TwoThirds & Feint - Epiphany (feat. Veela)

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Fushimi Rio
卧槽我怕了 这是攒了多少mod

Atsuro wrote:

[imouto's Hard]
  1. Some of the antijumps you use are very misleading, especially at the beginning of the map changed to ar9
  2. 01:03:925 (2,1) - Aren't these overmapped? seems fine in my version now.
  3. 01:04:439 (1) - Ctrl+g and reposition this to make it lead to the next circle ^
  4. 01:07:525 - I think a circle with clap hs should be here for the strong beat good
  5. 01:13:182 (1,2) - Make the spacing of these two bigger, it's the same as 01:11:811 (1,2,3) - so players might mistake it for the same pattern added a note at 01:13:011 -

Leorda wrote:

[imouto's Insane]
00:26:554 (1) - Having an anti-jump like this can cause players were confuse to read if this a 1/2 note or 1/1 note. You should move further away from previous one, to make it readable for timing and spacing added a note to avoid antijump
00:26:554 (1) - ^
00:39:239 (2) - ^ no, this is not 1/2 spacing. and players won't read it as 1/4 too.
00:41:982 (2) - ^ ^
00:57:754 (1) - Remove whistle at repeating slider seems fixed now
01:49:868 (1) - I think this spinner were too long for this diff. You need to remap this part I'm considering
02:32:725 - Add note here? added

-Famous- wrote:

imouto's Insane
  1. What about AR8.5?
  2. 00:22:096 (1,2) - I'm not a fan from this kind of stacking. It doesn't look nice imo. not me :)
  3. 00:32:211 (5) - Move that slider to x:216 ; y:292. fixed
  4. 00:32:896 (7,1) - Blanket can be slightly improved. fixed
  5. 00:34:268 (4) - Move that circle to x:420 ; y:348 for better flow. fixed
  6. 00:35:468 (8,1) - Improve blanket. fixed
  7. Add a note 00:44:211, 00:44:382 and 00:44:554. added
  8. 00:49:354 - A triple stream would fit here. Add a note 00:49:354 and 00:49:439. added
  9. 00:59:468 (1,2,3,4,5) - Keep the spacing of 1.2x. made some change
  10. 01:49:868 (1) - Map this part instead of adding a spinner. .....
  11. 02:32:725 - Add a note. added
  12. 02:33:754 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - I don't like this pattern. It's playable but it looks very ugly imo. Same with the other part that use the same pattern. seems I got different ideas about overlapping with you. It's fine imo.
Thanks for mods.

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: TwoThirds & Feint feat. Veela - Epiphany.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 131125
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.700001

[Metadata]
Title:Epiphany (feat. Veela & Feint)
TitleUnicode:Epiphany (feat. Veela & Feint)
Artist:TwoThirds
ArtistUnicode:TwoThirds
Creator:Streliteela
Version:imouto's Insane
Source:
Tags:Drum & Bass DnB Electronic imoutosan AlpacaCokelat
BeatmapID:585895
BeatmapSetID:241474

