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nano.RIPE - Fault Finder

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Milan-
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Milan-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, January 22, 2015 at 2:44:23 AM

Artist: nano.RIPE
Title: Fault Finder
Tags: Kibbleru Gaia Lantis single Toumei na Sekai 透明な世界 short version
BPM: 190
Filesize: 3097kb
Play Time: 01:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.63 stars, 103 notes)
  2. Gaia's Normal (2.15 stars, 168 notes)
  3. Hard (3.26 stars, 263 notes)
  4. Insane (4.12 stars, 305 notes)
  5. Quib's Insane (4.54 stars, 311 notes)
Download: nano.RIPE - Fault Finder
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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a-aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
nano.RIPE <3

Special thanks to Gaia and Kibbleru

Last edited by Milan- , edited 9 times in total.
Kibbleru
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Kibbleru
ba dum tsszz
Milan-
1,473 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Milan-

Kibbleru wrote:

ba dum tsszz
wut?

give me stars plz
Kibbleru
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Kibbleru

Milan- wrote:

Kibbleru wrote:

ba dum tsszz
wut?

give me stars plz
i never shoot my stars >;3
xxdeathx
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Joined July 2013
xxdeathx
You should at least for GD's >_>
Milan-
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Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Milan-
death mod my map plz, i think i got tickets from u lol
Yauxo
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Joined June 2011
Yauxo


Hi there, coming from your request in our/my Modding Queue. Be so kind to take some minutes (or seconds, lets be honest) to answer to my mods. Dont be a dick and just "lol didnt changed stuffs hurr durr" without an explanation. If I told you something that was against your map, tell me why. This way mapper and modder both gain something.

Unrankable
Suggestion
Rather important change
Not so important change/small note or opinion
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[General]
■ A-AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

[Quib]
■ 00:13:132 (2) - I have to say, I think the movement from 1 to 2 is kinda weird
■ 00:15:185 (1) - Curve the other way, blanket 00:15:658 (2) - 's tail?
■ 00:16:290 (4) - ctrl+g? Flow would be better imo (Eventually ctrl+g 00:16:606 (1) - as well)
■ 00:17:711 (1) - The downbeat should be mapped/clickable imo


■ 00:20:079 (1) - Basically ^, Slider should start 1/2 later (or do something like 00:09:500 (4,5,6) - )
■ 00:36:027 (2,3) - It's actually a little confusing that you use multiple timings, but the same spacing for all of them. Space the ones with the longer break further away

This is 1/1


This is 1/2


There's almost no difference to be seen

■ 00:48:500 (1) - remove NC and place it on 2?
■ Either remove the NC on 00:47:711 (1) - or add one on 00:51:342 (2) - , as they're basically the same thing
■ 01:10:132 (2) - ctrl+g?

[Insane]
■ I think HP 6 would be a better call here

■ 00:24:816 (3,4) - tilt them just a little bit?
■ 01:04:290 (4) - maybe like this?


■ 01:10:290 (3,4) - ctrl+g for a rotation/circular flow?
■ 01:16:921 (5,1) - Tails are not stacked properly
■ 01:32:395 (1) - drum sampleset sounds good here as well, try it out

[Hard]
■ Hp 5

■ 00:12:658 (1,2) - Blankets could be improved
■ 00:39:974 (3) - move slightly to the right so that it doesnt touch 2
■ 00:47:553 (4) - 00:50:079 (4) - should be mapped like 00:45:185 (4) - imo. The break fits very well

■ Looks good :3

[Gaia]
■ 00:48:816 (5,1) - Blanket these properly
■ 00:51:342 (5,1) - ^
■ 00:59:553 (1) - A quick respace + moving it a little bit up would look much better

■ Aimod is right

[Easy]
■ 00:03:342 (3) - I would shorten it and place a long Slider on 00:03:974. This would support the music more and avoid awkward mid-sound Sliders like 00:04:606 (1) -


■ 00:13:447 (3) - ^
■ 00:28:921 (4,5) - They are really far down, but they're probably still okay. Though, if you find a way to push these up more, do it.


■ 01:29:079 (3,4) - Blanket?

Looks good :3
pkk
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Joined November 2013
pkk
whats up boys
Milan-
1,473 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Milan-
moom

Yauxo wrote:



Hi there, coming from your request in our/my Modding Queue. Be so kind to take some minutes (or seconds, lets be honest) to answer to my mods. Dont be a dick and just "lol didnt changed stuffs hurr durr" without an explanation. If I told you something that was against your map, tell me why. This way mapper and modder both gain something.

Unrankable
Suggestion
Rather important change
Not so important change/small note or opinion
(copy paste end)

[General]
■ A-AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA kanashimonoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

[Insane]
■ I think HP 6 would be a better call here

■ 00:24:816 (3,4) - tilt them just a little bit? uh rotated a bit
■ 01:04:290 (4) - maybe like this? Uhm i like mine more;w;

■ 01:10:290 (3,4) - ctrl+g for a rotation/circular flow? I feel better with zig zag mostly cuz the following combo
■ 01:16:921 (5,1) - Tails are not stacked properly
■ 01:32:395 (1) - drum sampleset sounds good here as well, try it out if u meant to use finish drum.. it sounds bad to meo.o

[Hard]
■ Hp 5

■ 00:12:658 (1,2) - Blankets could be improved fk blanket
■ 00:39:974 (3) - move slightly to the right so that it doesnt touch 2
■ 00:47:553 (4) - 00:50:079 (4) - should be mapped like 00:45:185 (4) - imo. The break fits very well Uhm i used slider cuz vocals.. ill reconsider this again ><

■ Looks good :3

[Easy]
■ 00:03:342 (3) - I would shorten it and place a long Slider on 00:03:974. This would support the music more and avoid awkward mid-sound Sliders like 00:04:606 (1) - I made something different:3


■ 00:13:447 (3) - ^
■ 00:28:921 (4,5) - They are really far down, but they're probably still okay. Though, if you find a way to push these up more, do it.

■ 01:29:079 (3,4) - Blanket? lol didnt changed stuffs hurr durr ..it's fine

Looks good :3

Thank you yauxo<3


wtf noone give me stars;w;
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
sheela
Hey again, Milan-!

General

  1. This song comes from an anime called グラスリップ, and in English, Glasslip. Add the original name in the Source field, and the name in English in the tags.

Easy

  1. 00:41:869 (4) - The end sounds really weird. In easy difficulties, we usually add a circle and start / end a slider on the white ticks, but there's exceptions and be on the red ticks. In this case, I don't hear a beat on the red tick (there's a beat before this by a short ms, but it's not recommended for an easy), and it makes it sounded weird. From what I see to the other rhythms, you follow the vocals. So, extend the slider to the upbeat (00:42:816 - ), and it should fix it.
  2. 00:47:553 (2) - Due to the size of the hitcircles, this circle touches the bar. I would just move it more lower.
  3. 00:49:448 (2,3) - This is not something to edit, but I just want to say that it sounded weird at first, because they weren't following the vocals. But now, it doesn't sound bad because of the guitars and drum in the background. I was actually going to suggest you to follow the vocals by adding 1/1 sliders, but you can just skip this.
  4. 01:17:237 (3) - The repeat is awkward from where there's no beat that the repeat supports, and it can result a weird sound. I would replace this by the rhythm of 01:05:869 (2,3) -, as it will hit the essential beats.

