rEdo wrote:

^ nope >:)
[Normal]
02:49:293 (4) - I'd say you're missing a whistle here. whistle should be at 02:49:071 (mainly on white tick, I guess it's ok to leave it)
02:52:849 (4) - As above.^

Suggested claps

00:28:626 (1) - At its end. clap actually sounds on 00:29:737 (red tick so I'm not sure if adding that will be good as it sounds like doubling the pattern together)
00:36:626 (4) - At its end.^
00:40:182 (3) - At its end.^
01:50:404 (4) - At its end.^
02:01:960 (3) - At its end.^

[Hard]
00:36:626 (5) - Suggesting a clap at its end, especially because you have that on Insane difficulty.Insane actually sounds on blue tick, there is no object on the blue tick here so placing clap here instead of whistle would be a bit weird
00:50:849 (5) - As above.^
01:47:737 (5) - As above.^
01:53:293 (8) - Definitely missing a clap at its end, see 00:42:182 (5)­ for reference. Thing is, there is sound on 00:42:182 as you said, I can't disagree but on the end of this referred slider, it has no snare at all in the music (01:53:737)
02:01:960 (5) - And another suggested clap.[/color]^

[Insane]
01:53:293 (5) - Missing a clap at its end, see 00:42:182 (6,1) for reference. same as Hard
02:06:182 (4) - Move it a little bit to the left, so it blankets with (3)'s end? didn't try to make it blanket that way
02:13:404 (4) - You could rotate it by 17° clockwise, so it blankets with (1,2) that are after it. wouldn't like to ruin the patterns fixed here (stacking with the others)

Taking a peek at your maps is just pure pleasure. <3 <3

1. Pretty clean mapset but just wanted to say that some stacks are breaking the flow sometimes but that's only my thoughts :p

1. 00:16:849 (7,1) - The Blanket could be better adjusted.
2. 00:20:404 (7) - No spacing issues here but it tend to make a jump cause transition with 00:21:515 (1) - is a bit far imo.
3. 00:36:626 (4,5) - Something a bit similar , the transition between those notes is a bit akward to read.
4. 00:43:515 (2) - Thought you could make a blanket like this :
   
5. 01:12:626 (3,4,5) - A triangle is missed here :3
6. 01:16:626 (3) - It tend to be a bit offscreen , be careful , it can be an object of an unrank !
7. 01:22:071 (1) - It's the easiest diff of the mapset and the spinner start too early ! Consider to start it here : 01:22:404 - for keeping a consistent rhythm with 01:21:071 (1,2,3,1) - . In my opinion you must fix this !
8. 02:02:626 (4,5,6) - Same as 00:43:515 (2) -, you can try to curve it like that :
   
   Don't forget that my screen SUCKS LOL. I'm sure you can make it better if you agree with me :3
9. 02:39:293 (3) - You should curve this to turn it toward 02:40:182 (1) - by rotating 02:39:293 (3) - by 16 degrees and place the object at x56y64 and then you'll see that you get a triangle !
10. 02:48:404 (3) - ame here but just consider to rotate the slider to make it toward 02:49:293 (4) -
11. 03:19:960 (3) - Feels like the rhythm isn't respected at all with the kickroll at the end :p

1. You must snap some objects~
2. CS is same as Insane! Consider to rearrange it with 3.5 for being consistent with the mapset! ( 3.0→3.5→4.0)
3. 00:17:960 (1) - A blanket wouldn't hurt there!
4. 00:50:405 (3,4) - I think you could add a jump by spacing that double.
5. 01:46:849 (2) - I'd say that you should move that note in the head of 01:47:071 (3) - for the reason that it'll give a neater flow when playing !
6. 01:59:737 (2) - Same as above~
7. 02:22:404 (2) - Same as above~
8. 02:27:293 (7) - Same as above~
9. 02:50:626 - You missed an important beat here I guess owo
10. 03:19:960 (3) - Are you really sure the beat end at 03:20:737 - ? I'd say that it finish at 03:20:626 - but it's my opinion!|/list]
    
    
    
    [Insane]
    
