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Pretty Rhythm
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Pretty Rhythm
too many upload trouble :o :o :o
Enon
Producer-san, KurisuM@Su desu yo, KurisuM@Su!
HabiHolic


your request

[General]

  1. None~
[Easy]

  1. 00:03:158 ~ 00:13:660 - 슬라이드 슬라이더랑 히트사운드 볼륨 낮춰주세요 음이 전반적으로 작은데 이부분이 큰게 좀 이해가 안되네요
  2. 00:16:660 (1) - 머리부분에 피니쉬 넣어주세요
  3. 00:21:912 (2) - 끝부분에 클랩?
  4. 00:25:662 (3) - 담요가 많이 어긋나있네요. 정확하게 고쳐주세요~ 그리고 끝부분에는 피니쉬 넣어주세요
  5. 00:32:414 (5,1) - 이부분은 뉴콤보 바꾸는게 음악과 흐름이 맞을듯요
  6. 01:30:927 (5) - 끝부분에 피니쉬
  7. 02:24:188 (2) - 화면 밖으로 나가있네요. 수정해주세요
  8. 02:33:190 (2) - 끝부분에 피니쉬

    히트사운드가 좀 약한것 같네요~ 히트사운드 보정 해보세요~
[Normal]

  1. 00:03:158 ~ 00:13:660 - 이지랑 동일한 내용
  2. 00:13:660 (1) - 이 스피너는 00:16:285 - 여기까지 늘리는게 좋을것 같아요~
  3. 00:17:036 - 노트 추가?
  4. 00:21:161 (3) - 담요 어긋났네요
  5. 00:29:788 - 클랩?
  6. 00:32:039 (4) - 클랩 넣는게 좋을듯요
  7. 00:35:039 (2) - 이건 개인적으로 00:34:664 (1) - 이걸 감싸는게 좋을것 같다고 생각합니다.
  8. 00:36:165 (4) - 다음 노트하고 흐름이 좀 이상한것 같아요. 깔끔하게 곡선 슬라이더 어떠신가요
  9. 01:25:676 (1) - 제대로 안감싸진거 같네요
[Startrick's H@rd]

  1. 00:03:720 (2) - 휘슬 넣어주시는게 좋을것 같네요. 뒤에 악기소리 강조 (이런부분들 앞부분에 많이 있으니 추가좀 해주시길 바랍니다~)
  2. 00:19:661 (1) - 디스턴스가 좀 고의이신것 같은데. 저는 적절하지 않다고 생각해요 왠만하면 하드답게 디스턴스를 지켜주시는게 어떨까요?
  3. 00:26:975 - 여기는 피니쉬가 어울린다고 생각해요
  4. 00:51:918 (2) - Ctrl+G? 점프 없애는편이 플레이하기 편할것 같다고 생각해요
  5. 01:01:295 (6,7,8) - 연타가 햇갈릴만하다고 생각하는데. 그냥 다른곳에 배치하시는게 어떠세요?
  6. 01:26:801 (3) - Ctrl+G? 재밌는 패턴 된다고 생각해요!
  7. 01:30:177 (1) - 위로 약간만 올리셔서 정확하게 감싸는건 어떨까요
  8. 01:59:996 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - 여기 전부 피니쉬 히트사운드 사용하셔야 활것 같네요
  9. 02:25:688 (1) - 디스턴스. 아까 언급했던것이랑 똑같아요~
[Insane]

  1. 00:19:286 (9) - 간단한 점프 넣어보세요. Ctrl+G
  2. 00:35:977 (4) - 이건 적합하지 않은 패턴같네요 차라리 감싸는게 좋을것 같네요
  3. 02:10:685 (1) - 마찬가지로 잘 감싸주세요 위와 같음! 패턴은 알아서!
Suimya
Hey Komari :3 random hitsound modding here, since this map needs too much work on it ></



General:
  1. How about using custom clap on these map like this one http://puu.sh/duimf/38e2eba2e9.wav this clap sound fit perfect for this map ><
  2. I really think you should put every claps on upbeat and finish on every 1/1 downbeat, like this image o.o

