TwoThirds & Feint - Epiphany (feat. Veela)

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Squirrel wrote:

hi there!
from my queue, just making suggestions :3

Alpaca's Easy
aah, this is okay to play, but sooooo repetitive! why? :c in the middle part the rhythm stays the same for like.. ever. it really gets a little boring. ;-; maybe you can try to spice this up a bit? idk i kinda refrained from making variety and instead using repetitive rhythm all the way because beginners can't really read the rhythm that well, but i'll try to add more variety somehow
  1. 00:36:154 (2,3) - a little confusing for beginner players, cause 3's end is closer to 2 than the head and at the perfect next-to-hit-object spot, please move it, so it won't confuse anyone fix
    same for 00:41:639 (2,3) - fix
  2. 00:44:382 (2) - rhythm feels off, especially cause the vocals start in the middle of the slider, maybe you can change the rhythm up, so it matches both, beat and vocals? example: because this is still at the beginning part, i tried using simple rhythm, which is why i focused more in the instrument aka the bass, which is kinda repetitive lmao
  3. 00:46:439 (1) - if you know that the downbeat is clearly audiable and pretty strong you might want to make it a clickable object, cause atm it doesn't have any effect on gameplay :c same goes for 00:49:182 (1) - and several others - you'd be better of with circles, imo dang ok fixed them all
  4. 01:52:611 (2,1) - this overlap is a no for Easy (imo), it's way too confusing >-< if the DS make it impossible to move it somewhere so they won't overlap, then choose a different shape for one of the sliders, or both :b (btw, it's not bad if the slidertracks overlap, it's just confusing when you cover starts and ends of sliders!)
    example (with overlapping slidertracks) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2495961 omg thats a nice one fix
  5. 02:13:182 (1) - is this missing a clap? 02:14:554 (2) - probably too? fix both
  6. 02:37:868 (3) - suggestion cause I really miss some variety - remove whistle from reverse and extend the slider like this, plays nice, sounds nice, moar variety :3 -> nice! but i'm following the vocal here, so i'll consider about this
  7. 02:47:468 (1) - curve this in the other direction to improve flow? :3 (just move last anchor to 424|308 fix
  8. 02:50:554 (1) - this might confuse beginners. :/ not sure, I don't think more than 1 reverse is suitable for Easy diff, but it might be okay ~ since it's the only time you use 2 reverses I'd prefer if you map this differently, tho. the sv is kinda slow so probably beginners can notice this. i hope. anyway fixed because more people pointed this out lmao
  9. 03:10:782 (3,4,1) - this would flow way better if you curve 4 a little less and adjust 1, example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496109 fix

nadapan wrote:

Hello!

[Easy]
  1. 00:36:154 (2) - Blanket fix
  2. 00:44:382 (2) - Shape this as a better blanket to 00:44:039 (1) fix
  3. 01:06:325 (2) - Blanket fix
  4. 01:20:039 (2) - Blanket is a bit off i think this one is fine
  5. 02:50:554 (1) - Since the slider velocity is pretty low so do I recommend not to put two reverse point on a slider like this. Delete one reverse and add a circle instead. gdi fix
Thank you for mods! :)
osu file format v13

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Narcissu
hard

00:26:554 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 開頭的就下了6圈的幾何梗,但是副歌開頭僅僅是原地疊圈接滑條,難度設置上就完全不合理,玩家會很奇怪為什麼安靜的段落會如此困難而激昂的段落卻毫無印象

00:24:668 (5,1) - 錯誤的額外音效,偶數節的確適合外加但是應該是遞進和強調,長白是clap的話前面還是clap是不適合的

02:11:811 (1,2) - 02:12:496 (1,2) - kiai外加的clap位置非常死板,完全不合原曲的瀟灑和隨性,同時過度的clap也破壞了原曲的節奏,我建議你在了解一定的樂理知識前不要嘗試一些奇怪的東西,你的直覺和邏輯並不一定和多數人一致
Fushimi Rio

Narcissu wrote:

hard

00:26:554 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 開頭的就下了6圈的幾何梗,但是副歌開頭僅僅是原地疊圈接滑條,難度設置上就完全不合理,玩家會很奇怪為什麼安靜的段落會如此困難而激昂的段落卻毫無印象
你是开dt试的吗……
嘛这个之后再看 如果变成light insane的话kiai开头可以再难点 虽然现在已经挺难了


00:24:668 (5,1) - 錯誤的額外音效,偶數節的確適合外加但是應該是遞進和強調,長白是clap的話前面還是clap是不適合的
嗯删掉了长白线前的

02:11:811 (1,2) - 02:12:496 (1,2) - kiai外加的clap位置非常死板,完全不合原曲的瀟灑和隨性,同時過度的clap也破壞了原曲的節奏,我建議你在了解一定的樂理知識前不要嘗試一些奇怪的東西,你的直覺和邏輯並不一定和多數人一致
虽然是这样但我也不知道该怎么下啊orz 球详细点的解说 现在还是不会改
code就先不更新了0 0

Edit: 这一定是意外 我还不想被cp打爆
Topic Starter
Streliteela
OMG sooooooo busy these days... :( So sorry for my late reply :o

Squirrel wrote:

hi there! Hihi~~OwO~~
from my queue, just making suggestions :3 Welcome~\(≧▽≦)/~

General
  1. considering the combo colours, try this maybe -
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 68,111,153
    Combo2 : 255,240,200
    Combo3 : 162,205,249
    Combo4 : 245,199,101
    they're better to see and match the background
    Ahh OK~~ :)
  2. hmh, such a long break. ;-; it's a little boring to wait that long, maybe you can find someone who can do a SB? cause that's less boring than watching the background for 20 seconds >w<
    It's so tough to find someone who can help me do a SB :( So I shorten the break time in Hard & Insane diff (especially Insane, with no break time lol~). Just keep 20 sec break time in easy & normal diff.


Normal
great diff! just some minor things - lol
  1. 00:32:039 (5,6,1) - movement feels a little awkward, you could re-arrange them a little to smoothen it, example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496185
    Just keep it, not a serious problem imo :D
  2. 01:02:211 (4) - aah, Idk about the rhythm. it doesn't really match the pace of the song, imo. but you could try this isntead, adds a little more variety too: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496221
    I think it's fine, so just keep this part~
  3. 01:11:468 (5) - is this missing a NC? It seems...yes :o
  4. 01:26:211 (3,4) - minor DS issue, please fix? xD OK fixed~
  5. 01:51:754 (5,6) - and every other stack before short reverse-slider - please unstack them! stacking is fine, but the reverse arrows get partly hidden which is super confusing for Normal players! :c
    I love spaaaaaaaaaaammmmmm looooool
  6. 02:14:896 (2) - aah, you could blanket 02:13:868 (5) - so nicely with this, why don't you? ;-; Ahh okok, fixed this~
  7. 02:20:382 (2,4) - the overlap is visible while playing ;-; how about making 4 parallel to 2? looks better to me
    Just keep this part as sooooooo many patterns would be changed if I change this pattern :o
  8. 02:27:925 (5,1,2,3,4) - movement feels a little forced, you could change the pattern to this, works better imo - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496293


Insane
omg, this is really great! I like the diff, one of the few Insanes I can play and it's really fun >w< lol :)
  1. fun or not, playing that long without a break is too much. add a short break (maybe just 3-5 seconds, that's enough) at some point please >-<
    Nope :D
  2. 00:24:668 (7) - ctrl+g for minor flow improvement
    there are some more of this, you don't have to change any, but personally I think it's more comfortable to play that way - 00:30:154 (6) - 00:35:639 (7) - 00:39:754 (8) - 00:49:182 (5) - 01:19:525 (7) - 02:40:782 (7) -
    fixed some of them~
  3. 01:09:154 (3) - feels a little off while playing, not sure why. ;-; maybe cause it start's on the blue tick? (I do that often, too, and regularly get screamed at for it. x-x .. xD) consider switching places with 01:09:068 (2) - so first the reverse slider, then the circle
    OK~~fixed~~
  4. 01:11:811 (2,1) - reverse 2, curve in opposite direction. the curve 1 differently, too and you'll end up with a slightly better flow (imo) .. (and you could rotate 01:12:496 (2) - slightly, too) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496677 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496687
    This part is a special pattern (symmetry), so I keep this~
  5. 01:13:868 (1) - uuuhm what's with this speed up. it doesn't really match the song I think. there's just no indicator for a speed up like this :/
    Just to show a sudden high-changed voice here~
  6. 01:46:782 (7) - I'd prefer if you split this in slider + circle, cause of the beat on the red tick Nope :P
  7. 02:00:496 (8) - ^ ^
  8. 02:14:211 (8) - rotate by 170° selection cente for better flow :3 Changed 02:14:382 (9) - and better now~
  9. 02:33:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - aaaah, this is so fun to play >w< ~loooool~


that's all I can say. Nice mapset & good luck! :3
Thanks for your modding~~ :)
edit:顺便楼上二位的头像怎么有种野生cp的柑橘233
Mint
Hello Streliteela! from Lexia's queue ~

:idea: General


* Alpaca's Easy has a different title than the others - and also a different artist.