Hard

  1. 00:02:553 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved, unless it's intended. This also applies to 00:12:658 (1,2) .
  2. 00:21:342 (5) - Needs perfection. It's actually nazi, but the stack is a tiny bit off.
  3. 00:45:816 (6) - For this slider, I'd replace the head and tail by two circles.
  4. 00:47:553 (4) - I would delete this slider because it breaks the pattern in the rhythm. This also applies to 00:50:079 (4) .
  5. 01:15:343 (3,4) - Switch the places? I think the flow would make a neater "line".

Insane

  1. 00:10:606 (2) - Remove the node in the middle of the curve, so it could be straight? I didn't like the way how the curve looked. If you do remove it, move the last node to x:217 y:378.
  2. 00:21:342 (3,1) - When I first testplayed, the flow of these was a bit uncomfortable, because the curve of (1) isn't following (3). I'd move 00:21:658 (1,2) to where the short slider will shoot, like x:37 y:250.
  3. 00:41:553 (4) - I'd put this circle out of (3)'s tail so we could differentiate the rhythm; when you stack regularly the 1/2 rhythms, you'll trick the player's mind if the stack is a 1/4 rhythm.
  4. 00:55:448 (5,1) - This sounds pretty weird to me. You should follow the guitar here. Try this rhythm?
    SPOILER
    This also applies to 00:57:974 (5,1) .
  5. 01:00:816 (1,2,3,4,5) - Add more distance between them. It sounds like a 1/4 stream.
  6. 01:14:395 (4) - I'd rotate more the curve to the left, with the selection centre, because the flow between 01:14:079 (3,4) would go better.

Gaia's Normal

Hey Gaia!
  1. 00:21:658 (1) - Flip it vertically so the slider could shoot to the up, because the next slider is in the upper area?
  2. 00:36:816 (1) - Flip it horizontally? It's a question of aesthetic. A pattern with two sliders curving to the opposite direction of the other looks nice.
  3. 00:45:974 - There's a missing piece here. I would keep the same rhythm here, yet add a something that will touch the different beats. So, I'd add a circle on 00:45:974 like you did to the others, and a slider on 00:46:132 to 00:46:606 so it could go with the different ones.

Quib's Insane

Hey Kibbleru!
  1. 00:20:079 (1) - I would move this to a 1/2 of a beat, and add a circle on where the head was, because it sounds weird and it would follow the long guitar note that starts on 00:20:237 .
  2. 00:26:395 (3) - The distance between this from (2) can make confusion to players, because there's 1/2 rhythm pattern that has similar distance to 00:25:921 (2,3) and it's used in the beginning, so they might remember how it looked and repeat the same process. You can move this to where the tail can make a blanket with the next slider. This applies to 00:36:500 (3) .
  3. 00:28:606 (2) - Switch the head and tail? I think it would make a great flow with the previous slider. If you do, I'd put 00:29:869 (3) to (1), 00:29:237 (1) to (2) and 00:29:553 (2) to (3).
  4. 00:45:974 (1,2) - I think it's only me, I hear something that isn't right. I'd emphasize 00:45:974 with a circle, because the beat is cut after a few ms and a circle is fitting with the cut, and a head of a slider on 00:46:132 to hit on the new beat.
  5. 00:48:500 (1) - Move this a bit further from (4) like you did to the similar pattern 00:43:448 (1) -?
This should be it! I hope it helped. Good luck from qualifying this map! Here's a star (because you want it badly) to boost a little to the upper status!
Gaia
2,808 posts
Joined May 2013
Gaia
@Yauxo: all fixed, thanks :3

sheela901 wrote:

Gaia's Normal

Hey Gaia! heeeey sheela! C:
  1. 00:21:658 (1) - Flip it vertically so the slider could shoot to the up, because the next slider is in the upper area? I'll curve it the other way i guess
  2. 00:36:816 (1) - Flip it horizontally? It's a question of aesthetic. A pattern with two sliders curving to the opposite direction of the other looks nice.this was intentionalll sorry
  3. 00:45:974 - There's a missing piece here. I would keep the same rhythm here, yet add a something that will touch the different beats. So, I'd add a circle on 00:45:974 like you did to the others, and a slider on 00:46:132 to 00:46:606 so it could go with the different ones. yeah i mapped that downbeat!!
Thanks for modding~~

wheeeee
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Fault Finder.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 61763
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:Fault Finder
TitleUnicode:フォルトファインダー
Artist:nano.RIPE
ArtistUnicode:nano.RIPE
Creator:Milan-
Version:Gaia's Normal
Source:
Tags:Kibbleru Gaia Lantis single Toumei na Sekai 透明な世界
BeatmapID:557687
BeatmapSetID:241464

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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
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Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,844 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru
fixed some. didn't fix most of the ctrl g suggestions though cuz i break flow on purpose.

did some changes to nc

rhythm keep the same cuz i like to emphasize percussions

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Tags:Kibbleru Gaia Lantis single Toumei na Sekai 透明な世界
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Milan-
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Milan-
sheela901

sheela901 wrote:

Hey again, Milan-! Hellow:3

General

  1. This song comes from an anime called グラスリップ, and in English, Glasslip. Add the original name in the Source field, and the name in English in the tags.It's from the same single that toumei na sekai but it isn't from that anime(otherwise blame gaia /w\)

Easy

  1. 00:41:869 (4) - The end sounds really weird. In easy difficulties, we usually add a circle and start / end a slider on the white ticks, but there's exceptions and be on the red ticks. In this case, I don't hear a beat on the red tick (there's a beat before this by a short ms, but it's not recommended for an easy), and it makes it sounded weird. From what I see to the other rhythms, you follow the vocals. So, extend the slider to the upbeat (00:42:816 - ), and it should fix it. i didnt want to confuse people starting the new rhythm by extending the slider 1/2.. but ok iguess
  2. 00:47:553 (2) - Due to the size of the hitcircles, this circle touches the bar. I would just move it more lower.k
  3. 00:49:448 (2,3) - This is not something to edit, but I just want to say that it sounded weird at first, because they weren't following the vocals. But now, it doesn't sound bad because of the guitars and drum in the background. I was actually going to suggest you to follow the vocals by adding 1/1 sliders, but you can just skip this.xd well here i should've used the same rhythm as b4 but i wanted to add variation i guess
  4. 01:17:237 (3) - The repeat is awkward from where there's no beat that the repeat supports, and it can result a weird sound. I would replace this by the rhythm of 01:05:869 (2,3) -, as it will hit the essential beats. it follows vocals just fine to me.. cuz aaaaa-a-aaa

