1. Hard (2.12 stars, 156 notes)
2. Moonlight (3.2 stars, 194 notes)
3. Normal (1.45 stars, 107 notes)

Frey wrote:

M4M

[Normal]

wow, soild difficuty. Thanks! I'm trying.

· 01:11:842 (4) - x412 y208 for better flow Alright, changed.

[Hard]

· The difficulty icon shows a Normal, that means you can increase the difficulty of your Hard. Just saying, because icon doesn't count sometimes Nah, I don't care about the icons. As long as I don't have a gap between icons, this is rankeable.

· Then, Ctrl+A and you can see, the bottom left is kind of empty Eh... and what exactly does Ctrl + A?

· 00:12:337 - add a circle? I think I'll pass. It sounds better as it is now IMO.

· 00:17:612 - same as above ↑ Yeah. Added.

· 00:22:886 - same as above ↑ ^^

· 01:03:601 (1,2) - That's very confusing to play. How about this？I'll leave it as it is for now. I'm not a fan of 1/4 sliders without reverses in Hard diffs, so I would like more opinions from others.

SPOILER

· 01:24:370 (5) - remove the finish? a bit strange for me. Yeah. I agree.

[Moonlight]

· 00:38:216 (3) - move the white dot at x336 y144 to x336 y128 (Make 2 and 3 look straight ) Moved to sightly different coordinates, but kept the direction of slider to what you wrote.

· 00:53:875 - add a circle? Not now. Players just got off of a "stream", so I want to be easy on them and follow instruments instead of vocals.

· 00:55:194 - same as above I like to follow instruments in this place. It's kinda great, and sounds good.

· 00:56:513 - same as above ^^

· 00:57:831 - same as above ^^

· 01:03:930 (1,2,3,4,5) - Well, you don't have to stack them like this, just put them spread, then it would be better. Alright. Made them a pentagon.

· 01:14:150 (8) - the drum-finish sounds a little loud for me, lower the volume there maybe? It's less loud now.

· 01:24:864 (1) - This part is easier than Hard, why you put a spinner there? You can put something else instead of a spinner. I placed a spinner because I haven't placed another spinner in this diff before.



You can be more creative!
Good Luck!

GyroX20 wrote:

From queue

[General]
You Need a preview Point, set it by going to Timing, Set current position as preview point There is a preview point already :v

[Normal]
00:07:227 (3) - Add whistle to start of this slider It's good as it is. Plus, I think whistle too loud for this beat.

Wait why do you add whistles and then stop at certian parts Because of song
00:24:040 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try not to have too many half beats Most of them are sliders, so it's good IMO.
00:34:919 (5) - NC Nope.
00:40:194 (5) - ^ ^^
00:44:809 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Try to ease up on the half beats Same as 00:24:040 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) -
00:45:469 (5) - NC Before Kiai, I set NC after two downbeats, and during/after Kiai I start setting them every downbeat, so no change.
01:01:293 (1) - Better Blanket Grid Snap doesn't let me blanket better. Plus, I think it's alright as it is.
00:08:710 (1) - Whistle or finish None, since HS are too loud IMO for the beat.

[Hard]
00:22:392 (3,4,5) - Better Flow here Check the figure end of slider does with 00:22:392 (3,4,5,6,7) - It's kinda like a square or rectangle. Plus, flow isn't that bad since notes are practically sticked to slider.
00:50:743 (1) - Blanket (4) It's blanketed now, I guess? Also, fixed some spacing.
00:08:546 (1) - Blanket No intention to blanket here.