Insane


* 00:26:554 (2,3,4) - Balance out the spacing? Don't really see why (3,4) should be bigger.
* 00:29:811 (4) - A bit nazi, but could you move this up a bit? The slider end of (2), (3) and (4) will have symmetry and it's more visually appealing imo.

* 00:30:839 (3,4,5) - Optional, but you could try and CTRL+G this, for a similar jump movement as 00:28:096 (3,4,5) -
* 00:40:611 (3,4,5) - While playing I found this part a bit strange. Currently the distance between (2,3) is larger than (3,4) - while the clap is on (4) - so in my point of view it should be the opposite. Another problem is, is that the distance between is really small between (3,4), while the jump from (4,5) is really big if you compare them. Reconsidering of placement of (4) could fix this, by placing it somewhere like (48,76)
* 00:42:754 (1) - Well, there is a sound on the blue tick, I'll give you that - but ending a spinner on the blue tick and directly after that having a note? I wouldn't do that if I were you. Shorten the spinner to the red/white tick? You should get more opinions on this though...
* 00:49:182 (5) - CTRL+G this one? I find that the movement of (4) to (5) is a bit awkward here - and you seem to use this CTRL+G pattern a lot in the beginning of the mapset, so why not here owo?
* 00:57:754 (1,2) - CTRL+J these sliders? To me, the flow gets broken at 00:58:096 (2,3) - because the slider end of (2) is pointing the other way, and since this path is overlapped by 00:57:582 (6) - it can be really hard to read this.

* 01:00:154 (6,7,8,9,1) - The spacing is quite low here, and the curve is quite large which makes it even more cramped. Use 0.4x here, just like 00:46:439 (5,6,7,8,1) - and the rest of your map? It looks cleaner and it won't be so squished in like now.
* 01:04:268 (4,5) - I personally think that these are way too close to each other now, so if you could - can you move tweak this a bit? It might just be me though, so you can leave it I guess.
* 01:09:068 (2,3) - Plays really weird... seems like a trick to make people combo break here. Use two kicksliders or a 5-note stream instead? I see why you might do this for variety, but this doesn't play really well ;w;
* 01:14:554 (1) - This one is the only one without a SV change? Quite strange to me o_o
* 01:16:268 (3) - If you NC spam on every SV change anyway, you should add one on this one - since this SV change is actually really noticeable compared to the other ones - I highly recommend you to put one here.
* 01:17:296 (2) - Put a bit down for better flow?

* 01:20:639 (7) - Hmm.. I personally don't hear anything here on the blue tick - remove?
* 01:28:268 - I guess it's more a personal preference, but the soft claps don't fit at all imo, soft whistles sound more soothing and create a better atmosphere for this calm part.
* 02:10:439 (3) - If you do plan on keeping the claps, I'd add here to keep consistent clap hitsounding.
* 02:11:811 (1,2) - The vocals are so strong, and it's the KIAI time anyway, so I don't really understand why you kept DS here, while the jump at (2,3) is really large. I'd have put it the other way around, having the large jump on (1,2) - just like 02:13:182 (5,6,7) -
* 02:13:096 - and 02:24:068 - I do hear a note here, and since you tend to follow all the 1/4 beats in the song, and one here as well? Only 1/2 sliders here is a bit plain x_x

You might want to change the patterns a bit if you do want to add 1/4 notes in between.

* 02:28:182 (6,1,2) - Because of the DS change in your 1/4 rhythms, you have the same space at (6,1) and (1,2) - while (1,2) is 1/2 and the other one is 1/4. The spacing change is already a bit hard and confusing, so having the same distances with different snaps isn't making it any better. Increase the distance between (1,2)?
* 02:29:982 (6) - Consider moving this slider a bit up for a smoother flow.

* 02:28:611 - Useless green line.
* 02:31:011 (1,2,3,4,5) - Is this small spacing intentional? It doesn't look really neat, especially because (3,4,5) overlap with (1) - use larger spacing? - 0.7x would work perfectly fine here.

* 02:48:839 (1,2) - Just my idea, but try blanket pattern here?


Really nice diff - good job!

i'll finish the rest later x_x

Nice mapset though, i'll shoot a star for you :)
Atsuro
Hello, from my queue

[Alpaca's Easy]
  1. 00:57:754 (1,2) - Nazi but blanket can be better
  2. 01:07:696 (3) - Can look and flow a bit more natural, suggestion: Copy and paste 01:06:325 (2) - there, rotate 120 degrees and position like this:

  3. 02:55:011 (5,1) - Spacing error

    It's good, a bit repetitive in some parts but it's ok for the song


[Normal]
  1. 01:11:811 (2) - Missing whistle
  2. 03:16:611 (4) - Rotate this a bit to make it point to 03:17:639 (1) -


Same as easy

[imouto's Hard]
  1. Some of the antijumps you use are very misleading, especially at the beginning of the map
  2. 01:03:925 (2,1) - Aren't these overmapped?
  3. 01:04:439 (1) - Ctrl+g and reposition this to make it lead to the next circle
  4. 01:07:525 - I think a circle with clap hs should be here for the strong beat
  5. 01:13:182 (1,2) - Make the spacing of these two bigger, it's the same as 01:11:811 (1,2,3) - so players might mistake it for the same pattern

    Fun diff
    There is a pretty big jump in difficulty between this and normal, this is all 1/2 and some complex patterns and normal is a lot of 1/1 only except one section, idk if it will cause problems with ranking

[Insane]
  1. Those high spacing streams you use at the kiai are very confusing, consider reducing their spacing a little bit to make it more apparent that they are 1/4, as it is they look like they can be 1/2
  2. 00:42:754 (1,1) - Why end spinner on blue tick? end on white and delete circle , or if you really want to keep the circle end it on the previous white line.
  3. 01:09:068 (2) - ctrl+g and reposition so it leads better to the next slider
  4. 01:13:868 (1) - This speed up is unexpected, reduce the speed or make it more apparent by not stacking other sliders on it
  5. 02:26:211 (5,6) - These sliders are overmapped, they should start on the previous white line imo.

    Nice


Short mod haha
Nice mapset, GL!
jyu

Atsuro wrote:

Hello, from my queue

[Alpaca's Easy]
  1. 00:57:754 (1,2) - Nazi but blanket can be better fix
  2. 01:07:696 (3) - Can look and flow a bit more natural, suggestion: Copy and paste 01:06:325 (2) - there, rotate 120 degrees and position like this: fix

  3. 02:55:011 (5,1) - Spacing error fix

    It's good, a bit repetitive in some parts but it's ok for the song
Thank you for mod! :)
osu file format v13

