Hey, Mod4Mod from your queue.
Edit: Seems I caught this map in the middle of it being updated. I apologise if some of these mods are obsolete.
General
Either I'm missing something, or I feel like there's no need to have two of uninherited timing points that are identical. One should suffice.
Easy
- 00:11:725 (1) - Perhaps move to 104:144 so that it forms a triangle with 00:10:600 (4,5)? It looks better I think, though you'll have to adjust the position of the slider after it.
- 00:27:475 (2) - This blanket isn't quite perfect [00:27:193]. If you look at it from that timestamp, you can see how it compares to the follow circle.
- 00:27:475 (2,3) - These would look better if they were the same shape in my opinion.
- 01:24:475 (1,2) - Make these the same shape. Kind of nit-picky, but a sharp eye can see that they're slightly different. Just copy-paste them and flip them.
Normal
- 00:09:475 (2,1) - Make these the same shape by copy-pasting them.
- 00:21:100 (2) - This blanket isn't quite perfect [00:20:256].
- 00:28:225 (1) - As above [00:27:334].
- 00:49:600 (4,1) - Stacks can be difficult for beginners. A few are fine, but I would keep the timing for the stacks consistent if possible. Thus far you have had stacks 1/2 beat apart, while this stack is 1/1 apart, which can be a little misleading. Or atleast I broke here but that might be because I'm bad.
- 00:51:475 (1,2) - Make these the same shape. Sorry for being a bit picky on these.
- 00:57:100 (1,2) - The visual flow doesn't look good here in my opinion since it goes from a curved slider to a straight slider in the x-plane (i.e. it's mixing a curved pattern with a linear pattern). I made a suggestion just below, but you can do whatever you want for it.
-Mei-'s Hard
- 00:35:162 (4,1) - Use a larger spacing, since it is easy to confuse the timing of this with the current spacing.
- 00:44:537 (7) - This note is too hidden and is difficult to read. I would advise against stacking it under the slider like this. The skin's border makes it difficult to spot with the stack offset, and the follow lines of 5-6 obstruct the view of being able to read the follow point back again.
- 00:47:912 (1) - Starting a note on the red tick like this right after a spinner is a little awkward to play. I would have the first note after the spinner be a white tick if possible.
Hard
- 00:01:600 (1,2,3) - This triangle isn't quite perfect.
- 00:10:975 (6) - I know this blanket probably gave you quite a bit of trouble, but I still feel it could be improved. Right now it still doesn't look right. Try experimenting using two slider points for the curve instead of just one.
- 00:20:725 (1,2,3) - Perhaps something like the example I show below? Copy the first one and rotate them 120 degrees each time.
- 00:44:725 (1) - The curve at the start of this slider looks out of place. I would change this slider to something a bit more simple.
- 00:56:537 (3,4,5) - Perhaps make a triangle out of these?
- 00:59:537 (4) - This blanket doesn't look the best. Try make it circular rather than parabolic. Reverse slider 00:58:975 (3) to compare it with an appropriate approach circle.
- 01:14:350 (5) - Make the curve to this slider less shallow so that it wraps around 01:13:787 (4) a bit neater (right now, you can see that the body of this slider is further away from 4 than the tail).
- 01:16:975 (3,4) - The spacing is inconsistent here.
Insane
- 00:17:912 (4) - This note sounds out of place since nothing is being played here. Perhaps put it on the next white tick instead to keep polarity consistent?
- 00:27:475 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't think the music suggests a stream of this length. Perhaps have a slider starting from 7?
- 00:34:694 (4) - Have this slider arranged like this kind of suggests it has an even number of repeats. Perhaps have it like this instead?
- 00:38:537 (5,1) - The music dones't really suggest a jump like this. I would reduce it a bit, perhaps by making the leading slider the near one instead of the far one.
- 01:05:350 (1) - This note is too hidden and is difficult to read (as someone who plays Hidden a lot, a note like this for me would be extremely frustrating). I would advise not stacking it there.