Easy:
  1. 00:03:158 (1) - finish on slider's end sounds kinda too loud for this part, so how about replacing it with whistle instead? it'll fit much better imo owo
  2. 00:06:158 (2) - ^
  3. 00:10:659 (2) - ^ but replace this useless clap with whistle here
  4. 00:12:159 (3,4) - ^ but remove those useless finishes and add a whistle instead
  5. 00:16:660 (1) - how about adding a whistle on slider's end? it seems kinda fitting here =w=
  6. 00:18:911 (2) - How about adding a clap on slider's end, if you did this don't forget to remove the clap on 00:19:661 (1) - and replace it with finish :3
  7. 00:19:661 (1) - how about adding a whistle on slider's end?
  8. 00:22:662 (1) - replace the whistle on slider's start with a finish, it fits kinda much better with a finish here ><
  9. 00:24:912 (2) - switch this finish with a whistle instead? o.o
  10. 00:29:038 (2) - How about adding a clap here, it sounds kinda fit
  11. 00:30:538 (4) - switch this whistle on slider's start with a clap would be better, and a whistle on slider's end would be cool too o.o
  12. 00:35:415 (3) - switch this clap with a whistle instead, i don't really think it fits this part o.o
  13. 00:36:165 (4,5) - How about adding a whistle on slider's end? for both and yeah if you did that don't forget to remove the clap on 00:37:665 (5) - slider's end
  14. 00:40:666 (1) - finish sounds much better then a whistle on slider's start, i can hear it in the music
  15. 00:40:666 (1,2) - switch the clap from 00:42:166 (2) - slider's head to 00:40:666 (1) - slider's tail, then add a whistle on 00:42:166 (2) - slider's start and add clap on the tail as well o.o
  16. 00:43:291 (3) - finish here don't really fit imo, how about remove the finish and add a clap instead
  17. 00:44:041 (4) - ^ just remove the whistle here
  18. 00:45:167 (6) - clap on slider's tail would really fit great here
  19. 00:46:104 (1) - i think a finish on slider's end, would go great here
  20. 00:47:792 (3) - remove the finish here and add a clap instead, i really think it fits much better
  21. 00:48:542 (4) - ^ but remove the whistle on slider's start, and add a whistle on slider's end instead o.o
  22. 00:50:418 (5) - remove clap here and a whistle instead, would be better imo
  23. 00:51:168 (6) - How about adding a clap on slider's end, it'll fit with music pretty well
  24. 00:52:668 (1) - I think you should add a whistle on slider's tail
  25. 00:54:169 (2) - remove the clap on slider's start and add a whistle instead, don't forget to add a whistle on the tail as well
  26. 00:55:669 (3) - finish would fit much better then a whistle here on slider's start, i really suggest to change it to finish, and I think you should add a whistle on slider's tail as well
  27. 00:57:919 (4) - remove this finish don't really fit here, maybe replace it with a whistle instead o.o
  28. 00:58:670 (1) - remove this whistle on slider's start and add a finish here instead, would be better, and I think a clap on slider's tail would be good too
  29. 01:00:170 (2) - switch this clap with a whistle instead
  30. 01:00:920 (3) - How about adding a finish on slider's tail, it'll fit with the finish on the music
  31. 01:02:420 (1) - ^ but this time a whistle would fit great here
  32. 01:03:921 (2) - replace this clap with a whistle, it don't really fit here
  33. 01:04:671 (3) - I really think a finish on slider's start and tail would sound much better then a whistle imo
  34. 01:07:672 (1) - replace this whistle with a finish instead, and add a whistle on the tail of these slider
  35. 01:11:422 (3) - replace this clap with a whistle, it fits much better here o.o
  36. 01:12:173 (4) - How about adding a finish on slider's tail? it fits here
  37. 01:14:423 (1) - like i said here 01:11:422 (3) -
  38. 01:15:173 (2) - how about adding a whistle on slider's tail, it kinda fits here
  39. 01:16:674 (3) - How about adding a finish to both start and tail? to fit with the music :3
  40. 01:18:924 (4) - how about adding a clap on slider's repeat, it fits with the music imo
  41. 01:21:175 (2) - replace the finish on slider's tail with a whistle instead
  42. 01:22:675 (3) - ^ you really need to add a whistle on slider's tail here ><
  43. 01:24:175 (4) - replace the clap on slider's start with a whistle instead, i really don't hear a clap here o.o
  44. 01:27:176 (2) - add a whistle here
  45. 01:27:926 (3) - remove the clap and add a whistle instead
  46. 01:28:676 (4) - replace the whistle on slider's start with a finish instead, don't forget to add a whistle on the tail as well
  47. 01:43:679 (1) - a finish sounds much better on slider's start then a whistle, i think you should remove the finish on the tail and add a whistle instead
  48. 01:46:680 (1) - remove the finish on the tail and add a whistle instead
  49. 01:48:931 (2) - replace this clap with a whistle instead
  50. 01:49:681 (1) - replace the whistle here with a finish, and add a clap on slider's tail as well
  51. 01:51:181 (2) - I really don't hear a finish in the music, so remove the finish and add a whistle instead on slider's end
  52. 01:52:681 (1) - how about adding a whistle to this spinner, sounds kinda fitting here :3
  53. 01:57:182 (2) - finish here sounds a bit random to me, so how about removing it and add a whistle instead
  54. 01:59:808 (4) - replace the whistle here with a clap and remove the clap on slider's start of this slider 02:00:183 (5) - I suggest you to add a finish instead
  55. 02:01:683 (1) - finish would go better on slider's start then a whistle imo
  56. 02:03:184 (3) - ^ don't forget to add a clap on slider's tail too
  57. 02:04:684 (1) - ^
  58. 02:06:935 (2) - replace this clap with a whistle instead
  59. 02:07:685 (3) - I think a finish on slider's tail would be great imo
  60. 02:09:935 (4) - How about adding a clap on slider's tail, it kinda fits this part o.o
  61. 02:10:685 (1) - a finish here would sound much better on slider's start then a whistle imo, don't forget to add a clap on the tail as well
  62. 02:12:186 (2) - ^
  63. 02:13:686 (1) - ^ and remove the clap on the tail as well and a whistle instead
  64. 02:15:937 (2) - ^ and remove the finish here ><
  65. 02:16:687 (1) - finish on the start would go much better here imo
  66. 02:18:187 (3) - ^ and whistle on the tail would be good too
  67. 02:19:687 (1) - ^
  68. 02:21:938 (2) - whistle here would go better then a clap imo
  69. 02:22:688 (1) - like i said here 02:16:687 (1) - and a clap on the tail would be good too :3
  70. 02:24:188 (2) - ^
  71. 02:25:689 (1) - ^
  72. 02:27:939 (3) - how about adding a whistle on slider's start, it sound kinda fitting here
  73. 02:28:689 (1) - finish instead of a whistle here, and add a whistle on slider's tail
  74. 02:30:565 (2) - clap here would go much better then a finish imo
  75. 02:30:940 (3) - replace the clap on slider's start with a whistle instead, it would fit much better
  76. 02:31:690 (1) - finish instead of a whistle on slider's start, and a clap on the tail would be great
  77. 02:33:190 (2) - how about removing the whistle on slider's start and tail, and adding a finish on both of them, it'll fit much with the music here o.o