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PreviewTime: 131125
Countdown: 0
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TitleUnicode:Epiphany (feat. Veela & Feint)
Artist:TwoThirds
ArtistUnicode:TwoThirds
Creator:Streliteela
Version:Alpaca's Easy
Source:
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112,52,80039,2,0,P|100:88|160:192,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,192,81411,2,0,P|394:132|385:54,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,36,82439,5,8,0:0:0:0:
204,72,82782,2,0,B|164:112|164:112|140:152|140:152|88:196,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,268,84154,2,0,B|319:231|319:231|343:191|343:191|383:151,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85182,12,12,87925,0:0:0:0:
64,168,109868,6,0,B|180:80|280:92|280:92|444:292,1,479.999999999999,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,352,112611,2,0,B|160:232|160:232|308:260|404:176|420:76,1,479.999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,52,115354,6,0,P|156:52|160:356,1,479.999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,352,118096,2,0,B|360:344|432:340|468:292|468:292|268:248|268:248|332:204|304:128,1,479.999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,48,120839,6,0,B|48:60|48:60|16:92,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,112,122382,2,0,B|352:124|352:124|384:156,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,312,123582,6,0,P|228:328|152:324,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,168,125125,2,0,P|344:152|420:156,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,236,126325,6,0,B|204:236|204:236|172:252|172:252|108:252,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,104,127868,2,0,B|328:104|328:104|360:120|360:120|424:120,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,129068,12,4,131811,0:0:0:0:
252,60,133182,6,0,B|240:32|140:60|140:60|84:144|116:184,1,240,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,264,134554,2,0,P|184:292|300:304,2,160,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,172,136268,2,0,L|92:84,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,56,137296,5,8,0:0:0:0:
372,96,137639,2,0,P|392:132|316:212,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,84,139354,2,0,P|220:88|184:76,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,112,140039,5,8,0:0:0:0:
64,200,140382,2,0,P|64:244|108:356,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,142096,2,0,P|208:200|244:188,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,108,142782,5,0,0:0:0:0:
384,100,143125,2,0,P|420:128|424:244,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,344,144496,2,0,B|236:332|216:292|216:292|196:336|148:348,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,276,145525,5,8,0:0:0:0:
92,180,145868,2,0,P|116:140|224:104,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,136,146896,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,92,147239,2,0,L|428:172,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,300,148268,5,8,0:0:0:0:
188,296,148611,2,0,B|164:264|112:268|112:268|84:236|100:184,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,300,150325,2,0,P|348:288|364:272,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,184,151011,5,8,0:0:0:0:
312,116,151354,2,0,P|260:88|160:96,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,156,152382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,236,152725,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,300,153068,2,0,P|256:320|292:320,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,268,153754,6,0,L|348:184,1,79.9999999999999,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,220,154439,2,0,L|236:136,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,188,155125,2,0,L|132:104,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,104,155811,2,0,L|54:181,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,276,156496,6,0,P|96:304|148:324,1,79.9999999999999,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,316,157182,2,0,P|280:312|324:320,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,320,157868,2,0,P|448:305|472:256,2,79.9999999999999,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,159239,5,8,0:0:0:0:
220,116,159582,2,0,P|164:104|132:112,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,176,160268,2,0,B|72:296|72:296|104:340,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,96,161982,5,8,0:0:0:0:
216,72,162325,2,0,L|376:80,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,128,163354,2,0,P|472:176|464:216,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,280,164039,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,312,164382,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,296,164725,6,0,L|124:288,1,79.9999999999999,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,196,165411,2,0,L|96:136,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,108,166096,2,0,L|272:72,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,168,166782,2,0,L|376:188,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,256,167468,6,0,P|448:288|444:332,2,79.9999999999999,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,276,168496,2,0,B|304:288|304:288|260:280,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,264,169182,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,208,169525,2,0,P|100:180|184:84,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,80,170554,6,0,P|332:92|452:80,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,92,172268,2,0,P|160:136|152:176,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,256,172954,5,8,0:0:0:0:
216,260,173296,2,0,B|334:256|334:256|370:236,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,144,174325,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,92,174668,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,60,175011,2,0,P|192:72|144:64,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,48,175696,5,12,0:0:0:0:
68,144,176039,2,0,P|88:220|135:284,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,212,177411,2,0,P|291:135|244:71,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,52,178439,5,8,0:0:0:0:
72,112,178782,2,0,L|40:276,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,324,180154,2,0,B|256:292|256:292|380:288,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,204,181182,5,8,0:0:0:0:
348,140,181525,2,0,L|177:143,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,312,182896,2,0,L|255:308,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,272,183925,5,8,0:0:0:0:
408,200,184268,2,0,P|424:152|416:40,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,272,185982,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,304,186325,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,288,186668,6,0,L|104:204,1,79.9999999999999,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,200,187354,2,0,L|165:131,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,52,188039,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,84,188382,2,0,P|376:96|472:56,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,164,189411,6,0,L|444:248,1,79.9999999999999,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,196,190096,2,0,L|344:280,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,320,190782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,248,191125,2,0,P|176:212|56:188,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,92,192154,6,0,P|92:80|124:84,1,79.9999999999999,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,116,192839,2,0,P|239:116|278:105,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,52,193525,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,80,193868,2,0,L|436:252,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,296,194896,5,8,0:0:0:0:
280,244,195239,2,0,L|204:280,2,79.9999999999999,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,172,196268,2,0,P|328:128|296:92,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,108,196954,2,0,P|180:116|128:112,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,68,197639,1,4,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Streliteela
Wow I'm back after quite a lot of exams :( Sorry for my late replies :o

appleeaterx wrote:

Hello Streliteela! from Lexia's queue ~ Hihi~~:3

:idea: General


* Alpaca's Easy has a different title than the others - and also a different artist.
Yep, that's because I forgot to tell my gder that I've changed the title and artist. Fixed now~

Insane


* 00:26:554 (2,3,4) - Balance out the spacing? Don't really see why (3,4) should be bigger.
Ok fixed it~
* 00:29:811 (4) - A bit nazi, but could you move this up a bit? The slider end of (2), (3) and (4) will have symmetry and it's more visually appealing imo.
http://puu.sh/eBKQp/d97f7cb686.jpg[/img:1337]

Yep it looks better~Fixed~
* 00:30:839 (3,4,5) - Optional, but you could try and CTRL+G this, for a similar jump movement as 00:28:096 (3,4,5) -
Just keep it, as I feel the flow become a bit strange after CTRL+G
* 00:40:611 (3,4,5) - While playing I found this part a bit strange. Currently the distance between (2,3) is larger than (3,4) - while the clap is on (4) - so in my point of view it should be the opposite. Another problem is, is that the distance between is really small between (3,4), while the jump from (4,5) is really big if you compare them. Reconsidering of placement of (4) could fix this, by placing it somewhere like (48,76)
Nice suggestion~Fixed this part as you said :)
* 00:42:754 (1) - Well, there is a sound on the blue tick, I'll give you that - but ending a spinner on the blue tick and directly after that having a note? I wouldn't do that if I were you. Shorten the spinner to the red/white tick? You should get more opinions on this though...
OK I've shortened the spinner to the white tick~
* 00:49:182 (5) - CTRL+G this one? I find that the movement of (4) to (5) is a bit awkward here - and you seem to use this CTRL+G pattern a lot in the beginning of the mapset, so why not here owo?
Yep fixed it as you said~owo
* 00:57:754 (1,2) - CTRL+J these sliders? To me, the flow gets broken at 00:58:096 (2,3) - because the slider end of (2) is pointing the other way, and since this path is overlapped by 00:57:582 (6) - it can be really hard to read this.

Really nice suggestion~ Fixed as you said~>w<~
* 01:00:154 (6,7,8,9,1) - The spacing is quite low here, and the curve is quite large which makes it even more cramped. Use 0.4x here, just like 00:46:439 (5,6,7,8,1) - and the rest of your map? It looks cleaner and it won't be so squished in like now.
OK~0.4x as you said~ ;)
* 01:04:268 (4,5) - I personally think that these are way too close to each other now, so if you could - can you move tweak this a bit? It might just be me though, so you can leave it I guess.
OK~I've tried my best to move them away from each other (just move very little distance)
* 01:09:068 (2,3) - Plays really weird... seems like a trick to make people combo break here. Use two kicksliders or a 5-note stream instead? I see why you might do this for variety, but this doesn't play really well ;w;
Yes this part is really annoyed...I fixed this part again and again (but it still weird (╯‵□′)╯︵┻━┻) Now I've fixed it again and hope it could be better after my changing :o
* 01:14:554 (1) - This one is the only one without a SV change? Quite strange to me o_o
oops I forgot to cancel the SV change after fixed the pattern here last time...Now fixed~ :D
* 01:16:268 (3) - If you NC spam on every SV change anyway, you should add one on this one - since this SV change is actually really noticeable compared to the other ones - I highly recommend you to put one here.
OK added~
* 01:17:296 (2) - Put a bit down for better flow?

Yes sir~ :lol:
* 01:20:639 (7) - Hmm.. I personally don't hear anything here on the blue tick - remove?
It sounds strange after I remove the note on the blue tick...so I just keep it and wait for more suggestions from others.
* 01:28:268 - I guess it's more a personal preference, but the soft claps don't fit at all imo, soft whistles sound more soothing and create a better atmosphere for this calm part.
Yes really, changed all soft claps to soft whistles as you said~
* 02:10:439 (3) - If you do plan on keeping the claps, I'd add here to keep consistent clap hitsounding.
Clap sounds a bit strange so I add soft whistle on 02:10:268 (1,5) -
* 02:11:811 (1,2) - The vocals are so strong, and it's the KIAI time anyway, so I don't really understand why you kept DS here, while the jump at (2,3) is really large. I'd have put it the other way around, having the large jump on (1,2) - just like 02:13:182 (5,6,7) -
Oh and about this part...just for a little transition between the clam part and kiai, so players may not feel a sudden huge change of DS imo.
* 02:13:096 - and 02:24:068 - I do hear a note here, and since you tend to follow all the 1/4 beats in the song, and one here as well? Only 1/2 sliders here is a bit plain x_x

You might want to change the patterns a bit if you do want to add 1/4 notes in between.

Still not sure how to change the patterns here...so I just keep this part and wait for more suggestions
* 02:28:182 (6,1,2) - Because of the DS change in your 1/4 rhythms, you have the same space at (6,1) and (1,2) - while (1,2) is 1/2 and the other one is 1/4. The spacing change is already a bit hard and confusing, so having the same distances with different snaps isn't making it any better. Increase the distance between (1,2)?
Nice idea and this is the most feasible suggestions I've received so far. Fixed as you said~
* 02:29:982 (6) - Consider moving this slider a bit up for a smoother flow.

OK fixed~
* 02:28:611 - Useless green line. Fixed~
* 02:31:011 (1,2,3,4,5) - Is this small spacing intentional? It doesn't look really neat, especially because (3,4,5) overlap with (1) - use larger spacing? - 0.7x would work perfectly fine here.

Good idea~fixed as you said~
* 02:48:839 (1,2) - Just my idea, but try blanket pattern here?

