PureCreamy wrote:

But it's seven days already right?
Oh come on, is that issues really a problem?
Is it wrong to use slider tick to emphasize the song? For me, it isn't too noisy at all. It really gets balanced with the main vocal and the main music itself or
Is it wrong to have so many 1/4 sliders? We can't call it hard diff if it isn't have 1/4 sliders right? The mapper tried so hard not to use the triple click so often so it get balanced with the other diff and she use 1/4 sliders instead. Is it wrong? If I were her, I would do the same thing to make a balanced mapset
And about the insane, in my opinion, it has nice flow and cool jumps. It's the GD'er mapping style and everyone enjoyed it. Why is it this map got disqualified because of that kind of reason??
This map is almost so flawless because of those who put all of their efforts in this map, so
Is that really some reasons to get this map disqualified?? I didn't agree at all

Fycho wrote:

No difference between dqing it at 1day and 7day, too.

jonathanlfj wrote:

im personally fine with the spread, but fix what you have to fix as pointed out by the QAT and i will take care of it again

10nya wrote:

good luck on re-ranking Modem ;-;
maybe I can help to mod the Normal-Hard idk still on exams lol

KSHR wrote:

To 10nya: If I DLed the map properly, there are some missing words in the lyrics SB (or some images are not working as you designed.)

00:12:084 - 心を　全部　焼き尽くすような

Lyrics

1. <Normal> is too easy. The difficulty gap between <Normal> and <Hard> is not appropriate. The <Normal> should be placed as a reasonable stepping stone between <Easy> and <Hard>. Complexity of the playable rhythm should be increased to differentiate this map further from the <Easy>.
2. The slidertick hitsounds are fine. You don't have to change them.
3. Overall beat placement and patterns in <Insane> are fine and not a reason for a disqualification. However, hitsounding in <Insane> has to be improved. There are misplaced and missing hitounds in several parts of this map as well as inappropriate soft/silent streams which makes some of the parts play worse than they actually are.

1. There are "ripple" sprites used at 01:52:417 - that don't match any of the beat objects placements in any diff. You can remove them from the .osb and add them to each specific .osu file at the correct coordinates if you want.
2. Also please take a look at the lyrics again, as previously stated.

VINXIS wrote:

sikh i guess i dont need to hunt down Atrue to help me w. my diff after all ayy lmao
hitsounds op

1. 00:21:751 (1) - : dibagian sini buat variasi aja, ngikutin drumnya. coba gini
   
2. 00:24:417 (1) - : ^
3. 00:27:084 (1) - : ^
4. 00:31:084 (3,4) - : drumnya kan tambah asik+kenceng, dibuat aja slider 1/2 kea gini
   
5. 00:45:751 (1,2,3,4) - : sama kea diatas, dibuat 1/2 aja, coba gini, biar ngga begitu susah, terserah diantara 00:46:251 - atau 00:46:751 - yg mau dibuat 1/2 slider. takut kesusahan buat normal player
   
6. 00:48:251 - : add circle terus stack sama 00:48:417 (1) - 's head gapapa kok, following vocal
7. 01:05:584 - : add circle buat support musicnya
8. 01:13:084 (2) - : geser ke 01:12:917 - terus hapus slider repeatnya. di 01:13:751 - kan nnti kosong, diganti jadi 2 circles / slider juga boleh
   
9. 01:16:417 (3,4) - : off beat bgt tbh, gimana kalau dua circle ini dihapus terus masukin slider yg mulai di 01:16:251 - supaya ngikutin vokalnya
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:32:751 (1) - : slider ini diganti kea notes di 01:30:084 (2,3,1) - malah lebih bagus tbh
11. 01:47:917 - : dibagian sebelumnya ngikutin vocal, sayang banget disini di ignore. gimana kalau add circle disini
12. 02:19:751 (2) - : sama kea 01:13:084 -
13. 02:23:084 (3) - : ganti jadi kea gini biar ngikutin vocal (gambar 3-4)
    
14. 02:55:584 - : add circle, sebelumnya ngikutin vocal, syg banget disini diignore
15. 02:57:751 (3,4) - : gimana kalau ngikutin vocal aja?
    
