1. Easy (1.53 stars, 113 notes)
2. Hard (3.3 stars, 294 notes)
3. Insane (4.72 stars, 389 notes)
4. Normal (1.92 stars, 154 notes)

1. I think this video is NSFW i highly suggest you to delete it, since some BAT might say so o.o

1. 00:03:141 (1) - how about adding a whistle to the slider's repeat, sounds kinda fitting with the music o.o
2. 00:17:308 (2) - i highly suggest you to delete this note, since i really don't really think it follows anything in music. And this is an easy so you should make this diff a bit easier
3. 00:20:474 (3) - move this slider one grid down so it'll be symmetry with the slider (1) o.o
4. 00:20:474 (3) - a finish on slider's start would sound great imo
5. 00:27:808 (1) - how about adding a whistle to slider's start, it'll follow the voice pretty well
6. 00:30:974 (2) - how about making this curved slider to give nice effect to the slider? like this o.o
   
   
7. 00:31:974 (3) - how about adding a slidertick sound on here 00:32:141 sounds kinda fitting with the music
8. 00:51:141 (1) - finish on slider's start would sound greet imo
9. 00:55:808 (4) - how about moving the 2nd and 3rd slider's points a bit up so it'll avoid touching with the next slider's body
10. 00:56:474 (1) - how about adding a finish on slider's start to follow the vocal here, you kinda missed it here
11. 01:02:808 (2) - try to perfect stuck this note under 01:01:141 (3) - slider's tail
12. 01:13:808 (3) - a finish on slider's start would sound great imo
13. 01:20:474 (1) - ^
14. 01:21:808 (3) - a whistle on slider's repeat would sound awesome here, it'll follow the voice great here <3
15. 01:27:141 (3) - how about add a whistle with the clap here? it'll sound much better imo
16. 01:29:808 (2) - adding finish would follow great with the music

1. 00:44:474 (3) - how about curving this slider a bit, it'll give nice flow with your diff here, much better then liner slider o.o
   
   
2. 00:51:141 (1) - how about adding a finish on slider's start to follow the vocal
3. 00:56:474 (1) - ^
4. 01:09:808 (1) - ^
5. 01:15:141 (1) - ^
6. 01:20:474 (1) - ^
7. 01:27:974 (5) - I don't think this slider's tail follows anything...I highly suggest you removing the repeat on this slider
8. 01:36:474 (1) - finish on slider's start would be awesome here

1. 00:34:641 (7) - I think it would be better if you curved this slider a bit, liner slider kinda don't flow right here o.o
   
   
2. 00:45:808 (1) - I think you should add a finish on slider's start here
3. 00:51:141 (1) - ^
4. 00:54:808 (4) - how about making ctrl+g with this slider? it'll give nice flow with this slider o.o
5. 00:57:974 (1) - how about adding a nc here, to follow the vocal
6. 01:14:141 (6) - I think the flow would be better here, if this was with ctrl+g
7. 01:31:141 (1) - finish on slider start would follow the music good imo
8. 01:36:141 (6) - how about ctrl+g with this slider? it'll give nice flow with your style here o.o

1. 00:01:808 (1) - how about adding nc here, to shorten your combo here o.o
2. 00:04:308 (1) - ^ for the jump
3. 00:06:974 (6) - ^
4. 00:12:308 (6) - ^
5. 00:14:974 (7) - ^
6. 00:20:474 (7) - ^
7. 00:25:808 (6) - ^
8. 00:28:474 (6) - how about moving this slider one grid down to symmetry with the next slider
9. 00:51:141 (1) - finish on slider's start would be great imo
10. 00:56:474 (1) - ^
11. 01:09:808 (1) - ^
12. 01:20:474 (1) - ^
13. 01:21:808 (5) - ^
14. 01:32:974 (7) - how about ctrl+g this slider, it'll give nice flow to it, maybe curving it as well would be good too ></
    
    
15. 01:35:308 (6) - ^ just to ctrl+g here

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Hey kajiyatta :3

General:

1. I think this video is NSFW i highly suggest you to delete it, since some BAT might say so o.o

Easy:

