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TwoThirds & Feint - Epiphany (feat. Veela)

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Mystyk
Hi from my mod queue!

[Alpaca's Easy]
  1. 00:52:605 (2,3) - I would rather make something easier to read, since the sliderend is just...there in the middle of the slider - http://puu.sh/fntZh/d0b954b4ac.jpg - just an ugly example so that you can see what I mean - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2672541
  2. 02:33:748 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - there is a bit too much 1/1 imo, and since it's high BPM I would rather make some longer sliders instead http://puu.sh/fnD1j/f2452bf2e0.jpg - a small break wouldn't be a bad idea because look http://puu.sh/fnD83/ca3e396e7f.jpg only 1/1 and that's pretty hard IMO for a newbie
  3. 02:43:348 (3,4,5) - same as above about making it a little bit easier - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2672937
  4. 02:44:719 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is kind of messy and also, since it's 175 BPM I would suggest to make it easier a bit and use 2/1 sliders instead of 1/1 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2672667 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2672669
[Normal]
  1. 00:34:262 (4) - this should be replaced 00:33:919 - here because the dnb sounds are there, or you can also try to use a reverse slider - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2707257 (the melody is also there so it would fit better xD)
  2. 00:54:148 (6) - same as above ^ it should be placed here 00:54:490 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2707273
  3. 01:53:805 (3,5) - these are a bit crowded and since the reverse arrow is closer to the previous sliderend it would be better to give a different direction to (5), example - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2687211
  4. 02:13:176 (4,5,6) - instead of this, why don't you try this? - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2707355 - I think it fits better to the music
  5. 02:19:348 (5,2) - don't do this stack please, it is confusing (and those 1/2s are already quite hard at the slow part) and 02:20:376 (2,4) - this is also unappealing, so I would suggest you to improve this pattern, example:
    https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2687629
    https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2687639
  6. 02:24:662 (4) - remove this, there is enough 1/2 nearby and also it will fit better to the music, since the previous ones you only used a slider 02:22:776 (1,2) - which fits really well, so that's why it would be better to follow that pattern and remove (4)
  7. 02:35:805 (4) - I would rather place this differently because it is stacked with 02:34:433 (2) - so it might be a little confusing, I think this would be a better solution - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2707415
  8. 02:37:862 (5,6,7,1) - don't do this confusing stack please, example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2707453
  9. 02:52:948 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think there might be a bit too much 1/2 here so why not try it a bit differently? - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2707495 - you could use a reverse slider instead of 02:53:633 (3) - it would fit the vocals well and it would still be 1/2 (you can follow the distance if you just put this whole pattern a little bit to the left 02:49:519 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - )
[Frey's Hard]
  1. 02:00:490 (3,4) - this sounds wrong since you seem to follow the vocals, it would be better to do this - http://puu.sh/fye41/b14fcd28e1.jpg or http://puu.sh/fyem1/7712573cf9.jpg - because 02:01:176 - "I took" (or whatever the lyrics is) starts here
  2. 02:40:948 (2) - minor thing again but you could make this nicer (I mean both the curves and the blanket) - http://puu.sh/fyeP3/2e88cf0b41.jpg
[imouto's Insane]
  1. 00:53:633 (1) - could you move this a little bit up to make the reverse slider more visible? something like this: http://puu.sh/fyipt/107d1c82b8.jpg - it still looks like your style, but just to make sure :P
  2. 01:02:890 (3) - same here ^
  3. 01:05:633 (5) - I'm not really a fan of this, it ends on a big beat but we don't have to click at the end of the slider, you could try sliders or a stream maybe? - http://puu.sh/fyiN7/48d3f0cfb8.jpg - it's an insane so you don't have to use reverse sliders everywhere, or you can try the same that you did here - 02:58:090 (5,1) -
  4. 03:17:290 (3) - same as above ^ but I would especially suggest to change this one because the ending of the map would feel better to play if the big beat was emphasized with a hit circle!
  5. 01:12:662 - add a hit circle maybe? there is nothing here which kind of kills the flow and you can hear that sound in the background as well so it would fit well in my opinion
  6. 01:15:405 - same here ^
  7. 01:51:405 (4) - this should end on 01:51:748 - because of the vocals and then add a hit circle here 01:51:919 (5) - http://puu.sh/fAva7/ed7d0e5e3b.jpg
  8. 01:54:148 (4) - same here http://puu.sh/fAvdr/1094a63388.jpg
  9. 01:56:890 (4) - same
  10. 01:59:462 (3) - this should be put 1/2 earlier to follow the vocals, it plays weird like this
[Insane]
  1. 02:49:948 (2,3,4) - these should be placed just like the previous high-spaced streams 02:38:976 (2,3,4) - because IMO it is confusing since the spacing you used 02:49:948 (2,3,4) - here is the almost (or maybe it is actually) the same as non-high spaced sreams, well anyway just changing it a little bit won't hurt the flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2707183
Also, if there were useful changes from Desperate's mod he should get a kudosu xD