Hard

  1. 00:02:553 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved, unless it's intended. This also applies to 00:12:658 (1,2) . fk blankets
  2. 00:21:342 (5) - Needs perfection. It's actually nazi, but the stack is a tiny bit off. editor move this things everytime;w; cuz i dont use grid snap.. but it doesnt affect gameplayanyways
  3. 00:45:816 (6) - For this slider, I'd replace the head and tail by two circles. i dont wanna add more circles tbh cuz 190 bpm.. ill reconsider this, this section gave me a hard time;w;
  4. 00:47:553 (4) - I would delete this slider because it breaks the pattern in the rhythm. This also applies to 00:50:079 (4) . okey yauxo also said something like that, so yaa
  5. 01:15:343 (3,4) - Switch the places? I think the flow would make a neater "line".seems good;o

Insane

  1. 00:10:606 (2) - Remove the node in the middle of the curve, so it could be straight? I didn't like the way how the curve looked. If you do remove it, move the last node to x:217 y:378. uhm i made it less curved instead
  2. 00:21:342 (3,1) - When I first testplayed, the flow of these was a bit uncomfortable, because the curve of (1) isn't following (3). I'd move 00:21:658 (1,2) to where the short slider will shoot, like x:37 y:250. Uhm it's fine.. i use dropoff sometimes>w<
  3. 00:41:553 (4) - I'd put this circle out of (3)'s tail so we could differentiate the rhythm; when you stack regularly the 1/2 rhythms, you'll trick the player's mind if the stack is a 1/4 rhythm.
  4. 00:55:448 (5,1) - This sounds pretty weird to me. You should follow the guitar here. Try this rhythm? there's a strong sound 00:55:763 - that i want to map, i even added a whistle
    SPOILER
    This also applies to 00:57:974 (5,1) .
  5. 01:00:816 (1,2,3,4,5) - Add more distance between them. It sounds like a 1/4 stream. uhmill use repeated slider for this instead
  6. 01:14:395 (4) - I'd rotate more the curve to the left, with the selection centre, because the flow between 01:14:079 (3,4) would go better. it's just fine to me

This should be it! I hope it helped. Good luck from qualifying this map! Here's a star (because you want it badly) to boost a little to the upper status! Lol i was just kidding about that xd but thanks:3

Thank u very much >w<

Updated all thissht
CSLM
1,058 posts
Joined May 2013
CSLM
hi, as request

Unrankeable
Important
Suggestion

General

  • offset: 00:00:162 -

Easy

  1. 00:35:237 (6,1) - no estoy seguro de que este stack sea apropiado para un easy (considerando que los newbies se podrian confundir presionando el slider antes), te sugiero que lo cambies porfa
  2. 01:23:237 (3) - porque no cambias este slider a uno recto, siento mejor el flow de esa manera
  3. 01:25:763 (3) - ^

Gaia's Normal

  1. 01:00:185 (2,3) - improve blanket?

Hard

  1. 00:02:553 (1,2) - blanket?
  2. 00:12:658 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:21:658 (1) - porque no haces este slider mas suave? (considerando que la vocal tambien lo es)
  4. 00:32:711 (3) - ^
  5. 00:46:448 (8,1) - *nazi* mal stackeado, trata de mover (8) o (1) sin el Grid Snap
  6. 00:52:606 (3) - este slider da un mejor flow y una mejor conexion con los siguientes objetos si le cambias la curvatura y lo mueves a x216 y132, se veria asi: http://puu.sh/dEaFl/930100fa82.jpg
  7. 01:00:816 (1,2,3) - esto no me parece, ya que el ritmo 1/3 empieza en 01:01:132 - , no antes, sugiero que extiendas (1) hasta donde empieza el ritmo 1/3 (01:01:132 - ) y borrar el hitcircle (que seria (3) ), algo como esto: http://puu.sh/dEbbU/de5c329ab9.jpg
  8. 01:02:079 (1,3) - mal stackeado
  9. 01:08:395 (1,2) - blanket?

fycholov... i mean Quib's Insane

  1. 00:01:921 (2,3,4,5) - i feel a little less confusing and a little more of flow if you move (5) where is (2)
  2. 00:03:658 (5,1) - ugly overlap imo, make it more visible plzz
  3. 01:00:816 (1,2,3) - the same thing what i say in hard (but in spanish orz), i don't feel apropiated add 5 notes of 1/3 rhythm when there is only 4, i suggest make a rhythm like the image in hard
  4. 01:13:132 (4) - ctrl g?
  5. 01:28:606 (1,2,3) - this a little confusing imo, try to make it more closer plzz

Insane

  1. 00:04:606 (3) - porque no mejor colocas este slider curvo?
  2. 00:06:500 (1,2) - esto es confuso (considerando que antes no habias usado un antijump), te sugiero que añadas una nota entre estos 2 (en 00:06:974 - ) asi es menos confuso
  3. 00:07:763 (1,2) - ^
  4. 00:16:606 (1,2) - ^
  5. 00:17:869 (1,2) - ^
  6. 00:26:711 (1,3) - mal stackeado
  7. 00:41:237 (3,4) - ^
  8. 00:44:869 (4,4) - ^ no se si este fue intensional
  9. 01:00:816 (1,2,3,4,5) - la misma cosa en hard y fycholover's insane
  10. 01:16:921 (5,1) - mal stackeado, no se si este fue intensional
  11. 01:27:342 (2) - porque no mejor extiendes este slider hasta que la cola llege a la linea de y? asi los objetos siguientes se quedan tambien en esa linea

nano.RIPE <3
GL with rank
choo choo~
MirinH
726 posts
Joined January 2013
MirinH
from paper modding team
General
offset should be around 165
add "short ver" to tag
Easy
  1. 01:11:869 (3,2) - fix stack plz
Normal
dont have any special idea
Hard
  1. 00:12:658 (1,2) - doesnt feel really well, fix it plz
  2. 00:21:342 (5,1) - stack
  3. 01:05:711 (1,2,3) - fix blanket
  4. 01:08:395 (1,2) - ^
  5. 01:10:606 (5,1) - idk but if u can fix it will be great
Insane
  1. 00:01:448 (1) - most of your 1/1 slider in this diff are like this, try to use some other pattern and improve your map's quality
  2. 00:06:500 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i dont like people to copy and paste their pattern and map with it, but feel free if u want to keep
  3. 00:10:448 (1,3) - stack
  4. 00:14:079 (1,3) - if can plz do a blanket
  5. 00:16:606 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same with the second one
  6. 01:13:448 (1,2) - if can plz blanket
Quib's Insane
  1. GG cant mod Kibbleru
gl
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,844 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru
aaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