Still want to keep my own idea about this pattern, just keep it~ :P

Really nice diff - good job! Thanks~ :)

i'll finish the rest later x_x

Nice mapset though, i'll shoot a star for you :)

Really nice suggestions~ fixed almost all as you said~~Thanks a lot for your perfect mod and star~~ :)

Atsuro wrote:

Hello, from my queue Hi~~:3

[Normal]
  1. 01:11:811 (2) - Missing whistle Added~
  2. 03:16:611 (4) - Rotate this a bit to make it point to 03:17:639 (1) -
    Still want to make a parallel pattern (03:14:896 (1,4) - )


Same as easy

[imouto's Hard]

There is a pretty big jump in difficulty between this and normal, this is all 1/2 and some complex patterns and normal is a lot of 1/1 only except one section, idk if it will cause problems with ranking
Yep this Hard diff is really hard, so I add a new hard diff from Frey, which is only 2.99 stars. And now I changed imouto's Hard to a light insane diff. I think it's the best way to solve this problem.

[Insane]
  1. Those high spacing streams you use at the kiai are very confusing, consider reducing their spacing a little bit to make it more apparent that they are 1/4, as it is they look like they can be 1/2
    /Sorry I don't want to reduce the spacing of the streams. To solve this problem, I increase the spacing of some 1/2 part to differentiate them from those 1/4 part.
  2. 00:42:754 (1,1) - Why end spinner on blue tick? end on white and delete circle , or if you really want to keep the circle end it on the previous white line.
    OK I've move the end to the previous white line.
  3. 01:09:068 (2) - ctrl+g and reposition so it leads better to the next slider
    Made some little changes here~
  4. 01:13:868 (1) - This speed up is unexpected, reduce the speed or make it more apparent by not stacking other sliders on it
    Haha nope it's a special pattern here as there's a sudden high voice. Really hard to expect lol~
  5. 02:26:211 (5,6) - These sliders are overmapped, they should start on the previous white line imo.
    ehh I don't think they are overmapped...so just keep this part and wait for more suggestions.
    Nice


Short mod haha
Nice mapset, GL!
Thanks for your modding~~ :)


Updated a new Hard GD from Frey. Thanks a lot~ :)
Leorda
Hello

[Alpaca's Easy]
02:22:782 (1) - Add clap? You probably forgot it
02:37:868 (3) - Add whistle at repeating slider?

[Normal]
00:34:096 (3) - Spacing error
00:46:782 (1) - ^
02:12:496 (3) - ^
02:14:896 (2) - Add whistle at tail slider? You probably forgot it
03:13:868 (5) - Spacing error
03:16:268 (3) - Move up so it don't looks almost offscreen

[Frey's Hard]
* AR -1? Your current one seems bit fast

[imouto's Insane]
00:26:554 (1) - Having an anti-jump like this can cause players were confuse to read if this a 1/2 note or 1/1 note. You should move further away from previous one, to make it readable for timing and spacing
00:26:554 (1) - ^
00:39:239 (2) - ^
00:41:982 (2) - ^
00:57:754 (1) - Remove whistle at repeating slider
01:49:868 (1) - I think this spinner were too long for this diff. You need to remap this part
02:32:725 - Add note here?

Good luck
Frey

Leorda wrote:

[Frey's Hard]
* AR -1? Your current one seems bit fast

In my opinion, I think AR7 makes it harder. So I don't really want to change the AR
However, if more people mention this, I will think about it.
Thanks for your mod :)
Topic Starter
Streliteela

Leorda wrote:

Hello Wow Hi~~:3

[Alpaca's Easy]
02:22:782 (1) - Add clap? You probably forgot it Added~
02:37:868 (3) - Add whistle at repeating slider? Added~

[Normal]
00:34:096 (3) - Spacing error oops Fixed~
00:46:782 (1) - ^ Fixed~
02:12:496 (3) - ^ Fixed~
02:14:896 (2) - Add whistle at tail slider? You probably forgot it Yep added~
03:13:868 (5) - Spacing error Fixed~
03:16:268 (3) - Move up so it don't looks almost offscreen OK moved it up~

Good luck
Thanks a lot for your modding~~ :)
-Famous-
Hello my friend~ (stolen from your mod LOL!)

Alpaca's Easy
  1. Check AiMod. 02:33:754 - Kiai time is toggled on for less than 15 seconds. All the other difficulties doesn't have that warning. Fix it.
  2. 00:29:296 (2,1) - Blanket can be improved slightly.
  3. 00:37:525 (3,1) - ^
  4. 01:00:496 (1,2) - Improve blanket.
  5. 01:05:982 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved.
  6. 01:09:068 (2) - Move that slider to x:104 ; y:104 to keep the flow with 01:08:725 (1).
  7. 01:49:868 (1,2,1,2) - Not sure about that part. The sliders are really weird shaped and 01:49:868 (1,2) overlap.
  8. 02:00:839 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - That part doesn't sound right. You should snap 02:02:382 (2) to 02:02:211 and repeat it. Same with 02:05:125 (2,2).
  9. 02:12:496 - Feels like a note is missing.
  10. 02:13:868 - Also feels like a note is missing.
  11. 02:16:954 - Again note is missing. Snap 02:17:296 (1) to 02:16:954 and 02:17:639 (2) to 02:17:296. Then add a note 02:19:011.
  12. 02:27:925 - Add a note.
  13. 02:52:268 (2,1) - Slider doesn't flow with 02:52:954 (1). Also 02:53:296 (2) doesn't flow with 02:52:954 (1).
Normal
  1. 00:26:896 (6,1) - Improve blanket.
  2. 00:41:296 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:44:725 (1,3,4) - ^
  4. 00:53:639 (4,6) - ^
  5. 00:53:639 (4,1) - Not sure about that stack. Looks very weird to me. 01:03:239 (1,3) - That stack looks way better.
  6. 00:58:439 (3,4) - Improve blanket.
  7. 01:03:239 (1,2) - ^
  8. 01:10:782 (4,1) - ^
  9. 01:15:582 (4,5) - ^
  10. 01:24:496 (5,6,1) - The placement of that pattern doesn't look nice. You tried to stack 01:23:125 (3,1). If you want to stack them, try to improve the placement.
  11. 01:49:868 (1,2,4) - Improve blanket.
  12. 01:50:896 (3) - This circle sounds really weird. Snap 01:51:068 (4) to 01:51:068 just like 01:53:639 (2,3).
  13. 02:08:725 (7) - Make that slider longer. Slider end at 02:09:068. Then Snap the spinner to 02:09:239 and fix the end of the spinner.
  14. 02:13:868 (5,1,2) - Blanket can be improved.
  15. 02:22:782 (1,2) - Improve blanket.
  16. 02:44:725 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  17. 02:55:011 (4,1) - ^
  18. 03:11:468 (6,1) - ^
Frey's Hard
  1. 00:31:868 (2,3) - Imperfect flow.
  2. 00:34:782 (2,3) - Improve blanket.
  3. 00:46:782 (1,2) - Weird flow.
  4. 00:48:154 (1,2) - Improve blanket.
  5. 00:59:468 (2,3) - ^
  6. 01:00:496 (1,2,3) - There's no reason to use a different spacing. Move 01:01:354 (2) to x:48 ; y:320.
  7. 01:08:211 (3,4) - Improve blanket.
  8. 01:14:211 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved.
  9. 01:18:325 (1,2) - Improve blanket.
  10. 01:51:754 (1,2,3) - Same as 01:00:496 (1,2,3).
  11. 02:11:125 to 02:11:811 - I miss something here... It feels so empty.
  12. 02:14:554 (1,2,3) - I already made my point. Fix spacing.
  13. 02:19:525 (3,1) - Improve blanket.
  14. 02:24:496 (3,4) - ^
  15. 02:36:496 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
  16. 02:51:239 (3,1) - Improve blanket.
  17. 02:58:439 (1,2,3) - Spacing! D:
  18. 03:06:154 (3,4) - Improve blanket.
  19. 03:13:525 (1) - Ctrl + g.
  20. 03:16:611 (2,3) - Improve blanket.
  21. 03:17:125 (3,4) - That jump.
  22. 03:17:639 (1) - NC not necessary at the end but it's better you leave that NC, because it's better readable.
imouto's Insane
  1. What about AR8.5?
  2. 00:22:096 (1,2) - I'm not a fan from this kind of stacking. It doesn't look nice imo.
  3. 00:32:211 (5) - Move that slider to x:216 ; y:292.
  4. 00:32:896 (7,1) - Blanket can be slightly improved.
  5. 00:34:268 (4) - Move that circle to x:420 ; y:348 for better flow.
  6. 00:35:468 (8,1) - Improve blanket.
  7. Add a note 00:44:211, 00:44:382 and 00:44:554.
  8. 00:49:354 - A triple stream would fit here. Add a note 00:49:354 and 00:49:439.
  9. 00:59:468 (1,2,3,4,5) - Keep the spacing of 1.2x.
  10. 01:49:868 (1) - Map this part instead of adding a spinner.
  11. 02:32:725 - Add a note.
  12. 02:33:754 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - I don't like this pattern. It's playable but it looks very ugly imo. Same with the other part that use the same pattern.
Insane

We already talked ingame about that difficulty.
  1. 01:11:468 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1) - The SV is not necessary.
  2. 02:28:011 (4,5,6) - You really shouldn't use THAT huge spacing. I know there are ranked maps which uses big spacing at streams, but it doesn't fit here.
  3. 02:38:982 (2,3,4) - ^
  4. 02:39:839 (3) - ^
  5. 02:49:954 (2,3,4) - ^

Good mapset. good luck! :D
Frey

-Famous- wrote:

Frey's Hard
00:31:868 (2,3) - Imperfect flow. Fixed, changed the angle a bit
00:34:782 (2,3) - Improve blanket. Fixed
00:46:782 (1,2) - Weird flow. ...how?
00:48:154 (1,2) - Improve blanket. Fixed
00:59:468 (2,3) - ^ Fixed
01:00:496 (1,2,3) - There's no reason to use a different spacing. Move 01:01:354 (2) to x:48 ; y:320. Well, let me think a whlie
01:08:211 (3,4) - Improve blanket. Fixed
01:14:211 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved. Fixed
01:18:325 (1,2) - Improve blanket. Not so obvious I think
01:51:754 (1,2,3) - Same as 01:00:496 (1,2,3). I don;t want to change this, because it's fun
02:11:125 to 02:11:811 - I miss something here... It feels so empty. I use the same rhythm as Normal, so I think it's fine

02:14:554 (1,2,3) - I already made my point. Fix spacing.
02:36:496 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
02:58:439 (1,2,3) - Spacing! D:
Err, now that it's in Kiai, why don't we increase the difficulty a little?