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234,239,133182,5,0,0:0:0:0:
234,239,133353,1,8,0:0:0:0:
161,198,133525,2,0,P|116:186|90:186,1,70,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
21,146,133868,5,8,0:0:0:0:
21,146,134039,1,0,0:0:0:0:
94,105,134211,2,0,P|139:93|165:93,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
247,94,134554,5,8,0:0:0:0:
247,94,134725,1,8,0:0:0:0:
206,167,134897,2,0,P|194:211|194:238,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,164,135239,5,8,0:0:0:0:
290,164,135410,1,8,0:0:0:0:
331,237,135582,2,0,P|343:281|343:308,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
261,288,135925,2,0,P|248:332|235:355,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,297,136268,2,0,P|141:329|118:342,1,70,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,259,136611,6,0,P|35:248|94:176,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,120,137125,2,0,P|109:105|114:86,2,35,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,224,137639,6,0,P|165:204|188:179,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,109,137982,2,0,P|251:77|259:43,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
175,50,138325,6,0,P|145:69|122:94,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,163,138668,2,0,P|59:194|51:228,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
43,310,139011,6,0,P|44:344|55:378,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,333,139354,2,0,P|143:301|151:267,1,70,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,185,139697,2,0,P|156:150|146:122,4,35,2|0|0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,267,140211,6,0,P|173:292|202:312,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,232,140554,2,0,P|267:241|302:244,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,159,140896,2,0,P|321:150|353:136,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
479,46,141239,6,0,P|459:74|433:98,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,165,141582,2,0,P|456:179|414:186,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,273,141924,2,0,P|401:270|367:260,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,180,142268,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,108,142439,2,0,P|268:93|251:85,4,35,2|0|0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,180,142953,5,8,0:0:0:0:
265,221,143125,2,0,P|220:233|194:233,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,277,143467,5,8,0:0:0:0:
124,277,143638,1,8,0:0:0:0:
197,318,143810,2,0,P|242:330|268:330,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
341,300,144153,5,0,0:0:0:0:
341,300,144324,1,8,0:0:0:0:
414,259,144496,2,0,P|459:247|485:247,1,70,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,169,144839,5,8,0:0:0:0:
512,169,145010,1,0,0:0:0:0:
439,128,145182,2,0,P|394:116|368:116,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,119,145525,5,8,0:0:0:0:
286,119,145696,1,8,0:0:0:0:
327,192,145868,2,0,P|339:236|339:263,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,189,146210,5,8,0:0:0:0:
243,189,146381,1,8,0:0:0:0:
202,262,146553,2,0,P|190:306|190:333,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,313,146896,2,0,P|285:357|298:380,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,322,147239,2,0,P|392:354|415:367,1,70,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,284,147582,6,0,P|497:273|438:201,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,145,148096,2,0,P|422:130|417:111,2,35,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,249,148611,6,0,P|356:237|328:218,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,163,148954,2,0,P|240:135|223:105,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,91,149297,6,0,P|340:101|369:119,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
433,174,149640,2,0,P|456:199|473:230,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
502,307,149983,6,0,P|509:340|508:375,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,352,150326,2,0,P|402:324|385:294,1,70,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,217,150669,2,0,P|350:182|353:153,4,35,2|0|0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,294,151182,6,0,P|372:327|354:356,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,187,151525,2,0,P|295:216|307:249,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
149,203,151868,6,0,P|161:170|180:141,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,311,152211,2,0,P|238:281|226:248,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,141,152554,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,176,152725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,141,152896,5,0,0:0:0:0:
181,276,153068,1,10,0:0:0:0:
260,166,153239,1,2,0:0:0:0:
131,208,153411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,250,153582,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,141,153754,5,12,0:0:0:0:
229,73,153925,1,8,0:0:0:0:
299,26,154097,2,0,P|340:12|366:10,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,73,154439,5,8,0:0:0:0:
306,39,154610,1,8,0:0:0:0:
389,34,154782,2,0,P|432:43|455:53,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,39,155125,5,8,0:0:0:0:
389,48,155296,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,85,155468,2,0,P|496:114|511:135,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,48,155811,5,8,0:0:0:0:
464,85,155982,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,129,156153,1,2,0:0:0:0:
317,92,156325,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,67,156497,5,8,0:0:0:0:
312,106,156668,1,8,0:0:0:0:
369,168,156840,2,0,P|389:206|395:231,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,106,157182,5,8,0:0:0:0:
356,176,157353,1,8,0:0:0:0:
374,257,157525,2,0,P|371:300|365:325,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,256,157868,2,0,P|221:212|227:187,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,240,158211,6,0,P|295:283|289:308,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,239,158554,2,0,P|145:195|151:170,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,199,158896,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,216,158981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,233,159067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,251,159153,1,0,0:0:0:0:
215,268,159238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
226,173,159582,6,0,P|263:196|281:214,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,278,159925,2,0,P|357:317|364:341,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,270,160268,6,0,P|263:232|281:214,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
345,158,160611,2,0,P|384:137|408:130,1,70,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,256,160954,6,0,P|299:232|281:214,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,151,161296,2,0,P|205:111|198:87,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,159,161639,6,0,P|299:197|281:215,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,255,161982,1,8,0:0:0:0:
23,320,162325,6,0,P|49:343|81:356,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,273,162668,2,0,P|129:262|156:240,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,169,163011,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,56,163354,5,8,0:0:0:0:
272,121,163525,1,8,0:0:0:0:
354,132,163697,1,2,0:0:0:0:
302,199,163868,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,210,164039,2,0,L|400:248,2,35,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,132,164382,1,2,0:0:0:0:
302,199,164554,1,2,0:0:0:0:
354,132,164725,5,8,0:0:0:0:
304,64,164896,1,8,0:0:0:0:
234,17,165068,2,0,P|193:3|167:1,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,64,165410,5,8,0:0:0:0:
227,30,165581,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,25,165753,2,0,P|101:34|78:44,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
227,30,166096,5,8,0:0:0:0:
144,39,166267,1,8,0:0:0:0:
69,76,166439,2,0,P|37:105|22:126,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,39,166782,5,8,0:0:0:0:
69,76,166953,1,8,0:0:0:0:
141,120,167124,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,83,167296,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,58,167468,5,8,0:0:0:0:
221,97,167639,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,159,167811,2,0,P|144:197|138:222,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
221,97,168153,5,8,0:0:0:0:
177,167,168324,1,8,0:0:0:0:
159,248,168496,2,0,P|162:291|168:316,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,247,168839,2,0,P|312:203|306:178,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,231,169182,6,0,P|238:274|244:299,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,230,169525,2,0,P|388:186|382:161,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,178,169868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,195,169953,1,0,0:0:0:0:
305,212,170039,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,230,170125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
313,247,170210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
307,162,170553,6,0,P|272:188|255:207,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,276,170896,2,0,P|188:316|183:341,1,70
255,208,171239,6,0,P|213:194|188:192,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
103,190,171582,2,0,P|60:199|37:209,1,70
187,192,171925,6,0,P|174:150|161:128,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
113,56,172268,2,0,P|80:26|59:13,1,70
160,127,172611,2,0,P|188:136|200:136,4,35,0|0|0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,136,173296,6,0,P|286:124|301:117,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,84,173639,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,236,173982,2,0,P|300:290|297:307,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,170,174325,6,0,P|413:224|416:241,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,373,174668,2,0,P|416:324|403:313,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,270,175011,2,0,P|283:246|266:243,1,70,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,236,175354,5,2,0:0:0:0:
172,235,175439,1,0,0:0:0:0:
155,237,175525,1,2,0:0:0:0:
137,241,175611,1,0,0:0:0:0:
121,246,175696,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,185296,12,0,186668,0:0:0:0:
256,192,187011,5,2,0:0:0:0:
101,40,187354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
51,107,187525,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,175,187697,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,149,187868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,65,188040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,272,188383,5,2,0:0:0:0:
337,80,188725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
338,215,188896,1,8,0:0:0:0:
258,105,189068,1,2,0:0:0:0:
387,147,189239,1,0,0:0:0:0:
258,189,189411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
466,248,189754,5,2,0:0:0:0:
291,325,190097,2,0,L|203:363,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,298,190440,2,0,L|219:271,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,328,190783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
93,160,191125,5,2,0:0:0:0:
219,271,191468,2,0,L|282:242,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,296,191811,2,0,L|291:325,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,263,192154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
419,383,192496,5,2,0:0:0:0:
512,263,192839,2,0,L|473:175,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,199,193182,2,0,L|425:263,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,333,193525,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,263,193868,5,2,0:0:0:0:
512,263,194211,2,0,L|473:175,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,199,194554,2,0,L|425:263,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,333,194896,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,263,195239,5,2,0:0:0:0:
363,129,195582,1,0,0:0:0:0:
286,129,195754,1,8,0:0:0:0:
209,131,195925,1,2,0:0:0:0:
325,196,196268,5,8,0:0:0:0:
248,197,196439,1,0,0:0:0:0:
286,129,196611,1,10,0:0:0:0:
325,196,196782,1,8,0:0:0:0:
363,129,196954,5,0,0:0:0:0:
288,263,197125,1,8,0:0:0:0:
209,131,197296,2,0,L|173:75,4,35,2|0|0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

以防万一 更新之后查一下歌曲信息什么的吧
Secretpipe
Find 2/3 more mods and feel free to call me !
Sonnyc
Hello Stalker.

General:

-- Maybe you wished for some kind of an effect, but your normal-hitclap sound was ear hurting at one side. Please use this altered one.