I think I'll just do the easy diff, I really think you should follow my point on easy on the other diffs. since the hitsounds right now really needs too much work.

That's all for now, good luck with this cute song Komari, I hope to see this ranked on christmas :3
Topic Starter
Pretty Rhythm
o_o thanks!
Enon
Who is Enom
Topic Starter
Pretty Rhythm

Enon wrote:

Who is Enom
> <
Startrick
.
Topic Starter
Pretty Rhythm

HabiHolic wrote:



your request

[General]

  1. None~
[Easy]

  1. 00:03:158 ~ 00:13:660 - 슬라이드 슬라이더랑 히트사운드 볼륨 낮춰주세요 음이 전반적으로 작은데 이부분이 큰게 좀 이해가 안되네요
  2. 00:16:660 (1) - 머리부분에 피니쉬 넣어주세요
  3. 00:21:912 (2) - 끝부분에 클랩?
  4. 00:25:662 (3) - 담요가 많이 어긋나있네요. 정확하게 고쳐주세요~ 그리고 끝부분에는 피니쉬 넣어주세요
  5. 00:32:414 (5,1) - 이부분은 뉴콤보 바꾸는게 음악과 흐름이 맞을듯요
  6. 01:30:927 (5) - 끝부분에 피니쉬
  7. 02:24:188 (2) - 화면 밖으로 나가있네요. 수정해주세요
  8. 02:33:190 (2) - 끝부분에 피니쉬

    히트사운드가 좀 약한것 같네요~ 히트사운드 보정 해보세요~
[Normal]

  1. 00:03:158 ~ 00:13:660 - 이지랑 동일한 내용
  2. 00:13:660 (1) - 이 스피너는 00:16:285 - 여기까지 늘리는게 좋을것 같아요~
  3. 00:17:036 - 노트 추가?
  4. 00:21:161 (3) - 담요 어긋났네요
  5. 00:29:788 - 클랩?
  6. 00:32:039 (4) - 클랩 넣는게 좋을듯요
  7. 00:35:039 (2) - 이건 개인적으로 00:34:664 (1) - 이걸 감싸는게 좋을것 같다고 생각합니다.
  8. 00:36:165 (4) - 다음 노트하고 흐름이 좀 이상한것 같아요. 깔끔하게 곡선 슬라이더 어떠신가요
  9. 01:25:676 (1) - 제대로 안감싸진거 같네요
[Insane]

  1. 00:19:286 (9) - 간단한 점프 넣어보세요. Ctrl+G
  2. 00:35:977 (4) - 이건 적합하지 않은 패턴같네요 차라리 감싸는게 좋을것 같네요
  3. 02:10:685 (1) - 마찬가지로 잘 감싸주세요 위와 같음! 패턴은 알아서!
전부 수정했습니다. 감사합니다.
Eni

