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M4M from my queue

Maybe use other BG? I has saw it before

  • [Norma;]
  1. 00:04:257 - bad idea to miss this beats. My suggestion http://puu.sh/lgBwT/ce42f94adc.jpg
  2. 00:07:545 - s a m e
  3. 00:19:463 (3) - 1/1 stack on Normal diff looks weird for me, imo need changed
  4. 00:22:750 (2) - ^
  5. 00:39:189 (5) - move on 281;304 so look really good
  6. 01:01:791 (4,5) - move on 224;52 for better flow
  7. 01:06:723 (2) - 273;47 looks better
  8. 01:06:723 (2,6) - try to stack with end
  • [Hard]
  1. 00:07:339 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - combo is really long, NC here 00:10:011 (1) - and here 00:12:476 (4) -
  2. 01:24:805 (4) - nc too
  • [Citrus]
  1. 00:14:942 (1,1) - looks randomly. My suggestion http://puu.sh/lgCif/ffa3b55a43.jpg
  2. 00:36:312 (1,2,3,4) - looks weird, make a square-circles is better
  3. 01:24:394 (1,2) - same, it's better http://puu.sh/lgCu2/c6c87b97b7.jpg
  • [Insane]
  1. 00:04:668 (3,2) - stack with end
  2. 00:07:956 (3,1) - try to make blanket, like this http://puu.sh/lgCA1/ea4be3fd51.jpg
  3. 00:33:847 (1,3) - stack ends
  4. 01:02:203 (9,2) - stack
  5. 01:07:134 (5,6) - same as 00:07:956 (3,1)

Good luck!
posted

FCL wrote:

M4M from my queue

Maybe use other BG? I has saw it before

If I can find a nice one....

  • [Norma;]
  1. 00:04:257 - bad idea to miss this beats. My suggestion http://puu.sh/lgBwT/ce42f94adc.jpg fixed
  2. 00:07:545 - s a m e fixed
  3. 00:19:463 (3) - 1/1 stack on Normal diff looks weird for me, imo need changed ummm...Wait for the next mod.
  4. 00:22:750 (2) - ^
  5. 00:39:189 (5) - move on 281;304 so look really good fixed
  6. 01:01:791 (4,5) - move on 224;52 for better flow fixed in other way
  7. 01:06:723 (2) - 273;47 looks better fixed
  8. 01:06:723 (2,6) - try to stack with end fixed
  • [Hard]
  1. 00:07:339 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - combo is really long, NC here 00:10:011 (1) - and here 00:12:476 (4) - fixed
  2. 01:24:805 (4) - nc too fixed
  • [Citrus]
  1. 00:14:942 (1,1) - looks randomly. My suggestion http://puu.sh/lgCif/ffa3b55a43.jpg
  2. 00:36:312 (1,2,3,4) - looks weird, make a square-circles is better
  3. 01:24:394 (1,2) - same, it's better http://puu.sh/lgCu2/c6c87b97b7.jpg
  • [Insane]
  1. 00:04:668 (3,2) - stack with end not necessary
  2. 00:07:956 (3,1) - try to make blanket, like this http://puu.sh/lgCA1/ea4be3fd51.jpg not necessary
  3. 00:33:847 (1,3) - stack ends not necessary
  4. 01:02:203 (9,2) - stack not necessary
  5. 01:07:134 (5,6) - same as 00:07:956 (3,1) not necessary


Good luck!
Thanks lot! :)
posted

FCL wrote:

M4M from my queue

Maybe use other BG? I has saw it before
  • [Citrus]
  1. 00:14:942 (1,1) - looks randomly. My suggestion http://puu.sh/lgCif/ffa3b55a43.jpg No change
  2. 00:36:312 (1,2,3,4) - looks weird, make a square-circles is better ^
  3. 01:24:394 (1,2) - same, it's better http://puu.sh/lgCu2/c6c87b97b7.jpgFixed but use another way
Thank you~
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  • General
  1. Citrus' Hard的Letterbox设置和其他难度不一样 把这个难度的Letterbox during breaktime去勾

    Normal
  2. 00:39:600 - 这里漏了一个Whistle
  3. 00:49:463 (3) - 加一个NC?因为这里的气氛突然变强,音效也跟着改变了。


    Hard
  4. 01:21:107 (7) - 取消这个滑条的折返,把后面应该有的1/2节奏补全

    Citrus' Hard
  5. 01:01:175 - 加一声clap?
  6. 01:20:901 - 同上

    Insane
  7. 00:49:874 (3,4,5) - 加clap强化渐弱效果?