    
    1. An object isn't snapped ! Check AiMod !
    2. 00:14:404 (1,2) - I think you could add some curves in that pattern , the flow will be flawless then B)
    3. 00:19:515 (6) - Maybe move to x480 y232 ? It'll give a nice blanket and the pattern will be better overall ! Also , that plays nice !
    4. 00:24:849 (3,4,5,6) - I'm not sure, but here , the combo has to be broken cause the vocals are coming so you should add a NC but I don't know where ;;
    5. 01:05:293 - It's the calm part here and I'm surprised that you put the hitsound volume at 65% for that moment even if it's 2 seconds! You should turn this into 30/35% imo
    6. 02:10:626 (2) - Be careful too here ! It tend to be offscreen!
    7. 03:09:737 (5,6) - Same thing as 00:19:515 (6) -:p
    8. 03:20:071 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - You could do an original shape here ! :p
    9. 03:20:849 (13) - The Hard difficulty finish at 03:20:737 - but the Normal and Insane finish at 03:20:849 - . I don't think it's gonna be a reason of an unrank but try to be consistent with every diff and respect the same ryhthm for every diff !

Secretpipe wrote:

Hey there Frost~ We missed you :C

I'm here for a "normal" mod I guess xD

here we go~

[General]

1. Pretty clean mapset but just wanted to say that some stacks are breaking the flow sometimes but that's only my thoughts :p

[Normal]

1. 00:16:849 (7,1) - The Blanket could be better adjusted. That can't be noticed when playing so I would leave it here
2. 00:20:404 (7) - No spacing issues here but it tend to make a jump cause transition with 00:21:515 (1) - is a bit far imo. Spacing is correct, I think it's ok to keep it
3. 00:36:626 (4,5) - Something a bit similar , the transition between those notes is a bit akward to read. Following vocal while maintaining the drum set
4. 00:43:515 (2) - Thought you could make a blanket like this : Didn't try to go with blanket all the time that way, I wanted to just make spacing between each body of the objects consistent.
   
5. 01:12:626 (3,4,5) - A triangle is missed here :3 O_o
   Don't forget that my screen SUCKS LOL. I'm sure you can make it better if you agree with me :3
6. 03:19:960 (3) - Feels like the rhythm isn't respected at all with the kickroll at the end :pI don't think so for this diff. Hard and Insane are fixed but with this Normal, ending that way doesn't hurt.

[Hard]

1. CS is same as Insane! Consider to rearrange it with 3.5 for being consistent with the mapset! ( 3.0→3.5→4.0)I have always used the same circle size for Hard and Insane for all of my mapsets. I would like to leave it here.
2. 00:17:960 (1) - A blanket wouldn't hurt there! I don't see how I can improve the blanket when I intend to put it straight (I hope straight slider wouldn't hurt too!)
3. 00:50:405 (3,4) - I think you could add a jump by spacing that double. don't want to add jumps in Hard if there is a place to place the object
4. 02:50:626 - You missed an important beat here I guess owo it's similar to 02:53:293 where I put it blank to make players move to the next note easily

[Insane]

1. 00:19:515 (6) - Maybe move to x480 y232 ? It'll give a nice blanket and the pattern will be better overall ! Also , that plays nice ! prefer my own way
2. 01:05:293 - It's the calm part here and I'm surprised that you put the hitsound volume at 65% for that moment even if it's 2 seconds! You should turn this into 30/35% imo I think the volume peek starts off where I put... will fix if there are more voices complaining about it

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I finally finished my modding x)
The mapset was great overall ! Take my star Frost ~ヽ(゜▽、゜)ノ

smallboat wrote:

As request.
Almost has no any big issue to comment at this map,so just do a bit suggestion.

1. Red words: Should be fixed.
2. Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
3. Black words : In my opinion.

[General]

1. Disable widescreen support in all diff. (Feel no necessary)

[Normal]

1. 01:05:291 (1) - Add a note at here ? I found you follow the 2nd vocal,then why not follow 1st vocal too? I think add it can be played better (This time point just place here in hard diff.)
2. 01:21:069 (1) - Remove new combo,because hard diff didn't set here,so feel no need add a single combo.
3. 02:16:402 (1) - The same as 01:05:291 (1).
4. 02:32:180 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - The combo have a bit confused,change this ?
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[Hard]

1. Looks fine.

[Insane]

1. 00:57:513 (5) - Downbeat vocal fotgot add new combo here?
2. 02:08:624 (5) - The same as above.

Gaia wrote:

to be able to have a conversation with cRyo if that day ever comes w

Zero__wind wrote:

Gaia wrote:

to be able to have a conversation with cRyo if that day ever comes w

oh no you don't this is my answer = =

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