TwoThirds & Feint - Epiphany (feat. Veela)

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koreapenguin wrote:

[notice]Heeeey yooooooooo


General
  1. how about add combo color one more? it's seem bored there is have just two colors
  2. i guess you can't use '(Short ver.)' in title, follow this > http://puu.sh/e5NL7/66ee81d410.png < also about title, find seem 'Epiphany (Feat. Veela)' is right
  3. i think doesn't need 'countdown' well, it's not big problem but recommend disabled
  4. add 'imoutosan' , 'Alpaca?' on tags, can't confirm Alpaca's nickname... anyway add GD mapper's nickname on tags i think alpacacokelat is fine
  5. sample vol is really really loud, adjust it to suitably
  6. @Natsu : timing seems really off o.o i don't know maybe around 15 or 17 ms off lol, I'm on my lap can't check timing well here:P



Alpaca's Easy
  1. Nothing to say, but i think this diff is unbalance. compare 00:22:082 - ~ 02:33:482 - with 02:33:740 - ~ 03:14:797 - note's density, anyway don't mind about this it just my personal think
yeah i intentionally made the density different even though both sections are absolutely similiar, but one of them is at the beginning song meanwhile the other is at the last part of the song, so yeah

Sala- wrote:

[Easy]

|00:30:325 (1) - I would change the slider's direction after the red waypoint, since it's facing away from the next slider instead of pointing towards that very object. Here you have an example which works and which doesn't look bad. fix
(I simply moved the last two waypoints a bit to create a curve into the opposite direction.)
|00:46:439 (1,1) - Here and on two other occasions, the main beat of the song lies in the back of the slider. Like this, a beat is not correctly "expressed", simply because you don't have an active keystroke when hitting the time/the note, insteadf you release the key at that very point. A circle/A slider start point however fits perfectly. I think this is not as much of a problem in an Easy Diff, so you could leave it be, but finding a solution with a circle on the exact beat (being 00:57:754 - for example) would be great. You have used other possibilities earlier and you could use them further. that's a good point idk i kinda hesitated placing two consecutive circles in easy but yeah i should try this
|I wouldn't end the map with a spinner, there are beats to be mapped and they can be mapped with patterns that were used seconds ago. i just realized other diffs dont use spinner lmao fix

Other than that, the difficulty had no major rhythm/placement issues.
Thank you for mods! :)
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: TwoThirds & Feint feat. Veela - Epiphany.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 131125
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 22082,44025,54997,65968,76940,87911,109854,131797,142768,153740,164711,175682
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.200001

[Metadata]
Title:Epiphany (feat. Veela & Feint)
TitleUnicode:Epiphany (feat. Veela & Feint)
Artist:TwoThirds
ArtistUnicode:TwoThirds
Creator:Streliteela
Version:Alpaca's Easy
Source:
Tags:Drum & Bass DnB Electronic imoutosan AlpacaCokelat
BeatmapID:585893
BeatmapSetID:241474

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2.7
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:2.5
SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,88125,108368
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Hi, from the Faded Modding Queue~

[General]
  1. Are you sure about the grey combo colour? When people in multi play this in tag, people won't know when it's their turn, because the combo colour won't change. Not that big of a deal, but something to consider.
  2. The gap from Normal to Hard is very big. There's a big gap from the star rating, going from 2.09 right up to 3.65 and there's the fact that Normal hardly uses any 1/2 at all, and where hard constantly uses spaced 1/2 throughout the entire map. I would add a new difficulty in between these two diffs, at around 2.80/3.00 in the star rating.


[Easy]
  1. 01:00:154 (1,2) - This would look nicer if it were a blanket, make sure that the end of (1) is parallel to the edge of (2)'s slider-trail.
  2. 01:03:239 (1) - Considering that this is on the downbeat, you should add a clap here, it will not only add extra emphasis on the strong beat, but it will also improve consistency with the other downbeats, since they have claps on them.
  3. 01:52:611 (2,1) - This overlap looks kind of scruffy, especially for an easy, so I suggest moving them further apart a bit so that they don't overlap.
  4. 02:26:896 (3) - Like 01:03:239 (1) - , you should add a clap on this downbeat as well.
  5. 02:27:239 (4,1) - I would extend this by 1 beat, because that way you get to add a whistle on the slider end; meaning that the player isn't left off-beat after a suddenly cut off rhythm pattern.
  6. 02:47:468 (1) - Like 01:03:239 (1) - , you should add a clap on this downbeat as well, because it will go with your clap pattern (add a clap every two downbeats)


[Normal]
  1. 01:10:782 (4,3) - These two notes happen to have a slight overlap. Very minor, but you should still fix it; otherwise it will feel cramped and messy.
  2. 02:19:354 (5,2) - Minor, but I'm not too fond of how (2)'s repeat arrow is literally being touched by (5)'s slider-trail. You should fix this, otherwise it will feel cramped.
  3. 02:31:354 (2) - Why is there a whistle on the repeat instead of the head? This goes against your hitsound pattern and is very inconsistent, causing it to sound odd compared with the rest of the map. I suggest adding one on the head of the slider instead.
  4. 03:05:639 (4) - Like above, you should add a whistle here, because it will be more consistent with your hitsound pattern. Otherwise it will sound very odd compared to the rest of the map.


[Hard]
  1. 00:42:668 (1) - Since this is hard, it feels kind of empty not having a sound on this strong downbeat. I would add a hit circle at the downbeat, and start the spinner 1/4 forward
  2. 00:57:754 (1) - Why is there a whistle on the repeat instead of the end?
  3. 01:03:925 (2,1) - The amount of repeats that these sliders have feel really off and out of place in comparison to the rest of the map, not to mention that they don't go with the vocals nor beat, so it's also overmapped. I have a rhythm that can compliment the music more:

    You should use this instead, because it goes with the music a lot better.
  4. 01:23:125 (3) - Add a clap at the end of this slider for consistency with your hitsound pattern, otherwise it will sound out of place and odd compared to the rest of the map.
  5. 01:49:868 (1) - What's up with the massive spinner here? This is a hard diff, so the music here should be easily mappable, just don't make it as intense as the rest of the map. Don't just cover it up with a spinner, otherwise it will feel long and tedious to play.
  6. 02:50:553 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - You suddenly stop using claps in this pattern, why? It just makes it feel out of place and boring, so I suggest adding a few.
  7. 02:55:696 - Why is there a break after here? It's been mapped after all the other diffs, and this part of the song is identical to the beginning; which you mapped. So I highly recommend mapping this break out, it will be more consistent throughout the rest of the set and difficulty.


[Insane]
  1. 01:14:211 (1,1,1) - I think there would be nicer flow if the third slider is in the same place as the first slider, but spaced slightly further away. This would flow better, because the cursor isn't stuck in one cramped location, disrupting the gameplay.
  2. 02:17:296 (1) - Add a clap on this circle? It would be more consistent, because there aren't many claps in this part of the music, and it would also add emphasis on this strong part of the music.
  3. 02:27:582 (3,4,5,6) - Since there is a slowdown, the spaced 1/4 stream can be really hard to predict, and could easily be mistaken for a set of 1/2. I suggest compressing the stream a bit, or remove the slowdown.
  4. 02:28:268 (7,8,9,1) - Very minor, but I don't like how (7)'s trail is being overlapped slightly by that stack, it can make the map look untidy. I suggest getting rid of the overlap here.
  5. 02:49:525 (1,2,3,4) - Like 02:27:582 (3,4,5,6) -, stream can be hard to predict.


