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TwoThirds & Feint - Epiphany (feat. Veela)

posted 2014-12-08T06:05:37+00:00

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Streliteela

406 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

Streliteela 2015-01-05T19:51:24+00:00

koreapenguin wrote:
Heeeey yooooooooo Hiiiiiiiii~~~OwO~~~

General
how about add combo color one more? it's seem bored there is have just two colors Yep really... added~
i guess you can't use '(Short ver.)' in title, follow this > http://puu.sh/e5NL7/66ee81d410.png < also about title, find seem 'Epiphany (Feat. Veela)' is right Fixed this~Thanks for point out this important matter~
i think doesn't need 'countdown' well, it's not big problem but recommend disabled Remove 'countdown' now~
add 'imoutosan' , 'Alpaca?' on tags, can't confirm Alpaca's nickname... anyway add GD mapper's nickname on tags
Add all gders to tags. P.S. Alpaca is short for AlpacaCokelat (https://osu.ppy.sh/u/1841032)
sample vol is really really loud, adjust it to suitably Reduce 10% of all the hitsound, seems better now~
@Natsu : timing seems really off o.o i don't know maybe around 15 or 17 ms off lol, I'm on my lap can't check timing well here:P
Yes really, I've changed the offset to 154ms and it sounds better now~

Normal
01:05:968 (1) - add finish on slider head, i guess missing. same here 01:49:854 (1) - Fixed~
01:10:768 (4,1) - i don't want recommend use this on beginner diff, it would be unnatural to play and read. also seep shape is not good, just make sure
Changed the slider to two notes now~
02:09:054 (1,1) - not enough recovery time behind this spinner, increase it by at least a half beat
Fixed~ move the end to 02:11:125 -

Insane
01:09:054 (2,3) - hum.. does it play well? i think it's really hard to read and play,you need some opinions Changed it to another pattern, seems better now~
01:49:511 (6) - add finish on slider tail oops I forgot to add fixed it~
02:34:767 (6) - unsnap end, 02:39:225 (1) - same. check ai mod Fixed~
02:09:054 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) - it's overmapped on blue tick, i think string sounds is can't be beat or rhythm confirm with Natsu, Xinely
I'm not sure about this. I know this part is a bit strange, but I still can't find a better way to fix this part. So I deicide to keep it and wait for some more suggestions. Thx a lot for pointing out this problem~I'll try my best to fix in the future~

Thanks a lot for your modding~ It really helps me a lot.

Mei

1,051 posts

Joined March 2012

Mei 2015-01-06T12:25:59+00:00

[insane]

01:02:211 (3) - 可以加个nc
01:10:782 (4,5) - 这里感觉有点怪，建议ctrl+g
01:28:268 (1) - 这一段开始nc变得有点不规律了起来，有的地方类似这个01:36:154 (1,1) - 是按人声分了多个nc，有些地方又是按白线来分的比如01:33:411 (1) - ，建议统一一下
02:15:239 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里可以摆个正五边形，类似这种感觉
02:17:039 (2,3,4,1) - 这间距有点坑._.不过我没打过也不确定能不恩呢打
02:22:096 (4,5) - 这里ctrl+g好打
02:38:554 (1) - 这减速略坑

[imouto‘s hard]

00:22:782 (1,1) - 去掉nc
00:46:782 (1) - 这个clap是不是加错位置
02:16:611 (6,1) - 建议换个nc，后面类似的地方也这样
02:38:896 (3) - 尾巴上加clap，类似的地方也是

毫无人性，打爆

[normal]

00:31:696 (1) - 这nc可以去掉，保持2长白线1nc
01:27:925 (1) - 这个默认的clap让我有点出戏

easy还不错
其实建议你吧gd的cs调到4，这样就是个light insane了hhhh然后在补个2.9左右的hard因为现在这hard实在略难.-.
insane做的蛮棒就是怎么感觉到了kiai就乱了，总之rank加油，给你一颗小星星w

FaiVillager

152 posts

Joined October 2012

FaiVillager 2015-01-06T14:22:53+00:00

来了来了~

这图做的挺精致~ 我喜欢~

[insane]
总体上不错
但是感觉有一部分滑条拐得有点过了而看起来很不舒服可能需要修改一下？（不少哦）
00:23:797 (3) - 这个就有一点拐多了考虑少拐点其他类似情况自己修一下吧（其实无所谓;w; 只是我觉得不好而已）
00:26:025 (7,1) - 7和1的开头放在一条直线上这种梗可以适当增加两个滑条之间的ds
00:28:940 (1) - 下边往左偏点
顺带我感觉这图开始部分和结尾的风格不太一样主要是弯滑条的有无建议统一一下
00:50:711 (6,1) - 和上边的一样
00:58:082 (2,3,4) - 堆在一起了不太好看
01:03:140 (6) - 这个地方根据滑条的形状决定连打的样子吧这里做成弧线不太好看
01:39:225 (1,1) - 这两个用01:40:768 (2) - 的approach circle来修的更完美
01:58:768 (3,4) - 一个曲线一个折现放在一起我个人不太推荐（看情况，星爷的其实还不错，但是和节奏关系很大）
02:17:025 (2,3,4) - 和之后的类似连打难度相对与这个图的整体有些偏大而且这部分做1.5x确实太快了，因为曲子本身没变。考虑降低速度吧

另外音量整体降低点吧有点大。

[normal]
这个其实也最好统一一下风格，折线和曲线完全混搭会比较奇怪个人推荐主一种另外一种适当添加以保证风味
00:24:140 (5,1) - 曲子在这部分属于两个小节，跨小节的对称滑条我不推荐
00:35:454 (6,1,2) - 摆成一条直线
01:10:768 (4,1) - 这种遮盖不太好（没有大问题）
02:15:911 (3) - 用缩圈调整下这个偏差比较大
02:30:311 (4,2) - 调成对称或者有关系的角度吧看起来怪怪的
02:45:054 (2,3,4,5) - 这几个曲率不一样如果愿意的话可以细调
02:50:197 (1,2,3) -

给你放了一个正三角，你自己可以这么修改

因为是NM所以GD暂时不mod了，最近比较忙.-.

Streliteela

406 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

Streliteela 2015-01-06T18:37:05+00:00

Mei wrote:
[insane]
01:02:211 (3) - 可以加个nc 好，已加
01:10:782 (4,5) - 这里感觉有点怪，建议ctrl+g 这个暂时先不改，刻意做的
01:28:268 (1) - 这一段开始nc变得有点不规律了起来，有的地方类似这个01:36:154 (1,1) - 是按人声分了多个nc，有些地方又是按白线来分的比如01:33:411 (1) - ，建议统一一下嗯好的，已改

02:15:239 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里可以摆个正五边形，类似这种感觉图形梗用太多了这里就不想用了_(:з」∠)_
02:17:039 (2,3,4,1) - 这间距有点坑._.不过我没打过也不确定能不恩呢打
这块已经改排列了，确实很多人说间距坑又遮挡太丧病。顺便钱语十级_(:з」∠)_

02:22:096 (4,5) - 这里ctrl+g好打这里暂时保留，再等看看其他人的想法
02:38:554 (1) - 这减速略坑囍，嚎嚎嚎！（被打死
[imouto‘s hard]

毫无人性，打爆 ~~打的好！~~

[normal]
00:31:696 (1) - 这nc可以去掉，保持2长白线1nc 好的已改
01:27:925 (1) - 这个默认的clap让我有点出戏
噗……手贱多按了个clap，我也是醉了orz

easy还不错
其实建议你吧gd的cs调到4，这样就是个light insane了hhhh然后在补个2.9左右的hard因为现在这hard实在略难.-.
insane做的蛮棒就是怎么感觉到了kiai就乱了，总之rank加油，给你一颗小星星w

感谢mei酱滴摸以及star~~

Streliteela

406 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

Streliteela 2015-01-06T18:55:02+00:00

FaiVillager wrote:
来了来了~ 欢迎欢迎OwO~

这图做的挺精致~ 我喜欢~ ^_^

[insane]
总体上不错
但是感觉有一部分滑条拐得有点过了而看起来很不舒服可能需要修改一下？（不少哦）
第一次做insane没什么经验，滑条什么的形状确实有些诡异orz

00:23:797 (3) - 这个就有一点拐多了考虑少拐点其他类似情况自己修一下吧（其实无所谓;w; 只是我觉得不好而已）
稍稍改直了一些

00:26:025 (7,1) - 7和1的开头放在一条直线上这种梗可以适当增加两个滑条之间的ds
这样改的话感觉flow就不太好了，先暂时不改

00:28:940 (1) - 下边往左偏点好的

顺带我感觉这图开始部分和结尾的风格不太一样主要是弯滑条的有无建议统一一下结尾有意稍稍减少了一些排列上的硬度所以弯滑条用的多了些，因为快结束了嘛缓和一下w

00:50:711 (6,1) - 和上边的一样嗯这里也是，改完flow感觉不好，暂时保留

00:58:082 (2,3,4) - 堆在一起了不太好看刻意做成这个样子的，其实打起来还可以只是edit面板里看着会有点挤

01:03:140 (6) - 这个地方根据滑条的形状决定连打的样子吧这里做成弧线不太好看同样是为了照顾flow

01:39:225 (1,1) - 这两个用01:40:768 (2) - 的approach circle来修的更完美好的已改

01:58:768 (3,4) - 一个曲线一个折现放在一起我个人不太推荐（看情况，星爷的其实还不错，但是和节奏关系很大）
作为星爷脑残粉表示挺想试一试这种style的_(:з」∠)_

02:17:025 (2,3,4) - 和之后的类似连打难度相对与这个图的整体有些偏大而且这部分做1.5x确实太快了，因为曲子本身没变。考虑降低速度吧
这个要改的话就要改太多了，1.5x个人感觉打起来还挺爽_(:з」∠)_，而且这歌节奏太单一如果kiai的sv平平就没什么激情了w

另外音量整体降低点吧有点大。减了10%，感觉再减就要听不出来音效了_(:з」∠)_

[normal]
这个其实也最好统一一下风格，折线和曲线完全混搭会比较奇怪个人推荐主一种另外一种适当添加以保证风味
这大概也算是一种风格（？

00:24:140 (5,1) - 曲子在这部分属于两个小节，跨小节的对称滑条我不推荐感觉还好吧_(:з」∠)_

00:35:454 (6,1,2) - 摆成一条直线这个调了好久……确实改了但我还是不确定是不是已经一条直线了orz

01:10:768 (4,1) - 这种遮盖不太好（没有大问题）移动了一下note位置从滑条头挪到滑条尾了，感觉好很多

02:15:911 (3) - 用缩圈调整下这个偏差比较大嗯确实，已改

02:30:311 (4,2) - 调成对称或者有关系的角度吧看起来怪怪的改成平行了w
02:45:054 (2,3,4,5) - 这几个曲率不一样如果愿意的话可以细调 ~~好难调啊不想调了sad~~

02:50:197 (1,2,3) -
给你放了一个正三角，你自己可以这么修改
这个好高端，已改w

因为是NM所以GD暂时不mod了，最近比较忙.-.
没关系~图摸的很好很受益w

感谢摸图~~

Fushimi Rio

1,402 posts

Joined November 2011

Fushimi Rio 2015-01-07T09:29:04+00:00

Mei wrote:
[notice][imouto‘s hard]
00:22:782 (1,1) - 去掉nc 前面的去掉了
00:46:782 (1) - 这个clap是不是加错位置是
02:16:611 (6,1) - 建议换个nc，后面类似的地方也这样好
02:38:896 (3) - 尾巴上加clap，类似的地方也是哦

毫无人性，打爆老毛病大概已没救

其实建议你吧gd的cs调到4，这样就是个light insane了hhhh然后在补个2.9左右的hard因为现在这hard实在略难.-.
唉也是我看看mapper怎么说 ~~不介意的话我就再补个hard得了~~ 我思考了一下最好还是不要让我来免得再次疯狂坠毁

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Zetera

Medal Hunter

933 posts

Joined November 2010

Zetera 2015-01-07T10:54:26+00:00

Hi. You solved the ~Puzzle~ , so you won a mod. I am not good at modding standard tho, also, this mapset seems to be quite soilid

[Easy]

|00:30:325 (1) - I would change the slider's direction after the red waypoint, since it's facing away from the next slider instead of pointing towards that very object. Here you have an example which works and which doesn't look bad.

(I simply moved the last two waypoints a bit to create a curve into the opposite direction.)
|00:46:439 (1,1) - Here and on two other occasions, the main beat of the song lies in the back of the slider. Like this, a beat is not correctly "expressed", simply because you don't have an active keystroke when hitting the time/the note, insteadf you release the key at that very point. A circle/A slider start point however fits perfectly. I think this is not as much of a problem in an Easy Diff, so you could leave it be, but finding a solution with a circle on the exact beat (being 00:57:754 - for example) would be great. You have used other possibilities earlier and you could use them further.
|I wouldn't end the map with a spinner, there are beats to be mapped and they can be mapped with patterns that were used seconds ago.