I guess that's all so call me back after Desperate rebubbles. It's a very nice mapset btw :3
Fushimi Rio

Mystyk wrote:

Hi from my mod queue!

[imouto's Insane]
  1. 00:53:633 (1) - could you move this a little bit up to make the reverse slider more visible? something like this: http://puu.sh/fyipt/107d1c82b8.jpg - it still looks like your style, but just to make sure :P
    Rotated 00:52:948 (1) - 180°
  2. 01:02:890 (3) - same here ^ made some similar change.
  3. 01:05:633 (5) - I'm not really a fan of this, it ends on a big beat but we don't have to click at the end of the slider, you could try sliders or a stream maybe? - http://puu.sh/fyiN7/48d3f0cfb8.jpg - it's an insane so you don't have to use reverse sliders everywhere, or you can try the same that you did here - 02:58:090 (5,1) -
    Hmm, changed to a stream. I'm not a fan of short sliders.
  4. 03:17:290 (3) - same as above ^ but I would especially suggest to change this one because the ending of the map would feel better to play if the big beat was emphasized with a hit circle! ^
  5. 01:12:662 - add a hit circle maybe? there is nothing here which kind of kills the flow and you can hear that sound in the background as well so it would fit well in my opinion personally I think it's ok. also adding a note will make a pretty difficult pattern here.
  6. 01:15:405 - same here ^ ^
  7. 01:51:405 (4) - this should end on 01:51:748 - because of the vocals and then add a hit circle here 01:51:919 (5) - http://puu.sh/fAva7/ed7d0e5e3b.jpg fixed
  8. 01:54:148 (4) - same here http://puu.sh/fAvdr/1094a63388.jpg ^
  9. 01:56:890 (4) - same ^
  10. 01:59:462 (3) - this should be put 1/2 earlier to follow the vocals, it plays weird like this fixed
thx for modding.

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Topic Starter
Streliteela

Mystyk wrote:

Hi from my mod queue! Hi~~:3

[Normal]
  1. 00:34:262 (4) - this should be replaced 00:33:919 - here because the dnb sounds are there, or you can also try to use a reverse slider - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2707257 (the melody is also there so it would fit better xD)
  2. 00:54:148 (6) - same as above ^ it should be placed here 00:54:490 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2707273
  3. 01:53:805 (3,5) - these are a bit crowded and since the reverse arrow is closer to the previous sliderend it would be better to give a different direction to (5), example - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2687211
  4. 02:13:176 (4,5,6) - instead of this, why don't you try this? - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2707355 - I think it fits better to the music
  5. 02:19:348 (5,2) - don't do this stack please, it is confusing (and those 1/2s are already quite hard at the slow part) and 02:20:376 (2,4) - this is also unappealing, so I would suggest you to improve this pattern, example:
    https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2687629
    https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2687639
  6. 02:24:662 (4) - remove this, there is enough 1/2 nearby and also it will fit better to the music, since the previous ones you only used a slider 02:22:776 (1,2) - which fits really well, so that's why it would be better to follow that pattern and remove (4)
  7. 02:35:805 (4) - I would rather place this differently because it is stacked with 02:34:433 (2) - so it might be a little confusing, I think this would be a better solution - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2707415
  8. 02:37:862 (5,6,7,1) - don't do this confusing stack please, example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2707453
  9. 02:52:948 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think there might be a bit too much 1/2 here so why not try it a bit differently? - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2707495 - you could use a reverse slider instead of 02:53:633 (3) - it would fit the vocals well and it would still be 1/2 (you can follow the distance if you just put this whole pattern a little bit to the left 02:49:519 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - )

