here
  4. 00:49:797 - Same ^

HD
  1. 00:02:745 (2745|4) - Move to 2
  2. 00:08:903 (8903|4,9061|2,9218|4,9376|2) - Move the notes in 2 in1 and the note in 4 in 5
  3. 00:10:166 (10166|5,10403|5,10639|1) - Make these notes become chords
  4. 00:19:008 (19008|6,19166|0,19324|6,19482|0) - Inverse as 00:08:903 (8903|4,9061|2,9218|4,9376|2) -
  5. 00:30:376 (30376|4,30613|4,30850|1,31008|5,31324|1,31639|0) - I think those notes must be chords
  6. 00:50:587 (50587|3,50824|3,51061|1,51218|4) - Same ^
  7. 01:17:034 (77034|2) - Delete :(
  8. 01:20:903 (80903|4,81534|2) - Chords

MX
  1. 00:22:087 (22087|5) - Move this note from here, making a shield here isn't correct
  2. 01:25:561 (85561|1,86192|2,86508|1,86824|6,87139|3,87455|4,87771|5,88087|1,88403|2,88718|3,89034|0,89350|4,89666|5,89982|1,90297|5) - Those mini-jacks have no sense

SC
  1. 00:12:218 (12218|3,12218|2,12218|6,12297|5,12376|1,12376|4,12376|0,12455|3,12534|1,12534|4,12534|2,12613|5) - 00:13:324 (13324|6,13324|0,13324|3,13403|2,13482|1,13482|4,13482|5,13561|2,13639|0,13639|4,13639|3,13718|6,13718|1,13797|0,13797|5,13797|4,13797|2,13876|3,13876|6) - Continue using little LN to follow the melody
  2. 00:19:797 - You need a chord in the right part of the playfield to follow the "voice"
  3. 00:29:429 - Adding a note, here the song "scream"
  4. 01:30:387 - Continue following the melody with LNs
  5. 01:34:797 - Here, you have to start the pattern here, see this
  6. 01:51:218 - Continue following the melody with LNs also here, like this
DrawdeX
786 posts
Joined December 2012
DrawdeX

Hello! :)
Mod as requested :)
I only focus on pitch relevancy and hand balance
7K = |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
Everything modded
[General]
• Source should be "BMS" only.
• "G2R BOF2014" should be on the tags.
• Remove "ksr5445" on the tags, since your username is already on the Beatmap Creator section

[NM]
HD +2 ; OD +2
• 00:04:639 (4639|3) - Move to 3, since 00:04:482 (4482|2) - has the same pitch
• 00:21:534 (21534|6) - Remove, not too loud
• 00:31:008 (31008|3) - Extend LN to 00:31:639 - sound ends here
• 00:56:903 (56903|4) - Move to 6, for hand balance
• 01:36:061 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 01:46:797 (106797|2) - Extend LN to 01:47:429 - sound ends here

[HD]
HD +1.5 ; OD +1.5
• 00:04:482 (4482|5,4482|3) - Move to 5 and 7, since 00:04:639 (4639|6,4639|4) - have the same pitch
• 00:11:429 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:29:745 (29745|4,29903|4,30061|4,30218|4,30376|4) - optional Move to 2, trying to avoid spread pattern on line 3 and 5
• 00:43:324 (43324|5) - Move to 7, for spread note
• 00:46:797 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:48:061 - ^
• 00:51:218 - How about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2471043
• 00:51:218 (51218|3) - Extend LN to 00:51:850 - sound ends here
• 00:56:903 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 01:08:271 (68271|3) - Extend LN to 01:08:903 - sound ends here
• 01:34:797 - How about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2471055
• 01:36:061 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 01:45:534 (105534|4,105534|2) - Extend LN to 01:46:166 - sound ends here

