hiii~
[General]
source should be : AO--HARU--RIDE ref : p/3369326
the hitsound volume can be neat through all diff respectively (to all diff ) :
the first red line change to 15% volume is better
00:16:071 - add a greenline with 23% volume
01:28:417 - add a greenline 15% volume
01:00:379 - change greenline volume to 30%
[NM]
00:33:379 (33379|2) - i think better to delete this note to give some short break , also neating your instrument focus.
00:55:648 - should be a note here as well ,
01:21:148 (81148|3,81264|2) - move this up by 1/4 measure : http://puu.sh/flXah.png
minor pattern suggestion on this part as well : http://puu.sh/fkU9F.png
[HD]
00:50:917 - would be nice to add a note here , the beat is more obvious than previous
measure
00:51:841 - ^
00:51:956 - should be 5plet along with ^
01:00:956 (60956|0) - no sound , delete
01:02:802 (62802|2,63264|2,63494|2) - ^
01:03:725 (63725|0,63841|2) - ^
01:06:494 (66494|1) - ^
01:08:341 (68341|1) - ^
01:09:264 (69264|1) - ^
01:09:725 - should add a note here
01:10:187 (70187|3) - no sound again delete
01:11:110 (71110|0) - ^
01:18:725 - add a note here
01:19:533 (79533|3) - delete , no sound
01:20:341 (80341|1,80456|0) - ^
01:23:225 (83225|3) - ^
01:23:571 (83571|1) - ^
01:24:148 (84148|1) - ^
01:26:110 - add a note for snare
01:26:571 (86571|0) - delete again
01:27:264 - to 01:27:610 - should be 1/6 on the drums , as for NM diff i prefer you to only map 1/2 beats instead of 1/4 , would be more accurate
call me back when you updated these , ill give another look for the patterns that can be polished through before i qualify this
[General]
source should be : AO--HARU--RIDE ref : p/3369326
the hitsound volume can be neat through all diff respectively (to all diff ) :
the first red line change to 15% volume is better
00:16:071 - add a greenline with 23% volume
01:28:417 - add a greenline 15% volume
01:00:379 - change greenline volume to 30%
[NM]
00:33:379 (33379|2) - i think better to delete this note to give some short break , also neating your instrument focus.
00:55:648 - should be a note here as well ,
01:21:148 (81148|3,81264|2) - move this up by 1/4 measure : http://puu.sh/flXah.png
minor pattern suggestion on this part as well : http://puu.sh/fkU9F.png
[HD]
00:50:917 - would be nice to add a note here , the beat is more obvious than previous
measure
00:51:841 - ^
00:51:956 - should be 5plet along with ^
01:00:956 (60956|0) - no sound , delete
01:02:802 (62802|2,63264|2,63494|2) - ^
01:03:725 (63725|0,63841|2) - ^
01:06:494 (66494|1) - ^
01:08:341 (68341|1) - ^
01:09:264 (69264|1) - ^
01:09:725 - should add a note here
01:10:187 (70187|3) - no sound again delete
01:11:110 (71110|0) - ^
01:18:725 - add a note here
01:19:533 (79533|3) - delete , no sound
01:20:341 (80341|1,80456|0) - ^
01:23:225 (83225|3) - ^
01:23:571 (83571|1) - ^
01:24:148 (84148|1) - ^
01:26:110 - add a note for snare
01:26:571 (86571|0) - delete again
01:27:264 - to 01:27:610 - should be 1/6 on the drums , as for NM diff i prefer you to only map 1/2 beats instead of 1/4 , would be more accurate
call me back when you updated these , ill give another look for the patterns that can be polished through before i qualify this