2次快飞 :)
posted

Frey wrote:

  • General
  1. Citrus' Hard的Letterbox设置和其他难度不一样 把这个难度的Letterbox during breaktime去勾

    Normal
  2. 00:39:600 - 这里漏了一个Whistle
  3. 00:49:463 (3) - 加一个NC?因为这里的气氛突然变强,音效也跟着改变了。


    Hard
  4. 01:21:107 (7) - 取消这个滑条的折返,把后面应该有的1/2节奏补全

    Citrus' Hard
  5. 01:01:175 - 加一声clap?
  6. 01:20:901 - 同上

    Insane
  7. 00:49:874 (3,4,5) - 加clap强化渐弱效果?

2次快飞 :)
All fixed, Thanks! :)
posted
Yo

[Normal]
  1. 00:05:079 (1) - why same as color? new combo miss ?
  2. 00:49:874 (2,3,4) - 1/2 slider spma is not preferable in mapset without Easy diff. I think changed 00:50:696 (4) - circle


[Hard]
  1. 00:12:990 (1,1) - not much rhythm ? try this.
  2. 00:36:312 (8,1) - Swap Nc here.
  3. 00:39:600 (7,1) - Same as above.


[Citrus' Hard]
  1. 00:55:627 (1,1) - Too soon after a spinner. It definitely doesn't give players enough recovery.
    please read a rulehttps://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/241019
  2. 01:17:408 (4) - little jump part. i think add New combo more better easy read.


[Insane]
  1. nothing to say


gl ~ :3/
posted

Satellite wrote:

Yo

[Normal]
  1. 00:05:079 (1) - why same as color? new combo miss ? Oh!fixed!
  2. 00:49:874 (2,3,4) - 1/2 slider spma is not preferable in mapset without Easy diff. I think changed 00:50:696 (4) - circle
    fixed


[Hard]
  1. 00:12:990 (1,1) - not much rhythm ? try this. fixed
  2. 00:36:312 (8,1) - Swap Nc here. fixed
  3. 00:39:600 (7,1) - Same as above. fixed


[Insane]
  1. nothing to say


gl ~ :3/
:3 thanks a lot!
posted

Satellite wrote:

[Citrus' Hard]
  1. 00:55:627 (1,1) - Too soon after a spinner. It definitely doesn't give players enough recovery.
    please read a rulehttps://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/241019
  2. 01:17:408 (4) - little jump part. i think add New combo more better easy read.
    All fixed
Thank you~
posted
[General]
再加一种颜色如何啊 四种颜色可以每四段一个循环感觉会好点 你可以试试加个淡红色 顺便建议把现在的颜色都调淡一点感觉好看点

[Normal]
01:22:339 (1,2,3) - 为什么这里不用滑条 要是你说要跟琴音的话2就要去掉 不然看着有点乱
01:24:805 (2) - 弧度小点把1包好看点 至少弄成这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3975358

[Hard]
00:51:723 (2) - 唔 现在还是不建议用00:51:723 (2) - 这种滑条 好像rc里说了不要用 你可以改下红色描点不要挤一起
00:54:394 (9) - nc
00:55:011 (10) - 这个你弄弯点感觉能让这里好看点啊 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3975370

[citrus]
建议把diff名字改成Citrus' Insane 有的地方已经超过hard该有的难度了
00:08:367 (4,5,6,7) - 这几个放得太挤了 明明这里稍微放远点会好打点?
00:47:819 (10,1) - 交换nc
01:16:997 (3) - 这个是不是有点overmap了 建议吧这个去了用二分拍去放

[Insane]
00:08:367 (1,2) - 放一起感觉太近了 稍微移开点如何啊
00:52:340 (3) - 这种跟之前一样 别把红描点挤一块 用一个红描点就可以了
01:05:080 (1,3) - 这里其实把它们放右下角就会让star直接到3.75 你要是想的话可以试试...https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3975401
01:08:778 (10) - 把换成一个1/2滑条加一个圈如何啊 重音在滑条尾上感觉少点打击感
01:21:415 (3) - 这里只有01:21:466 - 01:21:518 - 两个音 你放1/8的折返滑条还是感觉有点牵强 建议不要跟那个八分拍的音的 这里就放1/2的节奏就好
01:22:956 (2) - 挤在一起有点不好看 试试这样如何啊 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3975340

