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Hanatan - Jishou Mushoku [Osu|CatchTheBeat]

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Moo-Chan
no changes for me but thanks for the mod c:

all updated
DragonSlayer96
Thank your friend Xellie for the mod Moo-chan on the CtB map

General
Tags are conflicting. you can see this on Vhy's difficulty Had two difficulties that were taken out of the mapset, my bad

O.o all those custom hitsounds though

Rain
00:57:807 (3) - due to how the vocals are, i feel that this slider would be better going the other way.
01:13:307 (2) - ^ if you do, you want to edit the notes right after and (maybe???) just flip them around

Also, check AiMod. there is an unsnapped item for you to fix. ( 01:11:472 (4) - object end isn't snapped)

EDIT : fixed a sloppy error on my part
MBomb
Mod requested by Xellie for ctb diff lol

Vhy's Rain
00:11:307 (2,3) - I think this works better as a 2/3 slider.
00:19:307 (2,3) - ^ (Because these are held notes)
00:21:807 (7) - Whilst this would lead to a very short combo, I'd NC this because of the instrument change in mapping.
00:23:807 (7) - NC for emphasis on the strong beat and to avoid a long combo.
00:34:307 (5,6,7) - I like this as a 1/3 slider repeating once.
00:39:807 (5) - NC for strong beat and to avoid a long combo.
00:51:807 (4) - Possibly have 3 hyper into this? The beat is quite strong.
00:53:807 (4) - ^
01:25:807 (3) - The change from 2 to this feels weird without an NC in my opinion.

Alright, done.
Arphimigon
Requested mod~
I'm doing GDs aswell because short map = Spare time ha (don't kill me all those other GD mappers pls)

[Easy]
Admittedly very decent in patterns and flow but it is small touches overall that are what needs doing.
This is probably just gonna be opinions as the map is nice.
00:09:807 (2) - Can't this blanket the start of slider 1?
00:13:307 (2) - Angle is kinda harsh to this note considering this music is calm as hell~ imo 00:11:807 (4,1,2,3) - the notes could be made into a curve spacing anyway.
00:16:807 (1) - x:291 y:296 nazitriangle
00:20:307 (5,1) - Sounds and feels better as a note then a slider. (yes I can tell this is emphasizing the instrument but point stands it feels nicer after the reverse before)
00:30:807 (3) - Should be a reverse if 00:26:807 (3) - is for consistency.
00:39:807 (3) - Another naziblanket thing here (end point up middle point down)
00:51:807 (4) - Make it an 180 degree flip of last slider?
00:54:807 (1,1) - Neccessary NCs? Would remove one.
00:59:807 (3) - Sorry but flow is pointing more right than down here rip pattern.
01:08:307 (2,3,4,5,1) - Placement of notes in this is kinda weird. Make into a nicer curve? (Or a curve at all)
01:21:807 (2) - 180 degree flip of last slider if possible?
01:26:807 (1,1,1) - I can see the NCs are meant to emphasize this area but sadly it looks weird haha (and everyone complains about sections like these on my maps)

[Pishi's Normal]
Love this normal, loss of words. <3
00:18:307 (3) - Would make it more down to fit with the patterning of last notes/sliders.
00:46:640 (4,1,2,3) - Kinda makes a difficulty spike in terms of reading, change or keep as your will, either way make 00:47:307 (2) - point more upwards so the angle is same to previous and next please.

[Rakuen's Hard]
Nazi stuff incoming (rip this difficulty needed it the most)
00:09:307 (2) - x:264 y:246 naziblanket
00:10:307 (5) - Would play better as a curve imo
00:14:307 (6) - y:71 (I can see off pixel stacks in play OCD fox here)
00:16:473 (4,5,1) - Either fix the DS up here, or make the curve less harsh with the momentum needed here. This is weird as hell.
00:26:807 (1) - x:16 y:268 naziblanket
00:27:473 (2,3) - Weird to play this whilst on these ticks (i cant say blue/red rip)
00:55:307 (2) - Jump is fine, not emphasized THIS MUCH from 1.3 DS to 2.5 imo
01:08:807 (2) - Move middle point down a tad for naziblanket

