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TwoThirds & Feint - Epiphany (feat. Veela)

posted 2014-12-08T06:05:37+00:00

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Mei

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Joined March 2012

Mei 2015-01-06T12:25:59+00:00

[insane]

01:02:211 (3) - 可以加个nc
01:10:782 (4,5) - 这里感觉有点怪，建议ctrl+g
01:28:268 (1) - 这一段开始nc变得有点不规律了起来，有的地方类似这个01:36:154 (1,1) - 是按人声分了多个nc，有些地方又是按白线来分的比如01:33:411 (1) - ，建议统一一下
02:15:239 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里可以摆个正五边形，类似这种感觉
02:17:039 (2,3,4,1) - 这间距有点坑._.不过我没打过也不确定能不恩呢打
02:22:096 (4,5) - 这里ctrl+g好打
02:38:554 (1) - 这减速略坑

[imouto‘s hard]

00:22:782 (1,1) - 去掉nc
00:46:782 (1) - 这个clap是不是加错位置
02:16:611 (6,1) - 建议换个nc，后面类似的地方也这样
02:38:896 (3) - 尾巴上加clap，类似的地方也是

毫无人性，打爆

[normal]

00:31:696 (1) - 这nc可以去掉，保持2长白线1nc
01:27:925 (1) - 这个默认的clap让我有点出戏

easy还不错
其实建议你吧gd的cs调到4，这样就是个light insane了hhhh然后在补个2.9左右的hard因为现在这hard实在略难.-.
insane做的蛮棒就是怎么感觉到了kiai就乱了，总之rank加油，给你一颗小星星w

FaiVillager

152 posts

Joined October 2012

FaiVillager 2015-01-06T14:22:53+00:00

来了来了~

这图做的挺精致~ 我喜欢~

[insane]
总体上不错
但是感觉有一部分滑条拐得有点过了而看起来很不舒服可能需要修改一下？（不少哦）
00:23:797 (3) - 这个就有一点拐多了考虑少拐点其他类似情况自己修一下吧（其实无所谓;w; 只是我觉得不好而已）
00:26:025 (7,1) - 7和1的开头放在一条直线上这种梗可以适当增加两个滑条之间的ds
00:28:940 (1) - 下边往左偏点
顺带我感觉这图开始部分和结尾的风格不太一样主要是弯滑条的有无建议统一一下
00:50:711 (6,1) - 和上边的一样
00:58:082 (2,3,4) - 堆在一起了不太好看
01:03:140 (6) - 这个地方根据滑条的形状决定连打的样子吧这里做成弧线不太好看
01:39:225 (1,1) - 这两个用01:40:768 (2) - 的approach circle来修的更完美
01:58:768 (3,4) - 一个曲线一个折现放在一起我个人不太推荐（看情况，星爷的其实还不错，但是和节奏关系很大）
02:17:025 (2,3,4) - 和之后的类似连打难度相对与这个图的整体有些偏大而且这部分做1.5x确实太快了，因为曲子本身没变。考虑降低速度吧

另外音量整体降低点吧有点大。

[normal]
这个其实也最好统一一下风格，折线和曲线完全混搭会比较奇怪个人推荐主一种另外一种适当添加以保证风味
00:24:140 (5,1) - 曲子在这部分属于两个小节，跨小节的对称滑条我不推荐
00:35:454 (6,1,2) - 摆成一条直线
01:10:768 (4,1) - 这种遮盖不太好（没有大问题）
02:15:911 (3) - 用缩圈调整下这个偏差比较大
02:30:311 (4,2) - 调成对称或者有关系的角度吧看起来怪怪的
02:45:054 (2,3,4,5) - 这几个曲率不一样如果愿意的话可以细调
02:50:197 (1,2,3) -

给你放了一个正三角，你自己可以这么修改

因为是NM所以GD暂时不mod了，最近比较忙.-.

Streliteela

406 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

Streliteela 2015-01-06T18:37:05+00:00

Mei wrote:
[insane]
01:02:211 (3) - 可以加个nc 好，已加
01:10:782 (4,5) - 这里感觉有点怪，建议ctrl+g 这个暂时先不改，刻意做的
01:28:268 (1) - 这一段开始nc变得有点不规律了起来，有的地方类似这个01:36:154 (1,1) - 是按人声分了多个nc，有些地方又是按白线来分的比如01:33:411 (1) - ，建议统一一下嗯好的，已改

02:15:239 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里可以摆个正五边形，类似这种感觉图形梗用太多了这里就不想用了_(:з」∠)_
02:17:039 (2,3,4,1) - 这间距有点坑._.不过我没打过也不确定能不恩呢打
这块已经改排列了，确实很多人说间距坑又遮挡太丧病。顺便钱语十级_(:з」∠)_

02:22:096 (4,5) - 这里ctrl+g好打这里暂时保留，再等看看其他人的想法
02:38:554 (1) - 这减速略坑囍，嚎嚎嚎！（被打死
[imouto‘s hard]

毫无人性，打爆 ~~打的好！~~

[normal]
00:31:696 (1) - 这nc可以去掉，保持2长白线1nc 好的已改
01:27:925 (1) - 这个默认的clap让我有点出戏
噗……手贱多按了个clap，我也是醉了orz

easy还不错
其实建议你吧gd的cs调到4，这样就是个light insane了hhhh然后在补个2.9左右的hard因为现在这hard实在略难.-.
insane做的蛮棒就是怎么感觉到了kiai就乱了，总之rank加油，给你一颗小星星w

感谢mei酱滴摸以及star~~

Streliteela

406 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

Streliteela 2015-01-06T18:55:02+00:00

FaiVillager wrote:
来了来了~ 欢迎欢迎OwO~

这图做的挺精致~ 我喜欢~ ^_^

[insane]
总体上不错
但是感觉有一部分滑条拐得有点过了而看起来很不舒服可能需要修改一下？（不少哦）
第一次做insane没什么经验，滑条什么的形状确实有些诡异orz