    Wow really helpful suggestions~~ :) Fixed all of them as you said~
Insane]
  1. 02:49:948 (2,3,4) - these should be placed just like the previous high-spaced streams 02:38:976 (2,3,4) - because IMO it is confusing since the spacing you used 02:49:948 (2,3,4) - here is the almost (or maybe it is actually) the same as non-high spaced sreams, well anyway just changing it a little bit won't hurt the flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2707183
    Well okey... I reduce the space of this stream and also change the pattern of 02:27:576 (3,4,5) - Hope it better this time~
Also, if there were useful changes from Desperate's mod he should get a kudosu xD Yup I just forgot to give him kudosu...sorry :(

I guess that's all so call me back after Desperate rebubbles. It's a very nice mapset btw :3
Thanks for your modding~ It's really very very very helpful~:3~I'll call you to recheck after we fix all the diffs~ :)
Frey

Mystyk wrote:

[Frey's Hard]
02:00:490 (3,4) - this sounds wrong since you seem to follow the vocals, it would be better to do this - http://puu.sh/fye41/b14fcd28e1.jpg or http://puu.sh/fyem1/7712573cf9.jpg - because 02:01:176 - "I took" (or whatever the lyrics is) starts here
Surely you are right, but when playing, I think players can't notice the wrong sounds. Because it's not so obvious. Then, if I change this place, I should definetely change the similar places like 01:52:262 (3,3,3) - and so on. That means I have to get this whole part remapped(01:52:262 - 02:05:633) :?

02:40:948 (2) - minor thing again but you could make this nicer (I mean both the curves and the blanket) - http://puu.sh/fyeP3/2e88cf0b41.jpg[Fixed
Meow~Master~Here is your code~
osu file format v14

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Thanks for modding!
Koiyuki
Guu姐姐叫我看这张图 不过貌似没有必要了 ww
good luck, take a star~
Topic Starter
Streliteela

Minakami Yuki wrote:

Guu姐姐叫我看这张图 不过貌似没有必要了 ww
good luck, take a star~
哇感谢M酱的星星owo
jyu

Desperate-kun wrote:

[Alpaca's Easy]

  1. OD is currently really high, equal to Normal's OD. Please try OD 2 fix
  2. 02:00:833 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These rhythms seem much more complicated than the rest of this difficulty, due to the alternating usage of 3/2 and 2/1 gaps, although the music in this section is very calm and doesn't call for more complicated rhythms. 2/1-rhythms would work better here, for example http://puu.sh/fxLev/b248b3342f.jpg fix
  3. Overall nice diff, I like your slidershape variation c: thank you! :)

Mystyk wrote:

Hi from my mod queue!

[Alpaca's Easy]
  1. 00:52:605 (2,3) - I would rather make something easier to read, since the sliderend is just...there in the middle of the slider - http://puu.sh/fntZh/d0b954b4ac.jpg - just an ugly example so that you can see what I mean - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2672541 fix
  2. 02:33:748 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - there is a bit too much 1/1 imo, and since it's high BPM I would rather make some longer sliders instead http://puu.sh/fnD1j/f2452bf2e0.jpg - a small break wouldn't be a bad idea because look http://puu.sh/fnD83/ca3e396e7f.jpg only 1/1 and that's pretty hard IMO for a newbie i really want to emphasize that kiai part with 1/1 ;w; i prefer to keep the first four 1/1 sliders, but i changed the 1/1 sliders at the next combo
  3. 02:43:348 (3,4,5) - same as above about making it a little bit easier - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2672937 fix
  4. 02:44:719 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is kind of messy and also, since it's 175 BPM I would suggest to make it easier a bit and use 2/1 sliders instead of 1/1 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2672667 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2672669 fix, but i still keep the first two 1/1 sliders for emphasize. i hope it's fine ><
Thank you for mods! :)
update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: TwoThirds & Feint feat. Veela - Epiphany.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 131125
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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Title:Epiphany (feat. Veela)
TitleUnicode:Epiphany (feat. Veela)
Artist:TwoThirds & Feint
ArtistUnicode:TwoThirds & Feint
Creator:Streliteela
Version:Alpaca's Easy
Source:
Tags:Drum & Bass DnB Electronic Cut version AlpacaCokelat Frey imoutosan
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Topic Starter
Streliteela
Okey all diffs update~~LOL~~
Thanks for all my GDers for your hard working~ Now it's the time for harvest~ :)
Fushimi Rio
根据我的经验 这句话会是个flag(跑
Myxo
You forgot to update imouto's diff... I don't know about the other GDs, please recheck if you updated everything and then remind me!
Topic Starter
Streliteela

imoutosan wrote:

根据我的经验 这句话会是个flag(跑
你说的对,fuel
Myxo
[Normal]

I'm really really sorry for the back-and-forth here but....
At the beginning there was almost no 1/2, so we suggested to add some. Then it was too much and you removed a lot of it again. But now it's again very few... I'm sorry but especially in the kiai I would have not removed so much of the 1/2. It would be nice if you can add notes at these places:
02:19:862 -
02:22:605 -
02:25:348 -
02:28:090 -
02:30:833 -
02:33:576 -
02:44:548 -
02:50:033 -
02:52:776 -

[imouto's Insane]

The section starting at 01:49:862 - looks a bit untidy after the remap and can use some minor suggestions, I will drop some for you: (note that these are not very important, just to make it look / play a bit better)
01:52:090 (6) - 385|165 for a equal spacing of 01:51:919 (5,6,7) - ?
01:54:833 (6) - 240|197 same reason
01:59:976 (4) - 498|205 to make 01:59:976 (4,5,6,7) - a better spaced pattern
Also, the whistles in this section sound really randomly placed. Try to think of a whistle pattern and make it equal everytime the music repeats here, since otherwise it sounds strange.

[Insane]

02:27:576 (3,4,5) - Hmm maybe you would want to use lower SV (1.0x) here, same as for 02:16:605 (1,2,3) -

Remind me when this is applied c:
Fushimi Rio

Desperate-kun wrote:

[imouto's Insane]

The section starting at 01:49:862 - looks a bit untidy after the remap and can use some minor suggestions, I will drop some for you: (note that these are not very important, just to make it look / play a bit better)
01:52:090 (6) - 385|165 for a equal spacing of 01:51:919 (5,6,7) - ? fixed (to 384,164
01:54:833 (6) - 240|197 same reason ^
01:59:976 (4) - 498|205 to make 01:59:976 (4,5,6,7) - a better spaced pattern ^
Also, the whistles in this section sound really randomly placed. Try to think of a whistle pattern and make it equal everytime the music repeats here, since otherwise it sounds strange.
rearranged whistles. but because of my broken earphone I can only wish it sounds better now :c
Thx for modding!
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Topic Starter
Streliteela

Desperate-kun wrote:

[Normal]

I'm really really sorry for the back-and-forth here but....
At the beginning there was almost no 1/2, so we suggested to add some. Then it was too much and you removed a lot of it again. But now it's again very few... I'm sorry but especially in the kiai I would have not removed so much of the 1/2. It would be nice if you can add notes at these places:
02:19:862 -
02:22:605 -
02:25:348 -
02:28:090 -
02:30:833 -
02:33:576 -
02:44:548 -
02:50:033 -
02:52:776 -

Okey all fixed~It's really a tough process LOL~Thanks a lot~
[Insane]

02:27:576 (3,4,5) - Hmm maybe you would want to use lower SV (1.0x) here, same as for 02:16:605 (1,2,3) -

OK changed to sv 1.0x

Remind me when this is applied c:
Really really thanks for bothering you so many times. Hope this time everything could be better ;)
Myxo
I'm sorry, but 02:27:576 (3,4,5) - in Insane is still not consistent.
(3) should have SV 1.0x too, not just (4) and (5), to be consistent with 02:16:605 (1,2,3) -
Topic Starter
Streliteela


Desperate-kun wrote:

I'm sorry, but 02:27:576 (3,4,5) - in Insane is still not consistent.
(3) should have SV 1.0x too, not just (4) and (5), to be consistent with 02:16:605 (1,2,3) -
Okey~Changed to 1.0x for consistent
Myxo
Okay, LAST Recheck.