02:19:525 (3,1) - Improve blanket. Fixed
02:24:496 (3,4) - ^ not so obvious
02:51:239 (3,1) - Improve blanket. not so obvious too
03:06:154 (3,4) - Improve blanket. Fixed
03:13:525 (1) - Ctrl + g. It's fun, so I wait for more suggestion about this
03:16:611 (2,3) - Improve blanket. Fixed
03:17:125 (3,4) - That jump. Is it overmap? I wonder
03:17:639 (1) - NC not necessary at the end but it's better you leave that NC, because it's better readable. like 01:27:925 (1), even if I don't fix, it's still readable.
Thanks for you mod! :)

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Fushimi Rio
卧槽我怕了 这是攒了多少mod

Atsuro wrote:

[imouto's Hard]
  1. Some of the antijumps you use are very misleading, especially at the beginning of the map changed to ar9
  2. 01:03:925 (2,1) - Aren't these overmapped? seems fine in my version now.
  3. 01:04:439 (1) - Ctrl+g and reposition this to make it lead to the next circle ^
  4. 01:07:525 - I think a circle with clap hs should be here for the strong beat good
  5. 01:13:182 (1,2) - Make the spacing of these two bigger, it's the same as 01:11:811 (1,2,3) - so players might mistake it for the same pattern added a note at 01:13:011 -

Leorda wrote:

[imouto's Insane]
00:26:554 (1) - Having an anti-jump like this can cause players were confuse to read if this a 1/2 note or 1/1 note. You should move further away from previous one, to make it readable for timing and spacing added a note to avoid antijump
00:26:554 (1) - ^
00:39:239 (2) - ^ no, this is not 1/2 spacing. and players won't read it as 1/4 too.
00:41:982 (2) - ^ ^
00:57:754 (1) - Remove whistle at repeating slider seems fixed now
01:49:868 (1) - I think this spinner were too long for this diff. You need to remap this part I'm considering
02:32:725 - Add note here? added

-Famous- wrote:

imouto's Insane
  1. What about AR8.5?
  2. 00:22:096 (1,2) - I'm not a fan from this kind of stacking. It doesn't look nice imo. not me :)
  3. 00:32:211 (5) - Move that slider to x:216 ; y:292. fixed
  4. 00:32:896 (7,1) - Blanket can be slightly improved. fixed
  5. 00:34:268 (4) - Move that circle to x:420 ; y:348 for better flow. fixed
  6. 00:35:468 (8,1) - Improve blanket. fixed
  7. Add a note 00:44:211, 00:44:382 and 00:44:554. added
  8. 00:49:354 - A triple stream would fit here. Add a note 00:49:354 and 00:49:439. added
  9. 00:59:468 (1,2,3,4,5) - Keep the spacing of 1.2x. made some change
  10. 01:49:868 (1) - Map this part instead of adding a spinner. .....
  11. 02:32:725 - Add a note. added
  12. 02:33:754 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - I don't like this pattern. It's playable but it looks very ugly imo. Same with the other part that use the same pattern. seems I got different ideas about overlapping with you. It's fine imo.
Thanks for mods.