00:23:797 (3) - 这个就有一点拐多了考虑少拐点其他类似情况自己修一下吧（其实无所谓;w; 只是我觉得不好而已）
稍稍改直了一些

00:26:025 (7,1) - 7和1的开头放在一条直线上这种梗可以适当增加两个滑条之间的ds
这样改的话感觉flow就不太好了，先暂时不改

00:28:940 (1) - 下边往左偏点好的

顺带我感觉这图开始部分和结尾的风格不太一样主要是弯滑条的有无建议统一一下结尾有意稍稍减少了一些排列上的硬度所以弯滑条用的多了些，因为快结束了嘛缓和一下w

00:50:711 (6,1) - 和上边的一样嗯这里也是，改完flow感觉不好，暂时保留

00:58:082 (2,3,4) - 堆在一起了不太好看刻意做成这个样子的，其实打起来还可以只是edit面板里看着会有点挤

01:03:140 (6) - 这个地方根据滑条的形状决定连打的样子吧这里做成弧线不太好看同样是为了照顾flow

01:39:225 (1,1) - 这两个用01:40:768 (2) - 的approach circle来修的更完美好的已改

01:58:768 (3,4) - 一个曲线一个折现放在一起我个人不太推荐（看情况，星爷的其实还不错，但是和节奏关系很大）
作为星爷脑残粉表示挺想试一试这种style的_(:з」∠)_

02:17:025 (2,3,4) - 和之后的类似连打难度相对与这个图的整体有些偏大而且这部分做1.5x确实太快了，因为曲子本身没变。考虑降低速度吧
这个要改的话就要改太多了，1.5x个人感觉打起来还挺爽_(:з」∠)_，而且这歌节奏太单一如果kiai的sv平平就没什么激情了w

另外音量整体降低点吧有点大。减了10%，感觉再减就要听不出来音效了_(:з」∠)_

[normal]
这个其实也最好统一一下风格，折线和曲线完全混搭会比较奇怪个人推荐主一种另外一种适当添加以保证风味
这大概也算是一种风格（？

00:24:140 (5,1) - 曲子在这部分属于两个小节，跨小节的对称滑条我不推荐感觉还好吧_(:з」∠)_

00:35:454 (6,1,2) - 摆成一条直线这个调了好久……确实改了但我还是不确定是不是已经一条直线了orz

01:10:768 (4,1) - 这种遮盖不太好（没有大问题）移动了一下note位置从滑条头挪到滑条尾了，感觉好很多

02:15:911 (3) - 用缩圈调整下这个偏差比较大嗯确实，已改

02:30:311 (4,2) - 调成对称或者有关系的角度吧看起来怪怪的改成平行了w
02:45:054 (2,3,4,5) - 这几个曲率不一样如果愿意的话可以细调 ~~好难调啊不想调了sad~~

02:50:197 (1,2,3) -
给你放了一个正三角，你自己可以这么修改
这个好高端，已改w

因为是NM所以GD暂时不mod了，最近比较忙.-.
没关系~图摸的很好很受益w

感谢摸图~~

Fushimi Rio

1,399 posts

Joined November 2011

Fushimi Rio 2015-01-07T09:29:04+00:00

Mei wrote:
[notice][imouto‘s hard]
00:22:782 (1,1) - 去掉nc 前面的去掉了
00:46:782 (1) - 这个clap是不是加错位置是
02:16:611 (6,1) - 建议换个nc，后面类似的地方也这样好
02:38:896 (3) - 尾巴上加clap，类似的地方也是哦

毫无人性，打爆老毛病大概已没救

其实建议你吧gd的cs调到4，这样就是个light insane了hhhh然后在补个2.9左右的hard因为现在这hard实在略难.-.
唉也是我看看mapper怎么说 ~~不介意的话我就再补个hard得了~~ 我思考了一下最好还是不要让我来免得再次疯狂坠毁

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Zetera

Medal Hunter

933 posts

Joined November 2010

Zetera 2015-01-07T10:54:26+00:00

Hi. You solved the ~Puzzle~ , so you won a mod. I am not good at modding standard tho, also, this mapset seems to be quite soilid

[Easy]

|00:30:325 (1) - I would change the slider's direction after the red waypoint, since it's facing away from the next slider instead of pointing towards that very object. Here you have an example which works and which doesn't look bad.

(I simply moved the last two waypoints a bit to create a curve into the opposite direction.)
|00:46:439 (1,1) - Here and on two other occasions, the main beat of the song lies in the back of the slider. Like this, a beat is not correctly "expressed", simply because you don't have an active keystroke when hitting the time/the note, insteadf you release the key at that very point. A circle/A slider start point however fits perfectly. I think this is not as much of a problem in an Easy Diff, so you could leave it be, but finding a solution with a circle on the exact beat (being 00:57:754 - for example) would be great. You have used other possibilities earlier and you could use them further.
|I wouldn't end the map with a spinner, there are beats to be mapped and they can be mapped with patterns that were used seconds ago.

Other than that, the difficulty had no major rhythm/placement issues.

[Normal]

|02:08:382 (6,7) - You could use the pattern you used before by repeating 6, then you could turn 7 into a circle and place it at the beginning of the spinner and delay the spinner by 1/4 tick. Just a minor suggestion though.
|03:01:868 (2,7) - a slight stack overlap that you should fix.

[Hard]

|Check the beginning. A lot of parts are too crowded. This is caused by the effect the other, spaced objects have on the snapped ones. Let's compare 00:26:554 (1,2) - and 00:29:982 (3,4) - . Especially the part at 26 seconds is packed with circles at a low amount of editor surface, whilst the second marked part is widely spaced. Also, check patterns like 00:25:525 (1,2,3,4) - , the first 3 circles could form a clean triangle and the slider is really near to the 1, as is 3, at least optically. Try using Distance snap and try to make good, even-angle triangles (120° inbetween all circles), that will most likely help to create non-crowdy, good looking patterns.
|00:28:954 (1,2) - Weirdly stacked. Imagine that Distance Snap was used. You could assume that (2) comes 1/4 tick after (1). Again, Distance Snap solves the problem automaticly. You can also stack the notes properly to avoid misreads. The problem is caused by other maps that use 3/4 sliders that don't even fit to the rhythm, which is rather common by now. Also, the overlap is nothing that should be maintained imo. But I guess this is dependant on mapping style. By the way, this often occurs and is found throughout the whole difficulty.
|01:17:639 (3,4,5) - should be clap, clap, whistle, in this order. (Referrence: 01:19:010 (4,5,6,3,4,5) - for example )
|02:16:611 (6,7,1) - Another weird patter and overlap, but I leave it up to you now. As I said, this is probably your mapping style. (Remember that this was copy pasted, so if you are improving the pattern, then you need to improve it some beat snaps later again.)

*I like the flow in the Kiai's second part. c:

|03:12:496 (1) - Offscreen in my editor, but I have a weird resolution. It might be onscreen. If it is onscreen, then ignore this.

