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Spring Head - Fallen Angel

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arien666
6,271 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
[General]
Source is 'EZ2DJ' not 'Ez2Dj'

[NM]
00:05:522 (1) - How about move 1 grid right?
00:26:876 (2,3,1) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?
01:08:981 (1) - [Suggestion] Maybe, I prefer to move '3rd gray grid' 1 grid up.
01:57:101 (1) - I dunno where's the end of this spin.

[HD]
01:57:101 (1) - Same as [NM]

[SHD]
01:00:108 (4,5,6,7,8) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?
01:57:101 (1) - Same as pre-2 diffs.

[lepidon! - Taiko Oni]
No problem



Umm :3
Nice song but...

Not yet for pubbling due to new combos and jumps :3...
Sorry :3...

Here's my star.
soulfear
947 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
soulfear

arken1015 wrote:

[General]
Source is 'EZ2DJ' not 'Ez2Dj' it's Ez2Dj

[NM]
00:05:522 (1) - How about move 1 grid right?
00:26:876 (2,3,1) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?
01:08:981 (1) - [Suggestion] Maybe, I prefer to move '3rd gray grid' 1 grid up.
01:57:101 (1) - I dunno where's the end of this spin.

[HD]
01:57:101 (1) - Same as [NM]

[SHD]
01:00:108 (4,5,6,7,8) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?
01:57:101 (1) - Same as pre-2 diffs.

[lepidon! - Taiko Oni]
No problem



Umm :3
Nice song but...

Not yet for pubbling due to new combos and jumps :3...
Sorry :3...

Here's my star.
TKiller
4,390 posts
Joined May 2009
TKiller
really nice job. Some patterns are ouchies for me, but maybe that's only my opinion. Also I think HD is a bit too stacky sometimes, overall fine though.

So, colors.
This tune is sad and light, video contains a lot of cloud blue and light red/blood red colors so I suppose experimenting with combo colours like this:


as you see, grey is slightly brighter and I've added very light blue and pink-red. I might take colours too seriously, but will like if you try something like this (probably less light or different RGB...)

Anyway, very nice, PM me please if you're going to map something from ez2dj/djmax, I'm always into it.
Card N'FoRcE
osu! Alumni
4,058 posts
Here since the beginning
Card N'FoRcE
- General:
  • You can remove "Ez2D" from the tags, since it's already in Source
- NM:
  • .Opinions:
    Hard to read, in general.
    01:37:853 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - really Hard to read
- HD:
  • .Opinions:
    Good
- SHD:
  • .Opinions:
    01:36:650 (1,2,1,2,3) - really hard to read, 01:37:252 (2,3) especially
    01:37:853 (1,2,3,4,5) - ..? The main problem is that the player gets hitpoints all over the place, so it's really hard to figure it out.
    01:39:056 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
I can't say that there are mistakes or something, but the last part of SHD in REALLY hard to read because of overlapping beats. Well, your choice, map was good and quite original, so Star for you ^^
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
Pubbled
soulfear
947 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
soulfear
1 week.
lepidopodus
3,548 posts
Joined November 2009
lepidopodus
minor fix

Download: Spring Head - Fallen Angel (soulfear) [lepidon! - Taiko Oni].osu
yeahyeahyeahhh
osu! Alumni
2,850 posts
Joined December 2008
yeahyeahyeahhh
General:
Combo color are RIDICULOUS with the video, please change so they're more visible.
All diffs could use more work on hitsounds imo. This song has some unique sounds. Check out the custom hitsound library.

SHD:
00:31:838 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Space these closer? Why the increase? I don't understand. Makes it look like 1/4 single clicks.
00:34:244 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:36:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:39:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

For example, the spacing here is much better.
00:40:108 (1,2,3,4) -

Keep it like that?

01:04:169 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make these symmetrically similar to 01:01:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ? Here is the pattern I think looks nice, NOTE that 01:01:763 (1) - (and the rest) or the pattern is horizontally flipped (ctrl+h)

SPOILER
SPOILER
SPOILER

Basically I just flipped the pattern and move it down so that 01:03:567 (7,8) are on the x-axis and started mirroring at 01:04:169 (1) with 01:05:974 (7,8) - in the center

If you do that above, move 01:06:876 (1,2) -
01:36:650 (1,2,1,2) - Spacing....
01:37:853 (1,2) - Spacing...
01:38:605 (4,5) - Spacing...
01:39:356 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing....
01:57:101 (1) - Drag the spinner end point to end on the white tick

PLEASE FIX THE BOLDED.