Overall, I found that the hard and insane difficulties are very unique and well mapped, and that Easy and Normal are very solid and well polished, despite having a few hitsound inconsistencies. The main thing holding the map back, however, is the poor spread from Normal to Hard, I suggest you sort that out somehow. I shot a star, good luck!
jyu

[ Faded ] wrote:

Hi, from the Faded Modding Queue~

[Easy]
  1. 01:00:154 (1,2) - This would look nicer if it were a blanket, make sure that the end of (1) is parallel to the edge of (2)'s slider-trail. fix
  2. 01:03:239 (1) - Considering that this is on the downbeat, you should add a clap here, it will not only add extra emphasis on the strong beat, but it will also improve consistency with the other downbeats, since they have claps on them. fix
  3. 01:52:611 (2,1) - This overlap looks kind of scruffy, especially for an easy, so I suggest moving them further apart a bit so that they don't overlap. the ds wont let me ;w;
  4. 02:26:896 (3) - Like 01:03:239 (1) - , you should add a clap on this downbeat as well. somehow the beat here isn't strong like any other downbeat so i didnt add clap
  5. 02:27:239 (4,1) - I would extend this by 1 beat, because that way you get to add a whistle on the slider end; meaning that the player isn't left off-beat after a suddenly cut off rhythm pattern. following the vocals
  6. 02:47:468 (1) - Like 01:03:239 (1) - , you should add a clap on this downbeat as well, because it will go with your clap pattern (add a clap every two downbeats) fix
Thank you for mod! :)
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Topic Starter
Streliteela

[ Faded ] wrote:

Hi, from the Faded Modding Queue~ Hi~~:3

[General]
  1. Are you sure about the grey combo colour? When people in multi play this in tag, people won't know when it's their turn, because the combo colour won't change. Not that big of a deal, but something to consider.
    Tentatively decide to keep this combo colour because I still don't know which colour is better :o Also, I think grey colour fit this background well. Anyway, I will change it when I have a better idea.
  2. The gap from Normal to Hard is very big. There's a big gap from the star rating, going from 2.09 right up to 3.65 and there's the fact that Normal hardly uses any 1/2 at all, and where hard constantly uses spaced 1/2 throughout the entire map. I would add a new difficulty in between these two diffs, at around 2.80/3.00 in the star rating.
    Yep I agree. Presently I'm trying my best to find a more appropriate hard diff which difficulty is around 3.0 (but it seems everyone is busy these days... :( ). If I can find a suitable one, I'll change imouto's hard to a light insane diff. That's the only way I could think of to deal with this problem now :(


[Normal]
  1. 01:10:782 (4,3) - These two notes happen to have a slight overlap. Very minor, but you should still fix it; otherwise it will feel cramped and messy.
    Ok fixed it~
  2. 02:19:354 (5,2) - Minor, but I'm not too fond of how (2)'s repeat arrow is literally being touched by (5)'s slider-trail. You should fix this, otherwise it will feel cramped.
    I'll consider this idea and how to fix this part. Just keep it temporarily.
  3. 02:31:354 (2) - Why is there a whistle on the repeat instead of the head? This goes against your hitsound pattern and is very inconsistent, causing it to sound odd compared with the rest of the map. I suggest adding one on the head of the slider instead.
    Oops I didn't notice this mistake :o Fixed~
  4. 03:05:639 (4) - Like above, you should add a whistle here, because it will be more consistent with your hitsound pattern. Otherwise it will sound very odd compared to the rest of the map.
    OK added~


[Insane]
  1. 01:14:211 (1,1,1) - I think there would be nicer flow if the third slider is in the same place as the first slider, but spaced slightly further away. This would flow better, because the cursor isn't stuck in one cramped location, disrupting the gameplay.
    Good idea~I've changed this pattern as you said~ :)
  2. 02:17:296 (1) - Add a clap on this circle? It would be more consistent, because there aren't many claps in this part of the music, and it would also add emphasis on this strong part of the music.
    OK fixed~
  3. 02:27:582 (3,4,5,6) - Since there is a slowdown, the spaced 1/4 stream can be really hard to predict, and could easily be mistaken for a set of 1/2. I suggest compressing the stream a bit, or remove the slowdown.
    I didn't change this part because I want to keep this 'Slow----Fast' feeling. That's more fun though it's really hard to read.
  4. 02:28:268 (7,8,9,1) - Very minor, but I don't like how (7)'s trail is being overlapped slightly by that stack, it can make the map look untidy. I suggest getting rid of the overlap here.
    Nice suggestion! Fixed this part~ ;)
  5. 02:49:525 (1,2,3,4) - Like 02:27:582 (3,4,5,6) -, stream can be hard to predict.
    Same reason as 02:27:582 (3,4,5,6) - . Just keep it~


Overall, I found that the hard and insane difficulties are very unique and well mapped, and that Easy and Normal are very solid and well polished, despite having a few hitsound inconsistencies. The main thing holding the map back, however, is the poor spread from Normal to Hard, I suggest you sort that out somehow. I shot a star, good luck!
Really nice suggestions! Thanks for your mod and star~~ :)
Squichu
hi there!
from my queue, just making suggestions :3

General
  1. considering the combo colours, try this maybe -

    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 68,111,153
    Combo2 : 255,240,200
    Combo3 : 162,205,249
    Combo4 : 245,199,101
    they're better to see and match the background
  2. hmh, such a long break. ;-; it's a little boring to wait that long, maybe you can find someone who can do a SB? cause that's less boring than watching the background for 20 seconds >w<


Alpaca's Easy
aah, this is okay to play, but sooooo repetitive! why? :c in the middle part the rhythm stays the same for like.. ever. it really gets a little boring. ;-; maybe you can try to spice this up a bit?
  1. 00:36:154 (2,3) - a little confusing for beginner players, cause 3's end is closer to 2 than the head and at the perfect next-to-hit-object spot, please move it, so it won't confuse anyone
    same for 00:41:639 (2,3) -
  2. 00:44:382 (2) - rhythm feels off, especially cause the vocals start in the middle of the slider, maybe you can change the rhythm up, so it matches both, beat and vocals? example:
  3. 00:46:439 (1) - if you know that the downbeat is clearly audiable and pretty strong you might want to make it a clickable object, cause atm it doesn't have any effect on gameplay :c same goes for 00:49:182 (1) - and several others - you'd be better of with circles, imo
  4. 01:52:611 (2,1) - this overlap is a no for Easy (imo), it's way too confusing >-< if the DS make it impossible to move it somewhere so they won't overlap, then choose a different shape for one of the sliders, or both :b (btw, it's not bad if the slidertracks overlap, it's just confusing when you cover starts and ends of sliders!)
    example (with overlapping slidertracks) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2495961
  5. 02:13:182 (1) - is this missing a clap? 02:14:554 (2) - probably too?
  6. 02:37:868 (3) - suggestion cause I really miss some variety - remove whistle from reverse and extend the slider like this, plays nice, sounds nice, moar variety :3 ->
  7. 02:47:468 (1) - curve this in the other direction to improve flow? :3 (just move last anchor to 424|308
  8. 02:50:554 (1) - this might confuse beginners. :/ not sure, I don't think more than 1 reverse is suitable for Easy diff, but it might be okay ~ since it's the only time you use 2 reverses I'd prefer if you map this differently, tho.
  9. 03:10:782 (3,4,1) - this would flow way better if you curve 4 a little less and adjust 1, example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496109


Normal
great diff! just some minor things -
  1. 00:32:039 (5,6,1) - movement feels a little awkward, you could re-arrange them a little to smoothen it, example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496185
  2. 01:02:211 (4) - aah, Idk about the rhythm. it doesn't really match the pace of the song, imo. but you could try this isntead, adds a little more variety too: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496221
  3. 01:11:468 (5) - is this missing a NC?
  4. 01:26:211 (3,4) - minor DS issue, please fix? xD
  5. 01:51:754 (5,6) - and every other stack before short reverse-slider - please unstack them! stacking is fine, but the reverse arrows get partly hidden which is super confusing for Normal players! :c
  6. 02:14:896 (2) - aah, you could blanket 02:13:868 (5) - so nicely with this, why don't you? ;-;
  7. 02:20:382 (2,4) - the overlap is visible while playing ;-; how about making 4 parallel to 2? looks better to me
  8. 02:27:925 (5,1,2,3,4) - movement feels a little forced, you could change the pattern to this, works better imo - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496293