[MX]
HD +1 ; OD +1
• 00:08:271 (8271|5) - Move to 1 or 2, since the pitch is low
• 00:15:850 (15850|6,15850|0) - Extend LN to 00:16:482 - sound ends here
• 00:21:534 (21534|3) - Move to 3, for hand balance
• 00:31:008 (31008|3) - Extend LN to 00:31:639 - sound ends here
• 00:31:639 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:36:692 - ^
• 00:39:218 - ^
• 00:39:850 - ^
• 00:46:797 - ^ or 2 notes
• 00:48:061 - ^ or 2 notes
• 01:08:271 (68271|3) - Extend LN to 01:08:903 - sound ends here
• 01:36:061 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 01:45:534 (105534|5,105534|1) - Extend LN to 01:46:166 - sound ends here
• 01:49:324 (109324|6) - Move to 1, hand balance
• 01:51:218 - Add a note or 2 notes, for the cymbal sound

[SC]
HD +.5 ; OD + 1.5
• 00:03:218 (3218|3) - Extend LN to 00:03:850 - sound ends here
• 00:15:850 (15850|6,15850|0) - Extend LN to 00:16:482 - sound ends here
• 00:31:639 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:31:639 (31639|2) - Move to 4
• 00:31:008 (31008|4,31008|2) - Extend LN to 00:31:639 - sound ends here, if above is applied
• 00:36:692 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 00:39:218 - ^ or 2 notes
• 00:39:850 - ^ or 2 notes
• 00:46:797 - ^ or 2 notes
• 00:48:061 - ^ or 2 notes
• 00:51:850 (51850|2) - Move to 4
• 00:51:218 (51218|4,51218|2) - Extend LN to 00:51:850 - sound ends here, if above is applied
• 00:56:271 (56271|5) - Move to 2, hand balance
• 01:06:692 (66692|3) - Extend LN to 01:07:008 - sound ends here
• 01:08:271 (68271|3) - Extend LN to 01:08:903 - sound ends here
• 01:34:639 - How about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2471275 (Trying to avoid jacks)
• 01:36:061 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 01:49:324 (109324|5) - Extend LN to 01:49:955 - sound ends here

Good luck~! :)
Frim4503
2,067 posts
Joined July 2013
Frim4503
as requested from
col. 1,2,3,4,5,6,7
NM
please check your AI mod http://img4.uploadhouse.com/fileuploads ... 7c78e8.png
00:02:903 (2903|6,3061|4) - remove note
00:02:903 - add LN 00:03:218 -
00:07:482 (7482|3) - move to 5
00:07:639 (7639|4) - ^ 4
00:21:850 (21850|5) - ^ 6
00:22:166 (22166|6) - ^ 7
00:23:113 (23113|0) - ^ 1
00:23:429 (23429|1) - ^ 2
00:24:376 (24376|5) - ^6
00:24:692 (24692|4) - ^5
00:25:008 (25008|3) - ^4
00:25:639 (25639|1) - ^2
00:25:955 (25955|2) - ^3
00:26:271 (26271|3) - ^4
00:33:534 (33534|3) - ^4
01:07:955 (67955|4) - ^ 5
01:08:113 (68113|3) - ^4
01:13:324 (73324|3) - end here 01:13:324 (73324|3) -
01:15:850 (75850|6) - ^7
01:16:166 (76166|4) - ^5
01:16:482 (76482|2) - ^3
01:16:797 (76797|0) - ^1
01:18:376 (78376|0) - ^1
01:18:692 (78692|2) - ^3
01:19:008 (79008|4) - ^5
01:19:324 (79324|5) - ^6
01:19:482 (79482|4) - ^5
01:19:639 (79639|3) - ^4
HD
resnap all object http://img0.uploadhouse.com/fileuploads ... 763be0.png
00:09:534 - 00:10:166 - try make to stair
00:26:587 (26587|2) - this slider start here
00:29:113 - 00:30:376 - try make to stair
MX
resnap all object http://img1.uploadhouse.com/fileuploads ... 68e3eb.png
SC
check AI mod http://img5.uploadhouse.com/fileuploads ... b63cd3.png


how to check AI mod CTRL + Shift + A


GOOD LUCK :D
rhalp10
579 posts
Joined September 2013
rhalp10


HERE'S MY MOD
[Delightness Brightness]