[Smug's Insane]
The long sliders in this really cramped my style. Mapping to every sound then missing out ones is just... no please ouch.
00:10:140 - Why no sound here? (I see you do this as a recurring pattern so I wont point it our every time, still nice to know why.)
00:11:807 (1) - if you are going to use darty jumping like this, atleast stack it properly at x:451 y:302 <3
00:32:306 (4) - Pls follow curve, put it more up-left
00:46:807 (1) - So... off putting to stack this and last note... There isn't a good enough reason for this. It kinda ruins the momentum of the last jumps too.
01:00:307 - Sound?
01:08:140 (2) - Same as above but this just feels weird entirely. Having a long slider at a random time like this killed my brain (no offense but that's how I felt) you should make into a note + long slider (and delete next note)
01:16:140 (2) - Kinda okay here though

[Insane]
Pretty decent. Little things nothing big at all!
00:09:973 (3) - No reason for stack, breaks momentum and music isn't really "stopping" any time soon.
00:21:307 (3) - Feels better when raised a little.
00:44:307 (5,6,1) - Kinda weird with momentum pointing up-right (you can use slider leniency to your advantage for linear flow but still) I would try and make the flow to the slider pointing that direction more obvious -if possible-
00:48:473 (5,6,1) - Would equalize DS here.
01:03:307 (2) - Some reason I expected a reverse short slider, kinda helps in terms of the music and the previous slider.

I would actually love to see this ranked. I like the maps and the music, I think the difficulties really fit well with the song style (except the long sliders *stares at Smug*)
Good luck with this!
pishifat

Arphimigon wrote:

[Pishi's Normal]
Love this normal, loss of words. <3
00:18:307 (3) - Would make it more down to fit with the patterning of last notes/sliders. moved the other one down so they're equal now goodyay
00:46:640 (4,1,2,3) - Kinda makes a difficulty spike in terms of reading, change or keep as your will, either way make 00:47:307 (2) - point more upwards so the angle is same to previous and next please. angling a straight slider mroe than 15 degrees D: never
i also changed hitsounds completely because moo's hitsounds are gross af

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osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 56307
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
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Title:Jishou Mushoku
TitleUnicode:自傷無色
Artist:Hanatan
ArtistUnicode:花たん
Creator:Moo-Chan
Version:pishi's Normal
Source:
Tags:hatsune miku utaite vocaloid achromatic nicovideo self inflicted pishifat rakuen smug- vhy cut
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Topic Starter
Moo-Chan

pishifat wrote:

i also changed hitsounds completely because moo's hitsounds are gross af
wow so mean
Fizz

Arphimigon wrote:

[Smug's Insane]
The long sliders in this really cramped my style. | You're gonna have to be more specific than "long sliders" cause there are a lot of "long sliders" Mapping to every sound then missing out ones is just... no please ouch.

00:10:140 - Why no sound here? (I see you do this as a recurring pattern so I wont point it our every time, still nice to know why.) | Because it's the rhythm I chose
00:11:807 (1) - if you are going to use darty jumping like this, atleast stack it properly at x:451 y:302 <3 fixed
00:32:306 (4) - Pls follow curve, put it more up-left done
00:46:807 (1) - So... off putting to stack this and last note... There isn't a good enough reason for this. It kinda ruins the momentum of the last jumps too. changed
01:00:307 - Sound?
01:08:140 (2) - Same as above but this just feels weird entirely. Having a long slider at a random time like this killed my brain (no offense but that's how I felt) you should make into a note + long slider (and delete next note)
01:16:140 (2) - Kinda okay here though | Okay well clearly if you think that sometimes it's okay and others it's not you're just unaware of what I'm trying to map. Also next time don't bury your suggestion inside a potentially pissy comment and then justify it with "no offense" because that just makes me want to disregard your entire post.

Also I'm getting pretty tired of hearing suggestions to change this rhythm because unless for some reason I'm batshit crazy it's not that hard to figure out what I'm trying to map
I'm sick as shit and that comes with getting irritated really easily

update
osu file format v14

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Title:Jishou Mushoku
TitleUnicode:自傷無色
Artist:Hanatan
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Tags:hatsune miku utaite vocaloid achromatic nicovideo self inflicted pishifat rakuen smug- vhy cut
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Topic Starter
Moo-Chan
arfimigon

Arphimigon wrote:

Requested mod~
I'm doing GDs aswell because short map = Spare time ha (don't kill me all those other GD mappers pls) :P