imouto's Hard
okay to play, I'm a little bothered by the anti-jumps in the beginning tho. :c -
  1. 00:22:096 (1,2) - here you use an anti-jump, I wonder why tho? also you've ignored the beats on the red and the blue tick, but they're clearly audiable. ._. and at 00:23:296 (5) - this matches the melody, but I'd prefer if the downbeat was clickable, cause it's more dominant than the others. maybe you can try this rhythm:
  2. 00:25:525 (1) - what's with this NC? remove?
  3. 00:28:954 (1,2) - another anti-jump that feels very weird to play. the music doesn't slow down and there is no break of anything either, space regularly?
    //sidenote - I obviously don't point out every anti-jump I don't see fitting, because that's close to all.. I'm only mentioning the ones that break flow and don't play well at all (imo), up to you if you wanna change any, but I highly recommend to think about their usage again :/
  4. 00:31:011 (1) - remove NC?
  5. 00:35:468 (8,1) - there's nothing on the blue tick 8 is mapped to, but the one with a beat (between 8 and 1) is empty.. replace 8 with a circle and add two more circles at 00:35:639 - and 00:35:725 -
  6. 00:38:211 (8) - here is one, but on the next blue tick is the same, try this? -
  7. 00:52:268 (1,1,1) - why so many NCsss? :c I think you should check your comboing scheme, cause it's really inconsistent
  8. 01:49:868 (1) - uhm. I think this is waaay to long. it's just super tiring and no fun to play, imo :/ you should end the spinner sooner
    if you don't want to at least decrease hitsound volume.. cause the longer the spinner gets the louder the spinner-spin will play. and that's not really pleasant to the ears. >-<
  9. 02:10:439 (4,1) - long break feels off, why don't you add another circle at 02:11:125 - ?
  10. 02:55:696 (5) - map the break after? there's no reason to have another break here. the first one was long enough so it's not needed and it's even mapped in Easy/Normal.. :/


Insane
omg, this is really great! I like the diff, one of the few Insanes I can play and it's really fun >w<
  1. fun or not, playing that long without a break is too much. add a short break (maybe just 3-5 seconds, that's enough) at some point please >-<
  2. 00:24:668 (7) - ctrl+g for minor flow improvement
    there are some more of this, you don't have to change any, but personally I think it's more comfortable to play that way - 00:30:154 (6) - 00:35:639 (7) - 00:39:754 (8) - 00:49:182 (5) - 01:19:525 (7) - 02:40:782 (7) -
  3. 01:09:154 (3) - feels a little off while playing, not sure why. ;-; maybe cause it start's on the blue tick? (I do that often, too, and regularly get screamed at for it. x-x .. xD) consider switching places with 01:09:068 (2) - so first the reverse slider, then the circle
  4. 01:11:811 (2,1) - reverse 2, curve in opposite direction. the curve 1 differently, too and you'll end up with a slightly better flow (imo) .. (and you could rotate 01:12:496 (2) - slightly, too) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496677 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496687
  5. 01:13:868 (1) - uuuhm what's with this speed up. it doesn't really match the song I think. there's just no indicator for a speed up like this :/
  6. 01:46:782 (7) - I'd prefer if you split this in slider + circle, cause of the beat on the red tick
  7. 02:00:496 (8) - ^
  8. 02:14:211 (8) - rotate by 170° selection cente for better flow :3
  9. 02:33:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - aaaah, this is so fun to play >w<


that's all I can say. Nice mapset & good luck! :3
Fushimi Rio
lolllllll mods coming to fast, I haven't update my diff yet...

Autumn wrote:

That's all!
Nice map, good luck!
All fixed. Thx!

[ Faded ] wrote:

Hi, from the Faded Modding Queue~
[Hard]
  1. 00:42:668 (1) - Since this is hard, it feels kind of empty not having a sound on this strong downbeat. I would add a hit circle at the downbeat, and start the spinner 1/4 forward the prelude ends here. Also it is following the instrument.
  2. 00:57:754 (1) - Why is there a whistle on the repeat instead of the end? oops, fixed.
  3. 01:03:925 (2,1) - The amount of repeats that these sliders have feel really off and out of place in comparison to the rest of the map, not to mention that they don't go with the vocals nor beat, so it's also overmapped. I have a rhythm that can compliment the music more:

    You should use this instead, because it goes with the music a lot better. I don't quite understand this rhythm. Anyway fixed.
  4. 01:23:125 (3) - Add a clap at the end of this slider for consistency with your hitsound pattern, otherwise it will sound out of place and odd compared to the rest of the map. fixed
  5. 01:49:868 (1) - What's up with the massive spinner here? This is a hard diff, so the music here should be easily mappable, just don't make it as intense as the rest of the map. Don't just cover it up with a spinner, otherwise it will feel long and tedious to play. As a transition from break to notes.
  6. 02:50:553 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - You suddenly stop using claps in this pattern, why? It just makes it feel out of place and boring, so I suggest adding a few. considering. hitsound is always difficult for me
  7. 02:55:696 - Why is there a break after here? It's been mapped after all the other diffs, and this part of the song is identical to the beginning; which you mapped. So I highly recommend mapping this break out, it will be more consistent throughout the rest of the set and difficulty. chorus ends here. Personally I prefer having a break after chorus or some difficult parts.
Thanks for mod.

Squirrel wrote:

imouto's Hard
okay to play, I'm a little bothered by the anti-jumps in the beginning tho. :c -
  1. 00:22:096 (1,2) - here you use an anti-jump, I wonder why tho? also you've ignored the beats on the red and the blue tick, but they're clearly audiable. ._. and at 00:23:296 (5) - this matches the melody, but I'd prefer if the downbeat was clickable, cause it's more dominant than the others. maybe you can try this rhythm:
  2. 00:25:525 (1) - what's with this NC? remove? fixed
  3. 00:28:954 (1,2) - another anti-jump that feels very weird to play. the music doesn't slow down and there is no break of anything either, space regularly?
    //sidenote - I obviously don't point out every anti-jump I don't see fitting, because that's close to all.. I'm only mentioning the ones that break flow and don't play well at all (imo), up to you if you wanna change any, but I highly recommend to think about their usage again :/
    I guess I need to change all of them if I had changed one :c I don't think I have to follow all audiable beats.
  4. 00:31:011 (1) - remove NC? fixed
  5. 00:35:468 (8,1) - there's nothing on the blue tick 8 is mapped to, but the one with a beat (between 8 and 1) is empty.. replace 8 with a circle and add two more circles at 00:35:639 - and 00:35:725 - I'm sure there is, lol
  6. 00:38:211 (8) - here is one, but on the next blue tick is the same, try this? - ^
  7. 00:52:268 (1,1,1) - why so many NCsss? :c I think you should check your comboing scheme, cause it's really inconsistent
    I planed to add nc to all antijumps...fixed
  8. 01:49:868 (1) - uhm. I think this is waaay to long. it's just super tiring and no fun to play, imo :/ you should end the spinner sooner
    if you don't want to at least decrease hitsound volume.. cause the longer the spinner gets the louder the spinner-spin will play. and that's not really pleasant to the ears. >-< didn't notice that, fixed
  9. 02:10:439 (4,1) - long break feels off, why don't you add another circle at 02:11:125 - ? added
  10. 02:55:696 (5) - map the break after? there's no reason to have another break here. the first one was long enough so it's not needed and it's even mapped in Easy/Normal.. :/ same to the former reply
Thanks for mod!

osu file format v13

[General]
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Artist:TwoThirds
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Creator:Streliteela
Version:imouto's Hard
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Starfall9908
Hello!

[Easy]
  1. 00:36:154 (2) - Blanket
  2. 00:44:382 (2) - Shape this as a better blanket to 00:44:039 (1)
  3. 01:06:325 (2) - Blanket
  4. 01:20:039 (2) - Blanket is a bit off
  5. 02:50:554 (1) - Since the slider velocity is pretty low so do I recommend not to put two reverse point on a slider like this. Delete one reverse and add a circle instead.