Normal:

00:51:925 (6) - Fix spacing.
00:59:125 (4) - ^
01:02:896 (5) - ^
01:11:468 (1) - ^
01:17:639 (2) - ^
02:33:411 (4) - ^

Frey's Hard:

-- Difficulty setting is highly imbalanced with [Normal]. Consider setting AR7.

03:17:125 (3,4) - Imo this jump didn't fit the music nicely..

imouto's Insane:

-- Tags conflict with other diffs.
-- Recommending to use the same combo color with other difficulties since the usage of color in this difficulty lacks readability.

01:49:868 (1) - 11second spinner? NO, I won't allow that. Cut your spinner and map please.

Insane:

-- Use tickrate 2. The current tick rate is hard to tell the players about the sudden sv change such as 02:49:525 (1).

01:13:868 (1) - 1.5x sv change felt too much compared with 01:13:525 (3). Imo 1.3x will work fine enough.
02:31:354 (2) - Highly recommended to make more space with (1,3). Since this note is too close, it can be confusing.

The difficulty gap between Normal and Hard was quite large since the rhythm of Normal is mostly constructed with 1/1 objects which is similar with the Easy diff, while the rhythm of Hard is mostly constructed 1/2 and also is frequently using jumps. What I suggest here is to remap your Normal by using 1/2 more often since adding beats in the current design doesn't seems to work nice. Or you can find another BAT who agrees with the current spread.
Fryz3
Hi! sorry for the late mod :(
modder came from: t/267877&start=0

Normal
  1. 01:08:723 (1) - maybe place the slider like this for better flow:
  2. 01:16:952 (1) - place it on: 412|176 to let it overlap it with the previous slider perfectly.
  3. 02:08:723 (7) - maybe replace it with just a single note? I don't know why you should change it here,
    i think it's better to remain with the previous slider placement.
  4. 02:54:323 (3) - maybe use the clap hitsound on the beginning of the slider here?
  5. 03:05:294 (3) - ^
  6. 03:16:266 (3) - ^

i think in overall it's a great map! :)

Insane
  1. 00:24:837 (1) - let it end on: 00:25:009
  2. 00:26:037 (7) - let it end on: 00:26:123
  3. 00:26:894 (4) - let it end on: 00:27:066 (ill just place the time from now on)
  4. 00:32:723 (5) - end: 00:32:809
  5. 00:38:552 (1) - end: 00:38:723
  6. 00:46:780 (1) - place on: 24|184 for better stack.
  7. 00:47:466 (4) - end: 00:47:637
  8. 00:53:294 (7,8,9,10,1) - maybe stack like how you did the previous ones?
    (like a circle wise, see: 00:40:952 (5,6,7,8,1) - )
  9. 01:08:380 (4,5,6,7,1) - ^
  10. 00:54:666 (4,5,6,7,1) - stack distance is a slighty unequal, it probably would be a bother but,
    if you can make it more equal it would be great :)
  11. 00:56:380 (1) - end: 00:56:552
  12. 00:56:723 (2) - end: 00:56:894
  13. 01:06:666 (5) - end: 01:06:837
  14. 01:10:609 (3,4,5) - placement bit weird here, distance also a bit unequal.
  15. 01:11:123 (6,7,8,9,1) - stack isn't in a straight line.
  16. 01:20:637 (7) - delete note.
  17. add note here: 01:24:409 ( you don't really need to, but if you stick with your attern, you should place one here)
  18. 01:49:523 (6) - add finish hitsound on the end of the slider?
  19. 02:36:494 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - it's just an idea, but maybe you can make more like triangles here?
  20. 02:41:637 (1) - ctrl + G?
  21. 02:52:952 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - idk about this combo, but i'm getting confused of the pattern. i mostly play around 4 star maps,
    so it may be my problem -,-
  22. 03:06:494 (6) - ctrl + G?


Gl with it!
pinataman
Hi there. Saw your map in #modrequest and liked me some DnB. If you thought my mod was helpful, please take a look at a map of mine and make this a M4M https://osu.ppy.sh/s/239635. Hope this helps!


[Easy]

00:29:294 (2,1) – make the second part of the 1 slider more curved so players can see the bend better. Could use 2 slider anchors for the 1 since the red anchor makes it less circular. 1 can blanket 2 better.

00:35:809 (1,2) - As shown by this helpful slider, you're pattern is not straight http://puu.sh/eXHg9/5fa2015e2e.jpg . So either rotate 00:35:809 (1,2) – by 4 CC and put at 118, 243, or rotate 1 and 2 Clockwise so you don't have linear flow here

00:52:609 (2) - It would be nice if you had the red anchor on 00:53:123 – to match the beat, but this kind of messes up your slider design

00:59:809 (3) - This could be curved a bit more to match the 2 slider better like this: http://puu.sh/eXJ9L/9d02dbe390.jpg
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01:49:866 (1,2) – I don't like this overlap/design. If you go with the anchor suggestions below, this is the pattern that came to mind (had to break 1.2x DS, which if you do you could try to keep your pattern, jut make sure 1 overlaps 2 at the center of the curved part of the 2 slider): http://puu.sh/eXNz3/6a24ccf09a.jpg
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01:49:866 (1) – See if putting the red anchor at 01:51:066 - feels better since it matches the singer http://puu.sh/eXMBZ/71193386d3.jpg

In a similar vain, see if red anchors at 01:53:294 - , 01:53:809 – work better and put the red anchor here 01:59:294 – instead of 01:59:637 – and also if you do these, then 01:55:352 (1) – would feel out of place so go add similar anchors there.

02:00:837 (1) – For these kinds of sliders, it looks like you're using the red anchor to get the lyric “I” and then using the reverse slider on the electronic rhythm. I would put the red anchor more on the white slidertick to better match, but overall I don't recommend using a red anchor. Since the rhythm is not the same for the vocals/electric, trying to hit both is really confusing since it's hard not to focus on only one of them. Especially for the first note to introduce this pattern, I would just use a smooth slider.

02:33:066 (5,2) – It's possible to blanket these given rotation/movement, but this probably isn't necessary

02:46:780 (4) - Maybe try this flow? (Ctrl + > on 4) http://puu.sh/eXOnR/148be42b3a.jpg . If so, you can fit the rest with something like http://puu.sh/eXOj3/8635da73fa.jpg

03:00:152 (3,2) - These aren't perfectly parallel. Put the slider end at 188, 145. I don't want to assume that you do or don't know how to do this, so I put how I got here in this box:
Copy paste 03:00:152 (3) - . CTRL + Shift + S by about 1.5 . Delete the red anchor and end. You can be done, but for precise knowledge of where the slider ends, hit CTRL + G twice on it. End up with 188, 145.