姥爷又做神图啊
posted

ZZHBOY wrote:

[General]
再加一种颜色如何啊 四种颜色可以每四段一个循环感觉会好点 你可以试试加个淡红色 顺便建议把现在的颜色都调淡一点感觉好看点 ok

[Normal]
01:22:339 (1,2,3) - 为什么这里不用滑条 要是你说要跟琴音的话2就要去掉 不然看着有点乱 我跟的是人声的第一个音...
01:24:805 (2) - 弧度小点把1包好看点 至少弄成这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3975358 fixed

[Hard]
00:51:723 (2) - 唔 现在还是不建议用00:51:723 (2) - 这种滑条 好像rc里说了不要用 你可以改下红色描点不要挤一起 好的...改了。
00:54:394 (9) - nc fixed
00:55:011 (10) - 这个你弄弯点感觉能让这里好看点啊 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3975370 改了

[Insane]
00:08:367 (1,2) - 放一起感觉太近了 稍微移开点如何啊 为了流畅度,不变。
00:52:340 (3) - 这种跟之前一样 别把红描点挤一块 用一个红描点就可以了 改了另一种滑条
01:05:080 (1,3) - 这里其实把它们放右下角就会让star直接到3.75 你要是想的话可以试试...https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3975401 嗯...再考虑看看好了...
01:08:778 (10) - 把换成一个1/2滑条加一个圈如何啊 重音在滑条尾上感觉少点打击感 不影响整体节奏,所以不变。主要依旧是为了流畅度。
01:21:415 (3) - 这里只有01:21:466 - 01:21:518 - 两个音 你放1/8的折返滑条还是感觉有点牵强 建议不要跟那个八分拍的音的 这里就放1/2的节奏就好 不影响整体感,不变。
01:22:956 (2) - 挤在一起有点不好看 试试这样如何啊 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3975340 为了和前面00:08:367 (1,2)呼应,不变。

姥爷又做神图啊
nice mod :D 感谢
posted

ZZHBOY wrote:

[citrus]
建议把diff名字改成Citrus' Insane 有的地方已经超过hard该有的难度了 2.4星的Insane不太好吧
00:08:367 (4,5,6,7) - 这几个放得太挤了 明明这里稍微放远点会好打点? 这里我想保留 :(
00:47:819 (10,1) - 交换nc 改了
01:16:997 (3) - 这个是不是有点overmap了 建议吧这个去了用二分拍去放 这里对于Hard来说并不难吧?
非常感谢~
posted
bubbled.
to next bn: take a look at 01:21:415 (3) - in Insane and 01:16:997 (3) - in Citrus' Hard, judge if they are appropriate before further action.
posted
Hi ~
M4M request in game
Green : Suggestion

Normal
00:19:463 (3,4,5) - move like this ? http://puu.sh/loIae/85e777b277.jpg
00:59:326 (1) - add finish
01:19:668 (3) - ^


Hard
00:31:381 (1,2,3) - move like this ? http://puu.sh/loIhe/d084f46c43.jpg
00:51:723 (2) - add finish
00:52:339 (3) - ^

Good luck 8-)
posted

taka1235 wrote:

Hi ~
M4M request in game
Green : Suggestion

Normal
00:19:463 (3,4,5) - move like this ? http://puu.sh/loIae/85e777b277.jpg
00:59:326 (1) - add finish
01:19:668 (3) - ^


Hard
00:31:381 (1,2,3) - move like this ? http://puu.sh/loIhe/d084f46c43.jpg
00:51:723 (2) - add finish
00:52:339 (3) - ^

Good luck 8-)
all fixed :)
posted
I completed Platter and Rain diff :D

I'm very glad to make the music with my favorite songs.
Very thanks to Accel World!!