[Insane]

NCing needs some work:
  1. 01:02:205 - Do you really need this NC?
  2. 01:14:548 (1,1,1) - Unnecessary NC spam - It will mess up the HP drain, you can remove all three NCs and it will still be readable and look good
  3. 01:27:919 - NC should be here instead of at 01:28:262 - for consistency with 01:30:662 (1,2) - etc
  4. 01:55:005 (1,2) - Switch NCs for consistency with 01:46:776 (7,1) for example
  5. 01:57:748 (1,2) - Same as above.
  6. 02:13:176 - Add NC? It doesn't really make sense to have a longer combo here, atleast I can't see the reason
  7. 02:15:919 - Have NC here instead of at 02:15:233 - ? I understand you have this for the pattern here, but later on when the same music appears again 02:25:519 - you don't have anything similar so yea
  8. 02:24:148 - Add NC if you added it at 02:13:176
  9. 02:40:433 (6) - Add NC here then
  10. 02:41:976 - Have the NC here instead of at 02:41:633 for consistency with other similar patterns, for example 02:30:662 (5,6,1) -

[imouto's Insane]

  1. Your NCing is messed up imo. I tried to understand it, maybe you NC after patterns, but I didn't find any logic. I would highly recommend you to rework the comboing and put a NC every big white tick and nowhere else. (In the slow section 01:49:862 - every second white tick of course, like it is already done correctly).
Please check everything carefully so I can bubble when it's updated!
Fushimi Rio

Desperate-kun wrote:

Okay, LAST Recheck.

[imouto's Insane]

  1. Your NCing is messed up imo. I tried to understand it, maybe you NC after patterns, but I didn't find any logic. I would highly recommend you to rework the comboing and put a NC every big white tick and nowhere else. (In the slow section 01:49:862 - every second white tick of course, like it is already done correctly).
Please check everything carefully so I can bubble when it's updated!
I got messed up too. Rearranged NCs.

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306,39,154605,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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389,48,155290,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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356,176,157348,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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207,255,161976,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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354,132,164719,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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304,64,165405,5,0,0:0:0:0:
227,30,165576,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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227,30,166090,5,0,0:0:0:0:
144,39,166262,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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144,39,166776,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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216,83,167290,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,58,167462,5,8,0:0:0:0:
221,97,167633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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221,97,168148,5,0,0:0:0:0:
177,167,168319,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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304,178,169862,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,195,169948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
305,212,170033,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,230,170119,1,0,0:0:0:0:
313,247,170205,1,8,0:0:0:0:
307,162,170548,6,0,P|272:188|255:207,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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255,208,171233,6,0,P|213:194|188:192,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
103,190,171576,2,0,P|60:199|37:209,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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112,56,172262,2,0,P|79:26|58:13,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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211,135,172862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,134,172948,5,8,0:0:0:0:
397,99,173119,1,0,0:0:0:0:
295,117,173290,2,0,P|262:129|228:134,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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324,236,173976,2,0,P|300:290|297:307,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,168,174319,6,0,P|412:222|415:239,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,373,174662,2,0,P|416:324|403:313,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,270,175005,2,0,P|283:246|266:243,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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172,235,175433,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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137,241,175605,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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264,140,176033,1,2,0:0:0:0:
407,34,176376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,120,176548,1,8,0:0:0:0:
457,117,176719,1,2,0:0:0:0:
407,34,176890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
410,203,177062,5,0,0:0:0:0:
363,289,177233,1,8,0:0:0:0:
410,203,177405,1,2,0:0:0:0:
265,291,177748,2,0,L|168:292,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,292,178090,2,0,L|47:292,2,35,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,292,178433,5,8,0:0:0:0:
239,186,178776,1,2,0:0:0:0:
382,80,179119,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,163,179290,1,8,0:0:0:0:
335,166,179462,1,2,0:0:0:0:
382,80,179633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,81,179805,5,0,0:0:0:0:
386,249,179976,1,8,0:0:0:0:
478,78,180148,1,2,0:0:0:0:
335,166,180490,1,0,0:0:0:0:
386,249,180662,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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386,249,181176,5,8,0:0:0:0:
243,143,181519,1,2,0:0:0:0:
100,37,181862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
50,120,182033,1,8,0:0:0:0:
147,123,182205,1,2,0:0:0:0:
100,37,182376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,206,182548,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,207,182719,1,8,0:0:0:0:
147,123,182890,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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400,80,186148,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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93,160,191119,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Streliteela

Desperate-kun wrote:

Okay, LAST Recheck.