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: TwoThirds & Feint feat. Veela - Epiphany.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 131125
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 8
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Title:Epiphany (feat. Veela & Feint)
TitleUnicode:Epiphany (feat. Veela & Feint)
Artist:TwoThirds
ArtistUnicode:TwoThirds
Creator:Streliteela
Version:imouto's Insane
Source:
Tags:Drum & Bass DnB Electronic imoutosan AlpacaCokelat
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329,311,83468,2,0,L|263:290,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,97,83982,5,0,0:0:0:0:
72,97,84154,2,0,L|50:163,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,210,84497,2,0,L|146:120,1,70,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,192,84840,2,0,L|183:258,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
153,338,85182,5,8,0:0:0:0:
236,114,85525,1,2,0:0:0:0:
294,272,85868,2,0,L|317:337,2,70,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,114,86554,5,0,0:0:0:0:
265,192,86725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,272,86896,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,350,87068,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,285,87239,5,2,0:0:0:0:
294,272,87411,1,2,0:0:0:0:
209,257,87582,1,2,0:0:0:0:
127,243,87753,1,0,0:0:0:0:
183,178,87925,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,109868,12,2,120839,0:0:0:0:
256,192,121525,5,0,0:0:0:0:
219,56,122211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
118,153,122896,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,298,123582,5,2,0:0:0:0:
245,162,124268,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,259,124953,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,298,125639,1,0,0:0:0:0:
314,94,126325,6,0,L|264:226,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,59,127696,2,0,L|241:36,1,140
177,260,129068,2,0,L|87:150,1,140
200,139,130439,1,0,0:1:0:0:
220,144,131125,1,4,0:0:0:0:
241,151,131811,5,12,0:0:0:0:
241,151,131982,1,8,0:0:0:0:
314,192,132154,2,0,P|359:204|385:204,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
455,248,132496,5,8,0:0:0:0:
455,248,132667,1,8,0:0:0:0:
382,289,132839,2,0,P|337:301|311:301,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,239,133182,5,0,0:0:0:0:
234,239,133353,1,8,0:0:0:0:
161,198,133525,2,0,P|116:186|90:186,1,70,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
21,146,133868,5,8,0:0:0:0:
21,146,134039,1,0,0:0:0:0:
94,105,134211,2,0,P|139:93|165:93,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
247,94,134554,5,8,0:0:0:0:
247,94,134725,1,8,0:0:0:0:
206,167,134897,2,0,P|194:211|194:238,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,164,135239,5,8,0:0:0:0:
290,164,135410,1,8,0:0:0:0:
331,237,135582,2,0,P|343:281|343:308,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
261,288,135925,2,0,P|248:332|235:355,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
174,297,136268,2,0,P|141:329|118:342,1,70,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,259,136611,6,0,P|35:248|94:176,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,120,137125,2,0,P|109:105|114:86,2,35,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,224,137639,6,0,P|165:204|188:179,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,109,137982,2,0,P|251:77|259:43,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
175,50,138325,6,0,P|145:69|122:94,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,163,138668,2,0,P|59:194|51:228,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
43,310,139011,6,0,P|44:344|55:378,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,333,139354,2,0,P|143:301|151:267,1,70,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,185,139697,2,0,P|156:150|146:122,4,35,2|0|0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
150,267,140211,6,0,P|173:292|202:312,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,232,140554,2,0,P|267:241|302:244,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,159,140896,2,0,P|321:150|353:136,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
479,46,141239,6,0,P|459:74|433:98,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,165,141582,2,0,P|456:179|414:186,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,273,141924,2,0,P|401:270|367:260,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,180,142268,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,108,142439,2,0,P|268:93|251:85,4,35,2|0|0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,180,142953,5,8,0:0:0:0:
265,221,143125,2,0,P|220:233|194:233,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,277,143467,5,8,0:0:0:0:
124,277,143638,1,8,0:0:0:0:
197,318,143810,2,0,P|242:330|268:330,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
341,300,144153,5,0,0:0:0:0:
341,300,144324,1,8,0:0:0:0:
414,259,144496,2,0,P|459:247|485:247,1,70,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,169,144839,5,8,0:0:0:0:
512,169,145010,1,0,0:0:0:0:
439,128,145182,2,0,P|394:116|368:116,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,119,145525,5,8,0:0:0:0:
286,119,145696,1,8,0:0:0:0:
327,192,145868,2,0,P|339:236|339:263,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,189,146210,5,8,0:0:0:0:
243,189,146381,1,8,0:0:0:0:
202,262,146553,2,0,P|190:306|190:333,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,313,146896,2,0,P|285:357|298:380,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,322,147239,2,0,P|392:354|415:367,1,70,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,284,147582,6,0,P|497:273|438:201,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,145,148096,2,0,P|422:130|417:111,2,35,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,249,148611,6,0,P|356:237|328:218,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,163,148954,2,0,P|240:135|223:105,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,91,149297,6,0,P|340:101|369:119,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
433,174,149640,2,0,P|456:199|473:230,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
502,307,149983,6,0,P|509:340|508:375,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,352,150326,2,0,P|402:324|385:294,1,70,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,217,150669,2,0,P|350:182|353:153,4,35,2|0|0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,294,151182,6,0,P|372:327|354:356,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,187,151525,2,0,P|295:216|307:249,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
149,203,151868,6,0,P|161:170|180:141,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,311,152211,2,0,P|238:281|226:248,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,141,152554,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,176,152725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,141,152896,5,0,0:0:0:0:
181,276,153068,1,10,0:0:0:0:
260,166,153239,1,2,0:0:0:0:
131,208,153411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,250,153582,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,141,153754,5,12,0:0:0:0:
229,73,153925,1,8,0:0:0:0:
299,26,154097,2,0,P|340:12|366:10,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,73,154439,5,8,0:0:0:0:
306,39,154610,1,8,0:0:0:0:
389,34,154782,2,0,P|432:43|455:53,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,39,155125,5,8,0:0:0:0:
389,48,155296,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,85,155468,2,0,P|496:114|511:135,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,48,155811,5,8,0:0:0:0:
464,85,155982,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,129,156153,1,2,0:0:0:0:
317,92,156325,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,67,156497,5,8,0:0:0:0:
312,106,156668,1,8,0:0:0:0:
369,168,156840,2,0,P|389:206|395:231,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,106,157182,5,8,0:0:0:0:
356,176,157353,1,8,0:0:0:0:
374,257,157525,2,0,P|371:300|365:325,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,256,157868,2,0,P|221:212|227:187,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,240,158211,6,0,P|295:283|289:308,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,239,158554,2,0,P|145:195|151:170,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,199,158896,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,216,158981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
223,233,159067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,251,159153,1,0,0:0:0:0:
215,268,159238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
226,173,159582,6,0,P|263:196|281:214,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,278,159925,2,0,P|357:317|364:341,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,270,160268,6,0,P|263:232|281:214,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
345,158,160611,2,0,P|384:137|408:130,1,70,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,256,160954,6,0,P|299:232|281:214,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,151,161296,2,0,P|205:111|198:87,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,159,161639,6,0,P|299:197|281:215,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,255,161982,1,8,0:0:0:0:
23,320,162325,6,0,P|49:343|81:356,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,273,162668,2,0,P|129:262|156:240,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,169,163011,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,56,163354,5,8,0:0:0:0:
272,121,163525,1,8,0:0:0:0:
354,132,163697,1,2,0:0:0:0:
302,199,163868,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,210,164039,2,0,L|400:248,2,35,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,132,164382,1,2,0:0:0:0:
302,199,164554,1,2,0:0:0:0:
354,132,164725,5,8,0:0:0:0:
304,64,164896,1,8,0:0:0:0:
234,17,165068,2,0,P|193:3|167:1,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,64,165410,5,8,0:0:0:0:
227,30,165581,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,25,165753,2,0,P|101:34|78:44,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
227,30,166096,5,8,0:0:0:0:
144,39,166267,1,8,0:0:0:0:
69,76,166439,2,0,P|37:105|22:126,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,39,166782,5,8,0:0:0:0:
69,76,166953,1,8,0:0:0:0:
141,120,167124,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,83,167296,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,58,167468,5,8,0:0:0:0:
221,97,167639,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,159,167811,2,0,P|144:197|138:222,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
221,97,168153,5,8,0:0:0:0:
177,167,168324,1,8,0:0:0:0:
159,248,168496,2,0,P|162:291|168:316,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,247,168839,2,0,P|312:203|306:178,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,231,169182,6,0,P|238:274|244:299,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
390,230,169525,2,0,P|388:186|382:161,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,178,169868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,195,169953,1,0,0:0:0:0:
305,212,170039,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,230,170125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
313,247,170210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
307,162,170553,6,0,P|272:188|255:207,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,276,170896,2,0,P|188:316|183:341,1,70
255,208,171239,6,0,P|213:194|188:192,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
103,190,171582,2,0,P|60:199|37:209,1,70
187,192,171925,6,0,P|174:150|161:128,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
113,56,172268,2,0,P|80:26|59:13,1,70
160,127,172611,2,0,P|188:136|200:136,4,35,0|0|0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,136,173296,6,0,P|286:124|301:117,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,84,173639,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,236,173982,2,0,P|300:290|297:307,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,170,174325,6,0,P|413:224|416:241,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,373,174668,2,0,P|416:324|403:313,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,270,175011,2,0,P|283:246|266:243,1,70,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,236,175354,5,2,0:0:0:0:
172,235,175439,1,0,0:0:0:0:
155,237,175525,1,2,0:0:0:0:
137,241,175611,1,0,0:0:0:0:
121,246,175696,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,185296,12,0,186668,0:0:0:0:
256,192,187011,5,2,0:0:0:0:
101,40,187354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
51,107,187525,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,175,187697,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,149,187868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,65,188040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,272,188383,5,2,0:0:0:0:
337,80,188725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
338,215,188896,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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387,147,189239,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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466,248,189754,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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154,298,190440,2,0,L|219:271,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,328,190783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
93,160,191125,5,2,0:0:0:0:
219,271,191468,2,0,L|282:242,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,296,191811,2,0,L|291:325,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,263,192154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
419,383,192496,5,2,0:0:0:0:
512,263,192839,2,0,L|473:175,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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288,263,193868,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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325,196,196268,5,8,0:0:0:0:
248,197,196439,1,0,0:0:0:0:
286,129,196611,1,10,0:0:0:0:
325,196,196782,1,8,0:0:0:0:
363,129,196954,5,0,0:0:0:0:
288,263,197125,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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以防万一 更新之后查一下歌曲信息什么的吧
Secretpipe
Find 2/3 more mods and feel free to call me !
Sonnyc
Hello Stalker.

General:

-- Maybe you wished for some kind of an effect, but your normal-hitclap sound was ear hurting at one side. Please use this altered one.

Normal:

00:51:925 (6) - Fix spacing.
00:59:125 (4) - ^
01:02:896 (5) - ^
01:11:468 (1) - ^
01:17:639 (2) - ^
02:33:411 (4) - ^

Frey's Hard:

-- Difficulty setting is highly imbalanced with [Normal]. Consider setting AR7.

03:17:125 (3,4) - Imo this jump didn't fit the music nicely..

imouto's Insane:

-- Tags conflict with other diffs.
-- Recommending to use the same combo color with other difficulties since the usage of color in this difficulty lacks readability.

01:49:868 (1) - 11second spinner? NO, I won't allow that. Cut your spinner and map please.

Insane:

-- Use tickrate 2. The current tick rate is hard to tell the players about the sudden sv change such as 02:49:525 (1).

01:13:868 (1) - 1.5x sv change felt too much compared with 01:13:525 (3). Imo 1.3x will work fine enough.
02:31:354 (2) - Highly recommended to make more space with (1,3). Since this note is too close, it can be confusing.

The difficulty gap between Normal and Hard was quite large since the rhythm of Normal is mostly constructed with 1/1 objects which is similar with the Easy diff, while the rhythm of Hard is mostly constructed 1/2 and also is frequently using jumps. What I suggest here is to remap your Normal by using 1/2 more often since adding beats in the current design doesn't seems to work nice. Or you can find another BAT who agrees with the current spread.
Fryz3
Hi! sorry for the late mod :(
modder came from: t/267877&start=0

Normal
  1. 01:08:723 (1) - maybe place the slider like this for better flow:
  2. 01:16:952 (1) - place it on: 412|176 to let it overlap it with the previous slider perfectly.
  3. 02:08:723 (7) - maybe replace it with just a single note? I don't know why you should change it here,
    i think it's better to remain with the previous slider placement.
  4. 02:54:323 (3) - maybe use the clap hitsound on the beginning of the slider here?
  5. 03:05:294 (3) - ^
  6. 03:16:266 (3) - ^

i think in overall it's a great map! :)

Insane
  1. 00:24:837 (1) - let it end on: 00:25:009
  2. 00:26:037 (7) - let it end on: 00:26:123
  3. 00:26:894 (4) - let it end on: 00:27:066 (ill just place the time from now on)
  4. 00:32:723 (5) - end: 00:32:809
  5. 00:38:552 (1) - end: 00:38:723
  6. 00:46:780 (1) - place on: 24|184 for better stack.
  7. 00:47:466 (4) - end: 00:47:637
  8. 00:53:294 (7,8,9,10,1) - maybe stack like how you did the previous ones?
    (like a circle wise, see: 00:40:952 (5,6,7,8,1) - )
  9. 01:08:380 (4,5,6,7,1) - ^
  10. 00:54:666 (4,5,6,7,1) - stack distance is a slighty unequal, it probably would be a bother but,
    if you can make it more equal it would be great :)
  11. 00:56:380 (1) - end: 00:56:552
  12. 00:56:723 (2) - end: 00:56:894
  13. 01:06:666 (5) - end: 01:06:837
  14. 01:10:609 (3,4,5) - placement bit weird here, distance also a bit unequal.
  15. 01:11:123 (6,7,8,9,1) - stack isn't in a straight line.
  16. 01:20:637 (7) - delete note.
  17. add note here: 01:24:409 ( you don't really need to, but if you stick with your attern, you should place one here)
  18. 01:49:523 (6) - add finish hitsound on the end of the slider?
  19. 02:36:494 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - it's just an idea, but maybe you can make more like triangles here?
  20. 02:41:637 (1) - ctrl + G?
  21. 02:52:952 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - idk about this combo, but i'm getting confused of the pattern. i mostly play around 4 star maps,
    so it may be my problem -,-
  22. 03:06:494 (6) - ctrl + G?