[Insane]

This diff is Sick , I love it.

|01:14:554 (1,1,1) - What about flipping 01:14:896 (1) - with Ctrl+H and Ctrl+G (turning it around by 180°)?

Have 2 stars, I want to see this ranked. Good luck.

Streliteela

406 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

Streliteela 2015-01-07T18:05:19+00:00

Sala- wrote:
Hi. You solved the ~Puzzle~ , so you won a mod. hi lol~~

I am not good at modding standard tho, also, this mapset seems to be quite soilid
Never mind. this modding is nice and helps me (and especially my GDers) a lot~

[Normal]

|02:08:382 (6,7) - You could use the pattern you used before by repeating 6, then you could turn 7 into a circle and place it at the beginning of the spinner and delay the spinner by 1/4 tick. Just a minor suggestion though.
Good suggestion~ but still I want to keep it and wait for more suggestions from other people

|03:01:868 (2,7) - a slight stack overlap that you should fix. Yep fixed this~

[Insane]

This diff is Sick , I love it.

|01:14:554 (1,1,1) - What about flipping 01:14:896 (1) - with Ctrl+H and Ctrl+G (turning it around by 180°)?
ehh...it seems a little bit weird...

Have 2 stars, I want to see this ranked. Good luck.

Thanks a lot for your modding and stars~~

Fushimi Rio

1,399 posts

Joined November 2011

Fushimi Rio 2015-01-08T11:11:50+00:00

Sala- wrote:
[Hard]

|Check the beginning. A lot of parts are too crowded. This is caused by the effect the other, spaced objects have on the snapped ones. Let's compare 00:26:554 (1,2) - and 00:29:982 (3,4) - . Especially the part at 26 seconds is packed with circles at a low amount of editor surface, whilst the second marked part is widely spaced. Also, check patterns like 00:25:525 (1,2,3,4) - , the first 3 circles could form a clean triangle and the slider is really near to the 1, as is 3, at least optically. Try using Distance snap and try to make good, even-angle triangles (120° inbetween all circles), that will most likely help to create non-crowdy, good looking patterns.
~~seems I have different taste from others~~ fixed some unpleasing notes
|00:28:954 (1,2) - Weirdly stacked. Imagine that Distance Snap was used. You could assume that (2) comes 1/4 tick after (1). Again, Distance Snap solves the problem automaticly. You can also stack the notes properly to avoid misreads. The problem is caused by other maps that use 3/4 sliders that don't even fit to the rhythm, which is rather common by now. Also, the overlap is nothing that should be maintained imo. But I guess this is dependant on mapping style. By the way, this often occurs and is found throughout the whole difficulty. ^
|01:17:639 (3,4,5) - should be clap, clap, whistle, in this order. (Referrence: 01:19:010 (4,5,6,3,4,5) - for example ) oops fixed
|02:16:611 (6,7,1) - Another weird patter and overlap, but I leave it up to you now. As I said, this is probably your mapping style. (Remember that this was copy pasted, so if you are improving the pattern, then you need to improve it some beat snaps later again.)
fixed a bit, maybe

*I like the flow in the Kiai's second part. c:

|03:12:496 (1) - Offscreen in my editor, but I have a weird resolution. It might be onscreen. If it is onscreen, then ignore this. made 1 grid up

osu file format v13

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Fushimi Rio

1,399 posts

Joined November 2011

Fushimi Rio 2015-01-08T11:12:05+00:00

Sala- wrote:
[Hard]

|Check the beginning. A lot of parts are too crowded. This is caused by the effect the other, spaced objects have on the snapped ones. Let's compare 00:26:554 (1,2) - and 00:29:982 (3,4) - . Especially the part at 26 seconds is packed with circles at a low amount of editor surface, whilst the second marked part is widely spaced. Also, check patterns like 00:25:525 (1,2,3,4) - , the first 3 circles could form a clean triangle and the slider is really near to the 1, as is 3, at least optically. Try using Distance snap and try to make good, even-angle triangles (120° inbetween all circles), that will most likely help to create non-crowdy, good looking patterns.
~~seems I have different taste from others~~ fixed some unpleasing notes
|00:28:954 (1,2) - Weirdly stacked. Imagine that Distance Snap was used. You could assume that (2) comes 1/4 tick after (1). Again, Distance Snap solves the problem automaticly. You can also stack the notes properly to avoid misreads. The problem is caused by other maps that use 3/4 sliders that don't even fit to the rhythm, which is rather common by now. Also, the overlap is nothing that should be maintained imo. But I guess this is dependant on mapping style. By the way, this often occurs and is found throughout the whole difficulty. ^
|01:17:639 (3,4,5) - should be clap, clap, whistle, in this order. (Referrence: 01:19:010 (4,5,6,3,4,5) - for example ) oops fixed
|02:16:611 (6,7,1) - Another weird patter and overlap, but I leave it up to you now. As I said, this is probably your mapping style. (Remember that this was copy pasted, so if you are improving the pattern, then you need to improve it some beat snaps later again.)
fixed a bit, maybe

*I like the flow in the Kiai's second part. c:

|03:12:496 (1) - Offscreen in my editor, but I have a weird resolution. It might be onscreen. If it is onscreen, then ignore this. made 1 grid up

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: TwoThirds & Feint feat. Veela - Epiphany.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 131125
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 22082,44025,54997,65968,76940,87911,109854,131797,142768,153740,164711,175682,197625
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.700001

[Metadata]
Title:Epiphany (feat. Veela & Feint)
TitleUnicode:Epiphany (feat. Veela & Feint)
Artist:TwoThirds
ArtistUnicode:TwoThirds
Creator:Streliteela
Version:imouto's Hard
Source:
Tags:Drum & Bass DnB Electronic imoutosan AlpacaCokelat
BeatmapID:585895
BeatmapSetID:241474

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

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2,175896,184546
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Fushimi Rio

