wcx19911123 wrote:

as your request

[General]
the difficulty is too low, especially the HP, you should raise it up to around 7. also AR can be increased a bit too现在是HP6了 ar太高感觉不好
unused hitsound: soft-hitclap.wav可以redl下这里好像删了

[Expelled]
00:45:412 - I suggest to add a note here, same as what you did at 00:39:012 - . it would fit the song better imoadded
03:25:012 - I strongly suggest you to add a note here to follow the voal. keeping empty here sounds really odd to meadded
05:37:812 (5) - put its volume down a bit, would fit the song betterdone
05:41:412 (1) - remove whistle, for same reason as ^^

nice map, call me back then

CDFA wrote:

Hey let's see how much shit I get for modding this hahahahahahhaha

I've got a bucket here that you can place it in.

Angela Balsac is seriously one of the hottest women I've seen in anime ever.

Diff
00:27:012 (3,4,5) - Like, this is a huge consistency issue. There's no reason to have it shorter, and it's not consistent with the rest of the map.moved them further
00:39:212 (1) - . . . no. The vocals are way more important than this.
00:45:612 (1) - ^
00:45:612 (1) - REMEMBER THOSE SPINNERS THAT I TOLD YOU TO TAKE OUT, WELL PUT ONE OF THEM HERE
in fact, i think spinner is the best way to show the sound here, you can listen it clearly from 00:40:612 - to 00:42:212 - , i don't know how to follow vocal well also vocal here is a little unsnapped
02:02:812 (1,2,3,4) - ok now this would be fine if you kept it consistent with the other iterations of it, but you didn't, so now this looks stupid.moved this circle 02:03:812 (1) - for a better flow
02:33:812 (5) - hitnormal?hitnormal should be at 02:33:712 (4) - and here i added drum sampleset
03:44:212 (4) - Ok this might be a little too big.here will be fine, i even can play
04:31:012 (1) - This is a little too strong for my taste. drumfinish maybe?maybe, i changed it to soft finish
05:07:812 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - hitsounds plsadded drum sampleset

Fix these and I can give bubble #2.

1. Combo1 and 2 are very similar in colour; try something with a little bit more Lum in 2 (try HSL 37,225,210).
2. It's recommended that you use two different hitsounds to differentiate between a bass and a snare hit. In your Kiai section, you're missing out on a lot of potential rhythms.
3. 03:06:212 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - With the way you mapped this, you're trying to represent a rhythm that just repeats itself four times. However, there are some noticeably stronger parts in this rhythm. Something like this is a little bit more accurate http://puu.sh/dBy0T.jpg, and if you don't like this, you can simply replace the sliders with just a circle, like this http://puu.sh/dBy4C.jpg.
4. 03:20:612 (1,2) - You want to click at 03:21:212 - instead of having an awkward falling off 1/1 break. Try something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2363232

CDFA wrote:

The vocals aren't too much out of time to really map to. Even at point where they might be, there's also guitar.

It's just really weird to have all of this stuff going but you're just like "nah, just spinnin"

1. i tried to follow the vocal but i still think two spinner is the best way to show the music here.we all know a spinner will become larger when we playing, so it could suit the growing volume at 00:41:412 - and 00:47:812 - well.
2. beside that, here is the most soft part of the music, without drum, so i don't think mapping any notes here is better for an app map.a map never be funner by just add more note to fill the music casually.
3. this part can also play a good role in transition between guitar part and the drum part after.if i map to follow vocal here, it will cause this part inconsistent with other parts imo.

Awaken wrote:

一星期2bubble 放弃

Elaine wrote:

Awaken wrote:

一星期2bubble 放弃

怎么又是你 提了

Awaken wrote:

Elaine wrote:

怎么又是你 提了

接着便是难懂的话 什么提了提了，引得众人都哄笑起来

CDFA wrote:

Sorry about that ;w;. I thought that Elaine had looked at the mod because she replied after you had posted it.

Go ahead and make the changes if you want. I can rebubble immediately after.

CDFA wrote:

how about that super cool timing check then.

Next BAT that mods this for approval, make sure that's looked at, as well as those's mod.

IamKwaN wrote:

CDFA always thinks others are female when one's ID is a girl's name lmao
like Elaine Flower Chloe Cherry Blossom blah blah blah
just remember, osu has no girls


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