Hi from Christmas Queue <3
Testing http://waa.ai/46ff
[General]
  1. IIRC, the Ranking Criteria states that you must use all skin images related to the one you pick, so you need circle images as well?
[Easy]
  1. 00:32:414 (1) - Remove the New Combo here and add one at 00:35:415 - to follow your next pattern(s)? a bit better.
  2. 02:02:059 - Slider 1's Track ( 02:01:683 (1) - ) overlaps the Slider End of the next Slider 3 ( 02:03:184 (3) - ). Please fix this overlap.
  3. 02:12:186 (2,1) - This is probably not rankable in Easy. The next Slider 1's Head is overlapped by the previous Slider 2's track. Consider using a different pattern instead.
  4. 02:22:688 - The difficulty increase here is somewhat high. Consider adding similar patterns throughout the map.
[Normal]
  1. 00:06:158 (1) - This slider is much too low! When you test play the map, you will see that the slider gets cut off at the bottom. You must fix this!
  2. 00:18:911 (4,5,1) - You mustn't overlap the objects like this. Consider using a different pattern such as below.


    ~
  3. 00:23:412 - The current pattern may be considered confusing because the Slider 1 flows into the next Slider 3. Consider giving the objects more spacing between each other to help emphasize Circle 2. Remember to change 00:25:287 (4) - as well.
  4. 00:37:665 (6,7,8) - Same as 00:23:412 -. You'll want to spread out the triangle to help the player see a clear path. Repeat this process for similar patterns ( e.g: 00:55:669 (1,3) - ).
  5. 01:15:548 (4,5) -, 01:43:304 (1,2) - I had to change a pattern like this in one of my GDs for it to be ranked. It is "rankable", but some people do not like such patterns. If you like this pattern, then please do keep it!
  6. 01:59:808 (1) - Remove the New Combo here and consider adding one at 02:01:683 -.
  7. 02:22:688 - Same as Easy. You should make the other parts of the song harder to help even out the difficulty.
[Startrick's H@rd]
  1. Plays fine! I enjoyed it, good job.
[Insane]
  1. 00:05:220 - There is an emphasis sound here, so add an object (preferably a Circle).
  2. 00:08:221 - Same as 00:05:220 -, you should add a Circle here.
  3. 00:10:284 -, 00:11:034 - 00:11:784 - There are more sounds here, so you should add more objects
  4. 00:51:168 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Changing the pattern like this is somewhat confusing. I think you should be consistent here.
  5. 01:06:546 (4,1,2,3,1) - I love this so much! <3
  6. 01:09:547 (5,6,7,8) - Raise these objects by several units so they are not close to the Slider End of 01:09:172 (4) -.
  7. 01:11:610 (3,5) - Don't overlap like this. Instead, you can make a jump, like so.


    ~
  8. 01:13:485 (8,9,1) - Increase the Distance Snap here for emphasis of the new 4/1 downbeat.
  9. 01:43:679 (4,5,6) - Referencing Normal, please increase the spacing between these objects. Do so for all similar occurrences.
  10. 01:52:681 (6) - You should increase the Distance Snap of this object because it is the start of a new (main) 1/1.
Good luck~
Topic Starter
Pretty Rhythm
thanks to mod!

I fix 100% of your mod without add note on Insane(because I want make Light Insane)
Affirmation
From #modreqs.

[Easy]
00:22:662 (1,2,3) - 블랭킷.
00:55:669 (3,1) - 스택
01:09:172 (2,3,4) - 블랭킷
02:33:190 (2) - 끝점이 에디터 밖으로 나갔네요

[Insane]
cs 4.5?
00:17:786 (4,7) - 오버랩
00:22:287 (9,4) - 스택
00:32:039 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 연타비트 들어갈 자리 맞나요
01:56:057 (1,1,1,1) - 뉴콤제거

겟난은 못해드립니다 죄송합니다
굿럭
Topic Starter
Pretty Rhythm

Neoskylove wrote:

From #modreqs.

[Easy]
00:22:662 (1,2,3) - 블랭킷. 나름대로 고쳐봤습니다
00:55:669 (3,1) - 스택 나름대로 고쳐봤습니다
01:09:172 (2,3,4) - 블랭킷 나름대로 고쳐봤습니다
02:33:190 (2) - 끝점이 에디터 밖으로 나갔네요 나름대로 고쳐봤습니다

[Insane]
cs 4.5? 제가 쓰고싶어서..
00:17:786 (4,7) - 오버랩 이게 크게 문제가 되는지는 잘 ... 일단 보류하겠습니다
00:22:287 (9,4) - 스택 고쳤어요.
00:32:039 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 연타비트 들어갈 자리 맞나요 세세히 들어보면 나와요
01:56:057 (1,1,1,1) - 뉴콤제거 강조해보고 싶었습니다. 보류

겟난은 못해드립니다 죄송합니다
굿럭
thanks
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