[Normal]
  1. 00:39:239 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - This is too many Cirlces to tap in row. Put max 4 circles in row otherwise it'll be too hard to be normal.
  2. 00:45:754 (3) - Blanket
  3. 01:05:982 (1) - ^
  4. 01:10:096 (3,4) - ^
  5. 01:16:268 (5) - ^
  6. 01:50:211 (2) - ^
  7. 01:52:611 (1) - ^
  8. 02:15:925 (3) - ^
  9. 02:22:782 (1,3) - The stack on the slider heads are off.
  10. 02:28:268 (1) - Blanket
  11. 02:38:554 (6) - ^
  12. 02:45:068 (2) - ^
  13. 02:57:754 (5) - ^
  14. 03:01:868 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Too many circlers in row

Tha way Imouto's Hard is build in is too hard for me to mod. Insane was too hard for me :o

Good Luck ;)
jyu

Squirrel wrote:

hi there!
from my queue, just making suggestions :3

Alpaca's Easy
aah, this is okay to play, but sooooo repetitive! why? :c in the middle part the rhythm stays the same for like.. ever. it really gets a little boring. ;-; maybe you can try to spice this up a bit? idk i kinda refrained from making variety and instead using repetitive rhythm all the way because beginners can't really read the rhythm that well, but i'll try to add more variety somehow
  1. 00:36:154 (2,3) - a little confusing for beginner players, cause 3's end is closer to 2 than the head and at the perfect next-to-hit-object spot, please move it, so it won't confuse anyone fix
    same for 00:41:639 (2,3) - fix
  2. 00:44:382 (2) - rhythm feels off, especially cause the vocals start in the middle of the slider, maybe you can change the rhythm up, so it matches both, beat and vocals? example: because this is still at the beginning part, i tried using simple rhythm, which is why i focused more in the instrument aka the bass, which is kinda repetitive lmao
  3. 00:46:439 (1) - if you know that the downbeat is clearly audiable and pretty strong you might want to make it a clickable object, cause atm it doesn't have any effect on gameplay :c same goes for 00:49:182 (1) - and several others - you'd be better of with circles, imo dang ok fixed them all
  4. 01:52:611 (2,1) - this overlap is a no for Easy (imo), it's way too confusing >-< if the DS make it impossible to move it somewhere so they won't overlap, then choose a different shape for one of the sliders, or both :b (btw, it's not bad if the slidertracks overlap, it's just confusing when you cover starts and ends of sliders!)
    example (with overlapping slidertracks) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2495961 omg thats a nice one fix
  5. 02:13:182 (1) - is this missing a clap? 02:14:554 (2) - probably too? fix both
  6. 02:37:868 (3) - suggestion cause I really miss some variety - remove whistle from reverse and extend the slider like this, plays nice, sounds nice, moar variety :3 -> nice! but i'm following the vocal here, so i'll consider about this
  7. 02:47:468 (1) - curve this in the other direction to improve flow? :3 (just move last anchor to 424|308 fix
  8. 02:50:554 (1) - this might confuse beginners. :/ not sure, I don't think more than 1 reverse is suitable for Easy diff, but it might be okay ~ since it's the only time you use 2 reverses I'd prefer if you map this differently, tho. the sv is kinda slow so probably beginners can notice this. i hope. anyway fixed because more people pointed this out lmao
  9. 03:10:782 (3,4,1) - this would flow way better if you curve 4 a little less and adjust 1, example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496109 fix

nadapan wrote:

Hello!

[Easy]
  1. 00:36:154 (2) - Blanket fix
  2. 00:44:382 (2) - Shape this as a better blanket to 00:44:039 (1) fix
  3. 01:06:325 (2) - Blanket fix
  4. 01:20:039 (2) - Blanket is a bit off i think this one is fine
  5. 02:50:554 (1) - Since the slider velocity is pretty low so do I recommend not to put two reverse point on a slider like this. Delete one reverse and add a circle instead. gdi fix
Thank you for mods! :)
osu file format v13

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256,352,112611,2,0,B|160:232|160:232|308:260|404:176|420:76,1,479.999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,52,115354,6,0,P|156:52|160:356,1,479.999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,352,118096,2,0,B|360:344|432:340|468:292|468:292|268:248|268:248|332:204|304:128,1,479.999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,48,120839,6,0,B|48:60|48:60|16:92,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,112,122382,2,0,B|352:124|352:124|384:156,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,312,123582,6,0,P|228:328|152:324,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,168,125125,2,0,P|344:152|420:156,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,236,126325,6,0,B|204:236|204:236|172:252|172:252|108:252,2,120,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,104,127868,2,0,B|328:104|328:104|360:120|360:120|424:120,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,129068,12,4,131811,0:0:0:0:
252,60,133182,6,0,B|240:32|140:60|140:60|84:144|116:184,1,240,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,264,134554,2,0,P|184:292|300:304,2,160,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,172,136268,2,0,L|92:84,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,56,137296,5,8,0:0:0:0:
372,96,137639,2,0,P|392:132|316:212,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,84,139354,2,0,P|220:88|184:76,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,112,140039,5,8,0:0:0:0:
64,200,140382,2,0,P|64:244|108:356,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,142096,2,0,P|208:200|244:188,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,108,142782,5,0,0:0:0:0:
384,100,143125,2,0,P|420:128|424:244,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,344,144496,2,0,B|236:332|216:292|216:292|196:336|148:348,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,276,145525,5,8,0:0:0:0:
92,180,145868,2,0,P|116:140|224:104,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,136,146896,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,92,147239,2,0,L|428:172,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,300,148268,5,8,0:0:0:0:
188,296,148611,2,0,B|164:264|112:268|112:268|84:236|100:184,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,300,150325,2,0,P|348:288|364:272,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,184,151011,5,8,0:0:0:0:
312,116,151354,2,0,P|260:88|160:96,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,156,152382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,236,152725,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,300,153068,2,0,P|256:320|292:320,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,268,153754,6,0,L|348:184,1,79.9999999999999,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,220,154439,2,0,L|236:136,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,188,155125,2,0,L|132:104,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,104,155811,2,0,L|54:181,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,276,156496,6,0,P|96:304|148:324,1,79.9999999999999,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,316,157182,2,0,P|280:312|324:320,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,320,157868,2,0,P|448:305|472:256,2,79.9999999999999,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,159239,5,8,0:0:0:0:
220,116,159582,2,0,P|164:104|132:112,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,176,160268,2,0,B|72:296|72:296|104:340,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,96,161982,5,8,0:0:0:0:
216,72,162325,2,0,L|376:80,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,128,163354,2,0,P|472:176|464:216,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,280,164039,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,312,164382,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,296,164725,6,0,L|124:288,1,79.9999999999999,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,196,165411,2,0,L|96:136,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,108,166096,2,0,L|272:72,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,168,166782,2,0,L|376:188,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,256,167468,6,0,P|448:288|444:332,2,79.9999999999999,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,276,168496,2,0,B|304:288|304:288|260:280,1,79.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,264,169182,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,208,169525,2,0,P|100:180|184:84,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,80,170554,6,0,P|332:92|452:80,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,92,172268,2,0,P|160:136|152:176,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,256,172954,5,8,0:0:0:0:
216,260,173296,2,0,B|334:256|334:256|370:236,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,144,174325,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,92,174668,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,60,175011,2,0,P|192:72|144:64,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,88,175696,5,12,0:0:0:0:
72,176,176039,2,0,P|92:252|139:316,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,244,177411,2,0,P|299:167|252:103,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,56,178439,5,8,0:0:0:0:
88,112,178782,2,0,L|56:276,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,328,180154,2,0,B|272:296|272:296|396:292,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,204,181182,5,8,0:0:0:0:
348,140,181525,2,0,L|177:143,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,312,182896,2,0,L|255:308,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,272,183925,5,8,0:0:0:0:
408,200,184268,2,0,P|424:152|416:40,2,160,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,272,185982,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,304,186325,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,288,186668,6,0,L|104:204,1,79.9999999999999,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,200,187354,2,0,L|165:131,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,52,188039,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,84,188382,2,0,P|376:96|472:56,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,164,189411,6,0,L|444:248,1,79.9999999999999,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,196,190096,2,0,L|344:280,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,320,190782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,248,191125,2,0,P|176:212|56:188,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,92,192154,6,0,P|92:80|124:84,1,79.9999999999999,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,116,192839,2,0,P|239:116|278:105,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,52,193525,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,80,193868,2,0,L|436:252,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,296,194896,5,8,0:0:0:0:
280,244,195239,2,0,L|204:280,2,79.9999999999999,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,172,196268,2,0,P|328:128|296:92,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,108,196954,2,0,P|180:116|128:112,1,79.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,68,197639,1,4,0:0:0:0:
Narcissu
hard