1,399 posts

Joined November 2011

Fushimi Rio 2015-01-08T11:17:30+00:00

Sala- wrote:
[Hard]

|Check the beginning. A lot of parts are too crowded. This is caused by the effect the other, spaced objects have on the snapped ones. Let's compare 00:26:554 (1,2) - and 00:29:982 (3,4) - . Especially the part at 26 seconds is packed with circles at a low amount of editor surface, whilst the second marked part is widely spaced. Also, check patterns like 00:25:525 (1,2,3,4) - , the first 3 circles could form a clean triangle and the slider is really near to the 1, as is 3, at least optically. Try using Distance snap and try to make good, even-angle triangles (120° inbetween all circles), that will most likely help to create non-crowdy, good looking patterns.
~~seems I have different taste from others~~ fixed some unpleasing notes
|00:28:954 (1,2) - Weirdly stacked. Imagine that Distance Snap was used. You could assume that (2) comes 1/4 tick after (1). Again, Distance Snap solves the problem automaticly. You can also stack the notes properly to avoid misreads. The problem is caused by other maps that use 3/4 sliders that don't even fit to the rhythm, which is rather common by now. Also, the overlap is nothing that should be maintained imo. But I guess this is dependant on mapping style. By the way, this often occurs and is found throughout the whole difficulty. ^
|01:17:639 (3,4,5) - should be clap, clap, whistle, in this order. (Referrence: 01:19:010 (4,5,6,3,4,5) - for example ) oops fixed
|02:16:611 (6,7,1) - Another weird patter and overlap, but I leave it up to you now. As I said, this is probably your mapping style. (Remember that this was copy pasted, so if you are improving the pattern, then you need to improve it some beat snaps later again.)
fixed a bit, maybe

*I like the flow in the Kiai's second part. c:

|03:12:496 (1) - Offscreen in my editor, but I have a weird resolution. It might be onscreen. If it is onscreen, then ignore this. made 1 grid up

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: TwoThirds & Feint feat. Veela - Epiphany.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 131125
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 22082,44025,54997,65968,76940,87911,109854,131797,142768,153740,164711,175682,197625
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.700001

[Metadata]
Title:Epiphany (feat. Veela & Feint)
TitleUnicode:Epiphany (feat. Veela & Feint)
Artist:TwoThirds
ArtistUnicode:TwoThirds
Creator:Streliteela
Version:imouto's Hard
Source:
Tags:Drum & Bass DnB Electronic imoutosan AlpacaCokelat
BeatmapID:585895
BeatmapSetID:241474

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,88125,109118
2,175896,184546
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Autumn

501 posts

Joined October 2011

Autumn 2015-01-08T11:48:27+00:00

In Guu's request.

General

可能还需要一个简单的Hard，现在的Hard过难，可以当light insane做了

Alpaca's Easy

fine

Normal

02:37:525 (4) - 这个遮挡可能会被挑

imouto's Hard

HP-1
关于01:16:954 - 01:27:925这段，节奏和音效有点乱
01:18:496 - 漏了个音...
01:21:239 - ^
01:23:982 - ^
01:19:010 (4) - 这个clap去掉，01:19:353 (6) - 这个加上clap，和01:17:811 (4,5) - 一致，后面也一样，延续C----CC的自创节奏+音效，或者干脆跟着BGM来，不用自创节奏和音效

Insane

00:53:639 (1) - X246 Y181
01:14:811 - 漏了一个音，但想改必须摈弃目前这个梗。小问题，取舍在你
01:25:182 (1) - 左移一格
01:27:925 - 02:11:811 - 完全没有音效单薄了一些。可以用whistle丰富一下这段的音效，比如在01:28:268 (1,3) - 滑条尾、01:30:668 (1) - 等等类似的24clap
02:36:839 (3,4) - 以及02:37:354 (6,7) - 都对调一下，顺时针flow对于从02:36:154

(7,8,9,10) - 到02:37:868 (1) - 的衔接更符合习惯，也流畅一些
02:49:696 - 这个drum被减速滑条盖过，坚持用滑条覆盖的话不妨加红点强调一下，愿意摈弃只要恢复原SV即可
02:51:068 - 同上，如果前面的减速还是为了强调Vocal，这里就有点莫名了
02:52:439 - 同上
03:11:982 (7) - 单纯觉得Ctrl+G易读也干净一点

That's all!
Nice map, good luck!

Streliteela

406 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

Streliteela 2015-01-08T14:48:00+00:00

Autumn wrote:
In Guu's request.
General
可能还需要一个简单的Hard，现在的Hard过难，可以当light insane做了
嗯这个有考虑过，再等另外一个GD。如果能满足要求就把现在这个hard作为light insane
Normal
02:37:525 (4) - 这个遮挡可能会被挑不太想改这里的pattern，先暂时保留
Insane
00:53:639 (1) - X246 Y181 好已改
01:14:811 - 漏了一个音，但想改必须摈弃目前这个梗。小问题，取舍在你还是想留这个梗
01:25:182 (1) - 左移一格好的
01:27:925 - 02:11:811 - 完全没有音效单薄了一些。可以用whistle丰富一下这段的音效，比如在01:28:268 (1,3) - 滑条尾、01:30:668 (1) - 等等类似的24clap 嗯好建议，已经加了一些音效
02:36:839 (3,4) - 以及02:37:354 (6,7) - 都对调一下，顺时针flow对于从02:36:154 (7,8,9,10) - 到02:37:868 (1) - 的衔接更符合习惯，也流畅一些
好建议，已改
02:49:696 - 这个drum被减速滑条盖过，坚持用滑条覆盖的话不妨加红点强调一下，愿意摈弃只要恢复原SV即可
02:51:068 - 同上，如果前面的减速还是为了强调Vocal，这里就有点莫名了
02:52:439 - 同上
以上三个地方没有改，因为这块是刻意做的一个梗。这三个减速滑条是因为长音刻意安排的，配合变间距单点以后让图更有张力
03:11:982 (7) - 单纯觉得Ctrl+G易读也干净一点嗯已改

That's all!
Nice map, good luck!

感谢摸图~~

jyu

1,339 posts

Joined August 2012

jyu 2015-01-09T15:02:27+00:00

koreapenguin wrote:
[notice]Heeeey yooooooooo

General
how about add combo color one more? it's seem bored there is have just two colors
i guess you can't use '(Short ver.)' in title, follow this > http://puu.sh/e5NL7/66ee81d410.png < also about title, find seem 'Epiphany (Feat. Veela)' is right
i think doesn't need 'countdown' well, it's not big problem but recommend disabled
add 'imoutosan' , 'Alpaca?' on tags, can't confirm Alpaca's nickname... anyway add GD mapper's nickname on tags i think alpacacokelat is fine
sample vol is really really loud, adjust it to suitably
@Natsu : timing seems really off o.o i don't know maybe around 15 or 17 ms off lol, I'm on my lap can't check timing well here:P