[Easy]
Admittedly very decent in patterns and flow but it is small touches overall that are what needs doing.
This is probably just gonna be opinions as the map is nice.
00:09:807 (2) - Can't this blanket the start of slider 1? fixed
00:13:307 (2) - Angle is kinda harsh to this note considering this music is calm as hell~ imo 00:11:807 (4,1,2,3) - the notes could be made into a curve spacing anyway. ima keep this cause i like the way it flows
00:16:807 (1) - x:291 y:296 nazitriangle fixed
00:20:307 (5,1) - Sounds and feels better as a note then a slider. (yes I can tell this is emphasizing the instrument but point stands it feels nicer after the reverse before) eh, im gonna keep
00:30:807 (3) - Should be a reverse if 00:26:807 (3) - is for consistency. ok
00:39:807 (3) - Another naziblanket thing here (end point up middle point down) fixed?
00:51:807 (4) - Make it an 180 degree flip of last slider? ima keep
00:54:807 (1,1) - Neccessary NCs? Would remove one. i have them here due to the way the song emphasizes the notes, and for consistency in my diffs
00:59:807 (3) - Sorry but flow is pointing more right than down here rip pattern. it plays perfectly fine though
01:08:307 (2,3,4,5,1) - Placement of notes in this is kinda weird. Make into a nicer curve? (Or a curve at all) k
01:21:807 (2) - 180 degree flip of last slider if possible? ehh
01:26:807 (1,1,1) - I can see the NCs are meant to emphasize this area but sadly it looks weird haha (and everyone complains about sections like these on my maps) same as above

[Insane]
Pretty decent. Little things nothing big at all!
00:09:973 (3) - No reason for stack, breaks momentum and music isn't really "stopping" any time soon. gonna keep
00:21:307 (3) - Feels better when raised a little. fixed
00:44:307 (5,6,1) - Kinda weird with momentum pointing up-right (you can use slider leniency to your advantage for linear flow but still) I would try and make the flow to the slider pointing that direction more obvious -if possible- eh, i would, its a great suggestion, but im gonna keep it because of the fact that i like the little movement to the left that you have to do
00:48:473 (5,6,1) - Would equalize DS here. its like this because of the louder pitch on the downbeat, so therefore it creates a smaller jump than the previous note
01:03:307 (2) - Some reason I expected a reverse short slider, kinda helps in terms of the music and the previous slider. it wouldnt fit imo :c

I would actually love to see this ranked. I like the maps and the music, I think the difficulties really fit well with the song style (except the long sliders *stares at Smug*) thanks ♥
Good luck with this!
Vhy

- Magic Bomb - wrote:

Mod requested by Xellie for ctb diff lol

Vhy's Rain
00:11:307 (2,3) - I think this works better as a 2/3 slider.
00:19:307 (2,3) - ^ (Because these are held notes)
00:21:807 (7) - Whilst this would lead to a very short combo, I'd NC this because of the instrument change in mapping. for all NCs stuff i won't change them because it has its own placement. i put them in every 2 stanza constantly
00:23:807 (7) - NC for emphasis on the strong beat and to avoid a long combo.
00:34:307 (5,6,7) - I like this as a 1/3 slider repeating once. a repeat slider will completely changes the movement, in other word it will ruin the flow
00:39:807 (5) - NC for strong beat and to avoid a long combo.
00:51:807 (4) - Possibly have 3 hyper into this? The beat is quite strong. i keep it as it is. somehow it doesn't for me
00:53:807 (4) - ^ ^
01:25:807 (3) - The change from 2 to this feels weird without an NC in my opinion. you maybe right this one. added

Alright, done.

DragonSlayer96 wrote:

Rain
00:57:807 (3) - due to how the vocals are, i feel that this slider would be better going the other way. changed to a curved one
01:13:307 (2) - ^ if you do, you want to edit the notes right after and (maybe???) just flip them around :3

Also, check AiMod. there is an unsnapped item for you to fix. ( 01:11:472 (4) - object end isn't snapped) fixed
no reply mean fixed.

thanks for the mod

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Garven
Lazy mod

Easy could use more rhythmic diversity. Also try using circles a bit more during long stretches of sliders.

Topic Starter
Moo-Chan

Garven wrote:

Lazy mod

Easy could use more rhythmic diversity. Also try using circles a bit more during long stretches of sliders.

thanks garven bby, ill look into the easy and the ar of the insane
Kite
Hey, was asked to take a look into this mapset!