Other than that, the difficulty had no major rhythm/placement issues.

[Normal]

|02:08:382 (6,7) - You could use the pattern you used before by repeating 6, then you could turn 7 into a circle and place it at the beginning of the spinner and delay the spinner by 1/4 tick. Just a minor suggestion though.
|03:01:868 (2,7) - a slight stack overlap that you should fix.

[Hard]

|Check the beginning. A lot of parts are too crowded. This is caused by the effect the other, spaced objects have on the snapped ones. Let's compare 00:26:554 (1,2) - and 00:29:982 (3,4) - . Especially the part at 26 seconds is packed with circles at a low amount of editor surface, whilst the second marked part is widely spaced. Also, check patterns like 00:25:525 (1,2,3,4) - , the first 3 circles could form a clean triangle and the slider is really near to the 1, as is 3, at least optically. Try using Distance snap and try to make good, even-angle triangles (120° inbetween all circles), that will most likely help to create non-crowdy, good looking patterns.
|00:28:954 (1,2) - Weirdly stacked. Imagine that Distance Snap was used. You could assume that (2) comes 1/4 tick after (1). Again, Distance Snap solves the problem automaticly. You can also stack the notes properly to avoid misreads. The problem is caused by other maps that use 3/4 sliders that don't even fit to the rhythm, which is rather common by now. Also, the overlap is nothing that should be maintained imo. But I guess this is dependant on mapping style. By the way, this often occurs and is found throughout the whole difficulty.
|01:17:639 (3,4,5) - should be clap, clap, whistle, in this order. (Referrence: 01:19:010 (4,5,6,3,4,5) - for example )
|02:16:611 (6,7,1) - Another weird patter and overlap, but I leave it up to you now. As I said, this is probably your mapping style. (Remember that this was copy pasted, so if you are improving the pattern, then you need to improve it some beat snaps later again.)

*I like the flow in the Kiai's second part. c:

|03:12:496 (1) - Offscreen in my editor, but I have a weird resolution. It might be onscreen. If it is onscreen, then ignore this.

[Insane]

This diff is Sick , I love it.

|01:14:554 (1,1,1) - What about flipping 01:14:896 (1) - with Ctrl+H and Ctrl+G (turning it around by 180°)?

Have 2 stars, I want to see this ranked. Good luck.

Streliteela

406 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

Streliteela 2015-01-07T18:05:19+00:00

Sala- wrote:
Hi. You solved the ~Puzzle~ , so you won a mod. hi lol~~

I am not good at modding standard tho, also, this mapset seems to be quite soilid
Never mind. this modding is nice and helps me (and especially my GDers) a lot~

[Normal]

|02:08:382 (6,7) - You could use the pattern you used before by repeating 6, then you could turn 7 into a circle and place it at the beginning of the spinner and delay the spinner by 1/4 tick. Just a minor suggestion though.
Good suggestion~ but still I want to keep it and wait for more suggestions from other people

|03:01:868 (2,7) - a slight stack overlap that you should fix. Yep fixed this~

[Insane]

This diff is Sick , I love it.

|01:14:554 (1,1,1) - What about flipping 01:14:896 (1) - with Ctrl+H and Ctrl+G (turning it around by 180°)?
ehh...it seems a little bit weird...

Have 2 stars, I want to see this ranked. Good luck.

Thanks a lot for your modding and stars~~

Fushimi Rio

1,402 posts

Joined November 2011

Fushimi Rio 2015-01-08T11:11:50+00:00

Sala- wrote:
[Hard]

|Check the beginning. A lot of parts are too crowded. This is caused by the effect the other, spaced objects have on the snapped ones. Let's compare 00:26:554 (1,2) - and 00:29:982 (3,4) - . Especially the part at 26 seconds is packed with circles at a low amount of editor surface, whilst the second marked part is widely spaced. Also, check patterns like 00:25:525 (1,2,3,4) - , the first 3 circles could form a clean triangle and the slider is really near to the 1, as is 3, at least optically. Try using Distance snap and try to make good, even-angle triangles (120° inbetween all circles), that will most likely help to create non-crowdy, good looking patterns.
~~seems I have different taste from others~~ fixed some unpleasing notes
|00:28:954 (1,2) - Weirdly stacked. Imagine that Distance Snap was used. You could assume that (2) comes 1/4 tick after (1). Again, Distance Snap solves the problem automaticly. You can also stack the notes properly to avoid misreads. The problem is caused by other maps that use 3/4 sliders that don't even fit to the rhythm, which is rather common by now. Also, the overlap is nothing that should be maintained imo. But I guess this is dependant on mapping style. By the way, this often occurs and is found throughout the whole difficulty. ^
|01:17:639 (3,4,5) - should be clap, clap, whistle, in this order. (Referrence: 01:19:010 (4,5,6,3,4,5) - for example ) oops fixed
|02:16:611 (6,7,1) - Another weird patter and overlap, but I leave it up to you now. As I said, this is probably your mapping style. (Remember that this was copy pasted, so if you are improving the pattern, then you need to improve it some beat snaps later again.)
fixed a bit, maybe

*I like the flow in the Kiai's second part. c:

|03:12:496 (1) - Offscreen in my editor, but I have a weird resolution. It might be onscreen. If it is onscreen, then ignore this. made 1 grid up

osu file format v13

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Fushimi Rio

1,402 posts

Joined November 2011

Fushimi Rio 2015-01-08T11:12:05+00:00

Sala- wrote:
[Hard]

|Check the beginning. A lot of parts are too crowded. This is caused by the effect the other, spaced objects have on the snapped ones. Let's compare 00:26:554 (1,2) - and 00:29:982 (3,4) - . Especially the part at 26 seconds is packed with circles at a low amount of editor surface, whilst the second marked part is widely spaced. Also, check patterns like 00:25:525 (1,2,3,4) - , the first 3 circles could form a clean triangle and the slider is really near to the 1, as is 3, at least optically. Try using Distance snap and try to make good, even-angle triangles (120° inbetween all circles), that will most likely help to create non-crowdy, good looking patterns.
~~seems I have different taste from others~~ fixed some unpleasing notes
|00:28:954 (1,2) - Weirdly stacked. Imagine that Distance Snap was used. You could assume that (2) comes 1/4 tick after (1). Again, Distance Snap solves the problem automaticly. You can also stack the notes properly to avoid misreads. The problem is caused by other maps that use 3/4 sliders that don't even fit to the rhythm, which is rather common by now. Also, the overlap is nothing that should be maintained imo. But I guess this is dependant on mapping style. By the way, this often occurs and is found throughout the whole difficulty. ^
|01:17:639 (3,4,5) - should be clap, clap, whistle, in this order. (Referrence: 01:19:010 (4,5,6,3,4,5) - for example ) oops fixed
|02:16:611 (6,7,1) - Another weird patter and overlap, but I leave it up to you now. As I said, this is probably your mapping style. (Remember that this was copy pasted, so if you are improving the pattern, then you need to improve it some beat snaps later again.)
fixed a bit, maybe

*I like the flow in the Kiai's second part. c:

|03:12:496 (1) - Offscreen in my editor, but I have a weird resolution. It might be onscreen. If it is onscreen, then ignore this. made 1 grid up

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: TwoThirds & Feint feat. Veela - Epiphany.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 131125
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 22082,44025,54997,65968,76940,87911,109854,131797,142768,153740,164711,175682,197625
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.700001

[Metadata]
Title:Epiphany (feat. Veela & Feint)
TitleUnicode:Epiphany (feat. Veela & Feint)
Artist:TwoThirds
ArtistUnicode:TwoThirds
Creator:Streliteela
Version:imouto's Hard
Source:
Tags:Drum & Bass DnB Electronic imoutosan AlpacaCokelat
BeatmapID:585895
BeatmapSetID:241474

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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2,175896,184546
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Fushimi Rio

1,402 posts

Joined November 2011

Fushimi Rio 2015-01-08T11:17:30+00:00

Sala- wrote:
[Hard]

|Check the beginning. A lot of parts are too crowded. This is caused by the effect the other, spaced objects have on the snapped ones. Let's compare 00:26:554 (1,2) - and 00:29:982 (3,4) - . Especially the part at 26 seconds is packed with circles at a low amount of editor surface, whilst the second marked part is widely spaced. Also, check patterns like 00:25:525 (1,2,3,4) - , the first 3 circles could form a clean triangle and the slider is really near to the 1, as is 3, at least optically. Try using Distance snap and try to make good, even-angle triangles (120° inbetween all circles), that will most likely help to create non-crowdy, good looking patterns.
~~seems I have different taste from others~~ fixed some unpleasing notes
|00:28:954 (1,2) - Weirdly stacked. Imagine that Distance Snap was used. You could assume that (2) comes 1/4 tick after (1). Again, Distance Snap solves the problem automaticly. You can also stack the notes properly to avoid misreads. The problem is caused by other maps that use 3/4 sliders that don't even fit to the rhythm, which is rather common by now. Also, the overlap is nothing that should be maintained imo. But I guess this is dependant on mapping style. By the way, this often occurs and is found throughout the whole difficulty. ^
|01:17:639 (3,4,5) - should be clap, clap, whistle, in this order. (Referrence: 01:19:010 (4,5,6,3,4,5) - for example ) oops fixed
|02:16:611 (6,7,1) - Another weird patter and overlap, but I leave it up to you now. As I said, this is probably your mapping style. (Remember that this was copy pasted, so if you are improving the pattern, then you need to improve it some beat snaps later again.)
fixed a bit, maybe

*I like the flow in the Kiai's second part. c:

|03:12:496 (1) - Offscreen in my editor, but I have a weird resolution. It might be onscreen. If it is onscreen, then ignore this. made 1 grid up

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StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.700001

[Metadata]
Title:Epiphany (feat. Veela & Feint)
TitleUnicode:Epiphany (feat. Veela & Feint)
Artist:TwoThirds
ArtistUnicode:TwoThirds
Creator:Streliteela
Version:imouto's Hard
Source:
Tags:Drum & Bass DnB Electronic imoutosan AlpacaCokelat
BeatmapID:585895
BeatmapSetID:241474

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,88125,109118
2,175896,184546
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Autumn

501 posts

Joined October 2011

Autumn 2015-01-08T11:48:27+00:00

In Guu's request.

General

可能还需要一个简单的Hard，现在的Hard过难，可以当light insane做了

Alpaca's Easy

fine

Normal

02:37:525 (4) - 这个遮挡可能会被挑

imouto's Hard

HP-1
关于01:16:954 - 01:27:925这段，节奏和音效有点乱
01:18:496 - 漏了个音...
01:21:239 - ^
01:23:982 - ^
01:19:010 (4) - 这个clap去掉，01:19:353 (6) - 这个加上clap，和01:17:811 (4,5) - 一致，后面也一样，延续C----CC的自创节奏+音效，或者干脆跟着BGM来，不用自创节奏和音效

Insane

00:53:639 (1) - X246 Y181
01:14:811 - 漏了一个音，但想改必须摈弃目前这个梗。小问题，取舍在你
01:25:182 (1) - 左移一格
01:27:925 - 02:11:811 - 完全没有音效单薄了一些。可以用whistle丰富一下这段的音效，比如在01:28:268 (1,3) - 滑条尾、01:30:668 (1) - 等等类似的24clap
02:36:839 (3,4) - 以及02:37:354 (6,7) - 都对调一下，顺时针flow对于从02:36:154

(7,8,9,10) - 到02:37:868 (1) - 的衔接更符合习惯，也流畅一些
02:49:696 - 这个drum被减速滑条盖过，坚持用滑条覆盖的话不妨加红点强调一下，愿意摈弃只要恢复原SV即可
02:51:068 - 同上，如果前面的减速还是为了强调Vocal，这里就有点莫名了
02:52:439 - 同上
03:11:982 (7) - 单纯觉得Ctrl+G易读也干净一点

That's all!
Nice map, good luck!

Streliteela

406 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

Streliteela 2015-01-08T14:48:00+00:00

Autumn wrote:
In Guu's request.
General
可能还需要一个简单的Hard，现在的Hard过难，可以当light insane做了
嗯这个有考虑过，再等另外一个GD。如果能满足要求就把现在这个hard作为light insane
Normal
02:37:525 (4) - 这个遮挡可能会被挑不太想改这里的pattern，先暂时保留
Insane
00:53:639 (1) - X246 Y181 好已改
01:14:811 - 漏了一个音，但想改必须摈弃目前这个梗。小问题，取舍在你还是想留这个梗
01:25:182 (1) - 左移一格好的
01:27:925 - 02:11:811 - 完全没有音效单薄了一些。可以用whistle丰富一下这段的音效，比如在01:28:268 (1,3) - 滑条尾、01:30:668 (1) - 等等类似的24clap 嗯好建议，已经加了一些音效
02:36:839 (3,4) - 以及02:37:354 (6,7) - 都对调一下，顺时针flow对于从02:36:154 (7,8,9,10) - 到02:37:868 (1) - 的衔接更符合习惯，也流畅一些
好建议，已改
02:49:696 - 这个drum被减速滑条盖过，坚持用滑条覆盖的话不妨加红点强调一下，愿意摈弃只要恢复原SV即可
02:51:068 - 同上，如果前面的减速还是为了强调Vocal，这里就有点莫名了
02:52:439 - 同上
以上三个地方没有改，因为这块是刻意做的一个梗。这三个减速滑条是因为长音刻意安排的，配合变间距单点以后让图更有张力
03:11:982 (7) - 单纯觉得Ctrl+G易读也干净一点嗯已改

That's all!
Nice map, good luck!