Alpaca's Easy
Nothing to say, but i think this diff is unbalance. compare 00:22:082 - ~ 02:33:482 - with 02:33:740 - ~ 03:14:797 - note's density, anyway don't mind about this it just my personal think
yeah i intentionally made the density different even though both sections are absolutely similiar, but one of them is at the beginning song meanwhile the other is at the last part of the song, so yeah

Sala- wrote:
[Easy]

|00:30:325 (1) - I would change the slider's direction after the red waypoint, since it's facing away from the next slider instead of pointing towards that very object. Here you have an example which works and which doesn't look bad. fix
(I simply moved the last two waypoints a bit to create a curve into the opposite direction.)
|00:46:439 (1,1) - Here and on two other occasions, the main beat of the song lies in the back of the slider. Like this, a beat is not correctly "expressed", simply because you don't have an active keystroke when hitting the time/the note, insteadf you release the key at that very point. A circle/A slider start point however fits perfectly. I think this is not as much of a problem in an Easy Diff, so you could leave it be, but finding a solution with a circle on the exact beat (being 00:57:754 - for example) would be great. You have used other possibilities earlier and you could use them further. that's a good point idk i kinda hesitated placing two consecutive circles in easy but yeah i should try this
|I wouldn't end the map with a spinner, there are beats to be mapped and they can be mapped with patterns that were used seconds ago. i just realized other diffs dont use spinner lmao fix

Other than that, the difficulty had no major rhythm/placement issues.

Thank you for mods!

osu file format v13

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Creator:Streliteela
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-Faded-

752 posts

Joined December 2012

-Faded- 2015-01-09T20:19:16+00:00

Hi, from the Faded Modding Queue~

[General]

Are you sure about the grey combo colour? When people in multi play this in tag, people won't know when it's their turn, because the combo colour won't change. Not that big of a deal, but something to consider.
The gap from Normal to Hard is very big. There's a big gap from the star rating, going from 2.09 right up to 3.65 and there's the fact that Normal hardly uses any 1/2 at all, and where hard constantly uses spaced 1/2 throughout the entire map. I would add a new difficulty in between these two diffs, at around 2.80/3.00 in the star rating.

[Easy]

01:00:154 (1,2) - This would look nicer if it were a blanket, make sure that the end of (1) is parallel to the edge of (2)'s slider-trail.
01:03:239 (1) - Considering that this is on the downbeat, you should add a clap here, it will not only add extra emphasis on the strong beat, but it will also improve consistency with the other downbeats, since they have claps on them.
01:52:611 (2,1) - This overlap looks kind of scruffy, especially for an easy, so I suggest moving them further apart a bit so that they don't overlap.
02:26:896 (3) - Like 01:03:239 (1) - , you should add a clap on this downbeat as well.
02:27:239 (4,1) - I would extend this by 1 beat, because that way you get to add a whistle on the slider end; meaning that the player isn't left off-beat after a suddenly cut off rhythm pattern.
02:47:468 (1) - Like 01:03:239 (1) - , you should add a clap on this downbeat as well, because it will go with your clap pattern (add a clap every two downbeats)

[Normal]

01:10:782 (4,3) - These two notes happen to have a slight overlap. Very minor, but you should still fix it; otherwise it will feel cramped and messy.
02:19:354 (5,2) - Minor, but I'm not too fond of how (2)'s repeat arrow is literally being touched by (5)'s slider-trail. You should fix this, otherwise it will feel cramped.
02:31:354 (2) - Why is there a whistle on the repeat instead of the head? This goes against your hitsound pattern and is very inconsistent, causing it to sound odd compared with the rest of the map. I suggest adding one on the head of the slider instead.
03:05:639 (4) - Like above, you should add a whistle here, because it will be more consistent with your hitsound pattern. Otherwise it will sound very odd compared to the rest of the map.

[Hard]

00:42:668 (1) - Since this is hard, it feels kind of empty not having a sound on this strong downbeat. I would add a hit circle at the downbeat, and start the spinner 1/4 forward
00:57:754 (1) - Why is there a whistle on the repeat instead of the end?
01:03:925 (2,1) - The amount of repeats that these sliders have feel really off and out of place in comparison to the rest of the map, not to mention that they don't go with the vocals nor beat, so it's also overmapped. I have a rhythm that can compliment the music more:

You should use this instead, because it goes with the music a lot better.
01:23:125 (3) - Add a clap at the end of this slider for consistency with your hitsound pattern, otherwise it will sound out of place and odd compared to the rest of the map.
01:49:868 (1) - What's up with the massive spinner here? This is a hard diff, so the music here should be easily mappable, just don't make it as intense as the rest of the map. Don't just cover it up with a spinner, otherwise it will feel long and tedious to play.
02:50:553 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - You suddenly stop using claps in this pattern, why? It just makes it feel out of place and boring, so I suggest adding a few.
02:55:696 - Why is there a break after here? It's been mapped after all the other diffs, and this part of the song is identical to the beginning; which you mapped. So I highly recommend mapping this break out, it will be more consistent throughout the rest of the set and difficulty.

[Insane]

01:14:211 (1,1,1) - I think there would be nicer flow if the third slider is in the same place as the first slider, but spaced slightly further away. This would flow better, because the cursor isn't stuck in one cramped location, disrupting the gameplay.
02:17:296 (1) - Add a clap on this circle? It would be more consistent, because there aren't many claps in this part of the music, and it would also add emphasis on this strong part of the music.
02:27:582 (3,4,5,6) - Since there is a slowdown, the spaced 1/4 stream can be really hard to predict, and could easily be mistaken for a set of 1/2. I suggest compressing the stream a bit, or remove the slowdown.
02:28:268 (7,8,9,1) - Very minor, but I don't like how (7)'s trail is being overlapped slightly by that stack, it can make the map look untidy. I suggest getting rid of the overlap here.
02:49:525 (1,2,3,4) - Like 02:27:582 (3,4,5,6) -, stream can be hard to predict.