[Moonlight]
00:17:446 (5) - Blanket I think it's alright as it is.
01:06:238 (9) - NC No.
01:06:568 (1) - Remove NC ^^
01:18:436 (1) - ^ No. NC here is to announce a SV change.
01:21:403 (5) - NC No.
01:13:161 (5) - ^ ^^

Good Luck

1. 00:37:557 (1) – hmm... this is covering the hp bar.Ok on the standard osu skin it isn't covering it, but maybe you still want to move it somehow… then again you'd have to move quite a lot of things to keep things nice looking.
2. 01:01:293 (1) – I would put the starting circle at (X:108) (y: 184) the slider point in the middle at (X:120) (y: 124) and the slider end at (X:168) (y: 92)
3. 01:20:743 (2,3) – move this to (X:448) (y: 304) to like kind of like curve like the slider before it
4. 01:21:403 (4) – move the starting circle to (X:372) (y: 256) and the end to (X:320) (y: 220), remember to ds the next few objects if you do.

1. 00:00:634 (1,2) - moved a lot of time around so I'm not sure what's at it's original place and what not so I'm going to write all of them down.
   Move the starting circle of (1) to (X:124) (Y:128) the middle slider point to (X:140) (Y:92) move the end to (X: 172) (Y: 68)
   then move (2) to (X:216) (Y: 60)
2. 00:08:546 (1) – maybe you should blanket this. If you want to put the second slider point at (X:256) (Y:316) and the third at (X:276) (Y:232) and the last one at (X:372) (Y:288)
3. 01:02:612 (4,5,1,2) – not sure, but maybe this spacing is a little too confunsing… idk but maybe you would and to add another reverse at (1), move (2) 1/4 further and take away it's reverse.
4. 00:11:842 (3) – imo you should move JUST the starting circle, please leave the ending circle, to (X:220) (Y:160)
5. 00:22:392 (3) – here also just imo, move JUST the start to (X:376) (Y:116)
6. 00:43:491 (2) – move the end of this to stack with 00:41:513 (3) –

1. :01:458 (3) – JUST move the start to (X:212) (Y:200)… I'm sorry if I'm annoying you with my caps lock 'just'
2. 00:22:393 (3) – move JUST the start to (X:224) (Y:252)
3. 00:39:535 (6) - (X:332) (Y:256)
4. 00:52:227 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this place looks a bit off to me, you could try to do something like http://up.ppy.sh/files/untitled-.png

Lasoki wrote:

Hihi! btw this mapset is awesome! I don't get how your beatmap can be this good right from the start D:< lol, I don't understand why, either. Maybe I'm really improving (yay!).

lol, so anyway:

[Normal:]

1. 00:37:557 (1) – hmm... this is covering the hp bar.Ok on the standard osu skin it isn't covering it, but maybe you still want to move it somehow… then again you'd have to move quite a lot of things to keep things nice looking. I'll think about it. While it's visible using default skin, I think it's safe enough, so I'll most likely keep it.
2. 01:01:293 (1) – I would put the starting circle at (X:108) (y: 184) the slider point in the middle at (X:120) (y: 124) and the slider end at (X:168) (y: 92) I think it's alright as it is now. It keeps the actual flow, and sends the player to the other side of screen, so that he/she can play he next sliders.
3. 01:20:743 (2,3) – move this to (X:448) (y: 304) to like kind of like curve like the slider before it Okay, I'll do this.
4. 01:21:403 (4) – move the starting circle to (X:372) (y: 256) and the end to (X:320) (y: 220), remember to ds the next few objects if you do. I think I'll let it like this. I like the shape 01:21:403 (4,1,2,3) - do, and it's fun to play.

[Hard:]