感谢摸图~~

jyu

1,338 posts

Joined August 2012

jyu 2015-01-09T15:02:27+00:00

koreapenguin wrote:
[notice]Heeeey yooooooooo

General
how about add combo color one more? it's seem bored there is have just two colors
i guess you can't use '(Short ver.)' in title, follow this > http://puu.sh/e5NL7/66ee81d410.png < also about title, find seem 'Epiphany (Feat. Veela)' is right
i think doesn't need 'countdown' well, it's not big problem but recommend disabled
add 'imoutosan' , 'Alpaca?' on tags, can't confirm Alpaca's nickname... anyway add GD mapper's nickname on tags i think alpacacokelat is fine
sample vol is really really loud, adjust it to suitably
@Natsu : timing seems really off o.o i don't know maybe around 15 or 17 ms off lol, I'm on my lap can't check timing well here:P

Alpaca's Easy
Nothing to say, but i think this diff is unbalance. compare 00:22:082 - ~ 02:33:482 - with 02:33:740 - ~ 03:14:797 - note's density, anyway don't mind about this it just my personal think
yeah i intentionally made the density different even though both sections are absolutely similiar, but one of them is at the beginning song meanwhile the other is at the last part of the song, so yeah

Sala- wrote:
[Easy]

|00:30:325 (1) - I would change the slider's direction after the red waypoint, since it's facing away from the next slider instead of pointing towards that very object. Here you have an example which works and which doesn't look bad. fix
(I simply moved the last two waypoints a bit to create a curve into the opposite direction.)
|00:46:439 (1,1) - Here and on two other occasions, the main beat of the song lies in the back of the slider. Like this, a beat is not correctly "expressed", simply because you don't have an active keystroke when hitting the time/the note, insteadf you release the key at that very point. A circle/A slider start point however fits perfectly. I think this is not as much of a problem in an Easy Diff, so you could leave it be, but finding a solution with a circle on the exact beat (being 00:57:754 - for example) would be great. You have used other possibilities earlier and you could use them further. that's a good point idk i kinda hesitated placing two consecutive circles in easy but yeah i should try this
|I wouldn't end the map with a spinner, there are beats to be mapped and they can be mapped with patterns that were used seconds ago. i just realized other diffs dont use spinner lmao fix

Other than that, the difficulty had no major rhythm/placement issues.

Thank you for mods!

osu file format v13

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 131125
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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TitleUnicode:Epiphany (feat. Veela & Feint)
Artist:TwoThirds
ArtistUnicode:TwoThirds
Creator:Streliteela
Version:Alpaca's Easy
Source:
Tags:Drum & Bass DnB Electronic imoutosan AlpacaCokelat
BeatmapID:585893
BeatmapSetID:241474

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:2.7
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:2.5
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-Faded-

752 posts

Joined December 2012

-Faded- 2015-01-09T20:19:16+00:00

Hi, from the Faded Modding Queue~

[General]

Are you sure about the grey combo colour? When people in multi play this in tag, people won't know when it's their turn, because the combo colour won't change. Not that big of a deal, but something to consider.
The gap from Normal to Hard is very big. There's a big gap from the star rating, going from 2.09 right up to 3.65 and there's the fact that Normal hardly uses any 1/2 at all, and where hard constantly uses spaced 1/2 throughout the entire map. I would add a new difficulty in between these two diffs, at around 2.80/3.00 in the star rating.

[Easy]

01:00:154 (1,2) - This would look nicer if it were a blanket, make sure that the end of (1) is parallel to the edge of (2)'s slider-trail.
01:03:239 (1) - Considering that this is on the downbeat, you should add a clap here, it will not only add extra emphasis on the strong beat, but it will also improve consistency with the other downbeats, since they have claps on them.
01:52:611 (2,1) - This overlap looks kind of scruffy, especially for an easy, so I suggest moving them further apart a bit so that they don't overlap.
02:26:896 (3) - Like 01:03:239 (1) - , you should add a clap on this downbeat as well.
02:27:239 (4,1) - I would extend this by 1 beat, because that way you get to add a whistle on the slider end; meaning that the player isn't left off-beat after a suddenly cut off rhythm pattern.
02:47:468 (1) - Like 01:03:239 (1) - , you should add a clap on this downbeat as well, because it will go with your clap pattern (add a clap every two downbeats)

[Normal]

01:10:782 (4,3) - These two notes happen to have a slight overlap. Very minor, but you should still fix it; otherwise it will feel cramped and messy.
02:19:354 (5,2) - Minor, but I'm not too fond of how (2)'s repeat arrow is literally being touched by (5)'s slider-trail. You should fix this, otherwise it will feel cramped.
02:31:354 (2) - Why is there a whistle on the repeat instead of the head? This goes against your hitsound pattern and is very inconsistent, causing it to sound odd compared with the rest of the map. I suggest adding one on the head of the slider instead.
03:05:639 (4) - Like above, you should add a whistle here, because it will be more consistent with your hitsound pattern. Otherwise it will sound very odd compared to the rest of the map.

[Hard]

00:42:668 (1) - Since this is hard, it feels kind of empty not having a sound on this strong downbeat. I would add a hit circle at the downbeat, and start the spinner 1/4 forward
00:57:754 (1) - Why is there a whistle on the repeat instead of the end?
01:03:925 (2,1) - The amount of repeats that these sliders have feel really off and out of place in comparison to the rest of the map, not to mention that they don't go with the vocals nor beat, so it's also overmapped. I have a rhythm that can compliment the music more:

You should use this instead, because it goes with the music a lot better.
01:23:125 (3) - Add a clap at the end of this slider for consistency with your hitsound pattern, otherwise it will sound out of place and odd compared to the rest of the map.
01:49:868 (1) - What's up with the massive spinner here? This is a hard diff, so the music here should be easily mappable, just don't make it as intense as the rest of the map. Don't just cover it up with a spinner, otherwise it will feel long and tedious to play.
02:50:553 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - You suddenly stop using claps in this pattern, why? It just makes it feel out of place and boring, so I suggest adding a few.
02:55:696 - Why is there a break after here? It's been mapped after all the other diffs, and this part of the song is identical to the beginning; which you mapped. So I highly recommend mapping this break out, it will be more consistent throughout the rest of the set and difficulty.

[Insane]

01:14:211 (1,1,1) - I think there would be nicer flow if the third slider is in the same place as the first slider, but spaced slightly further away. This would flow better, because the cursor isn't stuck in one cramped location, disrupting the gameplay.
02:17:296 (1) - Add a clap on this circle? It would be more consistent, because there aren't many claps in this part of the music, and it would also add emphasis on this strong part of the music.
02:27:582 (3,4,5,6) - Since there is a slowdown, the spaced 1/4 stream can be really hard to predict, and could easily be mistaken for a set of 1/2. I suggest compressing the stream a bit, or remove the slowdown.
02:28:268 (7,8,9,1) - Very minor, but I don't like how (7)'s trail is being overlapped slightly by that stack, it can make the map look untidy. I suggest getting rid of the overlap here.
02:49:525 (1,2,3,4) - Like 02:27:582 (3,4,5,6) -, stream can be hard to predict.

Overall, I found that the hard and insane difficulties are very unique and well mapped, and that Easy and Normal are very solid and well polished, despite having a few hitsound inconsistencies. The main thing holding the map back, however, is the poor spread from Normal to Hard, I suggest you sort that out somehow. I shot a star, good luck!

jyu

1,338 posts

Joined August 2012

jyu 2015-01-10T13:55:15+00:00

[ Faded ] wrote:
Hi, from the Faded Modding Queue~

[Easy]
01:00:154 (1,2) - This would look nicer if it were a blanket, make sure that the end of (1) is parallel to the edge of (2)'s slider-trail. fix
01:03:239 (1) - Considering that this is on the downbeat, you should add a clap here, it will not only add extra emphasis on the strong beat, but it will also improve consistency with the other downbeats, since they have claps on them. fix
01:52:611 (2,1) - This overlap looks kind of scruffy, especially for an easy, so I suggest moving them further apart a bit so that they don't overlap. the ds wont let me ;w;
02:26:896 (3) - Like 01:03:239 (1) - , you should add a clap on this downbeat as well. somehow the beat here isn't strong like any other downbeat so i didnt add clap
02:27:239 (4,1) - I would extend this by 1 beat, because that way you get to add a whistle on the slider end; meaning that the player isn't left off-beat after a suddenly cut off rhythm pattern. following the vocals
02:47:468 (1) - Like 01:03:239 (1) - , you should add a clap on this downbeat as well, because it will go with your clap pattern (add a clap every two downbeats) fix

Thank you for mod!

osu file format v13

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Streliteela

406 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

Streliteela 2015-01-10T17:29:56+00:00

[ Faded ] wrote:
Hi, from the Faded Modding Queue~ Hi~~:3

[General]
Are you sure about the grey combo colour? When people in multi play this in tag, people won't know when it's their turn, because the combo colour won't change. Not that big of a deal, but something to consider.
Tentatively decide to keep this combo colour because I still don't know which colour is better Also, I think grey colour fit this background well. Anyway, I will change it when I have a better idea.
The gap from Normal to Hard is very big. There's a big gap from the star rating, going from 2.09 right up to 3.65 and there's the fact that Normal hardly uses any 1/2 at all, and where hard constantly uses spaced 1/2 throughout the entire map. I would add a new difficulty in between these two diffs, at around 2.80/3.00 in the star rating.
Yep I agree. Presently I'm trying my best to find a more appropriate hard diff which difficulty is around 3.0 (but it seems everyone is busy these days... ). If I can find a suitable one, I'll change imouto's hard to a light insane diff. That's the only way I could think of to deal with this problem now

[Normal]
01:10:782 (4,3) - These two notes happen to have a slight overlap. Very minor, but you should still fix it; otherwise it will feel cramped and messy.
Ok fixed it~
02:19:354 (5,2) - Minor, but I'm not too fond of how (2)'s repeat arrow is literally being touched by (5)'s slider-trail. You should fix this, otherwise it will feel cramped.
I'll consider this idea and how to fix this part. Just keep it temporarily.
02:31:354 (2) - Why is there a whistle on the repeat instead of the head? This goes against your hitsound pattern and is very inconsistent, causing it to sound odd compared with the rest of the map. I suggest adding one on the head of the slider instead.
Oops I didn't notice this mistake Fixed~
03:05:639 (4) - Like above, you should add a whistle here, because it will be more consistent with your hitsound pattern. Otherwise it will sound very odd compared to the rest of the map.
OK added~

[Insane]
01:14:211 (1,1,1) - I think there would be nicer flow if the third slider is in the same place as the first slider, but spaced slightly further away. This would flow better, because the cursor isn't stuck in one cramped location, disrupting the gameplay.
Good idea~I've changed this pattern as you said~
02:17:296 (1) - Add a clap on this circle? It would be more consistent, because there aren't many claps in this part of the music, and it would also add emphasis on this strong part of the music.
OK fixed~
02:27:582 (3,4,5,6) - Since there is a slowdown, the spaced 1/4 stream can be really hard to predict, and could easily be mistaken for a set of 1/2. I suggest compressing the stream a bit, or remove the slowdown.
I didn't change this part because I want to keep this 'Slow----Fast' feeling. That's more fun though it's really hard to read.
02:28:268 (7,8,9,1) - Very minor, but I don't like how (7)'s trail is being overlapped slightly by that stack, it can make the map look untidy. I suggest getting rid of the overlap here.
Nice suggestion! Fixed this part~
02:49:525 (1,2,3,4) - Like 02:27:582 (3,4,5,6) -, stream can be hard to predict.
Same reason as 02:27:582 (3,4,5,6) - . Just keep it~

Overall, I found that the hard and insane difficulties are very unique and well mapped, and that Easy and Normal are very solid and well polished, despite having a few hitsound inconsistencies. The main thing holding the map back, however, is the poor spread from Normal to Hard, I suggest you sort that out somehow. I shot a star, good luck!