Overall, I found that the hard and insane difficulties are very unique and well mapped, and that Easy and Normal are very solid and well polished, despite having a few hitsound inconsistencies. The main thing holding the map back, however, is the poor spread from Normal to Hard, I suggest you sort that out somehow. I shot a star, good luck!

jyu

1,339 posts

Joined August 2012

jyu 2015-01-10T13:55:15+00:00

[ Faded ] wrote:
Hi, from the Faded Modding Queue~

[Easy]
01:00:154 (1,2) - This would look nicer if it were a blanket, make sure that the end of (1) is parallel to the edge of (2)'s slider-trail. fix
01:03:239 (1) - Considering that this is on the downbeat, you should add a clap here, it will not only add extra emphasis on the strong beat, but it will also improve consistency with the other downbeats, since they have claps on them. fix
01:52:611 (2,1) - This overlap looks kind of scruffy, especially for an easy, so I suggest moving them further apart a bit so that they don't overlap. the ds wont let me ;w;
02:26:896 (3) - Like 01:03:239 (1) - , you should add a clap on this downbeat as well. somehow the beat here isn't strong like any other downbeat so i didnt add clap
02:27:239 (4,1) - I would extend this by 1 beat, because that way you get to add a whistle on the slider end; meaning that the player isn't left off-beat after a suddenly cut off rhythm pattern. following the vocals
02:47:468 (1) - Like 01:03:239 (1) - , you should add a clap on this downbeat as well, because it will go with your clap pattern (add a clap every two downbeats) fix

Thank you for mod!

osu file format v13

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HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2.7
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:2.5
SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,88125,108368
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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153668,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
153754,-100,4,1,1,80,0,1
175696,-100,4,1,1,70,0,0


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Combo2 : 161,161,161
Combo3 : 112,112,56

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Streliteela

406 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

Streliteela 2015-01-10T17:29:56+00:00

[ Faded ] wrote:
Hi, from the Faded Modding Queue~ Hi~~:3

[General]
Are you sure about the grey combo colour? When people in multi play this in tag, people won't know when it's their turn, because the combo colour won't change. Not that big of a deal, but something to consider.
Tentatively decide to keep this combo colour because I still don't know which colour is better Also, I think grey colour fit this background well. Anyway, I will change it when I have a better idea.
The gap from Normal to Hard is very big. There's a big gap from the star rating, going from 2.09 right up to 3.65 and there's the fact that Normal hardly uses any 1/2 at all, and where hard constantly uses spaced 1/2 throughout the entire map. I would add a new difficulty in between these two diffs, at around 2.80/3.00 in the star rating.
Yep I agree. Presently I'm trying my best to find a more appropriate hard diff which difficulty is around 3.0 (but it seems everyone is busy these days... ). If I can find a suitable one, I'll change imouto's hard to a light insane diff. That's the only way I could think of to deal with this problem now

[Normal]
01:10:782 (4,3) - These two notes happen to have a slight overlap. Very minor, but you should still fix it; otherwise it will feel cramped and messy.
Ok fixed it~
02:19:354 (5,2) - Minor, but I'm not too fond of how (2)'s repeat arrow is literally being touched by (5)'s slider-trail. You should fix this, otherwise it will feel cramped.
I'll consider this idea and how to fix this part. Just keep it temporarily.
02:31:354 (2) - Why is there a whistle on the repeat instead of the head? This goes against your hitsound pattern and is very inconsistent, causing it to sound odd compared with the rest of the map. I suggest adding one on the head of the slider instead.
Oops I didn't notice this mistake Fixed~
03:05:639 (4) - Like above, you should add a whistle here, because it will be more consistent with your hitsound pattern. Otherwise it will sound very odd compared to the rest of the map.
OK added~

[Insane]
01:14:211 (1,1,1) - I think there would be nicer flow if the third slider is in the same place as the first slider, but spaced slightly further away. This would flow better, because the cursor isn't stuck in one cramped location, disrupting the gameplay.
Good idea~I've changed this pattern as you said~
02:17:296 (1) - Add a clap on this circle? It would be more consistent, because there aren't many claps in this part of the music, and it would also add emphasis on this strong part of the music.
OK fixed~
02:27:582 (3,4,5,6) - Since there is a slowdown, the spaced 1/4 stream can be really hard to predict, and could easily be mistaken for a set of 1/2. I suggest compressing the stream a bit, or remove the slowdown.
I didn't change this part because I want to keep this 'Slow----Fast' feeling. That's more fun though it's really hard to read.
02:28:268 (7,8,9,1) - Very minor, but I don't like how (7)'s trail is being overlapped slightly by that stack, it can make the map look untidy. I suggest getting rid of the overlap here.
Nice suggestion! Fixed this part~
02:49:525 (1,2,3,4) - Like 02:27:582 (3,4,5,6) -, stream can be hard to predict.
Same reason as 02:27:582 (3,4,5,6) - . Just keep it~

Overall, I found that the hard and insane difficulties are very unique and well mapped, and that Easy and Normal are very solid and well polished, despite having a few hitsound inconsistencies. The main thing holding the map back, however, is the poor spread from Normal to Hard, I suggest you sort that out somehow. I shot a star, good luck!

Really nice suggestions! Thanks for your mod and star~~

Squichu

1,013 posts

Joined November 2012

Squichu 2015-01-10T21:26:02+00:00

hi there!
from my queue, just making suggestions :3

General

considering the combo colours, try this maybe -
```
[Colours]
Combo1 : 68,111,153
Combo2 : 255,240,200
Combo3 : 162,205,249
Combo4 : 245,199,101
```
they're better to see and match the background
hmh, such a long break. ;-; it's a little boring to wait that long, maybe you can find someone who can do a SB? cause that's less boring than watching the background for 20 seconds >w<

Alpaca's Easy
aah, this is okay to play, but sooooo repetitive! why? :c in the middle part the rhythm stays the same for like.. ever. it really gets a little boring. ;-; maybe you can try to spice this up a bit?

00:36:154 (2,3) - a little confusing for beginner players, cause 3's end is closer to 2 than the head and at the perfect next-to-hit-object spot, please move it, so it won't confuse anyone
same for 00:41:639 (2,3) -
00:44:382 (2) - rhythm feels off, especially cause the vocals start in the middle of the slider, maybe you can change the rhythm up, so it matches both, beat and vocals? example:
00:46:439 (1) - if you know that the downbeat is clearly audiable and pretty strong you might want to make it a clickable object, cause atm it doesn't have any effect on gameplay :c same goes for 00:49:182 (1) - and several others - you'd be better of with circles, imo
01:52:611 (2,1) - this overlap is a no for Easy (imo), it's way too confusing >-< if the DS make it impossible to move it somewhere so they won't overlap, then choose a different shape for one of the sliders, or both :b (btw, it's not bad if the slidertracks overlap, it's just confusing when you cover starts and ends of sliders!)
example (with overlapping slidertracks) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2495961
02:13:182 (1) - is this missing a clap? 02:14:554 (2) - probably too?
02:37:868 (3) - suggestion cause I really miss some variety - remove whistle from reverse and extend the slider like this, plays nice, sounds nice, moar variety :3 ->
02:47:468 (1) - curve this in the other direction to improve flow? :3 (just move last anchor to 424|308
02:50:554 (1) - this might confuse beginners. :/ not sure, I don't think more than 1 reverse is suitable for Easy diff, but it might be okay ~ since it's the only time you use 2 reverses I'd prefer if you map this differently, tho.
03:10:782 (3,4,1) - this would flow way better if you curve 4 a little less and adjust 1, example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496109