Gl with it!
pinataman
Hi there. Saw your map in #modrequest and liked me some DnB. If you thought my mod was helpful, please take a look at a map of mine and make this a M4M https://osu.ppy.sh/s/239635. Hope this helps!


[Easy]

00:29:294 (2,1) – make the second part of the 1 slider more curved so players can see the bend better. Could use 2 slider anchors for the 1 since the red anchor makes it less circular. 1 can blanket 2 better.

00:35:809 (1,2) - As shown by this helpful slider, you're pattern is not straight http://puu.sh/eXHg9/5fa2015e2e.jpg . So either rotate 00:35:809 (1,2) – by 4 CC and put at 118, 243, or rotate 1 and 2 Clockwise so you don't have linear flow here

00:52:609 (2) - It would be nice if you had the red anchor on 00:53:123 – to match the beat, but this kind of messes up your slider design

00:59:809 (3) - This could be curved a bit more to match the 2 slider better like this: http://puu.sh/eXJ9L/9d02dbe390.jpg
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01:49:866 (1,2) – I don't like this overlap/design. If you go with the anchor suggestions below, this is the pattern that came to mind (had to break 1.2x DS, which if you do you could try to keep your pattern, jut make sure 1 overlaps 2 at the center of the curved part of the 2 slider): http://puu.sh/eXNz3/6a24ccf09a.jpg
47,109,109866,6,0,B|107:35|213:8|300:36|300:36|435:202,1,479.999999999999,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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01:49:866 (1) – See if putting the red anchor at 01:51:066 - feels better since it matches the singer http://puu.sh/eXMBZ/71193386d3.jpg

In a similar vain, see if red anchors at 01:53:294 - , 01:53:809 – work better and put the red anchor here 01:59:294 – instead of 01:59:637 – and also if you do these, then 01:55:352 (1) – would feel out of place so go add similar anchors there.

02:00:837 (1) – For these kinds of sliders, it looks like you're using the red anchor to get the lyric “I” and then using the reverse slider on the electronic rhythm. I would put the red anchor more on the white slidertick to better match, but overall I don't recommend using a red anchor. Since the rhythm is not the same for the vocals/electric, trying to hit both is really confusing since it's hard not to focus on only one of them. Especially for the first note to introduce this pattern, I would just use a smooth slider.

02:33:066 (5,2) – It's possible to blanket these given rotation/movement, but this probably isn't necessary

02:46:780 (4) - Maybe try this flow? (Ctrl + > on 4) http://puu.sh/eXOnR/148be42b3a.jpg . If so, you can fit the rest with something like http://puu.sh/eXOj3/8635da73fa.jpg

03:00:152 (3,2) - These aren't perfectly parallel. Put the slider end at 188, 145. I don't want to assume that you do or don't know how to do this, so I put how I got here in this box:
Copy paste 03:00:152 (3) - . CTRL + Shift + S by about 1.5 . Delete the red anchor and end. You can be done, but for precise knowledge of where the slider ends, hit CTRL + G twice on it. End up with 188, 145.


[Normal]

00:31:009 (3) – could flow from 2 better by moving to 480, 205

00:45:752 (3) - -2 to y for better blanket

01:05:980 (1) – rotate CC by 1 and move to 472, 158 for better blanket

01:19:009 (4) – move to 162, 178 for better blanket.

01:17:980 (3,4) – Now that that's done, why is the prev 1.08? change to 1.0

01:23:809 (2) - +3 to x for better blanket

01:26:209 (3) – This is close to being linear flow, but since it isn't, it feels weird. Either move more to the left to make it obvious it's triangle flow or move it to the right of the 2 slider to make normal curved flow, or make it perfect linear flow.

01:49:866 (1) – from here to the spinner, I don't understand your claps. Can you explain what you're going for? I also want to have claps on the downbeats like 01:52:609 (1) – but that also sounds weird in spots. I guess my suggestion would be to keep the clap on this slider end 01:50:209 (2) - , but then delete the claps you have and put claps on all downbeats that have a note. Use what you did in the Insane and put a clap on each slider's end that starts a NC (so 01:52:609 (1) – etc.)

01:50:894 (3,4) – This is picky, but the stacking algorithm puts 3 at 76, 215, so your DS could be more consistent. Similarly the following stacks do similar things and not sure if you want 01:53:637 (2) - or 3 to be the one blanketed, since the other will not be.

01:55:352 (1) – this could be stacked better by +1x, +1y

02:58:780 (2) – this could be stacked better by -1 x, -1 y

[Hard]

00:33:066 (1) - -1 to y for better stack (even though the slider end is where you have this head, the animation looks odd the way you have it. Basically the editor is a lying asshole)

00:48:494 (3) – rotate 2 degrees clockwise for better blanket

00:51:923 (4) - -1 to x for better stack

00:55:009 (1,1) - - +1x, +1y for better stack

01:53:809 (1) - +1y for better blanket

02:19:009 (3,4,5,1) - -1y for better blanket

02:19:523 (4) - -1x for better blanket

02:21:066 (3,1,2) – dem curves. (No suggestion, I just like that even though this looks linear it's not)

02:35:466 (2,1) – Not perfectly blanketed, but the fading should make it not matter.

02:51:580 (1) - +3x, +1y for better blanket

02:52:952 (1) - +1, +1 for better stack (may need to do that for 2 and 3 too for linear flow)

02:55:694 (1) – move middle slider anchor to 118, 232 for better blanket with 4

02:59:809 (1,2) – rotate 3 degrees CC for better blanket

03:06:152 (3,4,1,2) - +1x for better stack on 2 and 1 sliders

Probably the most picky mod I've ever done because there wasn't much to say. Very good map.

[imouto's Insane]

I mention pacing a fair amount. This video helps discuss that idea: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5LScL4CWe5E

00:31:009 (1,2,3) – this looks a little odd, can't think of a fix though, sorry.

00:50:037 (4) – The stacking algorithm puts this at 92, 144, which gives it a downwards diagonal look/flow, which feels odd. See if manually putting 5 and 6 down and to the left 4 feels better

01:00:666 (1) – Is the reason for this spinner the long vocal note? If so, it might be better to make this clearer by starting it at 00:59:980 (4) – because right now it feels a little late to start it where it is. If you do change, you can have 00:59:466 (1,2,3) – be jumps to transition to the high energy spinner.

01:07:694 (5) - -2 to y for better blanket

01:22:094 (7,1) – Be careful about the jump into 1. With the changing DS, 1 can easily be read as being here 01:22:266 -

01:23:809 – I like having a circle here

01:49:866 (1) – I'm not a fan of this spinner. First off, spinners have a lot of energy, which is too much for this section. Furthermore, long spinners like this one feel kind of taxing. A small spinner can give a boost in energy, but such a long spinner just feels draining, and this is on a slow section of the song. Then, for the section starting at 02:01:523 (1) - , with almost the same energy level in the song, you have a section that takes so little energy. The pacing is just off. Please map this instead of having a 10 second spinner.

02:11:466 – The transition into the kiai is non-existent, so the change in energy feels a little too abrupt. Try adding a circle here to transition better using DS of .3x. Oh but make sure to account for the SV change, so DS it so it looks something like this: http://puu.sh/eZtH1/446afbd7d2.jpg

02:55:694 (5) – The problem with the break after this is that it comes after a climax. To me, putting a break here is equivalent to ending the map here, but worse since there's some added resolution that I have to wait for. The resolution of a map is supposed to comfort the player back down into normality after such a climax, but this doesn't do that. This drops the energy vastly, only to pick it up again. But why pick it up again when it's already hit its climax? You're not making me feel better since it's not the climax. And I have to wait a while for you to make the map resolve? No, make the map resolve immediately instead of making me wait for it. If the break was less than 2 seconds than fine, but this isn't, it's a long break. So either delete the notes after this break or map this instead of having a break for an extended resolution.

03:17:637 – Consider making this a circle and have 3 only reverse 2 times?

Good DnB flow.

[Insane]

00:26:037 (7,1) – Imo, the flow is awkward not fancy. Do a normal overlap inside of overlapping inside the slider.

00:56:037 (6,1) – Please no overlap

00:56:380 (1,2) – why do these use 1/8 ends? I also don't like any of the other 1/8 ends on sliders, but this one in particular gets to me. It sounds late and I can't understand what there is to gain from not ending on 00:56:552 -

00:57:580 (6,2) – These ends could stack better

01:09:066 (2,3) – why stack these? I don't see the decrease in energy that makes me want to pause. If anything, a normal DS will speak better for that since it's not a jump that would need energy.