Really nice suggestions! Thanks for your mod and star~~

Squichu

1,013 posts

Joined November 2012

Squichu 2015-01-10T21:26:02+00:00

hi there!
from my queue, just making suggestions :3

General

considering the combo colours, try this maybe -
```
[Colours]
Combo1 : 68,111,153
Combo2 : 255,240,200
Combo3 : 162,205,249
Combo4 : 245,199,101
```
they're better to see and match the background
hmh, such a long break. ;-; it's a little boring to wait that long, maybe you can find someone who can do a SB? cause that's less boring than watching the background for 20 seconds >w<

Alpaca's Easy
aah, this is okay to play, but sooooo repetitive! why? :c in the middle part the rhythm stays the same for like.. ever. it really gets a little boring. ;-; maybe you can try to spice this up a bit?

00:36:154 (2,3) - a little confusing for beginner players, cause 3's end is closer to 2 than the head and at the perfect next-to-hit-object spot, please move it, so it won't confuse anyone
same for 00:41:639 (2,3) -
00:44:382 (2) - rhythm feels off, especially cause the vocals start in the middle of the slider, maybe you can change the rhythm up, so it matches both, beat and vocals? example:
00:46:439 (1) - if you know that the downbeat is clearly audiable and pretty strong you might want to make it a clickable object, cause atm it doesn't have any effect on gameplay :c same goes for 00:49:182 (1) - and several others - you'd be better of with circles, imo
01:52:611 (2,1) - this overlap is a no for Easy (imo), it's way too confusing >-< if the DS make it impossible to move it somewhere so they won't overlap, then choose a different shape for one of the sliders, or both :b (btw, it's not bad if the slidertracks overlap, it's just confusing when you cover starts and ends of sliders!)
example (with overlapping slidertracks) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2495961
02:13:182 (1) - is this missing a clap? 02:14:554 (2) - probably too?
02:37:868 (3) - suggestion cause I really miss some variety - remove whistle from reverse and extend the slider like this, plays nice, sounds nice, moar variety :3 ->
02:47:468 (1) - curve this in the other direction to improve flow? :3 (just move last anchor to 424|308
02:50:554 (1) - this might confuse beginners. :/ not sure, I don't think more than 1 reverse is suitable for Easy diff, but it might be okay ~ since it's the only time you use 2 reverses I'd prefer if you map this differently, tho.
03:10:782 (3,4,1) - this would flow way better if you curve 4 a little less and adjust 1, example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496109

Normal
great diff! just some minor things -

00:32:039 (5,6,1) - movement feels a little awkward, you could re-arrange them a little to smoothen it, example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496185
01:02:211 (4) - aah, Idk about the rhythm. it doesn't really match the pace of the song, imo. but you could try this isntead, adds a little more variety too: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496221
01:11:468 (5) - is this missing a NC?
01:26:211 (3,4) - minor DS issue, please fix? xD
01:51:754 (5,6) - and every other stack before short reverse-slider - please unstack them! stacking is fine, but the reverse arrows get partly hidden which is super confusing for Normal players! :c
02:14:896 (2) - aah, you could blanket 02:13:868 (5) - so nicely with this, why don't you? ;-;
02:20:382 (2,4) - the overlap is visible while playing ;-; how about making 4 parallel to 2? looks better to me
02:27:925 (5,1,2,3,4) - movement feels a little forced, you could change the pattern to this, works better imo - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496293

imouto's Hard
okay to play, I'm a little bothered by the anti-jumps in the beginning tho. :c -

00:22:096 (1,2) - here you use an anti-jump, I wonder why tho? also you've ignored the beats on the red and the blue tick, but they're clearly audiable. ._. and at 00:23:296 (5) - this matches the melody, but I'd prefer if the downbeat was clickable, cause it's more dominant than the others. maybe you can try this rhythm:
00:25:525 (1) - what's with this NC? remove?
00:28:954 (1,2) - another anti-jump that feels very weird to play. the music doesn't slow down and there is no break of anything either, space regularly?
//sidenote - I obviously don't point out every anti-jump I don't see fitting, because that's close to all.. I'm only mentioning the ones that break flow and don't play well at all (imo), up to you if you wanna change any, but I highly recommend to think about their usage again :/
00:31:011 (1) - remove NC?
00:35:468 (8,1) - there's nothing on the blue tick 8 is mapped to, but the one with a beat (between 8 and 1) is empty.. replace 8 with a circle and add two more circles at 00:35:639 - and 00:35:725 -
00:38:211 (8) - here is one, but on the next blue tick is the same, try this? -
00:52:268 (1,1,1) - why so many NCsss? :c I think you should check your comboing scheme, cause it's really inconsistent
01:49:868 (1) - uhm. I think this is waaay to long. it's just super tiring and no fun to play, imo :/ you should end the spinner sooner
if you don't want to at least decrease hitsound volume.. cause the longer the spinner gets the louder the spinner-spin will play. and that's not really pleasant to the ears. >-<
02:10:439 (4,1) - long break feels off, why don't you add another circle at 02:11:125 - ?
02:55:696 (5) - map the break after? there's no reason to have another break here. the first one was long enough so it's not needed and it's even mapped in Easy/Normal.. :/

Insane
omg, this is really great! I like the diff, one of the few Insanes I can play and it's really fun >w<

fun or not, playing that long without a break is too much. add a short break (maybe just 3-5 seconds, that's enough) at some point please >-<
00:24:668 (7) - ctrl+g for minor flow improvement
there are some more of this, you don't have to change any, but personally I think it's more comfortable to play that way - 00:30:154 (6) - 00:35:639 (7) - 00:39:754 (8) - 00:49:182 (5) - 01:19:525 (7) - 02:40:782 (7) -
01:09:154 (3) - feels a little off while playing, not sure why. ;-; maybe cause it start's on the blue tick? (I do that often, too, and regularly get screamed at for it. x-x .. xD) consider switching places with 01:09:068 (2) - so first the reverse slider, then the circle
01:11:811 (2,1) - reverse 2, curve in opposite direction. the curve 1 differently, too and you'll end up with a slightly better flow (imo) .. (and you could rotate 01:12:496 (2) - slightly, too) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496677 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496687
01:13:868 (1) - uuuhm what's with this speed up. it doesn't really match the song I think. there's just no indicator for a speed up like this :/
01:46:782 (7) - I'd prefer if you split this in slider + circle, cause of the beat on the red tick
02:00:496 (8) - ^
02:14:211 (8) - rotate by 170° selection cente for better flow :3
02:33:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - aaaah, this is so fun to play >w<

that's all I can say. Nice mapset & good luck! :3

Fushimi Rio

1,402 posts

Joined November 2011

Fushimi Rio 2015-01-11T02:07:21+00:00

lolllllll mods coming to fast, I haven't update my diff yet...

Autumn wrote:
That's all!
Nice map, good luck!

All fixed. Thx!

[ Faded ] wrote:
Hi, from the Faded Modding Queue~
[Hard]
00:42:668 (1) - Since this is hard, it feels kind of empty not having a sound on this strong downbeat. I would add a hit circle at the downbeat, and start the spinner 1/4 forward the prelude ends here. Also it is following the instrument.
00:57:754 (1) - Why is there a whistle on the repeat instead of the end? oops, fixed.
01:03:925 (2,1) - The amount of repeats that these sliders have feel really off and out of place in comparison to the rest of the map, not to mention that they don't go with the vocals nor beat, so it's also overmapped. I have a rhythm that can compliment the music more:

You should use this instead, because it goes with the music a lot better. I don't quite understand this rhythm. Anyway fixed.
01:23:125 (3) - Add a clap at the end of this slider for consistency with your hitsound pattern, otherwise it will sound out of place and odd compared to the rest of the map. fixed
01:49:868 (1) - What's up with the massive spinner here? This is a hard diff, so the music here should be easily mappable, just don't make it as intense as the rest of the map. Don't just cover it up with a spinner, otherwise it will feel long and tedious to play. As a transition from break to notes.
02:50:553 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - You suddenly stop using claps in this pattern, why? It just makes it feel out of place and boring, so I suggest adding a few. considering. hitsound is always difficult for me
02:55:696 - Why is there a break after here? It's been mapped after all the other diffs, and this part of the song is identical to the beginning; which you mapped. So I highly recommend mapping this break out, it will be more consistent throughout the rest of the set and difficulty. chorus ends here. Personally I prefer having a break after chorus or some difficult parts.

Thanks for mod.

Squirrel wrote:
imouto's Hard
okay to play, I'm a little bothered by the anti-jumps in the beginning tho. :c -
00:22:096 (1,2) - here you use an anti-jump, I wonder why tho? also you've ignored the beats on the red and the blue tick, but they're clearly audiable. ._. and at 00:23:296 (5) - this matches the melody, but I'd prefer if the downbeat was clickable, cause it's more dominant than the others. maybe you can try this rhythm:
00:25:525 (1) - what's with this NC? remove? fixed
00:28:954 (1,2) - another anti-jump that feels very weird to play. the music doesn't slow down and there is no break of anything either, space regularly?
//sidenote - I obviously don't point out every anti-jump I don't see fitting, because that's close to all.. I'm only mentioning the ones that break flow and don't play well at all (imo), up to you if you wanna change any, but I highly recommend to think about their usage again :/
I guess I need to change all of them if I had changed one :c I don't think I have to follow all audiable beats.
00:31:011 (1) - remove NC? fixed
00:35:468 (8,1) - there's nothing on the blue tick 8 is mapped to, but the one with a beat (between 8 and 1) is empty.. replace 8 with a circle and add two more circles at 00:35:639 - and 00:35:725 - I'm sure there is, lol
00:38:211 (8) - here is one, but on the next blue tick is the same, try this? - ^
00:52:268 (1,1,1) - why so many NCsss? :c I think you should check your comboing scheme, cause it's really inconsistent
I planed to add nc to all antijumps...fixed
01:49:868 (1) - uhm. I think this is waaay to long. it's just super tiring and no fun to play, imo :/ you should end the spinner sooner
if you don't want to at least decrease hitsound volume.. cause the longer the spinner gets the louder the spinner-spin will play. and that's not really pleasant to the ears. >-< didn't notice that, fixed
02:10:439 (4,1) - long break feels off, why don't you add another circle at 02:11:125 - ? added
02:55:696 (5) - map the break after? there's no reason to have another break here. the first one was long enough so it's not needed and it's even mapped in Easy/Normal.. :/ same to the former reply

Thanks for mod!

osu file format v13

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Source:
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Starfall9908

664 posts

Joined November 2013

Starfall9908 2015-01-11T12:37:58+00:00

Hello!

[Easy]

00:36:154 (2) - Blanket
00:44:382 (2) - Shape this as a better blanket to 00:44:039 (1)
01:06:325 (2) - Blanket
01:20:039 (2) - Blanket is a bit off
02:50:554 (1) - Since the slider velocity is pretty low so do I recommend not to put two reverse point on a slider like this. Delete one reverse and add a circle instead.

[Normal]

00:39:239 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - This is too many Cirlces to tap in row. Put max 4 circles in row otherwise it'll be too hard to be normal.
00:45:754 (3) - Blanket
01:05:982 (1) - ^
01:10:096 (3,4) - ^
01:16:268 (5) - ^
01:50:211 (2) - ^
01:52:611 (1) - ^
02:15:925 (3) - ^
02:22:782 (1,3) - The stack on the slider heads are off.
02:28:268 (1) - Blanket
02:38:554 (6) - ^
02:45:068 (2) - ^
02:57:754 (5) - ^
03:01:868 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Too many circlers in row

Tha way Imouto's Hard is build in is too hard for me to mod. Insane was too hard for me

Good Luck

jyu

1,338 posts

Joined August 2012

jyu 2015-01-12T14:00:52+00:00

Squirrel wrote:
hi there!
from my queue, just making suggestions :3

Alpaca's Easy
aah, this is okay to play, but sooooo repetitive! why? :c in the middle part the rhythm stays the same for like.. ever. it really gets a little boring. ;-; maybe you can try to spice this up a bit? idk i kinda refrained from making variety and instead using repetitive rhythm all the way because beginners can't really read the rhythm that well, but i'll try to add more variety somehow
00:36:154 (2,3) - a little confusing for beginner players, cause 3's end is closer to 2 than the head and at the perfect next-to-hit-object spot, please move it, so it won't confuse anyone fix
same for 00:41:639 (2,3) - fix
00:44:382 (2) - rhythm feels off, especially cause the vocals start in the middle of the slider, maybe you can change the rhythm up, so it matches both, beat and vocals? example: because this is still at the beginning part, i tried using simple rhythm, which is why i focused more in the instrument aka the bass, which is kinda repetitive lmao
00:46:439 (1) - if you know that the downbeat is clearly audiable and pretty strong you might want to make it a clickable object, cause atm it doesn't have any effect on gameplay :c same goes for 00:49:182 (1) - and several others - you'd be better of with circles, imo dang ok fixed them all
01:52:611 (2,1) - this overlap is a no for Easy (imo), it's way too confusing >-< if the DS make it impossible to move it somewhere so they won't overlap, then choose a different shape for one of the sliders, or both :b (btw, it's not bad if the slidertracks overlap, it's just confusing when you cover starts and ends of sliders!)
example (with overlapping slidertracks) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2495961 omg thats a nice one fix
02:13:182 (1) - is this missing a clap? 02:14:554 (2) - probably too? fix both
02:37:868 (3) - suggestion cause I really miss some variety - remove whistle from reverse and extend the slider like this, plays nice, sounds nice, moar variety :3 -> nice! but i'm following the vocal here, so i'll consider about this
02:47:468 (1) - curve this in the other direction to improve flow? :3 (just move last anchor to 424|308 fix
02:50:554 (1) - this might confuse beginners. :/ not sure, I don't think more than 1 reverse is suitable for Easy diff, but it might be okay ~ since it's the only time you use 2 reverses I'd prefer if you map this differently, tho. the sv is kinda slow so probably beginners can notice this. i hope. anyway fixed because more people pointed this out lmao
03:10:782 (3,4,1) - this would flow way better if you curve 4 a little less and adjust 1, example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496109 fix

nadapan wrote:
Hello!