[Normal]

00:31:009 (3) – could flow from 2 better by moving to 480, 205

00:45:752 (3) - -2 to y for better blanket

01:05:980 (1) – rotate CC by 1 and move to 472, 158 for better blanket

01:19:009 (4) – move to 162, 178 for better blanket.

01:17:980 (3,4) – Now that that's done, why is the prev 1.08? change to 1.0

01:23:809 (2) - +3 to x for better blanket

01:26:209 (3) – This is close to being linear flow, but since it isn't, it feels weird. Either move more to the left to make it obvious it's triangle flow or move it to the right of the 2 slider to make normal curved flow, or make it perfect linear flow.

01:49:866 (1) – from here to the spinner, I don't understand your claps. Can you explain what you're going for? I also want to have claps on the downbeats like 01:52:609 (1) – but that also sounds weird in spots. I guess my suggestion would be to keep the clap on this slider end 01:50:209 (2) - , but then delete the claps you have and put claps on all downbeats that have a note. Use what you did in the Insane and put a clap on each slider's end that starts a NC (so 01:52:609 (1) – etc.)

01:50:894 (3,4) – This is picky, but the stacking algorithm puts 3 at 76, 215, so your DS could be more consistent. Similarly the following stacks do similar things and not sure if you want 01:53:637 (2) - or 3 to be the one blanketed, since the other will not be.

01:55:352 (1) – this could be stacked better by +1x, +1y

02:58:780 (2) – this could be stacked better by -1 x, -1 y

[Hard]

00:33:066 (1) - -1 to y for better stack (even though the slider end is where you have this head, the animation looks odd the way you have it. Basically the editor is a lying asshole)

00:48:494 (3) – rotate 2 degrees clockwise for better blanket

00:51:923 (4) - -1 to x for better stack

00:55:009 (1,1) - - +1x, +1y for better stack

01:53:809 (1) - +1y for better blanket

02:19:009 (3,4,5,1) - -1y for better blanket

02:19:523 (4) - -1x for better blanket

02:21:066 (3,1,2) – dem curves. (No suggestion, I just like that even though this looks linear it's not)

02:35:466 (2,1) – Not perfectly blanketed, but the fading should make it not matter.

02:51:580 (1) - +3x, +1y for better blanket

02:52:952 (1) - +1, +1 for better stack (may need to do that for 2 and 3 too for linear flow)

02:55:694 (1) – move middle slider anchor to 118, 232 for better blanket with 4

02:59:809 (1,2) – rotate 3 degrees CC for better blanket

03:06:152 (3,4,1,2) - +1x for better stack on 2 and 1 sliders

Probably the most picky mod I've ever done because there wasn't much to say. Very good map.

[imouto's Insane]

I mention pacing a fair amount. This video helps discuss that idea: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5LScL4CWe5E

00:31:009 (1,2,3) – this looks a little odd, can't think of a fix though, sorry.

00:50:037 (4) – The stacking algorithm puts this at 92, 144, which gives it a downwards diagonal look/flow, which feels odd. See if manually putting 5 and 6 down and to the left 4 feels better

01:00:666 (1) – Is the reason for this spinner the long vocal note? If so, it might be better to make this clearer by starting it at 00:59:980 (4) – because right now it feels a little late to start it where it is. If you do change, you can have 00:59:466 (1,2,3) – be jumps to transition to the high energy spinner.

01:07:694 (5) - -2 to y for better blanket

01:22:094 (7,1) – Be careful about the jump into 1. With the changing DS, 1 can easily be read as being here 01:22:266 -

01:23:809 – I like having a circle here

01:49:866 (1) – I'm not a fan of this spinner. First off, spinners have a lot of energy, which is too much for this section. Furthermore, long spinners like this one feel kind of taxing. A small spinner can give a boost in energy, but such a long spinner just feels draining, and this is on a slow section of the song. Then, for the section starting at 02:01:523 (1) - , with almost the same energy level in the song, you have a section that takes so little energy. The pacing is just off. Please map this instead of having a 10 second spinner.

02:11:466 – The transition into the kiai is non-existent, so the change in energy feels a little too abrupt. Try adding a circle here to transition better using DS of .3x. Oh but make sure to account for the SV change, so DS it so it looks something like this: http://puu.sh/eZtH1/446afbd7d2.jpg

02:55:694 (5) – The problem with the break after this is that it comes after a climax. To me, putting a break here is equivalent to ending the map here, but worse since there's some added resolution that I have to wait for. The resolution of a map is supposed to comfort the player back down into normality after such a climax, but this doesn't do that. This drops the energy vastly, only to pick it up again. But why pick it up again when it's already hit its climax? You're not making me feel better since it's not the climax. And I have to wait a while for you to make the map resolve? No, make the map resolve immediately instead of making me wait for it. If the break was less than 2 seconds than fine, but this isn't, it's a long break. So either delete the notes after this break or map this instead of having a break for an extended resolution.

03:17:637 – Consider making this a circle and have 3 only reverse 2 times?

Good DnB flow.

[Insane]

00:26:037 (7,1) – Imo, the flow is awkward not fancy. Do a normal overlap inside of overlapping inside the slider.

00:56:037 (6,1) – Please no overlap

00:56:380 (1,2) – why do these use 1/8 ends? I also don't like any of the other 1/8 ends on sliders, but this one in particular gets to me. It sounds late and I can't understand what there is to gain from not ending on 00:56:552 -

00:57:580 (6,2) – These ends could stack better

01:09:066 (2,3) – why stack these? I don't see the decrease in energy that makes me want to pause. If anything, a normal DS will speak better for that since it's not a jump that would need energy.

01:09:237 (3) – prefer this as 2 circles for a triple into 01:09:409 (4) - .