00:26:554 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 開頭的就下了6圈的幾何梗,但是副歌開頭僅僅是原地疊圈接滑條,難度設置上就完全不合理,玩家會很奇怪為什麼安靜的段落會如此困難而激昂的段落卻毫無印象

00:24:668 (5,1) - 錯誤的額外音效,偶數節的確適合外加但是應該是遞進和強調,長白是clap的話前面還是clap是不適合的

02:11:811 (1,2) - 02:12:496 (1,2) - kiai外加的clap位置非常死板,完全不合原曲的瀟灑和隨性,同時過度的clap也破壞了原曲的節奏,我建議你在了解一定的樂理知識前不要嘗試一些奇怪的東西,你的直覺和邏輯並不一定和多數人一致
Fushimi Rio

Narcissu wrote:

hard

00:26:554 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 開頭的就下了6圈的幾何梗,但是副歌開頭僅僅是原地疊圈接滑條,難度設置上就完全不合理,玩家會很奇怪為什麼安靜的段落會如此困難而激昂的段落卻毫無印象
你是开dt试的吗……
嘛这个之后再看 如果变成light insane的话kiai开头可以再难点 虽然现在已经挺难了


00:24:668 (5,1) - 錯誤的額外音效,偶數節的確適合外加但是應該是遞進和強調,長白是clap的話前面還是clap是不適合的
嗯删掉了长白线前的

02:11:811 (1,2) - 02:12:496 (1,2) - kiai外加的clap位置非常死板,完全不合原曲的瀟灑和隨性,同時過度的clap也破壞了原曲的節奏,我建議你在了解一定的樂理知識前不要嘗試一些奇怪的東西,你的直覺和邏輯並不一定和多數人一致
虽然是这样但我也不知道该怎么下啊orz 球详细点的解说 现在还是不会改
code就先不更新了0 0

Edit: 这一定是意外 我还不想被cp打爆
Topic Starter
Streliteela
OMG sooooooo busy these days... :( So sorry for my late reply :o

Squirrel wrote:

hi there! Hihi~~OwO~~
from my queue, just making suggestions :3 Welcome~\(≧▽≦)/~

General
  1. considering the combo colours, try this maybe -

    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 68,111,153
    Combo2 : 255,240,200
    Combo3 : 162,205,249
    Combo4 : 245,199,101
    they're better to see and match the background
    Ahh OK~~ :)
  2. hmh, such a long break. ;-; it's a little boring to wait that long, maybe you can find someone who can do a SB? cause that's less boring than watching the background for 20 seconds >w<
    It's so tough to find someone who can help me do a SB :( So I shorten the break time in Hard & Insane diff (especially Insane, with no break time lol~). Just keep 20 sec break time in easy & normal diff.


Normal
great diff! just some minor things - lol
  1. 00:32:039 (5,6,1) - movement feels a little awkward, you could re-arrange them a little to smoothen it, example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496185
    Just keep it, not a serious problem imo :D
  2. 01:02:211 (4) - aah, Idk about the rhythm. it doesn't really match the pace of the song, imo. but you could try this isntead, adds a little more variety too: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496221
    I think it's fine, so just keep this part~
  3. 01:11:468 (5) - is this missing a NC? It seems...yes :o
  4. 01:26:211 (3,4) - minor DS issue, please fix? xD OK fixed~
  5. 01:51:754 (5,6) - and every other stack before short reverse-slider - please unstack them! stacking is fine, but the reverse arrows get partly hidden which is super confusing for Normal players! :c
    I love spaaaaaaaaaaammmmmm looooool
  6. 02:14:896 (2) - aah, you could blanket 02:13:868 (5) - so nicely with this, why don't you? ;-; Ahh okok, fixed this~
  7. 02:20:382 (2,4) - the overlap is visible while playing ;-; how about making 4 parallel to 2? looks better to me
    Just keep this part as sooooooo many patterns would be changed if I change this pattern :o
  8. 02:27:925 (5,1,2,3,4) - movement feels a little forced, you could change the pattern to this, works better imo - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496293


Insane
omg, this is really great! I like the diff, one of the few Insanes I can play and it's really fun >w< lol :)
  1. fun or not, playing that long without a break is too much. add a short break (maybe just 3-5 seconds, that's enough) at some point please >-<
    Nope :D
  2. 00:24:668 (7) - ctrl+g for minor flow improvement
    there are some more of this, you don't have to change any, but personally I think it's more comfortable to play that way - 00:30:154 (6) - 00:35:639 (7) - 00:39:754 (8) - 00:49:182 (5) - 01:19:525 (7) - 02:40:782 (7) -
    fixed some of them~
  3. 01:09:154 (3) - feels a little off while playing, not sure why. ;-; maybe cause it start's on the blue tick? (I do that often, too, and regularly get screamed at for it. x-x .. xD) consider switching places with 01:09:068 (2) - so first the reverse slider, then the circle
    OK~~fixed~~
  4. 01:11:811 (2,1) - reverse 2, curve in opposite direction. the curve 1 differently, too and you'll end up with a slightly better flow (imo) .. (and you could rotate 01:12:496 (2) - slightly, too) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496677 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2496687
    This part is a special pattern (symmetry), so I keep this~
  5. 01:13:868 (1) - uuuhm what's with this speed up. it doesn't really match the song I think. there's just no indicator for a speed up like this :/
    Just to show a sudden high-changed voice here~
  6. 01:46:782 (7) - I'd prefer if you split this in slider + circle, cause of the beat on the red tick Nope :P
  7. 02:00:496 (8) - ^ ^
  8. 02:14:211 (8) - rotate by 170° selection cente for better flow :3 Changed 02:14:382 (9) - and better now~
  9. 02:33:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - aaaah, this is so fun to play >w< ~loooool~


that's all I can say. Nice mapset & good luck! :3
Thanks for your modding~~ :)
edit:顺便楼上二位的头像怎么有种野生cp的柑橘233
Mint
Hello Streliteela! from Lexia's queue ~

:idea: General


* Alpaca's Easy has a different title than the others - and also a different artist.

Insane


* 00:26:554 (2,3,4) - Balance out the spacing? Don't really see why (3,4) should be bigger.
* 00:29:811 (4) - A bit nazi, but could you move this up a bit? The slider end of (2), (3) and (4) will have symmetry and it's more visually appealing imo.
* 00:30:839 (3,4,5) - Optional, but you could try and CTRL+G this, for a similar jump movement as 00:28:096 (3,4,5) -
* 00:40:611 (3,4,5) - While playing I found this part a bit strange. Currently the distance between (2,3) is larger than (3,4) - while the clap is on (4) - so in my point of view it should be the opposite. Another problem is, is that the distance between is really small between (3,4), while the jump from (4,5) is really big if you compare them. Reconsidering of placement of (4) could fix this, by placing it somewhere like (48,76)
* 00:42:754 (1) - Well, there is a sound on the blue tick, I'll give you that - but ending a spinner on the blue tick and directly after that having a note? I wouldn't do that if I were you. Shorten the spinner to the red/white tick? You should get more opinions on this though...
* 00:49:182 (5) - CTRL+G this one? I find that the movement of (4) to (5) is a bit awkward here - and you seem to use this CTRL+G pattern a lot in the beginning of the mapset, so why not here owo?
* 00:57:754 (1,2) - CTRL+J these sliders? To me, the flow gets broken at 00:58:096 (2,3) - because the slider end of (2) is pointing the other way, and since this path is overlapped by 00:57:582 (6) - it can be really hard to read this.