[Easy]
00:36:154 (2) - Blanket fix
00:44:382 (2) - Shape this as a better blanket to 00:44:039 (1) fix
01:06:325 (2) - Blanket fix
01:20:039 (2) - Blanket is a bit off i think this one is fine
02:50:554 (1) - Since the slider velocity is pretty low so do I recommend not to put two reverse point on a slider like this. Delete one reverse and add a circle instead. gdi fix

Thank you for mods!

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Narcissu

1,626 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2015-01-13T03:38:58+00:00

hard

00:26:554 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 開頭的就下了6圈的幾何梗，但是副歌開頭僅僅是原地疊圈接滑條，難度設置上就完全不合理，玩家會很奇怪為什麼安靜的段落會如此困難而激昂的段落卻毫無印象

00:24:668 (5,1) - 錯誤的額外音效，偶數節的確適合外加但是應該是遞進和強調，長白是clap的話前面還是clap是不適合的

02:11:811 (1,2) - 02:12:496 (1,2) - kiai外加的clap位置非常死板，完全不合原曲的瀟灑和隨性，同時過度的clap也破壞了原曲的節奏，我建議你在了解一定的樂理知識前不要嘗試一些奇怪的東西，你的直覺和邏輯並不一定和多數人一致

Fushimi Rio

1,402 posts

Joined November 2011

Fushimi Rio 2015-01-13T14:52:20+00:00

Narcissu wrote:
hard

00:26:554 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 開頭的就下了6圈的幾何梗，但是副歌開頭僅僅是原地疊圈接滑條，難度設置上就完全不合理，玩家會很奇怪為什麼安靜的段落會如此困難而激昂的段落卻毫無印象
你是开dt试的吗……
嘛这个之后再看如果变成light insane的话kiai开头可以再难点虽然现在已经挺难了

00:24:668 (5,1) - 錯誤的額外音效，偶數節的確適合外加但是應該是遞進和強調，長白是clap的話前面還是clap是不適合的
嗯删掉了长白线前的

02:11:811 (1,2) - 02:12:496 (1,2) - kiai外加的clap位置非常死板，完全不合原曲的瀟灑和隨性，同時過度的clap也破壞了原曲的節奏，我建議你在了解一定的樂理知識前不要嘗試一些奇怪的東西，你的直覺和邏輯並不一定和多數人一致
虽然是这样但我也不知道该怎么下啊orz 球详细点的解说现在还是不会改

code就先不更新了0 0

Edit: 这一定是意外 ~~我还不想被cp打爆~~

Last edited by Fushimi Rio 2015-01-14T06:02:33+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Streliteela

406 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

Streliteela 2015-01-13T18:52:49+00:00

OMG sooooooo busy these days... So sorry for my late reply

Squirrel wrote:
hi there! Hihi~~OwO~~
from my queue, just making suggestions :3 Welcome~\(≧▽≦)/~

General
considering the combo colours, try this maybe -
[Colours]
Combo1 : 68,111,153
Combo2 : 255,240,200
Combo3 : 162,205,249
Combo4 : 245,199,101
they're better to see and match the background
Ahh OK~~
hmh, such a long break. ;-; it's a little boring to wait that long, maybe you can find someone who can do a SB? cause that's less boring than watching the background for 20 seconds >w<
It's so tough to find someone who can help me do a SB So I shorten the break time in Hard & Insane diff (especially Insane, with no break time lol~). Just keep 20 sec break time in easy & normal diff.
Normal
great diff! just some minor things - lol
00:32:039 (5,6,1) - movement feels a little awkward, you could re-arrange them a little to smoothen it, example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496185
Just keep it, not a serious problem imo
01:02:211 (4) - aah, Idk about the rhythm. it doesn't really match the pace of the song, imo. but you could try this isntead, adds a little more variety too: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496221
I think it's fine, so just keep this part~
01:11:468 (5) - is this missing a NC? It seems...yes
01:26:211 (3,4) - minor DS issue, please fix? xD OK fixed~
01:51:754 (5,6) - and every other stack before short reverse-slider - please unstack them! stacking is fine, but the reverse arrows get partly hidden which is super confusing for Normal players! :c
~~I love spaaaaaaaaaaammmmmm looooool~~
02:14:896 (2) - aah, you could blanket 02:13:868 (5) - so nicely with this, why don't you? ;-; Ahh okok, fixed this~
02:20:382 (2,4) - the overlap is visible while playing ;-; how about making 4 parallel to 2? looks better to me
Just keep this part as sooooooo many patterns would be changed if I change this pattern
02:27:925 (5,1,2,3,4) - movement feels a little forced, you could change the pattern to this, works better imo - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496293

Insane
omg, this is really great! I like the diff, one of the few Insanes I can play and it's really fun >w< lol
fun or not, playing that long without a break is too much. add a short break (maybe just 3-5 seconds, that's enough) at some point please >-<
Nope
00:24:668 (7) - ctrl+g for minor flow improvement
there are some more of this, you don't have to change any, but personally I think it's more comfortable to play that way - 00:30:154 (6) - 00:35:639 (7) - 00:39:754 (8) - 00:49:182 (5) - 01:19:525 (7) - 02:40:782 (7) -
fixed some of them~
01:09:154 (3) - feels a little off while playing, not sure why. ;-; maybe cause it start's on the blue tick? (I do that often, too, and regularly get screamed at for it. x-x .. xD) consider switching places with 01:09:068 (2) - so first the reverse slider, then the circle
OK~~fixed~~
01:11:811 (2,1) - reverse 2, curve in opposite direction. the curve 1 differently, too and you'll end up with a slightly better flow (imo) .. (and you could rotate 01:12:496 (2) - slightly, too) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496677 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496687
This part is a special pattern (symmetry), so I keep this~
01:13:868 (1) - uuuhm what's with this speed up. it doesn't really match the song I think. there's just no indicator for a speed up like this :/
Just to show a sudden high-changed voice here~
01:46:782 (7) - I'd prefer if you split this in slider + circle, cause of the beat on the red tick Nope
02:00:496 (8) - ^ ^
02:14:211 (8) - rotate by 170° selection cente for better flow :3 Changed 02:14:382 (9) - and better now~
02:33:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - aaaah, this is so fun to play >w< ~loooool~

that's all I can say. Nice mapset & good luck! :3

Thanks for your modding~~

~~edit：顺便楼上二位的头像怎么有种野生cp的柑橘233~~

Mint

1,570 posts

Joined February 2013

Mint 2015-01-16T22:21:24+00:00

Hello Streliteela! from Lexia's queue ~

General

* Alpaca's Easy has a different title than the others - and also a different artist.

Insane

* 00:26:554 (2,3,4) - Balance out the spacing? Don't really see why (3,4) should be bigger.
* 00:29:811 (4) - A bit nazi, but could you move this up a bit? The slider end of (2), (3) and (4) will have symmetry and it's more visually appealing imo.

* 00:30:839 (3,4,5) - Optional, but you could try and CTRL+G this, for a similar jump movement as 00:28:096 (3,4,5) -
* 00:40:611 (3,4,5) - While playing I found this part a bit strange. Currently the distance between (2,3) is larger than (3,4) - while the clap is on (4) - so in my point of view it should be the opposite. Another problem is, is that the distance between is really small between (3,4), while the jump from (4,5) is really big if you compare them. Reconsidering of placement of (4) could fix this, by placing it somewhere like (48,76)
* 00:42:754 (1) - Well, there is a sound on the blue tick, I'll give you that - but ending a spinner on the blue tick and directly after that having a note? I wouldn't do that if I were you. Shorten the spinner to the red/white tick? You should get more opinions on this though...
* 00:49:182 (5) - CTRL+G this one? I find that the movement of (4) to (5) is a bit awkward here - and you seem to use this CTRL+G pattern a lot in the beginning of the mapset, so why not here owo?
* 00:57:754 (1,2) - CTRL+J these sliders? To me, the flow gets broken at 00:58:096 (2,3) - because the slider end of (2) is pointing the other way, and since this path is overlapped by 00:57:582 (6) - it can be really hard to read this.

* 01:00:154 (6,7,8,9,1) - The spacing is quite low here, and the curve is quite large which makes it even more cramped. Use 0.4x here, just like 00:46:439 (5,6,7,8,1) - and the rest of your map? It looks cleaner and it won't be so squished in like now.
* 01:04:268 (4,5) - I personally think that these are way too close to each other now, so if you could - can you move tweak this a bit? It might just be me though, so you can leave it I guess.
* 01:09:068 (2,3) - Plays really weird... seems like a trick to make people combo break here. Use two kicksliders or a 5-note stream instead? I see why you might do this for variety, but this doesn't play really well ;w;
* 01:14:554 (1) - This one is the only one without a SV change? Quite strange to me o_o
* 01:16:268 (3) - If you NC spam on every SV change anyway, you should add one on this one - since this SV change is actually really noticeable compared to the other ones - I highly recommend you to put one here.
* 01:17:296 (2) - Put a bit down for better flow?

* 01:20:639 (7) - Hmm.. I personally don't hear anything here on the blue tick - remove?
* 01:28:268 - I guess it's more a personal preference, but the soft claps don't fit at all imo, soft whistles sound more soothing and create a better atmosphere for this calm part.
* 02:10:439 (3) - If you do plan on keeping the claps, I'd add here to keep consistent clap hitsounding.
* 02:11:811 (1,2) - The vocals are so strong, and it's the KIAI time anyway, so I don't really understand why you kept DS here, while the jump at (2,3) is really large. I'd have put it the other way around, having the large jump on (1,2) - just like 02:13:182 (5,6,7) -
* 02:13:096 - and 02:24:068 - I do hear a note here, and since you tend to follow all the 1/4 beats in the song, and one here as well? Only 1/2 sliders here is a bit plain x_x

You might want to change the patterns a bit if you do want to add 1/4 notes in between.

* 02:28:182 (6,1,2) - Because of the DS change in your 1/4 rhythms, you have the same space at (6,1) and (1,2) - while (1,2) is 1/2 and the other one is 1/4. The spacing change is already a bit hard and confusing, so having the same distances with different snaps isn't making it any better. Increase the distance between (1,2)?
* 02:29:982 (6) - Consider moving this slider a bit up for a smoother flow.

* 02:28:611 - Useless green line.
* 02:31:011 (1,2,3,4,5) - Is this small spacing intentional? It doesn't look really neat, especially because (3,4,5) overlap with (1) - use larger spacing? - 0.7x would work perfectly fine here.

* 02:48:839 (1,2) - Just my idea, but try blanket pattern here?

Really nice diff - good job!

i'll finish the rest later x_x

Nice mapset though, i'll shoot a star for you

Atsuro

1,279 posts

Joined January 2013

Atsuro 2015-01-18T14:54:20+00:00

Hello, from my queue

[Alpaca's Easy]

00:57:754 (1,2) - Nazi but blanket can be better
01:07:696 (3) - Can look and flow a bit more natural, suggestion: Copy and paste 01:06:325 (2) - there, rotate 120 degrees and position like this:
02:55:011 (5,1) - Spacing error

It's good, a bit repetitive in some parts but it's ok for the song

[Normal]

01:11:811 (2) - Missing whistle
03:16:611 (4) - Rotate this a bit to make it point to 03:17:639 (1) -

Same as easy

[imouto's Hard]

Some of the antijumps you use are very misleading, especially at the beginning of the map
01:03:925 (2,1) - Aren't these overmapped?
01:04:439 (1) - Ctrl+g and reposition this to make it lead to the next circle
01:07:525 - I think a circle with clap hs should be here for the strong beat
01:13:182 (1,2) - Make the spacing of these two bigger, it's the same as 01:11:811 (1,2,3) - so players might mistake it for the same pattern

Fun diff
There is a pretty big jump in difficulty between this and normal, this is all 1/2 and some complex patterns and normal is a lot of 1/1 only except one section, idk if it will cause problems with ranking

[Insane]

Those high spacing streams you use at the kiai are very confusing, consider reducing their spacing a little bit to make it more apparent that they are 1/4, as it is they look like they can be 1/2
00:42:754 (1,1) - Why end spinner on blue tick? end on white and delete circle , or if you really want to keep the circle end it on the previous white line.
01:09:068 (2) - ctrl+g and reposition so it leads better to the next slider
01:13:868 (1) - This speed up is unexpected, reduce the speed or make it more apparent by not stacking other sliders on it
02:26:211 (5,6) - These sliders are overmapped, they should start on the previous white line imo.