1. 00:00:634 (1,2) - moved a lot of time around so I'm not sure what's at it's original place and what not so I'm going to write all of them down.
   Move the starting circle of (1) to (X:124) (Y:128) the middle slider point to (X:140) (Y:92) move the end to (X: 172) (Y: 68)
   then move (2) to (X:216) (Y: 60) Done~
2. 00:08:546 (1) – maybe you should blanket this. If you want to put the second slider point at (X:256) (Y:316) and the third at (X:276) (Y:232) and the last one at (X:372) (Y:288) I made a blanket by rotating slider a little. I'll let it's shape like that, since I want to keep the "waves".
3. 01:02:612 (4,5,1,2) – not sure, but maybe this spacing is a little too confunsing… idk but maybe you would and to add another reverse at (1), move (2) 1/4 further and take away it's reverse. Solved by simply adding a reverse to (4), (5) and (1) and deleting (2). I think it's less confusing since sliders start at white ticks. Moved the notes after those sliders to solve spacing issues. And a note: I'm not a fan of 1/4 sliders without reverses on Hard.
4. 00:11:842 (3) – imo you should move JUST the starting circle, please leave the ending circle, to (X:220) (Y:160) I can't move it to those coordinates without moving the end. Plus, I think it's alright as it is.
5. 00:22:392 (3) – here also just imo, move JUST the start to (X:376) (Y:116) ^^
6. 00:43:491 (2) – move the end of this to stack with 00:41:513 (3) – Don't wanna lose the flow here. If I move the end, I would end moving the rest of slider, and that may result in losing flow.

[Insane:]

1. :01:458 (3) – JUST move the start to (X:212) (Y:200)… I'm sorry if I'm annoying you with my caps lock 'just' Incomplete slider-copy, lol
2. 00:22:393 (3) – move JUST the start to (X:224) (Y:252) Sadly, I can't move "just the start".
3. 00:39:535 (6) - (X:332) (Y:256) I'm following a certain pattern here. Check 00:37:557 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) -
4. 00:52:227 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this place looks a bit off to me, you could try to do something like http://up.ppy.sh/files/untitled-.png Alright, I'll do something like that.

Omg, by the time i post this there already 2 mods OTL... ans mine's like so short, well I hope I was helpful in some way. Heh. Don't worry about it. It's good enough.
btw, can I make a guest diff? Because I'd really like to make one, preferably easy or insane (I like to map those two the most in general) but I don't really mind if I should make another diff, like for the difficulty spread. Just felt like making one after seeing yours, but I don't think I'll want to make a whole mapset xD.Please? Sorry, I started this as a solo project, and I want to end it like that.

Edit: Sry, did this with the starting version of the beatmap so some things that I mention could already be changed... Nah, don't worry. Didn't changed anything before you mentioned it.

1. It seems that combo 1 and 3 have same color (darker and lighter), how about to change one of them? a red or green maybe
2. The bpm on outro is a bit wrong, since the bpm should be lowered based on piano, you should ask timing help to make suree

1. 00:08:710 (1) - That spinner show too sudden after previous circle, a Normal as the lowest diff I guess it's better to have a bit time before a spinner. So, how about delete this 00:08:546 (5) - and move this spinner her for a start 00:08:546 - then end here 00:09:864 -
2. 00:11:842 (2,4) - How about to make that two slider symetrical? because the previous two circle 00:11:183 (1,3) - is also have symetrical http://puu.sh/dsVk6/a181434c26.jpg
3. 00:16:458 (1,4) - About those two, how about rotate 10 degree? the curent is also ok, but maybe you can have a better flow after those two imo
4. 00:19:095 (4) - Change rhythm into this http://puu.sh/dsVM6/0d1d9338bb.jpg? somehow not fit and you missed piano sound here 00:20:084 -
5. 00:21:732 (1) - I guess that slider is better to stacked with the previous note, try make same as 00:14:809 (5,1) -
6. 00:24:370 (4,5,6) - For a bit variance, how about make those three like this http://puu.sh/dsW7C/35e6c58eae.jpg?
7. In my opinion these 00:34:919 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - the flow is like too stiff for me, so I sugest some patern and flow. First, 00:34:919 (5,6) - that two better looks like this http://puu.sh/dsWYl/b229cdf412.jpg then 00:37:557 (7,8,9) - that three looks like this http://puu.sh/dsX3N/c7b2ab0655.jpg . You don't have to follow though just sugestion, the code if needed:
   