* 01:00:154 (6,7,8,9,1) - The spacing is quite low here, and the curve is quite large which makes it even more cramped. Use 0.4x here, just like 00:46:439 (5,6,7,8,1) - and the rest of your map? It looks cleaner and it won't be so squished in like now.
* 01:04:268 (4,5) - I personally think that these are way too close to each other now, so if you could - can you move tweak this a bit? It might just be me though, so you can leave it I guess.
* 01:09:068 (2,3) - Plays really weird... seems like a trick to make people combo break here. Use two kicksliders or a 5-note stream instead? I see why you might do this for variety, but this doesn't play really well ;w;
* 01:14:554 (1) - This one is the only one without a SV change? Quite strange to me o_o
* 01:16:268 (3) - If you NC spam on every SV change anyway, you should add one on this one - since this SV change is actually really noticeable compared to the other ones - I highly recommend you to put one here.
* 01:17:296 (2) - Put a bit down for better flow?
* 01:20:639 (7) - Hmm.. I personally don't hear anything here on the blue tick - remove?
* 01:28:268 - I guess it's more a personal preference, but the soft claps don't fit at all imo, soft whistles sound more soothing and create a better atmosphere for this calm part.
* 02:10:439 (3) - If you do plan on keeping the claps, I'd add here to keep consistent clap hitsounding.
* 02:11:811 (1,2) - The vocals are so strong, and it's the KIAI time anyway, so I don't really understand why you kept DS here, while the jump at (2,3) is really large. I'd have put it the other way around, having the large jump on (1,2) - just like 02:13:182 (5,6,7) -
* 02:13:096 - and 02:24:068 - I do hear a note here, and since you tend to follow all the 1/4 beats in the song, and one here as well? Only 1/2 sliders here is a bit plain x_x

You might want to change the patterns a bit if you do want to add 1/4 notes in between.

* 02:28:182 (6,1,2) - Because of the DS change in your 1/4 rhythms, you have the same space at (6,1) and (1,2) - while (1,2) is 1/2 and the other one is 1/4. The spacing change is already a bit hard and confusing, so having the same distances with different snaps isn't making it any better. Increase the distance between (1,2)?
* 02:29:982 (6) - Consider moving this slider a bit up for a smoother flow.
* 02:28:611 - Useless green line.
* 02:31:011 (1,2,3,4,5) - Is this small spacing intentional? It doesn't look really neat, especially because (3,4,5) overlap with (1) - use larger spacing? - 0.7x would work perfectly fine here.
* 02:48:839 (1,2) - Just my idea, but try blanket pattern here?

Really nice diff - good job!

i'll finish the rest later x_x

Nice mapset though, i'll shoot a star for you :)
Atsuro
Hello, from my queue

[Alpaca's Easy]
  1. 00:57:754 (1,2) - Nazi but blanket can be better
  2. 01:07:696 (3) - Can look and flow a bit more natural, suggestion: Copy and paste 01:06:325 (2) - there, rotate 120 degrees and position like this:

  3. 02:55:011 (5,1) - Spacing error

    It's good, a bit repetitive in some parts but it's ok for the song


[Normal]
  1. 01:11:811 (2) - Missing whistle
  2. 03:16:611 (4) - Rotate this a bit to make it point to 03:17:639 (1) -


Same as easy

[imouto's Hard]
  1. Some of the antijumps you use are very misleading, especially at the beginning of the map
  2. 01:03:925 (2,1) - Aren't these overmapped?
  3. 01:04:439 (1) - Ctrl+g and reposition this to make it lead to the next circle
  4. 01:07:525 - I think a circle with clap hs should be here for the strong beat
  5. 01:13:182 (1,2) - Make the spacing of these two bigger, it's the same as 01:11:811 (1,2,3) - so players might mistake it for the same pattern

    Fun diff
    There is a pretty big jump in difficulty between this and normal, this is all 1/2 and some complex patterns and normal is a lot of 1/1 only except one section, idk if it will cause problems with ranking

[Insane]
  1. Those high spacing streams you use at the kiai are very confusing, consider reducing their spacing a little bit to make it more apparent that they are 1/4, as it is they look like they can be 1/2
  2. 00:42:754 (1,1) - Why end spinner on blue tick? end on white and delete circle , or if you really want to keep the circle end it on the previous white line.
  3. 01:09:068 (2) - ctrl+g and reposition so it leads better to the next slider
  4. 01:13:868 (1) - This speed up is unexpected, reduce the speed or make it more apparent by not stacking other sliders on it
  5. 02:26:211 (5,6) - These sliders are overmapped, they should start on the previous white line imo.

    Nice


Short mod haha
Nice mapset, GL!
jyu

Atsuro wrote:

Hello, from my queue

[Alpaca's Easy]
  1. 00:57:754 (1,2) - Nazi but blanket can be better fix
  2. 01:07:696 (3) - Can look and flow a bit more natural, suggestion: Copy and paste 01:06:325 (2) - there, rotate 120 degrees and position like this: fix

  3. 02:55:011 (5,1) - Spacing error fix

    It's good, a bit repetitive in some parts but it's ok for the song
Thank you for mod! :)
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: TwoThirds & Feint feat. Veela - Epiphany.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 131125
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.200001

[Metadata]
Title:Epiphany (feat. Veela & Feint)
TitleUnicode:Epiphany (feat. Veela & Feint)
Artist:TwoThirds
ArtistUnicode:TwoThirds
Creator:Streliteela
Version:Alpaca's Easy
Source:
Tags:Drum & Bass DnB Electronic imoutosan AlpacaCokelat
BeatmapID:585893
BeatmapSetID:241474

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2.7
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:2.5
SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Topic Starter
Streliteela
Wow I'm back after quite a lot of exams :( Sorry for my late replies :o

appleeaterx wrote:

Hello Streliteela! from Lexia's queue ~ Hihi~~:3

:idea: General


* Alpaca's Easy has a different title than the others - and also a different artist.
Yep, that's because I forgot to tell my gder that I've changed the title and artist. Fixed now~

Insane


* 00:26:554 (2,3,4) - Balance out the spacing? Don't really see why (3,4) should be bigger.
Ok fixed it~
* 00:29:811 (4) - A bit nazi, but could you move this up a bit? The slider end of (2), (3) and (4) will have symmetry and it's more visually appealing imo.
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Yep it looks better~Fixed~
* 00:30:839 (3,4,5) - Optional, but you could try and CTRL+G this, for a similar jump movement as 00:28:096 (3,4,5) -
Just keep it, as I feel the flow become a bit strange after CTRL+G
* 00:40:611 (3,4,5) - While playing I found this part a bit strange. Currently the distance between (2,3) is larger than (3,4) - while the clap is on (4) - so in my point of view it should be the opposite. Another problem is, is that the distance between is really small between (3,4), while the jump from (4,5) is really big if you compare them. Reconsidering of placement of (4) could fix this, by placing it somewhere like (48,76)
Nice suggestion~Fixed this part as you said :)
* 00:42:754 (1) - Well, there is a sound on the blue tick, I'll give you that - but ending a spinner on the blue tick and directly after that having a note? I wouldn't do that if I were you. Shorten the spinner to the red/white tick? You should get more opinions on this though...
OK I've shortened the spinner to the white tick~
* 00:49:182 (5) - CTRL+G this one? I find that the movement of (4) to (5) is a bit awkward here - and you seem to use this CTRL+G pattern a lot in the beginning of the mapset, so why not here owo?
Yep fixed it as you said~owo
* 00:57:754 (1,2) - CTRL+J these sliders? To me, the flow gets broken at 00:58:096 (2,3) - because the slider end of (2) is pointing the other way, and since this path is overlapped by 00:57:582 (6) - it can be really hard to read this.