Nice

Short mod haha
Nice mapset, GL!

jyu

1,338 posts

Joined August 2012

jyu 2015-01-19T10:22:06+00:00

Atsuro wrote:
Hello, from my queue

[Alpaca's Easy]
00:57:754 (1,2) - Nazi but blanket can be better fix
01:07:696 (3) - Can look and flow a bit more natural, suggestion: Copy and paste 01:06:325 (2) - there, rotate 120 degrees and position like this: fix

02:55:011 (5,1) - Spacing error fix

It's good, a bit repetitive in some parts but it's ok for the song

Thank you for mod!

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 131125
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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TitleUnicode:Epiphany (feat. Veela & Feint)
Artist:TwoThirds
ArtistUnicode:TwoThirds
Creator:Streliteela
Version:Alpaca's Easy
Source:
Tags:Drum & Bass DnB Electronic imoutosan AlpacaCokelat
BeatmapID:585893
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[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:2.7
OverallDifficulty:3
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Streliteela

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Streliteela 2015-01-20T17:24:06+00:00

Wow I'm back after quite a lot of exams

Sorry for my late replies

appleeaterx wrote:
Hello Streliteela! from Lexia's queue ~ Hihi~~:3

:idea: General

* Alpaca's Easy has a different title than the others - and also a different artist.
Yep, that's because I forgot to tell my gder that I've changed the title and artist. Fixed now~

Insane

* 00:26:554 (2,3,4) - Balance out the spacing? Don't really see why (3,4) should be bigger.
Ok fixed it~
* 00:29:811 (4) - A bit nazi, but could you move this up a bit? The slider end of (2), (3) and (4) will have symmetry and it's more visually appealing imo.
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Yep it looks better~Fixed~
* 00:30:839 (3,4,5) - Optional, but you could try and CTRL+G this, for a similar jump movement as 00:28:096 (3,4,5) -
Just keep it, as I feel the flow become a bit strange after CTRL+G
* 00:40:611 (3,4,5) - While playing I found this part a bit strange. Currently the distance between (2,3) is larger than (3,4) - while the clap is on (4) - so in my point of view it should be the opposite. Another problem is, is that the distance between is really small between (3,4), while the jump from (4,5) is really big if you compare them. Reconsidering of placement of (4) could fix this, by placing it somewhere like (48,76)
Nice suggestion~Fixed this part as you said

* 00:42:754 (1) - Well, there is a sound on the blue tick, I'll give you that - but ending a spinner on the blue tick and directly after that having a note? I wouldn't do that if I were you. Shorten the spinner to the red/white tick? You should get more opinions on this though...
OK I've shortened the spinner to the white tick~
* 00:49:182 (5) - CTRL+G this one? I find that the movement of (4) to (5) is a bit awkward here - and you seem to use this CTRL+G pattern a lot in the beginning of the mapset, so why not here owo?
Yep fixed it as you said~owo
* 00:57:754 (1,2) - CTRL+J these sliders? To me, the flow gets broken at 00:58:096 (2,3) - because the slider end of (2) is pointing the other way, and since this path is overlapped by 00:57:582 (6) - it can be really hard to read this.

Really nice suggestion~ Fixed as you said~>w<~
* 01:00:154 (6,7,8,9,1) - The spacing is quite low here, and the curve is quite large which makes it even more cramped. Use 0.4x here, just like 00:46:439 (5,6,7,8,1) - and the rest of your map? It looks cleaner and it won't be so squished in like now.
OK~0.4x as you said~

* 01:04:268 (4,5) - I personally think that these are way too close to each other now, so if you could - can you move tweak this a bit? It might just be me though, so you can leave it I guess.
OK~I've tried my best to move them away from each other (just move very little distance)
* 01:09:068 (2,3) - Plays really weird... seems like a trick to make people combo break here. Use two kicksliders or a 5-note stream instead? I see why you might do this for variety, but this doesn't play really well ;w;
Yes this part is really annoyed...I fixed this part again and again (but it still weird (╯‵□′)╯︵┻━┻) Now I've fixed it again and hope it could be better after my changing

* 01:14:554 (1) - This one is the only one without a SV change? Quite strange to me o_o
oops I forgot to cancel the SV change after fixed the pattern here last time...Now fixed~

* 01:16:268 (3) - If you NC spam on every SV change anyway, you should add one on this one - since this SV change is actually really noticeable compared to the other ones - I highly recommend you to put one here.
OK added~
* 01:17:296 (2) - Put a bit down for better flow?

Yes sir~

* 01:20:639 (7) - Hmm.. I personally don't hear anything here on the blue tick - remove?
It sounds strange after I remove the note on the blue tick...so I just keep it and wait for more suggestions from others.
* 01:28:268 - I guess it's more a personal preference, but the soft claps don't fit at all imo, soft whistles sound more soothing and create a better atmosphere for this calm part.
Yes really, changed all soft claps to soft whistles as you said~
* 02:10:439 (3) - If you do plan on keeping the claps, I'd add here to keep consistent clap hitsounding.
Clap sounds a bit strange so I add soft whistle on 02:10:268 (1,5) -
* 02:11:811 (1,2) - The vocals are so strong, and it's the KIAI time anyway, so I don't really understand why you kept DS here, while the jump at (2,3) is really large. I'd have put it the other way around, having the large jump on (1,2) - just like 02:13:182 (5,6,7) -
Oh and about this part...just for a little transition between the clam part and kiai, so players may not feel a sudden huge change of DS imo.
* 02:13:096 - and 02:24:068 - I do hear a note here, and since you tend to follow all the 1/4 beats in the song, and one here as well? Only 1/2 sliders here is a bit plain x_x

You might want to change the patterns a bit if you do want to add 1/4 notes in between.

Still not sure how to change the patterns here...so I just keep this part and wait for more suggestions
* 02:28:182 (6,1,2) - Because of the DS change in your 1/4 rhythms, you have the same space at (6,1) and (1,2) - while (1,2) is 1/2 and the other one is 1/4. The spacing change is already a bit hard and confusing, so having the same distances with different snaps isn't making it any better. Increase the distance between (1,2)?
Nice idea and this is the most feasible suggestions I've received so far. Fixed as you said~
* 02:29:982 (6) - Consider moving this slider a bit up for a smoother flow.

OK fixed~
* 02:28:611 - Useless green line. Fixed~
* 02:31:011 (1,2,3,4,5) - Is this small spacing intentional? It doesn't look really neat, especially because (3,4,5) overlap with (1) - use larger spacing? - 0.7x would work perfectly fine here.

Good idea~fixed as you said~
* 02:48:839 (1,2) - Just my idea, but try blanket pattern here?

Still want to keep my own idea about this pattern, just keep it~

Really nice diff - good job! Thanks~

i'll finish the rest later x_x

Nice mapset though, i'll shoot a star for you

Really nice suggestions~ fixed almost all as you said~~Thanks a lot for your perfect mod and star~~

Atsuro wrote:
Hello, from my queue Hi~~:3

[Normal]
01:11:811 (2) - Missing whistle Added~
03:16:611 (4) - Rotate this a bit to make it point to 03:17:639 (1) -
Still want to make a parallel pattern (03:14:896 (1,4) - )

Same as easy

[imouto's Hard]

There is a pretty big jump in difficulty between this and normal, this is all 1/2 and some complex patterns and normal is a lot of 1/1 only except one section, idk if it will cause problems with ranking
Yep this Hard diff is really hard, so I add a new hard diff from Frey, which is only 2.99 stars. And now I changed imouto's Hard to a light insane diff. I think it's the best way to solve this problem.

[Insane]
Those high spacing streams you use at the kiai are very confusing, consider reducing their spacing a little bit to make it more apparent that they are 1/4, as it is they look like they can be 1/2
/Sorry I don't want to reduce the spacing of the streams. To solve this problem, I increase the spacing of some 1/2 part to differentiate them from those 1/4 part.
00:42:754 (1,1) - Why end spinner on blue tick? end on white and delete circle , or if you really want to keep the circle end it on the previous white line.
OK I've move the end to the previous white line.
01:09:068 (2) - ctrl+g and reposition so it leads better to the next slider
Made some little changes here~
01:13:868 (1) - This speed up is unexpected, reduce the speed or make it more apparent by not stacking other sliders on it
Haha nope it's a special pattern here as there's a sudden high voice. Really hard to expect lol~
02:26:211 (5,6) - These sliders are overmapped, they should start on the previous white line imo.
ehh I don't think they are overmapped...so just keep this part and wait for more suggestions.
Nice

Short mod haha
Nice mapset, GL!

Thanks for your modding~~

Updated a new Hard GD from Frey. Thanks a lot~

Leorda

4,416 posts

Joined June 2009

Leorda 2015-01-21T15:08:03+00:00

Hello

[Alpaca's Easy]
02:22:782 (1) - Add clap? You probably forgot it
02:37:868 (3) - Add whistle at repeating slider?

[Normal]
00:34:096 (3) - Spacing error
00:46:782 (1) - ^
02:12:496 (3) - ^
02:14:896 (2) - Add whistle at tail slider? You probably forgot it
03:13:868 (5) - Spacing error
03:16:268 (3) - Move up so it don't looks almost offscreen

[Frey's Hard]
* AR -1? Your current one seems bit fast

[imouto's Insane]
00:26:554 (1) - Having an anti-jump like this can cause players were confuse to read if this a 1/2 note or 1/1 note. You should move further away from previous one, to make it readable for timing and spacing
00:26:554 (1) - ^
00:39:239 (2) - ^
00:41:982 (2) - ^
00:57:754 (1) - Remove whistle at repeating slider
01:49:868 (1) - I think this spinner were too long for this diff. You need to remap this part
02:32:725 - Add note here?

Good luck

Frey

1,189 posts

Joined February 2011

Frey 2015-01-22T08:04:00+00:00

Leorda wrote:
[Frey's Hard]
* AR -1? Your current one seems bit fast

In my opinion, I think AR7 makes it harder. So I don't really want to change the AR
However, if more people mention this, I will think about it.
Thanks for your mod

Streliteela

406 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

Streliteela 2015-01-22T10:09:12+00:00

Leorda wrote:
Hello Wow Hi~~:3

[Alpaca's Easy]
02:22:782 (1) - Add clap? You probably forgot it Added~
02:37:868 (3) - Add whistle at repeating slider? Added~

[Normal]
00:34:096 (3) - Spacing error oops Fixed~
00:46:782 (1) - ^ Fixed~
02:12:496 (3) - ^ Fixed~
02:14:896 (2) - Add whistle at tail slider? You probably forgot it Yep added~
03:13:868 (5) - Spacing error Fixed~
03:16:268 (3) - Move up so it don't looks almost offscreen OK moved it up~

Good luck

Thanks a lot for your modding~~

Famous

269 posts

Joined April 2011

Famous 2015-01-22T14:06:01+00:00

Hello my friend~ (stolen from your mod LOL!)

Alpaca's Easy

Check AiMod. 02:33:754 - Kiai time is toggled on for less than 15 seconds. All the other difficulties doesn't have that warning. Fix it.
00:29:296 (2,1) - Blanket can be improved slightly.
00:37:525 (3,1) - ^
01:00:496 (1,2) - Improve blanket.
01:05:982 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved.
01:09:068 (2) - Move that slider to x:104 ; y:104 to keep the flow with 01:08:725 (1).
01:49:868 (1,2,1,2) - Not sure about that part. The sliders are really weird shaped and 01:49:868 (1,2) overlap.
02:00:839 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - That part doesn't sound right. You should snap 02:02:382 (2) to 02:02:211 and repeat it. Same with 02:05:125 (2,2).
02:12:496 - Feels like a note is missing.
02:13:868 - Also feels like a note is missing.
02:16:954 - Again note is missing. Snap 02:17:296 (1) to 02:16:954 and 02:17:639 (2) to 02:17:296. Then add a note 02:19:011.
02:27:925 - Add a note.
02:52:268 (2,1) - Slider doesn't flow with 02:52:954 (1). Also 02:53:296 (2) doesn't flow with 02:52:954 (1).