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: shirushi.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 58093
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:Shirushi -TV ver.-
TitleUnicode:シルシ -TV ver.-
Artist:LiSA
ArtistUnicode:LiSA
Creator:Accel World
Version:Sooty's Platter
Source:ソードアート・オンラインⅡ
Tags:Sword Art Online SAO ending ed2 Yuuki Asuna Citrus
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:241093

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.7
OverallDifficulty:7.3
ApproachRate:7.3
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
1792,410.958904109589,4,2,1,25,1,0
49052,-100,4,1,1,25,0,0
53161,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
53572,-100,4,1,1,25,0,0
54394,-100,4,2,1,25,0,0
57682,-100,4,1,1,55,0,0
58504,-100,4,2,1,35,0,0
59326,-83.3333333333333,4,1,1,35,0,1
82332,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,25,0,1
85678,410.958904109589,4,2,1,10,1,0
88657,-166.666666666667,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 252,175,175
Combo2 : 220,169,233
Combo3 : 153,220,225
Combo4 : 144,144,144

[HitObjects]
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Title:Shirushi -TV ver.-
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Artist:LiSA
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Version:Sooty's Rain
Source:ソードアート・オンラインⅡ
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posted
Thank you Sooty! :Dupdate~
posted
Random Mod (since i love this song so much)

General
  1. Include "Sooty" on the tags
  2. Also include "Launcher" on tags because that's the album name.
Sooty's Rain
  1. Slider Tick Rate : 2
  2. 00:21:518 (1) - ctrl+g
  3. 00:35:490 (3,4,5,6) - curve it like this one osu.ppy.sh/ss/3989617
  4. 00:49:463 (1) - Slant 00:49:668 a bit to the right.
  5. 00:58:504 (3) - Make this thing vertically straight.
  6. 01:20:490 (4) - x:408
  7. 01:23:983 - lower its volume to 5 or 10
Sooty's Platter
  1. 00:07:956 (3) - ctrl+g
  2. 01:21:107 (2) - x:304

Good luck!
posted
Hi.

[Platter]

00:17:202 (2,3) - What you want to follow here pls? These two object literally makes no sense as there is nothing to hit in the music. Those are just weak sounds from a piano. Take a look at the standard difficulties, none of them contain notes at this part. If you really want to have here something, then remove (2) and make (1) longer to end at 00:17:305 with lowered hitsounds. But I highly disapprove this.
00:34:668 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - At this part the higher distance should be between (1,2), (4,5) and (6,1) to follow the vocal and the melody as well. I know you followed the piano with the jump at (2,3) but thats weaker than the vocal right before.
00:46:997 (3,4,1) - This could be a jump pattern which means you should place a jump between (3,4) as well. Plus, (4,1) could be a Hyper.
00:49:874 (1,2,3,4,5) - Shorten the distances here please. Moving (2,4) around x172 is a good choice.
00:52:339 (3) - A horizontal slider after a Hyper chain might be too hard. Try to make a left curve instead.
00:58:915 (4,1) - No 1/4 Hypers at this level please. We never agreed on this to allow it! If you want to highlight the start of the kiai I suggest you to divide (4) into circles and at the end of the circle pattern just add a little distance to the slider. Something like this: http://bit.ly/1Ym3av8 And if you want to do something about the 1/4 allowance: t/377967
01:04:257 (1,2,3) - Can you make this more jumpy? It feels a bit empty at the moment.
01:08:161 - Why you left this vocal empty when you mapped it previously?
01:09:189 (1) - Wrongly snapped slider? The repeat should be at blue tick.
01:21:518 (3,4,5,6) - Again a little bit high distances for a Platter.

[Rain]

00:11:655 (1) - Move this note back to right a little bit. At the moment the distance is really sudden.
00:17:202 (2,3) - Same as on Platter. This shouldn't be used here. Plus, composing something just to be able to add a hyper is not acceptable as well.
00:26:038 (3) - Move this back to right as at 00:11:655 - The distance is sudden here as well.
00:34:257 (4,1) - I wonder why there is not Hyper here. The beat at (1) is pretty strong.
00:46:175 (1,2,3,4) - I want to move more here as the vocal increasing but you just used a simple right movement. Some back and forth would be nice.
00:47:408 (6,1) - Why no Hyper?
00:48:435 (2,3) - This could be a Hyper as well by moving (2) back to right a bit.
00:49:874 (5,6) - This shouldn't be Hyper here. The drum already stopped leaving a weak vocal behind. Plus this would give a nice pause before the next Hyper at (6,1).
00:54:394 (1) - Nah, this stoppes 1/4 earlier.
00:58:915 (4) - This makes me wonder, really. I doubt 1/8 needs to be used just to increase the difficulty a little.
01:04:565 (2) - This note is useless here as it follows nothing from the melody nor the vocal.
[]

There are some notes in both difficulty which makes me wonder. I can't say its bad but needs some cleaning. I would say 2-3 mod could be enough. Good luck. o/
posted