[General]
As Garven already pointed out, the kiai time at 01:28:640 - would work better if it started exactly at 01:28:807 - , this applies to the Easy, Insane and Smug's Insane diffs.

[Folder]
pishi's Normal.osu points to BeatmapID:0 and BeatmappSetID:-1 for some reason.. BeatmapID should be 654080 and BeatmapSetID should be 239627 .
It shouldn't be a big problem if it submitted normally but better to just change the values manually so everything is fine~

[Easy]

00:44:307 (5) - I don't like how this slider repeats onto the big white tick, it would benefit the structure of the map to start the next combo at 00:44:807 - instead. You could place a single circle at 00:44:307 - remove the repeat on the slider and place it on the next white tick instead. It would require you to rework the pattern here but might be worth to consider to improve the structure.

00:54:807 (1,1) - These are unneccessary new combo placements imo, I can see that you placed one on the slider because you have a slight SV speedup (1.05x SV) and it's there to indicate the speed change, but to be honest it's barely noticable. Also speed-ups are kinda to tricky to be used on an easy difficulty.
I would suggest to leave out the speedup here and remove the new combos. The speedup on the kiai seems alright to me~

01:08:307 (2) - I think having a new combo here instead of 01:06:807 (1) - seems better with the way you structured your new combo placement on the previous combos.

Following suggestions follow the same reason as the previous point:
01:10:807 (1) - Removew new combo
01:14:807 (1) - Same here
01:15:307 (4) - You forgot the clap on the sliderend
01:18:807 (1) - Remove new combo
01:22:807 (3) - Same here

01:26:807 (1,1,1) - Not sure what the reasoning behind the new combo spam here is, but imo it shouldn't be there

[Smug's Insane]
00:59:807 (1,2) - This rhythm sounds super awkward while playing, what about ctrl+g 01:00:140 (2,3) - here? This sounds a lot better as it follows vocals properly (respace accordingly)
01:08:140 (2,3) - Same here
01:09:640 (3,4,5) - Super dodgy spacing here, first a huge jump and then an anti jump with the same spacing as before.. move 4 closer?
01:12:473 (2,3) - Ctrl+g on these two notes will improve the playability and the flow towards the next object
EDIT:
01:16:140 (2,3) - Missed this earlier on, same rhythm suggestion as previously!
00:51:640 (1,2,3,4,5) - The sliders in this pattern would play more nicely if they each started on a white tick instead, rhythmically it's more appealing.

[Overall]
Really nice mapset, I didn't quite like the idea of having insane difficulties for this kind of song as they seem a bit of an overkill but it works out somehow
All diffs are made very well and even the hardest difficulty with all the jumps, which btw seem kinda random, plays fine as the patterns play and flow naturally
Anyways, hope this was helpful to you, sorry if I might have missed anything!
Good luck~
Topic Starter
Moo-Chan

Kite wrote:

Hey, was asked to take a look into this mapset! i know by whooo~

[General]
As Garven already pointed out, the kiai time at 01:28:640 - would work better if it started exactly at 01:28:807 - , this applies to the Easy, Insane and Smug's Insane diffs. mmk

[Folder]
pishi's Normal.osu points to BeatmapID:0 and BeatmappSetID:-1 for some reason.. BeatmapID should be 654080 and BeatmapSetID should be 239627 .
It shouldn't be a big problem if it submitted normally but better to just change the values manually so everything is fine~ fixed

[Easy]

00:44:307 (5) - I don't like how this slider repeats onto the big white tick, it would benefit the structure of the map to start the next combo at 00:44:807 - instead. You could place a single circle at 00:44:307 - remove the repeat on the slider and place it on the next white tick instead. It would require you to rework the pattern here but might be worth to consider to improve the structure. fixed

00:54:807 (1,1) - These are unneccessary new combo placements imo, I can see that you placed one on the slider because you have a slight SV speedup (1.05x SV) and it's there to indicate the speed change, but to be honest it's barely noticable. Also speed-ups are kinda to tricky to be used on an easy difficulty.
I would suggest to leave out the speedup here and remove the new combos. The speedup on the kiai seems alright to me~ ill remove the speed up but i am keeping the nc. if i do get any other complaints about it then ill fix it

01:08:307 (2) - I think having a new combo here instead of 01:06:807 (1) - seems better with the way you structured your new combo placement on the previous combos. ill keep it how it is