Normal

00:26:896 (6,1) - Improve blanket.
00:41:296 (1,2) - ^
00:44:725 (1,3,4) - ^
00:53:639 (4,6) - ^
00:53:639 (4,1) - Not sure about that stack. Looks very weird to me. 01:03:239 (1,3) - That stack looks way better.
00:58:439 (3,4) - Improve blanket.
01:03:239 (1,2) - ^
01:10:782 (4,1) - ^
01:15:582 (4,5) - ^
01:24:496 (5,6,1) - The placement of that pattern doesn't look nice. You tried to stack 01:23:125 (3,1). If you want to stack them, try to improve the placement.
01:49:868 (1,2,4) - Improve blanket.
01:50:896 (3) - This circle sounds really weird. Snap 01:51:068 (4) to 01:51:068 just like 01:53:639 (2,3).
02:08:725 (7) - Make that slider longer. Slider end at 02:09:068. Then Snap the spinner to 02:09:239 and fix the end of the spinner.
02:13:868 (5,1,2) - Blanket can be improved.
02:22:782 (1,2) - Improve blanket.
02:44:725 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:55:011 (4,1) - ^
03:11:468 (6,1) - ^

Frey's Hard

00:31:868 (2,3) - Imperfect flow.
00:34:782 (2,3) - Improve blanket.
00:46:782 (1,2) - Weird flow.
00:48:154 (1,2) - Improve blanket.
00:59:468 (2,3) - ^
01:00:496 (1,2,3) - There's no reason to use a different spacing. Move 01:01:354 (2) to x:48 ; y:320.
01:08:211 (3,4) - Improve blanket.
01:14:211 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved.
01:18:325 (1,2) - Improve blanket.
01:51:754 (1,2,3) - Same as 01:00:496 (1,2,3).
02:11:125 to 02:11:811 - I miss something here... It feels so empty.
02:14:554 (1,2,3) - I already made my point. Fix spacing.
02:19:525 (3,1) - Improve blanket.
02:24:496 (3,4) - ^
02:36:496 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
02:51:239 (3,1) - Improve blanket.
02:58:439 (1,2,3) - Spacing! D:
03:06:154 (3,4) - Improve blanket.
03:13:525 (1) - Ctrl + g.
03:16:611 (2,3) - Improve blanket.
03:17:125 (3,4) - That jump.
03:17:639 (1) - NC not necessary at the end but it's better you leave that NC, because it's better readable.

imouto's Insane

What about AR8.5?
00:22:096 (1,2) - I'm not a fan from this kind of stacking. It doesn't look nice imo.
00:32:211 (5) - Move that slider to x:216 ; y:292.
00:32:896 (7,1) - Blanket can be slightly improved.
00:34:268 (4) - Move that circle to x:420 ; y:348 for better flow.
00:35:468 (8,1) - Improve blanket.
Add a note 00:44:211, 00:44:382 and 00:44:554.
00:49:354 - A triple stream would fit here. Add a note 00:49:354 and 00:49:439.
00:59:468 (1,2,3,4,5) - Keep the spacing of 1.2x.
01:49:868 (1) - Map this part instead of adding a spinner.
02:32:725 - Add a note.
02:33:754 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - I don't like this pattern. It's playable but it looks very ugly imo. Same with the other part that use the same pattern.

Insane

We already talked ingame about that difficulty.

01:11:468 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1) - The SV is not necessary.
02:28:011 (4,5,6) - You really shouldn't use THAT huge spacing. I know there are ranked maps which uses big spacing at streams, but it doesn't fit here.
02:38:982 (2,3,4) - ^
02:39:839 (3) - ^
02:49:954 (2,3,4) - ^

Good mapset. good luck!

Frey

1,189 posts

Joined February 2011

Frey 2015-01-22T15:13:00+00:00

-Famous- wrote:
Frey's Hard
00:31:868 (2,3) - Imperfect flow. Fixed, changed the angle a bit
00:34:782 (2,3) - Improve blanket. Fixed
00:46:782 (1,2) - Weird flow. ...how?
00:48:154 (1,2) - Improve blanket. Fixed
00:59:468 (2,3) - ^ Fixed
01:00:496 (1,2,3) - There's no reason to use a different spacing. Move 01:01:354 (2) to x:48 ; y:320. Well, let me think a whlie
01:08:211 (3,4) - Improve blanket. Fixed
01:14:211 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved. Fixed
01:18:325 (1,2) - Improve blanket. Not so obvious I think
01:51:754 (1,2,3) - Same as 01:00:496 (1,2,3). I don;t want to change this, because it's fun
02:11:125 to 02:11:811 - I miss something here... It feels so empty. I use the same rhythm as Normal, so I think it's fine

02:14:554 (1,2,3) - I already made my point. Fix spacing.
02:36:496 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
02:58:439 (1,2,3) - Spacing! D:
Err, now that it's in Kiai, why don't we increase the difficulty a little?

02:19:525 (3,1) - Improve blanket. Fixed
02:24:496 (3,4) - ^ not so obvious
02:51:239 (3,1) - Improve blanket. not so obvious too
03:06:154 (3,4) - Improve blanket. Fixed
03:13:525 (1) - Ctrl + g. It's fun, so I wait for more suggestion about this
03:16:611 (2,3) - Improve blanket. Fixed
03:17:125 (3,4) - That jump. Is it overmap? I wonder
03:17:639 (1) - NC not necessary at the end but it's better you leave that NC, because it's better readable. like 01:27:925 (1), even if I don't fix, it's still readable.

Thanks for you mod!
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Fushimi Rio

1,402 posts

Joined November 2011

Fushimi Rio 2015-01-23T03:29:53+00:00

卧槽我怕了这是攒了多少mod

Atsuro wrote:
[imouto's Hard]
Some of the antijumps you use are very misleading, especially at the beginning of the map changed to ar9
01:03:925 (2,1) - Aren't these overmapped? seems fine in my version now.
01:04:439 (1) - Ctrl+g and reposition this to make it lead to the next circle ^
01:07:525 - I think a circle with clap hs should be here for the strong beat good
01:13:182 (1,2) - Make the spacing of these two bigger, it's the same as 01:11:811 (1,2,3) - so players might mistake it for the same pattern added a note at 01:13:011 -

Leorda wrote:
[imouto's Insane]
00:26:554 (1) - Having an anti-jump like this can cause players were confuse to read if this a 1/2 note or 1/1 note. You should move further away from previous one, to make it readable for timing and spacing added a note to avoid antijump
00:26:554 (1) - ^
00:39:239 (2) - ^ no, this is not 1/2 spacing. and players won't read it as 1/4 too.
00:41:982 (2) - ^ ^
00:57:754 (1) - Remove whistle at repeating slider seems fixed now
01:49:868 (1) - I think this spinner were too long for this diff. You need to remap this part I'm considering
02:32:725 - Add note here? added

-Famous- wrote:
imouto's Insane
What about AR8.5?
00:22:096 (1,2) - I'm not a fan from this kind of stacking. It doesn't look nice imo. not me :）
00:32:211 (5) - Move that slider to x:216 ; y:292. fixed
00:32:896 (7,1) - Blanket can be slightly improved. fixed
00:34:268 (4) - Move that circle to x:420 ; y:348 for better flow. fixed
00:35:468 (8,1) - Improve blanket. fixed
Add a note 00:44:211, 00:44:382 and 00:44:554. added
00:49:354 - A triple stream would fit here. Add a note 00:49:354 and 00:49:439. added
00:59:468 (1,2,3,4,5) - Keep the spacing of 1.2x. made some change
01:49:868 (1) - Map this part instead of adding a spinner. .....
02:32:725 - Add a note. added
02:33:754 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - I don't like this pattern. It's playable but it looks very ugly imo. Same with the other part that use the same pattern. seems I got different ideas about overlapping with you. It's fine imo.

Thanks for mods.

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: TwoThirds & Feint feat. Veela - Epiphany.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 131125
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 8
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Title:Epiphany (feat. Veela & Feint)
TitleUnicode:Epiphany (feat. Veela & Feint)
Artist:TwoThirds
ArtistUnicode:TwoThirds
Creator:Streliteela
Version:imouto's Insane
Source:
Tags:Drum & Bass DnB Electronic imoutosan AlpacaCokelat
BeatmapID:585895
BeatmapSetID:241474

[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:7
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369,84,173639,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,236,173982,2,0,P|300:290|297:307,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,170,174325,6,0,P|413:224|416:241,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,373,174668,2,0,P|416:324|403:313,1,70,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,270,175011,2,0,P|283:246|266:243,1,70,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,236,175354,5,2,0:0:0:0:
172,235,175439,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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121,246,175696,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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387,147,189239,1,0,0:0:0:0:
258,189,189411,1,0,0:0:0:0:
466,248,189754,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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154,298,190440,2,0,L|219:271,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,328,190783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
93,160,191125,5,2,0:0:0:0:
219,271,191468,2,0,L|282:242,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,296,191811,2,0,L|291:325,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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396,199,193182,2,0,L|425:263,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,333,193525,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,263,193868,5,2,0:0:0:0:
512,263,194211,2,0,L|473:175,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,199,194554,2,0,L|425:263,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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以防万一更新之后查一下歌曲信息什么的吧

Secretpipe

3,312 posts

Joined December 2012

Secretpipe 2015-01-23T19:47:17+00:00

Find 2/3 more mods and feel free to call me !

Sonnyc

Beatmap Nominator

7,729 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2015-01-24T04:42:45+00:00

Hello Stalker.

General:

-- Maybe you wished for some kind of an effect, but your normal-hitclap sound was ear hurting at one side. Please use this altered one.

Normal:

00:51:925 (6) - Fix spacing.
00:59:125 (4) - ^
01:02:896 (5) - ^
01:11:468 (1) - ^
01:17:639 (2) - ^
02:33:411 (4) - ^

Frey's Hard:

-- Difficulty setting is highly imbalanced with [Normal]. Consider setting AR7.

03:17:125 (3,4) - Imo this jump didn't fit the music nicely..

imouto's Insane:

-- Tags conflict with other diffs.
-- Recommending to use the same combo color with other difficulties since the usage of color in this difficulty lacks readability.

01:49:868 (1) - 11second spinner? NO, I won't allow that. Cut your spinner and map please.

Insane:

-- Use tickrate 2. The current tick rate is hard to tell the players about the sudden sv change such as 02:49:525 (1).

01:13:868 (1) - 1.5x sv change felt too much compared with 01:13:525 (3). Imo 1.3x will work fine enough.
02:31:354 (2) - Highly recommended to make more space with (1,3). Since this note is too close, it can be confusing.

The difficulty gap between Normal and Hard was quite large since the rhythm of Normal is mostly constructed with 1/1 objects which is similar with the Easy diff, while the rhythm of Hard is mostly constructed 1/2 and also is frequently using jumps. What I suggest here is to remap your Normal by using 1/2 more often since adding beats in the current design doesn't seems to work nice. Or you can find another BAT who agrees with the current spread.

Fryz3

49 posts

Joined November 2014

Fryz3 2015-01-24T19:00:11+00:00

Hi! sorry for the late mod

modder came from: t/267877&start=0

Normal

01:08:723 (1) - maybe place the slider like this for better flow:
01:16:952 (1) - place it on: 412|176 to let it overlap it with the previous slider perfectly.
02:08:723 (7) - maybe replace it with just a single note? I don't know why you should change it here,
i think it's better to remain with the previous slider placement.
02:54:323 (3) - maybe use the clap hitsound on the beginning of the slider here?
03:05:294 (3) - ^
03:16:266 (3) - ^

i think in overall it's a great map!

Insane

00:24:837 (1) - let it end on: 00:25:009
00:26:037 (7) - let it end on: 00:26:123
00:26:894 (4) - let it end on: 00:27:066 (ill just place the time from now on)
00:32:723 (5) - end: 00:32:809
00:38:552 (1) - end: 00:38:723
00:46:780 (1) - place on: 24|184 for better stack.
00:47:466 (4) - end: 00:47:637
00:53:294 (7,8,9,10,1) - maybe stack like how you did the previous ones?
(like a circle wise, see: 00:40:952 (5,6,7,8,1) - )
01:08:380 (4,5,6,7,1) - ^
00:54:666 (4,5,6,7,1) - stack distance is a slighty unequal, it probably would be a bother but,
if you can make it more equal it would be great
00:56:380 (1) - end: 00:56:552
00:56:723 (2) - end: 00:56:894
01:06:666 (5) - end: 01:06:837
01:10:609 (3,4,5) - placement bit weird here, distance also a bit unequal.
01:11:123 (6,7,8,9,1) - stack isn't in a straight line.
01:20:637 (7) - delete note.
add note here: 01:24:409 ( you don't really need to, but if you stick with your attern, you should place one here)
01:49:523 (6) - add finish hitsound on the end of the slider?
02:36:494 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - it's just an idea, but maybe you can make more like triangles here?
02:41:637 (1) - ctrl + G?
02:52:952 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - idk about this combo, but i'm getting confused of the pattern. i mostly play around 4 star maps,
so it may be my problem -,-
03:06:494 (6) - ctrl + G?

Gl with it!

Grrum

885 posts

Joined November 2011

Grrum 2015-01-25T04:36:34+00:00

Hi there. Saw your map in #modrequest and liked me some DnB. If you thought my mod was helpful, please take a look at a map of mine and make this a M4M https://osu.ppy.sh/s/239635. Hope this helps!