   207,218,34260,1,0,3:0:0:0:
   79,90,34919,2,0,P|128:60|196:64,1,120,2|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
   324,180,36238,2,0,P|383:181|433:151,1,120,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
   336,0,37557,6,0,L|240:72,1,120,4|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
   168,124,38546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   231,187,38875,2,0,L|135:259,1,120,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:

8. 00:40:194 - From that part until first kiai time, I think you overuse reverse slider and may cause confused for some players
9. 00:50:908 (1) - That spinner have same issue with 00:08:710 (1) -
10. 01:00:963 (4,1) - Make a better blanket
11. 01:02:612 (2,3) - Something like this looks better imo http://puu.sh/dsXGY/65eac5aa9c.jpg
12. 01:12:007 (1) - Same problem as 00:08:710 (1) -
    
    If you change some placement, make sure to check the DS on each notes later

1. 00:01:128 (2) - Add whistle to emphize piano sound
2. 00:01:458 (3) - Add whistle on head, same
3. 00:01:952 (4) - Try to have neater S-curve, you can use three nodes like this http://puu.sh/dsYlR/cb1a700e36.jpg There's many S-curve in this diff
4. 00:04:260 (4) - Add whistle to emphize piano sound
5. 00:05:908 (1,2,3) - It'll looks better like this to fit the piano better, 1. http://puu.sh/dsYGi/dcfce34bfc.jpg and 2. http://puu.sh/dsYIt/635cacdfff.jpg . The code if needed:
   

   332,352,5908,6,0,L|388:304,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   315,236,6568,2,0,L|371:188,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   298,121,7227,2,0,L|354:73,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

6. 00:17:117 (3,4,5) - It'll better to looks like this http://puu.sh/dsYZZ/4f64077cbe.jpg If you change, don't forget to arrange next note
7. 00:20:084 (2) - Delete that? and make 00:20:414 (3) - begin at 00:20:084 - piano based sound
8. 00:32:282 - Increase the DS? since start on that part, the song is start to upbeat faster
9. 00:32:282 (1,2,3,4) - Make it more symetrical? try to move left until it's vertical symetric
10. 00:43:491 (2) - For a better flow make it vertical like this http://puu.sh/dsZuh/28dd5e0da6.jpg?
11. 00:48:106 (1,2,3,4,1) - That part is goooodd, but maybe you can make this neater? 00:50:743 (1) -
12. 00:52:227 (1) - Delete? You map nothing on that slider, actually the drum sound start on blue tick 00:52:557 -
13. 00:52:721 (2) - Add drum-clap on slider tail

1. 00:01:128 (2) - Add whistle to emphize piano sound
2. 00:01:458 (3) - Add whistle on head, same
3. 00:04:260 (4) - Add whistle to emphize piano sound
4. To make this diff harder, you can change some 1/4 slider (e.g. 00:01:458 (3) - ) into two circles
5. 00:01:952 (4) - Some S-curves can be made neater
6. 00:13:161 (5) - Stack that on this slider head 00:13:820 (1) - ? well since it's insane you can make some jumps
7. 00:42:502 (7,1) - Move that farther to right? to avoid overlap with this 00:41:513 (4) -
8. 00:52:227 (1,2) - Delete? You map nothing on that part
9. 00:53:216 (6) - Also delete, following the drum sound instaed and then maybe you can change into jumps instead of stream 00:52:557 (2,3,4,5) -
10. 00:53:875 - Add circle. There's many other that can be place notes a rhythm like this maybe sound better http://puu.sh/dt0GF/33c99ab890.jpg, you can lower the playback rate
    
    Well as for me this diff Insane enough to play

zorefire wrote:

[Overall]
You really should change the background to something better that one just makes the map look poorly done. I'll look for one tomorrow, since it's kinda late. I'll keep this one if I don't found one I like, through.

[Normal]
Good

[Hard]

pic example

00:19:095 (4,5,6) - suggestion

I'll leave as it is.