HD:
00:39:356 (4,1) - Ugh, please don't suddenly put stacks in the middle of a stream, please space this out so its a nice single stream.
01:22:364 (1,2) - Spacing, too close to 01:21:913 (12) -

NM:
00:12:440 (2) - New combo?
00:13:643 (2) - Remove new combo?
00:15:447 (5) - New combo?
01:30:635 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I would space these out since its your easiest diff, this stalled note stackage can be hard for new players to identify.
01:36:650 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - This looks REALLY cluttered and disorganized
01:37:552 (5) - Don't stack this, hard for noobs
01:45:372 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:49:883 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - This looks REALLY cluttered and disorganized
01:50:786 (3) - Don't stack this, hard for noobs
01:51:988 (3,1) - ^

Sorry I don't mod taiko. GL.
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
+star~
masuo_old
179 posts
Joined July 2009
masuo_old
star~ :)
soulfear
947 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
soulfear
:| :|
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
[SHD]
01:38:605 (4) - New combo.
01:39:808 (4) - New combo.
01:55:898 (9) - New combo.

The fallen angel in the video is hopeless.

Edit: Bubbled
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
[Difficulties]

[NM]

Add the same lead-in of the other difficulties.

[HD]

00:18:755 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:19:357 (2) - New combo due to jump.
01:21:913 (12,1) - Too close, when playing I get a miss, maybe because low OD.
01:57:101 (3) - Just a suggestion: Why don't put this note at the center for a cool end?

[SHD]

00:51:536 (6) - Add custom clap.
01:35:447 (1) ~ 01:39:958 (2) - I find this 4 seconds of patterns really hard to read. Can you change it please?

[lepidon! - Taiko Oni]

Add the same lead-in of the other difficulties.
soulfear
947 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
soulfear

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Difficulties]

[NM]

Add the same lead-in of the other difficulties.fixed

[HD]

00:18:755 (1) - Remove new combo. fixed
00:19:357 (2) - New combo due to jump.
01:21:913 (12,1) - Too close, when playing I get a miss, maybe because low OD.yes
01:57:101 (3) - Just a suggestion: Why don't put this note at the center for a cool end? done

[SHD]

00:51:536 (6) - Add custom clap. done
01:35:447 (1) ~ 01:39:958 (2) - I find this 4 seconds of patterns really hard to read. Can you change it please?I think it's fine,so I don't want to change,sorry.

[lepidon! - Taiko Oni]

Add the same lead-in of the other difficulties.done
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
I'm still unsure about that 4 seconds patterns on [SHD] but because is an Insane difficulty I think it's acceptable.

Re-bubbled~
KanbeKotori
315 posts
Joined May 2009
KanbeKotori
;)
abalee
osu! Alumni
1,994 posts
Joined June 2008
abalee
Honestly, placement in 01:36:650 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - @ [SHD] is totally beyond my reception.
anyway I won't pop it coz it is my own opinion.
soulfear
947 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
soulfear

abalee wrote:

Honestly, placement in 01:36:650 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - @ [SHD] is totally beyond my reception.
anyway I won't pop it coz it is my own opinion.
LOL
MaxwellDemon
osu! Alumni
903 posts
Here since the beginning
MaxwellDemon
Hmmm... what's with that weird buzz on the start and the end?
And why did you silence and hide the pass and fail section? :(
You don't even have any breaks. XD XD

And I have to agree with abalee on those notes. Looks good when play by auto, but a total pain to play. XD XD
I'd really recommend changing that.

Either way, I am just going to leave this bubble on and let me know what's up with the pass and fail sections... and whether if you can find a better mp3. XD

If there is no use for the pass and fail sections, delete and reupload please. I will come back to bubble it. XD
If there is a point, please explain, then I'll just immediately rank it.
soulfear
947 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
soulfear

MaxwellDemon wrote:

Hmmm... what's with that weird buzz on the start and the end?
And why did you silence and hide the pass and fail section? :(
You don't even have any breaks. XD XD

And I have to agree with abalee on those notes. Looks good when play by auto, but a total pain to play. XD XD
I'd really recommend changing that.

Either way, I am just going to leave this bubble on and let me know what's up with the pass and fail sections... and whether if you can find a better mp3. XD

If there is no use for the pass and fail sections, delete and reupload please. I will come back to bubble it. XD
If there is a point, please explain, then I'll just immediately rank it.
deleted and full upload.
This MP3 is from OST.
I can play that jump myself.
btw,you have poped the bubble :(
MaxwellDemon
osu! Alumni
903 posts
Here since the beginning
MaxwellDemon
Okay, since it wasn't a big change made (only section-pass and section-fail deleted) and mp3 was verified as OST source... and my previous bubble pop was a mistake, I'll be ranking this map by following Andre's bubble~
yehl
54 posts
Joined February 2010
yehl
It's glad to me playing EZ2DJ songs in the osu!
If possible, please mapping more ez2dj & ez2on source ^ ^
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou

yehl wrote:

It's glad to me playing EZ2DJ songs in the osu!
If possible, please mapping more ez2dj & ez2on source ^ ^
ye, he is mapping a lot
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