Really nice suggestion~ Fixed as you said~>w<~
* 01:00:154 (6,7,8,9,1) - The spacing is quite low here, and the curve is quite large which makes it even more cramped. Use 0.4x here, just like 00:46:439 (5,6,7,8,1) - and the rest of your map? It looks cleaner and it won't be so squished in like now.
OK~0.4x as you said~ ;)
* 01:04:268 (4,5) - I personally think that these are way too close to each other now, so if you could - can you move tweak this a bit? It might just be me though, so you can leave it I guess.
OK~I've tried my best to move them away from each other (just move very little distance)
* 01:09:068 (2,3) - Plays really weird... seems like a trick to make people combo break here. Use two kicksliders or a 5-note stream instead? I see why you might do this for variety, but this doesn't play really well ;w;
Yes this part is really annoyed...I fixed this part again and again (but it still weird (╯‵□′)╯︵┻━┻) Now I've fixed it again and hope it could be better after my changing :o
* 01:14:554 (1) - This one is the only one without a SV change? Quite strange to me o_o
oops I forgot to cancel the SV change after fixed the pattern here last time...Now fixed~ :D
* 01:16:268 (3) - If you NC spam on every SV change anyway, you should add one on this one - since this SV change is actually really noticeable compared to the other ones - I highly recommend you to put one here.
OK added~
* 01:17:296 (2) - Put a bit down for better flow?
Yes sir~ :lol:
* 01:20:639 (7) - Hmm.. I personally don't hear anything here on the blue tick - remove?
It sounds strange after I remove the note on the blue tick...so I just keep it and wait for more suggestions from others.
* 01:28:268 - I guess it's more a personal preference, but the soft claps don't fit at all imo, soft whistles sound more soothing and create a better atmosphere for this calm part.
Yes really, changed all soft claps to soft whistles as you said~
* 02:10:439 (3) - If you do plan on keeping the claps, I'd add here to keep consistent clap hitsounding.
Clap sounds a bit strange so I add soft whistle on 02:10:268 (1,5) -
* 02:11:811 (1,2) - The vocals are so strong, and it's the KIAI time anyway, so I don't really understand why you kept DS here, while the jump at (2,3) is really large. I'd have put it the other way around, having the large jump on (1,2) - just like 02:13:182 (5,6,7) -
Oh and about this part...just for a little transition between the clam part and kiai, so players may not feel a sudden huge change of DS imo.
* 02:13:096 - and 02:24:068 - I do hear a note here, and since you tend to follow all the 1/4 beats in the song, and one here as well? Only 1/2 sliders here is a bit plain x_x

You might want to change the patterns a bit if you do want to add 1/4 notes in between.

Still not sure how to change the patterns here...so I just keep this part and wait for more suggestions
* 02:28:182 (6,1,2) - Because of the DS change in your 1/4 rhythms, you have the same space at (6,1) and (1,2) - while (1,2) is 1/2 and the other one is 1/4. The spacing change is already a bit hard and confusing, so having the same distances with different snaps isn't making it any better. Increase the distance between (1,2)?
Nice idea and this is the most feasible suggestions I've received so far. Fixed as you said~
* 02:29:982 (6) - Consider moving this slider a bit up for a smoother flow.
OK fixed~
* 02:28:611 - Useless green line. Fixed~
* 02:31:011 (1,2,3,4,5) - Is this small spacing intentional? It doesn't look really neat, especially because (3,4,5) overlap with (1) - use larger spacing? - 0.7x would work perfectly fine here.
Good idea~fixed as you said~
* 02:48:839 (1,2) - Just my idea, but try blanket pattern here?
Still want to keep my own idea about this pattern, just keep it~ :P

Really nice diff - good job! Thanks~ :)

i'll finish the rest later x_x

Nice mapset though, i'll shoot a star for you :)

Really nice suggestions~ fixed almost all as you said~~Thanks a lot for your perfect mod and star~~ :)

Atsuro wrote:

Hello, from my queue Hi~~:3

[Normal]
  1. 01:11:811 (2) - Missing whistle Added~
  2. 03:16:611 (4) - Rotate this a bit to make it point to 03:17:639 (1) -
    Still want to make a parallel pattern (03:14:896 (1,4) - )


Same as easy

[imouto's Hard]

There is a pretty big jump in difficulty between this and normal, this is all 1/2 and some complex patterns and normal is a lot of 1/1 only except one section, idk if it will cause problems with ranking
Yep this Hard diff is really hard, so I add a new hard diff from Frey, which is only 2.99 stars. And now I changed imouto's Hard to a light insane diff. I think it's the best way to solve this problem.

[Insane]
  1. Those high spacing streams you use at the kiai are very confusing, consider reducing their spacing a little bit to make it more apparent that they are 1/4, as it is they look like they can be 1/2
    /Sorry I don't want to reduce the spacing of the streams. To solve this problem, I increase the spacing of some 1/2 part to differentiate them from those 1/4 part.
  2. 00:42:754 (1,1) - Why end spinner on blue tick? end on white and delete circle , or if you really want to keep the circle end it on the previous white line.
    OK I've move the end to the previous white line.
  3. 01:09:068 (2) - ctrl+g and reposition so it leads better to the next slider
    Made some little changes here~
  4. 01:13:868 (1) - This speed up is unexpected, reduce the speed or make it more apparent by not stacking other sliders on it
    Haha nope it's a special pattern here as there's a sudden high voice. Really hard to expect lol~
  5. 02:26:211 (5,6) - These sliders are overmapped, they should start on the previous white line imo.
    ehh I don't think they are overmapped...so just keep this part and wait for more suggestions.
    Nice


Short mod haha
Nice mapset, GL!
Thanks for your modding~~ :)

Updated a new Hard GD from Frey. Thanks a lot~ :)
Leorda
Hello

[Alpaca's Easy]
02:22:782 (1) - Add clap? You probably forgot it
02:37:868 (3) - Add whistle at repeating slider?

[Normal]
00:34:096 (3) - Spacing error
00:46:782 (1) - ^
02:12:496 (3) - ^
02:14:896 (2) - Add whistle at tail slider? You probably forgot it
03:13:868 (5) - Spacing error
03:16:268 (3) - Move up so it don't looks almost offscreen

[Frey's Hard]
* AR -1? Your current one seems bit fast

[imouto's Insane]
00:26:554 (1) - Having an anti-jump like this can cause players were confuse to read if this a 1/2 note or 1/1 note. You should move further away from previous one, to make it readable for timing and spacing
00:26:554 (1) - ^
00:39:239 (2) - ^
00:41:982 (2) - ^
00:57:754 (1) - Remove whistle at repeating slider
01:49:868 (1) - I think this spinner were too long for this diff. You need to remap this part
02:32:725 - Add note here?

Good luck
Frey

Leorda wrote:

[Frey's Hard]
* AR -1? Your current one seems bit fast

In my opinion, I think AR7 makes it harder. So I don't really want to change the AR
However, if more people mention this, I will think about it.
Thanks for your mod :)
Topic Starter
Streliteela

Leorda wrote:

Hello Wow Hi~~:3

[Alpaca's Easy]
02:22:782 (1) - Add clap? You probably forgot it Added~
02:37:868 (3) - Add whistle at repeating slider? Added~

[Normal]
00:34:096 (3) - Spacing error oops Fixed~
00:46:782 (1) - ^ Fixed~
02:12:496 (3) - ^ Fixed~
02:14:896 (2) - Add whistle at tail slider? You probably forgot it Yep added~
03:13:868 (5) - Spacing error Fixed~
03:16:268 (3) - Move up so it don't looks almost offscreen OK moved it up~

Good luck
Thanks a lot for your modding~~ :)
Famous
Hello my friend~ (stolen from your mod LOL!)