[Easy]

00:29:294 (2,1) – make the second part of the 1 slider more curved so players can see the bend better. Could use 2 slider anchors for the 1 since the red anchor makes it less circular. 1 can blanket 2 better.

00:35:809 (1,2) - As shown by this helpful slider, you're pattern is not straight http://puu.sh/eXHg9/5fa2015e2e.jpg . So either rotate 00:35:809 (1,2) – by 4 CC and put at 118, 243, or rotate 1 and 2 Clockwise so you don't have linear flow here

00:52:609 (2) - It would be nice if you had the red anchor on 00:53:123 – to match the beat, but this kind of messes up your slider design

00:59:809 (3) - This could be curved a bit more to match the 2 slider better like this: http://puu.sh/eXJ9L/9d02dbe390.jpg

221,337,59809,2,0,P|254:317|274:283,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:49:866 (1,2) – I don't like this overlap/design. If you go with the anchor suggestions below, this is the pattern that came to mind (had to break 1.2x DS, which if you do you could try to keep your pattern, jut make sure 1 overlaps 2 at the center of the curved part of the 2 slider): http://puu.sh/eXNz3/6a24ccf09a.jpg

47,109,109866,6,0,B|107:35|213:8|300:36|300:36|435:202,1,479.999999999999,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,379,112609,2,0,B|220:259|220:259|266:265|312:249|341:217|341:217|385:281|436:289|494:268|506:207,1,479.999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:

01:49:866 (1) – See if putting the red anchor at 01:51:066 - feels better since it matches the singer http://puu.sh/eXMBZ/71193386d3.jpg

In a similar vain, see if red anchors at 01:53:294 - , 01:53:809 – work better and put the red anchor here 01:59:294 – instead of 01:59:637 – and also if you do these, then 01:55:352 (1) – would feel out of place so go add similar anchors there.

02:00:837 (1) – For these kinds of sliders, it looks like you're using the red anchor to get the lyric “I” and then using the reverse slider on the electronic rhythm. I would put the red anchor more on the white slidertick to better match, but overall I don't recommend using a red anchor. Since the rhythm is not the same for the vocals/electric, trying to hit both is really confusing since it's hard not to focus on only one of them. Especially for the first note to introduce this pattern, I would just use a smooth slider.

02:33:066 (5,2) – It's possible to blanket these given rotation/movement, but this probably isn't necessary

02:46:780 (4) - Maybe try this flow? (Ctrl + > on 4) http://puu.sh/eXOnR/148be42b3a.jpg . If so, you can fit the rest with something like http://puu.sh/eXOj3/8635da73fa.jpg

03:00:152 (3,2) - These aren't perfectly parallel. Put the slider end at 188, 145. I don't want to assume that you do or don't know how to do this, so I put how I got here in this box:

Copy paste 03:00:152 (3) - . CTRL + Shift + S by about 1.5 . Delete the red anchor and end. You can be done, but for precise knowledge of where the slider ends, hit CTRL + G twice on it. End up with 188, 145.

[Normal]

00:31:009 (3) – could flow from 2 better by moving to 480, 205

00:45:752 (3) - -2 to y for better blanket

01:05:980 (1) – rotate CC by 1 and move to 472, 158 for better blanket

01:19:009 (4) – move to 162, 178 for better blanket.

01:17:980 (3,4) – Now that that's done, why is the prev 1.08? change to 1.0

01:23:809 (2) - +3 to x for better blanket

01:26:209 (3) – This is close to being linear flow, but since it isn't, it feels weird. Either move more to the left to make it obvious it's triangle flow or move it to the right of the 2 slider to make normal curved flow, or make it perfect linear flow.

01:49:866 (1) – from here to the spinner, I don't understand your claps. Can you explain what you're going for? I also want to have claps on the downbeats like 01:52:609 (1) – but that also sounds weird in spots. I guess my suggestion would be to keep the clap on this slider end 01:50:209 (2) - , but then delete the claps you have and put claps on all downbeats that have a note. Use what you did in the Insane and put a clap on each slider's end that starts a NC (so 01:52:609 (1) – etc.)

01:50:894 (3,4) – This is picky, but the stacking algorithm puts 3 at 76, 215, so your DS could be more consistent. Similarly the following stacks do similar things and not sure if you want 01:53:637 (2) - or 3 to be the one blanketed, since the other will not be.

01:55:352 (1) – this could be stacked better by +1x, +1y

02:58:780 (2) – this could be stacked better by -1 x, -1 y

[Hard]

00:33:066 (1) - -1 to y for better stack (even though the slider end is where you have this head, the animation looks odd the way you have it. Basically the editor is a lying asshole)

00:48:494 (3) – rotate 2 degrees clockwise for better blanket

00:51:923 (4) - -1 to x for better stack

00:55:009 (1,1) - - +1x, +1y for better stack

01:53:809 (1) - +1y for better blanket

02:19:009 (3,4,5,1) - -1y for better blanket

02:19:523 (4) - -1x for better blanket

02:21:066 (3,1,2) – dem curves. (No suggestion, I just like that even though this looks linear it's not)

02:35:466 (2,1) – Not perfectly blanketed, but the fading should make it not matter.

02:51:580 (1) - +3x, +1y for better blanket

02:52:952 (1) - +1, +1 for better stack (may need to do that for 2 and 3 too for linear flow)

02:55:694 (1) – move middle slider anchor to 118, 232 for better blanket with 4

02:59:809 (1,2) – rotate 3 degrees CC for better blanket

03:06:152 (3,4,1,2) - +1x for better stack on 2 and 1 sliders

Probably the most picky mod I've ever done because there wasn't much to say. Very good map.

[imouto's Insane]

I mention pacing a fair amount. This video helps discuss that idea: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5LScL4CWe5E

00:31:009 (1,2,3) – this looks a little odd, can't think of a fix though, sorry.

00:50:037 (4) – The stacking algorithm puts this at 92, 144, which gives it a downwards diagonal look/flow, which feels odd. See if manually putting 5 and 6 down and to the left 4 feels better

01:00:666 (1) – Is the reason for this spinner the long vocal note? If so, it might be better to make this clearer by starting it at 00:59:980 (4) – because right now it feels a little late to start it where it is. If you do change, you can have 00:59:466 (1,2,3) – be jumps to transition to the high energy spinner.

01:07:694 (5) - -2 to y for better blanket

01:22:094 (7,1) – Be careful about the jump into 1. With the changing DS, 1 can easily be read as being here 01:22:266 -

01:23:809 – I like having a circle here

01:49:866 (1) – I'm not a fan of this spinner. First off, spinners have a lot of energy, which is too much for this section. Furthermore, long spinners like this one feel kind of taxing. A small spinner can give a boost in energy, but such a long spinner just feels draining, and this is on a slow section of the song. Then, for the section starting at 02:01:523 (1) - , with almost the same energy level in the song, you have a section that takes so little energy. The pacing is just off. Please map this instead of having a 10 second spinner.

02:11:466 – The transition into the kiai is non-existent, so the change in energy feels a little too abrupt. Try adding a circle here to transition better using DS of .3x. Oh but make sure to account for the SV change, so DS it so it looks something like this: http://puu.sh/eZtH1/446afbd7d2.jpg

02:55:694 (5) – The problem with the break after this is that it comes after a climax. To me, putting a break here is equivalent to ending the map here, but worse since there's some added resolution that I have to wait for. The resolution of a map is supposed to comfort the player back down into normality after such a climax, but this doesn't do that. This drops the energy vastly, only to pick it up again. But why pick it up again when it's already hit its climax? You're not making me feel better since it's not the climax. And I have to wait a while for you to make the map resolve? No, make the map resolve immediately instead of making me wait for it. If the break was less than 2 seconds than fine, but this isn't, it's a long break. So either delete the notes after this break or map this instead of having a break for an extended resolution.

03:17:637 – Consider making this a circle and have 3 only reverse 2 times?

Good DnB flow.

[Insane]

00:26:037 (7,1) – Imo, the flow is awkward not fancy. Do a normal overlap inside of overlapping inside the slider.

00:56:037 (6,1) – Please no overlap

00:56:380 (1,2) – why do these use 1/8 ends? I also don't like any of the other 1/8 ends on sliders, but this one in particular gets to me. It sounds late and I can't understand what there is to gain from not ending on 00:56:552 -

00:57:580 (6,2) – These ends could stack better

01:09:066 (2,3) – why stack these? I don't see the decrease in energy that makes me want to pause. If anything, a normal DS will speak better for that since it's not a jump that would need energy.

01:09:237 (3) – prefer this as 2 circles for a triple into 01:09:409 (4) - .

01:28:266 (1) – You'll probably disagree, but I would like a break here until 01:39:237 (1) - . I think a break emphasizes the strong finish of 01:27:580 (5,6,7,8,9) - , where as mapping it makes the player work more and doesn't let you reflect on the strength of this finish. Furthermore, a break here makes your pacing better for 01:39:237 (1) - . By having a break, you took the relatively low energy section and found a way to make it feel a little higher energy since it's compared to a break. Plus I think you aren't gaining much by mapping this. It's pretty easy, so no one should really have any problems with it to the point where it's not as enjoyable as your more intense parts. It's kind of just a tax on my energy.

01:28:266 (1) – If not, clap on the slider end?

01:52:609 (1,3) – kind of awkward overlap, try 3 at 160, 185 ish

02:11:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – I'm curious, why no triples? I mean I don't like streams in general so for me single-tapping is good and I like the feel of the sliders, but why deviate from the norm here?

02:17:809 (3,4,5) – I don't like stacking triples in this section. You are at a higher energy part of the song from the beginning, yet it feels like you stack your triples more frequently. Spacing them out gives a better sense of pacing as it matches higher energy a little better. Furthermore, while spaced streams will always kill me since I suck at streams/reading them, stacking your triples more often makes 02:28:009 (4,5,6,1) – feel like it's out of left field. I feel spacing all the stacked triples would give me a better chance at reading this, especially if you space them further out than what you spaced them with the beginning.

02:19:009 (2,3) - I don't like this overlap, would rather see something like this http://puu.sh/eYQLH/c1ddba38c3.jpg

02:22:780 (1,3) – I think this overlap looks poor

02:40:780 (7) – Rotate this 2 degrees CC and move to 403, 162 for better blanket

02:44:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) – Let's compare this to 02:33:752 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - . I think the latter is the better pattern since the first combo in each pattern sets up a repetition, but the latter pattern breaks from the repetition to release the energy, where as the former pattern only stifles it. Try a different flow for 02:46:094 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) -

02:36:494 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) – In a similar vain, this feels a little similar to 02:35:123 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - , so try going with a tornado pattern by changing the order of your notes like this (editing for proper DS of course): http://puu.sh/eZnOr/f7917f9192.jpg , http://puu.sh/eZnQ9/4ba3423197.jpg

02:52:952 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – great pattern

Overall a very solid mapset. Good luck with getting ranked!

Edit: typo and linked video

Frey

1,189 posts

Joined February 2011

Frey 2015-01-25T17:19:57+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
Frey's Hard:

-- Difficulty setting is highly imbalanced with [Normal]. Consider setting AR7. Okay:D

03:17:125 (3,4) - Imo this jump didn't fit the music nicely.. Still, I don't really want to fix if this is not overmapping.

pinataman wrote:
[Hard]

00:33:066 (1) - -1 to y for better stack (even though the slider end is where you have this head, the animation looks odd the way you have it. Basically the editor is a lying asshole) Fixed

00:48:494 (3) – rotate 2 degrees clockwise for better blanket Fixed

00:51:923 (4) - -1 to x for better stack Fixed

00:55:009 (1,1) - - +1x, +1y for better stack Fixed

01:53:809 (1) - +1y for better blanket Fixed

02:19:009 (3,4,5,1) - -1y for better blanket I don't think it needs to

02:19:523 (4) - -1x for better blanket As above

02:21:066 (3,1,2) – dem curves. (No suggestion, I just like that even though this looks linear it's not) Well, fine for me

02:35:466 (2,1) – Not perfectly blanketed, but the fading should make it not matter. I think so :3

02:51:580 (1) - +3x, +1y for better blanket Fixed

02:52:952 (1) - +1, +1 for better stack (may need to do that for 2 and 3 too for linear flow) Fixed

02:55:694 (1) – move middle slider anchor to 118, 232 for better blanket with 4 What you said reminds me of this weird pattern, I decide to change this place, but not follow as you said

02:59:809 (1,2) – rotate 3 degrees CC for better blanket Fixed

03:06:152 (3,4,1,2) - +1x for better stack on 2 and 1 sliders Fixed

Probably the most picky mod I've ever done because there wasn't much to say. Very good map
Thanks~Also my most picky reply so far (´ ▽｀).。

Thanks for modding!

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
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Countdown: 0
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Creator:Streliteela
Version:Frey's Hard
Source:
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TwoThirds & Feint - Epiphany (feat. Veela)

koreapenguin wrote:

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