01:09:237 (3) – prefer this as 2 circles for a triple into 01:09:409 (4) - .

01:28:266 (1) – You'll probably disagree, but I would like a break here until 01:39:237 (1) - . I think a break emphasizes the strong finish of 01:27:580 (5,6,7,8,9) - , where as mapping it makes the player work more and doesn't let you reflect on the strength of this finish. Furthermore, a break here makes your pacing better for 01:39:237 (1) - . By having a break, you took the relatively low energy section and found a way to make it feel a little higher energy since it's compared to a break. Plus I think you aren't gaining much by mapping this. It's pretty easy, so no one should really have any problems with it to the point where it's not as enjoyable as your more intense parts. It's kind of just a tax on my energy.

01:28:266 (1) – If not, clap on the slider end?

01:52:609 (1,3) – kind of awkward overlap, try 3 at 160, 185 ish

02:11:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – I'm curious, why no triples? I mean I don't like streams in general so for me single-tapping is good and I like the feel of the sliders, but why deviate from the norm here?

02:17:809 (3,4,5) – I don't like stacking triples in this section. You are at a higher energy part of the song from the beginning, yet it feels like you stack your triples more frequently. Spacing them out gives a better sense of pacing as it matches higher energy a little better. Furthermore, while spaced streams will always kill me since I suck at streams/reading them, stacking your triples more often makes 02:28:009 (4,5,6,1) – feel like it's out of left field. I feel spacing all the stacked triples would give me a better chance at reading this, especially if you space them further out than what you spaced them with the beginning.

02:19:009 (2,3) - I don't like this overlap, would rather see something like this http://puu.sh/eYQLH/c1ddba38c3.jpg

02:22:780 (1,3) – I think this overlap looks poor

02:40:780 (7) – Rotate this 2 degrees CC and move to 403, 162 for better blanket

02:44:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) – Let's compare this to 02:33:752 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - . I think the latter is the better pattern since the first combo in each pattern sets up a repetition, but the latter pattern breaks from the repetition to release the energy, where as the former pattern only stifles it. Try a different flow for 02:46:094 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) -

02:36:494 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) – In a similar vain, this feels a little similar to 02:35:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - , so try going with a tornado pattern by changing the order of your notes like this (editing for proper DS of course): http://puu.sh/eZnOr/f7917f9192.jpg , http://puu.sh/eZnQ9/4ba3423197.jpg

02:52:952 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – great pattern :D


Overall a very solid mapset. Good luck with getting ranked! :)

Edit: typo and linked video
Frey

Sonnyc wrote:

Frey's Hard:

-- Difficulty setting is highly imbalanced with [Normal]. Consider setting AR7. Okay:D

03:17:125 (3,4) - Imo this jump didn't fit the music nicely.. Still, I don't really want to fix if this is not overmapping.

pinataman wrote:

[Hard]

00:33:066 (1) - -1 to y for better stack (even though the slider end is where you have this head, the animation looks odd the way you have it. Basically the editor is a lying asshole) Fixed

00:48:494 (3) – rotate 2 degrees clockwise for better blanket
Fixed

00:51:923 (4) - -1 to x for better stack Fixed

00:55:009 (1,1) - - +1x, +1y for better stack Fixed

01:53:809 (1) - +1y for better blanket Fixed

02:19:009 (3,4,5,1) - -1y for better blanket I don't think it needs to

02:19:523 (4) - -1x for better blanket As above

02:21:066 (3,1,2) – dem curves. (No suggestion, I just like that even though this looks linear it's not) Well, fine for me

02:35:466 (2,1) – Not perfectly blanketed, but the fading should make it not matter. I think so :3

02:51:580 (1) - +3x, +1y for better blanket Fixed

02:52:952 (1) - +1, +1 for better stack (may need to do that for 2 and 3 too for linear flow) Fixed

02:55:694 (1) – move middle slider anchor to 118, 232 for better blanket with 4 What you said reminds me of this weird pattern, I decide to change this place, but not follow as you said

02:59:809 (1,2) – rotate 3 degrees CC for better blanket Fixed

03:06:152 (3,4,1,2) - +1x for better stack on 2 and 1 sliders Fixed

Probably the most picky mod I've ever done because there wasn't much to say. Very good map
Thanks~Also my most picky reply so far (´ ▽`).。
Thanks for modding! :)


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188,260,154609,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,252,154780,2,0,P|96:300|96:336,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,184,155123,6,0,P|158:149|160:114,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,32,155466,2,0,P|64:20|16:72,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,148,155980,2,0,P|2:183|0:218,2,70,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,108,156494,6,0,P|180:112|256:120,2,140,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,148,157352,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,236,157523,2,0,P|104:228|148:220,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,276,157866,6,0,P|236:253|276:234,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,164,158209,2,0,P|308:128|380:152,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,224,158723,2,0,L|420:312,2,70,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,160,159237,6,0,L|452:20,2,140,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,224,160094,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,204,160266,2,0,P|312:172|288:120,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
214,143,160609,6,0,P|198:174|180:204,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,244,160952,2,0,B|220:308|292:308|256:376,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,344,161466,2,0,P|104:352|88:352,2,70,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,376,161980,6,0,P|344:364|424:360,2,140,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,296,162837,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,216,163009,2,0,P|140:208|112:200,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,148,163352,6,0,P|88:80|96:52,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,28,163694,2,0,P|244:32|324:52,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,96,164209,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,76,164380,2,0,P|488:68|512:60,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,156,164723,6,0,P|404:212|396:316,2,140,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,176,165580,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,100,165752,2,0,P|276:48|292:20,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,96,166094,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,176,166266,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,236,166437,2,0,P|400:300|408:376,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,344,166952,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,284,167123,2,0,P|264:268|312:252,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,236,167466,6,0,P|408:168|376:104,2,140,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,172,168323,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,148,168494,2,0,P|188:160|148:172,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,228,168837,6,0,P|112:304|112:312,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,348,169180,2,0,P|248:340|324:312,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,236,169694,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,172,169866,2,0,P|236:180|192:196,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,228,170209,6,0,P|104:168|80:76,2,140,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,284,171066,1,8,0:0:0:0:
211,187,171237,2,0,L|208:112,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,57,171580,6,0,P|285:89|291:129,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,203,171923,2,0,P|359:219|427:206,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,144,172437,1,8,0:0:0:0:
394,55,172609,2,0,P|395:90|404:124,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,206,172952,6,0,P|437:277|417:357,2,140,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,216,173809,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,232,173980,2,0,P|248:188|248:152,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,80,174323,6,0,P|245:45|235:11,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,60,174666,2,0,P|92:56|20:44,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,128,175180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,144,175352,2,0,P|160:148|192:148,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,232,175694,6,0,P|118:243|49:246,2,140,12|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,296,176552,2,0,P|300:300|344:308,2,70,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,312,177066,5,0,0:0:0:0:
188,232,177237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,212,177409,2,0,P|296:148|292:60,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,24,177923,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,52,178094,2,0,P|136:104|136:132,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,204,178437,6,0,P|217:195|296:184,2,140,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,276,179294,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,308,179466,2,0,L|256:296,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
327,290,179809,6,0,P|321:332|305:356,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,384,180152,2,0,P|408:322|401:244,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,200,180666,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,160,180837,2,0,L|477:170,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,88,181180,6,0,L|320:60,2,140,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
477,170,182037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,228,182209,2,0,P|352:240|320:240,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,168,182552,6,0,P|265:164|231:155,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,124,182894,2,0,P|144:56|200:16,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,16,183409,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,98,183580,2,0,P|302:133|299:168,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,240,183923,6,0,B|180:216|176:256|96:232,2,140,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,324,184780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,356,184952,2,0,P|108:364|96:364,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,324,185294,6,0,P|28:252|28:240,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,172,185637,2,0,P|95:153|161:131,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,209,186152,1,8,0:0:0:0:
177,277,186323,2,0,P|153:245|145:193,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,132,186666,6,0,P|225:105|297:133,2,140,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,208,187523,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,248,187694,2,0,P|372:240|400:236,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,224,188037,6,0,P|466:189|461:154,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,72,188380,2,0,P|364:64|276:52,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,32,188894,2,0,P|156:36|128:40,2,70,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,112,189409,6,0,P|144:144|52:116,2,140,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,176,190266,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,248,190437,2,0,P|164:260|128:264,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,220,190780,6,0,P|40:272|32:292,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,360,191123,2,0,P|132:368|204:372,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,352,191637,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,332,191809,2,0,L|340:256,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,180,192152,6,0,P|240:200|168:212,2,140,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,208,193009,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,112,193180,2,0,L|376:92,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,32,193523,6,0,L|355:12,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,56,193866,2,0,P|184:108|212:184,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,276,194380,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,248,194552,2,0,P|388:252|424:256,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,280,194894,6,0,P|484:196|496:116,2,140,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,332,195752,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,376,195923,2,0,P|324:324|308:280,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,260,196266,6,0,P|257:226|269:193,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,116,196609,2,0,P|372:100|428:144,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,184,197123,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,48,197294,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,126,197466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,193,197637,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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