something something

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
zorefire
429 posts
Joined October 2012
zorefire
From Modding queue
[Overall]Always map on Tiny Grid always always always :D I would change all of the grids to tiny while your at it
I don't know if you'll like it but if you use this image for your background it will look much better http://s1.1zoom.me/big3/96/388092-blackangel.jpg?m=1
[Easy]
Make the distance closer for these areas. Not too much but just a little bit - 00:25:448, 00:30:500
00:17:868 (3) - make this straight and move the last point to the left a little like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2375733 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2375734
01:09:658 (3,1) - Distance too far
01:11:869 (3,4) - make these come together like this [url]01:11:869 (3,4) -[/url]
01:13:448 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2375761
01:29:079 (3,4) - I don't know about this
01:30:185 - bring closer slightly
01:29:869 - from here to 01:32:395 - I would recommend a slider
[Normal]
00:02:869 (4,5) - make this pattern like 00:05:395 (4,5,6)
00:45:185 (2,3,4,5,6) - too much for normal
01:29:869 - spinner to finish please
[Hard]
Change grid to tiny
00:25:921 (4,5) - keep going with the rhythm remove this
00:36:026 (4,5) - ^
01:29:869 - spinner for finish

Overall good map change all grids to tiny, use another BG, fix some patterns and it will be good
Milan-
1,473 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Milan-
CSLMVenezuela

CSLMVenezuela wrote:

hi, as request

Unrankeable
Important
Suggestion

General

  • offset: 00:00:162 - cambiare el mp3 en algun momento creo xd asi que por el momento lo dejo asi

Easy

  1. 00:35:237 (6,1) - no estoy seguro de que este stack sea apropiado para un easy (considerando que los newbies se podrian confundir presionando el slider antes), te sugiero que lo cambies porfa Esta bien como esta, ahi suficiente espacio para que lo hagan bien:3
  2. 01:23:237 (3) - porque no cambias este slider a uno recto, siento mejor el flow de esa manera uhm lo hice aproposito para variar un poco el mapa. Que sea un easy no significa que todo tenga que seguir derecho imo >w<
  3. 01:25:763 (3) - ^

Hard

  1. 00:02:553 (1,2) - blanket? aaaaaa no me importan los blankets la verdad..
  2. 00:12:658 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:21:658 (1) - porque no haces este slider mas suave? (considerando que la vocal tambien lo es) uhm como que esta bien como estan.. uh no encuentro una razon para cambiarlos Aunque movi un poco aca, por que se veia feoxd
  4. 00:32:711 (3) - ^
  5. 00:46:448 (8,1) - *nazi* mal stackeado, trata de mover (8) o (1) sin el Grid Snap Esto siempre me pasa ;w; como no ocupo grid snap todos mis stacks se mueven, pero en gameplay esta bien>w<
  6. 00:52:606 (3) - este slider da un mejor flow y una mejor conexion con los siguientes objetos si le cambias la curvatura y lo mueves a x216 y132, se veria asi: http://puu.sh/dEaFl/930100fa82.jpg entiendo que me dices, pero esta bien como esta.. romper el flow igual es bueno
  7. 01:00:816 (1,2,3) - esto no me parece, ya que el ritmo 1/3 empieza en 01:01:132 - , no antes, sugiero que extiendas (1) hasta donde empieza el ritmo 1/3 (01:01:132 - ) y borrar el hitcircle (que seria (3) ), algo como esto: http://puu.sh/dEbbU/de5c329ab9.jpg Creo que deberias escucharlo de nuevo uhm
  8. 01:02:079 (1,3) - mal stackeado lo mismo que antes
  9. 01:08:395 (1,2) - blanket? naaa

Insane

  1. 00:04:606 (3) - porque no mejor colocas este slider curvo? porque si hago eso 00:04:448 (2,3,4) - se veria mal y juegaria mal igual;w;
  2. 00:06:500 (1,2) - esto es confuso (considerando que antes no habias usado un antijump), te sugiero que añadas una nota entre estos 2 (en 00:06:974 - ) asi es menos confuso Uhm no ahi nada en la musica en ese punto que dijiste, y el antijump añade diversidad al map..algo que el jugador debe acostumbrarse >w< lo mismo para los demas
  3. 00:07:763 (1,2) - ^
  4. 00:16:606 (1,2) - ^
  5. 00:17:869 (1,2) - ^
  6. 00:26:711 (1,3) - mal stackeado Fue aproposito en ambos.
  7. 00:41:237 (3,4) - ^
  8. 00:44:869 (4,4) - ^ no se si este fue intensional este nisiquiera se ve en gameplay xD
  9. 01:00:816 (1,2,3,4,5) - la misma cosa en hard y fycholover's insane
  10. 01:16:921 (5,1) - mal stackeado, no se si este fue intensional uhm supongo que este lo movere>w<
  11. 01:27:342 (2) - porque no mejor extiendes este slider hasta que la cola llege a la linea de y? asi los objetos siguientes se quedan tambien en esa linea uhm na, esta bien como esta..

nano.RIPE <3
GL with rank
choo choo~

Alex Li
SPOILER

Alex Li wrote:

from paper modding team
General
offset should be around 165 [/color]
add "short ver" to tag oki
Easy
  1. 01:11:869 (3,2) - fix stack plz it was on purpuse
Hard
  1. 00:12:658 (1,2) - doesnt feel really well, fix it plz blankets are just fine...
  2. 00:21:342 (5,1) - stack the editor moves my stacks ;w; but it doesnt affect gameplay, so whatever
  3. 01:05:711 (1,2,3) - fix blanket
  4. 01:08:395 (1,2) - ^
  5. 01:10:606 (5,1) - idk but if u can fix it will be great
Insane
  1. 00:01:448 (1) - most of your 1/1 slider in this diff are like this, try to use some other pattern and improve your map's quality i didn't know slider shapes improve ur map quality lol..
  2. 00:06:500 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i dont like people to copy and paste their pattern and map with it, but feel free if u want to keep It's fine, it does the effect i want
  3. 00:10:448 (1,3) - stack same as before
  4. 00:14:079 (1,3) - if can plz do a blanket
  5. 00:16:606 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same with the second one
  6. 01:13:448 (1,2) - if can plz blanket

zorefire

zorefire wrote:

From Modding queue
[Overall]Always map on Tiny Grid always always always :D I would change all of the grids to tiny while your at it I dont use grid snap >w< and tiny grid makes me sick
I don't know if you'll like it but if you use this image for your background it will look much better http://s1.1zoom.me/big3/96/388092-blackangel.jpg?m=1 mine is more kawaii :3 sorry
[Easy]
Make the distance closer for these areas. Not too much but just a little bit - 00:25:448, 00:30:500 this map follow vocals, gaps are fine
00:17:868 (3) - make this straight and move the last point to the left a little like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2375733 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2375734 i dont see any problem with my version tho..
01:09:658 (3,1) - Distance too far distance is fine
01:11:869 (3,4) - make these come together like this [url]01:11:869 (3,4) -[/url] uhm i dont know what u meant here
01:13:448 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2375761 mine is funnier
01:29:079 (3,4) - I don't know about this fk blankets
01:30:185 - bring closer slightly distance is fine
01:29:869 - from here to 01:32:395 - I would recommend a slider na, i want to map that final part cuz itdoesnthave vocals..