01:28:266 (1) – You'll probably disagree, but I would like a break here until 01:39:237 (1) - . I think a break emphasizes the strong finish of 01:27:580 (5,6,7,8,9) - , where as mapping it makes the player work more and doesn't let you reflect on the strength of this finish. Furthermore, a break here makes your pacing better for 01:39:237 (1) - . By having a break, you took the relatively low energy section and found a way to make it feel a little higher energy since it's compared to a break. Plus I think you aren't gaining much by mapping this. It's pretty easy, so no one should really have any problems with it to the point where it's not as enjoyable as your more intense parts. It's kind of just a tax on my energy.

01:28:266 (1) – If not, clap on the slider end?

01:52:609 (1,3) – kind of awkward overlap, try 3 at 160, 185 ish

02:11:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – I'm curious, why no triples? I mean I don't like streams in general so for me single-tapping is good and I like the feel of the sliders, but why deviate from the norm here?

02:17:809 (3,4,5) – I don't like stacking triples in this section. You are at a higher energy part of the song from the beginning, yet it feels like you stack your triples more frequently. Spacing them out gives a better sense of pacing as it matches higher energy a little better. Furthermore, while spaced streams will always kill me since I suck at streams/reading them, stacking your triples more often makes 02:28:009 (4,5,6,1) – feel like it's out of left field. I feel spacing all the stacked triples would give me a better chance at reading this, especially if you space them further out than what you spaced them with the beginning.

02:19:009 (2,3) - I don't like this overlap, would rather see something like this http://puu.sh/eYQLH/c1ddba38c3.jpg

02:22:780 (1,3) – I think this overlap looks poor

02:40:780 (7) – Rotate this 2 degrees CC and move to 403, 162 for better blanket

02:44:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) – Let's compare this to 02:33:752 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - . I think the latter is the better pattern since the first combo in each pattern sets up a repetition, but the latter pattern breaks from the repetition to release the energy, where as the former pattern only stifles it. Try a different flow for 02:46:094 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) -

02:36:494 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) – In a similar vain, this feels a little similar to 02:35:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - , so try going with a tornado pattern by changing the order of your notes like this (editing for proper DS of course): http://puu.sh/eZnOr/f7917f9192.jpg , http://puu.sh/eZnQ9/4ba3423197.jpg

02:52:952 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – great pattern :D


Overall a very solid mapset. Good luck with getting ranked! :)

Edit: typo and linked video
Frey

Sonnyc wrote:

Frey's Hard:

-- Difficulty setting is highly imbalanced with [Normal]. Consider setting AR7. Okay:D

03:17:125 (3,4) - Imo this jump didn't fit the music nicely.. Still, I don't really want to fix if this is not overmapping.

pinataman wrote:

[Hard]

00:33:066 (1) - -1 to y for better stack (even though the slider end is where you have this head, the animation looks odd the way you have it. Basically the editor is a lying asshole) Fixed

00:48:494 (3) – rotate 2 degrees clockwise for better blanket
Fixed

00:51:923 (4) - -1 to x for better stack Fixed

00:55:009 (1,1) - - +1x, +1y for better stack Fixed

01:53:809 (1) - +1y for better blanket Fixed

02:19:009 (3,4,5,1) - -1y for better blanket I don't think it needs to

02:19:523 (4) - -1x for better blanket As above

02:21:066 (3,1,2) – dem curves. (No suggestion, I just like that even though this looks linear it's not) Well, fine for me

02:35:466 (2,1) – Not perfectly blanketed, but the fading should make it not matter. I think so :3

02:51:580 (1) - +3x, +1y for better blanket Fixed

02:52:952 (1) - +1, +1 for better stack (may need to do that for 2 and 3 too for linear flow) Fixed

02:55:694 (1) – move middle slider anchor to 118, 232 for better blanket with 4 What you said reminds me of this weird pattern, I decide to change this place, but not follow as you said

02:59:809 (1,2) – rotate 3 degrees CC for better blanket Fixed

03:06:152 (3,4,1,2) - +1x for better stack on 2 and 1 sliders Fixed

Probably the most picky mod I've ever done because there wasn't much to say. Very good map
Thanks~Also my most picky reply so far (´ ▽`).。
Thanks for modding! :)


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Topic Starter
Streliteela
From now on I will stop finding new mods and wait until my GDers give me their updating codes. So hurry up plz〜 :lol:
@imoutosan: 等你代码了,最后一次更新以后就能泡了,速〜
jyu
dang so many mods i'm sorry for the very late reply ;w; will edit this post with mod replies and the update around friday (really busy irl sobs) i'm sorry ;_;

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Leorda wrote:

Hello

[Alpaca's Easy]
02:22:782 (1) - Add clap? You probably forgot it already fixed by Streliteela yay
02:37:868 (3) - Add whistle at repeating slider? ^

-Famous- wrote:

Alpaca's Easy
  1. Check AiMod. 02:33:754 - Kiai time is toggled on for less than 15 seconds. All the other difficulties doesn't have that warning. Fix it. i've seen many ranked maps with this in their AiMod so i suppose it's not a major problem
  2. 00:29:296 (2,1) - Blanket can be improved slightly. fix
  3. 00:37:525 (3,1) - ^ fix
  4. 01:00:496 (1,2) - Improve blanket. fix
  5. 01:05:982 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved. the curent one is fine i guess
  6. 01:09:068 (2) - Move that slider to x:104 ; y:104 to keep the flow with 01:08:725 (1). fix
  7. 01:49:868 (1,2,1,2) - Not sure about that part. The sliders are really weird shaped and 01:49:868 (1,2) overlap. since there are no more option on this lmao well the first slider quickly disappear after we played it so then we can see the next slider's path clearly, so i guess it's not a problem. might reconsider if more modders point this out
  8. 02:00:839 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - That part doesn't sound right. You should snap 02:02:382 (2) to 02:02:211 and repeat it. Same with 02:05:125 (2,2). wait i thought they're the same
  9. 02:12:496 - Feels like a note is missing. it's better not to put a slider/circle too fast after spinner, especially in easiest diff
  10. 02:13:868 - Also feels like a note is missing. dang will reconsider about this
  11. 02:16:954 - Again note is missing. Snap 02:17:296 (1) to 02:16:954 and 02:17:639 (2) to 02:17:296. Then add a note 02:19:011. following the vocal here. also i'd like to add some gaps here because beginners can't play rhythms which is too long (based on my friend's experience tho lmao
  12. 02:27:925 - Add a note. ^
  13. 02:52:268 (2,1) - Slider doesn't flow with 02:52:954 (1). Also 02:53:296 (2) doesn't flow with 02:52:954 (1). fix

pinataman wrote:


[Easy]

00:29:294 (2,1) – make the second part of the 1 slider more curved so players can see the bend better. Could use 2 slider anchors for the 1 since the red anchor makes it less circular. 1 can blanket 2 better.
fix

00:35:809 (1,2) - As shown by this helpful slider, you're pattern is not straight http://puu.sh/eXHg9/5fa2015e2e.jpg . So either rotate 00:35:809 (1,2) – by 4 CC and put at 118, 243, or rotate 1 and 2 Clockwise so you don't have linear flow here intentional

00:52:609 (2) - It would be nice if you had the red anchor on 00:53:123 – to match the beat, but this kind of messes up your slider design hmm yeah i dont want to ruin the blanket but i'll try something about this

00:59:809 (3) - This could be curved a bit more to match the 2 slider better like this: http://puu.sh/eXJ9L/9d02dbe390.jpg fix
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01:49:866 (1,2) – I don't like this overlap/design. If you go with the anchor suggestions below, this is the pattern that came to mind (had to break 1.2x DS, which if you do you could try to keep your pattern, jut make sure 1 overlaps 2 at the center of the curved part of the 2 slider): dang since this is the easiest diff it's not allowed to break the dshttp://puu.sh/eXNz3/6a24ccf09a.jpg
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01:49:866 (1) – See if putting the red anchor at 01:51:066 - feels better since it matches the singer http://puu.sh/eXMBZ/71193386d3.jpg

In a similar vain, see if red anchors at 01:53:294 - , 01:53:809 – work better and put the red anchor here 01:59:294 – instead of 01:59:637 – and also if you do these, then 01:55:352 (1) – would feel out of place so go add similar anchors there. i think i prefer the current one /runs

02:00:837 (1) – For these kinds of sliders, it looks like you're using the red anchor to get the lyric “I” and then using the reverse slider on the electronic rhythm. I would put the red anchor more on the white slidertick to better match, but overall I don't recommend using a red anchor. Since the rhythm is not the same for the vocals/electric, trying to hit both is really confusing since it's hard not to focus on only one of them. Especially for the first note to introduce this pattern, I would just use a smooth slider. i didnt use red anchor for the vocal tho lmao i'll reconsider about the smooth slider because it's kinda good to lessen the sudden change in rhythm but long sliders all over again will be boring (and i've got a lot of complains about this diff being too repetitive lol) but yeah in this part the 3/4 rhythm is actually dominant in the song so i still choose to keep this rhythm tho, but yeah i'll re-think about the smooth sliders

02:33:066 (5,2) – It's possible to blanket these given rotation/movement, but this probably isn't necessary yeah it's not a blanket

02:46:780 (4) - Maybe try this flow? (Ctrl + > on 4) http://puu.sh/eXOnR/148be42b3a.jpg . If so, you can fit the rest with something like http://puu.sh/eXOj3/8635da73fa.jpg fix

03:00:152 (3,2) - These aren't perfectly parallel. Put the slider end at 188, 145. I don't want to assume that you do or don't know how to do this, so I put how I got here in this box: fix
Copy paste 03:00:152 (3) - . CTRL + Shift + S by about 1.5 . Delete the red anchor and end. You can be done, but for precise knowledge of where the slider ends, hit CTRL + G twice on it. End up with 188, 145.
Thank you for mods! :)
and really sorry for the very late reply ;w;

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Fushimi Rio

Sonnyc wrote:

imouto's Insane:

-- Tags conflict with other diffs.
-- Recommending to use the same combo color with other difficulties since the usage of color in this difficulty lacks readability.

01:49:868 (1) - 11second spinner? NO, I won't allow that. Cut your spinner and map please.
All fixed. I hope.

pinataman wrote:

[imouto's Insane]

I mention pacing a fair amount. This video helps discuss that idea: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5LScL4CWe5E

00:31:009 (1,2,3) – this looks a little odd, can't think of a fix though, sorry. made some change

01:00:666 (1) – Is the reason for this spinner the long vocal note? If so, it might be better to make this clearer by starting it at 00:59:980 (4) – because right now it feels a little late to start it where it is. If you do change, you can have 00:59:466 (1,2,3) – be jumps to transition to the high energy spinner. yeah, but I didn't see much improvement after changing it. so no change.

01:22:094 (7,1) – Be careful about the jump into 1. With the changing DS, 1 can easily be read as being here 01:22:266 - It seems ok after raising ar to 9.

01:23:809 – I like having a circle here changed the former part's rhythm

01:49:866 (1) – I'm not a fan of this spinner. First off, spinners have a lot of energy, which is too much for this section. Furthermore, long spinners like this one feel kind of taxing. A small spinner can give a boost in energy, but such a long spinner just feels draining, and this is on a slow section of the song. Then, for the section starting at 02:01:523 (1) - , with almost the same energy level in the song, you have a section that takes so little energy. The pacing is just off. Please map this instead of having a 10 second spinner.
ok. mapped.

02:11:466 – The transition into the kiai is non-existent, so the change in energy feels a little too abrupt. Try adding a circle here to transition better using DS of .3x. Oh but make sure to account for the SV change, so DS it so it looks something like this: http://puu.sh/eZtH1/446afbd7d2.jpg made some change

02:55:694 (5) – The problem with the break after this is that it comes after a climax. To me, putting a break here is equivalent to ending the map here, but worse since there's some added resolution that I have to wait for. The resolution of a map is supposed to comfort the player back down into normality after such a climax, but this doesn't do that. This drops the energy vastly, only to pick it up again. But why pick it up again when it's already hit its climax? You're not making me feel better since it's not the climax. And I have to wait a while for you to make the map resolve? No, make the map resolve immediately instead of making me wait for it. If the break was less than 2 seconds than fine, but this isn't, it's a long break. So either delete the notes after this break or map this instead of having a break for an extended resolution.
ok. mapped.

03:17:637 – Consider making this a circle and have 3 only reverse 2 times?
I prefer not to. sorry.

Good DnB flow.

Edit: typo and linked video
No reply is fixed.
Not available to watch the video now. Thanks for modding.