[Insane]

NCing needs some work:
  1. 01:02:205 - Do you really need this NC?
  2. 01:14:548 (1,1,1) - Unnecessary NC spam - It will mess up the HP drain, you can remove all three NCs and it will still be readable and look good
  3. 01:27:919 - NC should be here instead of at 01:28:262 - for consistency with 01:30:662 (1,2) - etc
  4. 01:55:005 (1,2) - Switch NCs for consistency with 01:46:776 (7,1) for example
  5. 01:57:748 (1,2) - Same as above.
  6. 02:13:176 - Add NC? It doesn't really make sense to have a longer combo here, atleast I can't see the reason
  7. 02:15:919 - Have NC here instead of at 02:15:233 - ? I understand you have this for the pattern here, but later on when the same music appears again 02:25:519 - you don't have anything similar so yea
  8. 02:24:148 - Add NC if you added it at 02:13:176
  9. 02:40:433 (6) - Add NC here then
  10. 02:41:976 - Have the NC here instead of at 02:41:633 for consistency with other similar patterns, for example 02:30:662 (5,6,1) -
Please check everything carefully so I can bubble when it's updated!
All fixed, Thanks for all your checkings! :)
Mei
在我不知道的时候出现了鬼畜的imouto's Insane o.o
Topic Starter
Streliteela

Mei wrote:

在我不知道的时候出现了鬼畜的imouto's Insane o.o
orz之前一大波BN说normal和hard之间有difficulty gap所以就又找了一个新的hard难度,imouto这个难度感觉做hard偏难了就提到light insane了
Frey

Mei wrote:

在我不知道的时候出现了鬼畜的imouto's Insane o.o
印象中以前那个Hard和现在Insane貌似没啥区别(果然很鬼畜 点头
Maeglwn
CAN YOU RANK THIS ALREADY I LOVE THIS SONG
Mystyk
lmao, waiting for Despy's rebubble so that I (yes and ONLY I) can qualify it xD if you dare to give it to other BNGs I'm gonna...punish someone XD *jk*
Topic Starter
Streliteela

Mystyk wrote:

lmao, waiting for Despy's rebubble so that I (yes and ONLY I) can qualify it xD if you dare to give it to other BNGs I'm gonna...punish someone XD *jk*
/me crying ;w;
Acturally I'm still waiting for his rebubble but still...;w;
Look at my eyes, full of tears...TwT
Myxo
Okay, QATs are not really supposed to bubble mapsets but since I popped this when I was BN I'm sure this is fine~
Here you go :3 Rebubbled!
Topic Starter
Streliteela

Desperate-kun wrote:

Okay, QATs are not really supposed to bubble mapsets but since I popped this when I was BN I'm sure this is fine~
Here you go :3 Rebubbled!
Woooooow finally~~:D
Thanks for your help and rebubble~ :)
Kibbleru

Desperate-kun wrote:

Okay, QATs are not really supposed to bubble mapsets
waat?! well it's not a part of their job but that doesn't mean its discouraged :X
Mystyk
Alright, I rechecked this, and there is one thing that should be fixed before I qualify this xD

Normal:
02:43:348 (4,5) - these are too close, please use equal distance (and it's so disturbing my eyes too) xD it can be easily fixed by moving (4) a little bit
Topic Starter
Streliteela

Mystyk wrote:

Alright, I rechecked this, and there is one thing that should be fixed before I qualify this xD

Normal:
02:43:348 (4,5) - these are too close, please use equal distance (and it's so disturbing my eyes too) xD it can be easily fixed by moving (4) a little bit
Fixed~Thanks for your checking~~:D
Mystyk
Great!

This anti-jump has also been fixed 02:31:690 (5,6) - we talked about it in-game.

Now I think the map is ready to be qualified!
[ Mephisto ]
Congrats
Mao
Great song, grats!
Topic Starter
Streliteela
Thanks all modders for your help~
And also special thanks to Deperate-kun and Mystyk, you really gave me great help for this map :)
Frey
Gratz!

What a good news for me when I traveling in Phuket of Thailand :)
Koiyuki
gratz!
meii18
Gratz o3o
jyu
waaaaa congratz!! :)
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