16. 03:20:417 (3) - : majuin ke 03:20:251 - terus panjangin sampe 03:21:084 -
17. 03:55:084 (3,4) - : biar ngikutin vocal rearrange kea 02:57:751 - aja
18. 03:59:584 (2,3,4) - : buat 1/2 circle ma slider aja
    

Hello

• 00:09:584 (1,2) - Blanket is off (you can check the approach circle, and, if the slider ends on the blanket, just do Ctrl G on the slider and put them near on the timeline, look how it's off: http://puu.sh/izCiU/8d9ead05d4.jpg
  00:23:084 (4,5) - Blanket tinely off here, the beginning of the slider (4) is off
  00:29:084 (5,1) - The flow here is bad, pretty sure unexperienced players would have to hand their pen (or mouse) weirdly to follow this. Maybe if you rotate it 180º and Ctrl G it
  00:32:751 (5) - Shouldn't NC be here? If yes, remove from (1) next to it
  00:33:751 (3,4) - Blanket is off
  00:35:751 (3,5) - This stack can be confusing for unexperienced players, try not to stack at normal
  00:37:751 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is really confusing for unexperienced players, ^
  00:57:417 (2,3) - Blanket is off http://puu.sh/izCyC/01d1b47986.jpg
  01:03:417 (5,6) - This movent doesn't feels good, what about: http://puu.sh/izCAR/65f3f73507.jpg
  01:24:417 - I think this part should be mapped because the rhythm is the same, the first time I saw it I thought you forget to map, the second too :p
  01:36:084 (5,1) - Blanket is off http://puu.sh/izCFn/fb267fcce7.jpg
  01:44:417 (1,2) - ^ definetly :p http://puu.sh/izCGV/a3195fa2f5.jpg
  01:55:751 (2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/izCHT/c1a587c8b6.jpg also avoid stacks
  02:07:084 (2,3) - Perfect this blanket slider? 02:05:751 (1,2) - also
  03:13:751 (1,2) - These two sliders are a bit weird together, what if you blanket (2) in (1) ?
  03:18:751 (3,1) - Blanket tinely off http://puu.sh/izCRy/876ae03835.jpg
  03:37:751 (1,2) - This pattern feels a bit weird, what if you flip (2) ? will look better imo
  03:52:251 (3,4) - This part here is a bit odd, I guess it will look better if you blanket them
  03:55:417 (4,5,1) - Blanket off (a lot) http://puu.sh/izCWd/8ea2b3d2a3.jpg

LucaSA4 wrote:

Hello , you are the next from my modding queue! ~This is a M4M Request. My active beatmap to mod: The Living Tombstone- Heavy's Pizza Song

[Normal]