[Hard]
Change grid to tiny
00:25:921 (4,5) - keep going with the rhythm remove this they follow the melody
00:36:026 (4,5) - ^
01:29:869 - spinner for finish na, i hate short spinners

Overall good map change all grids to tiny, use another BG, fix some patterns and it will be good

thanks u for modding<3

my goal on osu right now, is to rank a map with ugly blanketslol
Gaia
2,808 posts
Joined May 2013
Gaia
@CSLM that's not really a blanket i was going for uhhh idk i might fix it in the future but it looks aight right now
@zorefire the hard is considerably harder than my Normal so it's fine for a more difficult Normal. 00:02:869 (4,5) - 00:05:395 (4,5,6) these rhythms dont sound a like at all uhh and spinner to finish doesnt fit in this song


sorry no changes :s


@Milan hurry and reply to my mod on that other map like huwwieeee :>
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
Fault finder? What is this, my ex wife?

aahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahah
Milan-
1,473 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Milan-
@gaia idid wooo

CDFA wrote:

Fault finder? What is this, my ex wife?

aahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahah
wtf
i dunno if it's cuz my english sucks, but i didn't get the joke;w;


will pkk mod this map or not?aaaaa
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
it means my ex wife is a slut
ac8129464363
1,560 posts
Joined October 2013
ac8129464363

CDFA wrote:

Fault finder? What is this, my ex wife?

aahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahah
ha-haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

i'm sorry
Pho
1,785 posts
Joined November 2013
Pho
Only bad jokes in this thread duh... <.<
Placeholder here for incoming mod.
Pappy
1,020 posts
Joined August 2013
Pappy
Requested by forum PM.

General
  1. Consider cutting drum-hitnormal.wav, file is half longer than hearable part. *image*
Quibbbler
  1. 00:41:869 - 00:51:500 - Some moments in this part are hard to understand, like because of weird stacks usage. Consider moving some circles after 1/1 beak or change them to sliders. owo
  2. Nice diff /o/
Insane
  1. 00:34:132 (5,6) - Why triplet here, it feels overmapped and just not fit here D:
  2. 00:42:816 (5,6) - Stack feels bad here, (5) and (6) should have jump behind themself as other notes in this rhytm, stack is too sudden here. Same goes to 00:47:869 (5,6) - and 00:47:869 (5,6) -
  3. 01:24:737 (3) - This note not fit here :<
Hard
  1. 01:24:737 (3) - Same as insane, in hard diff it totally not fits >.<
  2. 01:32:079 (4) - *image*
Gaia
No problems here :3

Easy
  1. 00:54:185 (2) - This slider looks ehm xD
  2. *minor* 01:00:816 (2) - Move second point to x:280|y:204 and last point (tail) to x:380|y:200 to make this slider more symmetrical
  3. 01:29:079 (3) - Hard rhytm for begginers, try to use this
Hope this mod'll be helpful. :3
Lovely mapset, good luck! :D
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,844 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru
uhh can u specify some parts? i don't find it too hard but give some more reasoning pls >w<
Pappy
1,020 posts
Joined August 2013
Pappy

Kibbleru wrote:

uhh can u specify some parts? i don't find it too hard but give some more reasoning pls >w<
00:48:500 (1,2,3,4) - Mainly this confused me alot when playing. I tried to explain it but my poor english can't let me into this. >.<
Pho
1,785 posts
Joined November 2013
Pho
Quick glance only.

[General]
  1. Timing. Welp, you know what to do. c:
[Easy]
  1. 00:11:553 -I can smell the copy-paste from here mate :v
  2. 00:40:606 - Ahh, it feels wrong to leave this beat up imo, but you're going 100% with vocal only i guess :/
  3. 00:54:185 (2,2) - pls :c
  4. 01:17:237 (3) - Slider misses out a very notable cymbal in the track at 01:17:553 - , which might confuse players. Making a usual 1/2 backslider with a circle is a more fitting solution to me.
  5. 01:29:079 (3,4) - pls
  6. Fine. Wished you'd have put a bit more attention to the instruments :v I'm also not sure about these 1/1 beat taps in a 190bpmish song, might be too hard.
[Gaia's Normal]
  1. 00:42:816 (3,4,1) - That overlap doesn't look like a really good idea and you might throw newer players out with it. How about moving 00:43:763 (5,1) - a bit up with DS? http://puu.sh/dWjwZ/62b94f2b91.jpg
  2. 00:59:553 (1) - Finish HS on sliderend?
  3. 00:25:763 (3) - Softwhistle on this note.
  4. 00:31:132 (4) - Drumfinish sounds better here.
  5. 01:00:185 (2,3) - Uhh...blanket?
  6. 01:21:974 (6) - Drumfinish would have better effect here.
  7. Fine.
[Hard]

  • Probably the same hitsounds suggestions made here also go for your Insane.
  1. 00:10:606 (2) - Shouldn't this be a drumfinish? There's no cymbal here anyway.
  2. 00:25:448 (3) - Softwhistle or something at its end.
  3. 00:39:027 (6,1) - Why do I have the feeling there should be a circle on 00:39:027 (6,1) - ...probably because of the bass. Consider to put it in.
  4. 00:59:553 (1) - Finish on sliderend.
  5. 01:22:132 (5) - No clap here, the percussion is over already. And consider swapping 01:21:974 (4) - clap with drumfinish here.
  6. Else looks fine. You switched your NCing style after the kiai time :)
[Insane]
  1. 00:03:658 (4,1) - When will you stop doing these lol
  2. 00:46:132 (4) - Not sure why, but this looks strange to me xD
  3. 00:47:869 (5,6,1,2,3) - I think you want to trick people with that stack on 5-6 and the upcoming back-and-forth jumps. Rearrange this pattern please, just one of the trillion possible suggestions: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2428883
  4. 01:14:079 (3,4) - Preference: Linear flow doesn't put enough emphasis on the drum kick on 4 imo, how about: http://puu.sh/dWvaR/c349a6f4a0.jpg
  5. 01:26:711 (10,1) - Unstack and do something like: http://puu.sh/dWvmv/734b0b7a70.jpg
  6. No critical issues here, good to go.
[Quib's Insane]
  1. 00:03:974 (1,2) - That flow break is unnecessary imo, something like: http://puu.sh/dWvR1/3087c3f82e.jpg feels more natural to play.
  2. 00:07:606 (1) - Why crippled slider here? :o
  3. 00:21:027 (1,4) - Overlap here is annoying, how about rearranging the jump pattern a bit: http://puu.sh/dWwiv/e9aeb20b9e.jpg
  4. 00:42:816 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing in this combo looks really random, space everthing with 1.5xDS
  5. Okay, should be fun to play. You seem to have no definite spacing rule at all. I can't test it properly to give better suggestions atm, so sorry for that.
Get 2-3 more mods and call a BAT.
not me pls lol.
Gaia
2,808 posts
Joined May 2013
Gaia
fixed all of Pho's stuffs except 00:59:553 (1) - cuz there isnt a finish sound there :u

SPOILER
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Fault Finder.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 61763
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:Fault Finder
TitleUnicode:フォルトファインダー
Artist:nano.RIPE
ArtistUnicode:nano.RIPE
Creator:Milan-
Version:Gaia's Normal
Source:
Tags:Kibbleru Gaia Lantis single Toumei na Sekai 透明な世界 short version
BeatmapID:557687
BeatmapSetID:241464

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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Milan-
1,473 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Milan-
Pappy

Pappy wrote:

Requested by forum PM.