[Moonlight]
+1 the circle size (recommendation) Wow, no thanks. No smaller circles. CS 4.5 is enough for me already... ;-;

To be honest this map set is nice just needs a little more visual effect fixing and it will be good.
Also next you map look for an mp3 with 192kbps My .mp3 is like that already... :v

Sorry for the small mod everyone else already took all the things I was going to say.

Good Luck~ my mod wasn't really helpful so you don't really have to kudosu.

1. 00:04:260 (4,1) - No se siente bien este stack, no hay nada en la canción que lo indique y solo se siente algo raro :/. Es la dificultad mas facil también, trata de mantener el DS en partes asi.
2. 00:38:875 (3,6,3) - Puedes stackear esto? se veria mejor y solo tienes que mover los objetos un poco
3. 00:44:809 (3,7,8) - Stack en estas notas, mejoraria el flujo de 00:43:820 (2) - este slider hacia los sliders con repeticion (y se vería un poco mejor en mi opinion).
   Algo así:
   
   Click!

   
   
4. 00:48:106 (1,2) - Comentario: Creo que abusaste un poco de los "repeat sliders" en esta parte, intenta dar un poco de variedad.
5. 01:00:963 (4,1) - Mejora el blanket, se puede ver mucho mejor
   
   En general está bastante bien esta dificultad.

1. 00:20:084 (3,4) - El stack acá no tiene mucho sentido, las notas del piano son distintas. Te sugiero un patron así quitandole la repeticion al slider de antes para seguir mejor al piano:
   
   click!

   
2. 00:31:623 (3,4) - ^ Acá puedes hacer algo así:
   
   click!

   
3. 01:03:930 (1) - Opino que es mejor que le quites las repeticiones y que en su lugar pongas otro slider 1/4 para marcar el cambio entre la guitarra y la voz. Lo haria un poco mas "intenso" igual.
4. 01:16:787 (7) - Prueba convertir esto en un slider 1/4 para seguir mejor la voz.
   
   Bien hecho, solo creo que te "emocionaste" un poco con los stacks. No es que esté mal pero le quita variedad en mi opinión.

1. 00:43:491 (2,3) - Este antijump no se siente natural, algo forzado.
2. 01:08:875 (5,1) - Elimina el 5, mueve TODO esto 01:09:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - medio beat para atras y pon acá 01:11:513 - una nota en la misma posicion que el 2. Razón: salto divertido entre esa nota y los sliders 01:11:842 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - .
3. 01:23:710 (4,5) - Stackear esto justo al final se siente algo anticlimatico, intenta hacer un triangulo junto con este triple 01:24:370 (6,7,8) -
   
   Acá igual, muchos stacks. No es algo que tengas que cambiar en este mapa (está bastante bien hecho).

Atsuro wrote:

Hola!

[General]
El volumen de tu mp3 esta muy bajo, acá tienes el mismo mp3 pero mas alto (mismo offset y todo) Oh~ Gracias.
http://puu.sh/dFBgq/ccc494a3e7.mp3

Ah, y hablando del offset, me parece que el correcto es 660 Eso parece.

[Normal]

1. 00:04:260 (4,1) - No se siente bien este stack, no hay nada en la canción que lo indique y solo se siente algo raro :/. Es la dificultad mas facil también, trata de mantener el DS en partes asi. En realidad quisiera poner esto en algún otro lugar, pero precisamente porque tengo que usar la DS no puedo. La distancia simplemente no se mantiene constante, no importa a dónde lo mueva.
2. 00:38:875 (3,6,3) - Puedes stackear esto? se veria mejor y solo tienes que mover los objetos un poco Listo.
3. 00:44:809 (3,7,8) - Stack en estas notas, mejoraria el flujo de 00:43:820 (2) - este slider hacia los sliders con repeticion (y se vería un poco mejor en mi opinion).
   Algo así: De acuerdo, haré esto.
   
   Click!