Alpaca's Easy
  1. Check AiMod. 02:33:754 - Kiai time is toggled on for less than 15 seconds. All the other difficulties doesn't have that warning. Fix it.
  2. 00:29:296 (2,1) - Blanket can be improved slightly.
  3. 00:37:525 (3,1) - ^
  4. 01:00:496 (1,2) - Improve blanket.
  5. 01:05:982 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved.
  6. 01:09:068 (2) - Move that slider to x:104 ; y:104 to keep the flow with 01:08:725 (1).
  7. 01:49:868 (1,2,1,2) - Not sure about that part. The sliders are really weird shaped and 01:49:868 (1,2) overlap.
  8. 02:00:839 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - That part doesn't sound right. You should snap 02:02:382 (2) to 02:02:211 and repeat it. Same with 02:05:125 (2,2).
  9. 02:12:496 - Feels like a note is missing.
  10. 02:13:868 - Also feels like a note is missing.
  11. 02:16:954 - Again note is missing. Snap 02:17:296 (1) to 02:16:954 and 02:17:639 (2) to 02:17:296. Then add a note 02:19:011.
  12. 02:27:925 - Add a note.
  13. 02:52:268 (2,1) - Slider doesn't flow with 02:52:954 (1). Also 02:53:296 (2) doesn't flow with 02:52:954 (1).
Normal
  1. 00:26:896 (6,1) - Improve blanket.
  2. 00:41:296 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:44:725 (1,3,4) - ^
  4. 00:53:639 (4,6) - ^
  5. 00:53:639 (4,1) - Not sure about that stack. Looks very weird to me. 01:03:239 (1,3) - That stack looks way better.
  6. 00:58:439 (3,4) - Improve blanket.
  7. 01:03:239 (1,2) - ^
  8. 01:10:782 (4,1) - ^
  9. 01:15:582 (4,5) - ^
  10. 01:24:496 (5,6,1) - The placement of that pattern doesn't look nice. You tried to stack 01:23:125 (3,1). If you want to stack them, try to improve the placement.
  11. 01:49:868 (1,2,4) - Improve blanket.
  12. 01:50:896 (3) - This circle sounds really weird. Snap 01:51:068 (4) to 01:51:068 just like 01:53:639 (2,3).
  13. 02:08:725 (7) - Make that slider longer. Slider end at 02:09:068. Then Snap the spinner to 02:09:239 and fix the end of the spinner.
  14. 02:13:868 (5,1,2) - Blanket can be improved.
  15. 02:22:782 (1,2) - Improve blanket.
  16. 02:44:725 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  17. 02:55:011 (4,1) - ^
  18. 03:11:468 (6,1) - ^
Frey's Hard
  1. 00:31:868 (2,3) - Imperfect flow.
  2. 00:34:782 (2,3) - Improve blanket.
  3. 00:46:782 (1,2) - Weird flow.
  4. 00:48:154 (1,2) - Improve blanket.
  5. 00:59:468 (2,3) - ^
  6. 01:00:496 (1,2,3) - There's no reason to use a different spacing. Move 01:01:354 (2) to x:48 ; y:320.
  7. 01:08:211 (3,4) - Improve blanket.
  8. 01:14:211 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved.
  9. 01:18:325 (1,2) - Improve blanket.
  10. 01:51:754 (1,2,3) - Same as 01:00:496 (1,2,3).
  11. 02:11:125 to 02:11:811 - I miss something here... It feels so empty.
  12. 02:14:554 (1,2,3) - I already made my point. Fix spacing.
  13. 02:19:525 (3,1) - Improve blanket.
  14. 02:24:496 (3,4) - ^
  15. 02:36:496 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
  16. 02:51:239 (3,1) - Improve blanket.
  17. 02:58:439 (1,2,3) - Spacing! D:
  18. 03:06:154 (3,4) - Improve blanket.
  19. 03:13:525 (1) - Ctrl + g.
  20. 03:16:611 (2,3) - Improve blanket.
  21. 03:17:125 (3,4) - That jump.
  22. 03:17:639 (1) - NC not necessary at the end but it's better you leave that NC, because it's better readable.
imouto's Insane
  1. What about AR8.5?
  2. 00:22:096 (1,2) - I'm not a fan from this kind of stacking. It doesn't look nice imo.
  3. 00:32:211 (5) - Move that slider to x:216 ; y:292.
  4. 00:32:896 (7,1) - Blanket can be slightly improved.
  5. 00:34:268 (4) - Move that circle to x:420 ; y:348 for better flow.
  6. 00:35:468 (8,1) - Improve blanket.
  7. Add a note 00:44:211, 00:44:382 and 00:44:554.
  8. 00:49:354 - A triple stream would fit here. Add a note 00:49:354 and 00:49:439.
  9. 00:59:468 (1,2,3,4,5) - Keep the spacing of 1.2x.
  10. 01:49:868 (1) - Map this part instead of adding a spinner.
  11. 02:32:725 - Add a note.
  12. 02:33:754 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - I don't like this pattern. It's playable but it looks very ugly imo. Same with the other part that use the same pattern.
Insane

We already talked ingame about that difficulty.
  1. 01:11:468 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1) - The SV is not necessary.
  2. 02:28:011 (4,5,6) - You really shouldn't use THAT huge spacing. I know there are ranked maps which uses big spacing at streams, but it doesn't fit here.
  3. 02:38:982 (2,3,4) - ^
  4. 02:39:839 (3) - ^
  5. 02:49:954 (2,3,4) - ^

Good mapset. good luck! :D
Frey

-Famous- wrote:

Frey's Hard
00:31:868 (2,3) - Imperfect flow. Fixed, changed the angle a bit
00:34:782 (2,3) - Improve blanket. Fixed
00:46:782 (1,2) - Weird flow. ...how?
00:48:154 (1,2) - Improve blanket. Fixed
00:59:468 (2,3) - ^ Fixed
01:00:496 (1,2,3) - There's no reason to use a different spacing. Move 01:01:354 (2) to x:48 ; y:320. Well, let me think a whlie
01:08:211 (3,4) - Improve blanket. Fixed
01:14:211 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved. Fixed
01:18:325 (1,2) - Improve blanket. Not so obvious I think
01:51:754 (1,2,3) - Same as 01:00:496 (1,2,3). I don;t want to change this, because it's fun
02:11:125 to 02:11:811 - I miss something here... It feels so empty. I use the same rhythm as Normal, so I think it's fine

02:14:554 (1,2,3) - I already made my point. Fix spacing.
02:36:496 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
02:58:439 (1,2,3) - Spacing! D:
Err, now that it's in Kiai, why don't we increase the difficulty a little?

02:19:525 (3,1) - Improve blanket. Fixed
02:24:496 (3,4) - ^ not so obvious
02:51:239 (3,1) - Improve blanket. not so obvious too
03:06:154 (3,4) - Improve blanket. Fixed
03:13:525 (1) - Ctrl + g. It's fun, so I wait for more suggestion about this
03:16:611 (2,3) - Improve blanket. Fixed
03:17:125 (3,4) - That jump. Is it overmap? I wonder
03:17:639 (1) - NC not necessary at the end but it's better you leave that NC, because it's better readable. like 01:27:925 (1), even if I don't fix, it's still readable.
Thanks for you mod! :)

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360,96,164211,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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236,284,167125,2,0,P|264:268|312:252,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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124,228,170211,6,0,P|104:168|80:76,2,140,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,284,171068,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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484,144,172439,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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260,232,173982,2,0,P|248:188|248:152,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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232,24,177925,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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80,276,179296,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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388,380,180154,2,0,P|411:318|404:240,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,200,180668,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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488,88,181182,6,0,L|320:60,2,140,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
477,170,182039,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,228,182211,2,0,P|352:240|320:240,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,168,182554,6,0,P|265:164|231:155,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,124,182896,2,0,P|144:56|200:16,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,16,183411,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,98,183582,2,0,P|302:133|299:168,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,240,183925,6,0,B|180:216|176:256|96:232,2,140,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,324,184782,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,356,184954,2,0,P|108:364|96:364,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,324,185296,6,0,P|28:252|28:240,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,172,185639,2,0,P|72:160|172:128,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,208,186154,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,276,186325,2,0,P|152:244|144:192,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,131,186668,6,0,P|224:104|296:132,2,140,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,208,187525,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,248,187696,2,0,P|372:240|400:236,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,224,188039,6,0,P|466:189|461:154,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,72,188382,2,0,P|364:64|276:52,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,32,188896,2,0,P|156:36|128:40,2,70,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,176,190268,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,248,190439,2,0,P|164:260|128:264,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,220,190782,6,0,P|40:272|32:292,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,360,191125,2,0,P|132:368|204:372,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,352,191639,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,332,191811,2,0,L|340:256,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,180,192154,6,0,P|240:200|168:212,2,140,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,208,193011,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,112,193182,2,0,L|376:92,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,32,193525,6,0,L|355:12,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,56,193868,2,0,P|184:108|212:184,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,276,194382,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,248,194554,2,0,P|388:252|424:256,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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412,332,195754,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,376,195925,2,0,P|324:324|308:280,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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300,116,196611,2,0,P|372:100|428:144,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,184,197125,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,48,197296,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,126,197468,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,193,197639,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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