General
  1. Consider cutting drum-hitnormal.wav, file is half longer than hearable part. *image* uhm i've always used this hs and never had problems ;w;
Insane
  1. 00:34:132 (5,6) - Why triplet here, it feels overmapped and just not fit here D: There's an actual sound on the blue tick. ill see if someone force me to delete it i guess ;w;
  2. 00:42:816 (5,6) - Stack feels bad here, (5) and (6) should have jump behind themself as other notes in this rhytm, stack is too sudden here. Same goes to 00:47:869 (5,6) - and 00:47:869 (5,6) - It's plays fine and follows the music fine imoi
  3. 01:24:737 (3) - This note not fit here :< There's sound on here :< but same as b4 i guess
Hard
  1. 01:24:737 (3) - Same as insane, in hard diff it totally not fits >.< same
  2. 01:32:079 (4) - *image* Uhm i did that on insane, i dont wanna have the same here >< it's fine imo
Easy
  1. 00:54:185 (2) - This slider looks ehm xD dont blame me pls ;(
  2. *minor* 01:00:816 (2) - Move second point to x:280|y:204 and last point (tail) to x:380|y:200 to make this slider more symmetrical plz
  3. 01:29:079 (3) - Hard rhytm for begginers, try to use this ok i guess
Hope this mod'll be helpful. :3
Lovely mapset, good luck! :D <3

Pho

Pho wrote:

Quick glance only.

[General]
  1. Timing. Welp, you know what to do. c: YEPYEP
[Easy]
  1. 00:11:553 -I can smell the copy-paste from here mate :v dont blame plz:( ajajsdas
  2. 00:40:606 - Ahh, it feels wrong to leave this beat up imo, but you're going 100% with vocal only i guess :/ Ive thought about it like 10000000times already. Im gonna ask a second opinion about it i guess><
  3. 00:54:185 (2,2) - pls :c leave me alone >(
  4. 01:17:237 (3) - Slider misses out a very notable cymbal in the track at 01:17:553 - , which might confuse players. Making a usual 1/2 backslider with a circle is a more fitting solution to me. i did something
  5. 01:29:079 (3,4) - pls plz
  6. Fine. Wished you'd have put a bit more attention to the instruments :v I'm also not sure about these 1/1 beat taps in a 190bpmish song, might be too hard. I hope they arent. indeed they shouldn't. Vocal mapping is life<3
[Hard]

  • Probably the same hitsounds suggestions made here also go for your Insane.
  1. 00:10:606 (2) - Shouldn't this be a drumfinish? There's no cymbal here anyway. Uhm i hear some weird cymbal in here i think><
  2. 00:25:448 (3) - Softwhistle or something at its end. i'd need to add whistles on some other spots and i dont want to use it a lot on this section tbh
  3. 00:39:027 (6,1) - Why do I have the feeling there should be a circle on 00:39:027 (6,1) - ...probably because of the bass. Consider to put it in. I did that on insane, and cuz it's a hard and the triple is a bit hard to hear, i'd prefer to just keep it on my insane
  4. 00:59:553 (1) - Finish on sliderend. k
  5. 01:22:132 (5) - No clap here, the percussion is over already. And consider swapping 01:21:974 (4) - clap with drumfinish here. ok both also fixed some mentioned on normal and stuff thank u>w<
  6. Else looks fine. You switched your NCing style after the kiai time :) i switched it 3 times lol :3
[Insane]
  1. 00:03:658 (4,1) - When will you stop doing these lol when i get bored of doing so lol
  2. 00:46:132 (4) - Not sure why, but this looks strange to me xD it's fine;w;
  3. 00:47:869 (5,6,1,2,3) - I think you want to trick people with that stack on 5-6 and the upcoming back-and-forth jumps. Rearrange this pattern please, just one of the trillion possible suggestions: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2428883 Uhm, i and everyone who i asked to testplay didnt have problem passing this part, i like how the stack works here too ;w;
  4. 01:14:079 (3,4) - Preference: Linear flow doesn't put enough emphasis on the drum kick on 4 imo, how about: http://puu.sh/dWvaR/c349a6f4a0.jpg uhm i like mine more ;(
  5. 01:26:711 (10,1) - Unstack and do something like: http://puu.sh/dWvmv/734b0b7a70.jpg uhm i'd like to keep constancy with 01:23:869 (4,1) - tho
  6. No critical issues here, good to go.
Get 2-3 more mods and call a BAT. U dont tell me what to do >OOO <3
not me pls lol.

Thank u for modding <3
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,844 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru
ehh no change

criple slider was cuz there was a vocal in the middle i wanted to get also i like it lol flow break for emphasis

i think my spacing was decreasing by 0.1 every time cuz it sorta fits the lowering intensity? and it looked pretty cool lol
pkk
1,821 posts
Joined November 2013
pkk
Summoned by free ticket, sorry I'm really late

General
  1. offset sounds off, try 175 or earlier. You can confirm this by listening to the kicks, like at 00:40:290 (3) - . The kick in the music occurs slightly before the note is hit; in other words your offset is too late. All time stamps in this mod will be based on your current offset, 185.