I like this mapset. Good luck
Edit: Seems I caught this map in the middle of it being updated. I apologise if some of these mods are obsolete.
General
Either I'm missing something, or I feel like there's no need to have two of uninherited timing points that are identical. One should suffice.
Easy
- 00:11:725 (1) - Perhaps move to 104:144 so that it forms a triangle with 00:10:600 (4,5)? It looks better I think, though you'll have to adjust the position of the slider after it.
- 00:27:475 (2) - This blanket isn't quite perfect [00:27:193]. If you look at it from that timestamp, you can see how it compares to the follow circle.
- 00:27:475 (2,3) - These would look better if they were the same shape in my opinion.
- 01:24:475 (1,2) - Make these the same shape. Kind of nit-picky, but a sharp eye can see that they're slightly different. Just copy-paste them and flip them.
Normal
- 00:09:475 (2,1) - Make these the same shape by copy-pasting them.
- 00:21:100 (2) - This blanket isn't quite perfect [00:20:256].
- 00:28:225 (1) - As above [00:27:334].
- 00:49:600 (4,1) - Stacks can be difficult for beginners. A few are fine, but I would keep the timing for the stacks consistent if possible. Thus far you have had stacks 1/2 beat apart, while this stack is 1/1 apart, which can be a little misleading. Or atleast I broke here but that might be because I'm bad.
- 00:51:475 (1,2) - Make these the same shape. Sorry for being a bit picky on these.
- 00:57:100 (1,2) - The visual flow doesn't look good here in my opinion since it goes from a curved slider to a straight slider in the x-plane (i.e. it's mixing a curved pattern with a linear pattern). I made a suggestion just below, but you can do whatever you want for it.
-Mei-'s Hard
- 00:35:162 (4,1) - Use a larger spacing, since it is easy to confuse the timing of this with the current spacing.
- 00:44:537 (7) - This note is too hidden and is difficult to read. I would advise against stacking it under the slider like this. The skin's border makes it difficult to spot with the stack offset, and the follow lines of 5-6 obstruct the view of being able to read the follow point back again.
- 00:47:912 (1) - Starting a note on the red tick like this right after a spinner is a little awkward to play. I would have the first note after the spinner be a white tick if possible.
Hard
- 00:01:600 (1,2,3) - This triangle isn't quite perfect.
- 00:10:975 (6) - I know this blanket probably gave you quite a bit of trouble, but I still feel it could be improved. Right now it still doesn't look right. Try experimenting using two slider points for the curve instead of just one.
- 00:20:725 (1,2,3) - Perhaps something like the example I show below? Copy the first one and rotate them 120 degrees each time.
- 00:44:725 (1) - The curve at the start of this slider looks out of place. I would change this slider to something a bit more simple.
- 00:56:537 (3,4,5) - Perhaps make a triangle out of these?
- 00:59:537 (4) - This blanket doesn't look the best. Try make it circular rather than parabolic. Reverse slider 00:58:975 (3) to compare it with an appropriate approach circle.
- 01:14:350 (5) - Make the curve to this slider less shallow so that it wraps around 01:13:787 (4) a bit neater (right now, you can see that the body of this slider is further away from 4 than the tail).
- 01:16:975 (3,4) - The spacing is inconsistent here.
Insane
- 00:17:912 (4) - This note sounds out of place since nothing is being played here. Perhaps put it on the next white tick instead to keep polarity consistent?
- 00:27:475 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't think the music suggests a stream of this length. Perhaps have a slider starting from 7?
- 00:34:694 (4) - Have this slider arranged like this kind of suggests it has an even number of repeats. Perhaps have it like this instead?
- 00:38:537 (5,1) - The music dones't really suggest a jump like this. I would reduce it a bit, perhaps by making the leading slider the near one instead of the far one.
- 01:05:350 (1) - This note is too hidden and is difficult to read (as someone who plays Hidden a lot, a note like this for me would be extremely frustrating). I would advise not stacking it there.
I like this mapset. Good luck