Normal
great diff! just some minor things -

00:32:039 (5,6,1) - movement feels a little awkward, you could re-arrange them a little to smoothen it, example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496185
01:02:211 (4) - aah, Idk about the rhythm. it doesn't really match the pace of the song, imo. but you could try this isntead, adds a little more variety too: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496221
01:11:468 (5) - is this missing a NC?
01:26:211 (3,4) - minor DS issue, please fix? xD
01:51:754 (5,6) - and every other stack before short reverse-slider - please unstack them! stacking is fine, but the reverse arrows get partly hidden which is super confusing for Normal players! :c
02:14:896 (2) - aah, you could blanket 02:13:868 (5) - so nicely with this, why don't you? ;-;
02:20:382 (2,4) - the overlap is visible while playing ;-; how about making 4 parallel to 2? looks better to me
02:27:925 (5,1,2,3,4) - movement feels a little forced, you could change the pattern to this, works better imo - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496293

imouto's Hard
okay to play, I'm a little bothered by the anti-jumps in the beginning tho. :c -

00:22:096 (1,2) - here you use an anti-jump, I wonder why tho? also you've ignored the beats on the red and the blue tick, but they're clearly audiable. ._. and at 00:23:296 (5) - this matches the melody, but I'd prefer if the downbeat was clickable, cause it's more dominant than the others. maybe you can try this rhythm:
00:25:525 (1) - what's with this NC? remove?
00:28:954 (1,2) - another anti-jump that feels very weird to play. the music doesn't slow down and there is no break of anything either, space regularly?
//sidenote - I obviously don't point out every anti-jump I don't see fitting, because that's close to all.. I'm only mentioning the ones that break flow and don't play well at all (imo), up to you if you wanna change any, but I highly recommend to think about their usage again :/
00:31:011 (1) - remove NC?
00:35:468 (8,1) - there's nothing on the blue tick 8 is mapped to, but the one with a beat (between 8 and 1) is empty.. replace 8 with a circle and add two more circles at 00:35:639 - and 00:35:725 -
00:38:211 (8) - here is one, but on the next blue tick is the same, try this? -
00:52:268 (1,1,1) - why so many NCsss? :c I think you should check your comboing scheme, cause it's really inconsistent
01:49:868 (1) - uhm. I think this is waaay to long. it's just super tiring and no fun to play, imo :/ you should end the spinner sooner
if you don't want to at least decrease hitsound volume.. cause the longer the spinner gets the louder the spinner-spin will play. and that's not really pleasant to the ears. >-<
02:10:439 (4,1) - long break feels off, why don't you add another circle at 02:11:125 - ?
02:55:696 (5) - map the break after? there's no reason to have another break here. the first one was long enough so it's not needed and it's even mapped in Easy/Normal.. :/

Insane
omg, this is really great! I like the diff, one of the few Insanes I can play and it's really fun >w<

fun or not, playing that long without a break is too much. add a short break (maybe just 3-5 seconds, that's enough) at some point please >-<
00:24:668 (7) - ctrl+g for minor flow improvement
there are some more of this, you don't have to change any, but personally I think it's more comfortable to play that way - 00:30:154 (6) - 00:35:639 (7) - 00:39:754 (8) - 00:49:182 (5) - 01:19:525 (7) - 02:40:782 (7) -
01:09:154 (3) - feels a little off while playing, not sure why. ;-; maybe cause it start's on the blue tick? (I do that often, too, and regularly get screamed at for it. x-x .. xD) consider switching places with 01:09:068 (2) - so first the reverse slider, then the circle
01:11:811 (2,1) - reverse 2, curve in opposite direction. the curve 1 differently, too and you'll end up with a slightly better flow (imo) .. (and you could rotate 01:12:496 (2) - slightly, too) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496677 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496687
01:13:868 (1) - uuuhm what's with this speed up. it doesn't really match the song I think. there's just no indicator for a speed up like this :/
01:46:782 (7) - I'd prefer if you split this in slider + circle, cause of the beat on the red tick
02:00:496 (8) - ^
02:14:211 (8) - rotate by 170° selection cente for better flow :3
02:33:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - aaaah, this is so fun to play >w<

that's all I can say. Nice mapset & good luck! :3

Fushimi Rio

1,399 posts

Joined November 2011

Fushimi Rio 2015-01-11T02:07:21+00:00

lolllllll mods coming to fast, I haven't update my diff yet...

Autumn wrote:
That's all!
Nice map, good luck!

All fixed. Thx!

[ Faded ] wrote:
Hi, from the Faded Modding Queue~
[Hard]
00:42:668 (1) - Since this is hard, it feels kind of empty not having a sound on this strong downbeat. I would add a hit circle at the downbeat, and start the spinner 1/4 forward the prelude ends here. Also it is following the instrument.
00:57:754 (1) - Why is there a whistle on the repeat instead of the end? oops, fixed.
01:03:925 (2,1) - The amount of repeats that these sliders have feel really off and out of place in comparison to the rest of the map, not to mention that they don't go with the vocals nor beat, so it's also overmapped. I have a rhythm that can compliment the music more:

You should use this instead, because it goes with the music a lot better. I don't quite understand this rhythm. Anyway fixed.
01:23:125 (3) - Add a clap at the end of this slider for consistency with your hitsound pattern, otherwise it will sound out of place and odd compared to the rest of the map. fixed
01:49:868 (1) - What's up with the massive spinner here? This is a hard diff, so the music here should be easily mappable, just don't make it as intense as the rest of the map. Don't just cover it up with a spinner, otherwise it will feel long and tedious to play. As a transition from break to notes.
02:50:553 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - You suddenly stop using claps in this pattern, why? It just makes it feel out of place and boring, so I suggest adding a few. considering. hitsound is always difficult for me
02:55:696 - Why is there a break after here? It's been mapped after all the other diffs, and this part of the song is identical to the beginning; which you mapped. So I highly recommend mapping this break out, it will be more consistent throughout the rest of the set and difficulty. chorus ends here. Personally I prefer having a break after chorus or some difficult parts.