Easy
  1. 00:31:763 (2,3) - consider moving this to x 111 y 83 so the circle lines up with the slider curve and makes it look nicer:
    SPOILER
  2. 00:54:185 (2) - I don't think this slider fits in with the rest of your sliders. Try adding a circle at 00:54:185 - then a 3/1 slider at 00:54:185 - :
    SPOILER

    This will give you a shorter slider to work with so you can come up with some cool shapes without it being too long. You can choose not to change the rhythm but try to come up with a different slider shape.
  3. 01:28:606 (3,4) - blanket can be improved:
    SPOILER

    Solid normal~

Gaia's Normal
  1. 00:07:763 (3) - please ctrl+g this twice to fix the atrocious slider point arrangement thanks
  2. 00:39:342 (1,2) - Are these two supposed to be different? Anyways it'll look better if you copy 00:39:974 (2) - then ctrl+h ctr+g and put it at 00:39:342 -
  3. 01:27:342 (1) - You can come up with a much more interesting shape than this!
  4. 01:28:606 (2) - studies show that more curve = more happiness pls curve more

    Sexy normal

Hard
  1. You might want to check over some of your blankets, for example 01:08:395 (1,2) -
  2. 00:52:606 (3) - just a suggestion, but try curving this upwards. It works both ways, but maybe you'll like it that way better.
    SPOILER
  3. 01:17:237 (1,2) - try curving these to contrast the straight sliders at 01:16:448 (3,4) - :
    SPOILER

    Curved sliders flow better here imo
  4. 01:19:133 (3) - flows better if you curve it downwards, just move the last slider point to x 22 y 100. It will still flow nicely into 01:19:763 (1) - if you're concerned about that.

    Good stuff!

Insane
  1. 00:24:816 (3,4) - Did you intend for this to be different from 00:29:869 (3,4) - ? Try ctrl+g on 00:25:132 (4) - so you get a jump between 00:25:132 (4,1) - to emphasize the downbeat and guitar sound at 00:25:448 - .
  2. 00:26:079 (3) - imo it looks better if you just copy 00:25:448 (1) - and ctrl+h ctrl+j. Right now 00:25:921 (2,3) - looks a bit weird:
    SPOILER
  3. 00:55:448 (5,1,2) - pk approves (Y) nice flow
  4. 01:03:974 (3,4) - try to lessen these curves, it might flow/look better:
    SPOILER

    nice nice

Quib's Insane
  1. 00:07:606 (1) - This sounds out of place as you ignore the guitar sound on the downbeat. Try splitting it into a circle + 1/2 slider:
    SPOILER

    Alternatively, if you want to keep a 1/1 slider in there somewhere, try moving 00:07:606 (1) - to 00:07:763 - then put circles before and after it. Also consider doing something similar with 00:17:711 (1) - .
  2. 00:20:711 (3,4) - this is actually pretty confusing, I suggest unstacking it. Part of this confusion stems from the high distance spacing between 00:20:553 (2,3) - ; you have a huge jump then suddenly a stack, it also interrupts flow.
  3. 00:31:448 (4,1) - try moving 00:31:763 (1) - to x 288 y 268. For some reason I think it looks better to have the circle to the right and on top of the slider head instead of under it.
  4. 00:41:869 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - and 00:46:921 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - can be confusing (especially 00:48:500 (1,2,3,4) - ), so I suggest you change the way you apply your NCs. Instead of on the introduction of new sounds like the guitar/vocal, try adding the NC after every gap, so that every sequence of circles that you hit in succession becomes its own combo. For example:
    SPOILER

    By applying the NCs this way, it becomes easier to read since the player is given a clear indication of which circles are part of a sequence (sequence as in a bunch of circles you hit with 1/2 gaps in between).
  5. 01:13:132 (4) - cool spot to ctrl+g, it creates nice flow into 01:13:448 (1) -
  6. 01:20:553 (3,4) - I think having 4 on the left and 3 on the right will be better because of the curve on 01:20:869 (1) - and the current flow. Something like this:
    SPOILER

    3 into 4 into 1 is like one curved line going counter clockwise/a triangle and this flows better than having 4 on the right since you'd have to go right from 3 then left into 1.

    Anyways, good job~

Have fun mapping! Make sure you fix the offset.
xxdeathx
2,661 posts
Joined July 2013
xxdeathx
Ticket from queue. I am a fault finder

[General]
  1. What does this song have to do with Toumei na Sekai 透明な世界?
  2. What does Kibbleru have to do with the name Quib
[Easy]
  1. 01:28:606 (3,4) - Just blanket this
You're ignoring a lot of claps so you should use slidertick claps for this diff.

[Normal]
  1. 01:11:869 (5,1) - Try to improve the flow here, that kind of curve is going the wrong way.
[Insane]
  1. Should use slightly lower AR since it's relatively easy for an insane and has no big jumps/stuff.
[Kibbleru's Insane]
  1. 00:41:869 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - This is ridiculously confusing to read. Use NC's to separate the sets of jumps by their 1/1 breaks:
  2. 00:46:921 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - ^
  3. 01:01:132 (2,3) - Arrange like this because putting (3) below the repeat slider whose head is higher than the tail plays awkwardly:
    SPOILER
  4. 01:16:290 (2,3,4,5,1) - This doesn't play well at all. Really should rearrange the pattern:
    SPOILER
Hard is quite hard and uses a lot of 1/2 circles in the kiai, while Normal has almost no 1/2 at all in its kiai. You can afford to make the Hard easier (since there's a relatively easy insane to act as a buffer) or make the Normal harder by adding some 1/2 rhythms in its kiai. If you want to make the Hard easier, remove a lot of the 1/2 circles used in kiai/replace them with sliders because jumps don't really fit the music well. I wanna be quite careful about difficulty spread before bubbling this though.

Also make sure everybody replies properly to pkk's mod. Especially Kibbleru. I wouldn't accept that kind of response to Pho.
Milan-
1,473 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Milan-
ill put it on here


i'll reply ur mods in a bit,

pkk

pkk wrote:

Summoned by free ticket, sorry I'm really late <3

General
  1. offset sounds off, try 175 or earlier. You can confirm this by listening to the kicks, like at 00:40:290 (3) - . The kick in the music occurs slightly before the note is hit; in other words your offset is too late. All time stamps in this mod will be based on your current offset, 185. beato give me another, i guess ill use that instead

Easy
  1. 00:31:763 (2,3) - consider moving this to x 111 y 83 so the circle lines up with the slider curve and makes it look nicer: it's fine already o.o
    SPOILER
  2. 00:54:185 (2) - I don't think this slider fits in with the rest of your sliders. Try adding a circle at 00:54:185 - then a 3/1 slider at 00:54:185 - : uh i follow vocals, and it seems fine to me
    SPOILER

    This will give you a shorter slider to work with so you can come up with some cool shapes without it being too long. You can choose not to change the rhythm but try to come up with a different slider shape.
  3. 01:28:606 (3,4) - blanket can be improved: made it a bit more curved but not blanket, (im shameless copying one of dake maps anyways sdasd
    SPOILER

    Solid normal~

Hard
  1. You might want to check over some of your blankets, for example 01:08:395 (1,2) - lazyfor blankets
  2. 00:52:606 (3) - just a suggestion, but try curving this upwards. It works both ways, but maybe you'll like it that way better. i want to keep it as it's tbh ><
    SPOILER
  3. 01:17:237 (1,2) - try curving these to contrast the straight sliders at 01:16:448 (3,4) - : made just (2) curved instead
    SPOILER

    Curved sliders flow better here imo
  4. 01:19:133 (3) - flows better if you curve it downwards, just move the last slider point to x 22 y 100. It will still flow nicely into 01:19:763 (1) - if you're concerned about that. k

    Good stuff!