• 00:09:584 (1,2) - Blanket is off (you can check the approach circle, and, if the slider ends on the blanket, just do Ctrl G on the slider and put them near on the timeline, look how it's off: http://puu.sh/izCiU/8d9ead05d4.jpg I think that blanket just works fine
  00:23:084 (4,5) - Blanket tinely off here, the beginning of the slider (4) is off I think that blanket just works fine
  00:29:084 (5,1) - The flow here is bad, pretty sure unexperienced players would have to hand their pen (or mouse) weirdly to follow this. Maybe if you rotate it 180º and Ctrl G it I think it's fine to have some difficulty like that in this Normal diff
  00:32:751 (5) - Shouldn't NC be here? If yes, remove from (1) next to it Oh right, fixed~!
  00:33:751 (3,4) - Blanket is off I think that blanket just works fine
  00:35:751 (3,5) - This stack can be confusing for unexperienced players, try not to stack at normal Nope, sorry.... But, in my opinion, Normal diff. allows stack like this. There are so many ranked maps that did this in Normal diff to increase the difficulty in this diff. And the only diff that doesn't allow stack is easy diff I think
  00:37:751 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is really confusing for unexperienced players, ^ Well, this diff allows to be a bit challenging for the beginner players since this diff needs to be a bit harder than the Easy diff (And this map got disqualified cuz this diff being too easy even for the beginner players, so....)
  00:57:417 (2,3) - Blanket is off http://puu.sh/izCyC/01d1b47986.jpg Fixed~!
  01:03:417 (5,6) - This movent doesn't feels good, what about: http://puu.sh/izCAR/65f3f73507.jpg Nice, but sorry, I want to make some combination with some straight sliders
  01:24:417 - I think this part should be mapped because the rhythm is the same, the first time I saw it I thought you forget to map, the second too :p Well, I did that on purpose
  01:36:084 (5,1) - Blanket is off http://puu.sh/izCFn/fb267fcce7.jpg That blanket looks kinda fine for me
  01:44:417 (1,2) - ^ definetly :p http://puu.sh/izCGV/a3195fa2f5.jpg Oh wow, you recognize it :p Fixed~!
  01:55:751 (2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/izCHT/c1a587c8b6.jpg also avoid stacks I think that blanket is fine, and for the stack, I have the same reason s above
  02:07:084 (2,3) - Perfect this blanket slider? 02:05:751 (1,2) - also That's not a blanket. Actually, I did that on purpose
  03:13:751 (1,2) - These two sliders are a bit weird together, what if you blanket (2) in (1) ? Whoa, that's a nice pattern suggestion, but that would ruin the next flow and they might touching the HP bar, so nope, sorry....
  03:18:751 (3,1) - Blanket tinely off http://puu.sh/izCRy/876ae03835.jpg Fixed~!
  03:37:751 (1,2) - This pattern feels a bit weird, what if you flip (2) ? will look better imo Nope, sorry.... I still prefer that flow
  03:52:251 (3,4) - This part here is a bit odd, I guess it will look better if you blanket them Okay, I'll do something else
  03:55:417 (4,5,1) - Blanket off (a lot) http://puu.sh/izCWd/8ea2b3d2a3.jpg Okay, fixed~!

That's it thank you for the mod!

bxxan wrote:

I dont see a problem with this map. its very fun

Mau-nyan wrote:

Hey!~ M4M request for Normal :3 Sorry for the delay
Well, here goes nothing.

Normal:

1. Check AiMod please. There is some distance errors. Here There are no DS problem there. Maybe..... Redownload?
2. 01:07:084 (1,1) - The re-action time here is too short. . Maybe delete this slider 01:09:751 - ? Imo Nope, sorry..... I prefer spinner
3. 02:13:751 (1,1) - ^ Same as before. Delete 02:16:417 - Imo Nope, sorry..... I prefer spinner
4. 03:27:417 (1) - NC here? Nope, sorry.....
5. 03:45:751 (1,1) - ^ Nope, sorry..... I prefer spinner
6. Very nice diffu! 030 Thanks (= 3 =)/

Hope my mod was useful.
Wish you good luck with this map of yours~
+ Star! Whoa, thank you (> w <)/

L0rdCthulhu wrote:

Hey! Hope I'm not too late to drop by here; apologies for the delay, your map was overlooked due to it's 96-12=84 SP difference from our requirements, but I don't have any stringent requirements to follow, so let's do this! Be aware that this is only for the Normal diff, as requested in the queue! Hi~! :3 Welcome~! \(> w <)/