1|2|3|4|5|6|7
[HD]
00:15:929 (15929|3) - Add 4

[MX]
00:39:139 (39139|1) - Move 6

Wow your Map Is Too Good <3 <3 I Like It

Good Luck <3
Remillion Cross
522 posts
Joined October 2012
Remillion Cross
BOF2014 ? nope. you should change that to G2R2014

actually, i kinda confused why ppl put 'BMS' in source, and the put the event like BOF or G2R in tags, but well i don't know either

no kd
SeonRae
102 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
SeonRae

Remillion Cross wrote:

BOF2014 ? nope. you should change that to G2R2014

actually, i kinda confused why ppl put 'BMS' in source, and the put the event like BOF or G2R in tags, but well i don't know either

no kd
Ok, change to G2R2014

thanks
schwarzvgrune
1,214 posts
Joined April 2014
schwarzvgrune
Hi ksr~タン ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from Grune's modding queue

Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~

General : ( √ )
Mapset : ( X ) your NM 1.52 star, your HD 3.06 star, it exceeded the 1.5 star differences for difficulty ladder. please increase NM diffs, or decrease HD diffs. also you SHOULD NOT use SV for EZ and NM. it's extremely discouraged because SV changes mask the actual diffs
Metadata : ( √ )
Timing : ( √ )
Audio :( √ )
Background :( √ )
Hitsounding :( √ )


4K = |1|2|3|4|


In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( √ ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( √ )
Hand Balancing : ( √ )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( √ )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( √ )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( √ )

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No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding above
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified
(⊙o⊙)？ = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments

EZ
no grave issues detected~~~~

NM
no grave issues detected~~~~

HD
no grave issues detected~~~~

MX
no grave issues detected~~~~

SC
no grave issues detected~~~~


Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O
I LOVE THIS SONG WHY NO 4K >_<
Aste-
2,387 posts
Joined September 2014
Aste-
Mark For my MOD..

Sorry.. i've been Busy with My GDs orz

MOD Here ^.^

[General]

Turn off Widescreen Support if you don't use SB

all BG resolution = make it 1024X768 or 1366X768

[Chart]

MOD Inside
[EZ]

HP OD = 6 or 7 please cuz 5 is just too small for a few Note

00:15:218 (15218|0) - Better Move it to 2, cuz i've following the Flow and when you put it at 1, it feels like Cutting the Flow, so Move it to 2 for Better Flow and more Pressable for EZ player

[NM]

00:14:745 (14745|4) - why you cut the Flow?? please move it to 6 for better flow. and Following Previous Pattern

01:28:482 (88482|2) - move to 6 or 4 or 7 for Hand Balance

01:50:903 (110903|5) - Move to 7? for better press and Following the Flow...

[HD]

00:10:008 (10008|3,10087|2) - Why.... you.. cutting the Stair line? (Swap Column please)

00:38:508 - Missing Note?? i hear you Following the Synth here.. am i Wrong?

MOD Done~

GL ^.^
schwarzvgrune
1,214 posts
Joined April 2014
schwarzvgrune
Hi ~\(≧▽≦)/~
Mod as requested from Ａｓｔｒａｌ Ｈｏｒｉｚｏｎ
Feel free to implement or reject if you think this is useless ~~o(>_<)o ~~


Icon Bibliography
No emoticon in Black = normal suggestions based on rationale of modding given below~
o(≧v≦)o~~ = everything is good~
Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ = error / mistake / extremely recommended to be modified~
(⊙o⊙)？ = unclear / questionable parts, thus cannot give a decisive recommendations~
O(∩_∩)O~ = other comments~