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277,187,151523,2,0,P|295:216|307:249,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
149,203,151866,6,0,P|161:170|180:141,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,311,152209,2,0,P|238:281|226:248,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,141,152552,1,8,0:0:0:0:
257,311,152723,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,141,152894,5,0,0:0:0:0:
181,276,153066,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,166,153237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
131,208,153409,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,250,153580,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,141,153752,5,12,0:0:0:0:
229,73,153923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
299,26,154094,2,0,P|340:12|366:10,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,73,154437,5,0,0:0:0:0:
306,39,154609,1,8,0:0:0:0:
389,34,154780,2,0,P|432:43|455:53,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,39,155123,5,0,0:0:0:0:
389,48,155294,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,85,155466,2,0,P|496:114|511:135,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,48,155809,5,0,0:0:0:0:
464,85,155980,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,129,156152,1,2,0:0:0:0:
317,92,156323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,67,156494,5,8,0:0:0:0:
312,106,156666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
369,168,156837,2,0,P|389:206|395:231,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,106,157180,5,0,0:0:0:0:
356,176,157352,1,8,0:0:0:0:
374,257,157523,2,0,P|371:300|365:325,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,256,157866,2,0,P|221:212|227:187,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,240,158209,6,0,P|295:283|289:308,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,239,158552,2,0,P|145:195|151:170,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,199,158894,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,216,158980,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,233,159066,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,251,159152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
215,268,159237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
226,173,159580,6,0,P|263:196|281:214,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,278,159923,2,0,P|357:317|364:341,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,270,160266,6,0,P|263:232|281:214,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
345,158,160609,2,0,P|384:137|408:130,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,256,160952,6,0,P|299:232|281:214,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,151,161294,2,0,P|205:111|198:87,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,159,161637,6,0,P|299:197|281:215,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,255,161980,1,8,0:0:0:0:
23,320,162323,6,0,P|49:343|81:356,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,273,162666,2,0,P|129:262|156:240,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,172,163009,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,121,163180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,56,163352,5,0,0:0:0:0:
302,199,163523,1,0,0:0:0:0:
354,132,163694,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,121,163866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,210,164037,2,0,L|416:236,2,35,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,56,164380,1,2,0:0:0:0:
302,199,164552,1,0,0:0:0:0:
354,132,164723,5,8,0:0:0:0:
304,64,164894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
234,17,165066,2,0,P|193:3|167:1,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,64,165409,5,0,0:0:0:0:
227,30,165580,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,25,165752,2,0,P|101:34|78:44,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
227,30,166094,5,0,0:0:0:0:
144,39,166266,1,8,0:0:0:0:
69,76,166437,2,0,P|37:105|22:126,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,39,166780,5,0,0:0:0:0:
69,76,166952,1,8,0:0:0:0:
141,120,167123,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,83,167294,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,58,167466,5,8,0:0:0:0:
221,97,167637,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,159,167809,2,0,P|144:197|138:222,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
221,97,168152,5,0,0:0:0:0:
177,167,168323,1,8,0:0:0:0:
159,248,168494,2,0,P|162:291|168:316,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,247,168837,2,0,P|312:203|306:178,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,231,169180,6,0,P|238:274|244:299,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,230,169523,2,0,P|388:186|382:161,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,178,169866,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,195,169952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
305,212,170037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,230,170123,1,0,0:0:0:0:
313,247,170209,1,8,0:0:0:0:
307,162,170552,6,0,P|272:188|255:207,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,276,170894,2,0,P|188:316|183:341,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,208,171237,6,0,P|213:194|188:192,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
103,190,171580,2,0,P|60:199|37:209,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
187,192,171923,6,0,P|174:150|161:128,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,56,172266,2,0,P|79:26|58:13,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,127,172609,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,131,172694,1,0,0:0:0:0:
194,134,172780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
211,135,172866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,134,172952,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,56,173123,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,134,173294,6,0,P|286:122|301:115,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,99,173637,2,0,P|396:134|388:168,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,236,173980,2,0,P|300:290|297:307,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,168,174323,6,0,P|412:222|415:239,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,373,174666,2,0,P|416:324|403:313,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,270,175009,2,0,P|283:246|266:243,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,236,175352,5,2,0:0:0:0:
172,235,175437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
155,237,175523,1,0,0:0:0:0:
137,241,175609,1,0,0:0:0:0:
121,246,175694,5,12,0:0:0:0:
264,140,176037,1,2,0:0:0:0:
407,34,176380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,120,176552,1,8,0:0:0:0:
457,117,176723,1,2,0:0:0:0:
407,34,176894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
410,203,177066,5,0,0:0:0:0:
363,289,177237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
410,203,177409,1,2,0:0:0:0:
265,291,177752,2,0,L|168:292,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,292,178094,2,0,L|47:292,2,35,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,292,178437,5,8,0:0:0:0:
239,186,178780,1,2,0:0:0:0:
382,80,179123,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,163,179295,1,8,0:0:0:0:
335,166,179466,1,2,0:0:0:0:
382,80,179637,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,81,179809,5,0,0:0:0:0:
386,249,179981,1,8,0:0:0:0:
478,78,180152,1,2,0:0:0:0:
335,166,180494,1,0,0:0:0:0:
386,249,180666,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,164,180837,2,0,L|449:133,2,35,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
386,249,181180,5,8,0:0:0:0:
243,143,181523,1,2,0:0:0:0:
100,37,181866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
50,120,182038,1,8,0:0:0:0:
147,123,182209,1,2,0:0:0:0:
100,37,182380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,206,182552,5,8,0:0:0:0:
192,207,182724,1,8,0:0:0:0:
147,123,182895,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,288,183237,2,0,L|272:347,2,35,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
192,207,183580,2,0,L|160:148,2,35,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,183923,12,8,185295,0:0:0:0:
256,192,185466,5,0,0:0:0:0:
400,80,185980,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,80,186152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,36,186323,2,0,L|493:16,4,35,0|0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,187009,5,2,0:0:0:0:
101,40,187352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
51,107,187523,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,175,187694,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,149,187866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,65,188037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,272,188380,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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338,215,188894,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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83,328,190780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Streliteela
OK all update~Thanks to all my gders~ :)
Now ready for BATs to come. ;)
Secretpipe
What about the gap between normal diff and hard diff ? oAo
Topic Starter
Streliteela

Secretpipe wrote:

What about the gap between normal diff and hard diff ? oAo
Yea I've considered about this and I don't think there's any serious gap between normal and hard.
Just have a look at this ranked map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/198820
This map also use just white line rhythms in normal diff, while many red line rhythms in hard diff (1.08 stars of gap?). And also there's a huge gap between Insane and Lumiere. So in my opinion, using white line only doesn't equal to simple and easy, especially for new players.
lkx_Shore

General

  1. -4ms?