Insane
  1. 00:24:816 (3,4) - Did you intend for this to be different from 00:29:869 (3,4) - ? Try ctrl+g on 00:25:132 (4) - so you get a jump between 00:25:132 (4,1) - to emphasize the downbeat and guitar sound at 00:25:448 - . k
  2. 00:26:079 (3) - imo it looks better if you just copy 00:25:448 (1) - and ctrl+h ctrl+j. Right now 00:25:921 (2,3) - looks a bit weird: it's fine as it's
    SPOILER
  3. 00:55:448 (5,1,2) - pk approves (Y) nice flow <3
  4. 01:03:974 (3,4) - try to lessen these curves, it might flow/look better: I think it's almost needed to make it fc without finish the slider etc asda. i like how it is.
    SPOILER

    nice nice

Have fun mapping! Make sure you fix the offset.

xxdeathx

xxdeathx wrote:

Ticket from queue. I am a fault finder

[General]
  1. What does this song have to do with Toumei na Sekai 透明な世界? it's the single http://vgmdb.net/album/45736
  2. What does Kibbleru have to do with the name Quib "quib sounds like kibb" uh
[Easy]
  1. 01:28:606 (3,4) - Just blanket this made it a bit more curved but not blanket, (im shameless copying one of dake maps anyways sdasd
You're ignoring a lot of claps so you should use slidertick claps for this diff. I hate using slidertick... i dont wanna use it, hitsounds on this diffs sound just fine to me;w;

[Insane]
  1. Should use slightly lower AR since it's relatively easy for an insane and has no big jumps/stuff. uhm 8.8 i guess..
Hard is quite hard and uses a lot of 1/2 circles in the kiai, while Normal has almost no 1/2 at all in its kiai. You can afford to make the Hard easier (since there's a relatively easy insane to act as a buffer) or make the Normal harder by adding some 1/2 rhythms in its kiai. If you want to make the Hard easier, remove a lot of the 1/2 circles used in kiai/replace them with sliders because jumps don't really fit the music well. I wanna be quite careful about difficulty spread before bubbling this though. Uhm changed some 4 single tapping thing for slider uh, should be fine now.. gaia also added more 1/2 he said

Also make sure everybody replies properly to pkk's mod. Especially Kibbleru. I wouldn't accept that kind of response to Pho.

uh gaia for some reason gave me his diff by pm uh
Last edited by Milan- , edited 3 times in total.
Kibbleru
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Kibbleru

pkk wrote:

Quib's Insane
  1. 00:07:606 (1) - This sounds out of place as you ignore the guitar sound on the downbeat. Try splitting it into a circle + 1/2 slider:
    SPOILER

    Alternatively, if you want to keep a 1/1 slider in there somewhere, try moving 00:07:606 (1) - to 00:07:763 - then put circles before and after it. Also consider doing something similar with 00:17:711 (1) - . her voice is too beautiful to map out with mere circles and sliders
  2. 00:20:711 (3,4) - this is actually pretty confusing, I suggest unstacking it. Part of this confusion stems from the high distance spacing between 00:20:553 (2,3) - ; you have a huge jump then suddenly a stack, it also interrupts flow. eh? i don't think its too bad, it fits well with both drums and the instrument
  3. 00:31:448 (4,1) - try moving 00:31:763 (1) - to x 288 y 268. For some reason I think it looks better to have the circle to the right and on top of the slider head instead of under it. k
  4. 00:41:869 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - and 00:46:921 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - can be confusing (especially 00:48:500 (1,2,3,4) - ), so I suggest you change the way you apply your NCs. Instead of on the introduction of new sounds like the guitar/vocal, try adding the NC after every gap, so that every sequence of circles that you hit in succession becomes its own combo. For example:
    SPOILER

    By applying the NCs this way, it becomes easier to read since the player is given a clear indication of which circles are part of a sequence (sequence as in a bunch of circles you hit with 1/2 gaps in between). yaya
  5. 01:13:132 (4) - cool spot to ctrl+g, it creates nice flow into 01:13:448 (1) - k
  6. 01:20:553 (3,4) - I think having 4 on the left and 3 on the right will be better because of the curve on 01:20:869 (1) - and the current flow. Something like this:
    SPOILER

    3 into 4 into 1 is like one curved line going counter clockwise/a triangle and this flows better than having 4 on the right since you'd have to go right from 3 then left into 1. nah mine looks better imo

    Anyways, good job~

Have fun mapping! Make sure you fix the offset.

xxdeathx wrote:

Ticket from queue. I am a fault finder

[Kibbleru's Insane]
  1. 00:41:869 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - This is ridiculously confusing to read. Use NC's to separate the sets of jumps by their 1/1 breaks:
  2. 00:46:921 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - ^ already done these with pk's
  3. 01:01:132 (2,3) - Arrange like this because putting (3) below the repeat slider whose head is higher than the tail plays awkwardly: this is fine, sorta circular flow but with a circle instead of slider
    SPOILER
  4. 01:16:290 (2,3,4,5,1) - This doesn't play well at all. Really should rearrange the pattern: ehh flow breaks are fun x.x
    SPOILER
Hard is quite hard and uses a lot of 1/2 circles in the kiai, while Normal has almost no 1/2 at all in its kiai. You can afford to make the Hard easier (since there's a relatively easy insane to act as a buffer) or make the Normal harder by adding some 1/2 rhythms in its kiai. If you want to make the Hard easier, remove a lot of the 1/2 circles used in kiai/replace them with sliders because jumps don't really fit the music well. I wanna be quite careful about difficulty spread before bubbling this though.

Also make sure everybody replies properly to pkk's mod. Especially Kibbleru. I wouldn't accept that kind of response to Pho. lol x.x
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Gaia
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Gaia

pkk wrote:

Summoned by free ticket, sorry I'm really late

General
  1. offset sounds off, try 175 or earlier. You can confirm this by listening to the kicks, like at 00:40:290 (3) - . The kick in the music occurs slightly before the note is hit; in other words your offset is too late. All time stamps in this mod will be based on your current offset, 185.

Gaia's Normal
  1. 00:07:763 (3) - please ctrl+g this twice to fix the atrocious slider point arrangement thanks ;w; ok
  2. 00:39:342 (1,2) - Are these two supposed to be different? Anyways it'll look better if you copy 00:39:974 (2) - then ctrl+h ctr+g and put it at 00:39:342 -
    not really, it looks fine to me =3=
  3. 01:27:342 (1) - You can come up with a much more interesting shape than this! YEAH! suggestion please im clueless haha
  4. 01:28:606 (2) - studies show that more curve = more happiness pls curve more Clap along if you feel like a room without a roof~~

    Sexy normal

Have fun mapping! Make sure you fix the offset.
@desu gun: fixed

~~~ Thanks for modding guys!
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