Thanks for mod.

Squirrel wrote:
imouto's Hard
okay to play, I'm a little bothered by the anti-jumps in the beginning tho. :c -
00:22:096 (1,2) - here you use an anti-jump, I wonder why tho? also you've ignored the beats on the red and the blue tick, but they're clearly audiable. ._. and at 00:23:296 (5) - this matches the melody, but I'd prefer if the downbeat was clickable, cause it's more dominant than the others. maybe you can try this rhythm:
00:25:525 (1) - what's with this NC? remove? fixed
00:28:954 (1,2) - another anti-jump that feels very weird to play. the music doesn't slow down and there is no break of anything either, space regularly?
//sidenote - I obviously don't point out every anti-jump I don't see fitting, because that's close to all.. I'm only mentioning the ones that break flow and don't play well at all (imo), up to you if you wanna change any, but I highly recommend to think about their usage again :/
I guess I need to change all of them if I had changed one :c I don't think I have to follow all audiable beats.
00:31:011 (1) - remove NC? fixed
00:35:468 (8,1) - there's nothing on the blue tick 8 is mapped to, but the one with a beat (between 8 and 1) is empty.. replace 8 with a circle and add two more circles at 00:35:639 - and 00:35:725 - I'm sure there is, lol
00:38:211 (8) - here is one, but on the next blue tick is the same, try this? - ^
00:52:268 (1,1,1) - why so many NCsss? :c I think you should check your comboing scheme, cause it's really inconsistent
I planed to add nc to all antijumps...fixed
01:49:868 (1) - uhm. I think this is waaay to long. it's just super tiring and no fun to play, imo :/ you should end the spinner sooner
if you don't want to at least decrease hitsound volume.. cause the longer the spinner gets the louder the spinner-spin will play. and that's not really pleasant to the ears. >-< didn't notice that, fixed
02:10:439 (4,1) - long break feels off, why don't you add another circle at 02:11:125 - ? added
02:55:696 (5) - map the break after? there's no reason to have another break here. the first one was long enough so it's not needed and it's even mapped in Easy/Normal.. :/ same to the former reply

Thanks for mod!

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Starfall9908

664 posts

Joined November 2013

Starfall9908 2015-01-11T12:37:58+00:00

Hello!

[Easy]

00:36:154 (2) - Blanket
00:44:382 (2) - Shape this as a better blanket to 00:44:039 (1)
01:06:325 (2) - Blanket
01:20:039 (2) - Blanket is a bit off
02:50:554 (1) - Since the slider velocity is pretty low so do I recommend not to put two reverse point on a slider like this. Delete one reverse and add a circle instead.

[Normal]

00:39:239 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - This is too many Cirlces to tap in row. Put max 4 circles in row otherwise it'll be too hard to be normal.
00:45:754 (3) - Blanket
01:05:982 (1) - ^
01:10:096 (3,4) - ^
01:16:268 (5) - ^
01:50:211 (2) - ^
01:52:611 (1) - ^
02:15:925 (3) - ^
02:22:782 (1,3) - The stack on the slider heads are off.
02:28:268 (1) - Blanket
02:38:554 (6) - ^
02:45:068 (2) - ^
02:57:754 (5) - ^
03:01:868 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Too many circlers in row

Tha way Imouto's Hard is build in is too hard for me to mod. Insane was too hard for me

Good Luck

jyu

1,339 posts

Joined August 2012

jyu 2015-01-12T14:00:52+00:00

Squirrel wrote:
hi there!
from my queue, just making suggestions :3

Alpaca's Easy
aah, this is okay to play, but sooooo repetitive! why? :c in the middle part the rhythm stays the same for like.. ever. it really gets a little boring. ;-; maybe you can try to spice this up a bit? idk i kinda refrained from making variety and instead using repetitive rhythm all the way because beginners can't really read the rhythm that well, but i'll try to add more variety somehow
00:36:154 (2,3) - a little confusing for beginner players, cause 3's end is closer to 2 than the head and at the perfect next-to-hit-object spot, please move it, so it won't confuse anyone fix
same for 00:41:639 (2,3) - fix
00:44:382 (2) - rhythm feels off, especially cause the vocals start in the middle of the slider, maybe you can change the rhythm up, so it matches both, beat and vocals? example: because this is still at the beginning part, i tried using simple rhythm, which is why i focused more in the instrument aka the bass, which is kinda repetitive lmao
00:46:439 (1) - if you know that the downbeat is clearly audiable and pretty strong you might want to make it a clickable object, cause atm it doesn't have any effect on gameplay :c same goes for 00:49:182 (1) - and several others - you'd be better of with circles, imo dang ok fixed them all
01:52:611 (2,1) - this overlap is a no for Easy (imo), it's way too confusing >-< if the DS make it impossible to move it somewhere so they won't overlap, then choose a different shape for one of the sliders, or both :b (btw, it's not bad if the slidertracks overlap, it's just confusing when you cover starts and ends of sliders!)
example (with overlapping slidertracks) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2495961 omg thats a nice one fix
02:13:182 (1) - is this missing a clap? 02:14:554 (2) - probably too? fix both
02:37:868 (3) - suggestion cause I really miss some variety - remove whistle from reverse and extend the slider like this, plays nice, sounds nice, moar variety :3 -> nice! but i'm following the vocal here, so i'll consider about this
02:47:468 (1) - curve this in the other direction to improve flow? :3 (just move last anchor to 424|308 fix
02:50:554 (1) - this might confuse beginners. :/ not sure, I don't think more than 1 reverse is suitable for Easy diff, but it might be okay ~ since it's the only time you use 2 reverses I'd prefer if you map this differently, tho. the sv is kinda slow so probably beginners can notice this. i hope. anyway fixed because more people pointed this out lmao
03:10:782 (3,4,1) - this would flow way better if you curve 4 a little less and adjust 1, example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496109 fix

nadapan wrote:
Hello!

[Easy]
00:36:154 (2) - Blanket fix
00:44:382 (2) - Shape this as a better blanket to 00:44:039 (1) fix
01:06:325 (2) - Blanket fix
01:20:039 (2) - Blanket is a bit off i think this one is fine
02:50:554 (1) - Since the slider velocity is pretty low so do I recommend not to put two reverse point on a slider like this. Delete one reverse and add a circle instead. gdi fix

Thank you for mods!

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TwoThirds & Feint - Epiphany (feat. Veela)

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