General

1. BPM and Offset : ( ✓ )
2. Aimod : ( ✓ ), but partially. I would encourage you to try and reduce the file size down by a little; even without the video it exceeds 10mb. Don't worry, it doesn't the matter. Many ranked maps do that
3. Kiai : ( ✓ ), although 1/3 of the map is kiai. I can overlook this, but better to be safe than sorry. It doesn't the matter too. Don't worry
   (^ w ^)/
4. Metadata : ( ✓ )
5. Hitsound : ( ✓ )
6. Video : ( ✓ ), nice SB thing you got going on on the BG. Thanks (>/////<) 10nya made that for me. He/she is awesome :3

Whoa. Thanks for checking the whole thing (O////O)

Normal

1. 00:04:084 (2,3) - This can be a blanket, like this:
   SPOILER

   
   Sorry.... I want to keep that slider ^^
2. 00:41:751 (3,4) - I don't see why this can't be a blanket; the other side is a blanket after all. Maybe after that slider 00:43:084 (1) could either stack over it or follow the configuration found in other parts of the map? i.e. this two: 00:27:084 (1,2) Nope, sorry.... I didn't planning on blanketing it
3. This slider 02:18:417 (4) means that the player has to drop off awkwardly from this repeat slider 02:17:084 (3), go straight right and then drop off down again to turn clockwise to the left. I'd rather you shift it so the white tracer line is not more than 045 degrees so the flow is much neater. Nope, sorry.... The flow looks fine for me :3
4. 02:29:251 (5) - The tick; it isn't centered! That happened when the slider started at the red tick. Not at the white tick, so it's fine
5. 03:31:084 (3,4) - The player goes straight upwards at a 045 degree angle and is required to drop down nearly 080 degrees to catch the next slider. Maybe have both these sliders be those 45 degree corner sliders? Whoa. That's really nice, but sorry.... I still wanted to keep it ^^
6. 03:40:917 (5) - This slider is a tad awkward; the red anchor point is too close to the end of the slider, giving it a weird look. Maybe have a S slider? Nope, sorry.... I still wanna keep it (> v <)/

Overall

1. I found the song really lovely, and the map was just like the song itself. Thanks (O////O)
2. It was really well mapped, with certain parts really accentuating the song. And this is just the normal diff I reviewed! Y-you make me blush (=////=)
3. I hope all will be smooth in the process of rank, and I wish you all the best in doing so! *HUG*

1. Canadian's diff should be changed diff name into "VINXIS' Hard" imo sth like that as he made GD b4 too

1. 00:05:084 (2) - The notes before are in symmetry form but this note is not, causing the placement become quite random. Just follow the pattern b4 might actually be quite good already http://puu.sh/iVSiy/5c92b695a0.jpg
2. 00:16:751 (1) - Curving this slider a little might improve the design and flow more https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3375857
3. 00:17:417 (2,3) - Moving these 2 notes more to below of 00:16:751 (1) - help improve in the flow
4. 00:19:751 (2,3) - Suggestion http://puu.sh/iVSJj/040122d464.jpg just to emphasize the piano sound of 00:20:417 - or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3375869 to improve design and flow at 00:21:084 (3,1) -
5. 00:30:751 (2,3) - The flow here is very bad. Consider make 00:31:084 (3) - as a straight slider
6. 00:33:751 (3) - Ctrl+H for flow
7. 01:21:917 (2,3) - Avoid offbeats clicks while mapping Easy diffs https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3375897
8. 01:34:084 (1,2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3375918
9. 01:52:417 (1,1,2) - Leaving it blank in the part turning from verse to chorus is actually quite hilarious imo as the beats are actually quite main. I kind of helped you ruin your map map the parts so ya
   

   364,220,112417,6,0,L|376:332,2,105,12|12|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:3:0:0:
   392,132,113751,2,0,P|360:128|312:148,1,70
   280,220,114417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   280,220,114751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   236,140,115084,6,0,B|176:112|124:140|124:140|88:40,1,210,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   12,92,116417,1,2,0:0:0:0:

10. 02:27:084 (1,2,3) - Pattern similar to of 01:21:917 (2,3)
11. 02:59:084 (1,2) - Distance
12. 03:19:751 (1,2) - Move together to lower until slider head of 03:20:417 (2) - mirrors the end of 03:17:751 (4) - seems better for flow and design