Hi_Hello wrote:

Random Mod (since i love this song so much)

General
  1. Include "Sooty" on the tags
  2. Also include "Launcher" on tags because that's the album name.
Sooty's Rain
  1. Slider Tick Rate : 2
  2. 00:21:518 (1) - ctrl+g
  3. 00:35:490 (3,4,5,6) - curve it like this one osu.ppy.sh/ss/3989617
  4. 00:49:463 (1) - Slant 00:49:668 a bit to the right.
  5. 00:58:504 (3) - Make this thing vertically straight.
  6. 01:20:490 (4) - x:408
  7. 01:23:983 - lower its volume to 5 or 10
Sooty's Platter
  1. 00:07:956 (3) - ctrl+g
  2. 01:21:107 (2) - x:304
All fixed!

Kurokami wrote:

Hi.

[Platter]

00:17:202 (2,3) - What you want to follow here pls? These two object literally makes no sense as there is nothing to hit in the music. Those are just weak sounds from a piano. Take a look at the standard difficulties, none of them contain notes at this part. If you really want to have here something, then remove (2) and make (1) longer to end at 00:17:305 with lowered hitsounds. But I highly disapprove this.
00:34:668 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - At this part the higher distance should be between (1,2), (4,5) and (6,1) to follow the vocal and the melody as well. I know you followed the piano with the jump at (2,3) but thats weaker than the vocal right before.
00:46:997 (3,4,1) - This could be a jump pattern which means you should place a jump between (3,4) as well. Plus, (4,1) could be a Hyper.
00:49:874 (1,2,3,4,5) - Shorten the distances here please. Moving (2,4) around x172 is a good choice.
00:52:339 (3) - A horizontal slider after a Hyper chain might be too hard. Try to make a left curve instead.
00:58:915 (4,1) - No 1/4 Hypers at this level please. We never agreed on this to allow it! If you want to highlight the start of the kiai I suggest you to divide (4) into circles and at the end of the circle pattern just add a little distance to the slider. Something like this: http://bit.ly/1Ym3av8 And if you want to do something about the 1/4 allowance: t/377967
01:04:257 (1,2,3) - Can you make this more jumpy? It feels a bit empty at the moment.
01:08:161 - Why you left this vocal empty when you mapped it previously? <added note
01:09:189 (1) - Wrongly snapped slider? The repeat should be at blue tick.
01:21:518 (3,4,5,6) - Again a little bit high distances for a Platter.

[Rain]

00:11:655 (1) - Move this note back to right a little bit. At the moment the distance is really sudden.
00:17:202 (2,3) - Same as on Platter. This shouldn't be used here. Plus, composing something just to be able to add a hyper is not acceptable as well.
00:26:038 (3) - Move this back to right as at 00:11:655 - The distance is sudden here as well.
00:34:257 (4,1) - I wonder why there is not Hyper here. The beat at (1) is pretty strong.
00:46:175 (1,2,3,4) - I want to move more here as the vocal increasing but you just used a simple right movement. Some back and forth would be nice. <swap (2,3)
00:47:408 (6,1) - Why no Hyper?
00:48:435 (2,3) - This could be a Hyper as well by moving (2) back to right a bit. <moved right but cant Hyper because balance with other placement
00:49:874 (5,6) - This shouldn't be Hyper here. The drum already stopped leaving a weak vocal behind. Plus this would give a nice pause before the next Hyper at (6,1).
00:54:394 (1) - Nah, this stoppes 1/4 earlier.
00:58:915 (4) - This makes me wonder, really. I doubt 1/8 needs to be used just to increase the difficulty a little. <change to 1/4
01:04:565 (2) - This note is useless here as it follows nothing from the melody nor the vocal. <removed
[]

There are some notes in both difficulty which makes me wonder. I can't say its bad but needs some cleaning. I would say 2-3 mod could be enough. Good luck. o/
not mention parts also fixed!
Thank you for both of them :)

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osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:シルシ -TV ver.-
Artist:LiSA
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Creator:Accel World
Version:Sooty's Platter
Source:ソードアート・オンラインⅡ
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Title:Shirushi -TV ver.-
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Artist:LiSA
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Creator:Accel World
Version:Sooty's Rain
Source:ソードアート・オンラインⅡ
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272,96,80285,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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124,164,80696,6,0,L|24:196,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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24,264,81723,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,128,81928,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,104,82134,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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