1. 00:03:141 (1) - how about adding a whistle to the slider's repeat, sounds kinda fitting with the music o.o But no similar sound here...
2. 00:17:308 (2) - i highly suggest you to delete this note, since i really don't really think it follows anything in music. And this is an easy so you should make this diff a bit easier
3. 00:20:474 (3) - move this slider one grid down so it'll be symmetry with the slider (1) o.o Both y are 288, so it is already symmetrical, maybe.
4. 00:20:474 (3) - a finish on slider's start would sound great imo
5. 00:27:808 (1) - how about adding a whistle to slider's start, it'll follow the voice pretty well I just feel a bit odd.
6. 00:30:974 (2) - how about making this curved slider to give nice effect to the slider? like this o.o
   
   
7. 00:31:974 (3) - how about adding a slidertick sound on here 00:32:141 sounds kinda fitting with the music
8. 00:51:141 (1) - finish on slider's start would sound greet imo Same as Insane.
9. 00:55:808 (4) - how about moving the 2nd and 3rd slider's points a bit up so it'll avoid touching with the next slider's body
10. 00:56:474 (1) - how about adding a finish on slider's start to follow the vocal here, you kinda missed it here
11. 01:02:808 (2) - try to perfect stuck this note under 01:01:141 (3) - slider's tail
12. 01:13:808 (3) - a finish on slider's start would sound great imo ^
13. 01:20:474 (1) - ^
14. 01:21:808 (3) - a whistle on slider's repeat would sound awesome here, it'll follow the voice great here <3 ^
15. 01:27:141 (3) - how about add a whistle with the clap here? it'll sound much better imo
16. 01:29:808 (2) - adding finish would follow great with the music

Normal:

1. 00:44:474 (3) - how about curving this slider a bit, it'll give nice flow with your diff here, much better then liner slider o.o
   
   
2. 00:51:141 (1) - how about adding a finish on slider's start to follow the vocal Same as Insane.
3. 00:56:474 (1) - ^
4. 01:09:808 (1) - ^
5. 01:15:141 (1) - ^
6. 01:20:474 (1) - ^
7. 01:27:974 (5) - I don't think this slider's tail follows anything...I highly suggest you removing the repeat on this slider Follow the drum sound I suppose.
8. 01:36:474 (1) - finish on slider's start would be awesome here

Hard:

1. 00:34:641 (7) - I think it would be better if you curved this slider a bit, liner slider kinda don't flow right here o.o
   
   
2. 00:45:808 (1) - I think you should add a finish on slider's start here Same as Insane.
3. 00:51:141 (1) - ^
4. 00:54:808 (4) - how about making ctrl+g with this slider? it'll give nice flow with this slider o.o
5. 00:57:974 (1) - how about adding a nc here, to follow the vocal
6. 01:14:141 (6) - I think the flow would be better here, if this was with ctrl+g This is intensional, so no fixed.
7. 01:31:141 (1) - finish on slider start would follow the music good imo ^
8. 01:36:141 (6) - how about ctrl+g with this slider? it'll give nice flow with your style here o.o ^

Insane:

1. 00:01:808 (1) - how about adding nc here, to shorten your combo here o.o I'll get more opinion on here.
2. 00:04:308 (1) - ^ for the jump
3. 00:06:974 (6) - ^
4. 00:12:308 (6) - ^
5. 00:14:974 (7) - ^
6. 00:20:474 (7) - ^
7. 00:25:808 (6) - ^
8. 00:28:474 (6) - how about moving this slider one grid down to symmetry with the next slider
9. 00:51:141 (1) - finish on slider's start would be great imo Just consider about this, I don't suppose it is better to add it.
10. 00:56:474 (1) - ^
11. 01:09:808 (1) - ^
12. 01:20:474 (1) - ^
13. 01:21:808 (5) - ^
14. 01:32:974 (7) - how about ctrl+g this slider, it'll give nice flow to it, maybe curving it as well would be good too ></ I just feel curren tone better...
    
    
15. 01:35:308 (6) - ^ just to ctrl+g here Another changed.

That's all i can find here, I think insane has so many nc needs to be fixed imo. but I think that's about it <3 I like current NC pattern :3

Good job with the map kajiyatta and nice song choice, because Chata is so moe <3 ;w;

Good luck with ranking it :3