   
   
4. 00:48:106 (1,2) - Comentario: Creo que abusaste un poco de los "repeat sliders" en esta parte, intenta dar un poco de variedad. Cambié un poco esta parte. Creo que está mejor.
5. 01:00:963 (4,1) - Mejora el blanket, se puede ver mucho mejor Supongo que esto está hecho...
   
   En general está bastante bien esta dificultad.

[Hard]

1. 00:20:084 (3,4) - El stack acá no tiene mucho sentido, las notas del piano son distintas. Te sugiero un patron así quitandole la repeticion al slider de antes para seguir mejor al piano: No le veo mucho problema al stack...
   
   click!

   
2. 00:31:623 (3,4) - ^ Acá puedes hacer algo así: Aquí si lo cambiaré.
   
   click!

   
3. 01:03:930 (1) - Opino que es mejor que le quites las repeticiones y que en su lugar pongas otro slider 1/4 para marcar el cambio entre la guitarra y la voz. Lo haria un poco mas "intenso" igual. Creo que paso. No me gusta abusar de los deslizadores de 1/4. Sólo los uso cuando no hay opción en una Hard (al menos hay una pausa en el que uso al principio).
4. 01:16:787 (7) - Prueba convertir esto en un slider 1/4 para seguir mejor la voz. Aquí sigo los instrumentos.
   
   Bien hecho, solo creo que te "emocionaste" un poco con los stacks. No es que esté mal pero le quita variedad en mi opinión.

[Moonlight]

1. 00:43:491 (2,3) - Este antijump no se siente natural, algo forzado. Lo cambié. Sólo espero que el jump ahora no sea un "overkill"...
2. 01:08:875 (5,1) - Elimina el 5, mueve TODO esto 01:09:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - medio beat para atras y pon acá 01:11:513 - una nota en la misma posicion que el 2. Razón: salto divertido entre esa nota y los sliders 01:11:842 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - . Oh~ De acuerdo.
3. 01:23:710 (4,5) - Stackear esto justo al final se siente algo anticlimatico, intenta hacer un triangulo junto con este triple 01:24:370 (6,7,8) - Listo. Espero que cierto cambio (un salto que hice) no sea "overkill".
   
   Acá igual, muchos stacks. No es algo que tengas que cambiar en este mapa (está bastante bien hecho).

Eso seria todo, mejoraste bastante

Gaia wrote:

also idk what ur taking about this bg is pretty awesome :>

AxE Galaxy wrote:

EDIT:
Hard:
00:19:730 the jump from (1) - (2) feels awkward imo. I suggest Jump here is supposed to be some anti-flow kind of pattern.

00:49:451 (3,4) The squere they make are not perfect. I suggest to delete them and copy both the previous sliders at once as replacement. Rotate the copied sliders 180 and place (3) at X63 Y148. Now all the distances should be 1.62X ^^ I don't really mind if the square is off. I only care about the blankets there. Through, I found some little misses there. I fixed 'em.

Its hard as hell to improve this. I'll be back IF I can come up with improvements

1. 00:14:835 (5) - could be blanketed with 00:13:846 (4)
2. 00:24:066 (3) - move to around ~ x:200 y:296
3. 00:30:659 (2) - move slider end to ~ x:380 y:168
4. 00:46:484 (6) - position could be better
5. 00:56:044 (1) - move to around ~ x:154 y:71
6. 01:15:824 (2) - move to around ~ x:336 y:156
7. these all are small position fixes, my small case of ocd can't handle it ahah

1. 00:30:659 (2) - if you turned it around and rotated a bit you could blanket the next note, what I mean:
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:37:583 (1) - move to around ~ x:248 y:104 (or change slider's curvature)
3. 00:42:033 - a reversed slider would fit here, to match the drums
4. 00:58:681 (1) - move slider end to around ~ x:302 y:285

1. 00:57:033 (4,5) - I guess it's fine if you made this an insane, but this jump just surprises me due to it's distance
2. didn't find anything else here