@Kurosanyan: the offset is fine for me, -12 is really early ;_;
Also holy shit, all these stars, thanks a lot Kurosanyan, Dainesl, Nwolf and mrdumpling.
Nwolf wrote:
woof
[General]
omg so beautiful
love
00:40:370 - Start the kiai here, it looks... well, bad c: /*Well, for me looks bad beginning in the down beat so, uhm, I'd want to keep this D:
[Kantan]
omg so beautiful
love
00:51:084 (67,69) - I would recommend deleting these so you don't have two 7-plets next to each other. Also gives a bit of rest. /*Done.
[Futsuu]
00:00:942 - Add a note here to close up the Kantan -> Muzu spread here a bit. Futsuu is hardly different from kantan /*Sounds really weird having 1/1 there, idk why :<
00:02:978 (6) - Also delete this note since 1/4 is kinda evil for Futsuu. /*I'm defending this with my big don shield, sounds really weird without the note, I have some large breaks after that to compensate, hope it's enough.
00:20:548 (48) - ^ /*Well, I think I can't defend this as it still sounds good without it.
00:22:370 - Should have a note here since uhhm this is quite empty if you look at the Muzu. /*Put stuff there.
00:27:405 (60) - blah /*'kay
00:56:548 (122) - ^ /*'kay
01:03:405 (133) - ^ /*'kay
01:09:084 (146) - why no kat /*Oops.
[Muzukashii]
00:21:727 (74,75,76,81) - Delete these notes to balance Futsuu -> Muzu -> Oni a bit /*Deleted only 00:21:727 (74,81) - If I delete more it'd sound really empty. Also Oni has colour changes here while in Muzukashii is monocolor so I think spread is not that bad balanced.
00:24:512 (85) - Also maybe change this to a big kat cause Oni has one too and it doesn't really add much difficulty /*Sure
00:28:584 (98,100) - Again moar delete /*Deleted only 00:28:584 (96) -
00:30:084 (104,105) - Change to kat (Futsuu uses 00:30:084 (63,64) - kats 00:31:798 (68,69) - dons and that makes up a nice audible difference. Also suggested in Oni) /*Cool.
00:33:512 (120,121) - 00:34:370 (123,124) - ^ /*Cool.
00:57:727 (208,209,210,215) - Same as first suggestion (consistency and stuff) /*ye
01:04:584 (232,234) - Same as 104/105 /*Ditto
[Oni]
00:10:584 (49,50,51) - Delete to have a break somewhere in this part /*The music has nearly no places for breaks as it's continuous, I could delete triples like 00:05:441 (19,20,21) - , but that'd make this too similar to Muzukashii, so idk if this would be good, lol.
00:29:655 (143,144,145,146) - Invert colors (see Muzu for reason) - also compare with 00:33:512 (172,173,174) - /*Done.
01:00:512 (313,314,315,316) - mfw SR doesn't get screwed by this wow (this is not a mod) /*We all know star rating is broken
01:05:655 (345,346,347,348) - Invert colors /*Done.
too pro mappu
Thanks for modding, sorry for the delayed answer, but well, I'm here.mrdumpling64 wrote:
Hi from mod queue, sorry for taking a while ._.
Kantan
00:45:941 (58) - I think the music doesn't deepen enough for this note to use a d, suggest change to k. /*Tone changes in these triple so I'm keeping it to reflect it.
Futsuu
00:21:512 (50) - 00:24:941 (52) - feels a bit empty note-wise with the melody in the background. Maybe add a k at 00:22:370 (51) - and d in 00:24:084 (53) - ? /*Added some dons there.
00:40:155 (84) - d? /*Tone changes here, having all monocolour here would feel a bit sad.
00:45:512 (96) - I think k matches the trumpet at this point better. /*Yes to this.
00:54:084 (117,119) - you could add finishers at these points to emphasis on the start of the chorus? /*All notes have the same intensity so I don't want to make it different.
01:00:941 (128,130) - ^ /*^
Muzukashi
00:02:442 (8) - d? /*I'd want to keep all notes the same color to keep a bit simple this compared to the Oni.
00:22:798 (79) - I think k fits the instrument better. /*I'd want to keep this part monocolour to have a nice spread in Futsuu -> Muzukashii -> Oni, not like a note would change it, but as this part is relatively calm, a full don pattern would be nice.
00:45:298 (160,161,162) - I think kkk fits the brass better. /*Yup, done.
Oni
01:00:512 (313,314,315,316) - I think this isn't a very good idea. Because that instrument bit lasts until 01:00:941 (317) - . It would be better if you used 1/4 instead (like this). /*You're correct, I put this for the mere gimmick purpose, but put a simple kkk, not the full spread, so the 1/2 pause gives a nice emphasis to the note in 01:00:941 -
I think 3.31 is inaccurate star rating with the multiple streams in there :3 /*Taiko star rating is broken \o/
Good luck, starred.
Also holy shit, all these stars, thanks a lot Kurosanyan, Dainesl, Nwolf and mrdumpling.