Insane

  1. 01:09:066 (2) - 漏了Clap
    虽然说曲子比较单一,但也要抓住重音将其拖长...现在就感觉是轻飘飘的一路噼里啪啦下来而已。
    前半部分你所下的clap跟的就是重音,不过现在这个clap下得和节奏的关联不大,看起来只像是“音乐这里有个音响了,那我也用类似的音效加在这里”,音效要和节奏融为一体,不要分开。
    SV选了这么高又没控制好...让玩家一快一慢很莫名...折滑条的第二个红点的位置不固定导致折滑条很乱。

imouto's Insane

  1. 00:40:952 (5) - 这样摆除了读图难还有什么意义么..

Frey's Hard

  1. AR+0.5? 散排版在这bpm和ar下看着有点挤。

Normal

  1. Fine.

Alpaca's Easy

  1. Fine.

Others


主要还是怪曲子.
Frey

lkx_Shore wrote:

Frey's Hard


AR+0.5? 散排版在这bpm和ar下看着有点挤。 FIXED
感谢你的mod
Fushimi Rio

lkx_Shore wrote:

imouto's Insane

  1. 00:40:952 (5) - 这样摆除了读图难还有什么意义么..
思考 帮我ctrl+G一下吧
Topic Starter
Streliteela
Hi~thanks for your coming~ :)

[*][quote="lkx_Shore"]

General

  1. -4ms? Fixed~

Insane

  1. 01:09:066 (2) - 漏了Clap Fixed
    虽然说曲子比较单一,但也要抓住重音将其拖长...现在就感觉是轻飘飘的一路噼里啪啦下来而已。
    前半部分你所下的clap跟的就是重音,不过现在这个clap下得和节奏的关联不大,看起来只像是“音乐这里有个音响了,那我也用类似的音效加在这里”,音效要和节奏融为一体,不要分开。
    SV选了这么高又没控制好...让玩家一快一慢很莫名...折滑条的第二个红点的位置不固定导致折滑条很乱。

    额实在抱歉我不太理解上面你提到的一些地方。为了更好的说明,我写了一下我做整个insane的思路。由于这是我第一次尝试做Insane难度,所以如果有幼稚、偏颇或者不妥的地方,烦请指出,我会在以后的作图改图过程中多加注意 :)



    • 首先不得不承认这首歌选的确实略蛋疼。这歌的full ver.长达7分半,歌曲风格很空灵又很消极,节奏密度很大但重复部分很多。因此在做这个insane的思路上,我是这么考虑的:


    1. 歌曲前半部分&结尾 : 这一部分考虑到节奏密度很大,重复部分很多的特点,因而想通过多种梗的变化来尽量减少玩家对重复节奏的枯燥感。因此这一部分用了很多的三连五连切指以增加打击难度,同时掺杂一些ds相对较大的短滑条。可能notes和short sliders的比例大了些,基本没有什么长滑条。这大概就是感觉噼里啪啦一路下来的原因吧~

    2. 歌曲中间部分 : 这部分比较慢,节奏比较缓和,因而考虑了用0.5x的滑条和少量note结合的方式表现。最后在慢节奏部分末尾处用了一个stream来过渡衔接后面快节奏的kiai。

    3. Kiai部分 : 这部分我想是争议最大的一部分了。首先就是丧心病狂的1.5xSV;这样的选择是因为我确实想增加一下kiai部分的移动难度(因为前面的部分基本都是切指的打击难度,ds都相对固定)所以相对的,这一段的节奏难度没有前面高,主要只是规律性地跟vocal,基本都是白-红-白的1/2节奏,掺杂很少量的三连和short sliders。也似乎就是因为这个过大的sv导致有轻飘飘的感觉(? 一些地方,比如02:27:576 (3,4,5,6,1) - ,02:38:548 (1,2,3,4,1) - 以及02:49:519 (1,2,3,4,1) - 的地方,我也确实是考虑通过慢滑条来拖出vocal那种延长音的感觉,并且希望能通过这种慢滑条与快速的大ds stream结合的方式来做出vocal长音与快速鼓点结合的张力。所以这地方就显得一快一慢了。可能确实不太容易被接受,但这就是我对这首歌的理解:快与慢的交替,复杂的心情。

上述文字大概解释了一下一快一慢的问题以及飘的问题。还有以下几个地方不太理解烦请详细指教:
  1. 有关拖长重音:我确实已经在一些地方刻意做了一些慢滑条来拖长重音,比如01:04:605 (1,2,3) - ,02:16:605 (1) - ,02:27:576 (3) - ,02:38:548 (1) - 以及02:49:519 (1,1,1,1) - ,不知道还有哪些地方还可以抓住重音并拖长以获得更好效果,可以举几个例子吗?
  2. 有关音效:这首歌我认为本身自带的音效就足够的丰富了,因此在选择和添加音效方面我还是尽量的按照“曲子原本的什么音效我就在什么地方添什么音效的”的方式。我试过自创音效和按自己的图的个性加音效,但效果都可怕极了。所以我就保守了一些按照曲子加什么我就加什么的方式,不知这样是否会造成严重的问题?
  3. 有关锚点位置:这个我不太明白要怎么改,是说所有折滑条的第二个红锚点位置必须统一?还是需要开Grid snap把锚点按网格对齐?麻烦详细解释一下
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谢谢摸图~~已经按照上面所说的改了一部分,有些地方还不太明白烦请详细指点,谢谢~
lkx_Shore
啊...
其实意思很简单,就是没有1/1长滑条的话,全是3hit 5hit某种意义上和全是1/2一样无聊.
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lkx_Shore wrote:

啊...
其实意思很简单,就是没有1/1长滑条的话,全是3hit 5hit某种意义上和全是1/2一样无聊.
好吧我大概理解了……只是想说我图里并不是完全没有1/1长滑条,只是相对而言我觉得3hit 5hit比例大一点更适合这歌;可能也是因为歌本身特点的缘故吧(个人觉得这应该不是什么大问题…吧>.<)
Anyway thanks for your modding~
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