Following suggestions follow the same reason as the previous point:
01:10:807 (1) - Removew new combo k
01:14:807 (1) - Same here ^
01:15:307 (4) - You forgot the clap on the sliderend fixed
01:18:807 (1) - Remove new combo ok
01:22:807 (3) - Same here ^

01:26:807 (1,1,1) - Not sure what the reasoning behind the new combo spam here is, but imo it shouldn't be there got rid of the nc on the second (1)

[Overall]
Really nice mapset, I didn't quite like the idea of having insane difficulties for this kind of song as they seem a bit of an overkill but it works out somehow
All diffs are made very well and even the hardest difficulty with all the jumps, which btw seem kinda random, plays fine as the patterns play and flow naturally
Anyways, hope this was helpful to you, sorry if I might have missed anything!
Good luck~
thanks!
kakifly
Hi

general

-add to tags 'yurica' & 'ユリカ' because thats another name hanatan goes by

smug's insane

-00:12:473 (2,3,1) - could space these better
-00:17:807 (1) - try to turn this slider the other way, so the flow from the next & prev note are better, since the slider points the opposite way of the flow http://puu.sh/hmkNr/7970f6ceb3.jpg
-00:27:307 (2) - i found ctrl + g to play better , mainly because the previous slider would be pointing right towards the head then, the current way breaks the flow and is uncomfortable
-00:37:307 (2,3) - i would stack these, so the rhythm is easier to read
-00:54:807 (1) - same as 00:27:307 (2) -
-01:00:140 (2) - i'd suggest this rhythm to make the vocal clickable, it feels better than covering the beat. Usually i wouldnt be a vocal mapper but it just feels right here http://puu.sh/hmkYk/c49717bf31.jpg
-01:08:140 (2,3) - same ^

insane

-i didnt find the normal hitnormal to be very fitting for this song..
-00:23:473 (5,6) - ctrl + g the placement of these notes so you dont break the flow
-00:35:807 (5,6) - rhythm here is very awkward since 6 feels like a filler note that has no real emphasis, i suggest starting 6 on the white tick so it has more of an impact, something like this? http://puu.sh/hmlf2/2e73c721ac.jpg
-00:39:973 (2,3) - same as 00:23:473 (5,6) -
-00:46:307 (5) - ctrl + g feels better for me
-IMO some flow in this diff can be improved to flow smoother, you can see this from the follow points, if they are placed in a circle, for example this part http://puu.sh/hmlqg/af45e596ab.jpg can be changed to this http://puu.sh/hmlr0/d6c5a7ec2f.jpg where theres no zig zag turns that break the flow in an emphasized part

rakuen's hard

-00:17:807 (3,4) - for here i think its better to just follow the instruments, like this http://puu.sh/hmlxE/a0b3fb7cde.jpg so it doesnt feel like unnecessary beats are played
-00:26:807 (1,2) - rhythm feels weird since (2) doesnt start on the domiant beat, if you make both 1 &2 a 2/3 slider i think it plays better

pishi's normal

-00:35:307 (2) - works better as a 1/3 repeat slider imo cause of the beats in the music
-n i c e

easy

-00:44:307 (6) - stack on 00:42:307 (4) - please its sososo much cleaner that way


hanatan is best. good luck
pishifat
did thing
kind of
hard to explain just take it

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Kurokami
Yo. o/

[Rain]

01:16:807 (1,2,3) - This jumps feels a bit forced at (1,2). Can you make it smaller there a bit?
[]

A bit "hard" map but looks fine and really fun to play. Call me back~
Vhy

Kurokami wrote:

Yo. o/ \o

[Rain]

01:16:807 (1,2,3) - This jumps feels a bit forced at (1,2). Can you make it smaller there a bit? mmh okay, just a bit
[]

A bit "hard" map but looks fine and really fun to play. Call me back~
@Moo-Chan please make sure you update this time. thanks owo

(*^_^*)ゞ
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Topic Starter
Moo-Chan
kakifly

kakifly wrote:

Hi

general

-add to tags 'yurica' & 'ユリカ' because thats another name hanatan goes by ok


insane

-i didnt find the normal hitnormal to be very fitting for this song.. ;-;
-00:23:473 (5,6) - ctrl + g the placement of these notes so you dont break the flow gonna keep how it is
-00:35:807 (5,6) - rhythm here is very awkward since 6 feels like a filler note that has no real emphasis, i suggest starting 6 on the white tick so it has more of an impact, something like this? http://puu.sh/hmlf2/2e73c721ac.jpg fixed
-00:39:973 (2,3) - same as 00:23:473 (5,6) - gonna keep. feels awkward like that
-00:46:307 (5) - ctrl + g feels better for me gonna keep again >.<
-IMO some flow in this diff can be improved to flow smoother, you can see this from the follow points, if they are placed in a circle, for example this part http://puu.sh/hmlqg/af45e596ab.jpg can be changed to this http://puu.sh/hmlr0/d6c5a7ec2f.jpg where theres no zig zag turns that break the flow in an emphasized part ok

easy

-00:44:307 (6) - stack on 00:42:307 (4) - please its sososo much cleaner that way oki


hanatan is best. good luck
thanks :3
Kurokami
Here ya go~

Apple'd~
Topic Starter
Moo-Chan
niceeee
Vhy

Kurokami wrote:

Here ya go~

Apple'd~
yay thankiesss... love ya <3
Pappy
General
  1. Add nekobolo to tags, he is producer/composer of the song.
Insane
  1. Tbh normal-hitwhistle is barely hearable. D: At first sight I tought that this map doesn't have hitsounds /me runs
  2. 00:31:807 (4) - Looks much better when you remove this point.
  3. 00:16:473 (7,8,1) - Jump between (8) and (1) should be bigger than between (7) and (8) because (1) is strong beat.
  4. 00:24:473 (4,5,1) - Similar problem ;w;
  5. 00:48:807 (1) - Fix it like this:
  6. 00:53:807 (1) - Remove NC :o
  7. 00:54:807 - 00:55:307 - Idk if these decimal SV changes are rankable... D: Anyway you should remove NC from 00:55:307 (1,1) - because these SV changes are not noticeable in gameplay so NC is not needed.
  8. *minor* 01:04:306 (5) - Looks better if:
  9. 01:26:807 (1,2,3,4,1) - This flow is little of comparing to other patterns, consider do something like this:
  10. HP 7->6 pls >w<
Hard
  1. 00:46:973 (1,2,3) - This rhytm is very hard to catch D: Maybe try this:
  2. Insane have AR 8,5; Normal 5 and here is 8, maybe try 7,5 or 7,2? D: Still playable and spread will be better.
Normal
  1. 00:56:807 (1) - This may look better:
  2. As always, nothing to point, great job pishi! :D
Easy
  1. 00:54:807 (1,1) - Remove NCs, not needed and confusing for newbies. ;w;
  2. 01:27:807 (2) - Remove clap for tail? D:
Awesome mapset! :D
Love Hanatan <3
pishifat
flowz tho
Topic Starter
Moo-Chan
pappy

Pappy wrote:

General
  1. Add nekobolo to tags, he is producer/composer of the song. oki
Insane
  1. Tbh normal-hitwhistle is barely hearable. D: At first sight I tought that this map doesn't have hitsounds /me runs ima keep it ;w;
  2. 00:31:807 (4) - Looks much better when you remove this point. wow
  3. 00:16:473 (7,8,1) - Jump between (8) and (1) should be bigger than between (7) and (8) because (1) is strong beat. fixed
  4. 00:24:473 (4,5,1) - Similar problem ;w; ^
  5. 00:48:807 (1) - Fix it like this: its fine how it is
  6. 00:53:807 (1) - Remove NC :o k
  7. 00:54:807 - 00:55:307 - Idk if these decimal SV changes are rankable... D: Anyway you should remove NC from 00:55:307 (1,1) - because these SV changes are not noticeable in gameplay so NC is not needed. didnt take the nc change, and pishi said the SV is rankable
  8. *minor* 01:04:306 (5) - Looks better if: fixed
  9. 01:26:807 (1,2,3,4,1) - This flow is little of comparing to other patterns, consider do something like this: fixed this before looking at your mod
  10. HP 7->6 pls >w< no >.<
Easy
  1. 00:54:807 (1,1) - Remove NCs, not needed and confusing for newbies. ;w; i guesssssss x.x
  2. 01:27:807 (2) - Remove clap for tail? D: sure
Awesome mapset! :D
Love Hanatan <3

thank youuu
pishifat
Topic Starter
Moo-Chan

pishifat wrote:

People complained about his rhythm
ragingkrane
I didn't make this diff for this set in particular but you can take it if you want.

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Title:Jishou Mushoku
TitleUnicode:自傷無色
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