1. 01:22:417 - Should add a note here imo
2. 01:23:417 (6,7) - I don't actually understand the purpose of mapping these two sliders, quite unnecessary for me as it doesn't emphasize anything
3. 02:29:251 (5,6,7) - As of above
4. 03:59:084 (1,2,3,4) - The music is similar to the parts mentioned above. You might need to map according to that note placement
5. 01:53:751 - As in Easy diff, imo the blank emphasizes strong beats so you might need to map them

HootOwlStar wrote:

From my queue
Mostly suggestions in my mod

[General]

1. Canadian's diff should be changed diff name into "VINXIS' Hard" imo sth like that as he made GD b4 too Errr.... Nope, sorry... Cuz that's the username that he used now :3

[Easy]

1. 00:05:084 (2) - The notes before are in symmetry form but this note is not, causing the placement become quite random. Just follow the pattern b4 might actually be quite good already http://puu.sh/iVSiy/5c92b695a0.jpg Sorry.... I'm gonna keep that
2. 00:16:751 (1) - Curving this slider a little might improve the design and flow more https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3375857 Sorry... I wanna keep that straight slider
3. 00:17:417 (2,3) - Moving these 2 notes more to below of 00:16:751 (1) - help improve in the flow Sorry.... But that will make the slider touch the hp bar
4. 00:19:751 (2,3) - Suggestion http://puu.sh/iVSJj/040122d464.jpg just to emphasize the piano sound of 00:20:417 - or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3375869 to improve design and flow at 00:21:084 (3,1) - Sorry.... But I'll keep that > <
5. 00:30:751 (2,3) - The flow here is very bad. Consider make 00:31:084 (3) - as a straight slider Sorry.... I prefer a curvy slider
6. 00:33:751 (3) - Ctrl+H for flow Whoa. That's nice <3 Okay~!
7. 01:21:917 (2,3) - Avoid offbeats clicks while mapping Easy diffs https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3375897 That's nice too. Okay, fixed~!
8. 01:34:084 (1,2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3375918 Sorry, I'm gonna keep it
9. 01:52:417 (1,1,2) - Leaving it blank in the part turning from verse to chorus is actually quite hilarious imo as the beats are actually quite main. I kind of helped you ruin your map map the parts so ya
   

   364,220,112417,6,0,L|376:332,2,105,12|12|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:3:0:0:
   392,132,113751,2,0,P|360:128|312:148,1,70
   280,220,114417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   280,220,114751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   236,140,115084,6,0,B|176:112|124:140|124:140|88:40,1,210,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   12,92,116417,1,2,0:0:0:0:

   You're so kind~ ........Wait, WHAT? (O A O''')
10. 02:27:084 (1,2,3) - Pattern similar to of 01:21:917 (2,3) Okay~!
11. 02:59:084 (1,2) - Distance Errr... Why? (O w O)
12. 03:19:751 (1,2) - Move together to lower until slider head of 03:20:417 (2) - mirrors the end of 03:17:751 (4) - seems better for flow and design Nope, sorry... I'm gonna keep it ^ ^

[Normal]

1. 01:22:417 - Should add a note here imo Oh, right, added~!
2. 01:23:417 (6,7) - I don't actually understand the purpose of mapping these two sliders, quite unnecessary for me as it doesn't emphasize anything Sorry.... I'm gonna keep it
3. 02:29:251 (5,6,7) - As of above Okay~!
4. 03:59:084 (1,2,3,4) - The music is similar to the parts mentioned above. You might need to map according to that note placement Nope, sorry.....
5. 01:53:751 - As in Easy diff, imo the blank emphasizes strong beats so you might need to map them I think the player should rest their fingers a little bit before the kiai time, so....

i suck so i just mod 2 diffs instead of 4
ok bye good luck