General : o(≧v≦)o~~
Mapset : o(≧v≦)o~~
Metadata : Σ( ° △ °|||)︴
delete your name from the tag. you're the uploader so no need to write it down,
i'm not sure about the other metadata, seems incomplete to me at least, please re-check them
Timing : o(≧v≦)o~~
Audio : o(≧v≦)o~~
Background : o(≧v≦)o~~
Hitsounding : o(≧v≦)o~~


|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|10|


In general, I will mod based on these considerations ♪(^∇^*)
( X ) I will not take this into consideration when modding
( √ ) I will take this into consideration when modding
( ? ) I might unconsciously take this into consideration when modding
Pitch Agreement / Relevancy : ( √ )
Hand Balancing : ( √ )
(Consistent) Patterning : ( √ )
Possibility of Long Notes Abuse : ( √ )
Ghost Note : ( √ )
Suggestions / Opinion only : ( √ )


EZ
note on normal - please read
NM
00:16:482 (16482|0) - snap it, its Normal, don't use irregular snapping like this

00:26:271 (26271|3,26429|3) - don't jack, i see no justification here, pitch is different.

00:27:534 (27534|0,27692|0,27850|1) - ^

01:02:587 (62587|5) - move to 7 and snap it until 01:03:061 -

01:06:692 (66692|5) - move to 5 or 4. no reason to jack


01:30:534 (90534|3,90534|4,90692|3,90692|2,90850|3) - this is NM, avoid such jack

01:34:955 (94955|6,95113|5,95271|4,95429|3,95587|2,95745|1,95903|0) - overdiff for NM, change it into short notes or into 1 or 2 LN


01:41:113 (101113|2,101508|4) - snap it. its NM. your current snapping for the whole song is very accurate, but for easier diff you need to relax this a bit to not make too many irregularities in patterning (as this increases the diff of the map))





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HD
no grave issues detected~~~~


Excellent Beatmap!!! Nice Song!!! d(≧v≦)b~~
Good Luck for rank!! O(∩_∩)O
pwhk
433 posts
Joined September 2014
pwhk
| 0 - 6 |

[EZ]
00:17:271 (17271|5) - This LN should stop at 00:17:587 - and add a note there. The SE does not last that long and shouldn't extend to that single sound
01:41:113 (101113|3,101429|3) - why same column? Move second note to 2?
01:51:218 (111218|3,111534|3) - ^

[NM]
00:05:271 (5271|6,5429|4,5587|2,5745|0) - Ctrl-H for pitch?
00:17:271 (17271|3) - This LN should stop at 00:17:587 -
00:30:850 (30850|4) - Move to 3 for pitch
00:31:955 (31955|2,32113|1,32271|0) - Ctrl-H for pitch
00:33:534 (33534|3) - Move to 5
00:34:482 - 00:35:903 - entire section has pitch reversed, Ctrl-H it
00:37:324 (37324|3,37482|4,37639|5,37797|4) - 6,5,4,3
00:40:955 (40955|6) - move to 4

[HD]
00:17:666 (17666|1) - Remove, no sound?
00:31:008 - 00:31:639 - Make this continuous stairs?
00:39:218 (39218|6,39376|6,39534|6,39692|6) - Alternate columns instead of jacking here?
00:56:587 (56587|1,56666|2,56745|3,56824|4) - Ctrl-H for pitch?
01:26:508 (86508|1) - 0,1 trills is very difficult to hit. Move this to 6
01:27:139 (87139|5) - ^
01:27:771 (87771|1) - ^
01:29:113 (89113|1) - ^
01:29:745 (89745|5) - ^
01:44:903 (104903|5,105139|3,105376|1) - Cymbals and strong hits. Double?
01:51:534 - missing note?
01:54:297 - ^

[MX]
00:17:666 (17666|4) - Remove
00:37:955 (37955|4) - Don't use jacks here, move to 2?

[SC]
01:34:797 - 01:36:061 - Not same sound, how come there are so many jacks here? :o

Good luck! :)
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