Desperate-kun wrote:
[Alpaca's Easy]
- OD is currently really high, equal to Normal's OD. Please try OD 2 fix
- 02:00:833 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These rhythms seem much more complicated than the rest of this difficulty, due to the alternating usage of 3/2 and 2/1 gaps, although the music in this section is very calm and doesn't call for more complicated rhythms. 2/1-rhythms would work better here, for example http://puu.sh/fxLev/b248b3342f.jpg fix
- Overall nice diff, I like your slidershape variation c: thank you!
Thank you for mods!Mystyk wrote:
Hi from my mod queue!
[Alpaca's Easy]
- 00:52:605 (2,3) - I would rather make something easier to read, since the sliderend is just...there in the middle of the slider - http://puu.sh/fntZh/d0b954b4ac.jpg - just an ugly example so that you can see what I mean - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2672541 fix
- 02:33:748 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - there is a bit too much 1/1 imo, and since it's high BPM I would rather make some longer sliders instead http://puu.sh/fnD1j/f2452bf2e0.jpg - a small break wouldn't be a bad idea because look http://puu.sh/fnD83/ca3e396e7f.jpg only 1/1 and that's pretty hard IMO for a newbie i really want to emphasize that kiai part with 1/1 ;w; i prefer to keep the first four 1/1 sliders, but i changed the 1/1 sliders at the next combo
- 02:43:348 (3,4,5) - same as above about making it a little bit easier - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2672937 fix
- 02:44:719 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is kind of messy and also, since it's 175 BPM I would suggest to make it easier a bit and use 2/1 sliders instead of 1/1 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2672667 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2672669 fix, but i still keep the first two 1/1 sliders for emphasize. i hope it's fine ><
update
osu file format v14
[General]
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Title:Epiphany (feat. Veela)
TitleUnicode:Epiphany (feat. Veela)
Artist:TwoThirds & Feint
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Creator:Streliteela
Version:Alpaca's Easy
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